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九年级中考作文指导

典型例句 1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.2.It\'s our duty to do sthIt\'s our duty to help them.

3.As….as poibleWe shoud help them as much as poible.4.here be...Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.

6.make +sb+ 形容词It makes many people homele.

7.too …..to They are too young to look after themselves

一、健康问题(热点)健康问题是中考常考的话题,出题形式多样,有必要下苦功掌握。典型例句 1.It is very important to keep healthy。 2.How can we keep healthy?3.We can\'t go to sleep too late.We can\'t get up too late。

4.We should eat the food healthily。5.We should do more exercise。6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7.I didn\'t feel like eating anything。8.I decided to see the doctor。9.In the doctor\'s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

11.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。 例文

1、简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康,并展开想象,适当发挥。参考答案: All of us want to be healthy.First,we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and le meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 保持健康的重要性,保持健康的方法,保持健康的结论, 1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯,(你的看法?),How to stay our health /fit?范文 Dear boys and girls :

Here is my advice about how to keep health? Today many teenagers are unhealthy,because they do le exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from drugs .Early to bed early to get up .Breathe the fresh air in the open air.you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals ,Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest .Next,keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or

smoke .They are bad for your health.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

3、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。范文:We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat.But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

二、关于环境保护问题(热点)环境保护问题是中考热门话题,难度较大,必须掌握。 典型句子 1.It’s our duty to save wate 2.As we know , water is very important to man,3.we can’t live without water.4.But some people don’t care about it .5.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is le and le.

6.Many rivers and lakes are polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.7.It\'s our duty to protect our environment。

8.It is very important to take care of our environment

9.We shouldn’t throw litter on to the ground10.We should not spit in a public place11.We should plant more flowers and trees。

12.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

13.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.

2、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重„„。假如你是学生Jone.,你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”演讲比赛,要求:

1、举例说明环境存在的问题

2、如何保护好我们的环境,采取怎样的措施,举例说明,字数80左右。Dear headmasters,teachers,clamates and friends:

I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment..But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike .we can use shopping bakets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be

le pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.Thanks!

4、保护环境 。从2008年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋,掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 参考作文:What Can We Do for the EnvironmentHello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as poible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the clarooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

5.环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。 提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重2.砍伐森林严重3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾等。 要求:如何改善/保护环境? 80字左右的。范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollutionis worse and worse /more and more seriouslytoday .Water is polluted ,we have nocleanwater todrinkMany trees are cutting down, some animals is getting le and le.Somefactories is poring dirtyair in the sky , the populationis increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting le and le…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a greataffectionin thefuture.people\'s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect ourworld.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle ,reduce ,reusethings .Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as poible.We don’t useplastic bags .We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hopeour world is more andmore beautiful .

6.为了保护地球有限的资源,我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文,短文开头已经给出。提示词;1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources 参考作文:

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer .In order to protect them, something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.

Save electricity.It is crucial.We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.

Save forests.They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.

Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.

三、语言学习,这是中考中的老话题,形式多样。 典型例句 1.My favorite subject is English。 2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and busine people all over the world。

4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful。

5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in the English cla。

7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English cla。

8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it。

例文Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示: When did you start learning English? (in „ /„years ago) How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…) What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…) 参考作文: English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impoible if you put your heart into it.

2、假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。注意:1.回信要包括全部要点;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 3.字数60左右。 参考作文: Dear Linda,

I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn’t

easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.Firstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in cla and make some notes so that you can go over your leons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of cla.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.

Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I’m sure you will succeed through your hard work.

Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.Yours,Li Hua

四、兴趣与爱好(热点) 兴趣爱好是中考常考话题,

1、介绍你的兴趣爱好My HobbyI am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.One of my favourite hobby is reading.Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters.It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability.When reading, I can learn a lot.Reading Shakespear\'s works, I know how Hamlet looks like.Reading Scorates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are.Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.Reading really affect my life.2、我的爱好(My hobby) Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.•What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求: 1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.My hobby is reading books When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Bookscan also teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

五、写人记事篇 ,这是中考出项频率最高的话题,其特点是难度相对较小,学生都有话可写,但掌握一些基本句子和模仿范文对夺取高分非常必要。 典型例句

1.His name is Jack。2.He was born in London in 1982。

3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。 4.He is 20 years old。5.He comes from England。6.He is a good ping-pong player。7.He is medium build。8.He has short hair。

9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us。

10.He teaches English very well.11.He works hard.He works in No.5 Middle School。12.He loves watching football games after work。13.He often helps me with my English。14.At the age of six, he began to play football

例文

1、假如你是李华,你从报纸上看到2008北京奥运会志愿者的招聘广告。请你用英文写封

简短的应聘信,介绍自己的情况(见下表)表示愿意为奥运会做一些工作,请组委会给予考虑,并能尽早予以答复,词数:80左右。 姓名:李华 ,年龄: 16。 简历 : 我市某中学学生 。爱好 :绘画、体育、唱歌、演讲、英语口语 。获奖情况 :2007年12月获我市中学生英语演讲比赛一等奖 身体状况:健康。联系电话: 0594--1356666 。提示词汇:1.志愿者voluteer2.作为work as3.答复reply to4.比赛contest

Sir/Madam,

I read your ad.in the newspaper yesterday.I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics.

My name is Li Hua.I’m sixteen.I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English.I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I’m healthy and strong.

If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well.Please reply to me soon.My telephone number is 0594—1356666.Yours sincerely

Li Hua3.、回顾初中三年成长过程,你一定有很多感受,从学习, 生活,爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价) I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.

旅游和介绍地方篇(热点) 中考高频率话题,出题形式灵活。 典型例句

1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…) ,it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)

2.I got up very early (late).After breakfast I went to „with my friends by bike 3.We enjoyed ourselves。 4.We forgot the time.We didn\'t come back until 5 o\'clock。5.Wefelt very tired, but we were happy6.I thought I would never forget this trip。7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。8.We visited a lot of places of interest。 9.We had a good time there。10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap。

4、请你用英语为刘公岛写一篇题为Welcome to Liu Gong Island 的旅游宣传材料。要点: 刘公岛概况威海东部,岛长4.08km,宽1.5km, 面积:3.15km2, 距陆地船程20 分钟, 花草树木覆盖,历史博物馆、动物园等景点,水、陆环岛游等活动 交通方式 :(来威海)汽车、火车、飞机等,交通便利 。浏览时间: 一天 ,要求:1.包括以上要点,但不拘泥于其顺序,适当使用描绘性语言,展示刘公岛魅力。 2.词数100 词左右(已给出的开头、结尾不计入词数)。Welcome to Liu Gong Island

The summer vacation is coming.Where would you like to visit? Haven’t you decided?

Come to Liu Gong Island! Liu Gong Island is in the east of Weihai, which has an area of 3.15km2.It is 4.08 km long, 1.5km wide.It will take you 20 minutes to get the island from the travel port by ship.The history museum on the island is educational.The zoo is interesting to visit.And it is more interesting to travel around the island either on land or by boat.There are all kinds of trees and gra everywhere.It’s very easy to travel to Weihai.You can come by bus, by train, or by plane.You can spend a day happily on the island.It is a good place to visit.Visitors from all over the world come to visit it every year.Wish you a good trip.

六、新生事物评价(热点),需要学生掌握方法,和基本句式,以做到考试时心中不乱。典型例句 1.Computer is becoming more and more important

2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of our study.4.We can do lots of things with it。5.It makes our life more easy

6.Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.

例文

1、网上购物Doing Shopping Online

With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn\'t step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.But there\'s always a trap online.If you are carele, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you\'d better not buy clothes online.

Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.

2、关于中学生使用手机 赞成意见:1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,紧跟时间并无过错,追求时尚可以理解,但学习是首要任务。反对意见:1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信,将无法集中精力学习。 注意:1.可适当增加细节和连接词,使文章通顺连贯;开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;2.词数:80左右;参考作文:

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There’re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.1.我的梦想是当一名医生(my dream is doctor): I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.May let the human change the health.At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully.Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.

2.以后十年内我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS)In ten years,I think I \'ll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don\'t like living alone.And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on busine.In ten years,i will have many different pets.Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to london on my vacation.So,my life in ten years will be better and better!

七、烦恼篇 这类作文难度较大,掌握基本句式,背诵范文非常必要。 典型例句

1.I am sorry to hear that……2.you shoud learn to forget…… 3.you had better……4 you shoud learn to relax5.you can ask your teacher for help例文 ,假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。 提示词语:listen to, mother\'s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smileDear Han Mei,

I\'m afraid I\'ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, \"Be careful while croing the street.\" \"Put on more clothes.\" \"Did you do a good job at school?\" and so on.I\'m annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?AliceDear Alice,

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.

Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it\'s not a good way, but it shows your mother\'s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother\'s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.

If your mother doesn\'t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

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