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写作的重要性 6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。 评判作文

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。 基本表达

人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：convenient/ convenience 2.效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3.节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4.人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5.人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6.娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely 7.环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8.安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9.经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10.人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, aist, freedom, freely 写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、字母大小写

2、怪符号

3、单词拼写

4、主谓一致

5、动词时态

6、名词单复数 实例一

题目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注：1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2.During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注：1.Compared with cars 分词结构开头。

2.be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于

3.thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4.cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5.be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由） 6.Moreover 表示递进

In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注：第一句应该用there be结构

Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.

I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为„„； 2.另外一些人认为„„； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段） 实例二 99年6月真题

Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impoible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that today\'s society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be usele.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score: 14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启）

注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。

Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impoible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承） 注：1.本段总分总结构

2.they argue that = they think that 3.with the development of...随着„„的发展 4.what\'s more 递进关系，moreover 5.bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句； （2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today\'s society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be usele.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（转） 注：1.But 转折词（信号词）

2.they emphasize that = they think that 3.today\'s society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4.许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge；

获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5.knows nothing→little；he may be usele→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点。

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合） Score: 11分

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.注：结构非常好，可以套用。

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.注：1.“people, who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。 2.as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3.lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb.astray 4.they suggest that = they think that 5.touch 碰（闪光点词汇：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth.肩负起责任）

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.注：1.hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2.the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3.to know more, to read more 错误，中式英语

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as poible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.范文22.Is Television a Bleing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives.But, there is an ongoing heated discuion as to whether television is a bleing or a curse.注：it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为

As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endle series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.

注：1.As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2.“使„„”不用make，而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a bleing.They argue that it has brought about many serious problems.The major one is its effects on young people.They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted.In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.范文5.Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons.They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning.They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot poible have.注：geographical and historical 押尾韵，如：押头韵 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons.They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy.For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.In practice, travelling does more good than harm.If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time.It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.注：1.in practice = I think 2.does more good than harm 好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3.enable 使 范文1.Is a Test of Spoken English Neceary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely neceary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to expre their thoughts freely.A test of English will bring the college students an awarene of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.使句子具有表现力的手段：

1、用形容词修饰名词；

2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词

On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable preure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable preure from their coursework.Another required test will only add to their burden.Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several gueed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpa others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.范文21.Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly.Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking.They always say that it can get rid of the tiredne and make them refreshed.And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship.Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.注：1.vary greatly 许多种2.be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3.get rid of the tiredne and make them refreshed 使人神清气爽 4.Giving and being given 给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。

But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health.They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second.And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack.In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents.Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.注：1.They have heard the official reports that ...官方报告表明..2.be more likely to 更有可能，更容易3.chance 可能

There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else.If smoking brings us illne and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to expre our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1.outweigh 比„„重要，同样的表达：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾，非常精妙。 课后作业 Private Cars 写成4段的首段写法：

In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China.People\'s attitude toward private cars varies widely.② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car.Yet, people\'s opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ iue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight.People\'s views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.写成3段的首段写法：

With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people\'s living standard, more and more people can own private cars.cars are entering ordinary families.the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have acce to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主题句：

Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.支持段的分论点：

① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person\'s social status/ achievement/ succe/ prosperity in his or her career.否定段的主题句：① However (Nonethele/ Neverthele/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakne/ limits.⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought.They complain that......⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.否定段的分论点： ① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.③ 污染环境 What\'s more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.注意：所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的，就是比较superordinate的词；而下义词就是具体的东西，即subordinate的东西。 第四段（总结段）的写法：

① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages.As for the above problem, I\'m sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.③ Whether the private cars are a bleing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.） 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；

（2）举例加以论证。

Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点） 范文17.My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate.Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.注：1.consensus 相同意见

2.第一句话可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth. 3.while 轻微转折和对比，强转折用词but, however 4.master 主人 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands.In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life.Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have.We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us succeful and happy. 注：1.第一句as far as与I agree重复，把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

2.architect 建筑师，archor 弓箭手

3.In fact 前后是转折关系，之前从正面阐述，之后从反面阐述 范文17.My View on Fate （续）

Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example.When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf.Instead of accepting her misfortune helplely, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechle.This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.注：1.本段开始举例

2.Let\'s take„„for example 中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。

In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard.We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

注：bear sth.in mind：把„„牢记在心 范文13.The Way to Succe 第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three eentials of succe.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmne and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadine in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）； (2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。

Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句； (2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）； (3) 本段总结（可以省略）。

Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。 四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。 2.哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。 How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：

Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before.How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱 第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.第二段分写：

In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。 Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.Therefore /So /Hence,.....使文章富有表现力的手段：

1、使用有难度的词汇；

2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；

3、使用被动语态；

4、使用倒装句；(not only...but also...；only...)

5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。绿化我们的城市 第一段：

近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。 普通版

Recently, with the development of businees and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities.We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees.But, it is important to realize to make our cities green. 润色版

In contemporary society, while our industries and businees have experienced a(n) rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically.Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.注：区分industry 和 industrial 绿化我们的城市（续） 第二段：

绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。 普通版

There are many advantages in making cities greener.First, it makes our air clean.Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption.Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities.With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature.Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber.And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.润色版 What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner.Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen.This will improve the quality of the urban environment.Second, our cities will look more beautiful.Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers.What an attractive garden it is! What’s more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.绿化我们的城市（续） 第三段：

绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。 普通版

Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country.And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in busine.润色版

Making cities greener requires more than widespread awarene; it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.(Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts.And not only should most people gain the awarene of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against busine.) 句型变化 A.(1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2) There are many trees along the streets.(3) There is a clean river in the city.(4) There are many fishes in the river.(5) There are willow trees on the one side.(6) There are some pieces of graland on the other side.(7) There are many flowers on them.B.(1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener.(2) Green trees line the streets.(3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound.(4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5) On the other side lies a stretch of graland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.1.There be...1) a.There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films. b.Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.2) a.There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages. b.Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.2.If 1) a.If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference. b.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.2) a.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result. b.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.3) a.If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive. b.Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.3.In order to 1) a.In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step. b.An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.2) a.In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts. b.New efforts will bring ...4.More and more 1) a.More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV. b.People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.2) a.More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle. b.The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.3) a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years. b.Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.4) a.More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy. b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.5) a.More and more trees have disappeared in the city.b.There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.社会热点话题

写作练习：Jobs for Graduates 1) 大学生难找工作 2) 原因很多 3) 解决的办法 With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have acce to tertiary education （高等教育）.As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job.Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation. The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter.According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the cla of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs? 第二段细节论证 分析原因：

1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be streed/ emphasized/ mentioned...

2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...

3、The increase/ change/ failure/ succe in ...mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ... Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand.Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ le developed country.Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...国家制定法律法规 个人接受教育

III、图表题（table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph） 图表题的写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I:（1）概括描述图表：趋势描写；

（2）具体描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。 Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点（本段主题句）；

（2）细节性分论点（主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两点）。

Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；

（2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点 【标题】Changes in People’s Diet

Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to: 1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.2.Give poible reasons for the changes.3.Draw your own conclusion.You should quote as few figures as poible.【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a le important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons.First, people now have more money.The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them.Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk.Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet.They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future 【修改版】

As can be seen from the table, the past five years has witneed dramatic changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the staple food of most Chinese, is now playing a le important role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased. There are two factors leading to the change.For one thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living.In the old days few families could afford meat and milk every day, which often meant a big chunk of the family income.But now people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods.For another, people of today attach more attention to nutrition.They are not merely content to fill the stomach.They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health. In a word, with people’s standard of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater.图表题的适用句型：

1.As we can see from the chart/ graph/ table/ diagram, ...2.The chart/ graph shows/ displays that ...3.As can be shown in the table ..., 4.The figures/ statistics in the chart reflect/ show/ reveal that ..., 5.It is clear/ apparent from the chart/ table that ...V、谚语格言题逻辑结构

Paragraph I：（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言（ general ）；

（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻（specific ）。

Paragraph II：（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；

（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；

Paragraph III：总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。 Practice Makes Perfect Practice is the key to succe in all fields of activity.It is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.【改写为】An English proverb says/ One of the greatest men once remarked/ Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: \"Practice makes perfect\".It means that/ In other words, it is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.Practice Makes Perfect（续） Take the study of English for example.Only practice can enable us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar.And it is only through practice that we can become fluent in speaking and writing, there is no other way.Another good example is sports.Practice is the only way to become stronger and run faster.Besides, in team games practice is what improves our sense of cooperation and helps the team to win.【改写为】History/ Our society abounds with the examples of \"Practice makes perfect\".......（正反两方面都举例子） On the other hand/ On the contrary, no practice will only lead us to failure.There is hardly/ scarcely a man who can achieve succe without practice.All evidence points to/ justifies/ lends supports to the fact that practice is the key to succe in all fields of activity.举例一般为：英语学习；体育锻炼

To sum up, there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice.【改写为】For us college students, the saying/ proverb has a profound and realistic significance: there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice 课后复习（self-study Program）

1、课堂讲解内容：体会用词艺术和丰富的句式

2、写作练习：2002年6月真题（Student Use of Computers）

3、记忆写作万能理由和基本表达

4、完型填空练习：完成Paage 1--Paage 3 做题步骤：

（1）通读全文，了解文章大意；

（2）初选答案（排除法、优选法）；

（3）寻找线索；

（4）回头补缺；

（5）核实答案。 图表题：2002年6月考题

Topic: Student Use of Computers (at least 150 words)

1、上图所示为1990、199

5、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；

2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；

3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。2002年6月的图表题作文： As is shown by the bar graph, the average number of hours a student in a certain university spends on the computer per week increased dramatically over the period from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was le than two hours.And in 1995, it hit/ reach four hours.And in 2000, the number soared to（飞速上升） nearly twenty hours, which is over ten times than that of 1990.注：soared to/ boom/ shoot up/ rocket/ jump 飞速上升 climb 上升很慢 shrink 下降，缩水

第一段还有一种写法：„„In 1990, the number was le than 2 hours, while the figure hit 4 hours（或者这样写：while in 1995,）as compared with that of 1990, it had almost doubled.And what impre us most is that the figure soared to..., which„

Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular for males and for females.A multitude of factors could account for the rise.In the first place, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the rapid development of the internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact friends in remote places through the internet.In the second place, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enable more students to purchase them. However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers an studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.IV、书信题的写作方法：

（一）信封格式：

名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大，写在右下角（与我们相反）。

（二）信纸格式：

日期：背月份的缩写

称呼（后面的标点是逗号）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文：空4个字节或者顶格写，段与段之间空行）

签名：sincerely yours 书信写作的五点要求：

1、开门见山说意图

2、咨询/ 建议

1、

2、

3、

3、不同内容可分段

4、感谢客气不可少

5、期待回信成老套

（三）开头段：

1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你） Dear Sir/ Mr.Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a„ at your„

/ I am a „ at your college, enrolled in the„ course./ My name is„, I am„

2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友） Dear Prometheus, Hello / Hi.How are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in / getting along with„..?

3、解释写信的原因 （1） 致谢：

I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises./ I am greatly indebted to you for (the double) you have gone to on my behalf./ Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for„ / I would like to thank you most sincerely for„ （2） 抱怨：

I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I am writing to expre my diatisfaction with / at„ / I wish to make a complaint about„

/ I am writing to draw your attention to„./ I am afraid I have got a complaint about„.（3） 致歉：

I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain eential information regarding the following aspects./ I am writing to you because I am unable to„./ I an terribly sorry that„.

/ I would like to expre my apologies for not being able to„.（4） 询问：

I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire about some information about„

/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. / I would like some detailed information on/about„.

（四）结尾段：

1、发出请求

（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention.（2）I would very much appreciate it if„„as soon as poible.（3）Please render me some valuable advice which is conductive to my final decision.

2、提供帮助

（1）I hope these„„will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.（2）„„will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any aistance, she/he will be pleased to help you

3、再次表示歉意或感激

（1）Thank you for your kind aistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.（3）I am sorry that I cannot„„, and trust that you will understand.（4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.（5）I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.（6）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.

4、期盼回信：R.S.V.P.（1）I look forward to your prompt response.（2）Looking forward to a prompt reply, （3）I expect to hear from you very soon.（4）I hope to receive your reply shortly.（5）I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.书信题范文：2001.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1． 表示欢迎

2.提出度假安排的建议 3．提醒应注意的事项

A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang Example I: Dear Xiao Wang, I am very happy to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you like swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful birds eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I’ll prepare everything for you.

I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours, Zhang Yin 公文信函: 2002.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, Li Ming freshman 大一 sophomore 大二 junior 大三 senior 大四 Example II: Dear Mr.Prometheus, I am a student at your TOEFL cla and I am writing to explain my absence from claes since March 11, 2001.On March 10, 2001, I was involved in a serious motor vehicle accident.I was transported to the hospital in an ambulance, where I was treated for a broken ankle, fractured collarbone, and 3 bruised ribs.My doctor advised complete bed rest for 6 weeks, and as a result, I have been unable to attend claes since March 11, 2001.I am concerned about keeping up with my studies, and have been doing the required readings, as aigned by you.My biggest concern is whether I will be able to participate the final cla.Would you please advise me regarding my courses, specifically if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation? Thank you for your kind aistance.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Janet, Student No„ 题型总结：

对比观点选择题：4段 社会热点话题：3段 图表题： 书信题： 格言题：

描写叙述题： 完型填空 做题技巧

（一）Prep Tips for Cloze I．做题步骤：

1、通读全文，了解文章大意；文章两种模式：总分、对比；

2、初选答案（排除法、优选法）；

3、寻找线索；

4、回头补缺；

5、核实答案。 II．出题重点： 1．词语的辨析：

1）同义词； 2）反义词； 3）形近词；

形近词举例：Test 2 ...or down frightening hillsides to towns __87__ in deep valleys. 87.A) lying B) laying C) laid D) lied 注：说谎：lie lied lied lying 躺：lie lay lain lying 放置，下蛋：lay laid laid laying 2．逻辑关系：

1）列举/种属关系：

such„as; especially; in particular; specifically; for example; for instance; likely; 2）因果关系： because (for); due to; owing to; thanks to; since; for; as; for the reason that; seeing that; 3）并列/递进：

besides; likewise; moreover; also; too; what’s more; apart from; except; furthermore; not noly„but also„.; in addition; 4）转折/让步关系：

however; but; never the le; nonethele; whereas; still; though; although; anyhow; anyway; in any case; yet; 5）对比关系：

by contrast; in contrast; by comparison; like; as„as; on the contrary; conversely; oppositely; „.than„.; 逻辑关系举例1：Test 4 Sometimes homework is returned 76 brief written comments but without a grade.76.A) by B) in C) for D) with 逻辑关系举例2：Test 2 The United States is well-known for its network of major highways designed to help a driver get from one place to another in the shortest poible time.__71__ these wide modern roads are generally __72__ and well maintained, with __73__ sharp curves and many straight __74__, a direct route is not always the most _ 75__ one.71.A) Although B) Since C) Because D) Therefore 72.A) stable B) splendid C) smooth D) complicated 73.A) little B) few C) much D) many 74.A) selections B) separations C) series D) sections 75.A) terrible B) poible C) enjoyable D) profitable 3．固定结构的识别：提高阅读的速度、对于内容有合理的预期、有利于总体把握文章：

either„or„; neither„nor„; too„to„; so„that„; not„until„; hardly„when„; no sooner„than„; not only„but also„ 固定结构举例：Test 3 76 geography books focus on a small area 77 a town or city.Others deal with a state, a region, a nation.Or an 78 continent.Many geography books deal with the whole earth.Another 79 to divide the study of 80 is to distinguish between physical geography and cultural geography.The former focuses on the natural world; the 81 starts with human beings and 82 how human beings and their environment act 83 each other.but when geography is considered as a single subject, 84 branch can neglect the other.76.A) Some B) Many C) Most D) Few 77.A) outside B) except C) as D) like 81.A) second B) later C) next D) latter 2． 搭配：

例如：a.+ n.; ad.+ v.; take advantage of„.; make use of„.等； 3． 动词用法：

1）主谓一致； 2）时态； 3）语态； 4）非谓语动词； 4． 介词用法：

1）介词与名词； 2）介词与动词； 3）介词与形容词； 顶一下 (62) 68.9% 踩一下 (28) 31.1% 2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as - 2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 关于2010世博会英语作文

How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.The World Expo in 2010（世博会）英文作文

The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.our government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.From Joozone.com.世博会英语作文

Right from its establishment in 1992, Shanghai International Exhibition Center has provided much needed new potential for the exhibition industry in Shanghai , becoming the birthplace of many industry definitive exhibitions in Shanghai and making acclaimed contributions to the development of Shanghai exhibition industry.With its quality exhibition facilities and excellent services,it has been the first international exhibition center in China.As a member of the exhibition industry, Shanghai International Exhibition Center is committed to perfecting its hall services to exceed customers expectations, establishing exhibition brands, enhancing our capabilities of customer service and making contributions to the development of the exhibition industry in Shanghai and China as well! 作文地带提供，这些简单概括就是说 ：上海世博会对上海的新发展奠定了基础，发挥了作用。要是作为上海世博会的一名成员的话，应该在力所能及的范围内去帮助世博会拥有更多项超越顾客所期待的服务，让上海世博会越发展越好.What should we do Ladies and gentlemen the World Expo is coming.What should we do as a student of Shanghai.The first ,study English hard.Millions of foreigners will visit Shanghai during 2010 World Expo.So we must study the international language harder.The second,be polite,be civilized.Do it from little things.Like do not spit sputum in rude.When you do somethings ,remember ladies first.In all,be a kind and polite man.Welcome World Expo!A time to make friends.Thanks you very much. 本文来自作文地带:http://www.daodoc.com/ 世博会英语作文

World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as grand events for economic, scientific, technological and cultural exchanges, serving as an important platform for displaying historical experience, exchanging innovative ideas, demonstrating esprit de corps and looking to the future.世界博览会是人类文明的驿站。从1851年伦敦的“万国工业博览会”至今，世博会正日益成为全球经济、科技和文化领域的盛会，成为各国人民总结历史经验、交流聪明才智、体现合作精神、展望未来发展的重要舞台.作文地带(www.daodoc.com) 有翻译的英语作文网

With a long civilization, China favors international exchange and loves world peace.China owes its succeful bid for the World Exposition in 2010 to the support for and confidence of the international community in its reform and opening up.The Exposition will be the first registered World Exposition to be held in a developing country, which gives expreion to the expectations the world’s people place on China’s future development.

具有悠久东方文明的中国，是一个热爱国际交往、崇尚世界和平的国度。中国取得了2010年世博会的举办权，这将是注册类世界博览会首次在发展中国家举行，体现了国际社会对中国改革开放道路的支持和信任，也体现了世界人民对中国未来发展的瞩目和期盼。 另外一篇世博会英语作文，本文是关于世博会自愿者的英语作文

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

First, I’ll say something about World Expo History.As we know, the very first World Expo, the Great Exhibition of 1851, took place in the Crystal Palace in London.UK.Ever since then, the goals of World Expos have been both high-minded as well as commercial.Visitors are able to explore the world outside of their everyday experience—outside cultures, new scientific advancements, and new inventions.World Expos have excited and inspired more and more people in the world.上海世博会范文：

On December3, 2002, the Bureau of International Expositions (or call it BIE) announced that Shanghai will host Expo2010.the BIE had received bids from five cities to host Expo2010.Among the 5 nice cities, the BIE chose Shanghai at last! It’s really an exciting news for not only Shanghainese, but also all of Chinese people.Here are some details about it.世博会logo（会徽）介绍：

Look at this profile carefully.The title is “The 2010 World Exposition ,Shanghai, China ”.this is the logo.And the theme is “better city., better life”.OK, let’s gue who is the image representative? Yeah, you’re right, Yao Ming!

Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country.And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a better urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life.

I think, as a student in Shanghai, we should learn to be a gentle person and keep good manners from now on.And try to practice English more in order to communicate with foreigners fluently in the near future.Because, we’re a part of Shanghai! 世博会相关的词组：

中国上海2010年世博会：Eopo 2010 Shanghai China 世博会会徽: the Expo emblem 世博会会徽看起来像三个人手挽着手。The Expo emblem looks like three people holding hands.世博会将持续半年。The Expo will last six months.世博会的主题: the theme of Expo 城市，让生活更美好。Better city, better life.世博园区: the Expo Site 沿黄浦江两岸：along both sides of the Huangpu River 主题馆: the theme pavilions 中国馆：China\'s pavilion 东方之冠：The Crown of the East 中国成功申办2010年世博会英语作文

On December, 2002, China won the bid to hosting Expo 2010.This is the first General Exhibition hosted by a developing country; However, China has a long-standing relationship with World Expo.Chinese people have participated in World Expo since its first presence.After wining its liberation, the People’s Republic of China has taken part in 12 world expositions.Chinese exhibits won many prizes in previous world expositions.The Yisheng Wine was awarded with the gold medal at Expo 1906 Milan Italy; many others like the embroidery of the Portrait of Jesus, Gold Prize Brandy , and Mao-Tai Chiew were among the highlights at the Panama-Pacific International Exposition—San Francisco 1915.

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英语作文范文

my dream future

i decided to be a middle teacher after college.there are many reasons contribute to this decision.

firstly, when i was a little girl, i have been dreaming of being a teacher.it seemed so fascinate to me and i hope i can make my dream come true.

and, i like so much to be with middle school students.most of the students at that age are full of youthful spirity and i am sure their paion would pa to me.i will retain all the zest of adolescence.the most important reason is that our country needs plenty of teachers.so far, teaching is considered a tough and low-income job in china.however, if we have not enough teachers, our future will lack of excellent scientist, managers, businemen, soldiers and even goood workers and farmers.how can our country to be strong and wealthy？i wish my country to be a better one.i am ready to be a teacher and hope all the persons with lofty ideals may dedicate themselves to this meaningful career.i hope my dream future will come ture!

推荐第3篇：英语作文网购online shopping

With the computers becoming ubiquitous in many households, online shopping is no longer unfamiliar to us.The Internet offers us a channel to purchase various goods, for instance, apparel, home appliances, agriculture, medical, transportation, electronic components and so on.

As online shopping is playing an increasing important role in our daily life nowadays.Justlike a coin has its two sides, online shopping is a two-edged weapon.On one hand, getting what we want without having to go out and look for it brings us great convenience.On the other hand, online shopping also carries some disadvantages.First of all, the commodity you bought online may not answer to the description from the seller.Secondly, some sellers sell fakes in order to earn great profits.At last, leaving your mobile number as it was marked as important information to fill in for delivery causes disclosure of personal information.

So to sum up, the governmental departments can keep online shopping on the right track, and make adjustment if neceary.In addition, public should treat online shopping rationally.

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购的利与弊

with the development of the internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life.here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.people don\'t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.this is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.the goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the internet.all they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.the commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

however, shopping on the internet also has its disadvantages.the first disadvantage is that the consumers can\'t see the goods or try them on personally.sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.the second disadvantage is that some shops on the internet are not registered.they will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

推荐第5篇：读书笔记作文网

好书推荐

170班 杨劲松

莎士比亚说过：书记是人类进步的阶梯。所以我想给大家推荐一本好书，我想推荐给大家的书是，《冒险小虎队之被诅咒的海底城堡》我相信许多人都看过《冒险小虎队》的系列图书，这是一些叙述智慧非凡的三个孩子破了警察都不明白的奇怪案件的科幻，破案的长，中，短篇小说。我相信看过的人都会喜欢。书中每一小段都有几个只要看懂前面的剧情，然后稍加思考就能得出问题的答案，且答案要用解密卡才能知道，让我们看书不只是看，而还会去思考，这样对我们更有用一些，所以一定要买来看看。

这本书写的是因为温室效应，多年之后，所有陆地生物都会被淹没，人类要生存就不得不到水里去，为了人能在水底呼吸，一个有钱的人偷偷在一个沉没的海底城堡里用人做实验制造人造腮的故事。后来三个孩子用他们的智慧勇敢与坏人们做斗争，他们在破案过程中有危险有时也会受伤，可是他们也不放弃，坚持不懈，最终将坏人绳之以法，让那些被用来做实验的人重新获得自由 我只喜欢的主人公是路克坎平斯基，因为他是最会出主意的，他也是最聪明的一个。他虽然才11岁，可是他的智慧却让我们感到很震惊。 作者是奥地利的作家托马斯布热齐纳，他是一个很棒的作家，他所写的文章生动形象而且都很有趣，所以我很喜欢他写的书，他所写的《冒险小虎队》就热销于这几个国家。

这就是我给大家推荐的书，希望大家能够去找来看一看。

《假如给我三天光明》读后感 170班刘芮含

她在逆境中不屈不挠，最后战胜了困难；她在人生的道路上，不畏艰险勇敢前进；她与命运顽强抗争，创造了奇迹;她是一个度过了88个春秋，却熬过了87年无光、无声、无语的岁月，凭着自己坚强的意志与对学习的热爱攀登上了知识的高峰；她，就是海伦·凯勒—

—一个生活在黑暗中却又给人类带来光明的女性。

海伦出生在一个幸福的家庭，可她却很不幸。在她出生的19个月后，一场意外的生病却让她永远的失去了光明和声音。无论是夜晚还是早晨，无论是白天还是黑夜，她的生活只剩下了黑暗，她再也看不见色彩斑斓的世界了；再也听不见动听的声音了。在没有光和声音的世界中，她唯一的感受只有宁静。就在海伦6岁零9个月的时候，莎莉文老师走进了她的生命，莎莉文老师就象是一把明亮的灯火，点亮了海伦·凯勒心中的那盏黑暗的灯，让海伦·凯勒成功的从黑暗走向了光明，懂得了爱与希望。海伦·凯勒在莎莉文老师的细心教导和父母的引导下，并且经过自己的不懈努力，顺利地考上了著名大学——哈佛大学。还掌握了英、法、德、拉丁和希腊五种文字。她始终致力于残疾人事业，为每一个残疾人加油鼓劲。最终成为了一名著名的慈善家、演讲家和教育家。 我看完书后，深刻地认识到：一个人能不能取得成功，不在于条件的好坏，而在于有没有奋斗的精神。一个人只要有胸怀远大的理

想和奋斗目标，就会有无穷无尽的力量，创造条件，自己主宰自己的命运。海伦接受了命运的挑战，以惊人的毅力面对困境，用爱心去拥抱世界，终于在黑暗中找到了人生的光明，最后又把慈爱的双手伸向世界。既然一位残疾人都能取得这么伟大的成就，那我们这些健全人还有什么做不到的呢？

推荐《钢铁是怎样炼成的》一书 179班曹珈源

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部不一样的名著，它是我们成长的老师，也是人生的教科书。

此文中的主角保尔也就是以作者奥斯特洛夫斯基为原形来创作的。保尔因在学校学习时被神父无理侮辱而进行报复，结果被学校撵出学校。12岁到发电厂等处做工。16岁他加入了红军部队，此后勇敢作战。在一次战斗中受重伤，13天后才醒来，也懂得了生命意义和人的一生应当怎样度过。后来他投身到经济恢复，也酷受学习。他不但和自己的困苦作斗争，还和敌人作斗争，更同病魔斗。最后他全身瘫痪，双目失明，可是他精神支柱并没有倒，坚持创作，为此付出了自己一切力量。

它向我们提示了： 钢铁是怎样炼成的，成长是需要怎样坚强的。 它很适合我们班的现况。现在，我们班还是一气不振。各位同学在学习上落后于其它班，就应该去努力，更应该学习保尔在失明并残疾情况下勇于创作精神！我想我们不可能到那种程度，但是我们也是

试一试，努一把力！为老师、为父母、为自己争一口气。为美好的明天努一把力！

也许同学们还没有努力的精神或没有理解为何要努力。那就读一读此书，让我们明白——《钢铁是怎样炼成的》。

读书随笔

170班邓喜月

在这个世界上，书像天上的繁星，数不胜数；伟大的诗人杜甫说过，书籍是人类的营养品，俗话说；读书破万卷，下笔如有神。我曾经读过这样一本书叫;《做最好的自己》,这本书的作者叫李开复,这本书真的很有趣,作者是结合自己人生所经历过的事情写的。也是写给中国的青少年的，这本书我很喜欢，它所讲的内容 就是帮助青少年们实现引导他们走向成功的方向。

作者李开复 在书中写道；要时刻有着一种自信而积极的人生态度，去做最好的自己就是成功。拥有自信和积极的态度，的确是必不可少的，因为每个人的成功都是独一无二的，我们一生总是再做两件事情，一是追逐快乐，二是在逃避痛苦。每当我读到这里的时候，有时我就会对自己说，我一定要像作者李开复一样，只有改变自己的心态，改变自己的情绪，要尽自己最大的努力，做最好的自己，就可能成功的人士。我最喜欢书中的有一句话，真诚坦的人，才是值得信任的人。这一句话在这本书中给我留下了一个很深刻的印象。

我认这句话说的很有道理，因为如果失去了真诚，就很难得到信

任。作者李开复所说的这些道理为我打开了一扇门，一扇了解自己的门，他好像让我深深地走进了这本书的世界里，因它让我回味无穷。从这本书是我不仅学会了做人的道理，还学会了怎样做一个坚强的人。这本书告诉我，做人不是简单树立理想就可以轻松实现，但是没有理想的人一中那有趣的奥秘。定无所适从。我们总是再找各种借口，不是不会做，而是不想做，我们虽然不能改变环境，但我们可以改变自己，不可以改变过去但可以改变未来。看这本书，可以帮助自己点亮前方的道路，能让自己对自己更有信心，做最好的自己就要学会珍惜，相信，看重自己。做最好的自己，一步步迈向成功的道路。所以说，书籍可以把我们引入最美好的社会，使我们认识各个时代伟大的智者。书籍也是人类思想的宝库。因此；我们要多读书，多去了解那书。

读书随笔

丁婧媛 170 在上个月的读书活动中，我读了一本对我很有意义的文学作品：《梦幻薰衣草》。

第一次走进图书室，我四处打量着这儿：好几个大书架，上面放满了各式各样的;几排整整齐齐的桌椅。老师讲完要注意的问题后，我们就开始自由选书了。突然，我的目光落到一个角落里;这是一本紫色封面的书，图案里有我喜欢的薰衣草，那一片片深深浅浅的紫，看上去就觉得心旷神怡。

书的第一章是青春的时光。它教给我的，是坚持。书里的一句话篇2：读书笔记

读书笔记

友谊县第二小学 周璇 《名人传》读书笔记

《名人传》由法国著名作家罗曼·罗兰的《贝多芬传》、《米开朗琪罗传》和《托尔斯泰传》组成，它们均创作于二十世纪初期，无论在当时是在后世都产生了广泛的影响。在这三部传记中，罗曼·罗兰是紧紧把握住这三位拥有各自领域的艺术家的共同之处，着力刻画了他们为追求真善美而长期忍受苦难的心路历程。

书中写了三个世界上赫赫有名的人物。第一个是德国作曲家：贝多芬；另一个是意大利的天才雕刻家：米开朗基罗；最后一个是俄罗斯名作家：托尔斯泰。

在这本《名人传》中最令我感动的就是贝多芬的故事。贝多芬是个音乐天才，他的天分很早就被他的父亲发现了，不幸的是，贝多芬的父亲并不是一个称职的好父亲，他天天让贝多芬练琴，不顾及他的心情，一个劲儿的培训他，有时甚至把贝多芬和一把小提琴一起放进一个屋子里关起来，一关就是一整天，用暴力逼他学音乐。 贝多芬的童年是十分悲惨的，他的母亲在他十六岁时就去世了，他的父亲变成了挥霍的酒鬼。这些不幸一起压到了贝多芬的头上，在他心中刻下了深深的伤痕，也因此导致他的脾气暴躁而古怪。但是贝多芬没有因此而沉沦，他把自己的全部精力，都投入到了自己所热爱的音乐事业中去了。由于他的天分和勤奋，很快地他就成名了。当他沉醉在音乐给他带来的幸福当中时，不幸的事情又发生了：他的耳朵聋了。对于一个音乐家而言，最重要的莫过于耳朵，而像贝多芬这样以音乐为生的大音乐家，却聋了耳朵，这个打击是常人所接受不了的。

贝多芬的一生是悲惨的，也是多灾多难的，但他为什么还能成功呢？为什么正常人做不到的事，他却能做到呢？这引起了我的深思。我认为，贝多芬之所以成功，是因为它有着超与凡人的毅力和奋斗精神。面对困难，他丝毫无惧。这就是他成功的秘诀。在日常生活中，我们遇到困难时，经常想到的就是请求他人的帮助，而不是直面困难，下定决心一定要解决。而贝多芬，因为脾气古怪，没有人愿意与他做朋友，所以，他面对困难，只能单枪匹马，奋力应战。虽然很孤独，却学会了别人学不到的东西：只要给自己无限的勇气，再可怕的敌人也可以打败。

读《名人传》，在首篇的引言中有这样一段话：“我们周围的空气多沉重。老大的欧罗巴在重浊与腐败的气氛中昏迷不醒，鄙俗的物质主义镇压着思想，阻挠着政府与个人的行动。社会在乖巧卑下的自私自利中而死，人类喘不过气来。打开窗子罢！让自由的空气重新进来！呼吸一下英雄们的气息。” 显然，罗曼·罗兰要用英雄主义的精神来矫正时代的偏向。 在罗曼·罗兰看来，真正的英雄、真正的伟大是痛苦和孤独，是自我同无形物的抗争。在同一引言中他还说：“我称为英雄的，并非以思或强力称雄的人；而只是靠心灵伟大的人。”他正是紧紧抓住了英雄伟人痛苦的心灵，把战胜苦难作为衡量英雄的一把闪亮标尺。而他的《名人传》就是揭示人类历史上三位苦难英雄的心灵传记，他们是19世纪德国伟大音乐家贝多芬、文艺复兴时代意大利著名雕塑家米开朗琪罗、俄国文坛巨子托尔斯泰。 他在《贝多芬传》的结尾这样写道： “一个不幸的人，贫穷、残废、孤独，由痛苦造成的人，世界不给他欢乐，他却创造了欢乐来给予世界；他用他的苦难来铸成欢乐，好似他用那句豪语来说明的——那是可以总结他的一生，可以成为一切英勇心灵的箴言：用痛苦换来欢迎。”确实，“用痛苦换来欢乐”正是罗曼·罗兰追踪贝多芬一生命运的视野，这句话构成了《贝多芬传》内在的紧张和扣人心魂的思想魅力之所在。 是什么支持着贝多芬？是不向皇权低头的品质，是不被金钱收买的决心，是扼住命运咽喉的勇气！正是依靠着这些超凡的精神力量，贝多芬越过了人生的无数个痛苦险峰，达到了对人生最清醒的领悟。 如果说《贝多芬传》是英雄主义的号召，是力的颂歌，那么《托尔斯泰传》则是一首安魂曲、一支哀歌，一阕送葬曲。贝多芬伟大的痛苦是因为他在人生的盛年遭到厄运，托尔斯泰伟大的痛苦在他自身主观意志的选择。 《复活》是托尔斯泰暮年的又一部力作，罗曼·罗兰所说：“妻子、儿女、朋友、敌人都没有理解他，都认为他是堂·吉诃德，因为他们都看不见他与之斗争的那个敌人，其实这个敌人就是他自己。” “托尔斯泰，你是否依照你所宣扬的主义而生活！”他痛苦地回答：“我羞愧欲死，我是罪人，我应当被人蔑视。”终于，在82岁的暮年，托尔斯泰在一个寒冷的冬夜，独自逃出了家门，在一个无名的小城一病不起。弥留之际，他号啕大哭，对守在他周围的人们说道； “大地上千百万的生灵在受苦；为何大家都在这里只照顾一个列夫·托尔斯泰？” 其实，托尔斯泰发出的是对苍生的疑问，也是对痛苦心灵的回应，在这里我们分明又听到了贝多芬对生命的欢乐歌唱。 这就是罗

曼·罗兰在《名人传》里留给我们的永恒的精神光芒。

《爱的教育》读书笔记

看了《爱的教育》这本书使我感受很深，它里面的内容写得十分真实，让我看得入神入肺。没有任何虚伪的说教，并且教会了我许多道理，所以，我特别喜欢爱看这本书。

《爱的教育》是阿米琪斯最著名的作品，1866年出版后即畅销不衰，目前已经有成为世界公认的文学名著。该书主要讲了：一个意大利四年级小学生安利柯的一年来的经历，描写了发生在学校、班级和家里的一个个感人至深的故事。父母对儿女的爱有多深呀！在学校老师的关怀和鼓励之下，同学之间互相帮助的氛围里，朋友间的关爱都无不流溢于纸上，真是动人心弦啊！

读书笔记 1.老人与海

我读了美国著名作家海明威的小说老人与海，十分佩服小说中老渔夫的意志，他让我懂得了一个人一定要有坚持不懈的精神，才能获得成功。 小说描写的是一个年近六旬的老渔夫，在一次单身出海打鱼时，钓到了一条大鱼，却拉不上来。老渔夫同鱼周旋了几天后，才发现这是一条超过自己渔船数倍的大马林鱼，虽然明知很难取胜，但仍不放弃。后来又因大马林鱼伤口上的鱼腥味引来了几群鲨鱼抢食，但老人仍不愿就这样放弃，最终突出重围，将大鱼带回了渔港，让其他渔夫佩服不已。 2.童年

这本书是作者真实生活的写照，高尔基根据自己的亲身经历，再现了黑暗统治下的孩子从觉醒到长大的苦难历程。阿廖沙是一个悲惨、可怜的小孩，他的童年是在外祖父家度过的，他的生活可不像我们现在这样幸福，充满阳光和爱。他的外祖父性情暴躁，贪婪、自私；两个舅舅也很自私、粗暴，这些都在年幼的阿 廖沙的心里留下了深深的烙印。这本书让我了解到了当时沙皇统治时期的困苦生活，让我知道了现在的美好生活的来之不易。我们要珍惜现在的幸福生活，热爱生活，努力学习，用自己的能力和智慧把这个世界建设得更加美好。 3.海底两万里

这几天，我看了一本海底两万里，这本书非常有意思。其中，我被海底两万里中的冰山这一节内容深深打动了。 他们在南极地区航行，在回来的路上，不幸被冰山困住，但他们用自己的智慧拯救了自己的生命。 多么惊心动魄的一刻啊！想想他们，在危险的情况下，他们头脑清醒，用智慧战胜了困难。那我呢？我从小到大都很胆小，而且在困难来临的时候没有勇气去面对、去战胜它。而海底两万里给了我一些勇气，我应该学习他们的那种不畏艰险的精神！海底两万里虽然只是一本冒险小说，但它却给了我许多的勇气，它让我勇敢地去面对现实，不能胆小怕事！ 4.假如给我三天光明

假如给我三天光明这本书记录的是海伦.凯勒一生的事。书中感人心腑的故事，总是在我受到困难和挫折是鼓励我，不要后退。海伦.凯勒从小就失去了听觉、视觉和甜美的声音。她也曾因自己的缺陷而放弃过，可她又很快振作起来。在莎莉文老师的帮助下，凭着超人的毅力，不但学会了说话，还学会了五种语言文字！她一生熬过了八十七个无声、无语、无光的孤独岁月！一个人只要胸怀大志，并不懈向着目标努力奋斗，就不会被一些客观条件束缚，你就会拥有无限的力量去实现它！坚贞不屈、不断进取的精神是海伦.凯勒所拥有的，我们——祖国的接班人更应该拥有这种美好的精神品质！ 6.居里夫人传

居里夫人传详细叙述了居里夫人的一生，也介绍了比埃尔-居里的事迹，着重描写了居里夫妇的工作精神和处事态度。书中引用了居里夫妇的许多信札和日记，书的最后还附录了居里夫人一生所得的奖金，奖章的情况以及罗列他所得的名誉头衔，是一本很翔实的个人纪录。在书中，我们可以看到居里夫人从来没有浪费时间，只有严谨的生活；没有享乐的懒散，只有英勇的奋斗；没有奸诈的人和事，只有和谐的空气；没有丑恶的画面，只有纯洁的灵魂---这是一本最精彩的历史人物传记。 6.草房子

我不禁为书中的故事情节感动。桑桑在油麻地小学度过的精彩的六年使他目睹了，不幸的杜小康与厄运相拼时的悲惨，陆鹤对尊严的执着，和桑桑得鼠疫快要死时温幼菊的发自内心的鼓励??书中让我最感动的是杜小康面对破产时的坚强。他在学校门口卖东西时，他丝毫没有

显露出自卑。他的坚强让我惭愧。我们现在在家里人人都是“小公主”，衣来伸手，饭来张口。面对困难时，只是想别人来帮助自己。我知道了贫穷并不可怕，可怕的是你的胆怯。 7.龟兔赛跑

的故事，是一只乌龟和兔子赛跑，兔子因为跑到一半就睡觉了，没有比上乌龟，这个故事使我懂得了一个道理：做事不能做到一半就不做了，否则会一事无成。乌龟不怕困难，坚持下去才会成功得到了第一名我们要向乌龟学习，克服困难，坚持到底一定能成功。 8.玫瑰与教育

我体会到读书的重要，作为教师更应做好“读书思考实践”。窦老师是一名语文教师， 书中写的都是她教学生活中的随笔和感想，从书中我看到了她那淳朴、自然的人格魅力，心中盛满阳光，

怀着一颗感恩心为人处事的窦老师。这本书中，窦桂梅并没有讲大道理，也没有罗列出许多原则和规律，而是选择了一个新的视角：从研究教学活动中的“细节”入手，从一些我们常常熟视无睹的“小事”入手，以小见大，见微知著，让读者自己去悟出“规律”. 9.活了一百万次的猫

读完了这个故事，我想，为什么以前有那么多人爱过猫，猫都还是不在乎生死，

讨厌那些生活呢？因为猫一直都不是自己的猫，而是别人的猫，它生了又死，死了又生，它一直不满足，它一直在寻找自己理想的生活，直到它遇到那只平凡的白猫，它终于找到了自己想要的生活。最后，白猫死了，白猫再也不可以复生，它觉得世界上再也没有一只猫可以替代白猫了，它愿意陪白猫去另一个世界生活，所以它陪着白猫死了，猫再也没有活过来。 10.鲁滨逊漂流记

我读了笛福的鲁滨逊漂流记。我深深地被这本书所吸引，它让我体会到了鲁滨逊那惊人的毅力和百折不挠的精神。一个人在身陷绝境时，竟能对生活充满信心，使我认识到，不管遇到多大的困难，都要克服只有这样，才能像鲁宾逊那样，永远是一个胜利者篇4：读书笔记

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刚刚踏入九年级的门槛，我们就感觉到肩头的担子突然沉重起来。每天忙忙碌碌，像一个陀螺似的高速旋转。

九年级的我们，作业在不知不觉间翻了两倍，而且时间也越来越不够用。每天的睡眠时间被压缩到少得可怜。唉！更烦的是，晚上的三节晚自习似恶魔一般带着邪笑，似乎非得把我们肢解、吞噬而后快。

九年级的我们每天拖着疲惫身子回到家，还要被作业蹂躏到深夜；次日拂晓起床，就急急忙忙赶到学校操场进行晨练，气喘吁吁的跑完全程，刚回到教室，早自习的铃声就响起来了。想要喘上一口气，也实在难得。唉！

一上午的辛苦拼搏，早盼望着吃过饭后能趴着桌上休息会儿，可老师却逼着看书、做作业，到休息时只有可怜的半小时了。每个同学都珍惜这难得的机会，乖乖的趴在座位上，做上一个难得的甜美的梦。真希望这个梦能长一些啊！要是在以前，中午教室里没几个人能睡得着，没老师的时候乱哄哄的吵成一锅粥，现在想想那时是多么幸福的哟！

就说上次国庆八天长假吧，哪里玩了多少？面对山一般的作业，我不敢有丝毫的懈怠，只得天天待在家里写作业、看书，忙得昏头转向，脑袋都快炸了。要知道这样难熬，还不如没有这个假期呢？在家里居然比在学校还辛苦啊！进入九年级，老师、父母也都忙起来了，教室里始终弥漫着一股紧张的气氛。每个人都盼望着来年可以拿到好成绩，进入理想的高中。这不仅是为了得到老师的赞扬与父母的笑脸，更是为了自己的未来。没有退路，只有奋斗！

推荐第8篇：读后感_开心作文网

《飘》读后感

本文出自开心作文网

最近才读完米切尔的《飘》。当然，在我心中更喜爱的是它的另一个名字《乱世佳人》，光是听上去就可以在脑海里描绘出那个骄傲倔强的赫思嘉。

她是个热情、开放的爱尔兰姑娘。她骄傲、倔强、美丽、能干。她年轻的心里装满的是对生活的热爱和对爱情的向往，是十八岁女孩子脸上跳跃的笑容，洋溢着从心底里散发出来的甜蜜。可是，不幸地是，同样年轻的卫希礼打破了她对爱情的梦想。那时的赫思嘉，完全没有意识到那个撞了她尴尬一幕的男子，却是她爱情最后的归属。当然，不可否认的是，尽管爱情在她生命中占了很大的一部分，可是，她同样显露出的是她作为一名商人的精明干炼。她和她的父亲一样，作为爱尔兰民族的一员，血液中流淌的是对土地的挚爱，哪怕是在那样战火纷飞的年代里，也依然保护着那片他们从小生长于斯的土地。

他们是南北战争之前，美国南部农奴制下的典型的南方种植园主。她生活在那个美国历史上的乱世里。几经波折，当年那个勇敢大胆的少女终于认清了她心中的真爱，不是理想得不符合实际的卫希礼，而是真实地一直陪在她身边的白瑞德。那个同样倔强、骄傲的充满了野性的船长，为了她，放下了骄傲的姿态，在那么多年的等待之后，终于得到了自己的真爱。哪怕赫思嘉一直都没有发现，她实际上早已爱上了他。也许，爱情的光芒还是抵不过岁月的磨砺吧！他守在她身边，却清楚地知道她对卫希礼的牵挂。于是，再执著的等待也会有到头的那一天。幸好，邦妮出生了，白瑞德把爱的重心放在小女儿的身上，他呵护她，就像是呵护着心中的月亮一样。那样的温暖和关爱，生怕一不留神，就把她碰碎了。好景不长，年幼的邦妮因为意外而丧生，这让已经对赫思嘉绝望的白瑞德彻底失去爱人的希望，哪怕是他知道，就在这个时候，赫思嘉已经明白了自己的心。可是，这一次，他却是累了，再不想继续你追我赶的游戏，所以他选择离开。那么，赫思嘉呢？难道她就这样对命运屈服了吗？当然不，那个曾经骄傲的少女，那个精明能干的商人，那个骨头里流淌着爱尔兰人对困难绝不屈服精神的女人，哪怕，已经身为人妻，却依然不曾丧失掉最初的那一点勇敢。她相信，她能够挽回她爱人的心，她爱白瑞德。所以，她不会眼看着幸福溜走，“tomorrw is a other day。”所以，我亲爱的赫思嘉，你一定可以找回你的白瑞德，不是吗？我勇敢的爱尔兰姑娘。

作文点评：“书是人类的进步的阶梯。”作者能在读完《飘》这篇长篇小说，抒发自己的

一些感受。这是值得肯定的。再者，作者在抒发感受时，夹叙夹议，兼带抒情，在一定程度上表达出了自己的看法以及以主人公的赞美之情。但本文有些不足之处，最明显的是主《飘》这篇小说主人公的名字是什么？Scarlett，是其英文名。“赫思嘉”是否翻译不妥？其次文章的思路很混乱，只能从总体上看出作者对女主人公的赞美之情，但文章的层次有些混乱，这一点是文章的最大不足。另外，建议文章 多分段。

《昆虫记》读后感

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一个人耗尽一生的光阴来观察、研究“虫子”，已经算是奇迹了；一个人一生专为“虫子”写出一部皇皇巨着，更不能不说是奇迹；而这部书居然一版再版，先后被翻译成50多种文字，直到百年之后还在读书界一次又一次引起轰动，更是奇迹中的奇迹。对！这些奇迹的创造者就是法布尔和他的《昆虫记》。

法国20世纪初的着名作家罗曼。罗兰曾经这样称赞法布尔：“他观察之热情耐心、细致入微，令我钦佩，他的书堪称艺术杰作。”是啊！只因为他观察时的细心、他对昆虫那不灭的的热情，才会写出这么一部皇皇巨着。着名作家巴金则曾这样评价法布尔这部惊世之作：“它熔作者毕生研究成果和人生感悟于一炉，以人性观察虫性，将昆虫世界化作供人类获得知识、趣味、美感和思想的美文。”

世界上第一本《昆虫记》出版在19世纪末20世纪初的法国，那是一本集自然科学和人文关怀于一体的昆虫百科全书。当时的《昆虫记》全书共十卷，长达二三百万字。在《昆虫记》中作者将专业知识与人生感悟融于一炉，娓娓道来，在对一种种昆虫的特征和日常生活习性的描述中体现出作者对生活世事特有的眼光，字里行间洋溢着作者本人对生活的热爱与尊重。这本书一出版就立即成为了当时的畅销书，在法国自然科学史与文学史上有着举足轻重的地位。它不仅是一部研究昆虫的科学巨着，也是一部讴歌生命的宏伟诗篇，被人们冠以“昆虫的史诗”之美称，法布尔也由此获得了“科学诗人”、“昆虫界的荷马”、“动物心理学的创导人”等桂冠，并因此书于1910年获得诺贝尔文学奖的提名。

我最欣赏的篇章是第二卷第五章的：绿色蝈蝈儿的故事。改篇章描述的是一种绿色的蝈蝈的特征与生活习性，写的细致生动，还多处运用了比喻、拟人等等的修辞手法。在七年级上册的语文书上有一篇课文：《绿色蝈蝈》。它是《昆虫记》中第二卷第五章的部分内容。别

人说：“课本上的内容精简易懂，让读者更能明白。与课本内容相比，则显得原文啰嗦复杂，内容较为枯燥。”可即使这样，我对原文的评价还是比对课文内容的评价更胜一筹。已做精简处理的改编文虽能更好地表现出绿色蝈蝈的“个性”可让读者从中体现出来的仍是一片死气沉沉的文章。可原文不同，它虽然稍微啰嗦复杂，可它的形式像日记一样，读起来能让读者感受到作者当时那好奇的心„„

《昆虫记》是一个奇迹，的确是一个奇迹，是由人类杰出的代表法布尔与自然界众多的平凡子民——昆虫，共同谱写的一部生命的乐章，一部永远解读不尽的书„„

推荐第9篇：大学英语

1：The old lady felt ___________ after her husband died

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3：Louis was asked to _____ the man who stole her purse.1.confirm

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4：Over a third of the population was estimated to have no

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5：This story __________ the real experience of a sportsman

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6：I don’t think I’m ______ of your succe at your present

job.

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the room.

1.out2.off3.down4.up

8：A well-written composition _______ good choice of words

and clear organization among other things.

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9：The old lady had a firm ______________ that her husband

would come back someday.

1.conviction2.statement3.punishment4.imagination

10：A well-written article ______________ good choice of words

and clear organization among other things.

1.calls on2.calls for3.calls up4.calls off

11：The enemies fought hard, but finally they had to give

______, because their food supply was cut off.

1.in

3.out4.away

12：Job suitability may also need to be regularly monitored

in order to _____ worker health and ability.

1.aure2.sure3.reaure4.insure

13：The students were asked to give a ______ on communication

through body language.

1.preparation2.perspective3.presentation4.protection

14：We all _____________laughter when we heard his humorous

story

1.burst through2.burst into3.burst out

15：She left ______ great haste in order to catch the train.

1.to2.on3.in4.for

16：Good students take a right ___________ towards exams.

1.attitude2.altitude3.latitude4.aptitude

17：Scientists have recently turned their attention to natural

______ of energy: the sun, the sea, the wind and hot springs.

1.image2.appearance3.sources4.cause

18：Psychologists find that one’s attention ___________ has

a limit.So a break between claes is neceary.

1.space

3.time4.period

19：Mary was _____________ with her boy friend because he was

late for the date.

1.bothered2.annoyed3.interfered4.interrupted

20：It is our ______ policy that we will achieve unity through

peaceful means.

1.consistent2.continuous3.considerate4.continual

推荐第10篇：大学英语

I.Leon 3

Background information

A.About the author

Richard MoranMore Crime and Le Punishment

Richard Moran is a criminologist and a leading expert on the insanity defense,

capital punishment, and the history of the electric chair.The author of numerous

articles and reviews, Moran has also written articles for the Washington Post,

Christian Science Monitor, New York Times, and Newsweek.

The Executioner\'s Current

It is the story of how the electric chair developed out of an effort by one nineteenth-century

electric company to discredit the other.

EdisonEdison, Thomas Alva(1847-1931) a US inventor who made over 1300 electrical inventions, including the , the record player, and equipment for the cinema.He is most famous for inventing the(=a gla container with a thin wire inside, which produces light by using electricity).

When Thomas Edison and George Westinghouse (1846-1914, 美国发明家)were building the first power plants in the country, electric light was a bizarre new technology that few people understood and many people feared.Adding to the confusion were the two competitors\' attempts to promote their own systems and discredit the other.When New York State began considering electrocution as a method of capital punishment, Edison recommended Westinghouse\'s alternating current for the unseemly task.Westinghouse, not wanting the negative stigma aociated with his system, fought back, and a truly well intentioned government effort to find a more humane method of execution became a courtroom battle for commercial supremacy between two competing pioneers.Moran\'s account is broad, covering the electric power struggle between Edison and Westinghouse, the trial and execution of the first man to die in the electric chair, and the history of the capital punishment debate in the U.S.Edison\'s popularity as a cultural hero lends appeal to the entertaining drama of the power companies\' competition, and the surprisingly colorful history of the electric chair makes for fascinating reading.

第11篇：大学英语

大学英语几大优势

一， 听力。所有报纸上的文章，词汇自学教材，全部配有朗读听力，

并且听力朗读人为报社重金聘请历届大学英语四六级听力朗读人。

二， 文章难度分级别，同学们可根据自己的英语水平自由选择不同

难度的文章学习。

三， 押题，报纸配套的二十套模拟题加赠送的试题集为王长喜押题

组编制，具有极高押题率，连续数年命中听力和阅读，特别是08年十二月份的四级考试作文原题。同学们考四级之前一定要多做。 四， 课堂同步辅导，同学们在上课时可免去做笔记的麻烦，更避免

了因为走神而错过的老师讲解的知识点。

五， 报纸最后的汉语版，为报社专门为同学们加的，为使同学们在

读英语累了的时候看一会经典文章换一下思维调节一下大脑。 六， 学习卡。同学们不仅可以下载报纸和词典上的听力，还可以浏

览报纸前两年的电子版，最重要的是学习卡登陆后有智能化题库，同学们可以免费参加四级机考模拟。并且上有最新的考试动态和专家点评。(卡用法：登陆卡上网站输入卡号和密码，卡终身有效) 七， 词汇。词典所有词汇为四级考试范围词汇，所有单词都著有详

细解释及搭配和范例，并有真题跟踪，语法详解，并且所有词汇和范例全部配有朗读听力，为同学们考四六级之必备佳品。

八， 报纸全年定价120元，每周一期，每月一发。既经济，又实用，

性价比极高，为同学们考四级之必备品。

第12篇：英语大学

国家定向培养计划少数民族高层次骨干人才攻读

硕士学位研究生(应届考生 )定向协议书

甲方(培养单位)： 北京外国语大学

乙方(定向省、自治区、直辖市教育行政部门)：丙方(定向生本人)：

根据2008年《少数民族高层次骨干人才计划》招生管理办法，就丙方攻读硕士学位研究生事宜，甲、乙、丙三方经协商达成如下协议：

一、甲方为乙方录取丙方为2007年专业攻读硕士学位研究生。

二、甲方根据《普通高等学校学生管理规定》对丙方进行管理，按培养方案对丙方进行培养。甲方向丙方发放硕士研究生普通奖学金。丙方学习期满、符合硕士研究生毕业条件，甲方准予毕业，符合硕士学位授予条件，甲方授予硕士学位。丙方学习结束离校后，甲方可将丙方的毕业证书、硕士期间档案等一并直接寄送乙方。

三、丙方党、团组织关系转入基础培训学校，基础培训结业考核合格后转入甲方，丙方在甲方的学习结束后，丙方必须回到乙方所在省、自治区、直辖市就业。且服务年限不得少于5年。 乙方负责指导丙方就业。

四、丙方必须遵守学籍管理规定等各项规章制度，按时完成学业。丙方在校期间若受警告、记过、留校察看等处分，由甲方通知乙方。丙方中途退学、受开除学籍处分，或因其他原因不宜继续学习，由甲方依据有关规定处理。丙方在学期间欲变动学籍（休学、延期毕业等），须提供乙方的同意证明，否则不予办理。

五、丙方第一学年须到教育部指定的基础强化培训基地进行培训，考核合格后方可进入甲方继续硕士学位培养阶段学习。

六、本协议一式三份，经甲、乙、丙三方签字并盖公章后，自丙方取得正式学籍（到民族硕士基础强化培训基地报到）之日起生效。甲、乙、丙三方各持有一份，按本协议执行全部条款。

七、违约情形及处理

丙方有以下情况，乙方有权追究其相应的违约责任：

毕业后未按本协议去定向省、自治区、直辖市工作的，应在违约处理决定公布后1个月内，一次性向乙方退还所享受的免费教育经费、普通奖学金，并缴纳该费用50％的违约金。

八、未尽事宜，由甲、乙、丙三方分别签订补充协议。

甲方单位公章：乙方单位公章：丙方签字： 甲方负责人签字：乙方负责人签字：

年月日年月日年月日

第13篇：大学英语

But neither the nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college.In two years I would be ready for college.In three more my sister would want to go.Time was running out, and Mother was frantic for ways to save money.It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing alreadyfarming-- 80 acres in addition to holding a fulltime job.然而，无论是托儿所或是我父母后来购买的汽车旅馆都不能提供足够的收入供我妹妹和我上大学。两年后就该是我上大学的时候了。再过三年，妹妹也要上了。时间一天天过去，妈妈拼命想办法积蓄钱。很清楚，爸爸已尽了最大努力，除了一份全日工作之外，还耕种了八十英亩地

Certainly I don\'t teach because teaching is easy for me.Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer.For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profeion.Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing.Sweaty-palm, because I\'m always nervous before I enter the claroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am.Sinking-stomach, because I leave the claroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.当然，我之所以教书并不是因为我觉得教书轻松。我做过各种各样的工作借以谋生：机修工、木工、作家，教书可是其中最难的一行。对我来说，教书是个会令人熬红眼睛、掌心出汗、精神沮丧的职业。说熬红眼睛,这是因为我晚上不管备课到多晚,总觉得准备得还不充分。说掌心出汗，是因为我跨进教室之前总是非常紧张，自信学生一定会发觉我其实是个傻瓜笨蛋。说精神沮丧，这是因为我1小时后走出教室时，确信这堂课上得比平常还要平淡无味。

你能想像一个身体严重残疾的妇女独自经营一个网站并且像一个专业的体育记者一样详细报道洛杉矶道奇队吗?如果我没有亲眼见到她蜷曲在轮椅里，用固定在头上的一根棍子敲击字键打出她的评论，我是绝不会相信的。我长途驱车希望揭露一个精心策划的骗局，但是，看着她在黑暗的棚屋里添写她的报道，我知道我发现了一个真正的赢家。她对棒球的热情和她对球员的信赖使我回到了积极的态度。Could you imagine a woman with a severe physical handicap running a website on her own and covering the Los Angles Dodgers as extensively as a profeional sportswriter? I would never believe it if I had not seen her with my own eyes, curled up in a wheelchair, typing her comments by hitting the key with a pointer fastened to her head.I had driven a long way in hopes of uncovering an elaborate hoax, but watching her strain in the gloom of her shanty to add to her story, I knew I had found a true winner.Her enthusiasm for the game and her trust in the athletes brought me back to a positive again

But neither the nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college.In two years I would be ready for college.In three more my sister would want to go.Time was running out, and Mother was frantic for ways to save money.It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing alreadyfarming-- 80 acres in addition to holding a fulltime job.然而，无论是托儿所或是我父母后来购买的汽车旅馆都不能提供足够的收入供我妹妹和我上大学。两年后就该是我上大学的时候了。再过三年，妹妹也要上了。时间一天天过去，妈妈拼命想办法积蓄钱。很清楚，爸爸已尽了最大努力，除了一份全日工作之外，还耕种了八十英亩地

Certainly I don\'t teach because teaching is easy for me.Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer.For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profeion.Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing.Sweaty-palm, because I\'m always nervous before I enter the claroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am.Sinking-stomach, because I leave the claroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.当然，我之所以教书并不是因为我觉得教书轻松。我做过各种各样的工作借以谋生：机修工、木工、作家，教书可是其中最难的一行。对我来说，教书是个会令人熬红眼睛、掌心出汗、精神沮丧的职业。说熬红眼睛,这是因为我晚上不管备课到多晚,总觉得准备得还不充分。说掌心出汗，是因为我跨进教室之前总是非常紧张，自信学生一定会发觉我其实是个傻瓜笨蛋。说精神沮丧，这是因为我1小时后走出教室时，确信这堂课上得比平常还要平淡无味。

你能想像一个身体严重残疾的妇女独自经营一个网站并且像一个专业的体育记者一样详细报道洛杉矶道奇队吗?如果我没有亲眼见到她蜷曲在轮椅里，用固定在头上的一根棍子敲击字键打出她的评论，我是绝不会相信的。我长途驱车希望揭露一个精心策划的骗局，但是，看着她在黑暗的棚屋里添写她的报道，我知道我发现了一个真正的赢家。她对棒球的热情和她对球员的信赖使我回到了积极的态度。Could you imagine a woman with a severe physical handicap running a website on her own and covering the Los Angles Dodgers as extensively as a profeional sportswriter? I would never believe it if I had not seen her with my own eyes, curled up in a wheelchair, typing her comments by hitting the key with a pointer fastened to her head.I had driven a long way in hopes of uncovering an elaborate hoax, but watching her strain in the gloom of her shanty to add to her story, I knew I had found a true winner.Her enthusiasm for the game and her trust in the athletes brought me back to a positive again But neither the nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college.In two years I would be ready for college.In three more my sister would want to go.Time was running out, and Mother was frantic for ways to save money.It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing alreadyfarming-- 80 acres in addition to holding a fulltime job.然而，无论是托儿所或是我父母后来购买的汽车旅馆都不能提供足够的收入供我妹妹和我上大学。两年后就该是我上大学的时候了。再过三年，妹妹也要上了。时间一天天过去，妈妈拼命想办法积蓄钱。很清楚，爸爸已尽了最大努力，除了一份全日工作之外，还耕种了八十英亩地 Certainly I don\'t teach because teaching is easy for me.Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer.For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profeion.Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing.Sweaty-palm, because I\'m always nervous before I enter the claroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am.Sinking-stomach, because I leave the claroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.当然，我之所以教书并不是因为我觉得教书轻松。我做过各种各样的工作借以谋生：机修工、木工、作家，教书可是其中最难的一行。对我来说，教书是个会令人熬红眼睛、掌心出汗、精神沮丧的职业。说熬红眼睛,这是因为我晚上不管备课到多晚,总觉得准备得还不充分。说掌心出汗，是因为我跨进教室之前总是非常紧张，自信学生一定会发觉我其实是个傻瓜笨蛋。说精神沮丧，这是因为我1小时后走出教室时，确信这堂课上得比平常还要平淡无味。 你能想像一个身体严重残疾的妇女独自经营一个网站并且像一个专业的体育记者一样详细报道洛杉矶道奇队吗?如果我没有亲眼见到她蜷曲在轮椅里，用固定在头上的一根棍子敲击字键打出她的评论，我是绝不会相信的。我长途驱车希望揭露一个精心策划的骗局，但是，看着她在黑暗的棚屋里添写她的报道，我知道我发现了一个真正的赢家。她对棒球的热情和她对球员的信赖使我回到了积极的态度。Could you imagine a woman with a severe physical handicap running a website on her own and covering the Los Angles Dodgers as extensively as a profeional sportswriter? I would never believe it if I had not seen her with my own eyes, curled up in a wheelchair, typing her comments by hitting the key with a pointer fastened to her head.I had driven a long way in hopes of uncovering an elaborate hoax, but watching her strain in the gloom of her shanty to add to her story, I knew I had found a true winner.Her enthusiasm for the game and her trust in the athletes brought me back to a positive again

第14篇：大学英语

大学英语

08/09学年教学与管理安排

按照外语学院大学英语教研室期中教学、教务会议精神，和近期各学院及师生对教学反映。我们对大学英语08/09学年教学与管理作如下安排：

1、06级“英语视听说”教材使用《新世纪大学英语视听说》（上海外语教育出版社）第

3、4册。上课地点：各语言实验室。

2、在07级“综合英语”和“口语”课程中增加授课内容：“翻译和写作”；翻译教材使用毛荣贵教授编写的《新世纪大学英汉翻译教程》（上海交通大学出版社）。每周课型设计：“综合英语”2节+“口语+翻译和写作”2节。

3、08年级普通本科（除音乐、体育、美术类本科外）教学环节细述如下：

1）、普通本科继续实施网络教学。对新生入学时进行分班教学，分A、B、C三种类型。分班原则：浙江省考生按照高考分数分班，外省新生按照A班占1/4，B班占1/2，C班占1/4的比例，将学生划入各模块教学班。所用教材与07级相同。不过教学计划应重新编写，选择合适的章节授课。期末统一出卷。

2）、在“口语”课中增加与专业和时事相关的口语练习内容，任课教师协作编写口语练习教材，教学过程应体现地方性综合大学的特点。同时落实课内“快速阅读”练习。

3）、音乐、体育、美术类本科学生按照传统行政班级教学，每周4节课。教材使用上海外语教育出版社全新版大学英语预备级（底起点+高起点）和综合教程第

一、二册全套（综合英语、阅读、视听说、快速阅读）。期末统一出卷。

4）、08专生本的班级按照教学行政班级，不参加网络模块教学班。教材使用大学英语全新版第

3、4册的“综合英语”、“阅读”、“视听说”、“快速阅读”。每周4节课。时间1学年，期末单独出卷。

5）08学前专科、08体育高职按照教学行政班级教学教材使用大学英语全新版预备级（底起点+高起点）“综合英语”、“阅读”、“视听说”、“快速阅读”。 每周4节课。时间1学年，期末单独出卷。

4、认真总结一年来网络教学改革，努力撰写教学科研论文。教研室将对诸如论文版面费给以适度补贴。

外语学院

08年6月

请求增加口语教室数量的要求

根据一年来大学英语口语教学的现状。为确保08年级网络教学改革，经核实应增加多媒体大学英语口语教室如下：

学院路：1个（原1个）

茶山南校区：1个（原3个）

请教务处、现代教育技术中心与外语学院合作讨论有关事项。

外语学院

08年6月

第15篇：大学英语

快速阅读 What are genetically modified GM foods?

Man has been \"genetically modifying\" everything from food to dogs for many centuries; but in the past, the only tool has beenselective breeding.For example, if you wanted to create a breed of corn with resistance to a certain fungus, you would plant a plot of corn and see how individual plants did with the fungus.Then you would take seeds from the plants that did well, plant them, look at their performance against the fungus… and so on over the years until you had created a strain of corn plant that had very high resistance to the fungus in question.

Using selective breeding techniques, people have created everything from variegated roses to giant pumpkins to strains of wheat with twice the yield and very high disease tolerance.In the same way, you can take chickens, analyze their eggs and find chickens with eggs that contain le cholesterol.Then you can breed them to create a strain of low-cholesterol chickens.You can select on any detectable trait and selectively breed members of the species that do well on that trait.

Genetic engineering techniques now allow scientists to insert specific genes into a plant or animal without having to go through the trial-and-error proce of selective breeding.Genetic engineering is therefore extremely rapid compared to selective breeding.With genetic engineering, you can also cro species very easily (for example, you can create a plant that produces human insulin).You can read the article How Cells Work to learn about DNA, genes and gene splicing.The techniques are now standard and genes can be spliced very easily.

There are a variety of techniques used to modify plants and animals through genetic engineering.For example, there is a widely used herbicide called Roundup, made by Monsanto.Roundup kills any plant that it touches.Monsanto has genetically modified soybeans and other crop plants to create \"Roundup Ready\" strains that are not affected by Roundup.By planting Roundup Ready seeds, a farmer can control weeds by spraying Roundup right over the crop.The crop completely ignores the herbicide, but the weeds are eliminated.Roundup Ready seeds reduce production costs and increase yield, so food becomes le expensive.Other scientists have inserted genes that produce a natural insecticide into corn plants to eliminate damage from corn borers, and a variety of anti-fungal genes can be inserted as well.The list goes on and on -- there really is no limit to what can be done.

转基因转基因食品是什么?

男子“基因改造”从食物到许多世纪的狗;但在过去,唯一的工具beenselective繁殖。例如,如果你想创建一个玉米品种抗某种真菌,你会开辟出一块玉米,看看株真菌。然后你将种子的植物表现不错,工厂,看看他们的表现对真菌…等等这些年来,直到您已经创建了一个应变非常高的玉米植株抵抗真菌的问题。

通过选择育种技术,人们创造了一切,从玫瑰组合巨型南瓜品种的小麦产量和非常高的疾病公差的两倍。同样地,你可以把鸡,分析他们的蛋和鸡鸡蛋含有胆固醇。然后你就可以繁殖出的低胆固醇鸡。你可以选择在任何检测特征和选择性繁殖的物种成员做好特质。

基因工程技术现在允许科学家将特定基因插入植物或动物,而无需通过选择育种的试错过程。因此,基因工程是极其快速的选择育种,基因工程相比,你也可以很轻易跨越物种(例如,您可以创建一个工厂,生产人胰岛素)。你可以阅读这篇文章细胞如何工作了解DNA,基因和基因剪接。现在的技术标准和基因很容易可以拼接。

有各种各样的方法来修改通过基因工程植物和动物。例如,有一个广泛使用的除草剂叫农达,由孟山都。综述杀死任何植物,它触动。孟山都转基因大豆和其他农作物创造“农达”压力,不受综述。通过种植抗农达种子,农民可以通过喷洒控制杂草集拢在作物。作物完全忽略了除草剂,但杂草消除。抗农达种子降低生产成本,提高产量,所以食物变得更便宜。其他科学家基因产生天然杀虫剂插入玉米植物从玉米螟虫,消除损伤和各种抗真菌基因也可以插入。这样的例子不胜枚举,——实际上是没有限制的可以做什么。

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假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：

1.车祸发生的时间及地点

2.你所见到的车祸情况

3.你对车祸原因的分析

An Eye-witne Account of a Traffic Accident

Yesterday afternoon, I happened to witne a terrible traffic accident on my way home from school.It was 5:30 p.m., I was riding my favorite Giant back home.When I got to the last croing on the Golden Lion Street, the red light was on.So I applied the brakes, along with a long queue of vehicles waiting to pa.

Just at that moment, a heavy-load truck with earth roared forward at my side and bumped against a private Accord of Honda travelling eastbound.As a result, the windshield of the lorry was broken into pieces and its driver g（转载自第一范文网http://，请保留此标记。）ot fatally wounded on the head on the steering wheel.The driver of the Accord and his girlfriend, the only paenger in the car, only got minor injuries, but his car lost its rear axel and two wheels and was totally dead.

As for the cause of the accident, I think the driver of the lorry should be held responsible: the light was red then; he should have stopped and waited.It was he who had broken the traffic regulations.In addition, the bad weather was part of the cause.It was drizzling then, and the road was quite slippery.Finally, drunk driving was probably an important factor.As the police discovered on the spot, there was a heavy alcoholic smell on the dead body of the lorry driver.

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写出景物的特征

丁 虹

一、导入

“天边渐渐地亮起来，这时好像谁在那淡青色的天畔抹上了一层粉红色；在粉红色下面隐藏着无数道金光。猛然间仿佛起了一阵响声似的，于是粉红色的云片被冲开了，天空顿时开展起来。”“蓝天已被它染红了一角，青山的顶也带了灿烂的红光。离太阳不远的几片紫色和淡墨色的云被日光烘托起，成了特别的颜色，还镶上一道宽的金边。”

以上两段文字皆选自巴金的小说。不用细辨，你自能区分出“朝夕”。原因何在？关键是作者抓住了两者的光色特征。

再来看一个故事。古时有一地主，家住北方。一日听人说江南的苏州园林甚妙，遂差家仆依样仿制。工毕，赞叹不已。后游江南得亲见，叹日：“不如其十之一也。”

其实不是家仆仿得不像，而是未渗入江南园林独有的气蕴。

以上两例给我们的写作带来很大启示，即写景状物时如能抓其特征则拨云见日，否则难免雾里看花。那么究竟什么是景物的特征，且如何把握并加以描述呢？

二、述要

我们常说“泰山雄、峨眉幽、华山险庐山秀。”古希腊有句名言：“世上没有两片相同的树叶。”世上的景物林林总总，变化万端，但又各有其独特的风貌。这独特的风貌就是景物的特征。具体讲，景物特征就是某处景物在形态、布局、格调、氛围等方面区别于他处景物的地方；换言之，它是一处景物所独有的，他处景物不会或者不会跟它全然相似的。只有抓住某一景物区别于其他景物的特征，才能真正把握它的形象，并借以传达某种精神内涵。然而“特征”这个概念看似鲜明，实际却难以把握。这就是为什么千人游黄山，千人一个样。那么究竟如何抓住并写出景物的特征呢？有句诗不妨一读：“春风绕柳声皆绿。”这是一句写春意的诗。古往今来，写春天不外乎风花雨柳，此句亦然。但这句诗，仅七个字，却把水灵灵的春天立在了你眼前。“绕”字写出了春风的轻柔，“绿”字写出了春色的盎然。不得不提的是本句中的通感。“声皆绿”——春风原本柔而无声，绕行于垂柳的丝绦间便自然有了“哗哗”的轻响，远远闻听，这轻响又似乎从枝叶体内渗出，于是便也沾了绿气。作者的高妙之处便在于此。

可见，景物的特征并非镜花水月，只要做到以下两点，必能妙笔生花：

1.抓住对景物最深刻的感触，并以此为切人点；

2.灵活运用多种表现手法。即根据景物范围的大小或用大笔勾勒，或用工笔细描。比如前面提到的那句写春意的诗，从视觉、听觉入手，动用了拟人、通感等修辞手法，这就属于工笔细描。

三、点拨

游龙游石窟（节选）

浙江龙游中学 吕笋

假若这是最后一篇征文来稿，那么请不要惊讶它的姗姗来迟，因为在我决定写这篇游记而去游览了家乡的那处“名景”——龙游石窟之后，我就一直沉迷于石窟留给我的一个个谜团之中，至今无法自拔……

石窟位于县城的东北面约5000米，距今已有 2200多年历史。这天早上，我终于乘上一辆出租车，去游览这令我心仪已久，却一直未能成行的神秘处所。

大约二十分钟后，车停在了一座小山丘旁。下车，一个龙头状的入口正对着我，这就是石窟的入口。我一头扎了进去。乍一看，入口并不大，宽、高均为2.5米左右。然而刚迈进一步，站在一号洞的入口时，我惊呆了，仿佛进入了另一个天地。这是一个巨大的人工开凿的立方体洞窟。入口在这个立方体的一个上顶角。一条长长的阶梯顺着一边石壁，由洞口通至洞底。我缓步而下，站在洞底，环顾四周，又不禁惊诧于古人的手巧，整个洞窟都是人工开凿而成，但粗犷中随处透出一种美感：石壁上每隔40厘米就是一道水平凿痕，环绕一周而不间断，仿佛是一齿而成。在两道水平凿痕之间是与之成75度角的竖直凿痕，两条竖直凿痕间约4厘米，一周环绕下来，三千多条竖直凿痕几乎完全平行，且整个洞窟中十万余条竖直凿痕莫不如此，令人叹为观止。但一个石窟为何要开凿得如此美观？这些漂亮凿群痕是做什么用的？这算是谜团之一吧！

更令人惊讶不已的是石窟中所体现出的古人的智慧。石窟顶壁与水平面成30度角，专家们根据该石窟在山丘中所处的位置，计算出这正是石窟顶受所能承受最大压力的角度。整个顶壁约900平方米，却只有一根边长约1.5米的三角形石柱支撑，而石柱所处的位置恰是顶壁的几何重心。偶然的巧合？必然的设计？若是偶然的巧合，可

二、

三、四号洞的石柱也是支在顶壁的重心。若是必然的设计，那么在开凿石窟的春秋时期甚至更早，当时的人们是如何懂得这些的呢？此谓谜团之二。

……

再下去是三号洞。洞中存放着一尊石像。石像是在石窟中出土的、我仔细地打量石像：它与真人等高，着戎装，手持宝剑手地，神色庄重，颇有大将风度。谁？他是谁？此谓谜团之四。

……

当我带着这些谜团离开石窟时，如同带着历史老人赠送的礼物。我既为它们的精美而高兴，又为无法打开它们精美的外包装去一览真容而苦恼。现在，我把这些礼物给大家分享，希望有一天能得到打开它们的欣喜。

生：我看过很多写石窟的文章，领略了敦煌千佛洞精湛绝伦的壁画，龙冈石窟维妙维肖的万佛。此文虽然描绘的是一座名不见经传的石窟，却引得我一口气读完。

师：有没有想过提什么原因让你如此“迫不及待”呢？

生：从头至尾我觉得有一股神秘的力量一直在吸引着我。

师：我也有同感。看来作者真是“用心良苦”。复读全文不难发现，其实“神秘”是贯穿全文的主线，作者从沉迷于谜团开篇，行文连抛五谜，最后携谜而出。整个过程都弥漫着神秘的气息。生：我知道了，作者所感悟的龙游石窟的特点就是神秘。

师：的确。相信作者在游览过程中观察一定非常细致，否则不会发现这么多谜团，自然也不会觉得神秘。

生：看来观察是抓住景物特征的第一步。可是每个人的观察角度不同，因此感触自然也应不同。 师：正所谓“横看成岭侧成峰，远近高低各不同”。要的就是这“不同”，否则千人一面，必然平淡乏味。生：明白了。另外，我觉得本文的用语也很精当。比如刚入洞时，环顾四周景致那一段用了大笔勾勒的手法，“立方体”“粗犷中随处透出一种美感”这些都是概括性极强的语句。而在阐述神秘何在时，却适时使用工笔细描，比如描写凿痕的间隔距离、石窟顶壁与水平面所成的角度、石柱所处的位置以及洞中石像等。但是，我觉得在用语方面有一点遗憾；大量的数据过于抽象，如果能用一些修辞手法（比如拟人、比喻）将之形象化就更好了。

师：的确，这是本文的不足之处。可见，即使抓住了景物的特征仍需灵活运用精当的语言加以表述，否则难免茶壶里煮饺子。

生：我明白了。要写出景物的特征，一要找感觉，二要语言精当，两者缺一不可。

四、反馈

观赏某一景物，要写出它的特征，题目自拟，600字以上。

夜观艾菲尔铁塔

江苏省梁丰高级中学 郭奕慧

晚上，最激动不已的时刻来临了，我将登上高度居世界第三位的艾菲尔铁塔。

远远地，〖一个通体闪亮的巨大“A”字直插苍穹。流畅柔和的线条、超拔尘世的丰姿尽情演绎着“云中牧羊女的故事”。〗（我就看到它了，塔身上下为黄色的小灯所环绕，显得格外的富丽堂皇。）当我与它仅隔一水时，已是凌晨一点半了。（它给我一种华而不俗的感觉。）这时，在我的脑海里就只有一个念头，我一定要登上这座“奇迹之塔”，去感受一下人类艺术的强大魅力……

〖虽然我对建筑艺术不甚了解，但是驻足塔底，我有一种奇怪的感觉，刚才的秀美被此刻的刚毅替代了。〗（来到塔底时我才发现这座宏伟壮观的铁塔是由钢筋搭建而成的。）〖整个塔基由钢筋、水

泥构筑而成，而塔身则由一根根钢筋搭建而成。个体的刚造就了整体的柔，〗我不知道它凝聚了多少能工巧匠的血汗，也难想像其设计者技术的高超。我站在这人类文明的伟大结晶下仰望塔顶，〖整个铁塔似乎向我直压下来，然而那夺目的光环又使我不得不驻足细赏。〗它让我头晕目眩，也让我心驰神往。突然间，灯光一暗，塔一下子被漆黑的夜所吞噬，不多一会儿，灯光又现，然而此时的塔已不再是一座“黄金之塔”，而是一座“星光之塔”，塔身上下有无数的荧光灯在闪烁，（一闪一闪，）颇有节奏，这给人一种繁星点点的感觉人。（仿佛在一片漆黑的夜幕上，有无数颗亮晶晶的恒星在闪烁。）此时圆圆的月亮也从云中显现了，就着月亮看铁塔，又别有一事情趣。〖清冷的月光洒在硬冷的钢筋上，好似一层薄纱，遮去了冷峻，加添了柔情。〗

这时，有位同学在收集沙土，说这沙土是艾菲尔铁塔下的，有特殊意义；还有几位同学在调焦距，他们打算拍一张月光下的艾菲尔铁塔的照片。在我眼里，此时的一切都显得那么和谐与美好……我们都为自己的幸运而倍感欣喜。

遗憾的是电梯停开了，我们无法登塔观赏美景。〖但我坚信，总有一天我会再次来到它的脚下，体味刚与柔的完美结合。〗

五、提高

本文作者初游巴黎，面对世界第三高塔，感慨颇多，于是便有了此文。本文最大的特点是紧扣一个“夜”宇，通过写塔上的灯光来展现铁塔的夜幕风采。但细细读来，本文还是有些不足之处。大家不妨给点儿建议。

生一：艾菲尔铁塔以其独特的造型著称，但是读完全文，我的脑海里毫无铁塔的整体概念。如果能在文章开头部分用大笔勾勒的手法描述一二则会有较好的整体效果。

生二：文中说到铁塔“宏伟壮观”、让我“心驰神往。头晕目眩”，这是作者当时的感受，但这属于概括性语言，比较抽象。能否在此用工笔细描的手法加以阐释。因为不是所有的学生都有机会夜赏艾菲尔铁塔。我们很想了解究竟铁塔神奇在何处？为什么能让作者如此赞叹？

生三：艾菲尔铁塔是巴黎的象征，体现了法国人的建筑和艺术风格。法国人一向以浪漫著称，铁塔或多或少渗入了这种气息。作者在文中诉说了多种感受，比如“富丽堂皇”“华而不俗”“令人头晕目眩”等，感觉比较散，能否再回忆一下当时的情境，理出最深刻的印象并以此为主线。这样也许线索更加清晰。

根据大家的意见，作者对原文稿作了修改。方括号里的内容为修改所加，圆括号中的内容删去。

六、激活

课外带领学生出游。事先确定某一景物（如桥）然后拍摄多组照片。回校后每人选取其中的一张加以描绘。然后投影所有照片，请部分同学朗读作文，其他同学“对号入座”。

七、创新

1.生活中不是缺少美，而是缺少发现美的眼睛。可是有时候我们带着一双慧眼却不易发现美。以“夜游××”为题写一篇不少于600字的写景作文。

2.选取一首写景的诗词（古代、现代均可），请学生在理解的基础上发挥想像进行再创作。（字数不限）

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《童年》读后感800字 每一个人都有自己值得回忆、值得珍惜的美好时光。对于我来说童年是我最宝贵的收藏，就高尔基写的《童年》这本书来说，童年应该是他的一段悲惨遭遇，一段深情的回忆！ 在假期中我看了不少书，对《童年》这本书最感兴趣。据我了解，《童年》是高尔基用自传体写的小说三步曲的第一部（第

二、第三部《在人间》和《我的大学》），它向我们艺术地展示了阿廖沙在黑暗社会追求光明的奋斗历程，还有十九世纪七十到八十年代的俄国社会风貌。我读完《童年》，感受到了作者儿时的悲惨遭遇，觉得我是幸运的，起码我比他幸福。因为作者3岁时，父亲病故，母亲就带他回了娘家。可惜外公是个自私、贪婪而又专横的小业主，残酷剥削雇工，放高利贷，但是资本主义俄国的发展打断了外公的发财梦，从此破产以至于贫困潦倒。可怜的母亲改嫁之后，生病而死，十一岁的作者被外公残忍地赶出了家门，到社会上自谋生路…… 高尔基真实地描述了自已苦难的童年，我为自己庆幸——没有出生在那个时代，没有受到这种苦，自己没有失去父母……我很幸福，因为我有一段美好的童年。记得在小时候，我很调皮，也很淘气，经常做一些稀奇古怪的事。有一次，阿姨帮我买了几条小金鱼，但她没告诉我怎么养就走了，爸妈又不在家。我看到柜子上有一个插着花的花瓶，灵机一动，把花瓶拿下来，丢掉里面的花，加了点水，把小金鱼放了进去。看到小金鱼在花瓶中自由自在地游来游去，心里乐滋滋的。到了晚上，妈妈回来了，看到我趴在桌上一动不动地看花瓶，就笑着问我：“你干嘛呢？”“看金鱼呀！”我回答道。妈妈一听，说道：“啊？不会吧！你把金鱼放在花瓶里了。不行，这花瓶一会儿外婆还要拿走呢。”我二话没说，把花瓶抱进房间，就是不让她们拿走。最后，妈妈拿我没辙，只好打电话给外婆，告诉她事实，外婆听了这件事，也哈哈大笑起来……我的童年就是这样充满了欢乐、充满了幸福，所以我要珍惜现在所拥有的一切。！ 看了《童年》这本书，我有很大的启发，书中告诉我们要执着求知、不怕困难、持之以恒、积极的态度对待学习和生活！ 《童年》读后感800字 最近，我读了《童年》这本书的（第二）。高尔基令人怜悯的童年故事，让我心里久久不能平静。 《童年》

（二）是写了幼小的高尔基过早地体会到人间的痛苦和丑恶，被臭骂、挨打；幸好也有慈祥的外祖母在细心照料他。阿廖沙那幼小的心灵因受到许多许多次沉重打击而深深震动，我也感到了阵阵悲痛。他的家又旧又烂，小染坊也毁了，家庭环境越来越差。你啊，不管遇到外祖父的毒打，还是遇到家人的笑话，你都勇敢面对；从不软弱，也不会轻易被人吓倒……阿廖沙，你比我们坚强一万倍！ 当我写到这儿，我便想起我的生活：住在大城市里头，环境幽雅，房屋整洁、宽敞明亮；拥有丰富的玩具和读物……并没有阿廖沙家里那么乱。而且，我的生活比他更有趣，在家中不用受毒打，也有同学玩；可以上学，学到更多的知识。阿廖沙也没有我们这么富有，穿的只是旧衣服！我更想起一些事：周末，我和爸爸妈妈去逛街，眼花缭乱，应有尽有。还去了图书馆借书看，课外读物真多呢！回到家，能看电视，做作业等。 哎，我多么幸福啊！我也得努力学习，报答父母对我的期望！不能辜负他们。 阿廖沙的生活并不完美，和我们相比，可真是差十万里远！虽然你的童年没有其他孩子那样幸福，但是，你要坚强活下去，长大后，我相信你们家会越来越好的。 《童年》读后感800字 高尔基，年幼时常听大人们提起，却不知道他是谁，欲知他的身世，柯达人们总是说你还小不懂的。初中时了解到了他，他的身世如此悲惨，但也获得了许多名号、荣誉。并且他还为后世留下了宝贵的精神财富，而《童年》也正是他写的一本自传体小说。 这本书讲述了高尔基悲惨的童年，看完后我不禁想到了自己的童年。每个人都有童年，我的童年包括大家的童年估计都是充满了快乐的，然而高尔基的童年如此残酷，他也成为了如此了得的人，我感到很是敬佩。高尔基早年丧父，一直跟着妈妈和年迈的奶奶过着贫困的生活。然而他并没有抱怨过，而是努力的学习，长大后想要孝敬妈妈，这点我也是很佩服的。此书记载了高尔基凄惨的童年的故事，里面夹着一些苦涩，和做人的道理。 看了这本书，我很庆幸自己生在了这个充满人道的社会主义国家，这里没有伤人的鞭子，没有层出不穷的暴行，这里的人们善良、团结、充满爱心。走进书香四溢的校园，成为一名莘莘学子，开心的迎来充实的一天。校园里老师们热心的传授给我们知识，我们如同一个个树苗在这个平和的社会里渐渐长大。让我们珍惜现在吧，珍惜每一秒，长大后回报这个人道的国家。让书中亲人朋友间勾心斗角的事永远不要变成现实，让这个人道主义的国家一直延续吧。 我们也将要向高尔基学习，古人说的好：“见贤思齐焉”。 《童年》读后感800字 读了《童年》这本书，我心里久久不能平静，想了许多许多。高尔基那悲惨、令人怜悯的故事，顿时把我吸引住了。故事生动地再现了19世纪七八十年代俄罗斯下层人民的生活状况。 故事主要写了高尔基童年时的痛苦生活，在这样一个弥漫着残暴和仇恨的家庭里，幼小的“我”过早地体会到人间的痛苦和丑恶，小小的心灵因受到许多打击而深深震动。而外祖母和那些像外祖母一样的人，保护和支持了“我”……从而展示了充满残酷、野蛮、愚昧、污秽的令人窒息的生活，令我们深深地体会到沙皇专制制度的腐败、丑恶，老百姓身处黑暗而不知的奴性与麻木，和年轻一代反抗黑暗、奴役，追求自由、光明的苦难历程。 这时，我的脑子里也随着产生了一个新奇的想法：如果我是一个市长，那该多好啊！要是真的能实现理想，我必定救人们于水深火热之中！ 能把幻想变成现实，那一定是很美好的。我期望自己忽然长大成人，当上了市长，我要尽自己最大的能力，领导各阶层人民，把我市建设成为第一的城市。不再希望有高尔基那童年般的生活。当我一上任，会执行任务：第一：严厉打击违法犯罪活动，抓好社会治安管理。因为只有这样做，社会才会进步，才不再有“贪污”的现象，人们才不再过上被压迫的生活。第二：抓好教育事业…… 虽然这只是一个孩子的愿望，但我相信凭着自己的努力，这个理想一定会实现的。为了能早日实现这个理想，我要认真刻苦地学习，汲取广博的知识，如同即将冲锋的战士，做好了出发前的准备 《童年》读后感800字 马克西姆。高尔基的《童年》举世闻名。在一个很平凡的星期天下午，我翻开了它。情绪也随着书上一行行黑色的宋体字忽起忽落…… 主人公阿廖沙痛苦的童年生活打动着我：四岁丧父，跟随悲痛欲绝的母亲和慈祥的外祖母到专横的、濒临破产的小染坊主外祖父家，却经常挨暴戾的外祖父的毒打。但善良的外祖母处处护着他。在外祖父家，他认识了很多“安安静静”的亲戚，其中包括两个自私、贪得无厌的、为了分家不顾一切的米哈伊洛舅舅和雅科夫舅舅，还有两个都叫萨拉的表哥。朴实、深爱着阿廖沙的“小茨冈”（伊凡）每次都用胳膊挡外祖父打在阿廖沙身上的鞭子，尽管会被抽得红肿。但强壮的他，后来却在帮二舅雅科夫抬十字架时给活活的压死了…… 阿廖沙的童年是在一个典型的俄罗斯小市民的家庭里度过的：贪婪、残忍、愚昧；父子、兄弟、夫妻之间勾心斗角；为争夺财产常常为一些小事争吵、斗殴……但在这个黑暗的家庭里，有一个勤劳、坚强、善良的外祖母。她常常给阿廖沙讲好听的神话故事，也潜移默化地教他做一个不想丑恶现象屈膝的人。 阿廖沙的童年是黑暗的，就像他的家庭一样。周围残酷的事情太多了，有时甚至连他自己都不敢相信竟会发生那样的事情。但好在有外祖母——全家人的精神支柱。阿廖沙也还认识很多其他的人：搬进新房子后的几个房客、隔壁的三少爷，等等。阿廖沙从家人的一些“奇怪”的举动中懵懂的明白了一些道理。 和阿廖沙相比，我们的童年是灿烂的，是彩色的；是没有烦恼痛苦的，更是无忧无虑的。有那么多的孩子甚至不懂什么叫做“打”，因为我们从没有经历过被人打、被人拿鞭子抽的滋味。那也许是一种无法想象的痛苦吧。当然，除此之外，我们的生活中也很少有家人之间的勾心斗角，为争夺财产而打架斗殴之类贪婪、凶狠的事情。更不会发生残忍的把某个无辜的人无端地折磨致死这类想都没想过的“恐怖事件”。 天哪，如此比较，我们的童年和阿廖沙的有着天壤之别。我们每天生活在蜜罐儿里，被甜水泡着，被金灿灿的钱堆着……我们是多么幸福呀！我们从来不用考虑衣食住行，这让大人么操心就足够了，还轮不到我们呢。 但拥有着这些，我们并不知足。我们总是奢求更多。因为，在我们眼里，大人们挣钱是那样的容易，似乎都不费吹灰之力。我们多天真啊。的确，我们不用像阿廖沙那样只十一岁就到“人间”独自闯荡。但读过《童年》之后，我们应该悔过自己曾经的奢侈，我们应该不再浪费，我们应该学会珍惜。 那么，就从现在开始吧。我们不再奢侈，不再浪费；我们开始为长辈着想，体谅他们；我们更应该开始满足自己的幸福生活。为了以后，为了将来，为了我们到“人间”的那一天。 《童年》读后感800字 今年暑假，我读了《童年》这本书，我明白了当时高尔基那么悲惨、令人怜悯的故事，使我感动！故事表达了当时19世纪七八十年代俄罗斯下层人民的生活状况。高尔基【1868～1936】前苏联无产阶级作家，社会主义现实主义文学的奠基人。他出身贫苦，幼年丧父，11岁即为生计在社会上奔波，当装卸工、面包房工人，贫民窟和码头成了他的“社会”大学的课堂。他与劳动人民同呼吸共命运，亲身经历了资本主义残酷的剥削与压迫。这对他的思想和创作发展具有重要影响。 故事主要写了高尔基童年时的痛苦生活，在这样一个充满着残暴和仇恨的家庭里，四岁丧父，跟随悲痛欲绝的母亲和慈祥的外祖母到专横的、濒临破产的小染坊主外祖父家，却经常挨暴戾的外祖父的毒打。但善良的外祖母处处护着他。幼小的他过早地体会到人间的痛苦和丑恶，他小小的心灵受到许多打击，而外祖母和那些像外祖母一样的人，保护和支持了高尔基。这使我深深震动。……从而也展示了当时残酷、野蛮、愚昧、污秽的令人不堪回首的往事，令我深深地体会到沙皇专制制度的腐败、丑恶，老百姓们身处水生火热中，和年轻有志的青年人一代反抗黑暗、残酷，追求自由、光明的苦难历程。 我看着书想着想着，我们现在的社会中，不还是有贫富之分、不平等的看待吗？当我们走在街上，随处可见一些衣衫破烂的乞丐，楚楚可怜的小孩子和孤苦伶仃的老人。这见证了现时社会官员的无能、贪污的不良风气。而政府前面张贴的反腐败的漫画和标语，只是口号，没有实际又有什么用呢？这样的社会怎么能繁荣昌盛呢？这样的社会怎能迈向新的旅程呢？ 和高尔基相比，我们的童年是灿烂的，是彩色的。我们在家里是独生子女，是父母亲的掌上明珠。我们每天生活在蜜罐儿里，被甜水泡着，被金灿灿的钱堆着……父母们出出保护我们，关心我们，是没有烦恼痛苦的，也是无忧无虑的。甚至有些不懂什么叫做“打”，什么叫做“骂”，因为我们从没有经历过被人打、被人拿鞭子抽的滋味。这也许是一种不可能经历的的痛苦吧。所以，我们更要珍惜如今美满、幸福的生活。我们要抓住童年的尾巴，努力学习，千万别身在福中不知福。这样优秀的学习环境，这样美好的童年生活，我们再不好好学习，那就太对不起父母了。 高尔基在小的时候就非常喜欢数学，而且也十分聪明。在一节数学课上，老师出了一个题目考在班上的同学，题目是：“1+2+3+4+……+100=？”这可为难了很多同学，他们一个个都很着急，只有高尔基算出来了，等于五千零五十。从此， 老师们再也不会因为他们家穷而瞧不起他们，而是觉得他很有数学天赋。 就是在这样艰苦的条件下，成长了一个伟大的人物——高尔基。他也十分努力创作了《奥古洛夫镇》《夏天》《马特维柯热米亚金的一生》《意大利童话》《俄罗斯童话》以及稍后完成的自传体长篇小说三部曲的前两部《童年》和《人间》。 高尔基不仅是伟大的文学家，而且也是杰出的社会活动家。他组织成立了苏联作家协会，并主持召开了全苏第一次作家代表大会，培养文学新人，积极参加保卫世界和平的事业。 人间的苦难，生活的辛酸，磨练了他的斗志。我还记得书最后讲了一句话：“对社会底层人民痛苦生活的体验和深切了解成为他创作中永不枯竭的源泉。” 不要慨叹生活的痛苦！……慨叹是弱者……这是高尔基一直以来鼓励自己的话，我希望大家也能学习高尔基那样的高尚精神！

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高级也可由老师推荐，直接确定为高级会员。高级会员由于严重问题也可由管理员取消。

特聘管理员：表现优异的高级会员可被管理员设为特聘管理员。管理员：网站设立的专为站务负责的人或表现优异的特聘管理员。

二、阅读作文

作文分为投稿箱，发表区，精品区，退稿箱。

投稿箱为会员新投稿件。发表区包括所有经过会员或老师认可的作文。精品区为比较好的作文。退稿箱为被认为不合格的投稿 注册会员可以阅读全文，不能打分，不能写评语； 初级会员及高级会员可以阅读，写评语。还可投票。

投票可为：真糟（-1），还行（1），收藏（2）。每个会员对一篇作文只能投票一次，且不能修改。

高级会员还可以推荐作文发表，特聘管理员和管理员可以修改作文星级。

三、作文投稿

只有登录后才能投稿。 入门级会员的投稿进入未公开区。未公开的作文别人是看不到的。 初级会员、高级会员的投稿首先进入未公开区。如果以后还要修改，可以保留在未公开区。如果已经定稿，就要公开到投稿箱。 进入发表区前,会员可以修改，删除自己稿件。 作文由老师、管理员、高级会员来推荐发表。 如果你投的作文，你自己认为是你近期最好的，得到了老师同学的好评，你可以到论坛的精品自荐栏目发贴，向管理员推荐,由管理员来决定是否精品。 投稿注意事项： 要认真写作，写完后多读几遍，多改几遍。 将写好的作文先输入到“记事本”或“WORD”，并在自己的电

脑上保存好。 将打好的作文复制粘贴到“作文投稿”。 注意排好作文的格式：段前空两字，段前要用回车换行，不要用空格填充。 不要将一篇作文重复投稿。 不要在“作文投稿”处边想边写，一是防止网络故障内容丢失，二是这样草草地地写对提高作文水平没有帮助。 不允许抄袭别人的作文。 不要使用繁体字、火星字，不要随意加图或改颜色。 如果你的作文在其他博客或空间里发表过，请在那里也注明发表在小荷作文网，以免管理员认为是抄袭而删除。

四、会员得分

发表作文得分：

作文进入发表区一篇 加5分。

作文直接进入精品区 加15分，由发表区转入精品区，加10分。在投稿箱、退稿箱的作文，作者自己删除，不扣分

凡由管理员删除，情节轻者不扣分，屡教不改者均扣5分，如作文在发表区及精品区，同时扣除相应得分。 评点作文得分：

会员对作文的打分档次与管理员阶段考核一致的加5分，不一致的扣2分。

会员作文评论得到作者或老师认可 奖1-5分，作者每篇可奖分最多20分（老师不受此限）

会员发表废贴被删除 扣5分。负20分以上，进入黑名单，将不能评点。

编辑本段

投稿须知

怎么才能被选中发表？

认真整理好你的作文，可以是新写的，也可以是以前老师改过的。 录入完成后，认真检查有没有错别字，标点符号有没错误。标点要用全角的。 希望同学们在投稿前请老师给予指导。可以把指导老师的姓名放在作文后面。 留下电子信箱，这样作文发表后邮件会通知你。 不要从书上或网上摘抄别人的作文。

如何建立专辑？

如果班上的同学或者是文学社都加入本站进行交流，我们欢迎老师来建立专辑。老师拥有作文专辑管理权限，通过此权限可以及时发表任教的班级的同学或学校的同学的作文投稿，并可以评定等级，撰写评语。建立专辑的步骤是：

在网上投稿数篇，由老师或同学给站务邮箱写信提出要求，本站根据实际情况决定是否建立。 同学们在投稿时选择所属专辑。老师可以给专辑设置密码，这样可以限制不了解的人加入。 如果专辑是老师申请的，可以给予老师管理权限。 还可以将班级，学校介绍，以及照片，同学合影，校园风景放上来。

专辑可以发表自己的新闻 本站每年将选择组织活动积极的专辑，向老师免费赠送图书。

说明：

专辑，只针对学校，班级或文学社。

投稿直接点击“作文投稿”，不要寄到信箱。

发表了有什么好处？

网站目前是免费的，所以并没有稿费。不过在秋季开学后，元旦之前，春节之后,六一之前，编辑个人将送给发表作文最多的前十位同学精美的礼物。另外，若有优秀作品，可被作文刊物选中发表。

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