高考书面表达范文（精选多篇）

推荐第1篇：高考书面表达

书面表达（2011辽宁）

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学院毕业，你从报纸上得知BB公司要招聘一名中文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1.年龄；

2.学习情况及英语水平；

3.兴趣和特长；

4.性格特点.

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua—17 years old,and I ’m a confident and outgoing boy.I’ll graduate from XinXing English School in July.I happened to get the information from the newspaper that you are looking for an English secretary.I’m much too interested in it,so I’d like to apply for the job.

When it comes to my study,I’d like to say that I’m very hard-working and I achieve good results in my study.It has been twelve years since I began learning English and I have had a primary command of the communication and hand-writing of English.What’s more ,I enjoy reading novels and history books ,in addition,my favourite sports is basketball.

Last but not the least,I can most probably meet your demand.I’ll appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to make a contribution to the BB.Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

文章注意事项：

1.17-year-old 不能用作定语修饰Li Hua，

2.I’ll表示一种客观事实而I will多表主观意愿

3.Begin to do表示即将开始而begin doing多用于陈述过去发生的事

4.Enjoy表示做某件事的时候，喜欢享受，也就是边做边喜欢，而like只表示喜欢，没有去做的含义

5.History book直接名词修饰名词,表示直观属性

6.在文章中尽量不要用I think，需用时应该用It’s up to me(如果让我说，做决定的话),In my mind;In my opinion;I’d like to convey my view/point/idea/feeling that....;personally I think来替换

积累句型：

When it comes to....(I would like to say....)

I can most probably meet your demand(我应该比较符合你的要求)

书面表达（2011浙江）

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100—120个词的心。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写作目的

2.对这些行为提出批评

3.提出建议

注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句话已给出

June 8,2011

Dear Mr.headmaster

I feel it a great honour to write to you!The purpose of my writing is simple but the iue is significant I think.

These days,I noticed that some students in the school litter the ground with used paper or scribble on walls at random.After thinking about it for a long a long time.I decide to reflect to you.As far as I’m concerned,such behaviours are very rude manners and have a bad effect on the environment of the campus.

In consequence,It’s high time that we took measures to prevent these phenomena from occuring again.What do you think?For one thing,you are expected to enact severe rules to prohibit littering and scribbling.Meanwhile,publishing the students who have the similar behaviours is also neceary.For another,you may as well call on us to pick up the rubbish on the ground.

How I wish you could take my advice into consideration!I’m really convinced that with the efforts of every body,our school will grow better.Yours faithfully,

LiYue

文章注意事项：

1.第一段最后一句I think 不放在句中要放在句尾，而在疑问句中I think常放在句中

2.没有In recent days要用These days替换

3.Notice指无意中地观察到，而observe多指专门观察（有时用于天文观察、显微观察等）

4.Wall可数the wall表示特指一面墙walls表示泛指

5.一定要注意and连接的两个并列结构或句子，例如连接两句话若同意主语一句用be动词一句用实意动词则and后加出主语，若都是be动词或都是实意动词则省略主语

6.注意主语，一定要看清，若上文没有提到或指代不明容易引起歧义的情况下要补出实实在在的主语，比如such behavious就不能用they来替换

7.Happen和occur

若事件用发生（happen）：accident,incident等

若现象用出现（occur）：phenomenon等

8.you should 如果想表达地更委婉用you are expected to do或you are supposed to do

9.I believe一般换成I’m really convinced that

10.I do wish语气生硬，换成How I wish that....较委婉

11.Grow 比be更加生动形象具体，还含有变的过程

积累词汇、短语、句型：

Reflect反应

For one thing....for another....

May as well不妨...做好

You are expected to do

You are supposed to do你应该...

I’m really convinced that我相信

How I wish that....

With the effort

书面表达（2013-2014全市统考）

据最新统计，目前中国有2/3的城市缺水，大约3亿人喝不上健康洁净的水。你校学生会计划在高二年级开展“节约用水，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。假如你叫刘畅，请你撰写一篇演讲稿，主题为“Save water,save ourselves”内容主要包括：

1.目前问题

2.提出办法（在家中刷牙，洗手时关闭水龙头：不要使用干净水冲厕所：提醒父母检查是否水管漏水：在学校不要扔掉未喝完的瓶装水等）

3.发出呼吁

注意：

1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译

3.词数120左右：参考词汇：瓶装水bottled water：冲洗厕所flush toilet：

I’m LiuChang from Grade 2.The topic of my speech is“Save water,save ourselves”.

As is known for us all,with the development of society,the iue of lacking water is becoming serious day by day.Believe it or not,nearly seventy percent of the cities in China are lacking in water resources and around thirty hundred million people are not able to drink healthful and fresh water.

Consequently,something must be done to solve the problem,for example,taking off the tap when you are washing your hands and brushing your teeth,not using clean water to flush toilets,reminding your parents of checking whether the water pipe is normal.Last but not the least,don’t throw the bottled water away until you have finished drinking the water.

To sum up,only if all of us make contributions to saving water can we eventually solve the water problem.

Thank you for your listening.

推荐第2篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.

As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.

Smoking causes many illnees.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illne caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, carele smokers may cause dangerous fires.

In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happine in my mind?

Happine means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything .

I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happine.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happine differently, my happine comes from my study.

例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance） In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.

Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take neceary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

poible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.

On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.

During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.

The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.

They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.

To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.

例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的

书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的

观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我

们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.

Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.

Thank you.

例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的

英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,

I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Mi Zhang,

I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.

Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,

I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.

I will try my best to write to you as often as poible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

推荐第3篇：高考书面表达压题

（一）

感谢信：

假如你是四川某地区一名失学学生，名叫李华。你幸运地得到在北京工作的一位称作Mr Smith的美国人的赞助，于是重新回到校园学习。为了表示感谢， 你于5月14日给Mr Smith写了一封信。 信的内容如下：

1.得以重返校园，非常感谢。

2.在老师的帮助下，学习成绩进步很快。

3.受到老师的表扬，家长的鼓励。

4.决心更加努力学习，争取考上大学。

5.盼望见到Mr Smith ，希望Mr Smith寄张照片来。

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m glad to have received your money and books.Now , I can go to school again.I am happy and thank you so much.I have been studying hard since I accepted yourgifts.With the help of my teachers, I have made great progre in my studies.So our teacher praised me for it and my parents encouraged me.I have made up my mind to study harder and try to go to college this year.I’m looking forward to seeing you, but at present I am busy preparing for the college entrance examinations.I hope you can post me one of your photos.Best wishes!

Yours sincerelyLi Hua

亲爱的斯密斯先生，

很高兴收到你的汇来的钱和书。现在，我又能回到学校了。我真高兴，对你十分感谢。自从接受了您的赞助以来，我一直在努力学习。在老师的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大进步。因此，我得到了老师的表扬和父母的鼓励。我下定决心要更加努力地学习，今年争取考上大学。

我一直盼望见到您，但是现在我忙于准备考大学。我希望您能给我寄一张您的照片。

致以最好的祝福！

李华

（二）

邀请信：

假如你是李明，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封信，邀请他参加你班学生将要举行的暑期夏令营活动并请他回信告诉你他是否能来。信的内容还包括以下几点：

时间： 7月20日至7月27日

地点：北京度假村

活动内容：参观北京名胜古迹（长城、故宫）；文化学习班（语言学习、相互介绍自己的国家、学校及学习和生活等）；文艺会（唱歌、跳舞、游戏等）

Mar.6th

Dear John,

I’m writing to tell you that the students of my cla are planning to go for a

summer camp at the Beijing Holiday Village, from July 20th to 27th this summer.I’d

like to invite you to come and join us.We will visit some famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and

so on.We’ll talk about our countries, schools, life, study and other things.We’ll give

parties at which the students will sing,dance and play games together.Would you

please write back to let me know if you could come?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的约翰,

我给你写信，是要告诉你，我班同学计划要举行的暑期夏令营活动，地点是

北京度假村，时间是从七月二十日到二十七日。我想邀请你和我们一起来参加。

我们要参观一些著名的地方，像长城，故宫等等。我们会谈论我们的国家，

学校，生活，学习等等。我们还要举行派对，同学们将一起唱歌，跳舞和做游戏。

你能给我回信，告诉我你是否能来吗？

盼望尽快得到你的回信！

李华

（三）

求职信：

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按

下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。

1.表示感兴趣

2.说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历

3.希望得到回复

注意：

1.词数：100左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Dear Sir or Madam,

_____________________________________

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School.I’m glad to learn that you want a few

part-time English reporters.I’m quite interested in it.I would like to apply for the

position.I think I’m fit for the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have much knowledge

in many fields.I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing.

Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.Above

all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.So I’m sure I can

do the job well if I get the position.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

先生/女士，

我是新华中学的学生。听说你们想要招聘业余英语记者。我对之非常感兴趣。我想要申请这个职位。

我认为我适合这个职位。作为一名学生，我读书很多，拥有许多领域的知识。我喜欢英语，并且擅长口语和写作。

而且，我易于与人相处，喜欢跟别人合作。首要的是，我曾经在学校广播站当过记者。因此，我相信，如果得到这个职位，我能把这份工作做好。

盼望你的答复。

李华

（四）

介绍地点：

假定你是李华。应应该朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。

Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.

Our library is in the center of the school.There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our claroom building is right behind it.The library is big.When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.There are also lots of newspapers and magazines.We borrow books and do some reading in the library.According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days.It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.

We all like our library very much.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

亲爱的鲍伯，

感谢你上一封信问到我们学校图书馆的情况。

我们的图书馆在学校的中央。它的前面是一个美丽的花园，而我们的教学楼恰好在它的后面。图书馆很大。但你步入其中时，你会看到许多书架，上面装满了不同学科的书籍。也有许多报纸、杂志。我们在图书馆借书和阅读。根据规定，每个学生一次最多可以借5本书，可以看10天。图书馆周一到周五，从上午9点开到下午7点，周末闭馆。

我们都非常喜欢我们的图书馆。

致以最好的祝愿，李华

（五）

咨询信：

假如你是李明，正在澳大利亚学习，打算在暑假期间学习绘画。在一网站上

你发现一则招生广告，但一些具体信息不明确。请你根据提示，发一邮件询问有关情况。

提示：1.初学者是否可以参加学习？

2.是否上暑假班？

3.是否需要自带材料？

4.如只在

7、8月学习，费用如何？

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your advertisement on your website and I’d like to know more about your course.First of all, I should explain I’m just a beginner in painting.Can I take your course? As a student, I’ll have a few weeks’ holiday in July and August.Is there a course running at that time? If I decide to go ahead, do I have to take my own brushes or pencils with me or are they provided by your company? Is there anything else I need to take? Finally, how much does it cost if I learn painting for only two months?

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,Li Ming

先生\\女士你好，

我在您的网站上看到了广告，我想进一步了解课程情况。

首先，我得（像您）解释下，我是个初学者。我能参加学习吗?作为一名学生，我在

七、八月份有几周的假期。那时候开设课程吗？如果我觉得去了，我必须携带画笔和铅笔吗？还是你们公司提供？我还需要带别的什么吗？最后，如果我只学习两个月的话，费用是多少？

盼望着你的答复。

李明

特别提示：

1.高考英语的作文一定要字迹工整，卷面整洁。因此，建议你好好用笔记本练练书写；

2.范文要背诵下来，可以参照翻译，弄懂句意；而且要背着写一写。可以一篇1篇攻克。写的时候注意句子可能存在的变化。

3.加粗的斜体字大多是常用的句式，要弄懂和记住。

4.高考中的作文能够被压中的可能性不大，但是，一些常见的句子可以套用，尤其写作的第一段，非常重要，尽量记住几个结构。写作一定要分段，一般都分三段：第一段，点题；第二段，表述过程；

第三段，收尾。平时练的时候就这样去练。在横线格上多写写。

推荐第4篇：英语高考书面表达结尾

英语高考书面表达结尾模版

结尾万能公式

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politene and respect for others.

如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

英语实战演练：

十五、（2009.辽宁卷） 假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。

要点：

时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00 内容：采摘苹果

报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：带帽子、手套 注意：

1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好。 2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：社区 community 第二节：

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为25分， 按5个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3.词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.时间：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.内容：采摘苹果

3.报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：带帽子、手套

5.欢迎踊跃参加

【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.

If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make neceary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.

Community Office 【解析】 本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。

第一步：审题

1、看要求：本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好，这样格式应该已经给出，审题的重点放在要点和要求上：要点有五项，注意有三项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。

2、理思路：调整要点，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，活动的内容，要求、注意事项表达出来；然后再写5和3要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。 第二步：写作

可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的复杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。 第三步：检查

作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。

【专家简评】

主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关，但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动，主题空间更为开阔，因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路，可以归类为外事活动。通常，命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出，对考生而言，前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构，而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此，对于各命题单位而言，这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用，以免过难或过易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果.打扫.聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。

1.时间.地点.任务.活动；

2.老人们的反应；

3.简短评论。

注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【参考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Cla Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindne.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。

【专家简评】

09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看，该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名，而不是汉语人名，这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个：避免考生出错。其实，遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字，因为对于外国人而言，字母人名只是一个符号，他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。

浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），请你围绕“How do you prefer your English claes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在题中给出标题，却在文中直接给出标题，不知何意？不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助？另外，虽然说的是新闻报道，但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年，除了北京继续考了叙事外，浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言，其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了，应该是福。

十七、（2009.重庆卷）

国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。

内容包括： 自我简介 写信目录

话题：我们应该感恩（thankful） 推荐的理由 预祝活动成功 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答

【参考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful. Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world; we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great succe. 【解析】

这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：

1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。

2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。

【专家简评】

从写作文体要求看，重庆卷04年要求写记叙文，05年则改成议论文，近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言，近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过，09年的话题是涉外的话题征集，有些特点。六年来，三次短文写作，三次邮件（其中两次电子邮件）。李华同学出现3次（06，07，09）。总的说来，重庆卷一直比较谨慎，命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：

你感兴趣的课程

你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】

Dear leader，

I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses ，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on 。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening ，because I have liked flowers、graes etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing ，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What\'s more ，I can realize the bitterne of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and graes to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country 。

Yours， Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点：

1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；

2.再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。

3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节

【专家简评】 上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式主要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质：陈说+议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？！参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷，你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。

【总评】

2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套，短文写作共20篇（上海卷和广东卷各2篇，宁·海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题）。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题，我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题，也就是母语文化输出类话题增多（5篇），以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀，现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性，这是最令人感到欣慰的。

强化训练

11、（1分）

假设你是你校京剧爱好者协会的成员，在一次同英国中学生代表团的联欢活动中，你协会将出一个京剧节目。在演出前，由你向外国朋友介绍京剧的由来，按以下提示介绍：

1．京剧在中国很受欢迎，历史悠久，有200年历史，在清朝乾隆年间，乾隆对地方剧

有兴趣。

2．1790年，为庆祝乾隆80岁生日，他召集各地方剧团来京为他演出，4个来自安徽

的剧团在庆典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一个湖北剧团来京，在京常与安徽剧团一起演出，两种唱派合在一起，逐

渐形成了一种新剧种，被称为京剧。

4．下面演出开始，希望朋友们喜欢。 参考词汇：

地方剧：local opera

乾隆年间：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

剧团：troupe

12、（1分）

你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上头痛，医生让你休息两天。你用英语给老师写一个请假条。

13、（1分）

假设你是学生会的负责人，你们要组织一次英语讲座，请用英语写一个通知，把讲座的安排：时间，地点，主讲人，内容，以及注意事项通知大家。

14、（1分）

李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语，陈小明来信询问学校情况，以下是小华回信的内容。

1．听说你明年来我校学习，我们很高兴。

2．我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。

3．学校很美，有许多花草树木，两座教学大楼，一座宿舍楼。

4．学校设备优良，有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外，还有许多

选修课，如：油画、打字、烹调等。

5．最重要的是，学校有许多优秀教师，课程有趣，老师既有知识又和蔼，非常愿意帮

助我们，我爱我们的学校，我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。 参考词汇：

选修课：elective

体育馆：gym

宿舍楼：dormitory building

15、（1分）

写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。

魏明的美国朋友杰克开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。魏明回信介绍鲁迅：

1．鲁迅是著名的中国作家。他不仅是作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。

2．他的小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片

深刻地揭露了旧社会。毛主席对他有高度评价。他的一些作品还被选入了中学和大

学课本。

3．认为读鲁迅作品对他很有益处。 参考词汇：

创始人：Founder

中国文学：Chinese Literature

阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice

16、（1分）

提示：为引进外资，进一步加快你家乡A城改革开放。你向一位外商介绍你家乡A城。

1．A城是一新开发的经济特区。它是一座具有三十万人口的临海小城。

2．解放前是一个小渔村，以渔业为主，没有工业，只有几所小学。

3．改革开放以来，许多外商到这里投资，经济增长很快，建立了许多大工厂、一个大

港口。港口与国内外许多城市连接。

4．教育有很大的发展，建立了该城第一所大学。已有三千人从该校毕业。我相信，A

城在不久的将来将更加现代化。 参考词汇：

投资：invest

经济开发区：an economic-zone

港口：port

17、（1分）

11月11日，你将在家里为你的妹妹15周岁开一个生日晚会，写信给你的外国朋友Peter，邀请他来参加。晚会开始时间是晚上6点，将持续到很晚。告诉Peter每天晚上你都在家，请他给你打个电话告诉你他是否来参加生日晚会，并表达你盼望见到他的心情。

在信的开头告诉Peter你已收到他10月25日的来信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考试未能及时回信。

假设你现在的住址是北京西城区云梯胡同1号楼4门2号。

18、（1分）

给笔友保罗(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．过了一个很好的寒假，在寒假中与父亲一起回老家河北农村。

2．吃惊于家乡的巨大变化。几乎村里每家都有彩电，许多家盖了新房。有的家还有了

摩托车和小汽车。

3．一位村民自豪地告诉我，他和一部分村民打算参加一个旅游团到国外旅游。

4．我表示羡慕他们，我对父亲说，将来大学毕业要回老家来，父亲也表示说他一退休

就来。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书。写信应聘。以下是张红的简历。

年龄20岁，即将从职业学校毕业。专业：经济管理（busine management）。学英语8年，会计算机。在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一，学习成绩在班上优秀。主要是本人喜欢办公室工作，相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。

请以张红的名义向公司写信写聘。 参考词汇：

职业学校：vocational school

专业：major

20、（1分）

给朋友小林的一封信，谈谈寒假生活。

1．寒假很忙，因为今年七月要参加高考。

2．每天埋头读书，复习每门必修课，做许多练习。

3．学习刻苦，每天学习10小时以上，累时看会儿电视，听音乐，但总不去影剧院。不

得不回绝亲戚朋友的邀请，只在除夕时打电话问候。

4．多希望没有考试，但又不可能，要尽力取得好成绩。考上渴望已久的清华大学。 参考词汇：

必修课：required subject

埋头于某事：bury oneself in sth .

参考答案：

11、（1分）

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.

12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du,

I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.

This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.

Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.

Yours respectfully,

Li Qing

13、（1分）

There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.

THE STUDENTS’ UNION

14、（1分）

Dear Xiao Ming,

I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of gra.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Claes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.

Yours Li Hua

15、（1分）

Dear Jack,

I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.

Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.

Yours Wei Ming

16、（1分）

My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.

Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businemen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.

17、（1分）

2 Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter,

Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.

We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year! The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.

We’re looking forward to seeing you.

loves,

Zhao Ning

18、（1分）

Dear Paul,

How are you! I think you have come back to school now.

I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.

One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expreed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.

What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

19、（1分）

Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad .I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.

My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is busine management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my cla.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.

I am looking forward to hearing from you .

Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分） Dear Xiao Lin,

I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.

I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and clamates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impoible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impoible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi

推荐第5篇：福建高考英语书面表达

2010福建高考英语书面表达

写演讲辞

去澳大利亚做演讲——主题是“水资源短缺”

材料提供三点措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的观点

水资源问题：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming le and le.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.

If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.

作为一名中学生，你是如何参与环保这项活动？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread meage about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.

In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.

In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面临水资源危机，请你根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水、河水、井水„„） 2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染„„）3.人类应该怎么办？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One poible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up .They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use .Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water .Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pa strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有关环境保护水资源的英语作文5篇

有关环境保护的英语作文：水资源是有限的

人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.

As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.

With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.

Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.

Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.

As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.

Although about 70 percent of the earth\'s surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.

水

水对生物很重要，没有水，地球上就没有生命。所有的动植物都需要水。人

类也需要水。

水几乎无处不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空气中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固态、液态和气态。当它是固态时，它可以像砖一样硬；当它是液态时，你可以将它从容器中倒出；当它是气态时，你看不见或感觉不到它。

虽然地球表面70％是水覆盖着，世界上仍有许多地方缺水。所以我们要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people\'s life and production, t,ife couldn\'t go on without water.

With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What\'s more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can\'t live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people\'s health.

In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.

水的重要性

正如我们所了解的，动植物需要水，人类的生产生活也需要水。没有水便没有生命。

随着工农业的迅速发展，水的需要量越来越大。因此，许多地方缺水。而且，许多河流湖泊被工厂排放的污水所污染，鱼不能生存。同时，废水给人们的健康带来极大的危害。

为了保持河流湖泊清洁，防止水污染，我们必须采取措施，阻止各种污染。

环境日英语作文：关于河水污染的感想

根据下列提示写一篇关于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你随父亲去钓鱼，看见河水污染，几乎钓不到鱼。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全国各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.环境污染对人类危害极大，我国政府正在努力采取措施与污染作斗争。

5.希望在不久的将来，河水会变干净。

词数 100~130 .

Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.

A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.

If the river water all over the country is polluted like this， no living things will exist in the water.As we all know， environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.

环境日英语作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i\'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.

With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.

We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.

春天是一年中最好的季节，天气变得越来越暖和。我和我的同学们进行了一次环城一日游，所到之处景色宜人。但当我看到沿着城区流过的河流时，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

随着现代工农业的发展，越来越多的污水排进河里，河水被严重污染。河水变得如此的肮脏以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水发出难闻的气味。

我们急切呼吁采取措施改变这种状况。政府应当建立各种设备，例如污水处理厂，并且鼓励科学家们想出更多更好的办法以减少水污染。

水是生命之源，保护水资源十分重要。

My clamates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.

On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as poible.

At last I would like to say, \"To protect water is to protect life.\"

今年春天，我和我的同学去春游，我们玩得都很高兴。但同时，我也注意到我们城市的水污染变得越来越严重了。

沿途我们看到许多妇女在河边洗衣，河面上漂着垃圾，一家化工厂正将废水排入河中。河中看不到一条鱼，河水也不像从前那样清澈了，水质很差。对此我深感担忧，因为水对于所有生物都非常重要。没有水人类将无法生存。我希望人们能多关注这个问题，特别是政府部门，争取及早解决水污染问题。最后，我想说“保护水就是保护生命。”

推荐第6篇：小语高考书面表达

2011年安徽英语(论坛)高考卷的的英语书面表达属于开放式作文。提示材料要求以“My Approach to Difficultiea in Learning”为题，为某校英文报“Experience”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己在解决学习困难的一些做法，词数100左右。

试题材料是关于学生学习生活方面的，情景贴近实际，试题整体难度适中。本题考查了考生英语语言运用能力，分析问题及解决问题的能力。材料没有给出具体的写作内容要点，因此，考生可以根据材料要求，进行思考和展开想象，自由发挥的空间很大。考生在写作时，要以学习困难的解决方法为中心，细审题，列提纲，谋篇布局，遣词造句，连句成篇。注意采用的时态应该是过去时和现在时相结合，以第一人称为主，恰当准确使用过渡词汇，做到短文结构紧凑，层次分明，通顺自然，上下连贯。同时，还要注意卷面整洁，避免低级错误，写好开头结尾。

附：高考(微博)英语作文评分原则和评分标准

高考的评分原则以及评分标准是考生平常进行写作训练的指导原则，是考生在高考时进行写作的规范，也是高考阅卷老师评分给分的一个重要依据和标准。

（一）评分原则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

推荐第7篇：高考浙江卷书面表达

2011年高考浙江卷书面表达

书面表达

假如你是中学生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封信100-120个词的信。信中包括以下内容：

1．说明写信的目的；2.对这些行为进行批评3.提出建议

注意信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）

June 8, 2011-6-8

Dear Mr.Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from Cla 1, Senior II._____________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

推荐第8篇：历年高考书面表达背诵

高考书面表达背诵范文

高三作文训练 1

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）2.象征意义3.价格

注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red threads, cloths and other materials.They look really beautiful.The Chinese knots are about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China, these knots stand for friendship ,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only sold 12 dollar each.

If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.If you need more information, do let me know.Thank you!

Yours,Li Hua

高三作文训练 2

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，上网时发现有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语，你因此发帖向外籍教师 Peter求助。要点包括：

1.自我介绍（姓名、身份及年级）

2.英语学习情况、困难及感受；

3.请求给予帮助。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I am Li Hua, a senior student from China.I surfed the internet and find some foreign teachers help students with spoken/oral English on line.So I am writing to ask you for help.

In the past six years, I have learnt a lot of English knowledge from my school teachers.I have known about three thousand English words and learnt some basic grammar.I can do some reading and writing in English.But I am not good at listening and speaking.I always feel nervous when I am talking with foreigners.。

That is why I am writing to you.I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 3

第二节 书面表达（满分25分 2012.全国新课标卷）

假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I’ve been learning English for10 years and I can speak fluent English.I learned from the internet that you will have a summer camp in Singapore .I know that you welcome students from different countries.I am interested in the summer camp.

If I have the chance to take part in it, I’ll be able to introduce China to students from other countries.And I will learn something about other countries as well.

I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.I am looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 4

第二节 书面表达（满分25分 2012.全国新课标卷）

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信:

1.本人简介;2.求助内容;3.约定时间.

4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678）

注意:

1.词数100左右:2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I am taking summer courses in your university.I was told that the Learning Center provides students, so I’m writing to ask for help.

I came here last month and I found my courses are interesting.However, it is difficult for me to take notes and I do not know how to use the library.

I have no cla on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.This is my email addre : lihua @ 1236.com; My phone number is 12345678.I’m anxious

to get help from you.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 5

第二节 书面表达（满分25分 2009.山东卷）

假设你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1． 年龄；2． 学习情况及英语水平；3． 兴趣和特长；4.性格特点；

Dear Sir or Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I am really interested in the position and I hope I can work for you.

I am 19 years old now and I will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.I am an excellent student.I am good at English, especially spoken English.I often use computer and I type words very fast.

In my spare time, I read a lot of books.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much, too.What’s more, I am out-going and I like to make friends.It is easy for me to get along with people around me.

I will appreciate it if you can give the opportunity.Thank you! I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 6

第二节 书面表达（满分25分 2010.天津卷）

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，上网时得知雷锋小学在招聘一些优秀学生，利用暑期为小学生辅导英语。请根据以下提示，用英语给该校招聘小组写一封信，申请参加此活动。

1.对此活动的认识（对本人、学生及社会的益处等）；

2.个人的优势（性格、语言及生活能力等）；

3.你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）；

注意：

1.词数 100左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua middle school.I learned from the internet that your school needs some excellent students to help the pupils with English during the coming summer holiday.I am really interested in the activity and I hope I can join you.

This activity is good for students.They can improve their English and I can learn how to get along with them.The activity can also benefit our society.I am kind and out-going.I am good at English, especially spoken English.I can wash my clothes and make beds by myself.

I plan to talk with these students and tell them what I will do.I will develop their interest and teach them by English songs, English films and English games.I would appreciate it if you can give me the opportunity.Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 7

第二节 书面表达（满分25分 2013.山东卷 ）

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom在一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：

1.未及时回信的原因；

2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）

注意：1.词数 100左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

How is everything going? I received your e-mail last week and you asked me what I would do during the summer holiday.But for some reasons, I didn’t reply your letter in time.I am writing to saysorry to you for that.

Last week, I was busy preparing for my final exam.The final exam is important for me, so I had to spend most of my time in reviewing what I had learnt before.That was the reason why I didn’t reply your letter in time.

As for the coming summer holiday, I want to do three things.First, I would like to do a part time job, so that I can develop my skills to live.Secondly, I will take a short trip to Yunnan to enjoy the beautiful scenery there.Finally, I will work as a volunteer to help the old people around me.

What’s your plan? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

高三作文训练 8

第二节 书面表达（ 2013.全国新课标卷 ）

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你的叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

李明：高个子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA985

到达时间：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好

Dear Peter,

How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a meeting, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you want to get.

I’d like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel?This is his first visit to your country, so I really hope you can help him.Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glaes.And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,Li Hua

高三作文训练 9

第二节 书面表达（ 2013.全国新课标卷 ）

假如你是李华，你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：

1．建议他回国；

2．你的理由是：1）学有所用，就业容易；2）照顾父母。

注意: 1．词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯，内容应完整；

3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago .In your letter, you asked me whether you would come back or not.I’ve been thinking about your question.

In my opinion, I think you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.There are two reasons.For one reason , you can use the knowledge that you have learnt in China.It is easy for you to find a good job in China.For another reason, your parents are getting older and older.If you work at home, it is more convenient for you to look after them.Therefore , I think it’s a good idea for you to return in the future.So what are you waiting for ?Yours,

Li Hua

推荐第9篇：高考英语书面表达技巧

高考英语书面表达技巧

通常，英语学习，听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》，对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准，其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用，还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般，要文理通畅，非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意，平时确实需要长期的信心的培养，耐心的启发，由易到难，从简单到复杂，循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练，而且训练有素。现在，不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作，只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是：不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累，谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。

1 用顺

审准题义，明确情景，看清要求。不少考生写作时，还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯，特别是不注意生词或短语提示，或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯，层次不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料，找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索，在线索引导下通畅地表达内容，增加可读性。为此，应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what\'\'s more, I\'\'m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇，使之有较强的感情色彩。

2 用对

对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在：

2.1动词错误

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（划线部分改为Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（划线部分改为coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遗漏处加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often carele in cla.（遗漏处加are）

（3）时态错误。

1）Hurry up! Here is coming the bus.（划线部分改为comes）

2）Cla start at 8:00 am.（划线部分改为starts）

书面表达可能出现多种时态，但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍，应以一般现在时为主；过去的介绍，应以一般过去时为主；日记应以一般过去时为主；通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面积失分。

（4）语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓，因此英语表达易受影响，该用而不用，不该用而用be动词。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遗漏处加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（划线处去掉was）

还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（划线处去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（划线处去掉are）

2.2名词单复数混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（划线处改为800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes\'\'）

2.3冠词错误

冠词属小词，重视不够，影响表达。

1）How do you spell the computer？（划线处去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（划线处去掉the）

3 用准

用准确地道的语言，不能生涩难懂，不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下：

3.1单词堆砌

写句子，用语不准，而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如：

1） Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（错）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（错）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重视掌握单词，写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释，用模糊定义，语言生涩难懂，文意混乱，表达不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English; he has many good ways to use to teach us.（错）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英语作文，受汉语影响，虽语法正确，却不符英语表达习惯。如：

1） Our friends are all over the world.（错）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2） My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（错）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

语言转换功在平时。简明扼要，表达清楚，是关键所在。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。

4 用全

初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达，就要把握两个关系：

4.1完整不一定就句式复杂

一味追求新、奇、特、难，容易出错。如：

1） Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（错）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（错）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2简单也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（错）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn\'\'t know what and how to do.（错）→He doesn\'\'t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考试是根据内容和表达给分的，要点齐全，是直接因素。必须注意要点来源：

标题。有些需要标题，却粗心漏掉不写，造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了，有较强概括力和针对性，并注意单词字母大小写。

格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式，如通知的开头，常常要交待通知的对象；日记开头，常常交待时间和天气；信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间，下一行要顶格写上称呼，正文结束后，要有结束语，并签名。

正文。这是全文要点集中之处，应认真思考材料含义，理清大意，将所有要点逐一落实，并检查有无遗漏。

常识性。原材料不一定反应，但仍然重要，既属内容，又承上启下，增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and addre.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必须注意原则：不多不少。该有的不少，不该有的不写。

5 整洁

文章写好后，应认真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小写及标点符号错误，誊写应尽可能书写工整，布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。

总之，了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面，就容易得高分。

推荐第10篇：高考备考书面表达[优秀]

高考备考：2010高考英语书面表达命题规律探究

一、体裁：交际应用文是主打

今年的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考“体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力”的要求。这依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目的性和实用性。具体说来应用文仍是主打题材，20余篇书面表达中，应用文有13篇，和去年的相比，书信类的逐渐减少，其他类型，如发言稿、通讯、演讲稿等逐渐增加。

例1 (2010重庆卷)假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number ba793)回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。

写作指导：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是书信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但一定要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。

参考范文：

dear sir/madam，

i’m li hua.i took the flight ba793 on june 3， 2010.but when i came to my home， i found i lost a suitcase.i am writing to you to request you to help me find it back。my suitcase is a small blue one with a zip.there is a lable on the handle with my name and addre on it.it is really important for me， because i had put all my important documents in it， including my id card， paport and so on.besides， it is what my father sent to me on my birthday。

thanks for your kind consideration and i look forward to receiving your earliest reply。

li hua。

二、题材：贴近学生生活，时代感强

2010年高考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实，同学们有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，每一份试卷都符合同学们认知水平和日常生活经历；题目设计关注同学们成长，注意培养良好的道德品质和健全的人格(如江西和北京卷等)；另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有新时代中国特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感(如福建卷的节水、

广东卷基础写作的戒烟问题)。这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是近几年高考书面表达的基本思路。

例2 (2010江西卷)英语中“please” “thank you” “sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊，改善关系、化解矛盾的神奇力量，因而被称为“magic words”。请以“magic power of polite words”为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。体裁不限。

写作指导：在具体的布局谋篇中，如果你要谈论这些礼貌用语的作用，就应该写成议论文：首先开篇点题，论述微笑的作用，然后通过事实和理论来进行论证。当然，也可以先叙述身边发生的跟话题有关的事情，然后再进行议论。

参考范文：

magic power of polite words

we use magic words in our daily life without realizing it.these magic words， for instance“please！” thank you “sorry！” can do luster to our life。

magic words can help build friendship.they make you easier to get along with， thus strengthen the relationship between you and others。

once you offend someone else， you can as well use these words.a word such as“sorry” will make him le annoyed。

try using polite words every now and then.once you do， you will never find yourself drained of energy for life.you use polite words， in return， these words will provide you with magic power。

三、形式：提示型、半开放式是主流

除了广东卷的基础写作之外，其他各篇文章都提示简明，完全摒弃原有的纯粹“翻译型”命题，不再禁锢同学们的思维空间。题目设置一般都提供图画、图表、提纲等情景，如浙江卷的要求只有两点：李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；你的评论。北京卷提供了一幅漫画等等，都给出了必要的内容，有一定的控制性，但又给作者留出了足够的空间供其发挥。此外，还常要求同学们发表建议与看法，如广东卷：对父母向子女提供金钱奖励发表看法；湖北卷谈谈微笑的作用，都有和很大的开放性，为考生分留出了很大的发挥余地，而且张扬个性。

例3 (2010山东卷)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。

写作指导：这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。

主体段落：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。

结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。参考范文：

dear tom，

i am indeed very sorry that i can’t go to beijing with you next week， which i have promised.i feel badly about it and want you to know what happened。

just now， my cousin， li qiong， who left home to australia for his further study last year， informed me that he will return this saturday morning.and ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family.you know， we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year。

i sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.i would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around beijing.once again， i’m sorry for any inconvenience caused。

sincerely yours，

li hua

四、试题难度不大，但想得高分也并非易事。

从今年的阅卷情况来看，要想得高分并不是很容易，因为内容大都一样，要想得高分，就必须要有很强的驾驭语言的能力，合理使用一些高级词汇和复杂句式，力争少犯错误，做到书写美观，卷面整洁。此外，尽管各地考题中语言难度不是很大，但是思想深度有所增加，也从侧面提示了考生在注重基础训练的前提下，也应该积极思考，灵活应考。

总而言之，只要我们在书面表达的备考及迎战中做到知己知彼，了解命题规律，把握高分奥秘，定能在高考考场上写出一篇高档次的文章。

第11篇：高考书面表达词汇必备

高考书面表达词汇必备

首先，尤其重要的，最重要above all 偶然，无意中by accident

对（于）…很积极 be active in合计为add up to

承让错误admit one’s mistake 接受某人的建

议take / follow one’s advice 就…提出建议give advice on

建议某人做某事advice sb.to do sth.后天the day after tomorrow 毕竟；终究after all

违心against one’s will 在…岁时at the age of

实现目标achieve one’s aim在空中；悬而未决in the air

在户外，在露天里in the open air 在机场at the airport 火警the fire alarm

满腔怒火be filled with anger 因某人之言行而生气be angry at sth.生某人的气be angry with sb.通知make an announcement 相继地，按顺序地one after another 相互，彼此（三者或三者以上之间）one another 相互（指两者之间）each other 没有回答give no answer 为…而担心be anxious about 急于做某事be anxious to do sth.分开住live apart 除了apart from 因某事向某人认错或道

歉 make/offer an apology to sb for sth.与某人争论某

事argue with sb.about sth.放在一边lay sth.aside 请某人指点 / 帮

助ask sb.for advice / help

惊讶于…be astonished at sth.以前，曾经at one time 注意pay attention to对…抱正确的态

度take a correct attitude to sth.引起（注意，兴趣等）attract one’s attention 仰卧／仰泳lie / swim on one’s back 重感冒a bad cold

两件行李two pieces of baggage 保持／失去平

衡keep / lose one’s balance 在舞会上at the ball

洗冷水澡have / take a cold bath 阵亡be killed in battle 在海滩on the beach 整理床铺make the bed 以…开始begin with

在…起始，开始at the beginning of自始自终from beginning to end 形成…局面；产生come into being 安全带a safety belt

三思而后行。Second thoughts are best.尽力，尽最大的努力do / try one’s best 尽量利用，善用make the best of一切顺利，万事如意all the best 黑体地，粗体地in bold 出身于农民家

庭be born in a peasant’s family 鞠躬make a bow 动动脑子use one’s brains 打破纪录break the record 深吸一口气take a deep breath 屏息；憋住气hold one’s breath 上气不接下气out of breath 刷牙brush one’s teeth 突然哭起来burst into tears 突然一阵大笑a burst of laughter 要不是but for

呼救声a call for help 保持镇静（别慌）keep calm 保持安静（别吵）keep quiet 保持不动（别动）keep still 保持沉默（别说话）keep silent 夏令营a summer camp 去野营go camping

情不自禁…cannot help doing 打牌play cards

照顾，保管take care of医疗护理medical care 假若那样的话in that case 以防万一in case

下倾盆大雨rain cats and dogs 赶上（或超过）catch up with 偶然by chance 免费free of charge

主管，在掌管之下in charge of 由…负责in the charge of 掌管，负责take charge 高兴起来cheer up

童年时in one’s childhood 挑选，选择make a choice 圣诞节时at Christmas 去做礼拜go to church 烟头cigarette end 为…鼓掌give sb.a clap 接近get close to 一块桌布a table cloth 一套衣服a suit of clothes 童装children’s clothing 集邮collect stamps 产生，发生come about

（偶然）遇见或发现come acro

走过来；长出，发芽，上升；抬头come up 共同，共有in common

参加比赛compete in a contest 举办音乐会give a concert条件是on condition that

祝贺某人congratulate sb.on sth.相反地on the contrary 失控out of control 与…谈话；交

谈have a conversation with sb.

在…期间／过程中in / during the course of 被…覆盖be covered with 因某事和某人发脾

气be cro with sb.at sth.划掉cro out

对…残忍be cruel to sb.立方米cubic meter

对…感到好奇be curious about sth.对…造成巨大损害do great damage to处境危险in danger 过时out of date

在不久前，前几天the other day 对…充耳不闻be deaf to sth.对付，应付deal with/do with 负债in debt 还清债务out of debt

做出决定make a decision 做好事do good deeds 付诸行动，生效do the deed 直到深夜deep into the night 沉思deep in thought 深夜deep into the night 毫不耽搁，立刻without delay 迟迟未做某事delay doing sth.发表（演说等）deliver a speech 满足要求meet the demands 外语系foreign language department 百货商店department store 难以形容beyond description

决心做某事be determined to do sth.随着工业的发

展with the development of industry 献身于，致力于devote oneself to 处于灭亡的危险

中be in danger of dying out

没作用，没影响make no difference 做…有困难，难

以…have difficulty in doing sth.应邀赴宴be invited to dinner 向四面八方in all directions

做出新的发现make a new discovery 正在讨论中under discuion 洗盘子wash dishes

在远方，在远处in the distance 对…冷淡be distant toward sb.对…有益do good to做坏事，犯罪do wrong

挨门挨户from door to door 隔壁的next door 下楼go downstairs 到市区去go downtown 缓慢前进，拖延drag one’s feet 催人泪下draw tears from sb.渴望做某事dream of doing sth.

在墙上钻孔drill a hole in the wall 赶走drive off

使某人发狂drive sb.mad 挣钱earn money

谋生earn one’s living究竟on earth

别着急，别紧张，放松些take it easy

对…有很大影响have a great effect on努力做某事make efforts to do sth.鼓励某人做某事encourage sb.to do sth.量入而出；使收支相抵make ends meet 美满的结局a happy ending 说英语的国

家English-speaking countries

报名比赛enter oneself for a contest 剧场的入口the entrance to the theater 在除夕on New Year’s Eve

虽然，即使even if / even though 时事current events

参加考试have / take an examination 进行体格检

查carry out a medical examination 考试及格pa an examination 为…树立榜样set an example to sb.做早操do morning exercises 产生，成立come into existence 做实

验carry / do / make an experiment 做解释，说明make an explanation to sb 做鬼脸，装怪相make a face 事实上as a matter of fact 未能…fail to do sth.落后，掉队fall behind

对…而熟悉be familiar with sth.因…而闻名be famous for作为…而闻名be famous as 摸某人的脉feel one’s pulse 觉得想做…feel like doing sth.伤害某人的感情hurt one’s feelings 春节the Spring Festival 发高烧have a high fever 科学领域the field of science 五十多岁时in one’s fifties 关键人物a key figure 填写表格fill in the form 刹那间in a flash

一场大洪水a big / great flood 扫地sweep the floor 在三层on the third floor

三层楼的建筑a building of three storeys 正在开花be in flowers 放（风筝等）fly a kite 糊里糊涂in a fog

欺骗，愚弄某人make a fool of sb.在山脚下at the foot of the mountain 空军the air force 靠武力，强行by force

用很大力气with great force 对外贸易foreign trade

养成好习惯form a good habit 碰碰运气try one’s fortune

每四个一组（一批）；四个四个地 in fours 常客a frequent visitor 新手a fresh hand

同…交朋友make friends with 那时起from then on

不时地，时常from time to time 不劳而不获。No pains, no gains.做游戏play games 代沟generation gap 开始认真（做某事）get down to sth.陷入麻烦get into trouble

有音乐天分have a gift for music 用尽，耗尽，筋疲力尽give out 朝…看了一眼take a glance at向人瞪眼，怒目而视glare at （灯，火）熄灭go out

复习功课go over the leon 进了一个球score a goal

犯语法错误make mistakes in grammar 懂某人的意思grasp one’s meaning 勿踏草地keep off the gra 养成…的习惯get into the habit of 用手by hand 分发hand out 一方面…另一方面

on the one hand…on the other hand 少量的a handful of

过幸福生活live a happy life 损害，伤害do harm to一个好收成a good harvest 保持镇静keep one’s head 身体好in good health

记住某事learn / know sth.by heart 紧握某物keep a tight hold on sth.握住；抓住catch / take / get hold of趾高气扬hold one’s head high 暑假the summer holidays 休假on holiday

为（向）… 表示敬意；为了纪念in honour of对某人抱很大希望have high hope for sb.怀着…的希望in the hope of doing sth.住院be in hospital 大约一小时an hour or so 挨饿go hungry 打猎go hunting 匆匆忙忙in a hurry 不知道have no idea 但愿，要是…就好了if only 给某人留下好印

象make a good impreion on sb.

慢慢前进inch one’s way forward 患难之交才是真朋友。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.告诉某人某事inform sb of sth 坚持要做insist on doing视察工厂inspect a factory

激动人心的演讲an inspiring speech 急需帮助in instant need of help

打断谈话interrupt a conversation 介绍信a letter of introduction 收到请帖receive an invitation 邀请信a letter of invitation 讲笑话tell a joke

和某人开玩笑play a joke with sb.旅行make a journey 使某人高兴的是to one’s joy 不可以貌取人。Don’t judge a man by his looks.初中a junior high school 正在那时just then

与…保持联系keep in touch with使…不进入…keep out of

成功的秘诀the key to succe 踢门kick the door

踢掉鞋子kick off one’s shoes 跪下go down / fall on one’s knees 敲门knock at the door 最迟，至迟at the latest 迟早sooner or later

哈哈大笑起来burst into laughter违（守）法break / obey the law 制定一条法律make a law

摆设餐具（准备吃饭）lay the table 过着简朴的生活lead a simple life 忽略，遗漏leave out

听关于…的讲座attend a lecture on给某人一个教训teach sb.a leon 从…在中吸取教训take a leon from 惊讶地叫了一声let out a cry of surprise 透漏消息let out the news 大写字母a capital letter

仰卧 / 俯卧lie on one’s back / stomach 复活，苏醒过来come back to life 交通信号灯traffic lights

列一张购物清单make a shopping list 谋生，度日make a living 丧生，死；牺牲lose one’s life 泄气；灰心lose heart 失音lose one’s voice 输一场lose a game

祝你好运。Wish you good luck.洗衣机a washing machine 欣喜若狂be mad with joy

邮寄包裹send the parcel by mail 赚钱make money 交朋友make friends 取得进步make progre 利用make use of 编造故事make up a story

弥补某人的过失make up for one’s mistake 有礼貌have good manners 商标a trade mark 满分full marks

观看一场篮球比赛watch a basketball match 进行比赛have a match

祝你成功。May you succe.五一节May Day

通过这种方式by this means 用…方法，依靠by means of 决不by no means

按…尺寸做make…to one’s measure 采取措施take a measure

量身高measure one’s height 获得金牌get a gold medal 医疗队a medical team 体检medical examination 吃药take / have some medicine 满足…的需要meet the needs of 遇到风暴meet with a storm 去开会go to a meeting 开会have a meeting举行会议hold a meeting 为纪念in memory of刹那间in a flash

一场大洪水a big / great flood 扫地sweep the floor in memory of 对…一点儿也不怜悯have no mercy on sb.毫不容情地；残忍地without mercy在…支配下；任由…摆布 at the mercy of 圣诞快乐！Merry Christmas!

给某人捎个信儿take a meage for sb.中秋节Mid-autumn Day 上百万的，许许多多的millions of 改变主意change one’s mind 当心油漆未干。Mind the wet paint! 下决心make up one’s mind

外交部长the minister of foreign affairs 错过机会mi an opportunity 犯错误make a mistake 由疏忽所致by mistake 现代in modern times 零钱small money

某人身上没（带）钱have no money with sb.选某人为班长make sb.monitor 某一天清早on the early morning 在山顶上at the top of the mountain 参加海军join the navy

如果有必要的话if neceary 需要帮助in need of help

呈现一片新面貌take on a new look 打某人的鼻子hit sb.on the nose 做笔记make / take notes

与…无关have nothing to do with 张贴通知put up a notice

对某人毫不在意pay no notice to sb.运转着，实施中be in operation 订购某物place an order for sth.失业了out of work

一副眼镜a pair of glaes 颐和园the Summer Palace 此处禁止停车！No parking here!

在…方面起积极作用take an active part in 在过去的几天里in the past few days 对某人有耐心be patient with sb.熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.演出，表演put on performances 亲自，当面in person

给某人照相take a photo of sb.弹钢琴play the piano 摘花pick flowers 捡钱包pick up a wallet 去野餐go out for a picnic 一堆书a pile of books

可怜某人/因同情而帮某人have / take pity on sb.出于同情out of pity 代替in place of 坐某人的座位，代替某人的职务take one’s place 举行，发生take place

代替，代理take the place of 订计划make a plan 玩牌play cards

对某人开一个玩笑play a joke on sb.与…一起玩play with sb.在操场上on the playground 对…感到满意be pleased with

喜欢做某事take pleasure in doing sth.生活富裕live in plenty 正要…的时候on the point of 对某人有礼貌be polite to sb.受某人喜爱be popular with sb.占有，拥有take poeion of 发电站power station 当权，执政take power

因为某事赞扬某人praise sb.for sth.赞扬in praise of

出席会议be present at a meeting 眼下at present

互赠礼物exchange presents 在压力下under preure

防止某人做某事prevent sb.from doing以…为代价at the price of

无论花多少代价（不惜任何代价at any price 以…为自豪；对…感到得意 take pride in 小学primary school 入狱，被监禁go to prison 在狱中服刑be in prison

将某人送进监狱 throw / put sb.into prison 越狱escape from prison 解决问题solve the problem 回答问题answer the question 遵守诺言keep one’s promise 刹那间in a flash

一场大洪水a big / great flood 扫地sweep the floor

答应，许下诺言make a promise 以…自豪be proud of

养家糊口provide food &clothes for one’s family 公共事务public affairs 舆论public opinion 当众，公开in public

出版社publishing house 故意地on purpose 把…推到一边pushaside 推倒，（风）刮倒push over 拖延，推迟put off

不可能out of the question 接力赛a relay race

通过无线电广播on the radio 衣衫褴褛，穿破衣服in rags

在火车站at the railway station 小（大）雨light / heavy rain 一线希望a ray of hope 伸手去拿reach for sth.够不着out of ones’ reach 乐意干某事be ready to do 事实上in reality

实现希望realize one’s hope 为此，为此理由for this reason 接待处reception desk 参考；谈到refer to

留在某人的记忆中 remain in one’s memory 提醒某人做某事remind sb.to do sth.使某人想起remind sb.of sth.应…请求by request 因此，结果as a result

盛产；有大量的…be rich in 除掉get rid of

抢走某人某物rob sb.of sth.

起重要作用play an important role 扮演…的角色play the role of 给…腾出地方make room for 对某人无礼be rude to sb.用完run out of

高峰时间，拥挤时间rush hour

满足某人的需要satisfy one’s needs 节省体力save one’s strength也就是说that is to say

为某事责备某人scold sb.for sth.就座，坐下take one’s seat

不让人知道某事，保密keep sth.a secret 抓住小偷的衣领seize a thief by the collar 与某人握手shake hands with sb.店员；营业员shop aistant

领某人出去／进来show sb.out / in炫耀show off

对岸；在…另一面on the other side of 支持某人（方）take the side of 站在…一边take sides in 看不见lose sight of 看到，发现catch sight of 看不见out of sight静静地in silence和…类似的be similar to 单程票single ticket

量…的大小（尺寸）take the size of 偷偷塞给某人一张纸条slip a note into one’s hand

在雪地上滑倒slip on the snow 克服困难smooth away difficulties 大约or so

与…有关系have something to do with 国歌the national song

大胆地说，清楚并响亮地说speak out 发言，演讲make a speech 以…的速度at a speed of平方公里square kilometers 代表，象征stand for 饿死starve to death 处于良好状态in a good state 逐步地，一步一步地step by step

遵守诺言stick to one’s word / promise 趴在地上lie on one’s stomach 四层楼的住宅a house of four storeys 赶上风暴be caught in the storm

对…要求严格be strict with sb.in sth.擦火柴strike a match

挣扎着起来struggle to one’s feet 仔细研究make a study of 突然，冷不防all of a sudden 暑假summer holidays 向某人供应／提供offer sb sth使某人惊奇的是to one’s surprise 擦脸上的汗sweat off one’s face 坐下吃饭sit down to table 纳税pay one’s taxes 沏茶make tea

用望远镜through a telescope 讲故事tell a story

辨别，分清tell one from the other 量体温take one’s temperature 数以万计tens of thousands of 被…吓了一跳be terrified at

因某事感谢某人be thankful to sb.for sth.扔掉throw away

吐出（食物），呕吐throw up 立刻，很快in no time 交通堵塞traffic jam

跟某人开玩笑，欺骗某人play a trick on sb.处于困境（苦恼）中be in trouble 一条裤子a pair of trousers 上大学attend university 拜访某人pay a visit to sb.

高声地（喊）at the top of one’s voice 在交战at war

穿旧；使筋疲力尽wear out 拔草pull out the weeds

穿着白色衣服be dreed in white 通盘，作为整体as a whole 总的来说on the whole 有志者事竟成。

Where there is a will, there is a way.乐意做某事be willing to do sth.擦掉灰尘wipe off the dust 创造奇迹make wonders 不足为奇；难怪no wonder 插话get in a word

和某人说句话have a word with sb.总之，简言之in a word

第12篇：书面表达

书面表达10篇

书面表达（共15分）

（一）

根据内容提示，写一篇60-80词左右的短文。

内容提要：第21个教师节即将来临，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师Mi Zhang写一封感谢信，并表示节日的问候。主要内容包括：

1、表示感谢。

2、描述她的教学（如：讲故事，教唱歌，做游戏，举行晚会……；课堂生动有趣，使我们对英语产生兴趣。）。

3、表达节日问候。

Dear Mi Zhang,

Yours

Li Nan

（二）

根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇日记。

注意：

1、内容须包括所提供的信息，要求日记内容完整、正确、通顺。

2、词数60~80左右。

3、日记开头语已为你写好，不算入总词数。

活动时间 5月6日，星期六 集合地点 学校大门口

活动地点 西湖公园

交通方式 公共汽车

出发时间 7：30am 到达时间 8：30am

日程 上午：划船、野餐

下午：做游戏、拍照片、参观博物馆

回程时间 4pm

Saturday, May 6th

I went for an outing with my clamates.

（三）

假如你是Tom，你昨天（5月20日）感冒，发烧、头痛，感觉很累。去看医生，医生要你休息两天，按时吃药，多喝水。所以你想请假两天，回到学校后，一定补上所缺的功课。请给你的老师Mr Smith写一张请假条，60-80词左右。假条的开头、结尾已给出。 单词提示：补上make up

May 20Dear Mr Smith,

Thank you.

Tom

（四）

为了提高你的英语水平，你想寻找一位美国笔友，根据下表提供的信息，写一封电子邮件（开头和结尾已为你写好）。

注意：

1、文章必须包括中文提示和表格中的主要内容。

2、词数：60～80。（已给出的开头和结尾不计算在内）

Name Zhang Lin Sex boy Age 15

Hometown City of Guigang School Ming Yang Middle School

Likes Collect stamps, travel, football, computer games, English songs Dislikes Dance, stay at home, play the piano

June 14

Dear friend,

My name is Zhang Lin.If you want to be a friend of mine, please send an e-mail to me soon.Yours

Zhang Lin

（五）

假如Johnny Brown 是你们的英语老师，请你根据下列表格的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍他的基本情况。词数：60~80左右。

姓名 Johnny Brown 性别 男

年龄 35 国籍 加拿大

工作情况 三年前来到中国，工作勤恳，课上得生动、有趣

业余爱好 运动、旅游，喜欢在课余时间为学生们演奏小提琴

备注 待学生好，是学校最受欢迎的教师之一

（六）

在一次英语班会上,老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。词数要求在60~80之间。

提示：①What does your school look like?

②What fun do you have at school?

③Why do you like your school?

（七）

假设你是一名导游，请根据下表所提供的信息，用英文向你的游客们介绍一下海口。 位置 海南的东北部

人口 150万

气候 长夏无冬、凉爽宜人

环境 蓝天碧海、空气清新、吸引各地游客

景点 假日海滩、万绿园等

要求：

1、语句通顺，语意连贯、要点写全、书写清晰。

2、词数60～80左右。

3、不要逐字翻译，可紧扣主题,适当发挥。

（八）

请根据下图和表格的提示，写一篇题为：“Saving the Earth”的英语短文。

注意：

1、词数80左右。

2、标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。

3、内容要点见表格。

人类的不明智之举

1、乱伐树木

2、乱扔垃圾

3、不加处理排放废物

导致的问题

1、土地沙化

2、河水变脏

3、空气质量差

4、全球气温升高

建议 合理化建议至少三条

Saving the Earth

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.

（九）

如果有下面三种职业供你选择，你最感兴趣或最渴望的是哪一种?写出你的真实想法。 注意：词数60-80，文中不要写出自己的真实姓名和学校。

(十)

假如将来你有了很多钱，这笔钱可以帮助你做三件事情，你会用它来干什么呢？请以“If I have a lot of money…”为题写一篇短文，展开合理的想象，60-80词。

书面表达参考答案

（一）

Dear Mi Zhang,

The twenty-first Teachers, Day is coming.I want to say “Thank you” for your teaching.

You always work hard.You are kind but strict with us.You try to make your claes lively and interesting.You tell us funny stories, teach us English songs and play games with us.We have English parties together.We are all interested in English.With your help, all of us have made great progre.We all love you.Thank you for making English fun.Happy Teachers, Day!

Yours

Li Nan

（二）

It was fine today.I went for an outing with my clamates.We met at our school gate.We got on the bus at seven thirty in the morning and arrived at the West Lake Park at eight thirty.We spent the whole morning boating on the lake.Then we had our picnic lunch.After lunch we played games, took some photos and then went to visit the museum.We had a wonderful time there.We got back at about 4 o,clock.We were very tired, but we were very happy.

（三）

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m sorry I can’t go to school today.I got a bad cold yesterday.I had a high fever and a headache.I coughed a lot.I felt very tired.So my mother took me to see the doctor.The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days, take the medicine on time and drink more water.So I have to ask for two days’ leave.I will work hard to make up the lost leons after I go back to school.

Thanks.

Thank you.

Tom

（四）

Dear friend,

My name is Zhang Lin.I am fifteen years old.I am in the City of Guigang.I am a boy student in Ming Yang Middle School.I like collecting stamps, playing football and computer games.I often sing English songs with my clamates.I enjoy traveling with my parents or friends.I don,t like dancing.I think staying at home all day is terrible.I,m not interested in playing the piano at all.

To improve my English, I want to find a pen-friend in America.If you want to be a friend of mine, please send an e-mail to me soon.

Yours

Zhang Lin

（五）

Johnny Brown is our English teacher.He is 35 years old.He comes from Canada.

Three years ago, he came to China.He works very hard.He can make his

claes very lively and interesting.In his free time, he likes having sports and traveling.After cla, he enjoys playing the violin for the students.He is friendly to the students.He is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

（六）

My school is very big.There are several tall buildings in it.There are more than 2000 students in my school.We have a big playground with lots of trees around it.There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We have a lot of fun at school every day.After cla we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and tennis.We work very hard and do very well in our leons.

I love my school because it’s like a big family.The teachers in my school are very kind to us.I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

（七）

Good morning, everyone! Welcome to Haikou.Haikou is the capital of Hainan.It,s in the northeast of Hainan and its population is 1,500,000.Here, you can enjoy the fresh air, the blue sky, the clean water and the long white beaches.The weather in Haikou is neither too hot nor too cold.It,s warm all the year round.We can also visit many interesting places, such as the Holiday Beach, the Wanlu Garden and so on.There are lots of visitors every year.Haikou is a good place to be in.I hope you will have a wonderful time in Haikou.

（八）Saving the Earth

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing

anything to it.This has caused some serious problems.For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is le clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help.What shall we do to save her? My

suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers.We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.

（九）Newspaper Reporter

I,m good at writing and reading.I began to read books when I was only seven.So I can write quickly.I was good at drawing, too.Because of this, I was asked to be a school reporter when I was at school.I did a good job about it.I,m also interested in sports, news and music.I,m sure I can easily get on well with other people.So I can easily get information from others.I like traveling.I won,t get tired of the job as a reporter.I believe I can do it well.

(十)If I have a lot of money…

If I have a lot of money, I’ll buy a big house for my parents, because they send

me to school and do a lot of things for me.I hope they can live a more comfortable life.

If I have a lot of money, I’ll travel.I’ll go to Beijing.I’ll visit some places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, Beihai Park, the Palace Museum and so on.

If I have a lot of money, I will plant more trees and flowers in my city.On the one hand, it can make our city more beautiful.On the other hand, it can improve our environment.

(If I have a lot of money, I will give some to charities and help those poor

children who can,t go to school.I will be very happy when I see them studying in the bright clarooms.)

第13篇：书面表达

对比文章

There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason that②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由

二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

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People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___.In their point of

view, onone hand， _____.On theother hand, _________.Therefore, there is no doubt that _______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ________.It is notonly because ________, but also

because _________.The more _______,

the more ________.

解决方法题型

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A.

The problem is becoming more and more serious./ The present situation is worrying.First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation./ To our great joy, many measures have been taken to solve the problems.For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一).For another -------------(解决方法二).Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that ------ (我的解决方法/ 看法)./ Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -----(带来的好处) / if --------------.

说明利弊题型

nowadays many middle schools prefer to ---------.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First, ----------.Besides / What’s more, -------.Meanwhile, -----.

On the other hand,/ However,-----------------------.The most important thing is that ------------.As a result, -----------------------

From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of ,________ we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way can _________.现象解释

Topic

⑴It so happened that_______________⑵Just at the moment,___________.⑶It impreed me most because_______⑷What happened next was _________________.⑸At first,____________.⑹Almost at the same time, ___________.⑺What”s more, ____________⑻As a result,____________⑼As I understand,___________Onone hand,

____________⑾On the other hand___________⑿Therefore,

（二）

I⑴As is known to all____________⑵___ seem to get accustomed to_____⑶In fact_____,..⑷The reasons of _____lie in several aspects.⑸Firstly___, ⑹

Secondly,⑺Thirdly,____________________.⑻Finally,__________________.

⑼As a matter of fact, _________________⑽Onone hand,__________⑾On the

other hand,________________________..⑿Therefore, ____________

万能英语模板

图标作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease,

significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the

sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other

hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.

Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the

above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both

sound and well-grounded.

书信作文模板

Your addreMonth, Date, yearReceiver\'s addreDear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you

that_____.

……

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking

f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and succe.Sincerely yours,

话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there

been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of

it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For

another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

对比观点作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.

Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is

more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.

Secondly (besides),______.Thirdly (finally),_____.

From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there

are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise

choice.

日程安排解说词模板

Ladies and Gentlemen/Dear_____,

⑴Welcome to.⑵To begin with,.⑶It’s my pleasure to.⑷Now to

share the schedule with you,.⑸Please keep in mind that.⑹According to

the schedule,.⑺In addition,.⑻As a matter of fact,.⑼During your

visit,.⑽There is no doubt that.⑾I hope that.⑿Thank you very

much for.

道歉信模板

Date:

Dear,

⑴I am very sorry to say/tell you that.⑵Now, I am writing you this letter of apology

to show my deep regret.⑶Please accept my sincere apology.⑷I fear you are unhappy

at.⑸I hope you will understand me and excuse me for.

⑹Let me explain.⑺The rason for my delay/absence was that.⑻I had no way out

because.⑼Thererfore, it,s not in my power to.

⑽Naturally, I want to suggest.⑾I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tellme

when and where you.⑿We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

批评、抱怨信模板

Date:

Dear,

⑴My name is.⑵I am.⑶I want to write you a letter about.⑷

The focus of the complaint is.⑸For one thing,.⑹For another,.⑺

Honestly speaking,.⑻But.⑼Besides,.⑽All in all, there is still

much room for improvement.⑾I do hope.⑿Thank you for your time

and kind consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

书面表达

高考英语满分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感谢信)

时间： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：来源：

Dear Mr.John,

How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English

before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progre that I won

the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.

I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.

All the best.

Yours,Liu Jie

第14篇：书面表达

书面表达背诵 2

基础写作 11----说明文-描写大学生活

大学生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括：

 确定新的学习目标 改进学习方法 学会独立生活 参加各种课外活动  处理好与同学的关系

[写作要求]1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3、信的开关和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写句数）；

4、已给出的信的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡.[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

I will go to college in the near future.After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning.What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is neceary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself.In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.In addition, I need to get along well with my clamates and teachers at college.I think I will have a wonderful college life.

基础写作12.---应用文-倡议书

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行。教育部倡导学生：

 每天锻炼一小时 健康工作五十年 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总句数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone.

On the morning of April 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise.It is well worth of taking an hour a day for exercise, which helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.Therefore, we can work more efficiently.Thank you!

基础写作13.---记叙文-英文稿件

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。

〔写作内容〕请根据以下内容要点，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。上周四经班级讨论决定爬山，第二天一大早出发上山，却在山上发现随地乱扔的垃圾。同学们拾捡垃圾，放入垃圾箱中。〔写作要求〕只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 〔评分标准〕句子结构准确，信息内容完整，可适当增加细节，篇章结构连贯。 Last Thursday, we had a cla meeting to discu where to go for our springouting.We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing amountain, and going to an amusement park and finally, we decided to go mountainclimbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning and we enjoyed the warmsunshine and a beautiful view while climbing the mountain.However, when wereached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles andbanana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into thenearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.基础写作14.---议论文-谈看法

最近，你班召开了高三学生家长会。会后，英语老师要求学生用英语写一篇短文谈谈关于对家长会的看法的。

要点如下：

1、家长会的目的： 相互沟通，提高学习成绩。

2、赞同的观点及理由。

3、不赞同的观点及理由

4、你的观点及理由。

写作要求：

1、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。（开头的句子不计入总数）

2、可适当增加逻辑细节。

Recently a parent’s meeting was held in our school.But different people have different ideas.

Some students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school.On the contrary, others hold the view that it is no use because they may know their children’s poor marks and improper behavior.Even some parents may scold or beat their children.

In my opinion, to get a better understanding and communication with the teachers and children, parents’ meetings are quite neceary.基础写作15.---写信

假如你在加拿大旅游过，你的笔友李华想留学，要了解加拿大的情况，请你用5句话写信告诉他。开头已经给出。

地理 加拿大是世界第二大国，是世界是湖泊最多的国家。 经济 东部区以渔业、森林为主，中部人口最密集。

留学生活 建议选择东部留学，因为留学生比较少，学费便宜。

医疗 有病一般去诊所，医院费用非常昂贵，建议购买医疗保险，每月54加元写作要求：

1、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。（开头的句子不计入总数）

2、可适当增加逻辑细节。Dear Li Hua,

I am glad to know that you are going to study in Canada, so I am writing to tell you something about this country.

Canada is the second largest country with the largest number of lakes in the world.The majority of people live in the central part of the country, while fishing and forestry are of great importance in the eastern part.I suggest that you (should) choose to study in the east, where not many international students study and tuition is lower.Most people will go to a clinic instead of a hospital, because it is very expensive to see a doctor there.So I advise you to buy hospitalization insurance, which is 54 Canadian dollars a year.基础写作16—记叙文-成语故事

假如你的美国朋友正在学习汉语，他写来电子邮件，向你了解中国成语“掩耳盗铃”的故

事，请你根据以下的写作内容，用英语写出这个故事。 【写作内容】

1.盗铃的念头：深夜里偷窃邻居家挂在屋外的大铃铛。2.钟鸣：掩耳； 3.盗铃：被捉； 4.寓意。

Once upon a time there was a stupid man who went to steal his neighbour’s big bell hung outside the door one night.He tried to get the bell off, but it rang the moment he touched it.He was afraid that someone would hear it, so he covered his ears and got the bell down.Hearing the sound of the bell, a lot of people came to the gate and caught him.The story tells us that we can never fool ourselves by ignoring the facts.基础写作17—应用文-电子邮件

假如你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。写作内容：

1．问题：用了十天后手机不响铃，不能发短信； 2．该产品已售完，无法更换； 3．型号新，无配件，无法维修。4．没有手机很不方便。5．要求：公司应尽快予以更换 dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China.Ten days after that, it didn\'t ring and I couldn’t send any short meages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out.Later I went to the repairman，but he said since it was a new model in China, it was impoible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was almost desperate on hearing that because it would be quite inconvenient without the mobile phone for so long a time.Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model as soon as poible.Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi 基础写作18—说明文-写短文

假设你是一位心理辅导老师，你的一位学生因为考试成绩不好而向你求助。针对他的情况，请你以Marks Do Not Mean Everything 为题，写一篇短文开导他。 要点：

1． 成绩好坏并不意味着一个学生的优劣；2． 成绩可以通过自身的努力提高； 3． 要学会调整心态，争取进步；4． 只要自己付出，就没有什么可后悔的。 写作要求：

1．必须使用5句子介绍全部所给的内容。

2．将5个句子组织连贯成的一篇短文，使用必要的连接词。Marks Do Not Mean Everything

It is usual that many students’ parents and teachers consider marks as everything, but in fact, marks only show whether one gains more or le achievement in a certain period.It does not mean students who get high marks are top or excellent ones.What’s more, marks can be truly improved if you work hard at your leons.However hard you feel at present, you will be happy in the future, so you should adjust your mind to reality and make up your mind to make progre.As a matter of fact, if you put your heart into your study, whatever the result is, there is nothing left for you to regret.基础写作19---应用文-自荐信-

阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。 EIL International English Summer Camp Volunteer Wanted

EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.

Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with childrenbetween 7-12

Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel Campers: Students from different countries Camp site: Mount Wuyi, Fujian Time: July 26-August 9

Application deadline: July 15.2008

If interested, please e-mail to [写作内容]

假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要求如下： 1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。 注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.只能用五个句子表达。

Dear sir,

I’m Li Hua from Fujian.When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impreed me greatly.I think it is instructive to learn to live together by living together.It is such a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together that I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, have a good command of English and some experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12.I think it is a kind of win-win activity, through which I can help take care of the children and meanwhile improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,Li Hua 基础写作20—应用文-回信

假定你是李华，David 是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

◇ 感谢他的关注。◇ 简要介绍相关情况。◇ 谈谈你的感想。 注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3只能用5 个句子表达全部内容。 4.参考词汇：环抱购物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注---concern.Dear David,

I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection.Thank you for your concern.

As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use reusable environment-friendly shopping bags, which are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish.More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags, one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place, can greatly improve our environment.Yours,Li Hua

第15篇：书面表达

1.幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是„„ 请以My happine为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100词。

Happine is important in our life.In fact, happine is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing.Once, I had a bad mark at a math test.I was shy and afraid to meet my parents.But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child.Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help.We believe you can be better next time.Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy.Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love.I want to be a good child for my parents.

2.节约用水水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

★ 范文As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is le and le.But some people don’t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as poible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily.If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

3.拯救地球地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1.重要性：只有一个地球2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V.保护注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

★ 范文Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China.A lot of fishes died.The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become gra land.The water is becoming le and le because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment.First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water.For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water.Second, we should save energy, such as le turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and le driving and so on.Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment.Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

4.How to Keep Safe in school”的短文。谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1.描述一件发生

在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件（经过与结果）。2.提出解决这种校园意外事件

的建议（至少两条）。3.呼吁每个学生要注意安全

How to Keep Safe in school

Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough.For

example，Last month，my friend Tom fight with a clamate.And Tom chase the clamate.By the time he ran into the clamate , the clamate had already closed the door,so Tom hit the door,and then he send to the hospital soon,and he stay in hospital about two weeks.So,we should know the important of the safe in school.Here are my suggestions.We can\'t fight with others.And we should get on well with our clamates.

What\'s more,we should be careful in our school life.Let\'s keep safe in school,and have a

better life!

5.在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下

面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80～100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。

提示：①What does your school look like？②What fun do you have at school？③Why do you like your school？

Proud of My School

My school is very big with several tall buildings.There are over 1，000 students in my

school.We have a big playground, a bigsoccer court and two basketball courts.There are lots of trees around our school.We have lots of fun at school.After cla we play games and do lots of sports, like a big family.The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

6.回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习， 生活，爱好等方面作出自

我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)

I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not

only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math andphysics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School

7.假如你是初三学生杨帆，在复习备考阶段遇到烦恼时。你的笔友Mike给过你很多

鼓励。现在请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助。

Dear Mike,

Although I haven‟t written to you for a long time, I‟d like to thank you from my the

bottom of my heart.

Since I failed in the PE test, I‟ve lost interest in studying anything.I believed no matter

how hard I worked.I wouldn‟t realize my dream to be a famous senior high school.It’s you who encouraged me to overcome myself.

What you said is right.Whether to enter an ideal school is not my real goal.The most

important thing is that one should always dream to be better.As long as I try my best with the spirit of not giving up, everything will be OK.

Having a friend like you, I’m sure we’ll make progre together.Thank you.

Yours,

Yang Fan

8.Le Preure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Preure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our cla are under too much preure.Some students can’t get on well with their clamates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under preure, too.M y parents want me to be the top student in cla.So they send me to all kinds of after-claes at weekends.Last Monday eveni ng, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me a t last.So I think a conversation with paren ts is neceary to solve the problem.

That’s all.Thank you!

9.Learn to expre thanks

Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to expre thanks”.

We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school.When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct.As students, we should learn to expre thanks.The society offers us a chance to receive good education.And our parents also support us to go to school.Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them.We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on.At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

10.Growing up with good books（倡议书）

My dear friends,Reading is very important.

We can get knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more and good books.The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.

However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games.It takes much of their spare time.So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read claics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.

Let’s start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!

第16篇：书面表达

中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；

2、看图作文；

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。 【名师解难】 一.训练方法

1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。 二.应试策略

1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。

2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

2 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 三.注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 【中考范例】

VII.书面表达（共1题，计10分）

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。

要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.

4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

5 1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。

2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：

1、收到对方的来信；

2、愿意和对方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；

4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.

I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together. Please write (to) me soon. Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。【满分演练】

（1）

华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。 2．乘汽车去大约要花1个小时；也可以乘火车去。

3．登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。 注意：

1．字数：80词左右。 2．请不要逐字翻译。 （2） 根据提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（100个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。

2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。

3.告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。

7 注意1.信的格式已经给出。

2.信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。 （3）

根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……

请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。（请注意日记格式） 1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say （4）

根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。 注意1.字数60~80。

2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥） 3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。

假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。

注意：1.字数100左右；

2.必须使用所给英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9 （6） 看图写话。

根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。 要求：1.叙述要用第三人称。 2.词数60~80个左右。 3.要表达自己的看法或想法。

4.选用下列词语：rush hour, cro, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ （7）

请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。 注意：1.语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。 2.表达符合图意，书写规范。 3.给出自己的观点。 4.文章的开头已给出。

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参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源) From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （8）

请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。

参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火

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Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ （9） 看图写话。

要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。 2.至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。

3.标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ （10）

根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

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假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2.词数：70～90

3.生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________ （12）

请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）

内容要点：

过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】

(1) 参考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit. (2) 参考答案：

36 Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!

15 You remembered! It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my clamates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I mi you very much.I always mi the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon. Your friend, Li Lei

(3) 参考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my clamate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4) 参考答案： Dear friends,

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m

16 interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.

I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening. (5) 参考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.

(6) 参考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was croing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules. 17 (7) 参考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better. (8) 参考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow! He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour (to) fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9) 参考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

18 that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10) 参考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman croing the street.Suddenly a car paed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cro the street.The old woman thanked us very much. （11） 参考答案： 内容要点：

（1）上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。 （2）上星期六（第二天）早上六点半我就起床了。 （3）我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。 （4）到南河边，我们开始植树。（也可描写动场面。） （5）看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My clamates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.

When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank. （12） 参考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings (there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢？突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的；当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。

于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜

20 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。

妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死；结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。

几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化；应该说人的素质也应有所提高；一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的；有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上， 21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应；俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”；可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。

然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残；我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。

树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾；看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线；争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢？

家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情；把金钱和利益看淡一些吧！ 人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情. 22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵.主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇；把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家；又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机；齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家；齐天成为东北大学学生；齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。

齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。

23 可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。

那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼？

毋庸置疑，是亲情。

寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。 最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐！她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了！她的灵魂才得以解放。

亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。

亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们；亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们；亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。

亲情是雪，晶莹剔透；亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。

亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和；亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。 不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。

24 没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉；没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代；没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥；没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。

亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。 “兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”

“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。 “我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。

无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了.我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!

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第17篇：书面表达

书面表达

1．书面表达（本题20分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。 3.就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。 作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,

__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming

2．书面表达(满分15分)

假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英语教师)要求你们在下午的班会课上用英语演讲的形式参与班长(monitor)竞选，请根据图片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 为题写一篇演讲稿。 要求:

1.短文必须包括三个方面内容：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么； 2.短文内容可适当发挥，提示词可选用； 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

4..短文词数为80左右，开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

I believe I can

Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen! My name is Li Ming

Thank you!

试卷第1页，总3页 3．书面表达

从前，我们通讯不便捷，只能通过书信与千里之外的亲朋交流，富有浓浓的亲情。今天，

随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。人们的交流变得非常的方便，可我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，很多人都有同感：“距离近了，可亲情远了。”请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.

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Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.

Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.

In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and neceary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.

【解析】 试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。 写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉

试卷第2页，总3页 人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。

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参考答案

1．

Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike\'s story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can\'t stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it\'s wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can\'t stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇电子邮件。本题所给材料是是根据上文的故事表达自己的感受。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

写作亮点：文章直接谈到作者对麦克的故事感兴趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can\'t stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.给文章增色不少。 考点：考查提纲作文。 2．

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Ming! I\'m very glad to be a member of our cla.I want to be monitor for these reasons.

First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our cla in the correct direction in study and other fields.I\'m sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you! 【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇演讲稿，要按照要求，从：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么三个方面进行写作。用第一人称形式，我的品质和能力用一般现在时态，我将为大家做的用一般将来时态。要根据演讲稿的特点选择恰当的词语和句型结构，增加语言的感染力。

写作亮点：范文开头简单的自我介绍后直接点题：我要当班长；接着由first, second 等等列出自己想当班长的原因；后面用两个一般将来时的句子说明自己将会怎样当好班长。叙述清楚，结构明晰。文中的I believe I wi11„；I\'m sure we will„充分表达了作者的自信，彰显了作者个性，突出了短文主题，语言精炼，符合演讲稿的特点。 【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。 3．

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead

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of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.

In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and neceary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】

试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。

【考点定位】图画及提纲类作文。

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第18篇：书面表达

中考中的书面表达题，主要有“补全对话”、“看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、“看图完成短文”、“看图完成句子”和“根据提示的内容，完成某项写作”等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的能力。下面作一简单介绍：

一、测试要点

一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活为背景，进行简单的会话或写作。例如：问候、问路、看病、打电话、购物、自我介绍等功能意念项目和简单的应用文，例如：便条、通知、短信等。一个题目写10个左右的句子，字数为80－100个左右。

二、日常训练与应试注意事项

1.平时要注意句型与对话的学习，注意听说训练，积极参与听说训练的教学活动，以达到会话相当熟练的程度。

2.在会话中，注意常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套语的归纳和应用，做到脱口而出，应对如流。

3.注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法，做题时一定要瞻前顾后，既要看到前面的内容，又要看到后面的语句；既要符合习惯用法，又要注意表达的准确性。

4.要经常进行日常应用文和命题作文的学习与训练。

三、解题技巧

1.要注意看清题目的要求与提供的情景，需用哪些习惯用语，哪种时态，根据词数限制，应选用哪一种表达方式为最佳。

2.表达要正确，要注意英美人的习惯用语，切忌随心所欲，用中文去对照英文进行翻译。例如：A：How do you do？此题只能选择How do you do?”来回答，除此，无第二种选择。如果从语法和字数方面来考虑，那将会有“How old are you?”“What is your

name?”“Where are you from?”等多种与问句不符的答语。

3.注意在一些交际场合中，习惯使用的客套语。只要根据已知部分，就可推测出未知部分。例如：How are you?回答 可用“fine ” “I ’m fine.Thank you.”如果用“How do you do?”来回答 ，就大错特错了。

4.在写应用文类命题作文或对话时，应注意应用文的格式、人称、动词的时态等用法；写短文或对话时，要注意切题，不写没有把握的句子，切忌为使文章生动，在句中随意增加自己无把握的词，导致中文式英语而影响考试成绩。尽量用自己熟悉的句型和词汇来表达一个完整的意思就可以了。

四、举例分析

1.写短文。以Self Introduction为题，要求写出10个意思连贯、表述正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅的句子，向新来的老师作自我介绍。第一句已给出：My name is Cheng Hui.分析：该题是要求考生向新来的老师作自我介绍。那么，该短文的写法可从如下三个自然段来写。第一段，向新老师介绍自己在学校学习、生活的情况；第二段向新老师介绍自己在家里与父母之间的关系及生活情况；第三段可以写自己与父母、同学和老师之间相处情况等。

2.写对话。以“A Talk About English Study”为题写一篇对话，要求所问所答必须与英语学习有关，问答表述完整、正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅、提问不少于5项内容。分析：写对话一要采用问答的形式；二要掌握好对话的内容与中心思想；三要在落笔之前，心里有一个构思计划?即该对话要从哪几方面进行表述?。就该对话而言，可从5个方面的内容进行表达：一是谈对英语这一门学科了解得怎样；二是谈学习英语用了多长时间；三是谈是否在课后还练习讲英语；四是谈英语这门学科是否难学；最后可以说明自己为什么喜欢学习英语。

第19篇：高考英语书面表达经典句型

2014高考英语书面表达经典句型

1.The more you care, the more you have to lose.

越在意，失去的就越多。

2.Sometimes,it\'s not what you say that matters, it\'s what you don\'t.

有时候，我在乎的不是你所说的，而是那些你没有说的。

3.When you have something you really love but it causes you pain, it is actually that Godis just testing you to see if you are strong enough to hold it.

当你真正喜欢一样东西，但它又给你带来伤害的时候，其实这是老天在考验你是否足够坚持。

4.When I was a child, it seemed that happine was very simple.While as an adult,simplicity is the eence of happine.

小时候，幸福是件很简单的事;长大后，简单是件很幸福的事。

5.Don\'t be afraid of change.You may lose out on something good, but you might gain something even better.

不要害怕改变，尽管你可能会因此失去一些好的东西，但你也可能会得到一些更好的东西。

6.No matter how much you think you hate school, you will still mi it when you leave.不管你现在多恨上学，离开的时候还是会有些不舍的。

7.If they throw stones at you, don’t throw back, use them to build your own foundation instead.

如果别人朝你扔石头，就不要扔回去了，留着作你建高楼的基石。

8.The strongest man in the world is the man who stands alone.

这世界上最强大的人，就是能一个人孤单生活的人。

9.When you can explain why you like someone, it’s not love.Because real love never has explanation, you just love someone without reason.

如果你能解释为什么会喜欢一个人，那么这不是爱情。因为真正的爱情没有原因，你爱他，不知道为什么。

10.Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start now and make a new ending.

没有人可以回到过去重新开始，但谁都可以从现在开始，书写一个全然不同的结局。

11.Life is like a cup of tea.It won’t be bitter for a lifetime but for a short while anyway.人生就像一杯茶，不会苦一辈子，但总会苦一阵子!

12.Failure does not imply you have wasted time and life.It shows you have reasons to start again.

失败并不意味着你浪费了时间和生命，而是表明你有理由重新开始。

13.It is our choices that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities.

决定我们一生的，不是我们的能力，而是我们的选择。

14.Don’t wait for the perfect moment.Take the moment and make it perfect.

不要去等待完美的时刻，把握好现在，让此刻变完美。

15.Don’t try so hard, the best things come when you least expect them to.

不要着急，最好的总会在最不经意的时候出现。

16.Strangers think I’m quiet.My friends think I’m out-going.Only my best friends know that I’m completely insane!

陌生人觉得我很文静，熟悉点的朋友则会觉得我很开朗，只有我最好的朋友知道，其实我就是一疯子!

17.Give everything a shot.You never know what (or who) is going to change your life.

任何事情都应该去尝试一下，因为你无法知道，什么样的事或者什么样的人将会改变你的一生。

18.The world makes way for the man who knows where he is going.

只要你明确了自己的方向，世界也会为你让路。

19.The minute you think of giving up, think of the reason why you held on so long.在你想要放弃的那一刻，想想为什么当初你坚持走到了这里。

20.I constantly think I’m not good enough.I’m imperfect, but I’m perfectly me.一直以来，我都觉得自己不够好，我不完美，但我是完整的自己。

第20篇：高考英语书面表达预测邀请函

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2011高考英语书面表达预测-邀请函

——参加欢送会

假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

（3）时间：星期六晚六点；

（4）地点：阳关俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

（5）路线：在你所住并馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。

注意：

（1）须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；

（2）词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your paing all th

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【猜题理由】该素材围绕与学生的日常生活相关的话题，体现“生活化”的特点。本篇写作要求写一篇邀请函，能够充分体现生活实际和语言的交际功能。

【构思点拨】写邀请函时一方面需要说明邀请理由，另一方面要把活动的时间、地点、乘车路线等细节问题一定要交代清楚。

【参考范文】

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your paing all the exams.I am delighted you have really made great progre in your two years of studying in China.All you have gained is the result of your hard work.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

It’s pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening.Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We’ll have dinner together.By the way.you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.

I wish you succe and fulfillment in the years ahead!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

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