英语人物写作教案模板英文（精选多篇）

推荐第1篇：大学英语写作描绘人物,

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推荐第2篇：人物写作

如何写人物通讯

一、什么是人物通讯？

人物通讯是以人物为报道对象，反映一个人或几个人的思想、言行、事迹，在一个主题贯穿下容纳着相当丰富的材料，着重以人物的精神面貌来感染、感谢读者的一种通讯。

要写好人物通讯，一般要注意如下两点：

（1）通过写事迹，表彰先进人物的思想。这一点就是说，我们写一个人物，重要的不是列举他取得的成绩，而是要摆事实——讲能反映他先进思想的具体故事。就好比我们向别人介绍一个人一样，我们再怎么说“这个人优秀啊”、“这个人勇敢机智啊”，别人都不一定相信也不一定能记住，但是如果我们能跟别人讲一个跟这个人有关的故事，比如这个人见到几个人正在抢劫，他赶紧先打电话报警，然后又如何跟几个坏蛋搏斗，最后在警察帮助下把坏人抓住了，你不用评价这个人如何勇敢机智，别人也会记住他是一个勇敢机智的人，而且一想到他就会想起他的这些光辉事迹。

（2）抓细节，抓特点。人们对一篇人物通讯的一些事迹、概貌、数字常常看后可能忘掉，但动人的细节、情节，却往往难以忘怀。因为细节往往是人物描写中的点睛之笔。写好细节，我们就要在采访时认真观察，观察被采访人物说话的表情、习惯的动作，在听人们介绍有关先进人物的具体故事时，要详细问一问当时先进人物的一举一动，在写的时候，我们就可以通过先进人物的表情、具体的动作，活灵活现地将先进人物再现到读者眼前。

二、从四个方面写好人物通讯

（一）、标题要有新意

介绍集中制作人物通讯标题的方法：

A、对比式：写一名医生的《治好患者的病 忘却自己的痛》 B、突出人物发展变化的：《从化铁工到发明家》 《郭华秀：从失落者到创新者》 C、比喻式：

一种是对人物事迹的比喻：《“在蛋壳上搞雕刻”》—— 比喻刘良振加工模具副唇口细槽；〈谭清斌：点子大王“点金记”〉——将改善降成本比喻成点金；《唐锡荣：像经营家一样经营班组》。

D、评价式标题：

对人物进行评价，并把这一评价作为标题如：〈西北汉子〉 还有一种情况，就是把员工对人物带有褒意的绰号或昵称用到标题中，以其特别性和亲近性增强标题意趣，如：〈车间有个“杨改善”〉

E、突出人物与有影响力的人物的关系，借助“名人效应”提升标题影响力。

如〈范书记点将的保障队长〉，看了这个标题，读者就会好奇，这人有什么样的本事竟能让范书记亲自点将，进而产生阅读兴趣。

F、排比式：

〈弄潮儿·带头人·奉献者〉把人物的几种特点用精炼的语言提炼出来，排列组合成标题。

G、直接引用人物的经典语言 写劳模孙向峰的稿子，就用他常说的一句话做标题——〈“我不去，停产了怎么办？”〉

（二）、导语要有新意

人物通讯不是先进人物的申报资料，切忌一开头就写：某某，男或女，是什么单位的什么人，获得了哪些荣誉称号。因为，看到这样的开头，读者是很难有兴趣读下去的。

A、用吸引人的对话做导语

写湖北省“五一劳动奖章”获得者熊光明的一则通讯中这样写导语：‚妻子：‘你到底是要工作，还是要我？’丈夫：‘先要事业，后要你；我的心中除了工作就是你！’‛

B、用精彩的场面描写做导语

写襄樊管理部优秀党员阮忠诚的《警徽熠熠写忠诚》的导语就是一幕吸引人的场景：‚深夜，一个鬼鬼祟祟的身影闪进一栋单元楼，四下望了望，见周围没有人，老练地撬开一辆自行车的锁具。正当他得意地想推车走时，只听一声猛呼：‘站住！’旁边跳出一个人，一个漂亮的反剪，‘咔嚓’一下，给偷车贼戴上了锃亮的手铐——这个力擒窃贼的勇士就是襄东公安分局的刑事侦察员阮忠诚。‛

写刘良振的《在蛋壳上搞雕刻》：一把菱形刀片、一把直角尺、一条油石、一块细砂纸，这就是表演‚绝活‛的全部家当。只见他拿起直角尺，校正刀杆，调整角度，对准刀尖，斜向进刀——不到２分钟，就能在模具上加工出一个宽度仅为半个毫米、底部半径为四分之一毫米的副唇口细槽。用行话比喻这种绝活，就是‚在蛋壳上搞雕刻‛。这还不算，他还能用２分钟的时间磨出一个宽１．５毫米、刀尖圆弧半径０．２５毫米、拥有５个角度的成形刀，且公差只有头发丝的四分之一！

表演绝活的是东风实业公司的东森汽车密封件公司车工班班长、高级技师、共产党员——刘良振。

C、以对比的方式突显人物特点

写劳模黄华《用知识书写新时代产业工人的“传奇”》：同样是当工人，很多人只知道机械地干，他却动脑筋搞起了技术革新；同样是搞技术革新，有的人搞一项、两项便没了后劲，他却成了一个年年有革新成就的劳模；同样是劳模，大多数人往往会提拔或脱离一线，他却始终只愿做一个知识型工人。他用学习和知识给了自己一个不一样的人生，更用自身的实践诠释了新时代产业工人的全新价值。他就是——黄华。

写销售经理匡奕新的《意志与高原的对话》：７月５日，从西藏返回，高原反应和从前一样在东风商用车四川商务代表处川藏销售经理匡奕新身上留下了痕迹——原本瘦小的他更黑更瘦了！出人意料的是，这次匡奕新的精神格外好，说起话来居然兴高采烈：‚太好了！青藏铁路开通了，西藏许多大型工程都要开工了，这对东风商用车的销售来说可是一个好消息。‛忘记了高原反应给自己带来的痛苦，却为一条有利于东风商用车销售的消息高兴不已。这就是匡奕新作为一名东风商用车销售人员的职业操守。

D、用外貌特写做导语 写技术员徐建的《凭技术为企业创造财富》：这是一个很普通的人——第一次见到徐建的人都会这么想。瘦小的身躯，白净的脸庞上架着一副深度近视眼镜，每天一身黑乎乎的工作服，奔走在车间的各个生产现场，脸上总是挂着孩子般纯真的笑容。然而，正是看似普通的徐建，先后担任‚东风汽车‛铸造分公司多项重大技术攻关和大型复杂零件开发任务，从容地解决了一个又一个技术难题，在质量攻关和技术改进方面取得多项成果，从一名普通的一线技术员，迅速成长为一名业务精湛的技术骨干，用执著书写出人生最绚丽的篇章。

（三）、巧妙地选材

A、选材要紧扣主题，保留能反映先进人物主要思想的材料，舍弃枝节性的材料。

比如：〈车间有个“杨改善”〉，应该说东风德纳车桥部件厂六车间支架班班长杨宏这个人物他有很多特点，在采访中，作者就了解到这个人在班组管理上很有一套，而且热心快肠、关心员工，善于学习、善于琢磨，在QCD改善中也做出了很多成果，但是一篇人物通讯是不可能把这些特点和事迹都写进去的，而且我们强调写人物通讯要写故事、写细节，如果把这些特点都写出来、把与这些特点有关的事迹和细节都写出来，我们把一张报纸的四个版都给他，恐怕也放不下这篇人物通讯。再换个角度来说，如果把这些特点都写出来，人们对这个人物的印象就会变得混沌，只觉得这个人很不错，似乎各方面都好，反而记不住他有什么特点了，很快也就会把这个人物忘了。可是，这篇文章单单写他善于改善这个特点，把他怎样改善的、改善的效果怎么样都写出来，让读者读完之后，不仅对他的改善才华记忆深刻，而且还能从中学到一些改善的窍门，效果就很好了。

一个人的特点非常多，我们如何选准人物的一个特点呢？这时我们要记住，新闻的价值是通过其舆论导向体现出来的，我们写一个人，就要把他最符合时代精神、最能感染或启发当下大部分人的特点拎出来。还以杨改善为例，在他的众多特点里，我们为什么要选改善这个特点呢？因为改善是当前企业正在倡导的一种行为，这时写一个改善出色的人，就贴近了企业的实际，有利于在企业里营造良好的改善氛围、带动更多人的改善热情。

B、从一个新的视角来选材

2007年我们报纸上登了一篇写劳模黄华的人物通讯〈我所认识的劳模黄华〉。黄华是2005年被评为全国劳模的，写他的人物通讯前前后后在报纸上发过的就不下5篇，但这篇文章读来仍让人觉得眼前一亮，奥秘就在于他选择了一个新的视角——不是站在赞颂劳模的宣传者视角，而是站在一个从日常工作中观察劳模是不是像别人讲的那么好的审视者的视角，通过作者和劳模在一起肩并肩工作中发现的劳模的一些工作习惯，以小见大地折射出劳模的优秀品质，贴近性、可行性都很强。

一直以来，全国劳模黄华（神龙公司高级技师）的事迹让大家耳熟能详，我也从媒体上看过不少有关他的报道。不过，心里总觉得大家都是维修工，都在做着机械修理工作，他真的有那么多真挚、感人的事迹吗？终于，在一次工作接触中，让我重新‚认识‛了黄师傅。也正是这一次邂逅，让我更好地审视了自己。黄师傅不仅在踏踏实实地做事，更是在踏踏实实地做人。

一把特制扳手 １１月初，黄师傅放弃周末休息，来到焊装Ｔ／Ｂ车身线１３１３成型机作检修技术指导。 要知道，１３１３工位一直是焊装分厂生产线的‚瓶颈‛，由于工装复杂，设备故障率较高，其稳定性直接影响着Ｔ／Ｂ车型的整车下线。

周六检修的主要内容是成型机的下部工装。当大家做好一切准备，即将开工的时候却傻了眼。原来，固定工装的一个螺母竟然是５０ｍｍ！大家看着自己手中的工具，面面相觑：最大的常用扳手也仅仅是２４ｍｍ。面对大出一倍的‚嗨家伙‛，同事们各抒己见，有的尝试着用管钳，可位置又干涉管钳咬不住螺母；有的提议去机修中心加工一把特制扳手，可是从下料到制成品，少说也需要好几个小时。一上午就得这么挨过去了。如果放弃这里的检修，先去做别的事情，可１３１３成型机的皮带轮已经严重磨损，这个当口如果不及时修复，必将带来更大的麻烦。

正当大伙一筹莫展时，黄师傅急匆匆地赶来了，他的手中正拿着一把大家急需的大号特制扳手。原来，黄师傅早在两周前就已查看了成型机的下部工装，并发现了这个隐蔽的特大螺母。他知道，维修部门还没有这种特制扳手，就量好了尺寸递交机修中心加工了一把。欢呼声代替了争论声，检修工作在黄师傅的指导下有条不紊地进行。 维修工喻盛良在拆卸螺母时不停地搓手，这一细小的动作却被黄师傅喊停。原来，扳手过大，重量也就增加。扳手手柄的棱角在用力时对手形成剪切应力，很容易扎手。黄师傅拿过手柄，仔细地用打磨机给手柄倒角，那专注的神情又让我们内心多了几许温暖。

一只强光手电筒

在１３１３成型机检修现场，磨修工在处理一组从动轮时，感到光线很暗，操作起来非常吃力。于是，他的伙伴便拿出电筒来协助照明，可是，还不到两分钟，手电筒就没电了。当我们还没有来得及抱怨‚水货‛时，正在一旁‚督阵‛的黄师傅迅速从上衣口袋里掏出一只电筒来，直接照射在磨修工的作业位置，强烈的直射光一直延续到修理作业完毕。这次真的让我们惊叹不已，问黄师傅的电筒怎么这么‚扎实‛，而他只是憨厚地笑了笑，甩了甩一直举着电筒的手臂。事后，与黄华一起共事多年的王工告诉说，黄师傅的电筒是自己花钱买的，将近２００元，已经记不清他买过几个了。直到这时，我面对媒体所作的报道再也不会心存疑虑了，眼前发生的一切不就是当年情景的重现和佐证吗？ 一些个‚唠叨‛

在整个检修过程中，平日少言寡语的黄师傅显得话有点‚多‛。他不厌其烦地给大家讲解工装的机械原理、日常维护，并反复告诫我们：‚只有做好了日常维护保养，才能更好地保证设备的正常运行。‛可别说，就是这些个‚唠叨‛，渐渐地还真的印在了我们的脑子里。

在拆卸重物时，由于部件很沉，搬动起来非常吃力，黄师傅便赶紧劝道：‚小刁，这样不行，搬运时重心一定要稳，不要弓腰，这样很容易受伤的。‛说完，亲自给我做了示范。

在调整传动工装时，作业者以为自己所站的位置已经很安全，不过离运行设备稍有些接近而已。就这样，还是被黄师傅‚唠叨‛出来……

一点点‚小算盘‛

这次１３１３下部工装的检修，若按常规完全可以更换新的从动轮和皮带链，可黄师傅仔细检查后发现构件受损的部位只有从动轮上的一个齿，如果全部更换，仅配件成本就高达五万元，而修复从动轮一样可以达到相应的工艺要求。最终，在黄师傅的指导下我们选择了修复。

原本以为，设备修复之后，这项工作就应该结束，可黄师傅却领着我们一块分析该设备的损坏原因。最终查明，原来，在更换机器人电极帽时，电极帽掉地之后又反弹进入到了皮带链，从而导致从动轮受损。那么，怎样才能避免类似问题再度出现？黄师傅最后又设计出了一套除尘设施，起到了标本兼治的作用。

这就是我仅仅接触一天的黄师傅。从一件件平常的小事中，我深深地感受到他不是在做秀，只是在默默地从事着自己的本职，这样一种良好的职业习惯与操守，给他身边的每一个同事都将带来巨大的心理震撼和影响。

类似的还有〈宋青春的“医疗手册”〉一文，则是从与人物有紧密联系、最能体现人物特点的物品——纪录巡道情况的日记本入手即宋青春口中的〈安全手册〉入手，讲述由这个物品引发的人物故事，从侧面突现凸显人物善于积累经验，善于通过历史纪录发现新问题、解决新问题的特点，有新意、可信度高，就好比案件中的物证一样。另外，这样写人物通讯还有一个好处，就是线索清楚。

我们报上还登过一篇获得全国企业报好新闻二等奖的人物通讯，标题叫做补偿，写一个为了工作常常耽误家事的公司劳模徐道宏。作者从徐道宏为补偿妻子出差时给妻子买了三件衣服这事入手，写了徐道宏却因为工作一直忙顾不上陪妻子去，妻子又心疼钱，买衣服没人参谋，拿不定主意，主要翻箱倒柜找出以前的旧衣服对付了一个夏天。两人约好妻子上下午班时由徐道宏做饭，一次周末妻子又上下午班，徐道宏主动揽了一项技术改造任务，忙得忘了回家做饭，妻子晚上一身疲惫地回家，面对的却是清锅冷灶，只好将就着炒了点剩饭吃。徐道宏的孩子小，又爱生病，一次孩子有点咳嗽，妻子又正好倒班，就让徐道宏带孩子上医院，可徐道宏忙着在车间赶生产任务，就随便给孩子吃了点感冒药，结果一直拖到双休日才带孩子上医院，孩子的扁桃体已经严重化脓。

这篇通讯从写徐道宏决定补偿妻子入手，从侧面反映了他公而忘私的高尚品质。全文没有一个字评价徐道宏如何无私奉献、如何热爱工作，却让人从心底敬服这位劳模。

（四）如何挖掘生动感人的故事

1、什么才算生动感人的故事？

一个故事是不是生动感人，可以用五个“有没有”来判断： Ａ、有没有情节：有事情的来龙去脉特别是戏剧性的冲突

《让新娘看到诚实、可靠和幸福》一文中：一次，一个订购一台装配康明斯发动机的ＥＱ６７５０型客车订单在评审时就遇到很大阻力，底盘评审人员“普通车无此发动机配置”简单的几个字就给这个订单判了死刑。“怎么会没有此配置呢？”不肯轻易放过任何一张订单的王勇开始查找配置单，十几分钟过去了，对完配置后王勇仍然不死心，“没有这种配置区域怎么会有这种定货需求呢？”王勇拨通区域销售经理的电话，销售经理肯定地告诉王勇有这种配置。放下电话，王勇就急匆匆地跑到二楼客车研究所，经过与底盘技术人员的磨合，终于弄清了问题原来出在电机上。普通客车配备的是小功率的电机，而康明斯发动机本身功率较大，必须配备大功率的电机，按照普通车的标准确实没有这种配置，更换大的电机则要补上电机的差价。

王勇乐了，对技术人员说：“你们又给我上了一课，真是感谢！这样我来给区域销售经理解释，让他们把差价补上，你们赶紧下一个补充的技术文件把底盘定上，我们接台订单不容易呀。”王勇正兴冲冲准备离开，技术人员的一席话留住了他的脚步：“从我们对市场的了解，从技术角度上考虑，普通车确实没有必要配备这么大功率的发动机，跑客运的话底盘配置不应该这么高，你看ＡＢＳ、自动间隙调整臂、影视系统几乎全配全了，如果跑旅游，他为什么不要空调，不选豪华车配置呢？真是挺奇怪的。”王勇频频点头，一路跑回办公室。经过与区域经理的沟通，区域经理一核查才发现原因出在打字员的疏忽上，就因为订单上漏打了“豪华型”三个字，差点丢掉订单不说，还差点在配置上造成无法弥补的错误。

制造厂家底盘评审人员说没有订单要求的配制→一心想抓住订单的销售员王勇不信，然后去查配置→果然查不到配置→销售经理却咬定有这种配置→发现只需要更换电机就能满足订单的配置要求→准备更改技术文件→技术人员觉得这样的配置和配置惯例相比有些奇怪→核查用户订单配置要求→发现打字员输错配制→堵住错误、解决了问题。

Ｂ、有没有细节：如果将故事比做一棵树，情节是树干，那么细节就是树叶，没有树叶的树是不会好看的，没有细节的故事同样不会生动。 〈治好患者的病 忘却自己的痛〉一文中：那是２０００年的一个下午，罗水平准备收拾东西下班回家，一个中年人出现在他的办公室门口，他赶紧把这个人让进屋里，原来是这个人７０多岁的老母亲股骨骨折，因为家庭困难，临床治疗后就出院在家里做牵引治疗，他家住郭徐岭，路很难走，一般医生都不愿意上门服务。罗水平了解情况后立马收拾好药箱跟这个中年人上路了，那天下着大雨，一路泥泞，先坐上“麻木”颠簸了一阵，又深一脚浅一脚地走了很长一段泥巴路才到老婆婆的家里。罗水平给老婆婆认真检查了病情并进行治疗，还手把手教她的家人如何做护理工作。走的时候罗水平还是不放心，怕他们粗心忘记了，罗水平就将给老人喝水、帮老人翻身、帮老人揉腿等护理老人要注意的事项一一写在了一张小纸条上以提醒家人。在罗水平的多次上门治疗下，老婆婆慢慢恢复了健康，她的家人对罗水平充满了感激和信任。

这个细节就充分反映出了罗水平从心底里对患者的那种关心，而且可以体会到他在工作时的那种耐心细致。如果没有这个细节，我们就很难看出他和普通医生的区别。

Ｃ、有没有环境：适当的环境描写和背景烘托，能突出故事的矛盾冲突性，增强故事的吸引力。有些故事甚至是因为独特环境才成为故事。

〈风雨中这点痛算什么〉（写铁路处白浪车站调车员罗德江）一文中的环境描写就很出彩：冬天在车上作业，双手抓着冰冷的扶手，车一开动，风夹裹着雨雪飕飕地往袖口和脖子里钻，雪挂在眉毛上，不一会儿便结了冰，但眼睛还得大睁着向前方了望，给司机提供准确的行车信号。今年1月，小罗随机车到铸造二厂作业，经道口时，一辆叉车正从侧面是来，小罗发出紧急停车信号，机车停稳后离叉车只有10米远。

这个故事中事实部分很短，只有50来个字，但是这个故事却给人留下了深刻印象，让人记住了调车员工作的艰辛和尽职尽责，就是环境描写发挥的作用。

Ｄ、有没有动作：动作能给人一种画面感和想象感，有了动作我们就可以想象出一个活生生的人来，如见其人你说这样的故事生动不生动。

〈徐树华和他的班员们〉（铁路处机动科综合班）一文中：去年大年初二，在二堰车站肝火的该处综合班班长、公司劳模徐树华街道电话，花果站给机车加水阀门失控，水流不止。阀门水池里积满水，人无法下去。大徐买来一瓶酒，脱去棉衣、毛裤，“咕嘟咕嘟”（喝）两口白酒下肚，“扑通”跳进冰冷的水里。“阀门销子短了，”他向上的人喊道。大伙急忙找来铁钉，水被止住。初三一早，大徐赶到现场，疏通水池管路，换上新阀门。 三个动词勾勒出人物性格：脱——不畏困难，喝——做事很讲策略不蛮干，跳——义无返顾。

〈唐锡荣：像经营家一样经营班组〉一文中：三车间铸造出来的零件经过末道工序，在磷板上筛落沙子时，一些打落的废铁块儿和冒口就落到地下室，平时，磷板班的员工谁上班谁就去地下室拣拾。去年冬天，三车间地下室出现积水，班组的劳务工们不愿再去地下室寒冷的水中拣拾。唐锡荣急了，带头脱了鞋袜，挽起裤腿，在齐膝的水洼里捡拾起废铁和冒口来。

E、有没有当事人生动的语言

〈治好患者的病 忘却自己的痛〉一文中：２００５年１月２４日，病理专家的检验报告出来了——是恶性淋巴瘤！医院领导立即开会，讨论罗水平后期治疗问题，并当即联系好，第二天上午转往中南医院进行化疗。罗水平强作平静地对看望他的同志说：“都回去吧，明天上午我还有台手术，做完就走！”“都什么时候了，自身难保，还想着别人？”妻子流着眼泪心疼地说。罗水平和妻子解释，这个叫江诗华的病人骨骼内固定手术是他三年前做的，江诗华点名还要罗水平亲自为她取内固定，他已答应第二天给她做手术。１月２５日上午８点３０分，罗水平准时踏入手术室，他像平时任何一次手术一样，认真地做完了每一个细节，取出了病人体内的每一个螺钉。这时，医院安排他转院治疗的专车早已停在楼下，家人和同事在外面静静地等待着。

两句朴实的对话一下子把罗水平的高尚情操凸显出来了。 五个“有没有”中，前两个“有没有”是必须有的，后三个属于“选装”配置，能有最好，但不一定非要全有。

2、找故事的艺术

A、用非常具体的问题引出新闻故事。

2001年，清华大学新闻与传播学院曾经组织学生以重走长征路的形式来挖掘革命老区的新闻故事。在采访中，他们就从清华大学新闻与传播学院副院长、博士生导师李希光那里学到了用具体化的问题引出新闻故事的方法。在采访一位82岁的老红军时，记者发现老红军和大部分老区人民一样，生活非常清苦：穿的是县政府救济的旧中山装，家里的人均年收入不足300元，而且家里一直没有通电，点的是油灯，当然也没有电视。但是，如果只是笼统地问“你现在生活条件怎么样”，显然只能得到这些环境性的描述，不具有故事性，而且也不具新颖性，因为这样的对老区落后状况的描述大家已经司空见惯了。于是，李希光体了一个非常细的问题：“老人家，你知道中国现在的领导人是谁吗？”结果老人答不出来，于是乡支书提示他：“你知不知道邓小平是谁？”老人似乎想了起来，大声说：“是邓小平的亲戚！”这把在场的人乐歪了，又有人问他：“你知不知道江泽民？”老人有些急了：“反正是邓小平的亲戚。”

这个非常细的问题引出的故事很有戏剧性、很吸引人，而且传递出了丰富的信息：一是老红军应该是一个政治上觉悟很高的人，可是生活环境的原因一个本该觉悟高的人却连国家领导人是谁都不知道，老区的落后、封闭可以说已经到了让人震惊的地步；二是老红军的推理方式，现任国家领导是前任国家领导的亲戚，透露出他所了解到的他所在地方任用领导的方式还是落后的继承制，而不是现在国家已普遍推行的民主选举制，这反映出老区的管理方式也非常落后。

B、要善于倾听，从被采访者的无心之语中抓住故事线索，深入挖掘。

在采访前，我们通常先要梳理一下已知的信息，捉摸一下哪些环节可能有故事，我们需要什么样的故事。但是，不要为了追求自己假想的这些故事，而在采访中忽略了那些潜在的、可能更有意思的故事。这就要求我们在采访中一定要善于倾听，绝不能只顾事先设计好的问题，而不认真听被采访者灵光闪现中想到的其他故事。

有一次，我们的记者准备采访一个女技术人员，她听说这个女技术员工作很投入，为了工作几乎什么家务都不做，她事先就想挖掘一个女技术人员为了工作把家里一些事情给耽误了、引起家人抱怨的故事，以反映技术人员对技术工作的痴迷。但是，在采访中，她跟这个女技术员谈做家务的问题时，女技术员讲的却是自己擅长做哪些家务，这和记者的设想完全相反，不过认真倾听的记者很快发现了技术员擅长的家务似乎都和技术工作有些联系，于是记者根据这一线索问了一个新问题“为什么喜欢做这些家务”，结果女技术员告诉记者：打毛衣要计算针距和技术中的计算相通、辅导孩子计算机和技术人员日常工作内容很接近，所以她喜欢做这些家务，而其他的家务她全都不做。最后记者便挖出了这样一个故事——连做家务都惦记着技术，既有新意，又更能反映出女技术员对技术的痴迷。

C、要细心观察，抓住一些现场细节故事。

新闻与传播学院的学生在采访中，黑水县县长带他们去看雪山，山路旁的水沟被人堵了，水把路冲出了一条条的道，县长立刻跑上去，用手把那些石头和泥巴都给掏了出来，动作非常娴熟自然，根本没有嫌脏怕累的表情。一个县长能亲自去掏水沟，不正是一个能够反映出这个县长实干精神的故事吗？后来，他们在做这位县长的专访时，就把这一段观察到的细节写进去了，结果文章格外感人。

我们在采访中也要注意观察，比如有的技术人员在接受采访时也不肯放下手头的活，时不时看一下电脑、敲一下键盘。我们可以感受到他的心始终被工作牵系着，我们也可以了解一下他现在手头正在干的事，是不是时间紧、完成起来比较棘手的工作，没准也能从中挖出一些故事。就想爱因斯坦传记中，大家可能知道一个故事，除了工作，他对什么似乎都不太专心，煮牛奶时还在想问题，想着想着又跑去工作了，结果牛奶全被烧干了。

还有时，我们在现场采访时，会发现某些人干活时，会有一些和别人不一样的习惯或动作，没准这些习惯或动作就是一种能够确保安全或提高效率的改善。如果我们注意观察的话，很可能一个动作、一张图表、一封传真都能给我们带来一个故事。

推荐第3篇：英语写作教案

英语写作教案

Teaching Objectives: instruct students how to finish a writing task (写作任务为2013年安徽英语高考作文 on the way to school) Teaching important points: how to help students to finish a composition of good quality in a limited time Teaching methods: discuion and presenting Teaching Procedures: Step1.Pre-writing

1.审题。

作为老师，我们首先要做到的就是教学生审题，确定文章所属的题材，了解文章的主题，并按照先后的顺序将文章分段。高中英语写作题材以说明、记叙和议论为主。以2013年高考英语作文on the way to school 为例，文章要求以在我上学的路上为背景，从遵守交通规则和注意文明举止两方面说明如何讲求文明，从我做起。这种作文应为以记叙为主，并有少量议论，“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题，“遵守交通规则，注意文明举止”为要点。段落划分为三段：第一段点明主题并交代背景：在我上学的路上；第二段从“遵守交通规则，注意文明举止”两个要点阐明如何讲求文明；第三段总结全文。

2.学生们小组自由讨论：What bad behavior do you often run into on the way to school? 这种Brainstorming活动可以帮助激活学生们对话题的已知信息，为下一步的写作做好铺垫。 3.议题。

在审题的基础上，我们应先列出与文章主题内容有关的词汇、短语和句式，并形成写作思路。如讲文明应为be civilized, 从我做起应为start from me，遵守交通规则 obey traffic rules ，注意文明举止应为 behave yourself 或 well behaved。遵守交通规则的行为有不闯红灯 run red, 走人行横道 zebra croing。cause harm to 造成危害；as for… 就…而言；keep… in mind 牢记在心；keep to the right 靠右；the pedestrian croing 人行横道；regard/consider … as my duty… 把…看做职责；make a difference 有作用；有影响。讲文明的行为包括不随地吐痰spitting，不乱扔垃圾littering 。 Step 2.While - writing 第一步：学生们分小组认真读题、思考，并讨论对于这个话题他们可能会提出哪些问题（自由地，无序地，想到什么就提什么问题）。 第二步：学生们把他们的问题从语篇结构上分类。如：

第一段：目前存在的问题（紧扣主题：遵守交通和举止文明方面）及其影响 ■ How is the present situation of people obeying traffic rules? ■ How do people behave in public? ■ What are the consequences of people breaking traffic rules? ■ What effects does people’s bad behavior have? ■ …

第二段：如何解决问题（紧扣主题：上学路上，自己遵守交通和举止文明的具体做法）

■ What should we do to help to make a change? ■ What means of transport should I choose when I go to school? ■ If I take a bus to school, what should I do? ■ If I take my dad’s or mum’s car to school, what should I do? ■ If I ride a bike to school, what should I do? ■ If I walk to school, what should I do? ■ What should I do when I see some litter on the way? ■ What should I do when I see an old lady or man who wants to cro the road? ■ …

第三段：总结（感受、期望或呼吁等） ■ How do I feel about my behavior? ■ What do I anticipate? ■ …

第三步：学生们小组合作来回答这些问题。实际上这些问题的答案就基本组成了作文的核心内容。

第四步：学生们讨论需要哪些语篇结构表达。

首先，段落的主题句。

其次，语篇标志表达（Discourse Marker）。

1．过渡句。

2．“起、承、转、合”的连接表达，如： ⑴ 表并列关系的词语：

■ and, or, also，as well, too；

■ as well as…，not only…but also, both … and… ⑵ 表增补的词语：

■ in addition, furthermore, besides, moreover, again, also, what’s more, similarly…

⑶ 表转折对比的过渡词：

■ although, but, however, yet, instead, on the contrary … ⑷ 表原因的词语：

■ because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to, owing to, for this reason, considering that, seeing that； as a result of …

⑸ 表结果的词语：

■ so, so that, so…that, such…that，as a result；therefore； thus；consequently …

⑹ 表特定的顺序关系的词语：

■ First / Firstly, … Second / Secondly, … Third / Thirdly …

■ First of all / To begin with , then, next, finally/in the end/at last … ⑺ 表总结的词语：

■ in a word, to sum up, in conclusion, in short, in general, generally speaking, finally, to conclude …

……

最后，学生们讨论可能会用到哪些高级词汇、短语以及句型。 第五步：学生们独立完成各自的作文。 Step 3.Post-writing 1.教师需引导学生从以下四个方面对原稿进行再加工：①文章是否跑题。②开头和结尾是否点题，条理是否清晰，布局是否合理，内容是否连贯，格式是否正确。③要点是否写全，有无遗漏。④有无主谓、人称一致，有无时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等方面的语法错误。

5、最后定稿

2.首先，同伴分享阅读，互助批改。然后，同伴推选写得较好的（也可以是随选择几篇）与全班同学分享。接下来，我对学生们写作的总体评价与反馈。

最后，同学们谈谈感受：今天的写作课我最大的收获是……

3.参考范文、佳例示范

提供佳作范文，让学生用心揣摩、赏析、学习。 附：范文佳例

On the way to School These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me, it should start on my way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cro a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian croing.Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever poible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.

赏析：本文要点齐全，层次清晰, 表达地道，并使用相应的高级句型和高级词汇，不失为一篇佳作。

推荐第4篇：英语写作教案

How to Get a Higher mark in Writing

Teaching Goals: Help students to know how to get a higher mark in the exams.Teaching Important Points: Get students to know what makes a good composition and how to leave a good impreion on teachers in writing.Teaching Procedures: Step 1: Lead in.Step 2: Show students a full-mark composition in the College Entrance Examination to enjoy the beautiful handwriting and good sentences.

Get students to know about what makes a good composition: 1.All the important points are included 2.Beautiful language: beautiful expreions, advanced structures 3.Few mistakes 4.Well-connected, smooth, logical, tight, economical Get students to know about how to leave a good impreion on teachers in writing: 1.Keep your answer sheet clean and tidy 2.The important points should be attractive and usually in the given order 3.Pay special attention to the first three sentences and the ending.Step 3: Get students to write the composition on their test papers.书面表达（共35分） 假设你是李华，到阳光酒店去找Mr.Smith并通知他明天上午8点钟到会议中心去听演讲，主讲人是来自四川大学的王教授，讲座的内容是有关污染的问题。但是Mr.Smith不在，于是你给他留言，并详细告诉他怎样去会议中心：会议中心离酒店不远，可以步行，出酒店，然后向左转；往前走，走到一个十字路口处向右转；一直往前走，然后到达另一个十字路口；在十字路口的左边，街道的拐角处有一邮局；会议中心就在邮局的旁边。根据以上内容写出留言条，要求：文章内容连贯， 100词左右。 1.Analyze the directions.(审题）

Title，Tense and voice，Person，Style，Paragraph，The important points: 2.List the important points out.(列出要点) Why do you leave a meage?

What do you want to tell Mr.Smith? ①When?②Where?③Who?④What? 3.Translate （遣词，造句） ①我去阳光宾馆通知你去听演讲，但你不在,于是我留下口信 ②演讲时间：明天上午8点 ③演讲地点：会议中心 ④主讲人是来自四川大学的王教授 ⑤讲座的内容：污染问题

4.Write a paragraph. (润色，谋篇）

①.There will be a speech at 8 tomorrow morning.It will be given in the Conference Centre.The speaker will be Profeor Wang.He is from Sichuan University.It is about the problem of pollution.Is this paragraph well-connected? Economical? ②.There will be a speech which is about the problem of pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00 tomorrow morning.It will be given by Profeor Wang, who is from Sichuan University.

(Better) ③.Profeor Wang, who is from Sichuan University, will talk about pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00 tomorrow morning.(Much better) ④.There will be a speech on the problem of pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00am tomorrow, which will be given by Profeor Wang from Sichuan University. (The best) Show the way in English 指路用语： ①.沿着此路走。Go (straight) down this road/street.Walk along this road/street.②.在第一个/第二个十字路口向左/右转。Turn left/right at the first/second croroads.Take a left/right turn…..③.坐三路车，在第三站下车。Take Bus No.3 and get off at the third stop.④.然后你就到了。Then you’ll find/come to it./You won’t mi it.5.Writing a paragraph (润色，谋篇) Go out of the hotel and turn left.And you will come to a croroads and turn right.Walk along the road and you will see another croroads.On the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street.Walk along the street and you will find the Conference Centre.Is it tight enough?

Now let’s make it tight.

When you go out of the hotel, turn left.Walk straight down the street until you come to a croroads.Take a right turn there.Keep on walking till you see another croroads.And then on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street.The Conference Centre is next to it.But is it logical enough?

Let’s make it logical.

The Conference Centre is not far from your hotel, and therefore, you may walk there.First, when you go out of the hotel, turn left.Second, walk straight down the street until you come to a croroads.Take a right turn there.Third, keep on walking till you see another croroads.Finally, on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street, and the Conference Centre is next to it.You won’t mi it.

Step 4: Get students to enjoy a composition with beautiful sentences and phrases.Step 5: Tips.

Ⅰ.Try some advanced structures Ⅱ.十大经典句型 Ⅲ.恰当使用过渡性词语

推荐第5篇：高考英语基础写作人物人品

第一个写作话题：人物人品

课标解读：指本人、家人、邻居、同学、老师、朋友和其他人的情况介绍。包括姓名、年龄、生日、出生地、地址、电话号码、QQ号、电子邮箱、职业、品格、性格、习惯、毅力、责任、个性心理、意志品质、业绩或成就；所在学校、年级、班级，等等。球星影星、同时代的出现在各领域的名人(contemporary famous people)、科学家、领袖人物、历史人物(historical persons)及其趣闻轶事。 命题预测：基础写作: 自我介绍；名人简历；名人轶事；写竞选演讲稿；写求职书或应聘信；推荐信等。

读写任务：请就性格、习惯、毅力、责任、态度等发表看法； 你认为什么品质或态度等能带来成功及其理由；你认为怎样才能受人欢迎? 从某人的失败或成功中，你学到了什么?

一、常用单词

1.职业用语

job / occupation/profeion 职业teaching staff 教育工作者lecturer大学老师aistant 助教scholar 学者linguist 语言学家mathematician 数学家 scientist 科学家 physicist 物理学家chemist 化学家 artist艺术家biologist生物学家botanist植物学家economist经

济学家editor编辑reporter记者journalist记者architect建筑师leader领导guide导游 model模特musician音乐家soccer star球星actre女演员actor男演员pianist钢琴家 painter画家director导演worker工人 farmer农民 engineer 工程师singer歌唱家 dancer舞蹈家movie star影星 2.个性品质

genius 天才 inspiration 灵感 character 品格personality 个性character 个性psychology心理mentality心态will / determination意志quality品质perspiration汗水achievement业绩accomplishment成就succe成功effort努力paion激情honest诚实的friendly友善的cheerful兴高采烈的cherish珍惜creative创造性的easygoing容易相处的independent独立的modest谦虚的warm热情的good-humored心情愉快的kind仁慈的shy羞怯的responsible负责的crazy疯狂的ambitious有雄心的active积极的paive消极的patient有耐心的gentle温和的sensitive敏感的cruel残暴的deceitful骗人的cold不友好的 cool冷静的precious珍贵的worthy有价值的understandable通情达理的virtuous有道德的energetic精力充沛的innocent天真无邪的spiritual精神上的,心灵的

3.通讯名称 postal code邮政编码name/surname/full name姓名pen name笔名age年龄birthday生日birthplace出生地addre地址native place籍贯nationality国籍 house number门牌lane巷street街road路district区county县province省

home phone住宅电话office phone办公电话e-mail addre, mail box 电子邮箱 必备词句：年龄

(1)a five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩 (2)a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩

(3)in my teens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时 (4)at the age of five在五岁时

(5)As a child, I liked to...我小时候喜欢„„ 出生

(1)was born in ...出生在„„

(2)be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家 (3)was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭 外表

(1)a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩

(2)overweight胖的;thin瘦的; slim苗条的;strong强壮的 (3)look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻 (4)good-looking 长得好看；plain-looking 长得一般 (5)well dreed 穿得漂亮；neatly dreed 衣着干净整洁 能力

(1)efficient办事高效率的

(2)intelligent有智力的；creative 富创造力的

(3)a boy with great ability 能干的男孩 (4)a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师 (5)speak fluent English 讲流利的英语 (6)have a gift for 有„„的天赋 (7)be skilled in 在„„方面熟练 (8)be experienced in 在„„方面有经验 健康

(1)be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康 (2)energetic精力充沛的；well-built身材健美的 (3)suffer from...患上„„ 经历 (1)graduate from...从„„毕业 (2)major in 以„„为专业

(3)gain scholarship 获得奖学金 (4)get good grades获得好成绩

(5)get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位 (6)be given the title of...获得„„称号

(7)win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌 (8)gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名

第一个话题：人物人品。基础写作：写竞选学生会部长演说辞来自学校学生会板报上的消息，学生会干部(包括学生会主席、文娱部长、体育部长、学习部长、生活部长、纪律部长等)即将改选。假设你叫李明，有兴趣去竞选某一部长，请用英语写一份演讲稿。［写作内容］

1.曾任班长二年；2.选择竞选某一职位，并说明理由； 3.如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。 Ladies and gentlemen，

Good afternoon.Thank you for coming to this election campaign today.I am Li Ming， from Cla 3， Grade 2.With the trust and complete support of my cla， I am delighted to announce that I am running for the Entertainment Secretary of the Student Union.

As a diligent boy with great organizing ability， I have always been considered to be a good team member and have served as monitor for 2 years.I not only perform well but also do well in singing and dancing.I once won the first place in Guangzhou Singing and Dancing Contest and was given the title of Excellent Student Leader in Guangdong.

If I am elected， I believe I will cooperate well with my fellow members of the Union and organize colourful activities to enrich our school life.

Thank you very much!

练笔：最近，英语老师要你用英语介绍一位好朋友。请你根据如下的提纲所示，写一篇人物介绍，介绍朋友李华。 【写作内容】外表：身材高，16岁，衣着朴实； 学习：学习很用功，独立完成作业，各科成绩优良； 品质：待人和蔼，乐于助人，耐心帮助同学学习英语。 爱好：喜欢音乐，爱好体育。

My best friend Li Hua is a 16-year-old tall boy, simply dreed.He works very hard at all his leons and can finish his homework all by himself,and so he always has an excellent mark in all his subjects.What’s more, he is so kind and friendly to anyone in our cla that he is always ready to help others.He is good at English and always helps his clamates with their English language.Above all, he has many hobbies,such as music and sports.

任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后

以约120个词就“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后 ( Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one fall behind )”进行议论，内容包括：(1)你是否赞同上述观点, 为什么?(2) 你今后应当如何做。As is known， modesty is one of Chinese traditional virtues.We were taught early in our lives that modesty helps one go forward whereas conceit makes one fall behind.This advice is of great value and I can’t agree more with the saying.Being modest, one tends to be aware of his shortcomings and would like to learn more so as to become more capable and competent.And a modest man gets along well with others while others would respect him and help him when he

meets difficulties.In contrast, a conceited person tends to be filled with pride and over-estimate himself.Consequently, he would stop where he is， making no more progre.Meanwhile, people may dislike him and he may feel lonely.

Personally， I’ll stay modest even though I may have achieved something in life.(135 words) 练笔：以120个词就文明礼貌在人们生活中的重要性进行议论，内容包括：（1）你对礼貌重要性的认识；（2）校园内礼貌的现状分析；（3）你觉得人们之间应该如何以礼相待。People who have good manners get suppots, are liked and welcomed everywhere while those who have bad manners suffer a lot, are refused and disliked.So we should respect others and gain respects from others.

Manners are important to set up a good relationship among people.In school, most of us students have good manners, and behave well.We always attend claes in time, finish exercises punctually, and respect our teachers and clamates.However, some students ignore a reasonable request andtake someone else’s property withoutpermiion.Others backbite, fall asleep in cla, make hurtful comments about another person’s looks, abilities, background, family and make annoying noises.

I think good manners are a basis of polite society.Our manners, however we present ourselves and behave in our life, should make each other comfortable, confident and capable in the home, the school, the community and the workplace.So we say“Please, Thank you, Excuse me, and I’m sorry according to different situation.练笔：以120个词就“诚实”的主题进行议论，内容包括： （1）你对不诚实现象的看法；（2）诚实的重要性是什么； （3）作为中学生，该如何做一个诚实的人。

The paage mainly tells us that nowadays some people are dishonest for their own benefit, because not only they neglect our traditional values, but also they want to escape being punished.

Dishoesty does great harm to our society.It can destroy our good relationship with others, bringing lots of unstable factors to the society.Sometimes, it may even affect people’s health.

Why should we be honest? Firstly, being honest is one of Chinese traditional virtues which we should carry forward.Secondly, friendship is based on honesty.Seeing that the honest person is reliable, most of people are willing to make friends with them.Thirdly, honesty is very important for us to build a harmonious society andrealize our spiritual civilization.

As students, we should act honestly every day and never cheat others, including cheat in exams.Besides,we should help those who are dishonest correct their mistakes.Only in this way can we win respect from others.

写作内容：

1.基础写作：写竞选学生会部长演说辞

来自学校学生会板报上的消息，学生会干部(包括学生会主席、文娱部长、体育部长、学习部长、生活部长、纪律部长等)即将改选。假设你叫李明，有兴趣去竞选某一部长，请用英语写一份演讲稿。

［写作内容］ 1.曾任班长二年；

2.选择竞选某一职位，并说明理由；3.如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。

election campaign today.I am Li Ming， from Cla 3， _________________________________________________

2.最近，英语老师要你用英语介绍一位好朋友。请你根据如下的提纲所示，写一篇人物介绍，介绍朋友李华。 【写作内容】外表：身材高，16岁，衣着朴实；

学习：学习很用功，独立完成作业，各科成绩优良； 品质：待人和蔼，乐于助人，耐心帮助同学学习英语。 爱好：喜欢音乐，爱好体育。

3.任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后

以约120个词就“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后 ( Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one fall behind )”进行议论，内容包括：

(1)你是否赞同上述观点, 为什么? (2) 你今后应当如何做。

4.以120个词就文明礼貌在人们生活中的重要性进行议论，内容包括：

（1）你对礼貌重要性的认识；

（2）校园内礼貌的现状分析；

（3）你觉得人们之间应该如何以礼相待。

5.以120个词就“诚实”的主题进行议论，内容包括：

（1）你对不诚实现象的看法；

（2）诚实的重要性是什么；

（3）作为中学生，该如何做一个诚实的人。

推荐第6篇：英文写作

一、Sports运动

Just as lots of teenagers take to pop music, I love basketball because it\'s part of my life.

I began to play basketball in my childhood.I still remember the good old days when I played with my clamates after school.Later on, as I grew up, almost everything changed except that the love of playing basketball remained and it even grew stronger.I love this sport because it brings joys and health to my life.When I got tired after office work, I went to the sports ground and felt refreshed.If there were worries and cares from daily life, I went to the sports ground.There everything went away except basketball.In sum, it is basketball that keeps me in good shape and mood.就像很多年轻人喜欢流行音乐，我喜欢篮球，因为这是我生活的一部分。 童年时我开始打篮球。我还记得过去的好时光当我扮演和我的同学在学校。后来，当我慢慢长大，几乎一切都改变了，除了篮球的爱保持甚至变得更强。

我喜欢这项运动，因为它带给我快乐和健康。当我厌倦了办公室的工作后，我去操场和感到神清气爽。如果日常生活中有烦恼和忧虑，我去操场。除了有一切去打篮球。总之，它是篮球，能让我保持良好的体形和情绪。

二、The Digital Products 数码产品

Nowadays, digital products are enjoying growing popularity among people.Take me for example, the first thing I do after waking up is switch on my cell phone to check my test meages and read the latest news.Then listen to music on my way to school.At the end of the day, I enjoy watching TV programs, or surfing the net.

why are we so fond of those digital products? The answer is simple.They are doing us good making our lives comfortable and convenient.These two key factors represent the trend of new inventions of modern age that brings in the wide use of digital products.

如今，数字化产品越来越得到大家的欢迎。以我为例，醒来后在我的手机来检查我的测试信息和阅读最新的新闻交换我的第一件事。然后听音乐，在我去学校的路上。在一天结束的时候，我喜欢看电视节目或上网冲浪。

我们为什么如此喜欢那些数码产品？答案很简单。他们所做的是我们很好的使我们的生活舒适和方便。这两个关键因素是现代新发明，带来了数字产品的广泛应用的发展趋势。

三、The advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone use手机使用利弊 With the rapid development of technology, more and more high-tech

products for the life of people brought convenience -- mobile phone, which is a.the distance to the family play a greeting call or safe.Customer contact a telephone solution etc, but at the same time, similar to the mobile phone such high-tech products also imperceptibly into human brings a series of negative

effects, mobile phone to listen too much is not good for the ears, mobile phone radiation hazards the health of people, often to play mobile phone also

indifferent and the family of the family.So, this is worthwhile for us to choose, to study.

随着科技的迅猛发展，越来越多的高科技产物为人们的生活带来了方便——手机，就是其中一个。给远方家人打一个问候电话或者报平安。客户联系一个电话解诀等等。但在此同时，类似于手机这样的高科技产品也在不知不觉中为人类带来了一系列负面影响，手机听多了对耳朵不好，手机的辐射危害人民的健康，人们经常玩手机也淡泊与家人的亲情。所以，这是值得我们去选择，探讨的问题

四、About TV ads关于电视广告

Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen.It\'s difficult to find a program without insertion of ads on TV.In a word, whether you like it or not .the advertisement pours into your life.

On one hand I think TV ads bring us much convenience and benefits .For manufacturers they make their products known to consumers by advertisement, while for consumers, they can get from TV advertisements the first-hand information about new products, which enables them to make a decision quickly and to choose the one that they like best.

As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of TV ads because some of them are interesting and informative.But of course some of them are not trustworthy.Therefore, I think it is really neceary to strengthen the control of advertisements and make them more attractive.

现在越来越多的广告出现在电视屏幕上。找到一个程序的电视广告没有插入是很困难的。总之，不管你喜不喜欢广告注入你的生活。

一方面我觉得电视广告给我们带来了很多方便和好处。制造商，他们使自己的产品被消费者的广告，而对于消费者来说，他们可以从电视广告的新产品的第一手资料，使他们能够迅速作出决定，选择一个他们最喜欢的。

就我而言，我赞成电视广告，因为它们有一些有趣的信息。当然，有些人是不值得信赖的。因此，我认为真的有必要加强广告的管制，使其更具吸引力。

五、About Computer电脑

Nowadays, computers are becoming more and more popular.Computers can help different people in different ways.They can help children with leons and homework.Help students and scholars do the data query.Analyze data and present the latest achievements.Furthermore, they can aist engineers and experts in the design of a mold, a bridge or a spaceship.Computers can offer fun and entertainment to us with the internet games, movies.And etc.Indeed, computers have become a good companion of man.如今，电脑已经越来越受欢迎。电脑能帮助不同的人以不同的方式。他们可以帮助儿童和家庭作业的经验教训。帮助学生和学者做资料查询。分析数据和目前的最新成果。此外，他们可以协助工程师和专家设计的模具，桥梁或飞船。计算机可以提供有趣和娱乐的网络游戏，电影。等等。实际上，计算机已经成为一个好的伴侣的人。

六、About internet 因特网

Internet has its good as well as bad sides.Internet can help people a lot , but it also has many disadvantage.For example, there are some sexy news and pictures on the website which will not do well to the young people.So young people should learn to get ride of the disadvantages of internet and learn to make use of the advantages that internet brings to us.On the other hand, internet can let me know the outside world, make me informed of daily news, and it has brought joy and interest into my lives , so we should make good use of the internet.

网上有好的也有坏的方面。互联网可以帮助很多人，但也有很多缺点。例如，网站上有将不好的年轻人一些性感的新闻和图片。所以年轻人应该学会把因特网的弊端，学会利用网络给我们。另一方面，互联网可以让我知道外面的世界，让我了解每日新闻，和它所带来的欢乐和兴趣进入我的生活，所以我们应该好好利用互联网。

七、Are Parents Best Teachers父母是最好的老师

Parents are the best teachers.Firstly, parents stay with children every day.Children will regard them as examples and learn from them.If the parents are polite, the children will be polite.Secondly, parents influence children with their words and behaviors.If parents always are nice to others and say good words about others, their children will also be kind to other children.If parents are good to old people, when the parents are getting older, the children will be good to them too.To sum up, from what has been discued above we can draw the conclusion that parents are our best teachers.

父母是最好的老师。首先，父母陪孩子的每一天。孩子们将视其为例，从中学习。如果家长有礼貌，孩子就会有礼貌。其次，影响儿童的家长是他们的言语和行为。如果父母总是很好对别人，说别人好话，孩子们也会对其他的孩子好。如果父母是很好的对老人，当父母老了，孩子们会对他们很好的。总之，通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论，父母是我们最好的老师。

八、Changes in life

There have been many changes in my life.With the development of our country, my life is becoming better and better.

For clothing, I can buy sorts of pretty clothes.But in the past, there were few clothes in my wardrobe.For food, I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal, rice, noodles or a steamed bun with one or two dishes such as preserved pickles.Nowadays, I can afford any delicious food.For housing, I have moved from a cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat.For getting around, I used to ride a

bike to work.At present, I drive my own car to travel.

I believe my life will be even better in the future.

在我的生命中有许多变化。随着我国经济的发展，我的生活变得越来越好。 对于服装，我可以买各种漂亮的衣服。但在过去，在我的衣橱里有一些衣服。用于食品，我通常吃传统的中国食物，米饭，面条还是馒头一个或两个菜如榨菜。如今，我能支付起任何美味的食物。住房，我已经从一个狭窄的房间一个大而明亮的公寓。为得到，我骑自行车去工作。目前，我开自己的车去旅行。 我相信我的生活会更美好的未来。

九、How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there are three main ways to keep healthy.

First, it is neceary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basis of good health.It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables everyday.Secondly, it’ is important to lake regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on.Last but not least, it is eential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stre.

When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life, we are bound to keep healthy.

如今，越来越多的人知道保持健康的重要性。没有一个健康的身体，我们什么也做不了。对我来说，有三种主要的方式来保持健康。

首先，有必要保持均衡的饮食，这是身体健康的基础。我们最好多吃水果和蔬菜每天。其次，它是重要的湖经常锻炼，如游泳，慢跑等。最后但并非最不重要的，它是保持一个好心情至关重要。放松和娱乐的更新我们的精神和释放压力的方法。

当我们把健康的生活习惯，我们日常生活的一部分，我们必须保持健康

十、Living in a Big City（居住在大城市）

City life is attractive with all its advantages and conveniences.Living in a big city, there are many supermarkets or shopping malls so it\'s very convenient to buy various things.There are also so many restaurants in big city that people can dine out easily.However, with the expansion of the city, some problems appear.As the latest information shows, thousands upon thousands people are flowing into big cities to settle down.Crowded big cites are being confronted with many problems, such as Traffic jam, housing condition and pollution.城市生活是有吸引力的所有优势和便利。生活在大城市，有很多超市或商场，这是买各种东西很方便。也有在大城市的许多餐馆，人们可以外出吃饭很容易。然而，随着城市规模的扩大，出现了一些问题。最新的信息显示，成千上万的人涌向大城市定居下来。拥挤的大城市正面临着许多问题，如交通拥挤，住房条件和污染。

十一、My Hobbies

Different people have different hobbies。I have a lot of hobbies and I benefit from them.In my spare time, I like raising flowers and cycling most.I get lots of knowledge about gardening.I spend several hours on raising flowers every day, which releases my stre and renew my spirit.I also like cycling.Proper physical exercises keep me fit.Cycling in a sunny day is wonderful! My hobbies help me maintain a mental and physical balance and make my life colorful!

不同的人有不同的爱好。我的爱好有很多，我从中受益。在我的业余时间，我喜欢种花和骑自行车最。我有很多知识关于园艺。我花了几个小时在养花的每一天，释放我的压力和更新我的精神。我也喜欢骑自行车。适当的体育运动使我保持健康。在一个阳光明媚的日子骑自行车是美好的！我的爱好使我保持身心平衡，使我的生活丰富多彩！

十二、My TV university life

I am now engaged in long distance education.The form of study is very

convenient for adult learners like me.I can learn my courses anywhere in my spare time by computer.There are many web-based courses and sources on line.Moreover, I not only use e-mail to send our homework to our tutors but also join online

discuion forums.Meantime, the difficulties and puzzles can be solved in the tutorial once a week.The e-learning life is meaningful.

I enjoy my TV university life.

我现在从事远程教育。研究的形式是成人学习者喜欢我很方便。我可以学习我的课程，在我的业余时间都用计算机。有许多网络课程和在线来源。另外，我不仅用电子邮件把作业发给导师也加入在线讨论论坛。与此同时，困难和难题可以解决在教程一星期一次。网络学习是有意义的。

我喜欢我的电视大学生活

十三、The advantages of hosting the Olympic Games（举办奥运会的好处）

There are many advantages of hosting the Olympic Games.

First, I has a major effect on the economy.It will create many opportunities to develop the economy.Second, thousands of tourists come to the games and the host city will quicken its construction of infrastructure.Third, it can arouse common

people’s interest in English.As a result, it is good for our fellow-citizens to improve their English.

Therefore I think hosting the Olympic Games is rewarding.

举办奥运会的优点。

首先，我在经济上有重大的影响。它将创造出很多的机会来发展经济。第二，成千上万的游客来到主办城市将加快基础设施建设。第三，它能激发普通民众对英语的兴趣。作为一个结果，这是我的同胞们提高他们的英语很好。

因此我认为举办奥运会是值得的。

推荐第7篇：英文写作

作文（2011年09月网考）

精简作文35篇，有基础的可以背诵以下范文，学会套用，没基础的就用WORD翻译写短句或打印小抄。一篇文章可以套用在多种场合。相同的文章，记忆时只记忆一篇即可

1.My mother（我的母亲）

My mother is a kind and gentle woman.She is very busy from morning till night.As a teacher she works diligently and efficiently.As a mother, she takes good care of me and gives me every comfort.

My mother teaches English in a middle school.She loves her students.She treats them with patience and teaches them well.For her excellent qualities and very good teaching results, she is always praised and respected by both her students and colleagues alike.

My mother is great indeed, and I always feel proud of her.

我妈妈是一位亲切和善的女人。她从早晨到晚都很忙。作为一名教师,她工作勤奋并有效率。作为母亲,她对我关怀备至,给了我所有的安慰。我母亲在一所中学教英语。她很喜欢她的学生。她耐心对待他们并且教好他们。对于她优质的品质和优秀的教学成果,她总是受到赞美和尊重，她也总是称赞她的学生和同事。

我母亲的确很伟大,我总是为有这样的母亲感到自豪。

2.The man I love most in my life（我最爱的人）/ My father（我的父亲）

The man I love most in my life is my father.He is my first teacher and my dear friend.When I was a little child, I used to sit on my father’s knees, listening to his stories.

When I was seven years old, I started primary school.I was young, so my father picked me up from school every day.On the way, I told father everything that happened at school.He listened carefully and always smiled happily.He is always proud of me.I’m sure my father’s love will lead me to my succe and I will love him forever.

我生命中最爱的这个人是我的父亲。他是我的启蒙老师,我亲爱的朋友。当我还是个小孩子的时候,我常常坐在父亲的膝盖,听他讲故事。

当我七岁时,我开始上小学。因为小，所以父亲每天接送我放学。在路上,我告诉父亲在学校所发生的一切事情。他听得很认真,总是高兴地笑着。他总是以我为荣。我相信父亲的爱能让我获得成功,我将永远爱他。

3.My beloved grandparents（我亲爱的祖父母）

My grandparents are important people in my life.I was brought up by them when I was young.My parents used to work in another city.It was my grandparents who took care of me.My grandmother cooked delicious food for me and taught me how to read and write.My grandfather sent me to school and picked me up every day.

My grandmother is now 75 years old and my grandfather is 76 years old.They are now living near us.They are always proud of me.Now it’s my turn to take good care of them.I love my grandparents so much.

在我的生命中我的祖父母是很重要的人。我小时候是他们养育的。我的父母曾经去另一个城市工作了。这时候就由我的祖父母照顾我。我的奶奶煮好吃的食物给我和教我如何读和写。我的祖父每天骑车送我到学校。

现在我的祖母75岁了,我的祖父是76岁。他们现在住在我们附近。他们总是以我为荣。

现在轮到我了,我要好好照顾他们。我非常爱我的祖父母。

4.My best schoolmate（我最好的同学）/ My Clamates（我的同学）

Liu Kai is my schoolmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl croing the road when a car nearly hit her.Just then Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When Liu Kai hurried into the claroom, the teacher had already begun leon.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.刘凯是我的同班同学。他是个好学生并乐于助人。一天在他上学的路上，他看见一个小女孩过马路，当时一辆汽车差点撞到她。就在那时，刘凯冲到她跟前用双臂抱起了她。小女孩得救了。她告诉他住的地方，然后他就把她送回家了。当刘凯急匆匆地赶到教室时，老师已经开始讲课了。他告诉老师他迟到的原因。然后他就因此受到表扬了。

5.My teacher of English（我的英语老师）/ My Teacher in High School（我的高中老师）My Teacher / A (good) teacher to remember（我的老师/难忘的老师）

My English teacher (in high school) is Mi Huang.She is a beautiful lady.There is always a smile on her face.Mi Huang likes singing.She is good at playing the piano.In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music.She is a good dancer, too.Sometimes she teaches us dancing.Mi Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute.Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.She is my favorite teacher.Our clamates all like her very much.

我的英语老师（高中）是黄老师。她是一位美丽的女士。她脸上总是挂着笑容。黄老师爱唱歌。她擅长于弹钢琴。晚上她总是坐在钢琴前，弹奏动听的音乐。她也是一个好的舞者。有时她教我们跳舞。黄老师非常喜欢狗因为狗友好又可爱。她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和大海的颜色。

她是我最喜欢的老师，我们的同学都很喜欢她。

6.(My) School life（我的学校生活）(同my first year in college大学生活的第一年)/ My Study Plan(学习计划)

English study was the most important thing in my school life./（in my first year in college.） In order to study English well, I make a study plan.I would like to share my study plan with you.First, remember 20 new words everyday, and never give up.Second, go over the grammar points I have learnt in English cla regularly.Third, read an English article in China Daily every day.Fourth, write an English composition every week and ask teacher to revise that for me to improve the writing level.Through these ways, I have made a lot of improvements in English.

英语学习是我学校生活/（大学一年级）最重要的事。为了学好英语，我制定了学习计划。我愿意

和你分享我的学习计划。第

一、每天背 20 个生单词，从不放弃。第

二、定期复习英语课上学习的语法知识。第

三、每天阅读一篇《中国日报》的英语文章。第

四、每周写一篇英语作文，并让老师修改，以此来提高英语写作水平。通过以上办法，我英语学习有了很大进步。

7.How to learn English well?（如何学好英语？）/My english study（我的英语学习）本篇内容与上篇内容基本一致，学会套用。

English is always my favorite subject and I am good at English.I would like to share four good studying habits with you.First, remember 20 new words a day, and never give up.Second, go over grammar points I have learnt in English cla regularly.Third, read an English article in China Daily every day.Fourth, write an English composition every week and ask teacher to revise that for me to improve the writing level.If you do things above, I am sure your English will also be improved.

英语是我最喜欢的科目，而且我英语比较好。我想和你分享四条好的学习习惯。第一，每天记忆20个生单词，永远坚持。第二，复习定期在英语课上学到的语法点。第三，每天坚持阅读中国日报的一篇文章。第四，每周写一篇英语作文，请老师批改以提高写作水平。如果你做到了以上几点，我相信你的英文一定会有所提高的。

8.Why I study English?（我为什么学习英语?）/ 或者:Why do students like learning English? (为什么学生喜欢学习英语？) Why I Like Learning English (为什么我喜欢学英语)

Why do I study English? / (Why do students like learning English?) Firstly, English is very useful.English is the most widely used language in the world.If we make a visit to foreign countries or do busine with foreigners, we need to communicate with them in English.Secondly, with China becoming stronger and stronger, we have more chances to go abroad.We can know the English-speaking countries much better if we know English.Both China and English-speaking countries have realized the importance of the culture exchange.Above all, English is useful and important, we must master English.

我为什么喜欢学英语呢（学生们为什么喜欢学习英语）？ 首先，英语有用。英语是世界上应用最广泛的语言。如果我们去国外旅游或者和外国人做生意，我们就需要用英语和他们交流。其次，随着中国越来越强大，我们有更多出国机会。如果我们懂英文，就可以更深刻地了解英语国家。中英文国家都已经意识到文化交流的重要性。总之，英语既实用又重要，我们必须学好英语。

9.Self-study （自学）/How to achieve succe of distance learning（如何在远程学习中获得成功）

As adult students in Shanghai TV University, self-study becomes very important.According to me, there are several pieces of tips of self-study.

First, I always make a study plan in the beginning of a new semester.Second, preview every unit before the leon.Third, try to finish the homework after cla.Fourth, go over what I have learnt in cla regularly at home.Without review, you will absolutely forget what you’ve learnt as quickly as poible.So reviewing is helpful in understanding and memorizing what you’ve learnt.作为上海电大的成人学生，自学很重要。对我来讲，我有下列自学方法。第一，我总是在学期初制定好学习计划。第二，课前预习每个单元。第三，课后完成作业。第四，定期在家里复习所学过的知识。不复习，你绝对会很快忘记学过的知识。所以，复习在理解和记忆所学知识方面很有帮助。

10.My expectation of the long-distance education（我对远程教育的期望）

Now, I am a student in Shanghai TV university, in other words, I am a distance learner.I have a lot of expectations on my distance education.Firstly, I hope to improve my spoken English.I

work in a foreign invested company.My bo is a foreigner.I need to talk with him in English every day.So I would like to improve my spoken English very much.Secondly, I hope to improve my English writing ability.I need to receive and answer emails in English every day, but I don’t know many English words.These above are my expectations of the long-distance education.

现在我在上海电大学英语。换言之，我是一名远程学习者。对远程教育，我有许多期待。第一，我希望可以提高我的英语口语。我在外企上班，老板是外国人，每天我都需要和他用英语交谈，所以我非常想要提高英语口语。第二，我希望提高英语写作能力。每天我都需要收发英语邮件，我词汇量不大。以上这些是我对远程教育的期望。

推荐第8篇：英文写作

写作

大学英语B

一、Help Me to Buy a Spoken English Book

1.介绍你的近况。

2.请他帮你买本英语口语书。

3.欢迎他方便时来访。

答案：

Help Me to Buy a Spoken English Book

Oct.16, 2007

Dear Li Hua,

It\'s long time since we haven\'t seen each other.I mi you very much.How\'s everything going on with you？I am busy preparing PETS 4.

I was wondering if you could help me buy PETS 4 English oral textbook published by the Beijing Pre, because the books were sold out here.

Drop in when you are free.I often think of those happy days we spent together at university.Please let me know as soon as poible once you get the book.

My best wishes.Yours,

Wang Lei

二、Bad Manners in Public

1.列举人们在公共场所的不良现象。

2.对其中某一种现象陈述你的看法，并简单说明理由。

答案：

Bad Manners in Public

Although we consider ourselves as highly advanced beings living in a civilized society, bad manners can still be found here and there.For example, some cyclists run the red traffic lights, many paengers litter waste papers and plastic bags in public places, and some tourists scrabble in tourist attractions, let alone spit on the street.In the cinema, some audience talk loudly on cell phones in front of others.三、My Opinion on Cell PhonesI\'m strongly against talking loudly in the cinema, for this behaviour shows no respect at all to others; what\'s worse, it upsets the audience who are in the mood of having fun.

1．使用手机的好处；

2．使用手机的弊端；

3．我的看法。

答案：

My Opinion on Cell Phones

Cell phones do play an important role in people\'s daily life, but every coin has two sides.

To start with, a wirele mobile phone is convenient for the user at any time to contact others.Secondly, it\'s a helpful companion.With a multifunctional cell phone in hand, one can easily surf the net, downloading what he needs.

However, the cell phone has many disadvantages.For one thing, the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly, not to mention its global service.For another, the radiation transmitted from the mobile phones might do harm to the user\'s health.四、My Favorite TV Program

1.你最喜欢什么电视节目？

2.你为何喜欢这种电视节目？

答案：

My Favorite TV Program

The News Broadcast is my favorite TV program.This has become a part of my life because almost everyday I turn on the TV at7:00 pm, watching CCTV 9 news program.

Watching the daily news brings me the following benefits.Firstly, it develops my good language skills, proper pronunciation and greater knowledge and understanding of news around the world.Secondly, watching TV news as a family opens a stage for discuion between family members on a wide variety of topics.What\'s more, sharing the news helps kids better understand the world they live in, helps them learn more on different views and on how to act or respond to tough situations if they face it.All in all, watching the news program is informative, communicative and instructive.五、Can Money Buy Happine?

1.不同的人对金钱能买来幸福观持有不同观点。

2.我的观点。

答案：

Can Money Buy Happine?

Can Money Buy Happine? The answer varies among people.Some believe that money is In my opinion, with its expenses being reduced sharply, its development will have a brighter future.Therefore its advantages will far outweigh its disadvantages.the source of happine, because money provides food for the hungry, medicine for the sick, and clothes for the needy.While others hold that money is the root of evils, because it is the devil of money that drives a person to lie, cheat, steal, and, worst of all, to murder.

In my opinion, money is eential to being well-off, but not necearily to well-being.Happine is a state of mind, not something that can be bought.All in all, happine is le a matter of buying what we want than a wanting what we have.

六、The Digital Products

1.如今数字化产品得到广泛的使用，例如……。

2.数字化产品的使用对人们生活所带来的影响。

答案：

The Digital Products

Nowadays, digital products are enjoying growing popularity among people.Take me for example, the first thing I do after waking up is switch on my cell phone to check my text meages and read the latest news.Then listen to music on my iPod on my way to school.At the end of the day, I enjoy watching TV programs, or surfing the net.

Why are we so fond of those digital products? The answer is simple.They are doing us good --- making our lives comfortable and convenient.These two key factors represent the trend of new inventions of modern age that brings in the wide use of digital products.七、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

上星期天你打电话叫Jack和你去公园。在公园你们看见……，你们玩得很高兴。 get up late; call; get to; many people; do exercise; read; lake; fly

答案：

Last Sunday, I called Jack to go to the park with me.I got up late.We got to the park near our school on foot.We saw many people there.Some old people were doing exercise.Some middle-aged couples were dancing.Some young people were reading.The park was big and there was a large lake in it.It was such a beautiful day.Some children were flying kites.Jack and I also joined them.It was so much fun.We enjoyed ourselves very much.八、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

内容提示：假如你叫张琳，你昨天（4月7日）在放学回家的路上发生了交通事故，你从自行车上摔了下来，被好心人及时送到了医院，医生叫你卧床休息三天，特此请假（ask for a sick leave）

要求：

1、请根据以上内容，向班主任张老师写一张请假条；

2、以第一人称写，不能逐字翻译；

3、词数80左右。

答案：

To: Mrs.Zhang, Head teacher

From: Zhang Lin

Date: 7th, April

Subject: Sick Leave

Mrs.Zhang,

I would like to know if I could ask for a sick leave of absence from April 8th to 10th.

Yesterday I had a car accident on my way home.I was riding a bicycle to turn right when a motorcycle suddenly rushed towards me.I was hit by the motorcycle and fell down from the bike.The driver disappeared soon.Luckily, some warm-hearted women sent me to the nearby hospital.I had bruises on my arms and legs, but my bones were not hurt.The doctor asked me to lie on bed for three days.Therefore, I ask for a sick leave for three days.九、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的英文通知。

明天（星期五）全班同学将去参观科学博物馆（the Science Museum），由你（班长）通知全体同学。（通知的开头和结尾已给出）。具体内容如下：

1．早上8点钟在校门口集合，步行前往；

2．参观时要认真听，仔细看，并记下有趣的东西；

3．不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照；

4．携带钢笔和笔记本；

5．下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。

要求：1.不要逐句翻译；2.词数80个左右。

答案：

Fellow students,

Thank you!

推荐第9篇：英文写作

一、英文简历撰写注意事项:

1.多用无主句

2.年代顺序由近及远

3.单项标题大写

4.纸张一般为16开或a

4二、英文简历的基本内容

1、个人情况：name,

sex,

date

of

birth,

place

of

birth,

permaanent

domicile,

nationality,

martial

status,

children,

religion,

party

affiliation,

health,

height,

weight,

present

addre,

permanent

addre.2、职业意向:objective/or:

position

wanted:

a

position

as

english

instructor,

preferably

handling

students

from

the

intermediate

to

the

advanced

levels

3、资历:

qualifications:

bachelor

of

arts

in

busine

administration,

major

in

marketing.4、经历(job

experience）:一般逆序写，英文写作 -- 个人简历。

5/86-12/86

university

of

california

pre,

berkeley,

california

editorial

and

marketing

trainee

5/86-8/86

wyatt

and

duncan

interiors,

berkeley,

california

sales

clerk

5.

文化程度(education):一般逆序写，可以包括主要课程，范文《英文写作 -- 个人简历》。例如：

master

of

science

with

concentration

in

electronics,

maachusetts

institute

of

technology,

from

sept.,1985

to

june,

1987

bechelor

of

science

beijing

university,

department

of

electrical

engineering,

from

sept.,1981

to

july,

1985

6.技术资历与特长(technical

qualifications/

special

skills)

7.著作及专利(publications

and

patents)

8.社会活动(social

activity)

9.荣誉与奖励(honours

and

awards)

10.爱好及兴趣(hobbies

and

interests)

11.证明人(references)

来源:才思论文网

推荐第10篇：9月统考英语B英文写作

英文写作

英文信件

你的朋友邀清你参加他的生日聚会,告诉对方你不能接收他的邀清。应包括下列内容: 1 ) 告诉对方你不能接收他的邀请。 2) 感谢对方的邀清。 3)说明无法接收的原因。 Dear William,, Thank you so much for your invitation to your birthday party this Sunday evening.l\'d love to come, but l am afraid l cannot make it.l will leave for Beijing on a busine trip the day after tomorrow.And l will have to stay in Beijing for several days.Sol am afraid l will not be able to come back until next Monday.Please say hi to all our friends.l wish you all a good time! Happy Birthday! All the best, Jim

英文通知(见Writing25)

明天(星期五)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆(the Science Museum) ,由你(班长)通知全体同学。

(通知的开头与结尾已给出)。具体内容如下:

1)早上8点钟在校门口集合,步行前往。

2)参观时要认真听、仔细看,并记下有趣的东西。 3)不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照。 Fellow students, How is everything going with you today? l\'m writing to inform you that Tomorrow (that is, on Friday) our cla are going to pay a visit to the Science Museum.First we are to gather together at the school

gate at eight o\'clock tomorrow morning,,and then we walk to the museum.During the visit, we should listen attentively, look carefully, and write down the interesting things.We are not supposed to speak loudly or take photos in the museum.Thank you!

寻物启事

假如你是李明,遗失了一本书。 列内容: 1)书在哪里遗失的。 2)这本书对你很重要。 3)拾到者应如何与你联系。

应包括下

Dear all,,l lost a book in the claroom yesterday evening.The book is This ls English(4).l forgot to take it with me after cla.But when I returned to look for it this

morning, l could not find it.Since this is a course book, it is very important to me.lf anyone happened to pick it up, please call me at13123456789, or send an

email to abc@126.com, so that I can get it back as soon as poible.Thank you very much.

介绍你的一位老师;喜欢这位老师的理由;题目为 My Teacher

It is well known that a teacher is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite teacher is my English teacher.There are many reasons to like my English teacher.First, l can learn English with her.Second, she knows about cultures in the world.Third, she enlarges my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a good teacher.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can have a good teacher.题目: My View on Luck 1 ) 一些人把成功归功于运气。

2) 另一些人把运气看作是努力的结果。

Different people have different views on luck.Some people think that luck is more important.They point out that it is very important in our succe.For example,,you cannot succeed without any good luck.0n the other hand, other people hold the view that working hard is more important.They think that it is impoible to succeed without working hard.As far as l am concerned, l think working hard is more important than luck.So l think we should spend more time think we should spend more time 题目: A Letter to A Foreign Friend你的以为外国朋友来信,打算到中国旅游。你给他回信,提出旅游建议。 Dear Sam, l have just received your letter and know that you are going to come to China for a visit.l am really excited by it.You know l mi you so much.in your letter, you mentioned your travel plan.l advise you to go to Beijing and Xi\'an.There are many royal buildings in Beijing like the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace.Xi\'an is typical of old China.There are lots of historical buildings there, especially those of Qin Dynasty.l hope you will enjoy your stay in China.I am looking forward to your coming.Yours, John 题目: My Activities in Lei sure Time 1)你业余时间的娱乐活动有哪些? 2)描述期中一项业余活动。

lt is well known that activity in leisure time is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite activity is reading English books.There are many reasons to read English books.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have activities in our leisure time.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can enjoy colorful life.l wish everyone can enjoy 题目: My Favorite Means of Getting lnformation 1 ) 列举现代社会获取信息的方式 )你最喜欢的获取信息的方式

lt is well known that getting information is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite means of getting information is reading English books.There are many reasons to read English books.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to get information.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone has their own means of getting everyone has their own means of getting information 题目: Physical Exercise 1 ) 从事体育运动有哪些好处。 )你常做的体育运动。

lt is well known that physical exercise is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite physical exercise is playing basketball.There are many reasons to do physical exercise.First,you can become stronger.Second, you will have fun.Third, you can make new friends.Above all, it is very important for us to do physical exercise.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone enjoys physical exercise 题目: Which is More Important, Healthy or Wealth? 1 ) 介绍你对健康和财富的看法。

Different people have different views on health and wealth.Some people think that health is more important.They point out that it is very important in our life.For example, you cannot enjoy life when you are ill.0n the other hand, other people hold the view that wealth is more important.They think that it is impoible to enjoy life without enough money.as far as l am concerned, l think health is more important than wealth.Sol think we should spend more time keeping us healthy 题目: How to Learn English Well 要求:1 .学习方法对英语学习的重要性

It is well known that learning English is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.l have my own way of learning English.There are many ways to learn English.First,you must listen to English radio every morning.Second,you should read English books every day.Third, you should watch English TV every evening.Above all, it is very important for us to leam English.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can learn English well 题目: My Favorite TV Program 1 .介绍你最喜欢的电视节目 2.说明为什么喜欢这个节目

lt is well known that TV program is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite TV program is English TV programs.There are many reasons to watch English TV programs.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to watch TV program.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone enjoys his favorite TV program 题目: Television 1.列举电视的优点 2.2.列举电视的缺点

It is well known that TV is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite TV program is English TV programs.There are many reasons to watch English TV programs.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to watch TV program.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone enjoys his favorite TV program 题目: My Best Friend 1.介绍你的一位好朋友; 2.描述你们的友谊

lt is well known that a friend is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite friend is my English teacher.There are many reasons to like my English teacher.First, l can learn English with her.Second, she knows about cultures in the world.Third, she enlarges my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a good friend.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can have a good friend 题目: A Thank You Note 提示:你应邀到一位好友家吃晩饭,事后给他写信表示谢意。 你的信应包括下列内容:.表达谢意2.表达想回请的意愿

Dear Amy: Thanks for your invitation to your home last night.I enjoyed the food very much.l will hold a small party to celebrate my birthday on November12th, and l will invite a lot of friends to have dinner at my home.Would youlike to join us? 0h,, there will also be a band to perform live music.l think it will be exciting to dance with the live music.Please be sure to come.l am looking forward to your coming.Yours Mary 题目: Honesty is the Best Policy(诚实乃上策) lt is well known that honesty is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.l think honesty is the best policy.There are many reasons to be honesty.First, you can make more true friends.Second, you can learn more from others.Third,you can be more succeful in your work.Above all, it is very important for us to be honesty.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can be Honesty.题目: My Favorite Sport .你特别喜欢的运动

it is well known that sport is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite sport is playing basketball.There are many reasons to play basketball.First,you can become stronger if you play every day.Second,,you will have fun.Third, you can make new friends.above all, it is very important for us to do sports.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone enjoys playing basketball.题目: The Job l Like 1.你喜欢的工作

it is well known that a job is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite job is becoming an English teacher.There are many reasons l want to become an English teacher.First, l can always learn English.Second, l can know about cultures in the world.Third, l will enlarge my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a job we like.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can enjoy his job 题目: My Favorite Food 1.你特别喜欢的食物

lt is well known that food is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite food is apples.There are many reasons l like apples.First, it is very healthy to eat an apple every day.Second, it is easy to find apples anytime.Third, it is very cheap to buy.题目: Why l Study English? 1 .你学习英语的主要原因

It is well known that studying English is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.l have my own reasons to study English.There are many reasons l study English.First, l can talk to more friends from other places.Second, l can know about cultures in the world.Third, l will enlarge my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to study English.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can study English well.题目: The Chinese New Year 1.简単介绍中国新年(春节) Spring festival is the most important festival for Chinese people.Many people will do many things in the spring festival.Now this is my plan for the spring festival.The first, l will visit my friends and my brothers and sisters.The second, l will watch some movies and TV shows.The third, l will stay with my parents.This is my plan for the spring festival.l hope all of you have a good time in the spring festival.

题目: Where to live? 1.有人喜欢住在城市 2.有人喜欢住在农村

Different people have different views on the city life and country life.Some people

Think that city is a better place to live.For example, you can buy food and go to cinema.0n the other hand, other people hold the view that country is a better place to live.They think that it is impoible to enjoy life in a busy city.l think city is a better place to live than countryside.Sol think we should spend more time making our city more beautiful 题目: The Book l Like Best 1.你最喜欢哪本书

lt is well known that a book is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite book is English book.There are many reasons to read English books.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge..Above all, it is very important for us to read books.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone enjoys a good book.谈观点

题目: TV Ads 要求:1.电视广告的优缺点 2.介绍一个你喜欢的电视广告、

Different people have different views on TV ads.Some people thinkthat TV ads is good.They can\'tlive without it.For example, you can know about many new things.0n the other hand, other people hold the view that TV ads is not good.They think that it is a waste of time to watch TV ads. l thinkTV ads is good in our modern life.Sol thinkwe should spend more time getting information from TV ads.写通知

提示:明天(星期五)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆(the Science Museum) ,由你(班长)通知全体同学。通知的开头和结尾已给出。具体内容如下:1.早上八点钟在校门口集合,步行前往 2.参观时要认真听,仔细看,并记下有趣的东西 3.不可以在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照

要求:1.不要逐句翻译 2.词数80个左右 Fellow students,, How is everything going with you today? I\'m writing to inform you that Tomorrow (that is, on Friday) our cla are going pay a visit to the Science Museum.First we are to gather together at the school gate at eight o\'clock tomorrow morning,,and then we walk to the museum.During the visit, we should listen attentively, look carefully, and write down the interesting things.We are not supposed to speak loudly ortake photos in the museum.Thank you! 谈原因

题目: My Mother 要求: 1.介绍你的母亲; 2.描述一件母亲做过的事情和你对此的感受

lt is well known that a mother is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My mother is an English teacher.There are many reasons I love my mother.First, I can learn English with her.Second, she knows about cultures in the world.Third, she enlarges my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a good mother.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can have a good mother.谈观点

题目: Money is Not Everything

要求:1 .你对“金钱不是一切\"的看法 2.举例说明你的看法

Different people have different views on money.Some people think that money is everything.They can\'t live without it.For example, you can go to a good school and live in a big house.0n the other hand, other people hold the view that money is not everything.They think that love and health are more important than money.I think money is not everything in our modern life.Sol think we should spend more money on something meaningful.谈原因

题目: My Colleague/Clamate

要求: 1.介绍你的一位同事或同学 2.你的这位同事或同学有什么特点

It is well known that a clamate is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My clamate now is an English teacher.There are many reasons I like my clamate.First, l can learn English with her.Second, she knows about cultures in the world.Third, she enlarges my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a good clamate.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.I wish everyone can have a good clamate.清假条

提示:假如你叫张琳,你昨天(4月7日)在放学回家的路上发生了交通事故。 你从自行车上摔了下来,被好心人及时送到了医院,医生叫你卧床休息三天,特此清假 Asking for a Sick Leave Dear Mi Zhang, l\'m sorry to tell you that l was caught in a traffic accident on the way home from school yesterday(that is, April 7) .l fell off the bike and was sent to hospital in time by some kind-hearted people.Nowl\'m not feeling well and l\'ve got a bad headache.The doctor told me to stay in bed for three days.Sol ask you for a sick leave.l hope l\'ll be all right and go back to school next Friday.Thank you.Yours, Zhanglin 题目: My Dream 1.你的梦想是什么2.如何实现你的梦想

lt is well known that a dream is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My dream is becoming an English teacher.There are many reasons l want to become an English teacher.First, l can always learn English.Second, l can know about cultures in the world.Third, l will enlarge my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a dream.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish have everyone can enjoy his dream.提示:假如你叫李华,你的同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是学生要不要参加体育锻炼。情根据下面所提供的信息,给某英语报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况

60%的学生:1 .应该每天进行体育锻炼2.做早操,打乒乓,打篮球,但时间不要 Dear Editor, I\'m writing to tell you about a discuion we\'ve had about whether the students should take physical exercise.60% of the students think that students should take physical exercise every day but should not take too much time.For example, every day they can spend one or two hours doing morning exercise,playing table tennis or playing basketball.Doing exercise can enhance the students\' physical fitne and reduce diseases.However, 40% of the students believe that doing physical exercise is a waste of time, and it easily makes one feel tired or sometimes make one too excited to concentrate on learning.Dear Editor, what do you think of the students\' taking physical exercise? I\'m looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours, LiHua 题目: My Father 要求: 1.介绍你的父亲

2.描述一件父亲做过的事情和你对此的感受

It is well known that a father is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My mother is an English teacher.There are many reasons l love my father.First, l can learn English with her.Second,he knows about cultures in the world.Third, he enlarges my knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to have a good father.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.l wish everyone can have a good father 题目: Newspapers 1.介绍你熟悉的报纸

2.介绍你喜欢看的报纸并说明理由

It is well known that newspaper is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite newspaper is English newspaper.There are many reasons to read English newspaper.First,you can learn English.Second,you can know about cultures in the world.Third, you will enlarge your knowledge.Above all, it is very important for us to read English newspaper.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.I wish everyone enjoys English newspaper.题目: My Interests 1.你的主要兴趣要好 2.描述其中一项兴趣要好

It is well known that interest is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.My favorite interest is playing basketball.There are many reasons to play basketball.First,you can become stronger ifyou play every day.Second,you will have fun.Third, you can make new friends.Above all, it is very important for us to do sports.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.I wish everyone enjoy his interests.题目: How to Overcome Difficulties in My English Studies 1 .你在英语学习中遇到过的困难.2你如何克服这些困难的

It is well known that overcoming difficulties in English studies is very important in our life.Nobody can live without it.l have my own way of overcoming difficulties in English studies.There are many ways to overcome difficulties in English studies.First,you must listen to English radio every morning.Second,you should read English books every day.Third, you should watch English TV every evening.Above all, it is very important for us to overcome difficulties in English studies.Only in this way can you have a happy and colorful life.I wish everyone can overcome difficulties in English studies.

第11篇：英语写作指导 英文感谢信（推荐）

• • • • 如何写感谢信

Thankyou letter 写作感谢信时，一定要言语真切，切忌夸夸其谈，华而不实。否则只会令人反感。此外，感谢信一定要写得及时，让对方感受到你的感激之情。

开头段表明写作意图，向对方表示诚挚的谢意。I am writing to expre my thanks to you for …

主体段高度评价对方的帮助，列举为何对对方心存感激。一定要提及感谢的具体原因及内容。千万不要只是一味地感谢，而不道明需要感谢的理由。还可简明扼要地说明对方提供的帮助对你所起到的作用。 或是从另外一个方面，如果没有别人的帮助会怎么样 if there was not you help …

结尾段再次表达谢意，表达自己希望回报的意图，并向对方送上良好祝愿。

实用例句

1.Thank you for all your kindne and support during my trip/.journey 感谢您在我旅行期间对我的关照。

2.It was indeed a pleasure to have dinner with you.（确实 实在是 ） 与您一起共进晚餐着实是我的荣幸。 Deed 行为 作为 3.Many thanks for your warm hospitality.

非常感谢您的盛情款待。

4.I’d like to thank you for the wonderful dinner you gave us today.非常感谢你今天以丰盛的晚餐款待我们。

5.Thank you for your kind cooperation during these years.感谢您在这些年里的友好合作。

6.I hope we will have a chance/opportunity for further cooperation.希望我们有机会展开更深入的合作。

实用例句

7.I really don’t know how I can thank you enough.

我真不知该怎样感谢你。

8.Thank you very much from the bottom of my heart.从心底 我由衷地感激您。

9.If I can in any way return the favor, it will give me great pleasure to do so.如果我能做点什么来报答您的话，我非常乐意。

10.Thank you for the present.It’s just what I wanted.谢谢您的礼物，这正是我想要的。

11.I don’t know how to thank you for such a beautiful flower.真不知道要如何谢谢你送我这么漂亮的花。

12.Thank you for your help, I’ll definitely do something in return.• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •

• 谢谢你的帮忙，我一定会回报您的。

My sense of appreciate is beyond my word .我对你的感激超出语言所能表达 Ican’t expre my thanks too much .再怎么感谢你也不为过 My appreciate is more than I can say .It would be much harder without your general help.如果不是你无私的帮助这件事会困难的多 I am excited to find that there live a potential about our further cooperation .

第12篇：英语四级英文书信写作要领

英语四级英文书信写作要领

一、英文书信的结构

二、书信作文的出题形式和写作要领

三、书信作文练习及其参考范文

书信是重要的交际工具。英文书信分为两大类：公务信件和私人信件。公务信件是单位与单位或单位与个人之间来往的书信，可能是推荐信、求职信、入学申请书、邀请信，或询问、答复、反映意见（如投诉信）等的信件。私人信件是指亲戚朋友之间的通信。这两类书信各有自己的格式。一般说来，私人信件不拘形式，信文多用手写，也可打印；公务信件要求比较严格，必须遵循一定的格式，信文一定要打印。

第一节 英文书信的结构

英文书信一般由以下六部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名。

1.1 信头（Heading）

信头是指发信人的地址和日期，通常写在第一页的右上角。行首可以齐头写，也可以逐行缩进写。地址的书写顺序由小到大：门牌号、街道、城市、省（州）、邮编、国名，最后写发信日期。私人信件一般只写寄信日期即可。例如：

123 Tianhe Road

Tianhe District

Guangzhou 510620

Guangdong Province

P.R.C.March 15, 200

2.1.2 信内地址（Inside Addre）

信内地址要写收信人的姓名和地址。在公务信件中要写明这一项，在私人信件中，这一项常常省略。该项写在写信日期下一行的左上角，格式与寄信人地址一样。

1.3 称呼（Salutation）

称呼是对收信人的称谓，应与左边线对齐，写在收信人姓名、地址下面1-2行处。在称呼后，英国人常用逗号，美国人则常用冒号。在私人信件中可直呼收信人的名字，但公务信件中一定要写收信人的姓。大部分信件在称呼前加“Dear”。如：

Dear Profeor/Prof.Bergen:

Dear Dr.Johnson,

对不相识的人可按性别称呼：

Dear Sir: 或Dear Madam: Dear Ladies。

如果不知收信人的性别则可用Dear Sir or Madam:

5.1.4 正文（Body of Letter）

正文是书信的主体。与中文信件不同的是，英文书信的正文的开头不是先写一些问候语，再阐明写信的目的，而是直接说明写信人的身份及写信的目的，然后提出写信人的情况、想法或要求，并加以必要的解释或说明。英文书信陈述目的时，应该直截了当，意思明确，层次清楚，言简意赅。

书信正文的第一句话或第一段，通常被称为起首语。一般说来，人们习惯用一些客套的写法作为书信正文的起始，即先将对方来信的日期、主题加以简单描述，以便使对方一看便知该信是回答哪一封信的。如果是第一次给别人写信，也可用开头语作必要的自我介绍，并表明自己写信的主要目的。

5.1.5 结尾礼词（Complimentary Close）

公务信件的结尾礼词包含两部分：发信人的结尾套语与署名。结尾套语写在签名上面一行，第一个字母要大写，套语结尾后面要加逗号。在公务信件中，发信人常用的结尾套语有：

Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Respectfully yours, Cordially yours, Yours cordially等。

私人信件中，发信人常用的结尾套语有：

Sincerely yours, Lovely yours, Your lovely, Your loving son/daughter等。

5.1.6 签名（Signature）

写信人的签名常位于结尾礼词正下方一二行。除非是给很熟悉的人写信，签名一般须写出全名。签名常常较潦草，不易辨认，因此在签名的正下方须打印出全名。

第二节 书信作文的出题形式和写作要领

1990年到2002年1月之间的四级考试作文题中，书信作文共出现两次（2001年6月和2002年1月）。下面，我们先来看看2001年6月四级考试的作文题：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestion given below in Chinese:

1.表示欢迎

2.提出对度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 23, 200

1Dear Xiao Wang,

________________

________________

________________.Yours,

Zhang Ying

从上面的例子可见，书信作文不仅给出正文部分的内容的提纲，而且还给出书信各部分的结构的框架。也就是说，我们只要考虑如何表达提纲部分的内容，而不用考虑书信的结构。

在写书信作文时，首先要把书信正文的提纲内容细化，扩展成更细的英文提纲，然后用简洁、明了、礼貌、正确和得体的语言表达出细化了的提纲内容。例如前面的那封信就可以列出下面的提纲：

Topic: A Letter to a SchoolmateQuestion: What are the holiday arrangements and points for attention?

Outline:I.Extending my welcomeII.Holiday schedule1.1st day – campus2.2nd day – the art gallery & music hall3.3rd day – mountain climbing4.next 3 days – other places of interest (Swan Cave, Golden Lake „)5.Last day -- departureIII.Points for attention1.Train number & time of arrival2.SunglaesIV.Looking forward to seeing you.Introduction Body 1Body 2Conclusion

范文：

A Letter to A Schoolmate

June 23, 200

1Dear Xiao Wang,

I’m very glad to learn that you’re going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I have arranged our schedule for the holiday as follows.On the first day you arrive, I’ll show you around our campus.On the second day, we’ll visit the art gallery and the music hall.Next day, we’ll climb a hill in the northeastern part of the city.On the top of the hill, we can have a wonderful bird’s eye view of the city.During the next three days, we’ll make some short trips to some places of interest nearby, such as the Swan Cave, the Golden Lake, etc.On the last day, I’ll see you off at the railway station.

Please remember to call and tell me your train number and time of arrival so that I can meet you at the railway station.By the way, it’s very hot here and we have a lot of sunshine, so don’t forget to wear you sunglaes.

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Zhang Ying

写信日期称呼正文第一段：表示欢迎正文第2段：活动安排第一天的安排第二天的安排第三天的安排第4-6天的安排第七天：送行正文第三段（注意事项）： 注意事项一注意事项二结束语结尾礼词签名

上面举的是私人信件的例子，下面我们再来看一封投诉信（Letter of Complaint）。

投诉信的目的是为了让收信人读信后同情你的遭遇,解决你所遇到的问题。所以写投诉信时应该实事求是地反映情况，注意措辞，不使用过多的讽刺或责备的语言，也不要因为发泄怒气而离题，以避免引起收信人的不信任或反感。

一般而言，投诉信包括以下内容：提出要求和理由；解释详细的情况；把请求具体化以及希望收信人采取行动的日期等。例如：

September 1, 2001

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to complain about a typewriter I bought seven months ago.

In February of 2001 I bought a Jones Typewriter, Portable Special Model, at ABC Store, I had used it only a few days when the space bar broke.

I took it to a local shop, they told me it was factory defect and suggest I take it back to ABC.ABC accepted the machine and sent the part in.I waited three months, and since your company did not send a replacement , they let me have the space bar from another typewriter.

Now, six months later, it has broken again.I took it back to ABC.They are no longer carrying your typewriter, but they aured me that the guarantee is still good and suggested that I write you for further instructions as to what steps to take.

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us on this matter.

Respectfully,

(Signature)

James Bergen

写信日期 称呼正文第一段：表明写信的目的正文第二段：具体说明购买产品的时间、地点及出现的问题第三段：说明尝试的解决方法 第四段：说明尝试的解决方案无效，请求帮助结尾礼词签名打印的姓

名

这是一封态度冷静、措辞有理、有节的投诉售后服务不周的信。由于这类信涉及经销商（厂家）和卖方，因此，投诉信中写明了以下详细的情况：

1） 购物的时间：In February of 2001

2） 购物地点： at ABC Store

3） 产品型号：Jones Typewriter, Portable Special Model

4） 使用时间：I had used it only a few days；six months later

5） 主要问题：The space bar broke

6） 产生问题的原因：factory defect

7） 为什么向你方反映：

They are no longer carrying your typewriter, but they aured us that the guarantee is still good and suggested that I write you for further instructions as to what steps to take.(商店已没有贵公司的打字机，但他们让我相信，保修卡仍有效，并建议我写信给贵公司以寻求解决办法)

此外，写信人还用了礼貌的结束语：

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us on this matter.(贵公司在这件事上给我的任何帮助都将令我不胜感激)

小结：1）英文书信的结构；2）书信作文的出题形式；3）书信作文的写作要领。

1． 书信开头常用语：

Thank you for your letter of April.I was glad to receive your letter of May 4.

I am very glad to have received a letter from you.Many thanks for your last kind letter.

Your kind letter gives me much pleasure.

I venture to inform ( tell, notify ) you that……I have the pleasure (honor) to inform ( tell, notify ) you that…

In answer to your kind letter of March 15, ……

I must apologize for my delay in answering your kind letter.

I must apologize for not writing to you so long.

I have just this moment received your letter and I am writing at once because……

Thank you so much for answering my letter so quickly.

I am sorry it has taken me a long time to replay to your last letter, but……

What a surprise it was to get a letter from you after all this time.

How nice it was to hear from you at last!You will be very glad to hear that……

What great delight I learned that……Your letter of Saturday arrived this morning.

I have not heard from you so long, and I feel anxious……

2． 书信结尾常用语：

正文提供信息后的结尾：

I hope this information will help you.Please feel free to contact me for more information.I trust these suggestions will be useful.Please let me know if I can help any further.正文投诉的结尾：

I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.We expect to receive your reply very soon.Thank you for your attention to this matter.I look forward to your prompt response.

表示歉意的结尾：

Once again, I am sorry for any inconveniences caused.Please accept my apologies once more.

致谢信的结尾：

Thank again you for your help.Thank you again for your aistance.

Thank you in advance.

结尾盼望回信：

I would appreciate it if you contact me as soon as poible.Trusting that I may hear from you soon

I look forward to our next meeting.You kind early reply will be appreciated.

Please do not fail to write to me.I shall anxiously await your reply.

表示祝愿的结尾：

All my best wishes for your futureI wish you every succe in the coming year.Hoping you are enjoying good health.May God ble you and your family

With best wishes for your succe and happine/ your progre in studies

With kind regards to your parents/ familyWith love and good wishes

All the luck in the world to your family.

练习：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Jill.Write a letter to your friend Li Fang.You should write at least 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

假设你的好朋友李芳是大学四年级学生，正在考虑是考研究生继续深造还是大学毕业后就踏上工作岗位。请给她写封信表明你的意见。

第13篇：写作素材人物

2018高考写作最鲜素材之17年度人物

▼黄大年 科学无国界，科学家却有自己的祖国，祖国高于一切。黄大年带着“一定要回来”的信念，放弃英国伦敦的高级别墅，以及同妻子共同购置的两个诊所，毅然回国。

为了实现我国在30年到50年内在航空地球物理领域领跑世界的目标，他冲锋在前，从零开始，带领科研团队自己制作具有自主知识产权的仪器装备，科研成果填补了多项国内空白，为我国深地资源探测和国防安全建设作出了突出贡献，可谓居功至伟。

作为海外生活多年的科学家，黄大年有着心有大我、至诚报国的爱国情怀；作为老师，他有着教书育人、敢为人先的敬业精神；作为共产党员，他还有着淡泊名利、甘于奉献的高尚情操。

▼南仁东

“人是要做一点事情的。”这是南仁东生前常说的话。为了给“中国天眼”——500米口径球面射电望远镜FAST找到性价比最高的台址，他拄着竹竿翻山越岭，几乎踏遍了贵州大山里的所有洼地，这一找就是12年。从选址到项目启动再到设备启用，“天眼”是南仁东最大的牵挂，直到逝世前几个月，他仍在坚持参加FAST的工程例会。

而今，将青丝熬成白发的“天眼之父”永远地闭上了双眼，但他倾尽毕生心血的“中国天眼”正屹立在祖国西南，睁大眼睛望向人类未知的浩渺宇宙。

▼吴文俊

国际数学界不乏年少成名的奇才，但很少有人能时隔数十年再创辉煌，更罕有人能在晚年开宗立派，劈开一个世界前沿的全新领域。吴文俊做到了！

而立之年负笈海外，他引发了拓扑学的“地震”，“吴公式”为现代数学武器库再添神兵；花甲之年躬耕中土，他开拓了数学机械化的新领域，“吴方法”为人工智能走出低谷点燃了指路明灯。

吴文俊用98载光阴，书写了一段享誉世界的中国数学家传奇。 ▼廖波

廖俊波担任政和县委书记只有4年，短短数年，他带来了看得见的变化。2011年，廖俊波仅任职1年，政和县在福建省县域经济中的排名就提升35位。

在群众眼中，廖俊波是那个随身带着各种图纸的“一线总指挥”；是平易近人、一视同仁、真诚待人的老大哥；是时刻把群众的事挂在心上、能同大伙坐一条板凳的自家人。政和人绵延的思念，诠释了廖俊波的“无憾人生”。

▼朱英国

半个世纪以来，朱英国院士像一只“水稻候鸟”一样不知疲倦地奔波在田间地头。秋风乍起，他奔赴广西；寒冬来临，他又转战海南岛；次年春天，他才揣着希望的种子返回湖北。一年又一年，朱英国马不停蹄地追逐田野的春天。

如今，这只“候鸟”静静地停下了脚步，永远告别了他所挚爱的杂交水稻事业。先生虽逝，风骨永存。

▼姜妍

压缩机是乙烯生产设备的“心脏”，有着“压缩机一响，黄金万两；压缩机一停，效益为零”的说法。在西方跨国垄断巨头的眼里，大型乙烯压缩机是他们怀里的宝贝，是国家间较量的砝码，核心技术一直秘不外宣。

外表看似柔弱的姜妍，却成为打破外国垄断的“终结者”，她不仅主导设计了我国第一台乙烯压缩机，还是我国百万吨乙烯压缩机设计第一人，使我国成为世界上第四个具有百万吨级乙烯“三机”设计制造能力的国家，彻底终结了我国乙烯压缩机长期依赖进口的局面，奏响了“大国重器”绝不假手于人的科技强音。

▼何刚

为一位农民举办追思会，这在故宫博物院的历史上还是头一回。这位农民叫何刚，名字听上去是那样的普通，但他将自己在家中发现的19件文物全部上交国家，这位普通的河南农民身上闪耀着令人折服的人性光辉。

22年前，何刚挖到的那堆“宝贝”中有二级甲文物1件，二级乙文物11件，三级文物5件，一般文物2件。在一些人眼中，何刚一定会留一部分文物用来“生财”，于是曾有文物贩子拎着一袋子钱“登门拜访”。但家境困难的何刚却始终不为所动，先后3次往返故宫博物院，将文物全部交出。也曾有个别乡亲觉得何刚太“傻”，但何刚却说：“文物全部上交了，我心里就踏实了。”

▼李浩

48岁，是空军战斗机飞行员的最高飞行年限。在即将到龄的“老飞”李浩心中，却多么希望时间过得慢一些、再慢一些。他并非觉得军旅生涯留有缺憾，1次二等功、2次三等功足以为他的飞行员生涯画上圆满句号；他也并非为日后的生计发愁，飞过6种有人机机型、安全飞行3000多个小时，拿着这样漂亮的“成绩单”，他可以轻易找一份高薪工作。只不过，李浩最放不下的还是那些陪伴他的“战鹰”，最痛苦的还是再也不能刺破苍穹、鹰击长空。

因此，当2010年李浩听闻空军组建无人机部队时，他不问待遇、不问去哪，只有眼中闪烁的兴奋，只有心中无比的喜悦。7年来，李浩在人民空军无人机事业的发展上没有半点停歇，他的飞行航迹也在不断延伸。

▼黄大发

在贵州遵义平正仡佬族乡，有一条绕过了三重大山，穿过了三道绝壁，绵延数公里的人工渠，当地人称之为“大发渠”。自20世纪60年代起，黄大发作为村大队长，带领着200多名群众，历时30余年，靠着锄头、钢钎、铁锤和双手，硬生生在绝壁上凿出一条长9400米、地跨3个村的“生命渠”，结束了当地长期缺水的历史。

除了修渠，几十年来，黄大发还带领当地群众修村路、架电线、“坡改梯”、建学校，改变了当地贫穷落后的面貌，用实际行动践行了新时期愚公移山精神。“大发渠”，犹如一条系在悬崖绝壁上的玉带，汩汩清泉从中顺流而过，滋养着沿线的父老乡亲，也见证着小小村庄脱贫致富的点点滴滴。

▼图布巴图

一个人退休了会做什么？可能有人会回答“休息”“旅行”。但如果你要把问题抛给图布巴图，他只会回答两个字：“还账！”用图布巴图的话说，过去自己忙着抓牧业税入库，忙着伐木烧炭、粮食自给，欠下了不少生态“账”。退休后，他便把植树治沙作为自己人生“下半场”的唯一选择。

辽阔阿拉善，茫茫戈壁滩。15年来，每年一到春天，在阿拉善盟额济纳旗巴丹吉林沙漠边缘，人们总能看到图布巴图和他的老伴身背水壶、手拿铁锹、埋头苦干的身影。15年来，图布巴图给戈壁“绣”上了5万多株植物。

第14篇：高考英语写作教案

高考英语写作讲义

-------张雄

Part 1

高考英语写作模板句型

（一）段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest

that ____.

2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，

it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____

Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.

4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.

Besides，______.

5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both

advantages and disadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say

that ______.To them,_____.

7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more

serious.

8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young

and heated debates are right on their way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it

has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as

well.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar

graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while.Obviously，______，but

why?

（二）中间段落句

1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they

say____.

2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst

of all，___.

3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is neceary and important to our country"s development and

construction.First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can______

5.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures

to______.For one thing，______For another，______

6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it.For example._____.In

addition._____.All these measures will certainly______.

7.为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is

______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to

______.

8.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has

its own disadvantages, such as ______.

9.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonethele, I believe that ______is more advantageous.

10.完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

（三）结尾句

1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think

that ____.

2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

But ______and ______have their own advantages.For example, _____,

while_____.Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright

future is awaiting us because______.

5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and neceary to

____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be

better and better.

6.至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to_____.Only in this way can you _____.

7.对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it neceary to____.The reasons are as follows.First

_____.Second ______.Last but not least,______.

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very

much on the situation of______.However, from a personal point of view

find______.

9.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discued above, we may reasonably arrive at the

conclusion that____.

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some

undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

Part 2

高考英语写作模板文体

对比观点题型

（1）

要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．

有一些人认为。。。 2．

另一些人认为。。。 3．

我的看法。。。

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.

There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They

hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more,

③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.

Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由

二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨

--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain

my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

（2）

给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②

-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④

-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的

理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对 文章所讨论主题的看法)．

阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． １．

阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． ２．

分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释

义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example, -------------------(举例说明).

Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that ---------------(举例说明).

Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember

the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll

necearily benefit a lot from it.

解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．

问题现状

２．

怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

So we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.First, ---------------(解决方法一).Then-------------(解决方法二).Furthermore, --------------(解决方法三).In my opinion, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法).Finally, I think that a bright future is coming soon because --------------(带来的好处).

说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１．

说明事物现状

２．

事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） ３．

你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)

议论文的框架

(1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）

There is a widespread concern over the iue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.

（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the iue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

( 3 ) 答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the iue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to succe of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.

Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.

( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.( also theoretically )

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.

With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..

图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.实用性写作（申请信 )

Your addre

Month, Date, year Receiver’s addre Dear ..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in ....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.

.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand, ....On the other hand, ....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.

I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and succe.

Sincerely yours,

X X X 现象说明文

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.

《范文》

一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向）

关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。

给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了（这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡） 。（举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。

One object or phenomenon (negative significance inclination.) A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.

Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….

A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The eence of these wrong actions is:

(1) to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;

(2) to adopt improper means to win more rewards with le input.

Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be lo of really important and valuable resource or ability.

We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.

Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the eence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.

Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively eliminate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.

Part 3

高考英语名言

1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

3.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。

4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。

5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。

6.Slow and steady wins the race.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。

7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。

8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。

9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。

11.More hasty,le speed.欲速则不达。

12.Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。

13.All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。

14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。

15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。

16.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。

17.Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。

18.well begun,half done.好的开始等于成功的一半。

19.It is hard to please all.众口难调。

20.Out of sight,out of mind.眼不见，心不念。

21.Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。

22.Call back white and white back.颠倒黑白。

23.First things first.凡事有轻重缓急。

24.Ill news travels fast.坏事传千里。

25.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

26.live not to eat,but eat to live.活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。

27.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。

28.East or west,home is the best.金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。

30.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能当饭吃。

31.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投。

32.The older, the wiser.姜是老的辣。

33.Do as Romans do in Rome.入乡随俗。

34.An idle youth,a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

35.As the tree,so the fruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

36.To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。

Part 4 高考写作常用连接词

1、表示时间的

af first 起初

next 接下来

then 然后

after that 那以后

later 后来

soon 不久

soon/shortly after ……之后不久

finally 最后

in the end 最后

eventually 最终

at last 终于

lately近来 recently 最近

since then 自从那时起

after that 那以后

in no time 不一会儿

after a while 一会儿

afterward 后来

to begin/start with=in the first place 首先、第一点

immediately 立即、马上

meanwhile=in the meantime=at the same time 在此期间、同时

earlier, until now 直到现在

suddenly=all of a sudden 突然

as a young man 当…… 是个年轻人的时候

at the age of… 在……岁的时候

as early as 早……的时候

as soon as 一……就…… before, the other day 几天前

early in the morning 大清早

after/before dark 天黑后/前

one day 有一天

one afternoon 一天下午

one morning 一天早晨

2、表示空间的

to the right/left 朝右/左

on the rinht/left 在右/左边

in the middle of 在中间

in front of 在前面

in the front of 在前面

at the back of 在后面

at the bottom of 在底部

on the edge of 在……的边上

on top of 在……的顶部

opposite to 与……相对

close to 靠近

near to 在……附近

next to 与……相邻

under 垂直在下

over 垂直在上

below 在下方

above 在上方

acro 在……的另一边

around 在周围

behind 在后

before 在前 against 靠着、抵着

further on 再往前

3、表示列举和时序

first, second, third…finally firstly, secondly, thirdly…finally first of all, next then, lastly for one thing…for another… at the same time at first at last

4、表示列举

for example 例如：…… namely 即…… for instance 例如：…… that is (to say) 也就是说

such as 如……

take…for example 拿……来说

like 像……

5、表示比较或对比

like 像

unlike 不像

similarly 同样地 in the same way 以相同的方式

compared to 与……相比

while 而

still=neverthele 然而

on the contrary 正相反

different from 与……不同

on (the) one hand…on the other hand 一方面……另一方面

in contrast with 与……成对比

6、表示增补

and 而且

both…and 不但……而且

not only…but also 不但……而且

as well as 不但……而且

also=besides=furthermore=more over 此外、而且

in addition 并且

apart from 除了……之外

what's more 而且、更重要的

for another 另一方面

worse still=what's worse=to make matter worse 更糟糕的是

including 包括

7、表示因果

because 因为

since 既然

as 由于

now that 既然

therefore 因此

thus 这样

so 所以

as a result (of) 结果

because of=on account of 因为

thanks to 多亏、由于

for this reason 由于这个原因

if so 如果这样

if not 如果不是这样

8、表示目的

for this purpose in order to do so as to do so that… in order that…

9、表示让步

though/although no matter+疑问句

in spite of

whatever/however/whoever even if/ even though

10、表示递进或强调

besides 况且

what's more 更重要地是

thus 这样

above all 首先

indeed 的确

in fact/ as a matter of fact 事实上

in other words 换句话说

in that case 那样的话

or rather 更确切地说

particularly 特别地

11、表示转折

but 但是

still 然而

however 然而

while 而

12、表示总结

in a/one word 简言之、一句话、总之 generally speaking 一般说来

in short=in a few words 简言之

in conclusion=lastly 最后地

on the whole=taking everything into consideration 从总体来看、大体上

so 所以

therefore 因此

thus 这样

as has been mentioned 正如所提到的

it is quite clear that 很显然

there is no doubt that 毫无疑问

it is well-known that 大家都知道

as we all know=as is known to us all 大家都知道

as/so far as I know 据我所知

to sum up=to summarize=in summary 总之

13、表示转折话题

by the way 顺便说

I am afraid 我恐怕

in my opinion 依我看来

to tell the truth 说实话

to be honest 诚实地说 in face 事实上

第15篇：英语写作教案 2

XXXXXX学院教案

2013—2014学年度第一学期

授课课程：英语写作 授课教师：XXXX 授课班级：交流生项目英语强化班

1 授课章节名称 Chapter 1 Using proper words 教学目的与要求 Grasp correct usage of words 教学重点 Diction

教学难点 The ways of distinguishing the levels of words 思考题与作业 Task 1-2 教学内容、设计与时间安排：

I.Teaching method: Discuion and interaction II.Teaching procedures

Step 1.Revision and lead-in 1.Tell the function of the words 2.Discu the synonyms and antonyms Step 2.Presentation: Ⅰ.Types of words

The words that are often used may be divided, from a stylistic point of view, into three types: formal, common, and colloquial Formal words may also be called learned words, or literary words, or bigwords.They mainly appear in formal writing, such as scholarly or theoretical works, political and legal documents, and formal lectures and addrees.Many such words contain three or more than three syllables; most of them are of Greek or Latin origin.They are seldom used in daily conversation, except for special purposes.Ⅱ.Choice of words

The meaning of a word has two aspects: denotative and connotative.A word’s denotation is what it literally means, as defined by the dictionary; its connotation is the feeling or idea suggested by it.For instance, country, nation, state and land have more or le the same denotation and may all be translated into guojia in Chinese, but their connotations are quite different.Country refers to an area of land and its population and government, nation emphasizes the people of a country, state refers to the government or political organization of a country, and land is le precise but more literary and emotive than country.As compared here, these four words may be said to be synonyms.English is particularly rich in synonyms as a result of incorporating words from other languages over the centuries.But we should remember that it is difficult to find two words that are exactly the same in meaning and use.They may be different in stylistic level, in the degree of emphasis, in emotional coloring, in tone, and in collocation.Small and little are often interchangeable, but there is some difference in emotional coloring between them.Small is objective, while little may imply a feeling of fondne.Modest and humble both indicate a lack of pride, but modesty is a virtue and humblene is not.Humble often connotes undue self-depreciation.So they are different in tone: one is laudatory and the other is derogatory.Some synonyms have different collocations: they are habitually used with certain words.Large, not big, for instance, is used to modify nouns like amount, number and quantity (a large amount of money, a large number of people, a large quantity of beer, etc.).Similarly, with nouns denoting personal qualities, such as courage, confidence, ability, and wisdom, not big or large, but great, is commonly used.

Ⅲ.General and specific words and synonyms

Comparatively speaking, some words are more general or more specific in meanin

2 g than others.Profeionals, for instance, is more general than scientists, doctors, teachers, lawyers, journalists, etc.all of which are more specific.But scientists may be called a general word when compared with physicists or chemists, which, in turn, is more general than biochemists.It is easy to see that the specific words on the right are much more concrete and colorful than the general ones on the left; they seem to make the reader see, hear, or feel what the writer wishes to describe.Using specific words should go along with providing details, and then there will be effective and impreive writing.Study the following examples.Ⅳ.Idioms and some phrases

An idiom is a fixed group of words with a special meaning which is different from the meanings of the words that form it.To read a book‖, for instance, is not an idiom, for the meaning of the phrase is the meanings of the three words put together, and ―a book‖ can be replaced by other words like ―a newspaper‖ or ―a novel‖.To ―read between the lines‖ is different.The four words that form the phrase give no hint as to what it means and none of the words can be changed to form another understandable phrase.Idioms are frequently used in speech and writing.They help to make one’s language sound natural and idiomatic.But in using them foreign learners of English should remember the following two points: (1) most idioms are informal or colloquial in style and can be used in conversation; but a few are slang and should be used with care, such as all balled up, meaning troubled or confused, and to cough up, meaning to produce something; (2) many idioms have become clichés and are no longer fresh or interesting, such as armed to the teeth and as good as gold, and should be used sparingly.Step 3.Practice: List some idioms, such as: Practice makes perfect.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.All roads lead to Rome. Step 4.Summary:

1.Make a brief summary of the word usage 2.Summarize the synonyms Step 5.Aignment: Chapter 1 Finish doing the task 1,2 ,3 on p2-14

3 Chapter 2 Making correct and effective sentences 教学目的与要求 Grasp the coordinative and subordinate sentences 教学重点 The ways of making complex sentences in writing 教学难点 The ways of making complex sentences in writing 思考题与作业 Task 1-13 教学内容、设计与时间安排：

I.Teaching method: Discuion and interaction II.Teaching procedures

Step 1.Revision and lead-in

1.Review the ways of complex sentence making

2.Discu the functions of coordination and subordination Step 2.Presentation:

I.coordination and subordination

1.Some sentences follow climactic order, the last word being the most important, and because many words are piled up before the key word, the sense of climax is made very strong.Most of the sentences are compound and compound-complex, and all of them, except the second half of the last sentence, are loose in structure.There is no suspense or climax; the tone is easy, relaxed and informal.The writer uses these loose sentences because he is enumerating facts or ideas of equal importance, and also because he aims at a natural and orderly presentation.Loose sentences are easier, simpler, more natural and direct; periodic sentences are more complex, emphatic, formal, or literary.When a sentence contains two or more chapters of the same form and grammatical function, it is one with parallel constructions: Such parallel sentences are emphatic and forceful.When a sentence contains two parallel clauses similar in structure but contrasted in meaning, it is a balanced sentence.Balanced sentences are impreive because of the contrast, and pleasing to hear because of the rhythm.They are mainly used in formal writing, like expository and argumentative prose, and speeches.2.Figures of speech

There are various ways of using words figuratively.They are called figures of speech.Among the most common of them are: 1.Simile it is a comparison between two distinctly different things and the comparison is indicated by the word as or like: 2.Metaphor it is the use of a word which originally denotes one thing to refer to another with a similar quality.It is also a comparison, but the comparison is implied, not expreed with the word as or like.If Robert burns had written ―0 my loves a red, re rose‖ with the word like omitted, he would have used a metaphor instead of a simile.In the changed line, my love‖ is also compared to a red rose, but there is no word to indicate the comparison; hence rose is a metaphor.

Step 3.Practice: Make some coordinative and subordinate sentences according to the knowledge mentioned above.

Step 4.Summary: 1.Make a brief summary of the ways of making oordinative and subordinate sentences 2.Summarize the contents of this subject

Step 5.Cla writing Exercise: Solar Energy Reference answer: The energy crisis the world is now experiencing has forced scientists to investigate new sources of energy.It is clear that the foil fuel era is gradually coming to an end.Oil and nat

4 ural gas will be depleted first, followed eventually by coal.The need for developing energy alternatives is thus evident. Solar power is receiving wide attention as one of the poible best sources of energy.It has mainly two factors in its favor.Firstly, unlike foil fuels, it is an environmentally clean source of energy.Secondly, it is an abundant and inexhaustible source of energy.However, solar power has its disadvantages.One of them is that large collecting areas are required.The second disadvantage is that this system would not work in a cloudy area as well as at night.However, in sunny area, solar power could help solve the energy crisis.

Step 6.Aignment: Chapter 2 Task1,2 P28-34

授课章节名称 chapter 3 Developing paragraphs

5 教学目的与要求 Grasp the skills of developing paraphs 教学重点 The ways of skillfully using emphatic sentences 教学难点 Grasp the skills of wring effective sentences 思考题与作业 Task 13-20 教案内容：

I.Teaching method: Discuion and interaction II.Teaching procedures

Step 1.Revision and lead-in

1.Review the functions of coordination and subordination 2.Discu the skills of wring effective sentences Step 2.Presentation: Effective Sentences 1.Unity Unity is the first quality of an effective sentence.A unified sentence exprees a single complete thought.It does not contain ideas that are not closely related, nor does it expre a thought that is not complete by itself.2.Coherence Coherence means clear and reasonable connection between chapters, a sentence is coherent when its words or chapters are properly connected and their relationships unmistakably clear.It is not coherent if it has faulty parallel constructions, pronouns with ambiguous reference, dangling or misplaced modifiers, confusing shifts in person and number, or in voice, tense, and mood.Parallel ideas had better be expreed in parallel constructions, which give emphasis, clarity and coherence to a sentence.―what he says‖ and ―his deeds‖ are not parallel in form, so one of them has to be changed.The second sentence is faulty for the same reason and can be improved in the same way.In the third, ―faith‖ and ―hope‖ are parallel, but they should be followed by different prepositions.The three sentences are labeled ―faulty‖ because of the unclear or wrong connection between certain chapters.In the first sentence ―about sportsmen‖ seems to modify ―magazine,‖ but it should modify ―story.‖ In the second the which-clause is related to ―bag‖ but apparently it is meant to modify ―books.‖ In the third ―at first‖ may modify ―mentioned‖ and may also modify ―sounded‖ –an ambiguity that should be cleared up.All the faults are caused by misplaced modifiers.The faulty sentences are not coherent because of a confusing change in person, in number, in mood, and in voice respectively.A sentence should be consistent in these respects.Unneceary shifts should be avoided.3.Concisene

Chapter 7 writing for practical purpose letters

6 教学目的与要求 Grasp the skills of writing personal and busine letters 教学重点 The ways of writing busine letters 教学难点 The ways of writing busine letters 思考题与作业 Task 19-26 教学内容、设计与时间安排： 教案内容：

I.Teaching method: Discuion and interaction II.Teaching procedures

Step 1.Revision and lead-in 1.Review the skills of notices and note writing 2.Discu the skills of writing personal and busine letters Step 2.Presentation: I.Letters

Letters are important means of communication.Generally speaking, there are two types of letters, busine letters and personal letters.… 1.Form A letter has six chapters: the heading, the inside addre, the salutation, the body, the complimentary close, and the signature.(1) The heading The heading gives the full addre of the writer and the date of the letter.… (2) The inside addre The inside addre, which is often omitted in personal letters, gives the name and full addre of the addreee.(3) The salutation The salutation is a greeting to the addreee.It is written flush with the left margin two spaces below the inside addre. (4) The body In the body of the letter, all paragraphs should begin flush with the left margin (the block style) or begin with an equal indention (the indented style), and the letter is usually single-spaced within the paragraph and doubled-spaced between paragraphs.(5) The complimentary close The closing of a busine letter consists of three chapters: complimentary close, signature, and the typed name.In the complimentary close, only the first word is capitalized.…

2.Language

The style and tone of letters can be greatly varied.General speaking, the style and tone of a personal letter differ from those of a busine letter-the former is casual, whereas the latter is formal.… (1) Busine letters 1) Invitation 2) Application for entry to a college 4) Applications for visas (2) Personal letters II..Curriculum Vitae A curriculum vitae(c.v.) or resume is a short written account of the main events of one’s life.It is often required when one applies for a job.… 1.Name; Unlike most Westerners.We Chinese put our family name at the beginning as surname, whereas they put it at the end as last name.… 2.Addre: If you like, you may write both your busine or temporary addre and your home addre for example: … 3.Telephone: (0) or(W) is put after your office telephone number and (H), your home telephone number.4.Marital status: Put single or married(, no/two children).5.Education: schools should be listed either in chronological order (usually starting from the year when you entered college or when you got your first degree) or from the most recent backwards with the dates of attendance.… 6.Profeions/work Experience: Under this heading, in addition to the date, write also your position/title and the name of the institution.For example: … 7.Awards/Honors and scholarships: these include scholarships, fellowships, grants, etc: 8.Publications: Books and articles follow the format of the bibliography card in chapter Eight The Research Paper, with the name of the author omitted.… 9.Profeional Affiliations/Memberships: Examples under this heading are: 10.Lang

7 uages: You may write the following under this heading: 11.References/Referees: They are people who know you and can offer information or recommendation.The normal number of references is two or three, and it is imperative that you obtain their permiion before using their names.In addition to names of your references, provide also their positions, full addrees and telephone numbers.Step 3.Practice:

Discu the method of writing a busine letter with the method mentioned above. Step 4.Summary:

1.Make a brief summary of the ways of letter writing 2.Summarize the contents of this subject Writing exercise: Write a personal letter to your friend (about 200 words) Step 5.Aignment: Chapter 7 Task11-20 p202-216

授课章节名称 Chapter 8 Preparing research papers Steps and formats

8 教学目的与要求 Grasp the methods of writing the research paper 教学重点 The format of research paper 教学难点 The format of research paper 思考题与作业 Task 1-7

教学内容、设计与时间安排、教案内容：

I.Teaching method: Discuion and interaction II.Teaching procedures

Step 1.Revision and lead-in

1.Review the skills of writing personal and busine letters 2.Discu the methods of writing the research paper Step 2.Presentation: I.Definition and Purpose

Having learned how to write eays, we are now working at the highest and the most difficult stage of writing—thesis writing or writing of a research paper.… In the proce of preparing a research paper, we may at least achieve the following: 1) we may learn how to use libraries, how to read books critically and efficiently, and how to use them wisely and correctly. 2) we may familiarize ourselves with the knowledge and mechanics neceary for writing a research paper.

II.Steps

We go through five steps or stages in the proce of preparing a research paper: 1) choosing a topic; 2) collecting information; 3) analyzing the information, organizing ideas, and working out an outline; 1.Choosing a Topic The selection of a topic is the first important step in preparing a research paper.An inappropriate decision about a research topic may lead to the failure of the whole project, or at least a waste of time and energy.… 1) Selecting a general topic 2) Reading and thinking 3) Narrowing down the scope of our topic to a facet or facets which can be developed into a research paper.The following points may be used as a set of criteria for our final topic: (1) It should be a topic that is meaningful and serious.(2) It should be a topic which we are able to handle.(3) It should be a topic for which sufficient materials are available.(4) It should be a topic that can be treated objectively, a topic that does not involve personal likes or dislikes.The following example shows how to restrict the scope and how to work out a suitable topic for a research paper: It should be a topic which we are able to handle.2.Collecting information It is impoible for us to write a paper of some significance without any information, … 1) Using the library A library is a center of information.… Sample 1 About the adventures of march in the title catalogue file, we can find one of more cards for the novel published by different companies and at different times:… 2) Reading Most of the information or raw material for a paper will come from books, … 3) Taking notes While reading, we should take notes because it is almost impoible for us to remember everything we have read and without good notes it is very difficult for us to produce a good research paper.3.Analyzing the information, organizing ideas and working out an outline 1) The thesis statement 2) Outlining

4.Writing The First Draft 1) Using our own words 2 Using the proper tenses

9 3) Uniting facts and views 4) Paying attention to logic and organization 5) Making our tone objective rather than personal 6) Choosing the right style

5.Revising the Draft and Finalizing the Paper III Format

1.components of a paper 1) thesis statement and outline 2) Introduction 3) Body 4) Conclusion 5) In-text notes and works cited

2.Use of Quotations 1) Rules regarding the use of quotations 2) When to use direct quotations 3) How to use direct quotations 3.Use of notes 1) Avoiding plagiarism 2) note forms 3) Notes for supplementary information 4.Works cited 1) The book catalogue 2) Making bibliography 3) Bibliography cards for books Step 3.Practice: Discu the method of writing a research paper with the method mentioned above.Step 4.Summary: 1.Make a brief summary of the ways of research paper writing 2.Summarize the contents of this subject

第16篇：初二英语写作教案

初中英语写作教案

一． 步骤

1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；

4 复查：看查拼写、语法、标点等问题，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 1.动笔之前，认真审题

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.围绕中心，拟定提纲

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

3.中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。

因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： (1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。

(6) 人称是否用错。

二．作文一般框架：文章分3段：

（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；

（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方面，每个方面最多2句话；

（3） 结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。 三．技巧

1.上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。 2.不会表达时 (1) 迂回而行 当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。 (2) 小词大用

汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 (3) 借花献佛

有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。 注意事项

1.时态一致

必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事，就要保证通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样，如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时

Yesterday I did my homework.It takes me

three hours.

His father thought he is good at math.2.主语一致

应该保持全文人称一致，这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。 e.g.Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country.3.主谓一致/人称一致

确保语法正确。

e.g.Things I hate to do is doing homework.

Every people start to learn English.4.词序/语序

它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。

e.g.I already have had lunch.

She with her mum traveled to Italy

In China, he knew there were big floods.5.避免词的重复。

e.g.All in all, we had a wonderful trip.We travelled acro Sydney, Canberra and Melbourne.We saw the beautiful coast of Queensland.We toured all of Perth.We had a great visit with Dan.Perhaps we will go again next winter.

第17篇：英语应用文写作教案

教 案（章节备课） 篇2：英语应用文写作课程教学大纲

《英语应用文写作》课程教学大纲

一、课程基本情况

二.课程性质与任务

英语应用文写作的课程性质拟定标准为教育部颁布的《大学英语课程教学要求》，即高等学校非英语专业本科生经过大学阶段的英语学习与实践应当达到一定的标准，该标准分为一般要求，较高要求和更高要求等三个层次的英语能力要求。结合我校学生的实际情况，经过一年（或一年半）的基础英语课程学习后，传媒和体育学院学生应达到《要求》的一般要求，一级班达到较高要求，达到更高要求。

因此，英语应用文写作课程在高等学校非英语专业培养目标中具有重要的地位。本课程教学任务是为达到《大学英语课程教学要求》正式版相关规定的“较高要求”而打下扎实的语言基础。通过实施过程式教学法使学生掌握应用文的写作方法，真正提高他们运用英语的能力。另一方面，课堂管理模式采用项目式教学法以培养学生的职业意识及职场所需的职业素质，为今后走入社会做准备。

三.课程主要教学内容及学时分配

四.课程教学基本内容和基本要求

（一）职业意识及职业素质背景下的写作技能提升 1.商务英语相关的词汇、短语、句型学习，进一步扩大学生的写作词汇。 2.掌握商务背景下的应用文写作句型和表达法，加强学习者的语言输入，使学生能在相应的场景下灵活自如的运用相关句型和表达法。 3.以外资公司事务为内容设计以学生为中心的应用文写作活动，采用过程式教学法与项目式教学法交叉的立体教学法，并采用pair work, group discuion, role play, presentation等活动形式，提升学生在真实文化场景中的应用文写作能力。

（二）提高运英语应用文体写作的能力，培养学生职业意识和素质。 1.通过过程式教学法与项目式教学法交叉的立体教学法激发学生的写作的热情，培养和提高学生运用英语进行不同实用的应用文体写作的能力。 2.学生们在完成该课程设置的一个个写作项目时逐渐培养了自己的职业意识和素质：独立工作的能力、团队合作精神等等，为学生走向社会从事工作打下很好的基础，对学生未来职业发展产生积极的影响。

五.课程内容的重点和深广度要求

英语应用文写作注重培养学生在商务背景下正确运用英语有效处理公司事务的能力。

六.课后作业与课外辅导的要求

每2学时一次作业，作业量根据教学内容确定。原则上每次作业数量不少于10；每周至少批改作业和辅导答疑各1次，每次作业至少批改选课人数的二分之一,每次集中答疑时间不少于2学时。

七．教材及主要参考书

教材：

史范隽.商务英语写作100主题.外文出版社, 2008年. 八.学习方法与建议

学生在学习过程中，应该积极跟随教学进度；关注“写作过程”，在写前的准备

内容输入，写中强调学生的课程参与度与学生的互助合作，写后，在学生中建立“学生互评小组”，关注写作反馈，从而提高学生英语应用文写作的兴趣与写作实践的能力。篇3：大学英语应用文写作教学课件 英语应用文写作教学课件（示范）

课程编号：12x5003 教学课件：week 11 review type 1 type 2 memos, agenda & minutes of a meeting type 3 telegrams, telexes review: form announcements: outward to announce changes in the addre/ phone number, or in executive personnel, to announce the establishment of new branches, the change in product prices, etc.inward to cover a wider range of topics.emergent occasions. attention: another place for “ name of the unit” is above the body. notice/note attention: another place for “date” is above the body. review: content rule of relevancy review: language be concise and precise.attention to the integration of formality and emotion of language.study the following instances and consider the use of pronouns and impersonal structures. 1a we are pleased to inform you that on account of rapid increase in the volume of our trade with new york, we have decided to open a new branch at 314 broadway with mr.li xiao-gang in charge. 1b it is a great pleasure to inform you that approved by the board of directors the personnel department has decided to appoint you the secretary of general manager. 2a we are so sorry to inform you that due to the present economic depreion, the board of directors has decided to dismi some employees from their posts, and you are one among them.2b we regret to inform you that we have received no reply to our letter in which we asked for settlement of our account sent to you on june 20. 3a 3b it is hereby proclaimed that the board of directors has decided to appoint ms liu ling secretary of the management. activity 1 directions: read the criteria of “good announcement” listed below.then form pairs and examine your partner’s announcements.point out the problems, if any, to him/her.--- be clear and precise in language; --- provide explanation for unusual or unexpected happenings. activity 2 attention: this is le formal. activity 3 directions: please translate the following announcement into english. reference: type 2 memos, agenda & minutes of a meeting a memorandumor reminding the recipient of something important.it serves as an exchanging of information between departments within a busine or official agency or between agencies for the following purposes: 1) to give information; 2) to request information; 3) to request action; 4) to put forward suggestions the format of a memorandum is diagramed as follows: attention: 1.the element “date” may appear in different places. 2.sometimes “subject” is replaced by “reference”. when it appears in the form of a letter, a memo usually includes --- heading (addreer’s name, addre, phone no., telegram no., telex no., etc.).if this is already inscribed on the top of the stationary, it begins with --- date, --- addreee’s name, title, addre --- subject [1] --- salutation --- body --- signature attention: subject should be centered when it appears below the salutation. sometimes a memo may include information about distribution list, copy notation (c.c.) or even enclosure.the format then is like this: activity 1 directions: read the sample and generalize the features. sample篇4：英语应用文写作教案 part 2 secretarial writing notice of meeting the different forms of notice of meeting and examples: notice of meeting on the blackboard or bulletin board: notice of meeting in memo: notice of meeting of an international symposium writing of minutes of meeting the heading of minutes: board of directors --minutes of meeting held on? the generic structure of minutes: the minutes of meeting include: 1 what the meeting was about(heading) 2 when and where the meeting was held(time & place) 3 who attend the meeting(presiding, present, absent) 4 what happened at the meeting(agenda & activities) the format of minutes of meeting: [layout 1] (转载于:英语应用文写作教案) [layout 2] past tense and paive voice in minutes: past tense and paive voice are often used in minutes, for example: ◆ the minutes of the meeting held on 21 january 1999 were agreed and signed. ◆ the continuing education schemes of study were discued and the following observations were made: ◆ a letter received by alwyn roberts from the welsh funding council was noted. ◆ after some discuions, it was decided that? reported speech in minutes: reported speech is another distinct feature of minutes, it will be used篇5：英语应用文写作课程简介

英语应用文写作

（practical english writing）课程简介

课程编号： 050249 学时[学分]： 32[2] 课程类型：任选课

先修课程：英语应用文写作 适用专业：非英语专业本科实验班、卓越班等

本课程的培养目标为：通过实施过程式教学法使学生掌握应用文的写作方法，真正提高他们运用英语的能力。另一方面，课堂管理模式采用项目式教学法以培养学生的职业意识及职场所需的职业素质，为今后走入社会做准备。本课程在课程设置、教学模式、教学评估等方面的要求体现在以下几个方面：

（1）本课程采用过程式教学法与项目式教学法交叉的立体教学法，旨在激发学生的写作的热情，培养和提高学生应用文体写作的能力。根据学生的实际学习情况，按照求职与应聘、商务交际与事务处理的进程将课程学习分为几大模块，每一大模块又包括若干个子模块。其内容包括：商务英语写作概述； 商务信函结构与格式；人事事务：求职信、个人简历、招聘、申请；商务交际：邀请信、祝贺信、感谢信、道歉信、慰问信、通知与启事；事务处理：电子邮件、备忘录、会议纪要、公司简章、商品使用说明、项目计划书等。

（2）“写作过程”为教学中心的教学法，在整个教学过程强调学生观点的批判性和创新性，在写前、写中课堂讨论中尽量鼓励有新观点的学生发言、阐述自己的观点，在写后对于有新观点的习作，都给予较高评价。为提高学生的课程参与度 ，在学生中建立“学生互评小组”，鼓励学生以读者的眼光审视另一位学生的写作，培养其运用写作基础知识辨别优点和不足的能力。

(3) 英语应用文写作课程不生搬硬套使用一本固定教材，向学生提供阅读清单。教材形式有纸质和多媒体等。引进《作文批改网》教学平台，将学习课堂拓展由教室到网站二维空间。并将批改后的优秀作文连同评语在平台共享，让学生阅读学习，大大提高了习作批改的质量和效率；同时，批改作文时将发生的错误分类，用数据引起学生对作文中存在问题的认识和重视。 （4）在教学评估环节，除传统意义上的期末纸质化测试之外，课程辅之以平时学习进程监控模式、学期口语测试，并加强网络化学习效度监测和控制体系。 总体而言，本课程的主要特色归纳为写作能力培养突显化；学生自主学习网络化、多元化、个性化；学习评价及反馈机制科学、合理、客观化。

第18篇：英语高级写作教案

英语高级写作课程教案

学期：2012 — 2013学年第2学期 学时：32 学分：2 授课对象：外国语学院10级英语专业学生 教

材：《写作教程 第四册》，2007，

上海外语教育出版社 任课教师：宇文静 陈琳

1．课程成果：

通过本课程的学习，学生能够初步掌握科学研究的基本方法和能力，巩固和加深所学的基本理论和技能，了解英语论文写作的有关知识、技巧、和策略，选择和确定适当的论文题目，初拟论文提纲。

2．教学方法：

课堂讲授，举例，演示

3．课程考核：

课程成绩（100%）=平时考核（100%）+期末考试（0%）平时考核 100分=100分+0分

1.平时成绩：100分折合为总成绩的100% 注： 100分： 作业8次中取5次，每次20分；

0分： 随机抽查5次出勤，不计分，3次无故缺勤者取消其成

绩。

2．期末成绩：无 3．考试方式：大作业

1 Lecture 1: Introduction to Thesis Writing (Unit 1)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Understand the aim of the course 2.Grasp generally some information about graduation thesis 3.Understand what constitutes a good topic for research

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

1.Principles and Requirements of Graduation Thesis 2.Components of Graduation Thesis 3.Steps of Graduation Thesis Writing

四、教学内容

Introduction to Graduation Thesis 1 What is a thesis?

It is a research paper composed by a college student when he/she has finished college study with the help of his /her supervisor, which is also called graduation thesis.2 Significance of thesis writing a.Institutional purpose: b.

Personal purposes: 3 Scales of thesis writing Literature, Translation, Linguistics, TEFL, Cro-Culture, Other social science ( e.g.Busine English, EST, etc.) 4 Evaluation of a thesis Letter grade ( A.B.C.D.F) is based on its content, structure, language and format.Apart from that, oral defense also counts in many colleges, and so does it in our institute. 5 Principles of thesis writing Learning Principle; Independence Principle; Scientific Principle; Scholarly Principle; Creative Principle; Norm Principle.6 Requirements of thesis writing Length; Format; Content; Book binding and layout.7 Steps of Graduation Thesis Writing Choose a topic, collect and organize materials, compose the first draft, revise the draft and finalize it.

五、作业

Read Unit 2 after cla..

Lecture 2: Choosing a Topic for a Thesis (Unit 2)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know what steps to follow when choosing a topic 2.Learn how to improve topics that have problems

2

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Know how to work out an effective research topic.

四、教学内容

1.Principles for choosing a thesis topic Significance (Importance) and Interest; Manageability/Practicality; Flexibility 2.What topics should be avoided? 3.Proce of choosing a topic Decide on the subject area---------Choose a topic---------Focus into a question---------Design a title 3.1 Subject areas: literature, linguistics, translation, TEFL, cro-culture and other subject areas 3.2 Finding a Research Problem 3.3 Design a title 4.Exercise 1: literary criticism /comparative study Exercise 2: revise the following topics

五、作业

Search for as many thesis titles as poible to get the idea of title designing and design your own title..

Lecture 3: Collecting & Organizing Material (Unit 3)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Learn how to find and evaluate the sources 2.Learn how to document the sources .

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Choose proper material; write a thesis statement.

四、教学内容

1 Major sources of related literature 2 Guidelines for choosing proper materials 3 Documenting material 4 Reading in depth Exercise : Analyze the different parts of the following thesis statement.

五、作业

Read the textbook Unit 3 and create your working bibliography, using APA style.

3 Lecture 4: Outlining a Thesis (Unit 6)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know the format of an outline 2 Be familiar with the types of outline 3 Grasp how to construct an outline.

二、学时安排

2 hours

三、重点难点

1 The format of an outline 2 How to construct an outline .

四、教学内容

1 What is an outline? 2 The Benefits of an Outline 3 Proce of constructing a thesis 4 Types of the outline 5 Formats of the outline 6 Conventions and contents of outlines 7 Principles for Structuring an outline Exercise: Outlining the following thesis

五、作业

Based on your topic and thesis statement, with the accumulation of related material, please construct your own outline.

Lecture 5: Introduction Writing (Unit 7)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Master the elements of the Introduction chapter of a thesis.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Understand and know how to compose the Introduction chapter.

四、教学内容

Components of the Introduction Chapter:  Introduction  Background of the study

 The profeional significance of the study  Overview (structure) of the thesis Exercise:

Find the problems in the Introduction chapter of the thesis at hand.

五、作业

Finish the introduction chapter for your thesis.

Lecture 6: Literature Review (Unit 7)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know what are included in a literature review 2 Know how to compose a literature review .

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master how to organize a literature review and how to summarize and paraphrase.

四、教学内容

What is a Literature Review? Procedure for Writing a Literature Review Exercises:

1: Find a focus for the following titles 2: Write a Summary

五、作业

Write a literature review briefly.

Lecture 7: Quotation (Unit 8)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Master the way of quotation.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Different quotation formats for different material.

四、教学内容

Differences between quotation and citation Types of quotation: direct and indirect Quotation of different material: Poetry, drama, etc.Exercise:

Revise each of the following sentences, deleting quotation marks used inappropriately, moving those placed incorrectly, and using more formal languages.

五、作业

Remember the format of quotation.

5 Lecture 8: Citation (Unit 8)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Master the way of citation.

二、学时安排

2 hours

三、重点难点

Different citation formats for different material.

四、教学内容

Purposes of documentation Types of citation: In-text Citation and References Formats of In-text Citation: MLA, APA, Chicago Manual style

五、作业

Remember the APA format of citation.

Lecture 9: Methodology (Unit 4)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know how to conduct a research in a linguistic thesis 2.Know how to write the methodology part in a linguistic thesis 3.Know how to write a good findings and discuion

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master how to conduct a research in a linguistic thesis.

四、教学内容

Definition of Methodology Methodology in a thesis on linguistics 1.Components 2.Organization

3.How to carry out research 4.Findings and Discuion Exercise: Analyze samples: What research tools are used? How?

五、作业

Learn SPSS after cla: SPSS教程 .

6 Lecture 10: Methodology (Unit 4)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know how to design a good questionnaire; 2.Master the methods to interpret a work of literature.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master questionnaire design and how to interpret a work of literature.

四、教学内容

Questionnaire design 1.Criteria for a good questionnaire 2.Steps for questionnaire design 3.Exercise: Proce the following data Methodology in a Literary Thesis 1.Methods: explication(解读), analysis, comparison and contrast 2.Literature Criticism:

五、作业

Design a questionnaire to collect opinions of the second- year Non-English majors on their L2 learning strategies.中国非英语专业大二学生英语学习策略

Lecture 11: Conclusion, Abstract & Acknowledgements (Unit 7)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

1.Know how to write the Conclusion of a thesis 2.Know how to write the Abstract of a thesis 3 Know how to draft Acknowledgement.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master Conclusion writing and Abstract writing.

四、教学内容

Conclusion Writing 1.Restatement 2.Summary 3.Future research direction Abstract Writing 1 Types of Abstract: descriptive and informative

7 2.Requirements 3 Key Words Acknowledgements 1.Purposes 2.Requirements Exercise: Read the following abstracts and then discu the merits and defects of the abstracts.

五、作业

Choose key words for your thesis.

Lecture 12: Format-Listing Sources (Unit 8)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Know how to document sources at the end of the thesis.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master the use of punctuations and italicization.

四、教学内容

Basic rules for bibliographic citation 1.Authors 2.Books 3.Author with an editor 4.Author with an translator 5.Work in an anthology 6.Magazines 7.Encyclopedia or dictionary entry 8.Electronic sources 9.Notes: Chinese references Exercise: Create the Reference entry with the given information

五、作业

Design your own references.

Lecture 13: Format and Mechanics (Unit 8)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Know some rules of format and mechanics.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master Contents format and Page number format.

四、教学内容 Format 1 Contents 2 Tables and figures 3 Page numbers Mechanics 1 Capitalization 2 Abbreviations 3 Italicizing and underlining 4 Numbers 5 Tables and Figures Exercise Find out the problems of the following Contents

五、作业

根据以下论文内容，加页码并自动生成目录

Lecture 14: Language Style (Additional Material)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Know the characteristics of thesis language.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master diction and voice.

四、教学内容 Diction: formal Tone: Judgment: careful and impartial basic tone: rational, impersonal and unemotional Voice: third-person pronouns (he, she, they or it)—subjects of sentences Economy: write concisely and straightforwardly Use of Tenses: 1.Literature 2.Theory or philosophy 3.Research results 4.Review of literature Unbiased language Constructing paragraphs a paragraph—a single unit declare a point—offer support for the point

9 A topic sentence—a tiny thesis statement Exercise: Find out the problems of these sentences.

五、作业

Revise your introduction and literature review parts.

Lecture 15: Summary (Unit 9)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Get a systematic idea of thesis writing.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点

Master the requirements of structure, language and format.

四、教学内容

Title: informative, revealing Abstract: should contain the following elements Research topic, research purpose, research methods, research results, implications, conclusion.Key words: high frequency in the thesis, focus of the thesis, 3-5 words Introduction: a.Background of the study

b.The profeional significance of the study c.Overview (structure) of the thesis Literature Review: Cover the basic categories • Introduction: central theme or organizational pattern • Body: Organize sources chronologically, thematically, or methodologically • Conclusions/Recommendations: Discu what you have drawn from reviewing literature so far.Where might the discuion proceed? Methodology:

what (tool/instrument); Who(subjects); How(data collection, procedures) Findings: Data presentation & data description Discuion:

Supplying meaning to statistics, tables, charts, etc.

Making comments that are relevant to the research intention/purpose Conclusion:

Restate the research purpose, some background information, etc; Summarize research design, results, interpretation and implication, etc; Suggest future research direction by pointing out limitations of the study and tentative proposals for future research.Acknowledgements:

a.confined to one page, immediately after the Conclusion b.language: sincere, brief, proper

10 c.Order: More important-le important; Individual – collective References:

英文参考文献基本格式：

期刊： 作者. 文章名.（需用引号，且引在“.”之外）期刊名（斜体）.第几期（年代）：页码.专著： 作者.文献题名（斜体）.出版地：出版社, 出版年.

中文参考文献基本格式：

专著：主要责任者.文献题名[文献类型标识].出版地：出版社,出版年 期刊：主要责任者.文献题名[J].刊名,出版年(期)：页码.language:

formal, objective, concise, proper Contents: 自动生成目录，注意页码及字号。

Tables and figures: 注意标题书写，Tables两边不封。

Page numbers: 正文前和正文的页码不同，前者小写罗马数字，后者小写阿拉伯数字，需用分隔符。

Exercise: Evaluate the two sample papers on page 154-215

五、作业

Review what we have learned.

Lecture 16: Oral Defense (Additional Material)

一、课程成果（Outcome）

Know how to give a good oral defense.

二、学时安排 2 hours

三、重点难点 PPT design.

四、教学内容

Introduction to Oral Defense Purpose: examine whether the researcher understand and master the research and the thesis. Components: Presentation + defense Requirements: design PPT; Presentation 10minutes; defense 10minutes. Prepare for the oral defense 1.Circulate the thesis to the other committee members.2.Be familiar with the structure, contents, research method, major findings and major arguments.3.Explain the thesis briefly.4.Prepare in ppt format.Your focus: topic, research method, findings.Support the argument with clear, brief examples.5.Presuppose questions and prepare answers in advance.6.Committee members make comments or suggestions; you need not have to defense.Respond politely with gratitude.

11 Tips during oral defense: 1.Properly dreed 2.Keep confident 3.Bring with you a pen and paper; thesis better 4.Be polite; show gratitude 5.Ask for the question again or make sure the question if you do not hear clearly about it.6.Don’t argue with teachers but explain your idea with proofs.7.Pay attention to your pronunciation and intonation and try to make you easily understood.8.Make your answer concise and to the point.Exercise: Analyze some samples.

五、作业

Review what has been learned in this cla.

第19篇：初二英语写作教案

一．步骤

1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；

4 复查：看查拼写、语法、标点等问题，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 1.动笔之前，认真审题

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.围绕中心，拟定提纲

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

3.中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：

(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。

二．作文一般框架：文章分3段：

（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题； （2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方面，每个方面最多2句话；

（3） 结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。

三．技巧

1.上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。 连接词1) 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or … 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however …

3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …

4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside … 5) 表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as …

6) 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …

7) 表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …

8) 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…

9) 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …

10) 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necearily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …

11) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …

12) 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as …

13) 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …

2.句型

在各种…之中…

Among various kinds of …,

e.g.Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 就我的看法…；我认为… In my opinion, … = To my mind, ….

= As far as I am concerned, …

e.g.In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.根据我个人经验…

According to my personal experience, … = Based on my personal experience, …

e.g.According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.俗语说得好：「…」。

Well goes an old saying, \"…\"

= As an old saying goes (runs, says),\"…“

e.g.As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.\" (A) …用下列方法… in the following ways.(B) …有三个主要理由。 … for three major reasons.e.g.I build my confidence in the following ways. People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.换言之…

in other words, …

e.g.In other words, I will try my best to live up to my goal.曾经…最…的… 最高级+ 现在完成时

Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

3.不会表达时 (1) 迂回而行

当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。 (2) 小词大用

汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 (3) 借花献佛

有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。

注意事项 1.时态一致

必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事，就要保证通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样，如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时

Yesterday I did my homework.It takes me

three hours.

His father thought he is good at math.

2.主语一致

应该保持全文人称一致，这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。

e.g.Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country.3.主谓一致/人称一致

确保语法正确。

e.g.Things I hate to do is doing homework.

Every people start to learn English.4.词序/语序

它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。

e.g.I already have had lunch.

She with her mum traveled to Italy

In China, he knew there were big floods.5.避免词的重复。

e.g.All in all, we had a wonderful trip.We travelled acro Sydney, Canberra and Melbourne.We saw the beautiful coast of Queensland.We toured all of Perth.We had a great visit with Dan.Perhaps we will go again next winter.

第20篇：对英语的看法的英文写作作文

I think , Chinese people should keep on learning English.I believe that learning English is good for everyone and it isn’t a waste of valuable time.

As economic globalization continues to develop that the society

requires not only we learn language but also need we learn many other languages.For example, English is a worldwide way of communication .It is widely used in international trade, busine negotiation,

international conference and so on.If you learn English your career will be more succeful or get a better job opportunities.

To second with, by learning English we can enlarge our mental horizons and increase our knowledge that understanding the different person, a different lifestyle.and then convenient to communicate with other.Through the study of English, we can also read more all kinds of books, magazines and newspapers, and understand the news all over the world.Thirdly,as is known to all more and more foreigners are interested in Chinese literature and culture.We only learn English well to better promote China to foreign countries and promote Chinese culture that to other countries know more about China and like China.

To sum up that we must improve our English level and persistent learning English.

我认为,中国人应该坚持学英语。 我认为学习英语对每个人都有好处而且他不是在浪费宝贵的时间。

随着经济全球化的不断发展, 社会不仅要求我们学好母语,同样也需要我们做到多种语言同修.例如，英语就是一项世界性的交流方式。它被广泛地应用在国际贸易、商务谈判、国际会议等等。如果你学好了英语你的事业将会更成功或者获得更好的工作机会。

第二，通过学习英语,我们可以扩大我们的精神境界（视野）和增加我们的知识, 了解不同的人,不同的生活.并且方便与其他人交流。通过学习英语，我们也可以阅读更多的各式各样的书籍，杂志和报纸，了解世界各地的时事新闻。 第三，众所周知越来越多的外国人对中国文学和文化感兴趣,只有学好英语才能向国外更好的宣传中国并且弘扬中国文化让其他国家更了解喜欢中国。 综上所述，我们必须提高我们的英语水平并且坚持不懈的学习英语。

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