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（一）♪♫ 读写任务(一封对父亲感恩的信)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I\'m amazed at how light you feel.I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air.I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and succeful in an often difficult society.That\'s why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means \"lion\".It\'s our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you\'d be like.Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother\'s labor came.And several hours later, we met the first time.I held you high up in the air.I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother\'s arms.She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she preed you to her face.
And here we are tonight.As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully.I pre my ear to your chest and hear your strength.I am listening to the first beats of a lion\'s heart.Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari， 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。 今天是父亲50岁生日， 你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：
1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；
2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：
(1)、读信后的感受;
(2)、以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；
(3)、表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
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Happy birthday to you!
I’ve just read the letter you wrote to me when I was born.In your letter, you described your eagerne to see my coming to the world and expreed your hope about my growing up.You earnestly hope that I can grow strong and brave and can seize every chance to succeed.
I was deeply touched / moved when I read your letter.It’s the first time that I’ve realized your deepest love for me.Reading the letter, I suddenly remember all the things that you’ve done for me.Once when I was ill, you rushed me to the hospital and stayed with me the whole night.Each time I felt depreed, you would encourage me with a smile.But when our teacher advised us to help parents (to) wash feet, I thought nothing of it.How silly I was to take it for granted that you make every effort to bring me up and give me everything!I feel ashamed that I failed to notice your tiredne, unhappine or even illne.
Today is your 50th birthday, on which I thank you again from the bottom of my heart and wish you could enjoy a long and happy life.
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Tonight is your 50 birthday.I haven’t really got the chance to say all of my thanks I want to tell you.I read your / the letter you wrote to me when I was born 18 years ago.In this letter, you gave me the name “Ari”, and hoped that I would be brave and responsible to the sociality.I was so moved by your deepest love to me.And I love you too, Daddy.
When I was a primary school student, you always encouraged me to do well at school and each evening I was asked to present at least one new thing I had learned that day.You told me that I could be whatever I wanted to me, as long as I got good grades and continued my education.When I met some difficulties, you inspired me to face it bravely and solve it by my own brightne and effort.
At this time, I want so badly to say to you: Happy birthday, Daddy! Thank you, Daddy.Thanks for supporting me over the last 18 years of my life.Thanks for all the advice knowledge over these years.Thanks for showing me, that even you, are not perfect.Thank you, Daddy and I wish you a healthy body and a happy life.
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Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50 birthday, Mom me gave the letter you wrote me when I was born 18 years ago.In your letter, Father expreed his love and expectation of me before and after my birth in this letter.He wanted me to be courageous, strong and confident to achieve succe and be a contributing member.
After I read this letter, my eyes were brimming with moving tears.I never expected Father would be so gentle and sentimental to expre his love towards me.But I used to misunderstand him so deeply.
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Since I was four years, father has taught me playing martial arts as a family tradition.I had to get up at 6pm every morning when other kids were sound asleep and practiced very hard basic skills like licking, striking, rolling, and running or even simply stand still no matter what the weather was like.He even tied sandbags weighing 3 kilograms on my legs and commanded me to run.My screaming and crying did not help at all.After practicing Kong Fu, I had to devote fully to my academic study with little playing time.I thought he was so brutal and I dreaded him-I refused to talk with him for a long period until my mother showed me this letter upon father’s birth-day, telling me what father had done was to make me strong-willed and physically fit
And I suddenly realized without father’s “brute”, I could not be confident and independent enough to overcome hardships in both study and life and other activities.I am so proud that I have such a “strict” father and I know he is not that strict after reading this letter.I hope God ble my deal father and I will always be his “lion”!
Love,Son
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I’m glad I have a chance to read the letter written by you when I was born.In this letter, you concretely describe your expectation to me, that is, you hope that I will grow strong enough and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for myself and others.
After I read the letter, I was lost in deep thought.It is not until today that I understand the love you give me.Daddy, the love you give me increases my self-accusation.The more you love me, the more ashamed I feel.I regret what I did before in particular.Sometimes, I turn a deaf ear to you when you had your heart in the right place to give me some advice which was good for me.Instead, at that time I thought you were so troublesome that I couldn’t bear at all.However, you didn’t mind my complaining and still cared me and protected me from harm.All the time, you have been trying your best to foster me to be a healthy and useful person.Let me say to you, Thank you, Daddy.
Today is your 50th birthday.At this time, I am eager to say to you: Happy birthday, Daddy! Thank you, my dear daddy! Thank you for giving me life; thank you for giving me protection; thank you for bringing me up.In a word, I’ll thank you and ble you from the bottom of my heart and I wish you could enjoy a long and happy life.
Love,◄◄2007年广东高考英语读写任务作文亮点回放►►
1、概括简洁，准确。首段以短短三十几个词概括了父亲所写的整封信的中心。感情真实，细腻。
2、在写自己的感受时，完全把自己融入到了情景之中，写出了真实实感，耐人寻味。
3、语言规范，内容连贯。单词与短语使用得当，衔接语运用自如。文章中出现了一些较高级的短语， 如turn a deaf ear to…（对、、、充耳不闻），have one’s heart in the right place（好心好意）等。而且， 句子结构灵活多变， 不仅用了强调句型、“the＋比较级，the＋比较级”结构，还用了定语从句、状语从句等。尤其是在结尾处，用了几个排比句，更增添了文章的气势，这样表达了作者对父亲深深的感激之情。
**********************************************************************All, for everybody; everybody, for a person.(一切为大家，大家为个人。)
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