成都市2014高考英语写作与完形填空训练（1）及答案
如何展开你的文章是英文写作必不可少的一步。如果不了解展开文章的技巧和方法，你的写作可能会是一篇糟糕透顶的、令读者大跌胃口的、不能称之为文章的文章。读完下面的tips，也许你会有所感悟。
I.Writing down ideas As you begin to plan your writing, you may already have some ideas concerned with points you wish to write.Write them down on a sheet of paper or card as they come to you.As you continue to study your subject, be sure to add further ideas and information.Your finished list might look something like this: Topic: The School Library Ideas: 1.a very well designed modern building 2.a large number of useful books 3.bright and quiet reading rooms 4.patient and helpful librarians...II.Building a thesis sentence Having completed your list of ideas, your next step is to build a thesis sentence by organizing those ideas in relation to each other, because while planning writing, you must make certain that you have a central idea in your mind.Such a central idea is called a thesis sentence.
As a thesis sentence indicates the central idea that you will develop in your paper, you should use only one in the writing.You need not always expre a thesis sentence in the paper itself, although you should clearly control the development of any writing that requires one.If you do use such a statement, it had better appear in the very first paragraph.Why? Because it works for the entire writing in the way a topic sentence does in a paragraph.It tells the readers of your paper what the \"big idea\" is-and also helps you keep on track in developing that idea.Take your writing with the topic \"The School Library\" for example.From our study of the school library we have got two poible thesis sentences: 1.The library is a nice place to study in.2.The library plays an important part in both teaching and students\' study and life.III.Making an outline One useful way of planning a piece of writing is a formal outline.An outline is an organized list of related items of ideas.Some people object to outlining.They believe that preparing a formal outline steals valuable time from actual writing and that an outline acts as a brake on the free flow of their ideas.Both objections make some sense.But time spent on an outline will be more than repaid when one begins to write.Also, few of us always think logically.So the final step in organizing your ideas is to make an outline.Take your writing with the topic \"The School Library\" for example.Topic: The School Library
Thesis: The school library plays an important part in both teaching and students\' study and life.Outline: 1.There are bright and quiet reading rooms in the library, so students can study and read in them.2.Students borrow books from the library when they need reference books for their studies.3.The library provides students with a large number of useful books
叙事类记叙文
记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体，是写作训练中最普遍、最基本的一种文体。记叙文要求学生根据所给情景，组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作时要表达清楚。记人时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等；叙事时要描写事情发生和发展的过程及前因后果等。 【写作点拨】
叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，突出事件发生、发展和解决的过程。在写这类记叙文时要做到：
1.重组材料，确定要点。叙事类记叙文写作前要进行立意、构思和选材等一系列过程，高考中的书面表达一般为控制性写作,通常会提供短文的主题和写作内容,考生要对提供的材料进行再加工,确定写作的顺序、要点和重点,拟定使用的句型和词组。
2.结构完整、前后呼应。写记叙文必须有头有尾，一般来说，记叙时要把与一件事有关的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主题和内容要一致，文章的结尾与开头要呼应。
3.人称统
一、线索明确。记叙文可用“你、我、他”三种人称，但如果题目要求你使用某种人称，则必须遵循要求；叙事类记叙文一般按照事件发展的前后顺序进行叙述。 【常见问题】
1.要点不全。要点是否齐全通常决定文章的档次。书面表达要上档次，要点齐全是关键。要点提示类书面表达一般不会出现这样的问题，看图作文则常会由于学生观察不细心等原因遗漏要点。
2.线索不清。有些短文条理混乱，主要原因是没有确定好写作线索。叙事类文章一般按时间顺序来写。
3.时态不明。叙事时时态混乱是学生常犯的错误之一。叙事类记叙文所记的一般是过去发生的事，原则上用过去时，有时也用现在时。
4.主次不分。有些同学写作时平均用力，面面俱到，写出来的东西主题不突出，显得呆
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晕倒了。
4.军训既增强了我们的体质，也磨练了我们克服困难的意志。 注意: 1.词数: 100-150左右
2.参考词汇: 军训 military training 教官 drillmaster （参考答案） Key1: The first day of the military training Yesterday was the first day of the military training.I was dreaming when the bell for getting up rang.The moment I heard the bell, I rose immediately, dreed quickly and then rushed to the playground.The drillmaster asked us to finish preparations within only five minutes. The drillmaster was very strict with us.We had to drill an action again and again until he was satisfied.At break time, he joined us in singing, dancing and telling stories.We were getting along very well.The sun was so strong that my clothes were all wet.But we still went on drilling.One of my clamates fell to the ground in a faint. The life of the military training is very hard, but I think it is meaningful.Not only does it build up our bodies, it also strengthens our determination to overcome difficulties.
第二节：完形填空(共20小题：每小题1.5分，满分30分) 阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
(2012·江苏百校大联考一模) How often do you let other people\'s nonsense change your mood? Do you let a bad driver, impolite waiter，rude bo，or an insensitive employee__36__your day? One day I was in a taxi and we headed__37__the airport.We were driving in the__38__lane when suddenly a black car drove out of a parking space right in front of us.My taxi driver slammed on his__39__，slide sideways，and at the very last moment our car stopped and__40__the other car by just inches！The driver of the other car looked around and started__41__at us. My taxi driver just__42__and waved at the guy.And I mean he was really__43__So I asked，“Why did you just do that? This guy almost ruined your car and sent us to the hospital！”This is when my taxi driver taught me what I now call “The Law of the Garbage Truck”．
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41．A.laughing C.glancing
B.throwing D.yelling 答案：D yell at sb.“对某人大喊大叫”。 42．A.wondered C.ignored
B.smiled D.gueed 答案：B smile表示“我”的司机始终微笑着。 43．A.friendly C.tired 答案：A friendly“态度友好的”。 44．A.expectation C.garbage
B.paengers D.goods B.angry D.disappointed 答案：C 句意为：他们像一辆垃圾车，身上装满了心灵垃圾，沮丧、愤怒和失望。 45．A.turns B.pushes C.holds
D.piles 答案：D 句意为：随着垃圾堆积得越来越多，他们急需找个地方倾倒。有时，他们会倒在你身上。
46．A.roads C.you 答案：C 见上题解析。
47．A.upset B.happier C.pitiful
D.frightened B.children D.dustbin 答案：B You\'ll be happier.表示“不要让心灵垃圾给掩埋，要开心些”。 48．A.spread B.share C.explain
D.contribute 答案：A 句意为：千万别将他们的垃圾扩散给同事、家人或其他路人。 49．A.surprise C.doubt
B.pleasure D.regrets 答案：D 句意为：人生苦短，早上醒来绝对不要带着遗憾。 50．A.funny C.strange
B.important D.embarraing 答案：B refocus on what\'s important in life“重视生活中更重要的事情”。 51．A.remember C.value
B.forget D.appreciate 答案：A 人们倾向于记住“remember”不好的事情。
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