2018年英语竞赛知识点整理之作文篇
范文
The Primary Energy Consumption in the United States and in China in 2011 ①The two pie charts above show the primary energy consumption in the United States and in China in 2011 respectively.（作文开篇直接点出话题，给出了信息，完成了说明文开头的主要任务。） ②The first chart describes the situation of energy consumption in China.It indicates that coal is the dominant energy consumption, accounting for 70 percent of the total energy consumption.The other two major foil fuels, oil and natural gas, take up 18 percent and 4 percent respectively.These three kinds of foil fuels, in aggregate, already account for over 90percent of all the consuming energies, indicating that foil fuels play a vital role in China’s energy consumption in the recent years.The remaining 8percent of energy consumption includes nuclear power and some kinds of renewable sources like hydroelectric and so on.Among them, nuclear power accounts for 1 percent.As for the renewable sources, hydroelectric takes up 5percent and another 1 percent taken up by other renewable sources.（这一段按照题目要求，描述了图1的主要特点。而作者突出表现为：能够基于图表内容进一步分析，实属难得，例如文中的画线部分，把煤、石油、天然气这三大化石燃料归纳在一起进行总结；分析的层次清晰，词汇选择上能注意多样性，如account for和take up的交替使用。） ③The second pie chart exhibits the percentage of energy consumption in the United States.Similarly, the major three kinds of foil fuels are still the dominant part in energy consumption, with coal, oil, and natural gas accounting for 22 percent, 37 percent and 28 percent respectively.The nuclear power takes up 8 percent and the 5 percent left is occupied by renewable sources--3 percent for hydroelectric and 2 percent for other renewable sources.（这一段介绍了图2的基本信息。同样，作者能够在描述信息的基础上进行分析和总结，层次清晰，并借助图1三大化石燃料比例大的特点用连接词similarly巧妙处理。）
④The analysis of the features of the two charts makes people perceive certain connections and comparisons between them.As for the connections, Justas mentioned earlier, consumption of the foil fuels accounts for a great deal in both China and the United States.However, the two charts, if compared carefully, also show that the structure of primary energy consumption varies in the two countries.（这一段简要介绍了题目的第二项任务，寻求两个图表之间的对比。在下两段进行具体分析。）
⑤Firstly, among the three major foil fuels, coal is the dominant energy in China to a degree up to 70 percent, while in the United States, the number is much smaller-- only 22 percent, but oil and natural gas take up larger proportion.Why does this come about? Because China is a developing country, and due to the current limited technology, there is still a long way to go if Chinese people would like to widely popularize the exploitation of oil and natural gas and put it into their daily use.Therefore, coal is still the most consumed energy in China.As for the United States, a country with developed industrialization and advanced technological tools, people tend to exploit more oil and natural gas as they are more environment-friendly than coal.（这一段讲了第一点区别，即中国和美国对于三大化石燃料消耗的差别，在中国，煤的消耗量占绝大多数，占70%，而在美国，只有22%，而石油和天然气占较大比例，并结合两国国情差异，分析出可能的原因。分析合理，逻辑清晰。） ⑥Secondly, it is evident to see that the nuclear power consumption of the United States occupies much a larger percentage than that of China.The reasons are as follows: for one thing, the development of nuclear energy in the United States is accelerating and takes the first position in the world; for another, it is relevant with Chinese policy.Chinese government have claimed that the only purpose for China’s developing nuclear weapons is to defend and break the nuclear blackmail; under no circumstances would Chinese people use nuclear weapons first.（这一段讲了第二点区别，就是中美两国对核能消耗情况的对比，结合美国发达的开发核能源技术和中国对待核武器的态度进行分析产生这种情况的原因。） ⑦In a word, the charts indicate the distribution of primary energy consumption in the United States and in China in 2011 is different, and different developing situations in the two countries make the difference.（结尾总结了全文的关键信息，完成了最后的主要任务。）
短语积累
1.接触各种思想/经历：
be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems 2.人们认为：
it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that 3.许多问题：
a host/number of problem 4.引起人们注意：
claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.5.意识到：
there is a growing awarene(知道)/realization of/that awaken sb.to the fact/danger 6.适应新的形势/变化：
adapt/adjust/accommodate(使适应) oneself to new environment/ change 7.越来越：
be increasingly +adj.be on the rise a growing number of 8.接触社会：
come into frequent/close contact with the world/society 9.获得成功：
achieve/accomplish succe 10.提出观点/建议：
advance/put forward/come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions 11.作出努力：
make tremendous(极大的)/persistent(持久稳固的)/sustained(持续不变的) effort to do sth.take great pains to do(with work/study) 12.影响学习：
interfere with studies/work 13.产生影响：
have/exert a profound(深刻的)influence on life/personality have a dramatic/ undesirable(令人不快的) effect on 14.较好地驾驭生活：
be a better pilot of one’s life 15.剥夺机会/权力：
deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity 16.取代：
substitute(替代) for/take the place of the old way 17.采取措施：
take effective steps/measures to 18.控制我们的环境：
take/gain increasing control over our ownenvironment 19.躲避危险/挑战：
shy(躲避)/run away from thedangers/challenge 20.满足要求： meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of 21.补偿损失：
compensate for / make up for the lo/damage 22.解释某现象：
account for / explain the phenomenon 23.对……很好的了解：
have a better understanding/appreciation of have a new perspective(观点) on provide/gain an insight into 24.把某因素考虑进去：
takesth.into account(consideration) give much thought to 25.品位人生/自由青春： savor the life/freedom/youth 26.培养对……的信心：
develop/foster one’s interest/confidence in 27.经历变化/困难/艰险：
undergo/experiencegreat changes/hardships/experience 28.表现出自信心等：
project one’s confidence/feeling/image 29.生活充满不公正的地方：
life is full of minor irritation/injustice 30.追求学习/职业：
pursue one’s academic(理论的)interest/profeional career 31.学习知识/技术：
pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill 32.被看作学习的……榜样： be held up as a good example 33.交流经验/知识：
share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 34.发挥/起到重要作用：
play an (important/active/great)role/part 35.逃学/缺课：
skip school/a cla/a meeting/a lecture 36.知识/经验丰富：
rich in knowledge/experience 37.确立/追求目标：
set/pursue a goal/higher standard 38.到达目标：
achieve/accomplish/stainthe goal/aim/object 39.克服困难：
overcome obstacles/difficulty 40.面临危险/困难：
be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty 41.阻碍了成功：
stand in the way of succe be an obstacle(障碍)/barrier to succe/ growth 42.阻碍了发展：
hamper/impede/stunt the development of 43.持传统的看法： hold conventional wisdom 44.发表看法：
voice/expre one’s opinion 45.持相反/合理的观点： take the opposite/fresh view 46.揭穿某种一贯的说法： shatter the myth of 47.求得帮助：
enlist one’s support/help 48.建立在大量的学习/实践上：
build on tremendous amount of study/practice 49.把成功/错误归咎于：
attribute/own the succe/failure to 50.对……重要：
be indispensable/important/vital to 51.施加压力： put/exert a academic preure on 52.重视：
aign/attach much importance/significance to 53.强调：
place/put much emphasis/stre/value on 54.把注意力集中在：
focus/concentrate one’s attention/efforts/thoughts upon 55.提供机会/信息：
Provide/offer/furnishan opportunity/information for sb.56.抓住机会：
Grab/seize/take the opportunity 57.得到机会：
enjoy/gain acce to a opportunity/likelihood that 58.有可能：
there is(little/much)poibility/likelihood that chances/the odds(可能的机会) are that 59.展开竞争：
compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of 60.开展运动：
conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a vigorous/nation-wide/ publicity/advertising) 61.对我很有/没有什么意义： make much/little sense to me 62.带来无穷的幸福/满足：
be a source of happine satisfaction/contentment(满意)/pride/ complaint 63.献身于：
devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career 64.大不(没什么)两样：
make much(little/no)difference 65.真正重要的是：
what really matters/accounts is…… 66.改变生活旅程：
change/alter the course of life 67.缩小差别：
bridge/narrow/fell the gap/gulf(between city and country) 68.进行调查/执行任务：
conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment 69.辞去工作/学习：
leave/quit one’s job/work/school 70.参加考试/竞赛等：
enter (for)the examination/contest race
句子积累
1） From what has been discued above， we may safely draw the conclusion that ...从以上的讨论我们可以肯定地得出结论，即……
2） Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that...把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…… 3） Overall， there is compelling evidence that ...， and it follows that in this respect ...总的说来，令人信服的证据是……，而且在这方面随之而来的是……
4） The analysis we have made leads to a sound idea that ...由我们的分析得出一个正确的见解，即……
5） Taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that ...考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…… 6） Therefore， we can reach the following conclusion ...因此，我们可以得出这样的结论……
7） The evidence upon all sides leads to a just conclusion that ...基于各方面证据，就产生这样一个公正的结论。
8） All the analysis justifies an unshakable view that ...所有分析证实了一个不可动摇的观点，即……
9） All reliable evidence points to the fact that ...所有可靠的证据都表明这一事实……
10） All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that ...所有的证据都支持一个毫无疑问的结论……
