初中作文范文带翻译（精选多篇）

推荐第1篇：初中英语作文带翻译

Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same.But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry.Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments.Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time.You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will.If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.

翻译：

每个人都有自己的梦想，我也一样。但是我的梦想不是律师，不是医生，不是演员，甚至不是一种行业！我的梦想也许大人们会觉得可笑，但是，这是我一直追寻的！我的梦想是想要自己有一个七彩的人生！我要它成为一幅美丽的画，它不但要有鲜明的颜色，也要有暗淡的颜色，我不排除这幅画有一部分的黑色，我反而会很珍惜这些暗淡的颜色！不是吗，试问一下，一幅色彩鲜艳的画，如果不加一点暗淡的颜色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？人生就象画一样，画中鲜艳的颜色就代表着人生美丽快乐的时光。画中暗淡的颜色就代表着人生遭遇困难，不愉快的时候。也许你会觉得拥有一条平坦美丽的路不是很好吗，但我并不觉得。一个人如果一生平坦那有什么意思呢？人生只有短短几十年，我要他走到最后时，每一个回忆都事充实的！

A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are

depreed.I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same cla.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can.I hope our friendship will forever and ever.

A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depreed.I have many friends.However I only have one best friend and it\'s XXX.He is the same age as me.He is taller than me.Basketball is his favourite sport.We are in the same cla.He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if I ever get into troubles.So will I.I hope our friendship will last forever and ever

翻译：朋友是当你在沮丧消沉的时候能给你温暖的人。因此我又很多朋友。XXX是我最好的朋友。他和我一样大却比我高。他最喜欢的运动是打篮球。我们是同班同学。他的学习很棒，因此他的成绩很好。我们相互学习相互帮助。我有困难的时候他会帮我，而他又困难我也会尽力帮他。我希望我们的友谊能天长地久。

My best friend and I get along with each other quite well.But we are so different.He is funnier, more outgoing than I am and i\'m more serious.He is more athletic and likes to play all kinds of sports but I am smarter on study.My friend is wilder than me and I am calmer.He is tall, thin, strong,with short hair, And sometimes he is very carele and lazy.On the other hands, I am short, fat, weak, with shorthair.He is very helpful because I am very lazy and don\'t want to do any sports.And I will help him with his study. I think our friendship will last forever.

翻译：我和我最好的朋友相处的非常好，但是我们却各有不同。他比我更有趣，更外向，而我很严肃。他是运动型的，各种体育运动都很喜欢，而我更擅长于学习。

我的朋友相对狂野而我相对沉静。他又高又瘦，但是很结实，留着短发。一些时候他马虎又懒散。与他相比，我显得矮胖，而虚弱。我也是短头发。他很乐于助人，因为我很懒不想做仍和运动。我会在学习上帮助他。我希望我们的友谊能够持续到永远

Today, good sunny weather, always a hundred flowers ......\" I head swimming glaes, I sing a little song, walked meteor big, went to Zhoushan Middle School swimming pool.

Wow thiazolyl! Today, many people can really ah! A group of three students, five pile, in the pool, pushing and shoving, no better happy!

I already have lost Hing son, traveling light.\"Thump!\" I caught a spring, water ducks to water generally swim a .......Nice to feel the water! I have a moment like a free fish fry for a while yet also seemed a carefree birds.Sometimes wildly breaststroke frog forward, sometimes into freestyle, rolls toward the deep water.I kept the swinging hands, feet not live playing the water splashes like a bit graceful girl, and like one a lovely boy, beautiful great!

I jumped up, roll forward.\"Wow!\" The water was cold and deep water, thrilled! \"Crash ......\" my original\" Deep Somersault \"began.I pushed the hands, feet Yi Deng, jumped backward, turn sideways for a more perfect performance ah! I am in the midst of cheers, air to drill into the water.At this time, the students are coming to my swim.Suddenly, the pool open swim posture: breaststroke, butterfly, dog plane, everything.Overtake each other, with each side.Laughter, playfulne sound into a ......

Tired, I lay quietly on the water: If water every day as partners, so the fish do my friend, my teacher, my job is only swimming ......it was nice to ah!

When the sun sets, my clamates and I still play pool slapstick.Finally, the shore, and the evening\'s setting sun dragging our very, very long shadow.Happy swimming, I like!

翻译：“今天天气好晴朗，处处百花香……”我头顶游泳眼镜，口哼小曲，迈着流星大步，向舟山中学游泳池走去。

哇噻！今天人可真多啊！学生们三个一群，五个一堆，在泳池里推推搡搡，好不快活！

我早已耐不住兴子，轻装上阵。“扑通！”我纵身一跃，如水鸭子一般去水里畅游了……。水里的感觉真好！我一会儿像一条自由自在的小鱼，一会儿又似一只无忧无虑的水鸟。时而青蛙似地蛙泳前进，时而自由泳进，向着深水区进发。我的双手不停着摆动着，两脚不住地打着水，溅起的水花如一位位婀娜多姿的少女，又像一个个活泼可爱的男孩，美丽极了！

我跳跃着，翻滚着。“哇！”深水区的水好凉、好爽！“哗啦......”我的独创“深水空翻”开始了。我双手一推，两脚一蹬，向后一跃，侧身一转，多完美的表演啊！我在一片喝彩声中，神气地钻入水里。这时，同学们都向我游了过来。顿时，泳池里游姿开放：蛙泳、蝶泳、狗刨、应有尽有。你追我赶，互不相让。欢笑声、嬉闹声响成一片......

累了，我静静地躺在水面上：要是天天与水为伴，让鱼儿做我的朋友，当我的老师，我的作业只有游泳......那该多好啊！

夕阳西下时，我和同学们还在泳池里嬉戏打闹。终于，上岸了，黄昏的残阳把我们的影子拖得很长很长。快乐的游泳，我喜欢！

I love my family,because I have a happy family.

My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What’s my mother jop?Is she a teacher?Yes,you’re right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents!

On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home.

I love my family.Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together!

翻译:

我的家庭

我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.

我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫Jacky.他今年38岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的妈妈是赶什么呢?她是一名教师吗?是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人,她今年37岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母.

在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在家看电视和听音乐.

我爱我家.因为我和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心!

I what busied one day, the body that dragging exhaustion sits silently on the balcony to syare blankly, come stealthily towards evening, late wind slowly had blown, left the cool trace of filar silk.But the balcony that also cannot bake sun broil hair is very hotly is wrapped cool.Dark, bird is le and le also, the

damage that a string of bird left in the sky cries.The sun that worked one day also took off coverall, it is no longer in that way dazzling.The tender broadne that the sun that changes new clothes also changes is elegant, lovely.Tell the truth the sun can be met really choose color.The clothes that you see her wear is much more beautiful, red is blaze that one the most beautiful one color in the layer.Withered and yellow is squashy orange just was picked on the tree that orange is yellow.Foil in so beautiful color the cheek that iued arch to give a piece of peaceful.She seems to be being monitored by others same, stealthily move is moving pace, appear that kind is lightsome.Knowing at this moment is who is make a practical joke, in her that is high and scatter on luxuriant clothes went up prepared Chinese ink makes her dre becomes bit more full of stains or spots, ased if to throw one Jiao in wallow.Right now she is like a girl bashful and same, blush so that resemble squashy persimmon.Perhaps she feels embarraed to used white gauze cloak to live then half face.Paed for ages, perhaps be she feels to be done so also of no help cowardly cowardly ground comes out to appear that kind is bashful.Then she thinks 36 plan -- go for the best thing to do, be smooth! Apparent its speed appears than a moment ago much faster, she is floating die of small blush Pang is in then later hilltop.The sky appears deserted.Again scan widely hopes horizon appeared again her form, hey! How be like two different people with foregoing the setting sun, move close to again look, it is the moon that Yin Guangshan shows so.Dark, appear soundle in that way all around.

翻译：

忙碌了一天的我,拖着疲劳的身体静静的坐在阳台上发呆,傍晚悄悄来临,晚风缓缓的吹过,留下了丝丝的凉意.但也不能将太阳炙烤得发烫的阳台裹凉.天黑了,鸟儿也愈来愈少,天空中留下了一串鸟的残鸣。

工作了一天的太阳也脱下了工作服，不再是那样刺眼。换上新装的太阳也变的温柔阔雅，楚楚动人。说实话太阳可真会挑颜色。你看她穿的衣服多漂亮，红的是火焰那一层一层中最美的颜色。枯黄的是树上刚摘下来熟透的桔子那桔黄。在这样美丽的颜色衬托下拱出了一张恬静的脸蛋。她好像被别人监视着一样，悄悄的挪移着步伐，显得那般轻盈。

这时不知道是谁在搞恶作剧，在她那高贵而又华丽的衣裳上撒上了墨汁使她的衣服变得斑斑点点，仿佛在泥坑里摔了一跤。此时她好像一个小姑娘害羞一样，脸红得象熟透的柿子。也许她觉得难堪于是便用白纱遮掩住了一半脸。过了好久，也许是她觉得这样做也无济于事便怯怯地出来显得那般羞涩。于是她便想三十六计——走为上策，溜！显然它的速度显得比刚才快多了，之后她那泛着微红脸庞消逝在山头。天空则显得空荡荡的。再放眼一望天际又出现了她的身影，哎！怎么跟先前的夕阳判若两人，再凑近一看，原来是银光闪闪的月亮。

天黑了，四周则显得那样静悄悄。

I have a goodfriend,He is a boy,he has a very nice name—Robert.He comes from England.He has big eyes,they are round and cute.He comes to China with his parents.We know each other since last year.From then on,we become goodfriends.

At weekends,we often get together to play basketball,he plays it very well,and,he sings well,too.He teaches me English and I teach him Chinese.

We are goodfriends forever.

翻译：我有一个好朋友，他是一个男孩，他有一个非常好听的名字—罗伯特。他来自英格兰，他有一对大眼睛，它们很圆很可爱。他和他的父母一起来中国。我们从去年开始认识。从那时候起，我们成为好朋友了。

在周末，我们经常一起打篮球，他打得非常好，而且，他歌唱得很好听。他教我英语然后我教他中文。

我们永远都是好朋友。

My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.In 1949 my hometown was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.====我的家乡 我的家乡是个美丽的地方，它座落在一条宽宽的小河旁边，富产鱼和大米。 但是在过去它是个又穷又偏僻的小镇。很多人没有工作，生活很难过。 1949年解放以来，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。道路拓宽了，工厂、学校、医院、电影院和歌剧院一个接一个建成。人们生活质量大大地提高了。 我爱我的家乡，更爱家乡的人们。他们辛勤工作保持着它的富有、美丽。

OK, let me tell you something about my weekend.I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend.So I do my homework on Saturday morning.In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother.Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home.On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents.In the afternoon, we are going to the park together.Because there is a kite show.And my grandparents likes making kites.I think, we can see many beautiful kites there.And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too.Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun.In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner.We are going to have fish for dinner.Because my grandparents likes eating fish.And my grandma cooks fish well.After dinner, we are going to watch TV together.We are going to be very happy.This is my happy weekend.I like my weekend very much.What about your weekend? Can you tell me?好吧,让我来告诉你有关我周末的一些事情.我在周末将会有很多事情要做并且会很忙.所以我要在周六早上写作业.下午,我要和妈妈一起做家务.因为我是一个好女孩,在家里很有用.周日早上,我要和父母一起去看望祖父母.下午，我们要一起去公园.因为那有个风筝秀.并且我的祖父母喜欢做风筝.我认为,我们会在那看到很多漂亮的风筝.我们的也要买一些漂亮的风筝.然后我们要一起去放新的风筝,那很有趣.晚上,我们会有一个盛大的晚餐.我们会在晚餐上吃鱼.因为我的祖父母喜欢吃鱼.并且我的外婆很会做鱼.晚饭后,我们要一起看电视.我们会非常高兴.这就是我快乐的周末.我非常喜欢我的周末.你的周末是怎样的?你能告诉我吗？

Beijing Olympic Games is the 29th Olympic Games.It will last16 days, since August 8, 2008, carry on 28 matches of 302 little projects, sell 7 million tickets.In order to further improve the traffic environment, the expreway of Beijing will increase from present 500 kilometers to 718 kilometers,Beijing will let the going out swift, on time, security of people participating in Olympic Games.Hope Beijing Olympic Games can be succeeded in holding！ 北京奥运会是第29届奥运会.自2008年8月8日起，历时16天，共进行28个大项，302个小项目的比赛,可售门票700万张.为进一步改善交通环境,北京的高速公路将由目前的500公里增加到718公里,北京将让参加奥运会的人们的出行快捷、准时、安全。希望北京奥运会能够成功举办！

推荐第2篇：英语作文带翻译

1.How to spend my weekend Iam going to prepare for my leons because the Mid-term exam is coming.I am sure if I have good preparation, I will get good grades.I am going to help my parents do some housework because they work hard every day.Of course I will visit my good friend and play table tennis with him because doing sports is good for our health.I will surf the internet and listen to music because they are good ways to relax.I am sure I will have a busy and meaningful weekend.我打算复习功课，因为期中考试即将到来，我相信如果做好充足的准备，我一定会取得好成绩的。我打算帮父母做些家务，因为他们整天忙于工作。当然了，我要拜访我最好的朋友并和他一起打乒乓球，因为做运动有益于身体健康。我要上网并听音乐，因为他们是最好的放松方式。我肯定我会过一个忙而有意思的周末的。

2 How to learn English well Learning English just like learning any other language, is hard work so my first advice is to spend much time practicing using English every day.Besides, we should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in cla.Go over what is learnt regularly and finish doing our homework carefully.Listen to English radio programmes, read English stories and newspapers, watch English films and TV programmes ,keep a diary in English and attend English debbates and speech contests.If we make mistakes, correct them at once and try not to make the same mistakes.What\'s more, we should look up new words in the dictionary before cla and prepare each leon carefully before cla.I believe if we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will learn English well.学习英语就象学习其他语言一样是艰辛的。因此我的第一个建议是每天花多点时间练习使用英语。除此之外，我们应该上课认真听讲、记笔记。定期复习所学内容，认真做作业。听英语广播，读英语故事和报纸，看英语电影和电视节目，用英语写日记，参加英语讨论和演讲比赛。如果我们犯错误，就要立刻改正，尽力下次不要犯同样的错误。而且，我们在上课前要查字典，认真准备每节课。我相信如果我们努力学习、有好的学习方法，我们会学好英语的。

推荐第3篇：高中英语作文(带翻译)

对比观点作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly (besides),______.Thirdly (finally),_____.

From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice

××变得越来越受欢迎了最近的。有两方面的观点。有些人说____是他们最喜欢的。他们拥有自己的观点的原因____。更甚的是,_____.Moreover,…。

其他人认为____是更好的选择,在接下来的三个原因。首先,_____。其次(除了),…。第三(最后),_____。 从我的观点来看,我认为_____。其原因是,_____。作为一个事实,还有一些其他原因来解释我的选择。对我来说,前者当然是个明智的选择

图标作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

如表中所图形/百分比在桌子/图片,____一直在上升/下降急剧上升,这将大大降低/ /在××,从____在××××。从急剧上升/下降图表所示,不用说,_____。

至少有两个很好的理由占_____。一方面,____。在另一方面,××是由于这样的事实,即…。此外,过失负责_____。也许还有些别的原因来显示…。但它,一般人都相信上述原因通常是令人信服的。

就我而言,我一直保存着那个观点的活下来的。我相信我的看法是两种声音和厚积薄发。

书信作文模板

Your addre

Month, Date, year

Receiver\'s addre

Dear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.

……

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and succe.

Sincerely yours,

你的地址

今年一月,日期,

收信人的地址

亲爱的…,

我非常高兴收到你们的来信。和我想写信告诉你that_____。……

我将非常感谢回应你在方便的时候尽早/我想f0rward到你在方便的时候尽早回复。

致以最诚挚的问候,对你的健康和成功。

诚挚的,

话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

如今,越来越多的__ _在_ _。据估计,___。为什么有那么多____吗?也许这个原因,可以如下。

第一个是…。此外,_____。第三种是_____。综上所述,它的主要原因是由于_____。现在正是时候,你有什么做在它的上面。首先,_____。另一方面,_____。所有这些措施肯定会降低一系列的重要性。

阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．２． 分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example, -------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that ---------------(举例说明).Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necearily benefit a lot from it.

良好的俗语说---- -(名言或谚语)提醒我们,---- -(释义)。事实上,我们可以学习很多东西形式。

首先,------------------ -(举例说明)。此外,------(理由三)。

在我看来,---- -(我的观点)。简而言之,无论你做什么,请记住这说-- - -一个。如果你了解它,把它应用到学习和工作中,你会一定受益匪浅。

推荐第4篇：初中英语作文 带翻译

My Spring Festival

To tell you the truth, I don\'t like the Spring Festival at all.When I was young I liked it very much,because I could had something tasty to eat during the Spring Festival,and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes,too,I also could had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do.I don\'t like it now, there are many reasons.

Firstly, I can\'t have a good time during the Festival.Every New Year\'s Eve something unpleasant often happens.Once I quarreled with my second brother.Secondly, I can\'t relax myself during the Festival.I have to do many things, watch so many TV programmes, meet so many people,all these things make me very tired.

Thirdly, spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older, I don\'t like to be old.I want to live longer and be young all the time.

说实话，我不喜欢这个春节。当我很年轻的时候喜欢它，因为在春节期间我能有好吃的，我可以享受到非常精彩的电视节目，我也能有空闲时间，我可以做我喜欢做的。我不喜欢现在的工作，有许多原因。

首先，我不能节日期间过得愉快。每年除夕，总是发生一些让我不愉快的事情。有次，我就跟我的二哥吵架了。

其次，我不能在节日期间放松一下。我要做的事情很多，看太多的电视节目，遇见许多人，所有这些都使我很累。

第三，过一个春节意味着我长大了一岁，我不想变老。我想活得更长，变的更年轻。

Shopping on the Internet

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.People don\'t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.The goods

come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet.All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.The first disadvantage is that the consumers can\'t see the goods or try them on personally.Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.The second

disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

随着互联网的发展和电脑的普及，网上购物已成为我们生活中司空见惯的事情了。消费者在这里几乎可以买到所有他们需要的东西。

网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。人们不必浪费了很多精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择，他们喜欢的商品。这是可取的是老人，病人和忙碌的人们谁不能亲自去商店。商品的形状，大小和颜色在互联网上。所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前，点击鼠标。他们的商品订单将交付给他们及时。 但是，网上购物也有其缺点。第一个不利因素是，消费者不能看到商品或亲自试穿他们。有时候，真正的货物不得同他们所看到的电脑。第二个缺点是，一些商店在互联网上没有登记。他们不会提供任何你之后，他们把钱从你。一旦骗了，你会发现，你已经无处可去抱怨。

My life I what busied one day, the body that dragging exhaustion sits silently on the balcony to syare blankly, come stealthily towards evening, late wind slowly had blown, left the cool trace of filar silk.But the balcony that also cannot bake sun broil hair is very hotly is wrapped cool.Dark, bird is le and le also, the damage that a string of bird left in the sky cries.The sun that worked one day also took off coverall, it is no longer in that way dazzling.The tender broadne that the sun that changes new clothes also changes is elegant, lovely.Tell the truth the sun can be met really choose color.The clothes that you s

ee her wear is much more beautiful, red is blaze that one the most beautiful one color in the layer.Withered and yellow is squashy orange just was picked on the tree that orange is yellow.Foil in so beautiful color the cheek that iued arch to give a piece of peaceful.She seems to be being monitored by others same, stealthily move is moving pace, appear that kind is lightsome.Knowing at this moment is who is make a practical joke, in her that is high and scatter on luxuriant clothes went up prepared Chinese ink makes her dre becomes bit more full of stains or spots, ased if to throw one Jiao in wallow.Right now she is like a girl bashful and same, blush so that resemble squashy persimmon.Perhaps she feels embarraed to used white gauze cloak to live then half face.Paed for ages, perhaps be she feels to be done so also of no help cowardly cowardly ground comes out to appear that kind is bashful.Then she thinks 36 plan -- go for the best thing to do, be smooth! Apparent its speed appears than a moment ago much faster, she is floating die of small blush Pang is in then later hilltop.The sky appears deserted.Again scan widely hopes horizon appeared again her form, hey! How be like two different people with foregoing the setting sun, move close to again look, it is the moon that Yin Guangshan shows so.Dark, appear soundle in that way all around.

忙碌了一天的我,拖着疲劳的身体静静的坐在阳台上发呆,傍晚悄悄来临,晚风缓缓的吹过,留下了丝丝的凉意.但也不能将太阳炙烤得发烫的阳台裹凉.天黑了,鸟儿也愈来愈少,天空中留下了一串鸟的残鸣。

工作了一天的太阳也脱下了工作服，不再是那样刺眼。换上新装的太阳也变的温柔阔雅，楚楚动人。说实话太阳可真会挑颜色。你看她穿的衣服多漂亮，红的是火焰那一层一层中最美的颜色。枯黄的是树上刚摘下来熟透的桔子那桔黄。在这样美丽的颜色衬托下拱出了一张恬静的脸蛋。她好像被别人监视着一样，悄悄的挪移着步伐，显得那般轻盈。

这时不知道是谁在搞恶作剧，在她那高贵而又华丽的衣裳上撒上了墨汁使她的衣服变得斑斑点点，仿佛在泥坑里摔了一跤。此时她好像一个小姑娘害羞一样，脸红得象熟透的柿子。也许她觉得难堪于是便用白纱遮掩住了一半脸。过了好久，也许是她觉得这样做也无济于事便怯怯地出来显得那般羞涩。于是她便想三十六计——走为上策，溜！显然它的速度显得比刚才快多了，之后她那泛着微红脸庞消逝在山头。天空则显得空荡荡的。再放眼一望天际又出现了她的身影，哎！怎么跟先前的夕阳判若两人，再凑近一看，原来是银光闪闪的月亮。 天黑了，四周则显得那样静悄悄。

I am a student

I am a middle school student.I think that we should obeythe school rules.For example，we shouldn\'tlate for school and talk with others in cla.It is very important for teachers.And we shouldn’t fight at school，either.About studying ，we must finish our homework every day and we must listen to the teacher carefully in cla.If you want to be a good student ，please observe the rules.

我是一个中学生。我认为我们应该遵守学校规定。比如，我们不应该迟到，也不应该在课堂上同他人讲话。这对于老师是十分重要的，我们还不应该在学校里打架。关于学习，我们应该每天都完成作业，我们也必须认真听课。如果你想成为一个好学生，就请遵守这些规定。

My Best Friend

Linda is my best friend.She is 15 years old.She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big black eyes.She always has a smile on her face.She is taller than I.

Every morning, we go to school together.She studies quite well and she\'s a top student in our

cla.She is modest in her behaviour.When I have difficulty in English, I always ask her for help.We are both interested in music.At weekends, we join the same hobby group and play the violin together.

We like each other.

琳达是我最好的朋友.她15岁.她是个有着圆脸、两个大大的黑眼睛的漂亮女孩。她总是微笑着。她比我高。

每天早上，我们一起上学。她学习很好，是我们班学习最好的学生之一。她是行为规范的模范。当我有英语上的困难是，我总是向她寻求帮助。我们都对音乐很感兴趣。在周末，我们参加同一个兴趣小组，一起拉小提琴。

我们都互相喜欢对方。

推荐第5篇：英文作文(带翻译)

My favorite holiday is New Year, Chinese New Year we can eat dumplings and a lot of good things to eat, but alsoReceive lucky money, parents will accompany us to the amusement park, parks,We are very happy New Year everyone likes, and I also like the Spring Festival.

我最喜欢的节日是春节，在春节我们可以吃饺子和很多好吃的东西，还可以收到压岁钱父母还会带我们去游乐园，公园，所有人都会很开心，所有人都喜欢春节，我也非常喜欢春节 篇1： August 12,2012 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother.She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently.And she will feel happy and become better.Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.译文：今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

篇2： Saturday, my grandma made dumplings, one of the dumplings like obedient little ducks swimming in the bowl.My in the mind have a little not to eat them.But the smell of fragrance and let me greedy slobber, I eat up tit-bit.But I eat dumplings, the heart have a kind of feeling can not tell.译文：星期六我奶奶家包饺子了，一个个的饺子像听话的小鸭子在碗里游来游去。我心里有点不忍心吃他们了。可是那扑鼻而来的香味又让我馋得流口水，我就大口大口地吃了起来。可是我吃完饺子，心里有一种说不出来的感觉。

篇3： The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy.As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some.Early in the morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.译文：终于放暑假了，应该好好歇歇了！可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了，帮妈妈洗碗，扫地，做饭等等，到了中午，我快累死了，往床上一躺，扇扇电风扇，舒服多了。

篇4： Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents.Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul.Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful.My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night.译文：下周我要和父母去开封。开封有许多非常棒的小吃，比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园，我想那一定非常的漂亮。我和父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔，并住在他家一晚。

篇5： What a fine day today !I’m very happy in this fine day .Beaucse today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends .There is lots of snow now ,so we make a sonw man .That’s really intersting .We play with snow to about 6:30 .Of couse I must go home now.What a fan day ! 译文：多么好的天气阿！在这样的好天气里我非常高兴，因为今天我不用写作业，并且可以和朋友们出去玩。这里现在有很多雪，所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很有趣。我们玩雪，一直到晚上6：30。当然现在我必须回家了。 多么有趣的一天啊！

篇6： I got up early this morning.After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends.We went there by bike.As soon as we got there, we played with the sand and walked on the beach.We also went boating.It was really fantastic.In the afternoon I went to the library and read books there.I also helped my parents make dinner.After dinner I washed the dishes.In the evening I did my homework.Then I surfed the internet.I had a busy and interesting day.译文：我今天起床早。吃完早饭后我和朋友们去了我家附近的海滩。我们骑自行车去的。我们一到那里就玩沙子，在海滩走。我们也划船。很棒。下午我去图书馆看书。我也帮助父母做晚饭。饭后我洗碗。晚上我做作业，然后上网。我今天很忙也过得很愉快

篇7： This morning I woke up at 6 o ’clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of beef and tomato noodles, mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy, she finally put all eat noodles, very delicious, also say I grew up, not a kid, can look after himself, I listened also very happy.译文：今天早上我6点钟就醒来了然后到厨房为妈妈做了一碗牛肉西红柿面，妈妈看了我为她做的早饭很高兴，最后她把面条全部吃了，说很好吃，还说我长大了，不在是小孩了，可以自己照顾自己了，我听了也很开心。

篇8： It was sunny and very hot today.I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast.Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.After a short rest I did my homework in the morning.In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends.It was really cool to swim in such a hot day.I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening.I really had a busy and interesting day.译文：今天天气晴朗比较热。 我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。 下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。 晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很有趣。

篇9： This morning I woke up at 6 o ’clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of beef and tomato noodles, mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy, she finally put all eat noodles, very delicious, also say I grew up, not a kid, can look after himself, I listened also very happy.译文：今天早上我6点钟就醒来了然后到厨房为妈妈做了一碗牛肉西红柿面，妈妈看了我为她做的早饭很高兴，最后她把面条全部吃了，说很好吃，还说我长大了，不在是小孩了，可以自己照顾自己了，我听了也很开心。

篇10： This morning, the sky is cloudle, spring.My friends and I went to the park flying a kite, flying a kite in the park so many people, some is small swallow; some birds; there is I most like the phoenix.The sky was a riot of colours, like a blooming be riotous with colour clouds really beautiful ah! We play happy! 译文：今天早上，天空万里无云，春风拂面。我和朋友们一起去公园放风争，公园里放风争的人可真多，有的是小燕子；有的是小鸟；还有的是我最喜欢的凤凰。天空一片五彩缤纷，像一朵朵五颜六色的彩云真美丽啊！我们玩得可开心！

推荐第6篇：初中英语作文带翻译

Today I had a good time.It was my grandpa\'s birthday.Our family went back to his home to celebrate his birthday.My mother cooked many delicious food and we brought a big birthday cake.We got together to have a big family dinner.We gave grandpa some presents and said, \"Happy birthday to you!\" In the afternoon we went boating in the park.We enjoyed ourselves, and my grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.

今天我玩得很愉快。今天是爷爷的生日，我们全家去爷爷家为他庆祝生日。妈妈做了许多好吃的，我们买了一个大蛋糕。我们举行了一个大型家庭聚会。我们送给爷爷一些礼物，并说：“祝您生日快乐。”

下午我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心，爷爷过了一个愉快的生日。

It was Christmas Day yesterday.I had a good time with my friends.We had a Christmas party at school.Many friends of mine came to the party.After we said\"Merry Christmas\", we began to sing Christmas songs, such as Edelwei, andso on.Then we told some Christmas stories, such as Christmas Father.Then I danced and laughted with my friends.We all had a good time.When the party came to the end,we said \"Happy New Year\" to each other.We made up our mind that we would study hard to make great progre in the coming year.

昨天是圣诞节，我和我的朋友过得很愉快。我们在学校举办了圣诞晚会，我的许多朋友都来参加晚会。我们互道“圣诞快乐”后，开始唱圣诞歌，像“雪绒花”等。然后我们讲圣诞故事，如“圣诞老人”等，我们都玩得很开心。当晚会即将结束时，我们互祝“新年快乐”。 我们下决心在即将来临的一年中努力学习，以取得更大的进步。

The bell rang and the cla was over.Many clamates jumped up from the seat.The claroom became noisy.Some students went out of the claroom.I was just chatting with some of my clamates when Li Hong came to me.She smiled and said to me, \"What\'s four minus four? Do you know?\" \"It\'s zero.That is easy.\" answered I.But Li Hong shook her head and said \"It\'s wrong.It\'s eight.\" \"Why? That\'s impoible!\" \"You will understand if you cut down four corners of a desk.\" said Li Hong.\"Is that a joke?\" \"Oh, yes.\" We all laughed.During the cla break, we had a good rest.Our cla break was often full of fun and laughter.We often have a pleasant break.

铃一响，下课了。许多同学从座位上跳了起来，教室里热闹起来，一些学生出了教室。当李红向我走来时，我正和一些同学聊天。她笑着对我说：“你知道4减4等于几吗?”我回答：“等于零，太简单了。”但李红播着头说：“不对，是8。”“为什么?不可能。”李红说：“你砍掉桌予的4个角，就明白了。”“这是笑话吗?”“唤，是的。”我们都笑-了。课间我们放松了。我们的课间休息充满了乐趣和欢笑。我们经常度过愉快的课间。 My Happy Times During Winter Vacation I often go to see my grandma and grandpa during winter vacation.They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily.I can do many interesting things there.I am used to getting up early in the morning and breathing the fresh air in the countryside.After snow, I would like to skate and ski with my friends.When night comes, I am used to sitting by the fire and listening to grandma telling me many funny stories.And I tell her some new things happening in the city.When I have to go back, I am always reluctant to go.I really feel happy living in the country.

寒假期间我经常去看望我的爷爷奶奶。他们都已经70岁了，住在乡下。我可以在那里做很多有趣的事情。我习惯一大清早起床呼吸乡下的新鲜空气。下雪后，我喜欢跟同伴们一起滑雪滑冰。夜幕降临时，我就坐在火炉边，听奶奶讲动听的故事。我也会给她讲一些城里的新鲜事。每次该回城时，我总是恋恋不舍。我确实喜欢乡下的生活。 Yesterday was my thirteenth birthday.My parents had a birthday party for me.I invited my friends to my party.My parents bought new clothes and some books as my birthday presents.How happy I felt when I put on the new clothes! When all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake.My father gave me new clothes and some books as presents.I was moved to tears.My friends sang \"Happy birthday to you!\" and gave me some presents.Then we began to eat.It was my happiest day.I had a wonderful birthday. 昨天是我13岁的生日，我的父母为我举办了生日宴会，我邀请了我的朋友来参加。我的父母为我买了新衣服和书作为生日礼物。我穿着新衣服时感觉好幸福。

我所有的朋友都到了以后，我妈妈端上了美味的饭莱并捧来了一个大蛋糕。爸爸送给我新衣服和书作为生日礼物。我感动得眼泪都掉了下来。我的朋友为我唱“祝你生日快乐”歌，并送我一些礼物。然后我们开始吃饭。这是我最快乐的一天。我过了一个快乐的生日。

推荐第7篇：初中英语作文带翻译

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初中英语作文：糟糕的一天 My Sad Day Today, when I went home after school, I saw the delicious snack, so I wanted to buy one of the snacks, then I could not find my wallet, I searched it many times, at last, I had to admit that my wallet was lost.I felt so worried, so I turned back to find my wallet, I watched the road carefully, suddenly, a black dog was in front of me, I felt so scared.The hog yelled at me, so I ran, the dog run after me, I run into the shop and got rid of the dog.I have to went home because of it was dark, my mother came out and told me I forget to bring my wallet, how stupid I am.翻译：

今天，当我放学回家后，我看到了美味的小吃，因此我想要买一些小吃，然后我找不到钱包，我搜索了很多遍，最后，我不得不承认我的钱包弄丢了。我很着急，所 以我返回去找我的钱包，我一路仔细查找，突然，一条黑狗在我前面，我很害怕。那条狗朝着我叫，所以我跑了，狗追赶我，我跑进了一家商店，摆脱了那条狗。由 于天色已暗，我不得不回家，我的妈妈出来，告诉我我忘记了拿钱包，我是多么的愚蠢啊。

初中英语作文： 我身边的噪音The Noises Around Me I live in the school now, I will go home on the weekend, at first, I thought living in school could make me focus on my study, while the fact is not.At noon, when I take a snap, the noise from the building machine is so loud, our school is under construction now, so the workers work day and night.But I couldn’t sleep well, my head aches, without not good sleep, I can’t focus my mind to study.What’s more, some students are playing games in the corridor, they laugh so loudly that do not realize they are bothering us.I hope the school could let the workers stop working at noon for two hours, so that it will be good to students.翻译：

我现在在学校住，我会在周末回家，刚开始，我以为住在学校能让我集中精力学习，然而事实并非如此。在中午，当我午睡的时候，建筑的机器发出很大的噪音，我 们学校现在正在建造中，因此工人日以继夜地工作。但是我无法好好入睡，我的头很痛，没有好的睡眠，我就无法集中精力学习。而且，一些学生在走廊外玩游戏， 他们笑得如此的大声，没有意识到打扰了我们。我希望学校能让工人在中午停工两个小时，这样对学生好。

初中英语作文：杜绝浪费Never Wasting the Food When I was small, I like to eat a lot of food, but I have a habit, I will not eat up all the food, I just like to taste all of it.When my mother saw this, she felt bad for me, she told me that all the food was the farmers’ hard work, I should not waste it.Thinking about this, I felt so shameful about my bad behavior, I decided to eat up the food.Wasting the food should be condemned, especially in the cities, people like to waste the food, they want to keep thin and only eat small portion.Now, the government advocates people clean the plate, this movement is welcomed by the public, more and more people have the idea not to waste the food.翻译： 在我小的时候，我喜欢吃很多东西，但是我有一个习惯，我不会把东西吃完，我喜欢浪费食物。当我的妈妈看到这些，她对我感觉不好，她告诉我所有的食物都是农 民辛勤劳作的，我不应该浪费食物。想到这些，我对自己的坏习惯感到惭愧，我决定吃完所有的食物。浪费食物应该受到谴责，特别是在大城市，人们喜欢浪费食 物，他们想要保持苗条，只吃小部分。现在，政府提倡人们光盘，这个做法得到了大众的肯定，越来越多的人意识到不浪费食物。

初中英语作文：北京三日游 A Three-day Tour to Beijing Last month I went to Beijing to visit one of my friends, because we haven’t seen each other for about two years and I got a holiday meanwhile.It is my first time to visit Beijing, which is always the dream city for all the Chinese.All the information about the city came from the books and TV, now I could see and get know of it by myself, how excited I am!

There were so many tourist areas in my plan list, like Tian’anmen Square, Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Perking University and so on.However, due to my short holiday I only visit several places of my list, with my friend’s companion.I will take a long tour to Beijing next time if I have the chance. 翻译：

上个月我去北京看望我的一个朋友，因为我们有将近两年没见，而我刚好有假期。这是我第一次游览北京，这座全中国人都向往的城市。我对北京的所以认知都来自电视和书本，而现在我有机会亲自来看这个城市、来了解她。我多么地兴奋！

在我的旅游计划表上，我罗列许多要去的地方，如**广场，紫禁城，长城，北京大学等等。然而由于假期太短，朋友只陪我参观了计划表上的几个地方而已。如果有机会，我下次一定会到这来个长期旅游。

初中英语作文：关于电力的重要性的初中英语作文 The Importance of Electricity When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights don\'t work, the traffic jam will certainly happen.A patient needs to be operated on at once.What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity.Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line.Electricity is closely related to our daily life.

How terrible it would be if there were no electricity! 翻译：

当你早上去上班，发现交通灯不工作，交通堵塞，肯定会发生的。一个病人需要立刻动手术。如果操作不能因为电力会发生什么。没有电，我们不能看电视，听磁带，也不能在网上聊天。电在我们的日常生活密切相关的。 如果没有电将会多么可怕

推荐第8篇：英语作文带翻译

Nowadays, the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public.Especially the young generation living in metropolis, tend to drive after drinking, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others

Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon.Firstly,people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before ，where they will drink strong wine.Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.Secondly,this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, paengers and pedestrians, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths.Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars means a grievous waste of money, time and resources.

The legal aspects to strengthen management, strict, I believe that will reduce the phenomenon of drunk driving

如今，这一现象的酒后驾车引起了公众广泛的关注。特别是年轻一代生活在大都市，往往饮酒后驾驶，忽略了一个事实，这种行为可能构成潜在威胁 他们宝贵的生命，甚至可能危及他人。

一般来说，有几个原因可以解释这个现象。人们参加更多的活动或宴会比以往任何时候，他们将在那里喝烈性酒。然后，他们可能喝醉了，但继续开车。其次，这一行为将直接威胁到安全的司机，乘客和行人，造成交通事故，受伤甚至死亡。此外，治疗受伤和修补破车手段严重浪费金钱，时间和资源。

因该在法律方面加强管理，严格对待，我相信会减少酒后驾车的现象

推荐第9篇：初中高中英语作文 成功的定义 带翻译

What is the definition of succe? I believe different people will have different opinions about it.If anyone asks me what is succe for me, I will tell him progre is succe for me.I can have small goal or great aim in my whole life.If the goal what I set is too large for me, I will not taste the feeling of succe.Or I always set small goals, so I will feel succe all the time, which may make me become autophilia and without ambitions.Therefore, I think if I can be better than yesterday or last time, then I am succeful.成功的定义是什么？我相信不同的人会有不同的看法。如果有人问我对我来说成功是什么，我会告诉他进步就是成功。在我的一生中我可以设定很多小的或者大的目标。如果我定的目标对我来说太大了，我就尝不到成功的滋味。或者我设的目标太小了，这样我一直都会处于成功中，这也许会使我变得自恋没有雄心壮志。因此，我觉得要是我能够比昨天或者上一次好，这样我就算成功了。

推荐第10篇：带翻译

After eight long and sometimes lonely years of waiting, Kate Middleton married Prince William.在经历了八年的爱情长跑、以及时常孤寂的等待后，凯特•米德尔顿终于嫁给了英国威廉王子。

The couple\'s romance – punctuated: [ˈpʌŋktʃueɪt 间断;不时打断, like many relationships, with tearful break-ups and emotional reunions.[ˌriˈjunjən] 复合,再结合,再合并,再统一;和解

威廉和凯特的恋情如同其他人一样，历经波折，分手后又再度复合。

The couple\'s thoroughly [ˈθʌrəli] 彻底地，完全地

modern relationship has seen them become the most senior members of the Royal Family to live together before marriage, an unthinkable arrangement even a couple of decades ago.威廉和凯特是完全的现代恋爱关系。在威廉之前，英国王室中还没人在婚前同居，这在几十年前是不可想象的。

People around the world watched Britain\'s Prince William and Kate Middleton get married.The royal wedding broke records [ˈrekɔː(r)d]

for live streaming [ˈstrimɪŋ] 实时播放on the Internet.It also produced more than two million tweets [twit] 围脖on Twitter [ˈtwɪtər] 微博客.世界各地的人们观看了英国威廉王子和凯特·米德尔顿（Kate Middleton）完婚。这次英国皇家婚礼打破了互联网视频直播的记录，也在Twitter网上产生了超过2百万条tweets信息（国内类似应用称为微博）。

The ceremony took place Friday at Westminster Abbey [ˈæbi] 修道院,大教堂,大寺院in London.婚礼仪式周五在伦敦威斯敏斯特教堂举行。

KATE (AFTER ARCHBISHOP OF CANTERBURY): \"I, Catherine Elizabeth, take thee [ði]愿嫁你, William Arthur Philip Louis, to my wedded [ˈwedəd]合法妻子 husband, to have and to hold from this day forward ...\" 凯特（跟着坎特伯雷大主教宣誓）：“我，凯瑟琳·伊丽莎白，愿意嫁给威廉·阿瑟·菲利普·路易斯为妻。从今往后...” Kate wore a flowing white gown designed by Sarah Burton, the creative director of Alexander McQueen.William wore a red military uniform.凯特穿着由亚历山大·麦昆 (Alexander McQueen，时尚品牌)创意总监莎拉·伯顿 (Sarah Burton) 设计的飘逸的白色礼服。威廉穿着红色军装。

Hats were a big fashion statement.Many of those invited wore them.帽子是一大时尚。许多受邀嘉宾都戴着帽子。

Kate\'s sister, Philippa, was her maid [meɪd] 未婚女子of honor.William\'s brother, Harry, was his best man.凯特的妹妹菲莉帕是她的伴娘。威廉的弟弟哈里王子是他的伴郎。

WILLIAM (AFTER ARCHBISHOP): \"I, William Arthur Philip Louis, take thee, Catherine Elizabeth, to be my wedded [ˈwedəd]合法丈夫 wife ...\" 威廉（跟着大主教宣誓）：“我，威廉·阿瑟·菲利普·路易斯，愿意娶凯瑟琳·伊丽莎白为妻...”

It was Britain\'s biggest wedding since William and Harry\'s parents, Prince Charles and Prince Diana, were married in nineteen eighty-one.这次婚礼是自1981年威廉和哈里的父母查尔斯王子和黛安娜王妃结婚以来，英国最大的一次婚礼。

Nearly two thousand guests filled the church on Friday.Westminster Abbey was where the funeral [ˈfjun(ə)rəl] 葬礼for William\'s mother took place after Diana died in a car crash in nineteen ninety-seven.周五，近2千名嘉宾来到了威斯敏斯特教堂，这也是威廉的母亲黛安娜王妃1997年车祸丧生后举行葬礼的地方。

Hundreds of thousands of people filled the streets and parks of London to watch the wedding on video screens.成千上万人拥上伦敦的街头和公园，在电视屏幕上观看婚礼。

Among the wedding guests were English football star David Beckham and his wife Victoria, British Prime Minister David Cameron, the king of Norway and singer Elton John.婚礼来宾包括英国足球明星贝克汉姆和他的妻子维多利亚，英国首相卡梅隆，挪威国王以及英国歌星埃尔顿·约翰。

Bahrain\'s crown prince was invited but decided not to attend because of unrest in his country.Britain withdrew an invitation to the ambaador from Syria over violence against protesters [prəˈtestər]抗议者 there.

巴林王储受到了邀请，但由于国内动荡决定不出席婚礼。英国由于叙利亚对抗议者的暴力镇压，撤回了对叙利亚大使的邀请。

Unlike the Queen, who promised to obey Prince Philip when they married in 1947, Kate will today pledge : [pledʒ] 使发誓,保证only to \'love, comfort, honor and keep\'.1947年，英国女王嫁给菲利普亲王时，曾承诺“我服从”，而凯特在婚礼誓言中仅仅会提到“爱、舒心、尊重、始终如一”。

After the ceremony, the royal couple traveled to Buckingham Palace.Crowds cheered when the newlyweds [ˈnuliˌwedz] 新婚夫妇

appeared on a balcony [ˈbælkəni] and shared a short public ki, and then a longer one.

仪式结束后，王室夫妇前往白金汉宫。当这对新婚夫妇出现在白金汉宫的阳台当众短暂拥吻，随后又更长时间拥吻时，人群欢呼雀跃。

Later, William drove his wife out of Buckingham Palace in an open-top Aston Martin car.

随后，威廉驾驶一辆阿斯顿·马丁敞篷跑车，带着妻子驶出了白金汉宫。

William and the newest member of the royal family will now be known as the Duke and Duche [ˈdʌtʃəs] 公爵夫人of Cambridge.

威廉和皇家最新成员凯特被封为剑桥公爵和剑桥公爵夫人。

Kate is twenty-nine year old.William will be twenty-nine in June.His grandmother is Queen Elizabeth.His father, Prince Charles, is first in line to become king.William, as the older son, is second in line.Kate would not become queen, however, since she is not in the royal blood line.

凯特现年29岁。威廉将于6月年满29岁。他的祖母是伊丽莎白女王。他的父亲查尔斯王子是英国王位的第一继承人。威廉作为长子，是王位的第二继承人。凯特由于不是皇家血统，将不会成为女王。

There was a big celebration at the University of St（Saint Andrew）.Andrews in Scotland.That was where William and Kate first met as art history students in two thousand one. 圣·安德鲁大学举行了一场盛大的庆祝活动。这是威廉和凯特2001年作为艺术史系学生初次相逢的地方。

Many Americans woke up before sunrise [ˈsʌnˌraɪz]

日出(时);黎明to watch the wedding.And thousands of people traveled to Britain to join the celebration, including this Australian woman.

很多美国人一大早起床来观看婚礼。成千上万人前往英国参加庆祝活动，包括这名澳洲女性。

WOMAN: \"We\'re all part of history.It\'s just a wonderful experience.\"

澳洲女性：“我们都是（威廉王子婚礼）历史的一部分，这是个美好的回忆。”

第11篇：初中作文带评语

初中作文带评语

篇1：2015初中满分作文10篇(含点评) 2015初中满分作文10篇

1、2015年海南中考满分作文：送人玫瑰，手有余香

【题目】

24.下面两道作文题，请任选一题作文。 (1)阅读下面材料，按要求作文。

在英国一个乡村的田野里，一位贫困的农民正在劳作。忽然，他听到呼救声，一个孩子落水了。他不加思索，跳入水中，孩子得救了。

获救的孩子是一个贵族公子。几天后，贵族一家带着厚礼登门致谢，农民拒绝了厚礼。

老贵族敬佩农民的善良，感念他的恩德，于是决定资助农民的儿子到伦敦去接受高等教育。农民接受了这份馈赠，能让自己的孩子受到良好的教育是他多年来的心愿。

农民很快乐，老贵族也很快乐，因为他们终于完成了自己的心愿。

多年后，农民的儿子被英国皇家授勋封爵，并获得1945年的诺贝尔医学奖。他就是青霉素的发明者——亚历山大?弗莱明。

那名贵族公子在第二次世界大战期间患上了严重的肺炎。但幸运的是，依靠青霉素，他很快就痊愈了。他就是英国首相丘吉尔。

要求：①自选角度，自定主题;②自拟题目，自定文体(诗歌除外);③字迹工整，书写规范，不少于500字;④文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名。

(2)阅读下面材料，发挥想象，按要求将语段扩写成一篇文章。

新一代科技产品“智慧”手环即将进入市场。

此手环最突出的特点就是“智慧”。为检验产品的性能，感受其“智慧”，产品研制中心特向社会征集了十名体验者，我有幸成为其中一员。

十天的产品试用、体验，真让我大开眼界，不愧为“智慧”手环，简直太神奇了! 于是，“智慧”手环隆重推向市场。

要求：①自拟题目，自定文体(诗歌除外);②字迹工整，书写规范，不少于500字;③文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

送人玫瑰，手有余香

农民与贵族，一个缘于善良，一个出于报恩，都在别人需要帮助的时候毫不犹豫地伸出了自己的援手。他们是快乐的，因为他们都完成了自己的心愿;他们更是无比幸福的，因为他们的善举，为他们自己的后代甚至国家播下了善种。 其实，帮助别人就是帮助自己。在人的一生中往往会发生很多意想不到的事情，有时候，我们只是出于简单的、帮助别人的目的才去做一件事，但最终这件事却会令自己受益。

有这样两则故事：有个盲人在夜晚行路时，手里总是提着一个明亮的灯笼。人们很好奇，就问他：“你自己看不见，为什么还要提着灯笼走路呢?”盲人说：“我提着灯笼，既为别人照亮了路，同时别人也容易看到我，不会撞到我。这样既帮助了别人，又保护了自己。”在一次战斗中，将军看到远处飞来一枚炸弹，在大家都卧倒的时候，可旁边还有个小战士在那傻傻地站着，于是将军奋不顾身地扑向那个小战士。一声巨响之后，他们俩人身上都积满了尘土，幸运的是，俩人都毫发无损。将军站起来回头一看，不禁惊呆了：原来自己刚才站立的地方已经成了一个大大的弹坑。

我家住农村，到了夏秋时节，会有很多毒蛇出没。于是一户住在路边的人家就把自家的电灯拉出来，挂在屋檐下，为夜行人照路。一天晚上，屋子主人外出，当他踏出门槛时，清楚地看到一条毒蛇就盘在他的必经之路。于是我常想，倘若屋子的主人没有一颗善良之心，不把电灯挂出来，那晚他一定会被蛇咬着。人生在世，命运多舛，难免会遇到种种不幸，倘若人人都像这位盲人、将军和农夫一样，在别人需要帮助的时候伸出援助之手，既给别人带来方便与关爱，又给自己的人生驿站带来快乐与幸福，那么我们这个世界一定会充满光明和温暧。

万千大道理，其实一句话：送人玫瑰，手有余香。

得分点解读：

结构严谨，思路清晰。全篇采用“引——议——联——结”的结构(这是标准的供材料议论文结构)，开篇概括引用材料，接着提出论点“帮助别人就是帮助自己”，中间联系实际，引用盲人、将军和农夫的故事加以论证，结尾以“送人玫瑰，手有余香”再次点题，并照应题目，简单有力地收束全文。统观全篇，层次清楚，结构严谨，思路清晰，首尾圆融，开阖自如。

故事引人，夹叙夹议。文中讲述了盲人、将军和农夫的故事，材料新颖，吸引人，增强了文章的说服力，彰显了作者丰富的素材积累。如果只着眼于讲述故事，我们当然也能从中受到一定的启发;本文的可贵之处在于，考生能由此及彼，善于叙议结合。如倒数第二段，在讲述了盲人、将军和农夫的故事之后做了精彩的议论，反映了作者思维的深度。

2、2015海南中考满分作文：智慧手环

【满分作文1】“智慧”手环体验记

新一代科技产品“智慧”手环终于研制出来了，我有幸成为一名体验者。

不要小瞧了这枚小小的手环，只要把它戴在手腕上，即使再愚笨的人，也能上知天文、下晓地理，成为“学霸”，因为这枚小小的手环上存储了迄今为止人类已知的所有知识。

今天，我戴着“智慧”手环走进教室。老师刚在黑板上写下一道高难度数学题，我就三步并作两步跑到黑板前，不假思索，拿着粉笔“唰唰唰”，在黑板上写下了一串长长的算式。同学们的眼睛“溜”的一下睁圆了，个个嘴巴张得能装下一个鸡蛋：“这么难的题，连班长这个数学天才都不会，考试从未及格过的明明竟然做对了，简直不可思议!”

第二节课是地理。我以前最害怕上地理课了，上课如坐针毡，一分一秒都像一个世纪那样漫长。但是今天，我好像吃错药了，课上异常兴奋，也不再打瞌睡了。再难的题都是“小菜一碟”，老师的每一个问题我都能对答如流，我甚至闭着眼睛就能点出地球仪上每一个国家的位置。从未表扬过我的老师第一次向我伸出了大拇指：“明明今天表现真好!”

之后几节课，我都表现得非常出色：化学课上，我能把实验现象和公式背得滚瓜烂熟;英语课上，我把单词读得准确无误;语文课上，我妙笔生花，竟然写出了一万多字的作文;音乐课上，我破天荒地没有唱跑调??每一个老师都惊讶了，成绩一向一塌糊涂的我今天竟然如此出类拔萃，同学们都像看外星人一样看着我。

下课后，我被包围得水泄不通，同学们七嘴八舌：“明明，你有什么秘密‘武器’?快告诉我们吧!” “好吧??”无奈之下，我高高地举起手腕上戴的“智慧”手环，把秘密说了出来。

从此以后，学校所有同学都不用整天趴在桌子上做老师布置的成堆的练习题了，一向喜欢抢占音乐课的数学老师再也懒得去抢课了，一向喜欢在体育课时“请”同学到办公室“开小灶”的语文老师再也不“请客”了，所有的学生都能轻松拿到100分，师生皆大欢喜。不过，有人欢喜有人忧，就在大伙儿喜笑颜开的时候，学校门口那两家每年都赚100万的眼镜店和教辅资料专卖店关门啦! 得分点解读：

想象合理，详略得当。很明显，本文的材料是从想象中来的，但想象合情合理，因为它是从“我”的学习生活中来的。文章详写“我”在数学和地理课上的表现，略写“我”在化学、英语、语文和音乐课上的表现，这样文章繁简适当，不仅使结构疏密有致，而且还突出了“智慧”手环的神奇。在内容安排上，既有对“我”现在“聪明”的描写，又有对“我”过去“愚笨”的叙述，前后对比，相映成趣。

语言活泼，妙语连珠。如“学霸”“小菜一碟”“请客”“像看外星人一样看着我”，等等，风趣幽默，诙谐通俗。特别是文中在描写“我”及周围人的表现时，比喻、夸张、对比、排比和反语等修辞手法的运用，极富文采和张力，构成了文章独特的语言魅力，具有很强的表达效果，读来让人神清气爽，口舌生津。

3、2015年安徽中考满分作文：难忘那坚毅的眼神

【题目】

以“难忘那______________的眼神”为题，写一篇文章。

提示与要求：

(1)请你从“期盼”、“慈爱”、“坚毅”、“失望”四个词语中选择一个，把题目补充完整。

(2)可以大胆选择你最能驾驭的文体进行写作。 (3)文中不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名等，否则会被扣分。

(4)抄袭是一种不良行为，相信你不会照搬别人的文章，否则会影响你的成绩。

(5)考虑到内容的充实，文章不要少于500字。

【满分作文1】难忘那坚毅的眼神

当昆明*四起，当血雾笼罩全国，当恐慌一点点吞噬着人们??哥哥却在打包去昆明的行李。

妈妈一把夺过哥哥手中的包，拿着那沉甸甸的包，妈妈的双手不住的颤抖，声音也已带了三份哭腔：“就不能，就不能不去吗?”哥哥看着近些天憔悴了的母亲，眼神微动，却又看到包上的军徽，眼睛又充满了坚毅。哥哥将妈妈拉坐在床上，说：“妈，我知道你不放心我，可是我吃了部队五年的白饭，跟兄弟们一起训练了这么多年，是时候报恩了!”

听了哥哥的这句话，妈妈再也忍不住了，眼泪如断线的珠子，大颗大颗的掉落：“我养了你18年，你，你就不能为了报我的恩不去吗?你这是去，去送死呀!”

哥哥不再言语，只是看着妈妈，眼里充满疼惜，却又饱含坚毅，他决定了就不再更改。

亲人的泪水，挽留的话语都如泛滥的洪水一样淹没着整个家庭。但哥哥，却屹立在这洪水之上，遥遥地眺望着西南方向。他告诉我，那里有他的兄弟，有他的军队，还有祖国的召唤。

后来，哥哥还是趁夜走了，没有告诉任何人，独自背着包裹走向远方，我们再无法联系到他，他也从未回过电话。

前几天，妈妈看见将氧气罩让给别人的官东，突然掉下泪来，嘴里喃喃地念着：“这傻孩子??这傻孩子??”我看不到水下的官东究竟是怎么样的，但却能猜到，透过层层水纹，那双眼，必是坚毅的。

哥哥曾在临行前，偷偷地给我留了封信。那夜，他将信谨慎地放于我的桌前。昏黄灯光晕染在他身上，眼神却坚毅无比，击碎了一室柔和。我悄悄地打开那信，信上只有是一行字：

处其位，谋其事，照顾好妈妈。

“妈妈”二字已有些模糊，哥哥还给妈妈的，只有这一滴眼泪了。他那坚毅的眼神中，担得是千万家庭，他要用自己的血肉之躯报恩祖国。

难忘，官东的坚毅的眼神;难忘，哥哥的坚毅眼神;难忘，千千万万如他们一样的勇士的坚毅眼神! 凸显正能量突出“坚毅的眼神”

【得分点透视】

⒈突出正能量。文章选材和立意突破了一般狭隘的小我空间，将触角伸向社会，写作为军人的哥哥的“坚毅的眼神”，并插叙“官东的坚毅的眼神”，从而将主题升华为“如他们一样的勇士的坚毅眼神”。文章所采用的两个材料，哥哥“独自背着包裹走向远方”和官东在东方之星沉船事件中“将氧气罩让给别人”，都是我们这个时代所发生的鲜活的具有强烈感召力的事件。鲜活的具有时代气息的社会材料，与宣传正能量的主题，是这篇文章能获得高分的首要原因。

⒉突出“坚毅的眼神”。文章前后七处写“坚毅的眼神”。前三处是实写，写哥哥看到“军徽”时坚毅的眼神、“充满疼惜，却又饱含坚毅”的眼神、“遥遥地眺望着西南方向”的眼神。第四至六处写“猜想”中的坚毅的眼神，猜想官东“那双眼，必是坚毅的”，猜想哥哥放信和写信时“眼神却坚毅无比，击碎了一室柔和”、“那坚毅的眼神中，担得是千万家庭，他要用自己的血肉之躯报恩祖国”。最后一处是点题。这七处对眼神的描写，虚实结合，相互照应，反复渲染，让文章中心明确，重点突出，结构严谨。

⒊把握关联，有效烘托。文章非常好的把握了命题中的三个关键点。一是“难忘”，二是“那坚毅的”，三是“眼神”，文章对眼神的六处描写和结尾的一处点题，都蕴含和突出了“难忘”与“坚毅”的内涵，扣题非常紧密。同时，为了有效突出哥哥“那坚毅的眼神”是“勇士的眼神”，还进行了多方烘托。首先，在

第一段用“恐慌”的环境进行烘托;其次，用整个家庭如泛滥的洪水一样“挽留的话语”进行烘托;第三用官东同样的形象进行正面烘托。

立意凸显正能量，选材紧扣时代脉搏，语言简洁生动，结构严谨精致，此文因此获得了55的高分。

4、中考满分作文大全：告别自卑

今天，“告别自卑”网站异常热闹，why?因为有众多知名博客云集。他们来自海内外，来自古今中外，

纷纷就“如何告别自卑”发出了博客帖子：Hi，大家好!我乃着名小提琴天才帕格尼尼。原本，上天想把我造就成一个自卑者，疾病从我一出生便纠缠住我，四岁患肺炎，六岁得喉结炎，此后一场大病又夺去了我的眼，各种病魔不断侵噬着我的肌体。但我并没就此倒下，我自信地站了起来，自信地与命运搏斗，自信地追求自己的理想。因此，希望朋友们能像我一样告别自卑! --博客帕格尼尼

我站在风雨中，任凭风吹雨打，我不低头，我躺在大自然中，虽然不能看见大自然如诗如画的美景，不能听见鸟雀和谐之曲，甚至不能忘情的赞美道：啊，美好啊!可我不自卑我要自信的享受生活，为残缺的人生抒写不残缺的乐章 --博客海伦﹒凯勒

我获得美国剑桥大学的录取通知书时，我是多么高兴啊，可随后我被无情的告知已患脊椎性侧索硬化症，好像刚怒放的鲜花被闪电折弯了腰，可我并没有自卑，我顽强的生存，不断探究黑洞。并取得了成功，同时创造了一个又一个两年半。那朵曾折断腰的花又挺立于天地间，并散发了无穷芬芳?? --博客霍金

看了那么多自信着，成功者的帖子，我感触颇深，于是也尾随发了帖子：

我原本也是自卑者。如一块石子，默默的躺在路边，但感谢众多博客朋友们，让我重拾了自信，远离了自卑，让我明白：即使自己是一块不起眼的石子，也可以成为一块筑基石，为繁忙的交通奉献了自己的力量。李白不是曾自信的说：“天生我才必有用”吗!我也自信“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”因此希望所有自卑的朋友-- 告别自卑 --博客“重生” 点评：大胆的创新和别出心裁的构思是这篇文章成功的主要原因。作者采用博客发帖子的形式，先模拟帕格尼尼、海伦﹒凯勒、霍金等名人的口吻，分别讲述了自己如何告别自卑，顽强拼搏，最终成功的经历;然后，作者借“重生”的口吻，表达了自己决心告别自卑的心声。文章由此阐明了告别自卑的意义，使文章的观点得到鲜明的表达。在中考考场上能如此沉着大胆的构思，敢于创新，我们不能不佩服作者的勇气和写作的底蕴。综观全文，立意明确，思路清晰，层次分明，结构稳健，语言简明，叙写流畅，反映了作者较为扎实的写作功底。

5、2015年宁夏中考满分作文：走过

走过

记忆是心中的蔷薇，永远不会败落。

——席慕蓉

落英缤纷，流水潺湲，世界愈发美好，只因，我们一起走过；

曦光灿灿，暮色漫漫，生活更加多彩，只因，我们一起走过；

风声回转，雨丝轻溅，心灵更显澄澈，只因，我们一起走过?? 自我出生起，便与雨结下了不解之缘。成长的路上，我们一起走过—— 犹记得，儿时的我独爱雨天，也不知是因为什么，只觉得和雨特别的亲近。走近雨，走进雨，内心总会有一股莫名的冲动，只觉得那淅淅沥沥的雨浸润肌肤是一种很美妙的享受。

初进花季，仍是一个懵懂无知的男孩，但雨季来临，却已经不再到雨中尽情玩耍了。那时的我，对一切都很敏感，只是淡然地和她相敬如宾。

而如今的我已告别花季雨季，眉宇已然褪去一份青涩，初露一丝英气，对雨自然也有了另一种难以捉摸的情感?? “水光潋滟晴方好，山色空蒙雨亦奇。”雨，如烟，如雾，如丝，如梦，雨珠悄然滑落于脸颊之上，沁入心扉，清凉几许，迷蒙几许。

淅淅沥沥，滴滴答答，密密匝匝，雨丝飞落，如曼妙的舞姬，令我心旌摇曳。

现在的我，已然坐在考场里，虽然没有你的陪伴，但我依然自信，一起走过的路上，留下一行小诗： 走过恋恋风尘 才发现

记忆是心中永远

不灭的炊烟

今天的你

永远是我心中 不老的容颜?? 沙沙挲挲，淅淅沥沥，听，你的声音仍然在我耳畔萦绕，我知道，那是我们心与心的共鸣。

蔷薇依然盛开，芬芳依旧馥郁，这一切只因，我们一起走过！

【满分解密】

生命的成长拔节中，“我”和雨一起

走过，这是作者不落俗套的构思。正是有了这份匠心，才成就了这篇佳作。

文章结构紧凑，“雨”这一意象，伴随着“我”一起走过。随着年龄的不断增长，对雨的不同感受，展现了作者心理成长的历程，更显得文章层次清晰。“特别的亲近”“相敬如宾”“难以捉摸”，这只是对雨的感觉吗？“书不尽言，言不尽意。”意溢于言外，给读者留下了无尽想象的空间。作者善于营造意境，其意境既得缠绵悱恻，又得超旷空灵，读来宛若隔窗听雨，细腻富有诗意，让人心中一片清新宁静。

6、2015年江苏淮安中考满分作文：回味

时光如流水一般匆匆流去，当我蓦然回首，才发现仍有太多的记忆存在我的脑海中，无法抹去，可以让我细细回味，慢慢品尝其中的酸甜苦辣，因为其中充满了家人的疼爱，朋友间的友爱，老师的关爱?? 回味母爱，感受爱的无私。对于我们来说，晚上熬夜已如家常便饭，不足为奇。可对于早睡早起的妈妈来说，晚上等待儿子回家便不是一件易事，她得经受住无聊、寂寞，坚持抵制自己不进入梦乡。有时我回到家，她会对我说：“累死了，要不是等你，我一觉都已经睡醒。”可是当我要她不要等我时，妈妈她却断然拒绝了，她说：“我要让你知道，不是你一个人在吃苦，学校里有千千万万个同学，家里还有我，我会陪着你的”。有时爱不是用嘴说，而是融入了一个个行动中，妈妈她把等待当作责任，当作爱的体现，无论有多累，她却坚持到底，不肯放弃。

回味友爱，感受它如水的纯洁。每次放假回家，我们几个老同学都会结伴同行。一路走去，有说有笑，不放过任何宝贵的时间。就连在车上，被挤在一个狭小的空间里，我们依旧谈天说地，还时不时传出一阵阵笑声，惹得其他人投来异样的或是羡慕的眼光。现在回味起来，还觉得那份情是那样的纯洁。社会上有太多的尔虞我诈，勾心斗角，为了自己伤害他人，为求目的不择手段。与这相比，这份情又怎能晶莹剔透，光彩照人。

回味关爱，感受师生情。每当你上课走神，老师会友情的提醒你，当你太疲劳却还在写作业时，老师会劝你休息一下，当你考试失败垂头丧气，老师会耐心的开导你，给你战胜困难的勇气??鼓励我们努力学习，取得好的成绩。

世界上并不缺乏爱，只要我们不时地回首过去，回味所发生的事，我们会发现原来生活如此美好。

【例文点评】：本文是议论文，结构清楚，分论点设置合理，语言流畅。尤其是文章选取了自己亲历的原汁原味的事情，朴实纯真蕴含其中，有生活气息,亦有学子情怀!

7、2015年海南中考满分作文：材料作文

【题目】

下面两道作文题，请任选一题作文。 (1)阅读下面材料，按要求作文。

在英国一个乡村的田野里，一位贫困的农民正在劳作。忽然，他听到呼救声，一个孩子落水了。他不加思索，跳入水中，孩子得救了。

获救的孩子是一个贵族公子。几天后，贵族一家带着厚礼登门致谢，农民拒绝了厚礼。

老贵族敬佩农民的善良，感念他的恩德，于是决定资助农民的儿子到伦敦去接受高等教育。农民接受了这份馈赠，能让自己的孩子受到良好的教育是他多年来的心愿。 篇2：初中生作文评语大全

作文评语大全

1批评式：例如：“此文语言不流畅，书写不认真，缺少生动形象的描写，是一篇不成功的作文。”如此评语，对于那些写作不认真的学生，可适当采用一下，但不可常用，否则会挫伤学生的进取心。

2、表扬式：“本篇作文选材新颖，构思精巧，动用了对比、反衬等多种写作手法，人物刻画细致形象，读后让人久久难忘，是一篇上乘的佳作……”这样的评语，适于那些写作功底深厚的学生，老师衷肯的评价，会让他们的作文更有高度与深度。

3、激励式：学生的写作水平是不均衡的，有的作文只是局部或个别句子、词语精彩，那么老师在写评语的时候，就要抓住学生的这些闪光点，来激发他们的写作兴趣。“文中的两个比喻句很美妙，独特，读后有身临其境的感觉，我很喜欢，希望以后还能享受到，老师相信你不会让我失望的。”虽然寥寥数语，但这样激励所起的作用是不可估量的。

4、劝勉式：作文是学生抒发心灵的芳草地，他们的喜怒哀乐尽显其中，因此教师在写评语的时候，更要关注学生的思想动态，把他们引到积极向上的轨道。“人可以用精神的高度让自己远离物质的贫困，在别人享受美食的时候，你可以沉浸在精神食粮的摄取中，它将给你带来无穷的乐趣，让你在宽度与深度上超越他们！”我想，这样几句话带有劝勉式的话语，足可以使那些因贫困带来烦恼的学生感到释然。

5、反问式：教师有时可以根据学生的作文特点，提出一些带有深度的

问题，让学生自己去思考、解答，在不断反思中提高写作水平。例如：你认为哪些地方描写最精彩？为什么？；文中有哪些深刻的体悟？；你使用了哪些写作技巧？；你最不满意之处是什么？……

6、暗示式：“很喜欢你这篇作文，风趣、幽默之中不乏哲理，文笔流畅如行云流水，如果书写再漂亮些，不就更锦上添花了吗？”如此表扬之中的含蓄批评，更会触动学生的心灵，引起他们的重视。

7、研讨式：针对写作上的某些问题，教师可采用商量式的口气，和学生共同探讨、改进。例如：“如果引用一首和本文有关的诗开头，你感觉如何？”“叙述的事件，采用插叙的方法是不是更引人入胜？”“结尾的语言如果再精炼含蓄且富有哲理，更会让人回味无穷，你认为呢？……”

十、互动式：让学生感受到老师在和他们共同努力，共同生长。

1、这本书，我也看了很多遍，我们可以交流一下。

2、你的文章给我很大启发，谢谢你！

3、向你学习！

4、看你的作业，总能给我的教学带来启发。

5、共同努力，共同进步！

6、你的努力给我力量！

7、我喜欢你对学习的专注，它能影响我！

8、从你身上，我学到了默默无闻地奋斗！

9、这则笔记，让我明白了做人的道理，谢谢你！ 10 富有童趣的言语，让我变得年老！

九、总结式：针对学生的作业内容、形势，进行总结。

1、你的文章告诉我，用眼睛和心灵发现世界，我们就仿佛比别人多活了很多年。

2、读史可以明智，你写得好！

3、世界很小，而人的心却很大很大。今天我又学会了一句。

4、写得多好呀，一颗“花生心”，一颗谦恭的心！

5、驳论，有助思维，你做得好！

6、勤奋地学习，汇っ成功，你做到了，我很高兴！

7、是的，有时，一首歌也能给人很大的启迪！

8、人性的真善美！

9、写得好，你是这样做得吗？做一只鹰！

10、“马上做”而不是“慢慢来”，你说得对！

八、谈心式：与学生交流思想，增进情感，促进学习的内驱力。

1、给自己一个笑脸，你会发现，生活，完全不一样。

2、今天我看到你写作时专注的神情，被你感动！你从第一页翻起，便会看到自己的进步！

3、孩子，老师发现你这两天有点灰心，别泄气，你能行！

4、我相信自己的学生，你也要相信自己，你能行！

5、字里行间流露出的真情，让我感动！

9、你能感觉到老师对你的期待吗？

10、用你的努力，给我一个鼓沥，让我们一起冲！

七、指导式：对作业中存在的问题，进行针对性指导。

1、详略不得当！

2、你应该概括得更片面些！加油！

3、言语可以更活泼些！

4、尝试用景物描写来表达自己的心情，借景抒情，你一定能学会！

5、在作文的创新方面，还可以做得更突出些！ 铜陵教育网

6、字要写正，不出格。

7、我想，你作业的时间调配可能需要调整，我们可以商量一下。

9、沉住气，看清楚，写准确！你能做到！

10、大小一致，行款整齐。

六、导行式：直接指导学生行为，帮助其学习进步！

1、看看你同桌的作业，他的格势更美观！

2、字的大小相同，字形规范，你能做到，加油！

3、再加把劲！

4、不要叹息时间的消逝，要热情而执著地抓住它！

5、要结合自己生活实际谈感受。

6、把你的作业和××同学的交流，你们都会有收获！

7、试着看一些科普类的读物，我觉得你需要这些知识！

8、选择一些文学类读物，对你的言语表达会有好处！

9、如果像上次的作业那样写，我会更欣赏你的韧性！

10、没有规矩，不成方圆，对吧？

五、说理式：通过说明道理，帮助其占败困难，转变学习状态。

1、失败乃成功之母，别泄气！

2、一份耕耘，一份收获！

3、对自己的要求有多高，就能达到多高的水平！

4、你的汗水不会白流，你的努力也不会白费！

5、别人能做到的，你也能！

6、不要辜负老师和家长对你的希望啊！

7、你是全班同学的榜样，你觉得该怎么做？

8、作业是巩固知识的必要途径，必须用心完成!

9、从容面对失败，就有超越自己的底气！

10、孩子，懂得珍惜就会拥有更多！ 篇3：初中作文及点评

友情

友情是人最保贵的财富，无论你走到哪，身处何方，都会有一段温馨的回忆伴随着你。友情是金子，友情不像铁，越练，越氧化，最后化成一缕轻烟。它像块金子，越练，越纯，永远闪烁着金色的光

芒。

友情是一瓶很纯的葡萄酒。越陈，就越醇，也越甜。人生中离不开友情。真正的友情需要用真心去播种，用理解去灌溉，用真诚去呵护。朋友，不是困境中悄悄走开的那个人，而是真诚安慰你说别怕，一切都会好起来的那个人；朋友，不是在你取得成绩时对你赞不绝口的那个人，而是时刻提醒你不要骄傲的那个人；朋友，不是只有求你帮忙时才来找你的那个人，而是在不需要任何理由前来看望你的那个

人……

值得珍惜的友情，绝不会因岁月而苍老，因时间而褪色，它总会萦绕在你的心间，荡漾起层层涟漪。只要你拥有博大的胸怀且以诚相待，你所拥有的友谊就会在五湖四海扎根，你的朋友就会遍及天涯海角。

在友情里旅行吧！重新梳理心灵的行程，让悠悠的岁月装载我们的人生，赋予其新的使命。过去的时光渐行渐远，捻着心绪，借问岁月，什么是光辉的友情？未来的岁月渐行渐远，他让我握住他的手，去珍惜友情的流光溢彩，这就是永恒的友情的意义。

友情的气息如光，融化了失落，消解了迷失，让珍惜永存，让领悟打开心房，让思索抚慰如花的友情。撒一路芬芳，驻守心灵的美好。 点评：

人生之中，不可缺少友情，友情好比是我们生命中的甘霖，滋润着似渴的心灵，让我们不再寂寞孤单。本文语言优美流畅，生动自然，有一种清新淡雅之美，且中心主题明确突出。

第12篇：七夕节英语作文带翻译

七夕节英语作文带翻译

七夕节，又名乞巧节、七巧节或七姐诞，发源于中国，是华人地区以及部分受汉族文化影响的东亚国家传统节日，那七夕节英语作文怎么写？

七夕节英语作文带翻译 例1

“七夕今宵看碧霄，牵牛织女渡河桥……”

今天是七夕节，是牛郎织女一年一度相聚的日子。各地七夕节的习俗不尽相同：有的地方吃乞巧饭、对月穿针；有的地方的少女偷偷躲在南瓜棚下，听牛郎织女相会时的悄悄话；有的地方的姑娘“拜仙禾”、“拜神菜”、“迎仙”、“卜巧”、“赛巧”。

在我的家乡，传说七月七日早晨，仙女要下凡洗澡，喝其洗澡水可以避邪治病延寿。此水名叫“双七水”。人们在这天鸡鸣时，争先恐后地去河边取水，取回后用新瓮盛起来，待日后使用。

傍晚，我去游泳，听别人说今天早上和中午很多人到河里去游泳，泡泡避邪治病延寿的“双七水”。说来也巧，我们下水不久，下起了一会儿星星点点的小雨，这就是牛郎织女的“相思泪”吧？

晚上，我们来到楼顶，仰望天空。一条银河横贯南北，河的两岸各有一颗闪亮的星星，隔河相望，遥遥相对，那就是牵牛星和织女星吧？

七夕节真是中国传统节日中最具浪漫色彩的一个节日啊！

\"Tanabata tonight to see Bi Xiao, pull the cattle weaver croing the river bridge ......\" Today is Tanabata Festival, is Cowboy Weaver once a year together.Around the Tanabata Festival customs are not the same: some places begging Qiao rice, on the needle; some local girls secretly hiding in the pumpkin shed, listen to the weaver when the whispers meet; some local girl \"worship cents Wo\" , \"Worship

gods\",

\"welcome cents\", \"Bu Qiao\", \"赛 clever\".

In my hometown, the legend of July 7 morning, the fairy to descend to take a bath, drink its bath water can cure evil life.This water is called \"double seven water\".People in this day when the cock, scrambling to the river to take water, get back with a new urn Sheng, to be used later.

In the evening, I went swimming, listening to others that morning and noon a lot of people go to the river to swim, bubble evil cure life \"double seven water.\" It is also clever, we soon after the water, starting a little bit of stars for a little rain, this is the Cowherd and Weaver\'s \"Acacia tears\" right?

Night, we came to the roof, looking up at the sky.A galaxy running acro the north and south, the banks of the two sides have a shining star, acro the river, distant relative, that is, Altair and Vega? Tanabata Festival is the most traditional Chinese festivals in a romantic holiday!

七夕节英语作文带翻译 例2

Is Chinese valentine\'s day, legends, niulang and zhinv meet the day in a year.

七夕情人节，传说，是牛郎和织女一年中相聚的日子。

That night, my mother and I came to the culture square.I looked up at the moon, suddenly found that today\'s beautiful moon, curved.Foil side seems to have a burst of light in its beautiful body, let it appear more beautiful, more shine, more attractive.Next to the moon, a group of naughty little stars twinkling, eyes stirred, as if in listen to the mother to tell them the story of niulang and zhinv, but they, like the cowherd and zhinv feelings touched, presented a warm picture, suddenly, the sky a glowing things one by one, you see, originally is the kongmin light!

那天晚上，我和妈妈来到文化广场。我抬头看着月亮，突然发现，今天的月亮好美，弯弯的。旁边似乎还有一阵阵光在衬托它美丽的身躯，让它显得更美丽，更闪耀，更迷人。月亮旁边，一群调皮的小星星在闪烁着，眼睛一眨一眨，好像在听月亮妈妈给它们讲的牛郎和织女的故事，而它们，好像被牛郎和织女的感情感动了，呈现出一幅温馨的画面，突然，天空出现了一个个发光的东西，定睛一看，原来是孔明灯呀！关于七夕节的英语作文

Thin balloons outside reflected the three words \"I love you\", a few candles burning inside, just like a burning heart, so beautiful, so sweet, so touching.

薄薄的气球外面映着“我爱你”三个字，里面燃烧着几支蜡烛，就像一颗燃烧的心，那么美丽，那么温馨，那么感人。

Perhaps, niulang and zhinv also saw the sweet sight.

也许，牛郎和织女也看见了这温馨的景象。

七夕节英语作文带翻译 例3

The Double Seventh Festival， on the 7th day of the 7th lunar month， is a traditional festival full of romance.It often goes into August in the Gregorian calendar.

This festival is in mid-summer when the weather is warm and the gra and trees reveal their luxurious greens.At night when the sky is dotted with stars， and people can see the Milky Way spanning from the north to the south.On each bank of it is a bright star， which see each other from afar.They are the Cowherd and Weaver Maid， and about them there is a beautiful love story paed down from generation to generation.

Long， long ago， there was an honest and kind-hearted fellow named Niu Lang (Cowhand)。 His parents died when he was a child.Later he was driven out of his home by his sister-in-law.So he lived by himself herding cattle and farming.One day， a fairy from heaven Zhi Nu (Weaver Maid) fell in love with him and came down secretly to earth and married him.The cowhand farmed in the field and the Weaver Maid wove at home.They lived a happy life and gave birth to a boy and a girl.Unfortunately， the God of Heaven soon found out the fact and ordered the Queen Mother of the Western Heavens to bring the Weaver Maid back.

With the help of celestial cattle， the Cowhand flew to heaven with his son and daughter.At the time when he was about to catch up with his wife， the Queen Mother took off one of her gold hairpins and made a stroke.One billowy river appeared in front of the Cowhand.The Cowhand and Weaver Maid were separated on the two banks forever and could only feel their tears.Their loyalty to love touched magpies， so tens of thousands of magpies came to build a bridge for the Cowhand and Weaver Maid to meet each other.The Queen Mother was eventually moved and allowed them to meet each year on the 7th of the 7th lunar month.Hence their meeting date has been called \"Qi Xi\" (Double Seventh)。

【参考译文】

双七节,在阴历7月7日,是中国传统节日中最具浪漫色彩的。它经常在阳历8月进入。

这个节日是在仲夏,天气温暖,草木揭示其奢华的绿色。晚上天空点缀着星星时,人们可以看到银河系跨越从北到南关于七夕节的英语作文（中英对照）关于七夕节的英语作文（中英对照）。在每个银行是一颗明亮的星星,从远处看到对方。他们是牛郎和织工女仆,对他们有一个美丽的爱情故事一代一代传下来2017年关于七夕节英语作文2017年关于七夕节英语作文。

很久很久以前,有一个诚实和善良的名叫妞妞朗(牧牛工)。他的父母当他还是个孩子的时候就去世了。后来他被他的嫂子赶出他的家。所以他靠自己放牧牲畜和农业!。一天,一位仙女从天上之怒(编织女佣)爱上了他和秘密下来到地球并嫁给了他。牧童养殖领域和韦弗女仆编织在家里。他们过着幸福的生活,生了一个男孩和一个女孩。不幸的是,天上的神很快发现这样一个事实,并下令太后西方天堂把韦弗女仆。

在老牛的帮助下,牛郎飞到天堂和他的儿子和女儿。时他正要赶上他的妻子,女王母亲脱下她的一只金簪, 一个汹涌的河出现在前面的牧童2017年关于七夕节英语作文作文。牧牛工和韦弗女仆永远分离的两家银行,只会觉得自己的眼泪。他们的忠诚的爱情感动了喜鹊,成千上万的喜鹊来建造一座桥梁牧牛工和韦弗女仆来满足彼此。女王的母亲最终被移动和允许他们来满足每年的阴历7月7日。习因此他们会议日期被称为“气”(双第七)。

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第13篇：英语作文自我介绍 带翻译

英语作文自我介绍 带翻译

To introduce myself（介绍我自己） Hello,every one!（大家好） My name is **** .（我叫****）

I\'m a 15 years old boy.（我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改）

I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）

I\'m an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩） In the school , my favourite subject is maths .（在学校，我最喜欢数学） Perhaps someone thinks it\'s difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学） But I like it.（但我喜欢他）

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）

I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）

Such as,running,volleyball and so on.（像跑步、排球等等） I\'m kind-hearted.（我很热心）

If you need help ,please come to me .（如果你需要帮助，就来找我） I hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友） OK.This is me .A sunny boy.（好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩）

首先要看你写信的性质。是官方而正式的书信？还是朋友间的通信？

无论是哪一种，基本的英文书信格式应包括四大部分：日期，称呼，正文，和落款（包括敬语）

1、朋友间的

October,16,2011（右起顶格） Dear Jimmy（左起顶格）

I\'m glad to receive your letter...（正文，开头空四格）

Yours Sincerely,

Jack（右下，包括敬语和落款）

2、官方、正式的书信

信内应包含收信人地址（西方古时防止信封损坏地址无着而沿用至今的传统）、日期、称呼、正文、落款等。其实官方的书信更多应该参考第3点，越全面越表示你对他们的重视。

001th,Happy Road, 9th District 250013, New York, U.S.A（地址同样顶格写，从小写到大）

（以下同1）

October,16,2011（右起顶格） Dear Jimmy（左起顶格）

I\'m glad to receive your letter...（正文，开头空四格）

Yours Sincerely,

Jack（右下，包括敬语和落款）

3、更为严格的商务英语电函，包括有十几种元素。难度很大，但是是英文商务信函的必备

（信头是寄信人地址、公司信息，收信人地址，经由转交，参考号，日期，称呼，主题，正文，敬语，落款，签名，附注，附件等等）

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2008-04-17 14:16dan6490341|七级

先名字后日期

一般为： Yours Truly 名字 日期

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英文书信的格式

1、

信头（Heading）

指发信人的姓名（单位名称）、地址和日期，一般写在信纸的右上角。一般公函或商业信函的信纸上都印有单位或公司的名称、地址、电话号码等，因此就只需在信头下面的右边写上写信日期就可以了。 英文地址的写法与中文完全不同，地址的名称按从小到大的顺序：第一行写门牌号码和街名；第二行写县、市、省、州、邮编、国名；然后再写日期。标点符号一般在每一行的末尾都不用，但在每一行的之间，该用的还要用，例如在写日期的时候。

2、

日期的写法：

如：1997年7月30日，英文为：July 30，1997（最为普遍）； July 30th，1997；

30th July，1997等。1997不可写成97。

3、

信内地址（Inside Addre）：

在一般的社交信中，信内收信人的地址通常省略，但是在公务信函中不能。将收信人的姓名、地址等写在信头日期下方的左角上，要求与对信头的要求一样，不必再写日期。

4、

称呼（Salutation）：

是写信人对收信人的称呼用语。位置在信内地址下方

一、二行的地方，从该行的顶格写起，在称呼后面一般用逗号（英国式），也可以用冒号（美国式）。

（1）写给亲人、亲戚和关系密切的朋友时，用Dear或My dear再加上表示亲属关系的称呼或直称其名（这里指名字，不是姓氏）。例如：My dear father，Dear Tom等。

（2）写给公务上的信函用Dear Madam，Dear Sir或Gentleman（Gentlemen）。注意：Dear纯属公务上往来的客气形式。Gentlemen总是以复数形式出现，前不加Dear，是Dear Sir的复数形式。

（3）写给收信人的信，也可用头衔、职位、职称、学位等再加姓氏或姓氏和名字。例如：Dear Prof.Tim Scales, Dear Dr.John Smith。

5、

正文（Body of the Letter）： 位置在下面称呼语隔一行，是信的核心部分。因此要求正文层次分明、简单易懂。和中文信不

同的是，正文中一般不用Hello！（你好！）正文有缩进式和齐头式两种。每段书信第一行的第一个字母稍微向右缩进些，通常以五个字母为宜，每段第二行从左面顶格写起，这就是缩进式。但美国人写信各段落往往不用缩进式，用齐头式，即每一行都从左面顶格写起。商务信件大都采用齐头式的写法。

6、

结束语（Complimentary Close）：

在正文下面的

一、二行处，从信纸的中间偏右处开始，第一个词开头要大写，句末用逗号。不同的对象，结束语的写法也不同。

（1）写给家人、亲戚，用Your loving grandfather，Lovingly yours，Lovingly等；

（2）写给熟人、朋友，用Yours cordially，Yours affectionately等；

（3）写业务信函用Truly yours（Yours truly），Faithfully yours（Yours faithfully）等；

（4）对上级、长辈用Yours obediently（Obediently yours），Yours respectfully（Respectfully yours）等。

7、

签名（Signature） ： 低于结束语一至二行，从信纸中间偏右的地方开始，在结束语的正下方，在签完名字的下面还要有用打字机打出的名字，以便识别。职务、职称可打在名字的下面。当然，写给亲朋好友的信，就不必再打了。

8、

附言（Postscript） ：

一封信写完了，突然又想起遗漏的事情，这时用P.S.表示，再写上遗漏的话即可，要长话短说。通常在信末签名下面几行的左方，应于正文齐头。

注意：在正式的信函中，应避免使用附言。

9、

附件（Enclosure） ：

信件如果有附件，可在信纸的左下角，注上Encl：或Enc：

例如：Encl：2 photos（内附两张照片）。如果福建附件不止一项，应写成Encl：或Encs。

我们有时可看到在称呼与正文之间有Re：或Subject：（事由）字样。一般在信纸的中间，也可与“称呼”对齐。还应在底下加横线，以引起读信人的注意，使收信人便于在读信之前就可了解信中的主要内容。事由一般在公务信函中使用，也可以省略。

Flat 3, Building 3

41 Zhongyuan Road

Zhengzhou Textile Institute

Zhengzhou, 450007

China

February 25, 2005 Dear Zhang Li,

I\'m sending you this short letter of thanks with a small present, which I hope you will like.Thank you very much for helping my father last Sunday, when he broke his legs on the stairs.

My father told me that he had fallen and hurt his leg badly.He could not get up or walk.Then you came to help him.You called a taxi for my father, and took him to the nearest hospital.When the doctor told you my father s leg was broken, you phoned me and told me what had happened.My father is already much better now.He will have to stay in hospital for another week, and then he can come home.

Once again, my parents and I want to expre our gratitude for all you have done for our family.You are such a warm-hearted student.

Best wishes.

Yours truly,

MaHui 参考资料：http://www.daodoc.com/showart.asp?art_id=128

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2006-05-21 19:59RafflesRules|五级

Here\'s the format I\'ve been using writing formal letters to various organisations:

Mr ....

Aociate Profeor ( desination, e.g.Manager)

Physical Education and Sports Science

(department) National Institute of Education

14 May 2006

Dear Mr Chia

Re: (subject)

BODY OF LETTER

Yours sincerely

Zhang Yan (printed) (Signature) ( Your position) (Name of organisation)

This should be sufficient for a formal letter, yup! 评论(1)|8

2008-04-17 14:15xiaozhu_2222|五级 英语书信格式

英文书信通常由下列五个部分组成：

A信头（Heading）

信头包括写信人地址和写信日期，通常写在信笺的右上角。在比较熟识的朋友之间的通信，写信人的地址常可略去。本课的信头就只写了写信日期，而没有写信人的地址。日期通常有下列两种定法：

（a）月、日、年：如August15,200__

（b）日、月、年：如15thaugust,200__

地址的写法通常是由小到大，如：门牌号、街道名、市（县）名、省名、国名（邮政编码通常写在城市名之后）。这同中文书信的地址写法完全相反。地址可以写1～3行，日期写在地址的下方（见信笺格式）。

B称呼（Salutation）

称呼指写信人对收信人的称呼，如DearXiaojun，写在信头的下方和信笺的左边。称呼一般用Dear…或Mydear…开头，称呼后一般用逗号。

C正文（Body）

这是书信的主体部分，即写信人要表达的内容。正文要求文字通顺，层次分明，表意清楚。可以手书，也可以打写。

D结束语（ComplimentaryClose）

它是书信结尾的恭维话，相当于文中书信最后的“祝好”、“致礼”之类的话语。本课书信中的“Bestwishes”（致以最好的祝愿）就是结束语。

E签名（Signature）

签名通常签在结束语下方的中间偏右的位置，如本课信中的Charlie。签名应是亲笔书写，即使是打写机打出的信件，最后仍需亲笔签名。在签名的上方可根据写信人和收信人的关系写上Sincerelyyours/Yourincerely（用于长辈或朋友之间），或Respectfullyyours/Yoursrespectfully（用于对长辈或上级）。

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2010-08-19 15:43H鸡毛菜H|三级

dear xxx

正文

yours\' xxx 评论|5

2011-10-13 21:12Julie_1|四级

Dear xx，

xxxxxx..........

Yours

xxx 评论|18

2011-10-14 22:36zhangfengmei29|三级

范例： Dear Mr.Lee,

Thank you for your kind invitation to the dinner you and Mrs.Lee are giving next Saturday for your brother.I shall be very happy indeed to come, and look forward with pleasure to meeting your brother.

Yours sincerely,

Jane 评论(1)|34

2011-10-25 19:51陶陶2001628|一级

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2013-06-26 18:18mfghmgn|三级

首先要看你写信的性质。是官方而正式的书信？还是朋友间的通信？

无论是哪一种，基本的英文书信格式应包括四大部分：日期，称呼，正文，和落款（包括敬语）

1、朋友间的

October,16,2011（右起顶格） Dear Jimmy（左起顶格）

I\'m glad to receive your letter...（正文，开头空四格）

Yours Sincerely,

Jack（右下，包括敬语和落款）

2、官方、正式的书信

信内应包含收信人地址（西方古时防止信封损坏地址无着而沿用至今的传统）、日期、称呼、正文、落款等。其实官方的书信更多应该参考第3点，越全面越表示你对他们的重视。

001th,Happy Road, 9th District 250013, New York, U.S.A（地址同样顶格写，从小写到大）

（以下同1）

October,16,2011（右起顶格） Dear Jimmy（左起顶格）

I\'m glad to receive your letter...（正文，开头空四格）

Yours Sincerely,

Jack（右下，包括敬语和落款）

3、更为严格的商务英语电函，包括有十几种元素。难度很大，但是是英文商务信函的必备

（信头是寄信人地址、公司信息，收信人地址，经由转交，参考号，日期，称呼，主题，正文，敬语，落款，签名，附注，附件等等）

第14篇：道歉信英语作文带翻译

dear_____, i am writing this letter to expre my apology that ______________. i feel terribly sorry about this. once again, i am very sorry for any inconvenience caused.i will be really appreciated if you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. yours sincerely _________ 亲爱的_____，（对方姓名）

我写这封信以表达我的道歉 ______________（道歉原因）。

对此我深感抱歉。

我再次对给您造成的任何不便深感歉意，希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。

谨启

_________（自己姓名）篇2：英文致歉信_范文 道歉信 letter of apology 我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，写封致歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信通常包括以下内容：表示歉意；道歉的原由；出现差错的原因；提出弥补措施；请求原谅。写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。

写作三步走：

表示歉意->说明具体原因、提出补救办法->再次致歉、希望得到理解 tips: 在写作过程中，尽可能提供比较合理的理由。如果违反生活常识将导致扣分。

在解释完原因后，尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加完满。

订阅收藏《考研英语写作范文100篇》系列文章

（1）directions: you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use li ming instead. do not write the addre. 范文： dear anne, please allow me to say sorry again. regards, li ming 译文：

亲爱的安：

感谢你邀请我于明日晚上与你和你的家人共进午餐。可是，我非常遗憾地告诉你我无法赴约，因为我将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试。错过了这么一个欢乐的聚会我深感遗憾，我希望你们能度过一个愉快的时光。对了，在我考试后我们可以见一面么？如果可以的话请随

时给我打电话，我非常期待能和你愉快地聊天。

请允许我再一次致歉。

您真诚的，

李明

闪光词汇及词组： occupy: v.占用，占 get-together: n.聚会，联欢会 hesitate: v.犹豫，踌躇

drop sb.a line: 给某人打一个电话 preferable: adj.更好的，更可取的 long for sth: 渴望

万能句型： thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.unfortunately, it is much to my regret that i cannot... i feel terribly sorry for miing the chance of... is it poible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards? if so, please dont hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date. please allow me to say sorry again. （2）directions: you failed to finish an important task aigned by your profeor because of a severe illne.write a letter to your profeor tp expre your apology, explain your reason, and suggest a solution to make up the lo. you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use li ming instead. do not write the addre. 范文：

dear prof.patent, i would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better. hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. yours faithfully, li ming 译文：

尊敬的patent教授：

我非常遗憾地告知您我没有完成您上周布置的读书报告，因为几天前我突然生病了。过去的几天中我一直持续高烧，住在医院，因此无法进行任何学术活动。随信是医生的诊断书。 如果您能再给一周时间来完成它我将感激不尽，因为现在我的身体正在好转。 希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。

您真诚的，

李明

闪光词汇及词组：

aign: v.分配，指派

fall upon sb: 降临到某人身上 continuous: adj.持续的

prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事 hereby: adv.因此，据此 submit: v.提交，递交 obliged: adj.感激的

grant: v.同意，准予

万能句型： i would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task. hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. apologize letter __ busine english_ by lqy dear sir or madam, i’m writing this letter to apologize to you.i’m so sorry that we made a mistake about the shipment of vacuum cleaners. those vacuum cleaners we sent to you were meant to be sent to european countries, but as the old worker was retired, the new one wasn’t so experienced.besides, the model number and the price of goods in march and july are so similar that the worker mistaken them. i am awfully sorry for this and we promise you a replacement shipment.we will also give a 10% i do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you and i will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again. 道歉信是人们经常使用的一种书信文体，用以表达自己的歉意，查字典范文大全特意为大家整理了关于道歉信范文的相关材料，希望对您的工作和生活有帮助。 letter of apology ⅰ.sample study sample i dear susan, please let me know if you will be available on saturday morning. best wishes chen cheng sample ii dear mary, i’m very sorry for not having replied to your july 6th letter sooner.when your letter arrived, i was in beijing.as my secretary couldn’t forward it to me, it has been lying on my desk until i got back. look forward to catching up and once again apologize for the delay. sincerely, tom 英语道歉信范文及常用句式

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；

2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；

3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。

写作三步曲：

表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。

注意：

理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分；尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。 范文解析： directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international busine english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to expre the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize. write the letter with no le than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the addre. dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i mied the examination on international busine english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day. i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill. sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：

1、i am writing to apologize for „ /i am writing to say sorry for 我写这封信是因„„向你致歉。

2、i would like to give you my apology for„

对于„„我向你道歉。

3、please accept my sincere apology for„

关于„„请接受我真诚的道歉。

4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had no intention to„

对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要„„

5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 请原谅我说话欠妥。

6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。

7、please accept my apologies for my oversight. 请原谅我的疏忽。

8、please allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再次表示歉意。

9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.篇3：英语作文道歉信常用句式和套话

道歉信常用句式和套话

道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing this letter to expre my regret„ i am writing to apologize for„ i would like to give you my apology for„ i must apologize about (not) doing sth„ please accept my sincere apology for„ i am writing to say sorry for„

道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused. please allow me to say sorry again. i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.篇4：英文道歉信格式及范文

英文道歉信格式及范文

因迟复来信致歉because of answering one’s letter late dear david: i am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated 7, december sooner, but when i have told you the reason, i trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.when your letter arrived, i was just in hong kong.as my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when i took it up.now the first thing i have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to expre my deep regret. i enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.i shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when i see you next. sincerely yours, tom篇5：英语道歉信范文

范文1 directions: suppose that sarah, a friend of yours, has invited you to her birthday party, but you cannot go for some reason.write a letter in about 100 words to make an apology to her.do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “li ming” instead. 【经典范文】 dear sarah, i am terribly sorry to tell you that i am unable to attend your birthday part next thursday evening.that is owing to the fact that my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.i have to go there immediately and take care of him.as told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and i have asked my bo for a leave. i really regret that i cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would mi the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.i have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party. cordially, li ming 范文2 directions: suppose you cannot see your younger brother off at the airport as expected for some reason.write a letter in about 100 words to make an apology to him.do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “li ming” instead. 【经典范文】 dear charlie, kindly excuse me for my not being able to see you off at the airport this saturday as i have promised. how i wish i could have the chance to share with you my personal feelings and suggestions before you are away! i hereby send you a gift to wish you good luck.please forgive me. cordially, li ming 范文3 directions: you were unable to attend mr.smith’s examination on international busine english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to expre the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no le than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use “wang hua”

instead.do not write the addre. 【经典范文】 dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i mied the examination on international busine english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day. i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill. once again, i apologize for any inconvenience caused. sincerely yours, wang hua 范文4 directions: one of your pen friends, john, will be visiting your city.however, for some reasons, you can not meet him at the airport on time.write a letter asking to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to recognize you.your letter should be no le than 100 words.you don’t need to write the addre.don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use alice instead. dear john, i am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city.after all these years of writing to each other, i can not wait to see you.however, i regret to inform you that i will not be able to meet you at the airport on time. the reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the earliest i can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land.will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge? you can have breakfast while you wait. by the way, as we have never met i must tell you home to identify me: i am of 165cm tall and have a long hair.in addition, i will wear a white skirt and carry a china daily at hand. hope we can meet soon. sincerely yours, alice 译文

亲爱的约翰：

我非常期待着你来参观我们的城市。这么多年来我们一直通信，我早就想见到你了。但是很抱歉我不能按时到机场接你。

因为你的飞机是一大早就到达机场，而我最早也要1小时后才能到。你能不能在旅客休息室等我，你可以利用这段时间吃早饭。

随便说一句，因为我们没过面，我得告诉你怎么找我：我大概1.65米，长发。另外我会穿一件白色的裙子，手上拿一份中国日报。

希望早点见到你。

你真挚的：艾丽丝

范文5 you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the addre. dear anne, thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.unfortunately, it is much to my regret that i cannot join you and your family, because please allow me to say sorry again. regards, li ming 译文：

亲爱的安：

请允许我再一次致歉。 您真诚的，

李明

范文6 directions: you failed to finish an important task aigned by your profeor because of a severe illne.write a letter to your profeor tp expre your apology, explain your reason, and suggest a solution to make up the lo. you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the addre. dear prof.patent, i would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better. hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. yours faithfully, li ming 译文：

尊敬的patent教授：

我非常遗憾地告知您我没有完成您上周布置的读书报告，因为几天前我突然生病了。过去的几天中我一直持续高烧，住在医院，因此无法进行任何学术活动。随信是医生的诊断书。

如果您能再给一周时间来完成它我将感激不尽，因为现在我的身体正在好转。 希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。

您真诚的，

李明

范文7 美国政府关于撞机事件的致歉信（英文）

中新网北京4月11日消息：以下是美国驻华大使普理赫，今日下午就撞机事件递交给中国外长唐家璇的信件英文全文。

第15篇：高考英语作文带翻译

高考英语作文：Our English Teacher（我的英语老师）

We have a good English teacher whose name is Bruce.He comes from Britain and he is about forty years old.He is a tall and thin person, wearing a pair of glaes which makes him more like a gentleman.

He is strict with us.He often makes full preparations for his cla and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is very unique, because he is used to encouraging all of us to think by ourselves and study on our own.The relationship between Bruce and us is harmonious.He is so kind and friendly that every student likes him and respects him deeply.

Our teacher is so excellent that we all love him very much.

我们有一个很好的英语老师，他的名字叫Bmce。他来自英国，大约40岁。他是一个又高又瘦的人，戴着一副眼镜，这使他显得更有绅士风度。

他总是严格要求我们。他经常认真备课，认真为我们批改作业。他的教学风格很是与众不同，这是由于他总是习惯鼓励学生努力思考，并且培养我们的自学能力。我们之间的关系很融洽。他对人和蔼可亲，所以深受我们的爱戴和尊敬。

我们的老师很出色，我们都很喜欢他。

Our English teacher, Bruce, is from Britain.He is forty years old or so.He is a tall and thin man, wearing a pair of glaes.

Bruce is very strict with us.He always makes full preparations for his claes and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers.He always encourages all of us to think by ourselves and learn on our own.Now our ability to study independently has been greatly improved.

Bruce has been getting along very well with all of us.He is so kind and friendly to us that we all love him and respect him deeply.

我们的英语老师Bmce是位英国人。40岁左右，又高又瘦，戴着一副眼镜。

Bmce总是严格要求我们。他总是认真备课，认真批改作业。他的教学方法与众不同，他总是鼓励我们独立思考、自学。现在我们的自学能力都得到很大的提高。

Bmce和我们相处得非常融洽。他对我们和蔼可亲，我们都很尊敬他，爱戴他。

高考英语作文：Chinas Pride（中国的骄傲）

\"...5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go! \"On October 15, 2003, China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest China\'s Gansu Province.

Spraying a ma of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and China\'s first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.

As the world\'s largest developing country, China is more than proud of making its own contribution to human beings\' outer space exploration.Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the country\'s economic and social development.The succeful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.

“5，4，3，2，1。点火!发射!”2003年10月15日，中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船，进入了轨道。

喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，

巨大白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。

作为世界上最大的发展中国家，中国为其对人类的空间探索作出自己的贡献感到非常骄傲。同时，这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。

We will never forget the day when China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit on October 15, 2003 from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest China\'s Gansu Province.

Spraying a ma of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and China\'s first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.

Our dream becomes reality.Though the Shenzhou-V circled the Earth 14 times within 22 hours and 18 minutes, it has clearly displayed China\'s spirts of devotion, co-operation and pursuit of the unknown.Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the country\'s economic and social development.The succeful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.

我们永远也不会忘记2003年10月15日。中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船，进入了轨道。

喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。

尽管神州5号在22小时18分钟内仅仅绕地球转14圈，但它清楚的体现了中国的奉献、合作和探索未知的精神。同时这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。

高考英语作文：The Bright Light（明亮的灯光）

Every night I pa by my neighbor\'s window, I can see the bright light through it.The light looks especially bright coming from the deep dark night.

One night at about eleven o\'clock, it happened that I had something urgent to tell my neighbor.So I went to their house.When I entered the room, I saw a thin girl absorbed in studying.I was informed that she was very industrious but failed in the CollegeEntrance Examination last year.Even so, she never gave up and was encouraged to go on studying hard and try again.Every day she would study hard in the light until late into the night.Therefore, the bright light was not only a companion to her but also a proof of her diligence.

A few days later, I met her again.She told me that even if she couldn\'t pa the College Entrance Examination, she would never give up studying.When she said this, I saw the bright light and began to understand the saying \"Where there is a will, there is a way.\"

每晚路过邻家，我都能望见那透过窗户的明亮灯光。在漆黑的深夜里，灯光越发显得明亮。

一天晚上大约11点钟，我有急事找邻居，因此我去了他家。当我进入邻居家时，看见一个瘦小的女孩正在专心致志地学习。后来得知她虽然很勤奋，但是去年高考不幸落榜。但她毫不放弃，继续努力学习，准备再考。每天她都在灯下学到深夜。这明亮的灯光成了她的伴侣，也成了她刻苦努力的见证人。

几天后，我又一次与她相遇了。她告诉我即便考不上大学，她也不放弃学习。她的话发人深思，让我看到了光明，真正明白了“有志者，事竟成”这句谚语的含义。

I usually come home late at midnight.Every night I pa by my neighbor\'s window, I can see the bright light through it.

One Tuesday night I came home late as usual.When I unlocked the door, I found a note saying, \"One of your friends has left you something important in my house.Your neighbor.\" Since the light was on, I went to knock at the door.Entering the house, I found a young lady of eighteen or so absorbed in her study.(Motivational model yuedu.mipang.com) I learnt from her mother that she failed in the College Entrance Examination last year.Even so, she never gave up and was encouraged to go on studying hard and try again.The bright light was not only a companion to her but also a proof of her diligence.

A few days later, I met her again.We had a talk for a while and she told me that even if she couldn\'t succeed , she wouldn\'t give up studying.When she said this, I saw that bright light and began to understand the saying \"Where there is a will, there is a way.\"

我通常午夜时分才回家。每晚从邻居家经过，都会看见那透过窗户的明亮灯光。

一个星期二的晚上，我像平时一样回来很晚。开门时看见一张纸条上写着：“你的一位朋友将一些重要的东西放在我家了。你的邻居。”看见灯还亮着，我就去敲门。进到房里，我看见一位十八岁左右的姑娘正在专心致志地学习。从她母亲那儿，我得知她去年高考落榜了。但她并不放弃，仍旧努力学习，准备再试一次。这明亮的灯光不仅是她的伴侣，而且是她勤奋的证明。

高考英语作文：Christmas in America（在美国过圣诞节）

Christmas is the most important festival in the western world.It falls on December 25th.When my mother and I stayed in America, we were invited by one of my mother\'s friends to have Christmas with an American family.We bought some presents for our American friends on our way to their house.

They had prepared different kinds of gifts for their family and guests when we got to their house, such as Christmas candles, cakes, cards, little toys, biscuits and so on.A Christmas tree was placed in the comer of the brilliant hall.How beautiful it was! We were impreed by these.We had a big meal. After dinner, they told us some interesting stories about Christmas.We learned that Christmas had something to do with God.We went to bed at midnight.Though we knew the Santa Claus was not true, we were still waiting for the Santa Claus with white beard to bring us presents.And we received many beautiful presents the next morning.

This Christmas was really unforgettable.Not only did I have a good time, but also I knew something about foreign culture.

12月25日的圣诞节是西方国家最重要的节日。我和妈妈在美国的时候，曾应妈妈的一位朋友邀请，去一个美国家庭过圣诞节。在去他家的途中，我们为美国朋友买了一些礼物。

我们到时，他们已为家人及客人们准备了各种各样的礼物，有圣诞蜡烛、蛋糕、卡片、小玩具和饼干等。圣诞树放在灯火通明的客厅的一角，实在是太荚了。这一切给我们留下了深刻的印象。我们吃了一顿大餐。饭后，他们给我们讲了一些圣诞节的故事，我们知道了圣诞节与上帝有关。我们午夜时分才上床睡觉。尽管我们知道圣诞老人不是真的，但还是等待着白胡子的圣诞老人为我们送来礼物。第二天早晨我们收到了许多漂亮的礼物。

这个圣诞节实在太令人难以忘怀了。我不仅过得很愉快，还了解了外国文化。

Christmas is the most important festival in the western world.It is on December 25th.Usually two weeks before, people begin to prepare lots of Christmas presents.People who are far away on busine hurry to return their home for Christmas.

Last Christmas, my mother and I were invited by one of my mother\' s friends to have Christmas with an American family.Entering the brilliant hall, we saw a beautiful Christmas tree decorated with colorful lights.In the middle of the hall stood a big table.On it were something delicious.How beautiful it was! We were impreed by these.We had a big meal.After dinner, the hosts told us many stories about Christmas.Every year more than 140 countries in the world have Christmas to celebrate the day Jesus was born.On that day children were the happiest of all because they could get presents from the Santa Claus with white beard.We enjoyed ourselves very much.

This Christmas was really unforgettable.Not only did I have a good time, but also I knew something about foreign culture.

12月25日的圣诞节是西方国家最重要的节日。通常两个星期前人们就开始准备圣诞礼物了。离家在外的人们急着赶回家，去和家人团圆。

第16篇：道歉信英语作文带翻译

篇1：道歉信英文模板及翻译 dear_____, i am writing this letter to expre my apology that ______________.i feel terribly sorry about this.once again, i am very sorry for any inconvenience caused.i will be really appreciated if you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely _________ 亲爱的_____，（对方姓名）

我写这封信以表达我的道歉 ______________（道歉原因）。

对此我深感抱歉。

我再次对给您造成的任何不便深感歉意，希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。 谨启

_________（自己姓名）篇2：英语作文道歉信常用句式和套话 道歉信常用句式和套话

道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话

i am writing this letter to expre my regret… i am writing to apologize for…

i would like to give you my apology for… i must apologize about (not) doing sth… please accept my sincere apology for… i am writing to say sorry for… 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话

once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.please allow me to say sorry again.i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.篇3：英文致歉信_范文 道歉信 letter of apology 我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，写封致歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信通常包括以下内容：表示歉意；道歉的原由；出现差错的原因；提出弥补措施；请求原谅。写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。

写作三步走：

表示歉意->说明具体原因、提出补救办法->再次致歉、希望得到理解 tips: 在写作过程中，尽可能提供比较合理的理由。如果违反生活常识将导致扣分。 在解释完原因后，尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加完满。 订阅收藏《考研英语写作范文100篇》系列文章

（1）directions: you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use li ming instead.do not write the addre. 范文： dear anne, please allow me to say sorry again.regards, li ming 译文： 亲爱的安：

感谢你邀请我于明日晚上与你和你的家人共进午餐。可是，我非常遗憾地告诉你我无法赴约，因为我将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试。错过了这么一个欢乐的聚会我深感遗憾，我希望你们能度过一个愉快的时光。对了，在我考试后我们可以见一面么？如果可以的话请随时给我打电话，我非常期待能和你愉快地聊天。 请允许我再一次致歉。 您真诚的， 李明

闪光词汇及词组： occupy: v.占用，占

get-together: n.聚会，联欢会 hesitate: v.犹豫，踌躇

drop sb.a line: 给某人打一个电话 preferable: adj.更好的，更可取的 long for sth: 渴望

万能句型： thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.unfortunately, it is much to my regret that i cannot...i feel terribly sorry for miing the chance of...is it poible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards? if so, please dont hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date.please allow me to say sorry again. （2）directions: you failed to finish an important task aigned by your profeor because of a severe illne.write a letter to your profeor tp expre your apology, explain your reason, and suggest a solution to make up the lo.you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use li ming instead.do not write the addre. 范文：

dear prof.patent, i would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.yours faithfully,li ming 译文：

尊敬的patent教授：

我非常遗憾地告知您我没有完成您上周布置的读书报告，因为几天前我突然生病了。过去的几天中我一直持续高烧，住在医院，因此无法进行任何学术活动。随信是医生的诊断书。 如果您能再给一周时间来完成它我将感激不尽，因为现在我的身体正在好转。 希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。 您真诚的， 李明

闪光词汇及词组： aign: v.分配，指派

fall upon sb: 降临到某人身上 continuous: adj.持续的

prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事 hereby: adv.因此，据此 submit: v.提交，递交 obliged: adj.感激的 grant: v.同意，准予

万能句型：

i would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task.hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. apologize letter __ busine english_ by lqy dear sir or madam, i’m writing this letter to apologize to you.i’m so sorry that we made a mistake about the shipment of vacuum cleaners. those vacuum cleaners we sent to you were meant to be sent to european countries, but as the old worker was retired, the new one wasn’t so experienced.besides, the model number and the price of goods in march and july are so similar that the worker mistaken them. i do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you and i will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again. 道歉信是人们经常使用的一种书信文体，用以表达自己的歉意，查字典范文大全特意为大家整理了关于道歉信范文的相关材料，希望对您的工作和生活有帮助。 letter of apology ⅰ.sample study sample i dear susan, please let me know if you will be available on saturday morning.best wishes chen cheng sample ii dear mary, i’m very sorry for not having replied to your july 6th letter sooner.when your letter arrived, i was in beijing.as my secretary couldn’t forward it to me, it has been lying on my desk until i got back.look forward to catching up and once again apologize for the delay.sincerely, tom 英语道歉信范文及常用句式

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；

2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；

3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。写作三步曲：

表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。 注意：

理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分；尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。范文解析：

directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international busine english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to expre the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no le than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the addre.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i mied the examination on international busine english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：

1、i am writing to apologize for … /i am writing to say sorry for 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2、i would like to give you my apology for… 对于……我向你道歉。

3、please accept my sincere apology for… 关于……请接受我真诚的道歉。

4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had no intention to…

对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要……

5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.请原谅我说话欠妥。

6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。

7、please accept my apologies for my oversight.请原谅我的疏忽。

8、please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再次表示歉意。

9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.

第17篇：英语作文带翻译mydreamjob

刀豆文秘助手(www.daodoc.com)之英语作文带翻译-my

dream job

my dream job will be working in one of the biggest international accounting firm as an accountant.i want to be an accountant because i love mathematics and busine so much.also, being an accountant can help me to explore my knowledge of busine and provide me a board range of network among the busine world.i need to do a lot in order to achieve my goal.first, i have to get an undergraduate degree in accounting from college.then i might either to go graduate school for a more advanced degree in accounting or get prepare for the cpa exam.with the cpa lisence, i have a better opportunity to get a job in the accounting firm.finally, with my experience in the accounting firm, i can apply accounting position in the international accounting firm and to serve as an accountant there!

我梦想的工作将在一个最大的国际会计公司担任会计。我想做一个会计，因为我喜欢数学和商业这么多。同时，作为一个会计师可以帮助我探索我的商业知识，为我提供一个在商业世界中的一系列网络。为了实现我的目标，我需要做很多。首先，我得从大学获得本科学位。然后我可以去研究生院获得更高级的会计或准备注册会计师考试。随着注册会计师执照，我有一个更好的机会在会计公司得到一份工作。最后，我在会计公司的经验，我可以申请在国际会计公司的会计职位，并作为一名会计有！

第18篇：英语四级作文带翻译

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是…。

It has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

它已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people\'s eyes.

所谓，一千个读者心中有一千个哈姆雷特

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Personally, I believe that_____.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

第19篇：中秋节英语作文带翻译

中秋节英语作文带翻译

The Mid-Autumn Day

August 15th in Chinese Lunar Calendar is the Mid-Autumn Day.It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.

On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion.Each family will have the members get together to have a big dinner.The most popular food is moon cakes.They are round and look like the moon.

The moon is the brightest this night.People eat the delicious food while they are enjoying a beautiful full moon in their yard.At this time, some old people would like to tell many past events and tell the children a story about the rabbit on the moon .The children really believe that there is a rabbit on the moon.They hope to go to the moon and have a look one day.

What a great festival!

中秋节

农历八月十五日是中秋节，在中国它是最重要的传统节日之一。

在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，一家人聚在一起饱餐一顿。最流行的食品是月饼，它们圆圆的就像月亮。

中秋节晚上的月亮特别地圆。人们都在自家的院子里一边赏月一边吃着可口的月饼。这个时候 ，一些老人会讲述许多古老的故事，如月亮上的玉兔，孩子们信以为真，他们真想有一天登上月球看个究竟。

中秋是个美好的节日啊!

第20篇：英语作文背诵(带翻译)

一、Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town.Most of people were farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years .The people have found a lot of ways of making money .Now there are many tall buildings .They are very beautiful .Roads are wide and clean .People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work .Many people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot .Thanks to the government’s efforts .my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

一,在我的家乡发生了很大的变化

二十多年来,我的家乡只是个小,又老又穷镇。大多数人都是农民。有几个工厂。人们没有足够的食物吃,把旧衣服穿在身上。他们有一个艰苦的生活。

发生了巨大的变化,在过去的20年。人们已经发现很多的赚钱途径。现在有许多高大的建筑物。他们很漂亮。道路宽阔,又干净。人们可以搭公车或驾驶自己的汽车去上班。许多人有手机和个人电脑。人民的生活条件有了很大的进步。由于政府的努力。我的家乡正变得越来越美丽了。

二、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .It’s our duty to protect our environment .No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy .We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places .We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the gra in public.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .

二、拯救地球

如何保护环境已成为世界上最大的问题。

这是我们的责任保护我们的环境。不管我们居住的地方,我们应该做些事情来保持我们的邻居整洁。我们可以收集废纸或其他废弃物回收利用。我们应该种更多的树,我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。我们不应该把垃圾随处可见,在公共场所随地吐痰。我们不能摘花、践踏草地在公众场合。如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活一定会越来越好。

三、Improve our environment

Good environment can make people feel happy.To improve the environment means to qualify our life .What should we do to improve our environment ? We should plant more trees .And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields .Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin .Don’t spit in public places .Don’t draw on public walls .It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .

三、改善我们的环境

好的环境能让人感到快乐。改善环境意味着资格我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境? 我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。当我们看到垃圾在地上,我们应该把它捡起来,扔进一个垃圾箱。不要在公共场所随地吐痰。别把公共墙壁。这是我们的责任,让我们的地球整洁。

四、Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better.But our environment is becoming worse and worse.It’s very bad for our life.Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas.More and more trees are being cut down.There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) .We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes.Water in the river is quite dirty.We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities.Now we are in danger.It’s very neceary and important to protect the environment well.I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .

四、我们周围的污染

近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是我们的环境变得越来越糟糕。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在许多人有空调、汽车、生产(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在这块土地上只留下沙砾)。我们经常看到工厂将废物倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水是很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水喝的城市。现在我们正处于危险中。这是非常必要的和重要的保护好环境。我认为,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。

五、Make our world more beautiful !

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans .It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us .Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them .We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home .We must plant more trees and gra , they can make the world greener .The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have .Let’s do

our best to make the world beautiful.

五,使我们的世界更美丽! 环境保护是越来越重要的人类。这是我们的责任照顾我们周围的天性。动物和植物都是我们最好的朋友。,我们应该与他们共同分享这个世界。我们不应该杀野生动物,我们必须保护森林,因为他们是动物的家。我们必须种植更多的树木和草,他们就可以让世界环保。更美丽的世界,我们将会有快乐的生活。让我们尽我们所能使世界美丽。

六、Keep our school clean

We are studying in this school.It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the cla.We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there.Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school .We should keep the claroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .

六,保持校园清洁

我们在这所学校学习。这是我们的责任保持房间整洁。这并不是一个好吐唾沫在公共场所,如在图书馆,在课堂上。我们不应该把垃圾扔在这里和那里。不要在墙上乱画,他们影响看我们的学校。我们应该保持教室干净整洁。我们应该经常做些清洁。如果每个人都尽自己最大努力做些有用的事情对我们学校来说,我相信我们的学校也会变得更加美好。

七、My country life

I like to live in the countryside.I live in a small village.There is a river near it.Lots of trees are around my house.I can see a lot of farms and birds.There is le noise.The air here is cleaner and fresher.There are fewer cars.I read aloud early in the morning.When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky.It’s very quiet .What a nice place I live in !

七、我的乡村生活

我喜欢住在乡下。我住在一个小村庄。附近有一条河。许多树在房子的周围。我能看到很多农场和鸟类。有低噪音。这里的空气清洁和清新。有私家车的减少。我念在清晨。当它变得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安静。一个好地方我住在!

十一、The importance of English

English is the most widely spoken in the world.It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand.It\'s also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world.It\'s widely used for busine between different countries.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too.It is really a bridge to so much knowledge .English is used by travellers and busine

people around the world.It\'s one of the world\'s most important languages as it is so widely used.That\'s why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.English is so useful that we must learn it well .Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our cla .

十一,英语的重要性

英语是世界上使用最广泛的。这是说,对于大多数人来说,在美国、英国、加拿大、澳大利亚、新西兰等国家。它也是非常广泛地用作外语在世界上许多其他国家。这是广泛应用于不同国家之间的贸易。超过四分之三的因特网上的信息是用英文写的,太。它是真的是通向如此丰富知识的桥梁。使用英语的旅游者和商人环游世界。它是世界上最重要的语言,因为它是如此的广泛应用。这就是为什么中国有越来越多的人对学英语有兴趣。

英语真是有用,我们必须把它学好。现在让我们努力学习,学好它,看看谁更快、更好的在我们班。

十四、I like the Internet

The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.It’s very useful.I often search the Internet for some information.I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it.I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet.The most important thing is that I am able to study all my leons on the Internet.

The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life.I like the internet very much.How about you / Will you have a try ?

十四、我喜欢上网

互联网是扮演着重要的角色在我们的日常生活中。它是非常有用的。我经常因特网上搜索一些信息。我可以读到最新的消息,买些东西,并获得各种信息从它。我还可以下载的信息,我需要,我可以发电子邮件,打电话到朋友在网上聊天。最重要的是,我能学习我所有的功课在互联网上。

互联网使我的生活更有趣和丰富多彩,有一个很宽的影响我的学习和生活。我非常喜欢上网。你怎么样/你来试试好

十五、The Internet

The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as poible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .

十五,互联网

互联网正成为越来越多的了解这一点对我们至关重要。没有它,我们不能做的更好的工作。我们可以去购物,就不能从我们的房子。我们能听音乐或看电影在互联网上。它也能帮助很多学习。我们可以学到很多知识对不同的学科而言,尽快获取信息。但是现在,我们中的一些人工作、学习或玩在互联网上很长时间了,尤其是对年轻人玩电脑游戏。这是对我们的眼睛有害健康。如果我们好好利用互联网,它将是我们最好的朋友,帮助我们很多。

十六、Computer

Computer is a wonderful machine.It\'s a great invention in many years.It develops very quickly.The smallest computer is as big as a note-book.We call it pocket computer.Computer becomes more and more important in many ways.It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages.It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it.It can give us a lot fun.

十六、电脑

计算机是一种奇妙的机器。这是一个伟大的发明在许多年。它非常迅速发展。最小的计算机是那样大的笔记本。我们叫它口袋里的计算机。电脑已经成为越来越重要的在很多方面。它没有触及生命每一个人,即使一个人在遥远的村庄。它帮助我们与各种各样的信息,我们从它获得知识。它能给我们许多乐趣。

十七、The importance of water

Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important.We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this.They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes .Some factories even pour waste water into the river.As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .

Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .

十七、水的重要性

所有的事情我们吃的和喝的,水是最重要的。我们生活中可以没有食物了很多天,但两、三天没有水,通常会使人死。

然而,并不是所有的人理解这个。他们继续投呀投的垃圾倒入河流或湖泊。一些工厂甚至倒废水入河中。结果,许多河流和湖泊已经变得如此肮脏的水是不再安全了人们喝酒。 让我们尽力保持水的清洁来拯救自己。

十八、Water

Water is very important for our life.Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash.Water is neceary for all plants.They need water to grow.People can’t live without water.Plants will die without water.It is important to all living things.However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean.At the same time we should save as much water as poible.

十八、水

水是非常重要的我们的生活。每一天我们都使用水喝,太做饭,洗。所有的植物都需要水。他们需要水来成长。人们没有水是无法生存的。没有水植物会死。它是很重要的,所有活的东西。然而,许多人的排泄物污染的湖泊和河流的水,所以我们必须阻止某些人或某些工厂浪费水或污染水,同时,有助于保持水的清洁。同时,我们应该节约大量水的情况。

十九、I like sports

I feel that taking exercise is good for our health.I often felt tired when I was studying before.From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning.After cla I often go to play basketball with my friends.Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my leons.So please take exercise as often as poible .

十九,我喜欢体育

我觉得体育锻炼对我们的健康有好处。我经常感到累了,当我在学习之前。从这个学期我继续运行时,我早晨起来。课后我常去和我的朋友打篮球。现在我感觉比以前好了许多,我从不感到疲倦当我学习和进步很多功课。所以请尽可能经常锻炼。

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