我的暑假计划
My Plan for Summer Vacation
The longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me.I cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglely, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest.The events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.
The following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation.In the first few days I want to climb Mount Hua Shan with several friends to refresh ourselves.Then I tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former clamates(老同学).Besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, I will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.
In short, I want to do interesting things in the summer vacation.Whatever I do, the goal is the same: to get neceary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons.Though the six week vacation will pa away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.
核心剖析
本文作者长句、短句交替使用。文中长句显得容量大，表达了较为复杂完整、严密充实的思想内容。句子开头方式有：“In the first few days”等介词短语作状语开句、“Whatever l do\"等让步状语从句等句型开句。此外，句子主语除了代词I和it，还使用了多个名词，从而避免了从头到尾一“I”到底。在篇章中通过变化句子长度、句子开头，伞文表达错落有致，语言形式丰富多彩。
高校贫困学生
Poverty Stricken Students in Colleges
If you study in collegesmhave you ever noticed some students live under financial hardships Ⅱ They encounter many difficulties in finishing higher education because they are poverty stricken.Their life is hardly known by outsiders——some starve, some seldom buy clothes and still some cannot afford train tickets to return home during vacations.
Those impoverished students suffer not only physically but also mentally from their predicament (困境).They worry about tuition (学费) and living expenditure(生活费).Some even suffer mental imbalance.After school, many must work part time, which takes away from studies and may make them do poorly or drop out.In spite of this many are very diligent and are prepared to endure all kinds of hardships.We cannot only sympathize for them.Banks should provide them with interest Wree loans and all the other social sections man give neceary financial aids.Helping these students will enable them to develop abilities and find a suitable career.In the future, well-educated
young people will not only improve their own life but will also make our country richer.范文分析
本文作者用提问开头，醒目抢眼、令人感受心灵震撼。寥寥数语概括出高校贫困生现状，使读者自始至终地随着作者思路，关注其境况
TV Receivers in Students＇ Flats
Nowadays an increasing number of students＇ flats have TV receivers installed in them.TV presents a vivid world in front of tudents.Boys could enjoy sports games at will.Some programs help students recharge (再充电) their knowledge and keep them abreast of(跟上) modern developments.TV receivers enrich their learning life.Obviously, students are not free from any troubles.Some students are addicted to(沉溺于) TV.TV receivers in some flats are still on late at night or never turned off on weekends.Some students spend much spare time watching TV programs, which is seriously interfering with their responsibilities at school.Still some students＇ eyes are getting worse.
In my opinion, moderation (适度，适可而止) is the key to everything including watching TV programs.I would not recommend that students try to eliminate TV receivers totally from their flats.However, we need to strike some kind of a balance between the TV programs and school studies.Learning to succefully manage time at a young age will definitely pay off in later life.
范文分析
作者在本文结尾采用了作出总结的方法阐述个人看法，以规劝的口吻对学生提出忠告。在第二段引述个人看法时，常用 in my opinion, I think, I believe, according to my understanding, in my personal judgment, I definitely hold the idea thatm I maintain thatmin my viewmin my eyes 等短语。
学位与人才 Academic Degrees and Human Skills
Academic Degrees and Human Skills
Students compete to get into the best universities in the belief that the degrees will give them a slight advantage in the job market when they graduate.A degree is regarded as proof that someone has a good education.Therefore, some people regard diploma(毕业证)as a paport to an ideal job.But a degree cannot be regarded as the only proof that someone has all the neceary skills.People with good human skills can manage relationships and are prepared to take responsibility.When students start university, academic degrees look certain to succe.By contrast, degrees can appear much le useful, if graduates lack in human skills.
Clearly, people with high academic degrees and good human skills will have a paport to an ideal job.People＇s performance shapes their benefits.Remember, it takes students years to pursue academic degrees, while it takes graduates lifetime to acquire human skills.
范文分析
本文题型是给出关键词，要求写成短文。结尾方法是首尾遥相呼应。其效果是通篇1气贯穿、内容前后一致，表现出十分明朗的态度。作者不是简单地重复开始段内容，而是更高层次的全貌概括，进一步肯定了文章的中心思想，使读者加深印象。最后意味深长的对比给读者留下回味和思考的余地。
全球变暖-The Global Warming
The Global Warming
People around the world may feel that the climate has been getting steadily warmer and warmer in recent years.Places which used to be abundant in snowfall have frequently experienced snowfree(无雪的) winters.Drought lasts longer in some dry areas.People find that without air conditioners they could hardly work or fall asleep on hotter summer daysg.The side effects of global warming are alarminS.A warmer global climate melts the ice caps, raising sea levels.What is more, it disturbs weather patterns, causing droughts, severe storms, hurricanes (飓风).People suffer a lot from disasters relevant to global warming.
To stop global warming we should make immediate and continual efforts.We hope the situation will soon change.Global warming catches and holds our concern, for it affects us and will affect our later generations.We cannot wait any longer.Do it.Do it right.Do it right now.
范文分析
作者在结尾发出号召、提出期望，最后引用格言“Do it.Do it right．Do it right now．”作结尾。
