南开区八年级英语期中考试9分作文（2010-11-13）
Yesterday our teacher told us something about Project Hope.In that cla, I knew many children in the countryside have to drop out of school because of the poor family.So I decided to help them.When I got home, I found out the box with my pocket money.Then I wrote a letter to them.Finally I went to the post office and sent my pocket money with the letter to them.I hope I can help someone return the school.I am a student in Tianjin.Yesterday our teacher told us a lot about the Project Hope.I know thousands of poor students can return to school with the help of the Project Hope.I also want to help them.So I took my pocket money and wrote a letter to poor children yesterday.Then I went to the post office to send them.One day, I went to school and had leons.The teacher told us something about the Project Hope.I though I should give pocket money for the Project Hope.So I took the pocket money in my pocket and wrote a letter to the poor children.Then I went to post office and sent the letter.I was very happy.Because of the Project Hope, children have better life.One day, our teacher told us some stories about Project Hope.Soon I decided to do something for it, so I saved my pocket money to help the poor children.Then I wrote a letter to them.At last, I went to the post office and send the letter and money to Project Hope.I’m very happy to help the poor children and I think they will have bettter lives with the help of Project Hope.Yesterday my teacher told us something about the Project Hope.It’s an organisation that to help poor chidlren to finish their schools.After heard about that I still want to give money to the Project Hope.Today I took out my pocket money and wrote a letter to the Project Hope.I thought poor children need helps quickly.Then I went to the post office and sent the letter and money to the project Hope.I was very happy.Last month our teacher told us about the Project Hope.There’re many children in the countryside can’t get an education because their families are poor.I decided to raise money and help them.And I wrote a letter to them.Yesterday I went to the post office and sent them some money.I hope they can have better lives.Yesterday our teacher told us something about the Project Hope and she wanted us to help them.I found all my pocket money when I got home because I decided to help a student who couldn’t get an education.I wrote a letter to the student before I
went to the post office to send them.I was very happy because I could help others.In the morning, my teacher told us about the Project Hope.I thought I should help the poor children.So when I went home after school, I took out my pocket money and wrote a letter to the poor children.Then I brought the money and letter to the post office and sent them to the poor children.I’m very happy to do that.Yesterday our teacher told us a lot of things about the Project Hope.I felt sorry for the children.Compare with us, they have no colorful clothes to wear, no nutritious food to eat and no enough money to go to school for an education.That’s terrible.So I decided to help them.I gave my money and wrote a letter to them to encourage them.I hope they won’t loose their heart for their future!
Note: 1.The words in boldface show the four key points besides subject I(we) and
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2.The words in red are the vocabulary or grammar mistakes our students
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