书面表达专题练习——祝贺信
袁道铁
一.文体概述: 祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括以下内容：祝贺事由→所取得的成绩→被祝贺人过去的努力→被祝贺人的优点→表达自己的愿望。 二.具体写作步骤：
1. Use the word \"congratulations\" early in your letter.2.Mention the reason why you congratulate someone, such as graduation, promotion, honor, baby.3.Tell how happy, pleased, proud or impreed you are and why.4.If neceary, tell how you learned about the good news.If you read it the newspaper, enclose the clipping or photocopy of it.5.Close your letter with wishes for the person or expreions of your confidence: wish the person continued succe and happine; expre your confidence in a bright future; aure the person of your love, affection, admiration, warmth, interest, delight, pleasure or continued busine support.6.Contents: cause；what and when；best wishes.
三、常用语块
1.接受我最诚的挚恭喜/祝贺„„
2.很高兴听到„„ 3.很高兴得知你„„ 4.我想表达我对„„的祝贺 5.我为你„„感到非常高兴 6.„„是相当令人振奋的消息！ 7.我知道这肯定是因为„„ 8.是你非常值得的奖赏
9. 祝你一切顺利!
10.祝你心想事成! 四.套用句式
1.我很高兴你梦想成真。
2.我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺 3.祝贺你高考成功。
4.请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和对未来最良好的祝愿。 5.我希望你的未来是灿烂的。
6.我们都为你所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。 五.模版Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）.I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ②③
⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further succe.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 六.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Henry,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations your admiion into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation.As your close friend, I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and howpleased I was at your admiion.In my views, you work hard and besides that, youare a very intelligence person.This admiion is areward where you richly deserve.I am sure youwill make a greater progre in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life. I wish you greater succe in your school career and I am look forward to good news from you soon.
Best wishes. Li Hua
Yours, 七．范文展示:假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1. 表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验；
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of MiddleSchool Students, so I’mwriting to givemy sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impreion.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning. I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
八.练习假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1.天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 2.继续努力，有机会来中国留学3.希望见面和交流。
注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
教师点评：
我的收获：1.常用词汇
2.常用句型
答案三 1.Accept my sincerest congratulations 2.How happy I am to hear...3.I have learned with delight that you„
I have learned with delight that you„4.I would like to expre my congratulations on„ 5.I feel very happy for you (r)„6.„is quite exciting news 7.I know this is surely owing to„ 8.It is a reward that you richly deserve for your„9.Wish you all the best!10.May all your wishes come true! 四.1.I feel very happy for your dream has come true.2.I am writing to expre my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.3.Congratulations on your succe in the National College Entrance Examination.4.Please accept my warmest regards.5.I hope your future will be glorious.五1.congratulations后+on 2.graduation--graduate 3.what--- how 4.was--- am 5.Views---view 6.intelligence---intelligent7.Where--that/which或去掉 8.去掉greater前的a 9.brightly--- bright10.Look -- looking 八．Dear Peter,
I would like to expre my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.
So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
