Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one the students in （XXXXX） School.I have been studying under a XXXX(China\'s or other\'s) school program for （XXX） years.After graduate from this school, I will receive a （XXXX） high school diploma.During my school time, I sew lots of developed ideas and advanced technology from America.For this reason, I have a strong wish to continue my future study in US.
It is a great opportunity to be a student under the American educational system.I hope to study abroad in a American university in order to benefit my future career as （an engineeror 随便你学的什么职业）.I feel a great honor to have been conditionally accepted into the Bachelor of Science in （Engineering at the University of XXXXX）.I was so fascinated by the （Mechanical engineering program） when I first saw it on the booklet of （University of XXXXX）.Due to my father is running a Machine Tool company which is called （XXXXXXXXX）, and he used to be （a mechanical engineer）.Therefore, it is so determined for me to be （a mechanical engineer）.Also, I am so pleased to find that the University of （XXXXX） has a very high academic reputation and lots of advanced laboratory .I believe that those profeors will offer me a great help in my further study.In a result, America and University of （XXXXX） is absolutely my best choice.
If I can become a student of the University of （XXXXX）, I will work hard and finish my （mechanical engineering program） in the next four years.It is a wonderful way to achieve my dream and reflect my value to the society.
After I finish my studies, I am going to return to China.Also this is my original purpose to go abroad and study （science） because China’s （science and technology） is still like a baby in the cradle; we still get chances to contribute in this land.Also my father’s machine company is developing rapidly; he needs amount of people with skills and knowledge.After I graduate from the University of （XXXXX）, I am sure that I will be the person he wants.It will be a perfect life while I help my father and also contribute to my country at the same time.And with my bilingual skills and academic achievements in America, I believe that I will bring my father’s company to the world some day in the future.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours truly,
