大学英语四级考试作文预测（2011.11）
恩波教育英语研究所
预测作文
（一）
Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students
1． 不少大学生的生活方式消极，不上课，不运动，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，导
致知识水平下降的同时身体素质也在下降。
2． 你对此有什么看法和建议？
【范文】
In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities.This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.
Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition preures, and so on.To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed.As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard.Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.
【点评】
文章开门见上，指出大学生的不良生活方式，简单提及其危害。之后第二段分析了导致生活方式消极的原因：生物钟颠倒，沉迷于网络游戏，饮食习惯不规律以及各种竞争的压力。同时分别给大学，父母和大学生给出建议。
文章第一段中would like„ rather than意为“宁愿„„而不愿„„”； to some extend意为“在某种程度上”；reversed biological clock意为“颠倒的生物钟”；health comes first意为“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意为“认真遵守”；form意为“培养”。
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（二）
Character Education
1． 学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外，还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养；
2． 品德培养的重要性。
【范文】
Normally school education aims to cultivate students\' abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life.As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.
Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What\'s more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.
【点评】
本题谈论的是学校教育，说明了只注重培养学生的学习，思考能力，很难建成和谐舒适的社 1
会，由此引出需要加强道德教育。第二段从几个方面说明品德教育的重要性：满足学生全面发展的需要；防止学生变得自私，自利，自负，没有礼貌等等；教导学生对自己和祖国的将来负责。
第一段第一句中hardly意为“几乎不”；leading a harmonious life意为“引领和谐生活”； attach more attention to 意为“更加重视”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意为“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously作为副词，修饰前面的动词，分别指代有效地学习，多姿多彩地生活，认真负责地做事。
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（三）
Does Knowledge Change Fate?
1． “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在，可如今现实却是，不仅知识难以
改变命运，穷孩子能接触到知识的机会也在减少。
2． 你对此有什么看法，且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象？
【范文】
Large number of children from poor families once held the belief \"Knowledge can change fate\" and thought that hardworking could reward them-- As one sows, so will one reap.But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can\'t change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.
This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society.First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening.Second, it may let many real potential genius go away.Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.
Therefore it needs to take urgent measures.On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students.As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to aist poor students.
【点评】
文章由习语“知识改变命运”引出话题，指出当今社会现实---知识无法改变命运。文章第二段分析了该现象的危害：加剧穷富差距和不公平；导致“潜在的”人才流失；不利于建立和谐社会。最后一段分别给政府，学校提出建议，采取措施改变这种状况。
第一段中reward 意为“回报”；As one sows, so will one reap.为习语，意为“ 一分耕耘,一分收获。” 文章第二段中列举该现象的危害，分别用 First,„Second,„Third表示“首先„„其次„„再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意为“创建以人为本的和谐社会”。
第三段中 make preferential policies意为“制订优惠政策”，establish completed systems意为“建立完善的体系”。
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（四）
Indirect Employment
1． 工作难找，大学生流行“曲线就业”，通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。
2． 你对此有什么看法？
【范文】
Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out.Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.
I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment.Firstly, it can not only relieve employment preure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which
can\'t be gotten from books.Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests.Last but not the least, it improves university students\' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.
【点评】
文章第一段指出大学生就业形势严峻，随之出现“曲线就业”。文章第二段开门见山，说明自己的观点---赞成这种做法，然后一一列出了好处：第一，缓解就业压力，获取新的知识和实践经验；第二，有利于大学生认识自己兴趣所在；第三，锻炼学生的社会技能和个性。
第一段中severe employment situation意为“严峻的就业形势”；finding ways out意为“寻求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意为“支持”；not only„but also意为“不仅„„而且„„”；Last but not the least意为“最后但是最重要的是”。
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（五）
Who Should Pay the University\'s Tuition？
1． 大学学费不断上涨，有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取，有人认为应由父母供给。
2． 作为大学生，谈谈你自己的观点，并给出理由。
【范文】
University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities.With the rising of university\'s tuition, hot discuions have arisen about who should pay the university\'s tuition.Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life.Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students\' ability.
As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part.It is true that trying to make money will affect university students\' studies.But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money.Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.
【点评】
文章第一段开门见山，指出关于谁支付大学学费的不同意见。第二段说明自己的观点----希望父母和孩子共同承担学费，这样有助于减轻家庭负担，学生也有机会通过社会实践获取更多社会经验。
第一段中With the rising of university\'s tuition意为“随着大学学费的上涨”；be beyond one\' s ability意为“超出某人的能力范围”。第二段中gain working experience意为 “获取社会经验”；lighten financial burdens意为“减轻经济负担”。
大学英语六级考试作文预测（2011.11）
恩波教育英语研究所
预测作文
（一）
New Part-time Jobs
1． 目前有一些新型的兼职工作出现，如网络写手，拍客，纠客等；
2． 你对大学生从事这类职业有什么看法？
【范文】
With the rapid development of information society, a large number of new part-time jobs emerge, such as cyber writers, shooter, rectifiers and so on.Since young people tend to accept new
things, many university students employ these jobs.However, some are afraid that these part-time jobs will distract students\' attention from their studies and influence their academic achievements.
As far as I am concerned, taking on part-time jobs can partly relieve students\' economic burdens, especially to those from poor families.Almost all these new jobs meet the real demands of modern times, they can ensure college students to keep pace with the times and get self-improvements according to the needs of society.
What\'s more, when compared with traditional ones, these new ones show characteristics of novel forms, diversified styles and flexibility.So if college students can balance their learning and part-time jobs well, they are sure to get enough knowledge as well as working experience, so as to get ready for their future succe.
【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入“新型兼职工作出现”这一现象，之后提及人们对大学生从事这些兼职工作的担忧：担心大学生做兼职工作分心而影响学业。第二段说明自己的观点---兼职工作可以减轻学生的经济负担，而且这些新型兼职工作都是应运时代要求而生，可以使学生与时俱进，根据时代需求进行自我调整。第三段分析了新型兼职工作的特征“形式新颖，风格各异，自由灵活”，提倡学生合理安排学业与工作。
第一段第一句中cyber writers意为“网络写手”；shooter意为“拍客”；rectifiers 意为“纠客”；influence their academic achievements意为“影响学业”； 第二段第一句As far as I am concerned意为“就我而言，我认为”；relieve one\'s economic burdens意为“减轻某人的经济负担”；keep pace with the times意为“与时俱进”； 第三段第一句中show characteristics of意为“显示出„„特征”；第二句中balance意为“平衡”。
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（二）
Bureaucratic Airs on College Student Cadres
1． 部分高校学生干部沾染“官气”，错把职能当权力；
2． 请对此现象及原因进行分析。
【范文】
College Student Cadres are those ones who usually do excellent jobs in academics and make outstanding performance in activities.Their manners influence the students around them greatly.However, due to the close relationship between college and society, many college student cadres gradually show undesirable tendency towards bureaucracy.They mistakenly regard their duties as authorities.
This strange phenomenon not only reveals the immature of young adults, but also discloses that those cadres haven’t realized the nature of Students’ Union.The following factors can account for it.Firstly, self-cultivation of college student cadres is not good enough.Because they lack social experience, they make mistakes easily with the desires for quick returns.Secondly, the check-up systems in colleges overemphasize their performance in Students’ Union, so student cadres only focus on pursuits of outstanding performance.
All things considered, universities should reinforce guidance and education for college student cadres and help them build up a stronger sense of services.
【点评】
大学生干部曾经是一个时代活力动力、正气朝气、理想希望的象征。但是随着市场大潮的逐步浸染，大学生开始越来越深入地接触社会，并在各类活动中开始受到社会不良风气的诱惑。文章由部分高校学生干部沾染“官气”引出话题，之后在第二段分析了该类现象，指出大学
生干部涉世未深，没有认清学生会的本质所在。之后分析了产生这一现象的原因---自身素质不高并且急功近利；考核制度过分强调业绩。最后一段呼吁学校加强对大学生干部的引导，帮助其树立正确的信念和服务意识。
第一段中do excellent jobs in academics意为“学业优秀”；make outstanding performance in activities意为“表现突出”； undesirable tendency towards bureaucracy意为“官僚化的不良趋势”；第二段第一句中reveal和disclose都表示“揭示”，account for意为“解释，说明”； the desires for quick returns可以解释为“急功近利”；第三段中All things considered意为“总而言之”。
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（三）
Limited Tour on Famous Universities’ Campuses
1． 名校成旅游景点，不少高校纷纷颁布“限游令”；
2.该不该限游，谈谈你的看法。
【范文】
Along with the phenomenon that famous university campuses have become popular tourist attractions, great concerns have been showed to campus tourism.Since it has been found that the normal teaching has been disturbed, the environment has been polluted and the spiritual atmosphere has been ruined, a large number of universities have carried out rules to limit tourists on campus.
As we know, campuses are mainly places for study, and they are holy palaces where students gain profound scholarship of different fields.Being open to tourists may distract students\' attentionfrom their studies, as well as make a great deal of hustle and bustle in the initially peaceful campus.Most importantly, it may cause unneceary troubles for students.As a result, it is beneficial to limit tourists so as to guarantee students\' personal interests.
Meanwhile, I sincerely hope that universities would take into consideration the positive meanings, and hold regular \"open\" activities in order to improve their reputations as well as enable middle school students to get more information about them, and then help the students make enough preparation for their future.
【点评】
文章首段指出如今“大学校园游”盛行，利用被动语态并列句指出其弊端：大学的正常教学秩序被打扰，环境受到影响，大学的文化氛围遭到破坏，引出话题：不少高校纷纷颁布“限游令”；第二段结合作者自己的观点指出是否支持这种做法。最后一段提出建议，希望大学“限游”的同时，结合考虑其积极因素。
第一段中Along with表示“随着”；disturb 和ruin均表示“破坏”。第二段中holy palaces表示“神圣的殿堂”； hustle and bustle表示“喧闹繁杂”；guarantee students\' personal interests表示“保障学生的切身利益”。第三段中take into consideration表示“考虑”。
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（四）
Job Orientation
1． 大学生是先就业后择业，还是从一开始就要有清晰的职业定位？
2． 请给出自己的分析及观点。
【范文】
In recent years, many college students face a big problem about whether they should gain a job first before choosing the most appropriate one, or they should hold a clear job orientation in their mind from the very beginning ?
As far as I am concerned, each choice has its own advantages.Getting a job without interests
helps college students gain enough time to find a better one while adjusting themselves into the real society.On the contrary, choosing a relevant job can avoid blindne employments and save students’ time for striving for their ideals.
I completely agree that college students should make out plans for their career and be down-to–earth in carrying out it.Even confronted with the increasing difficulty of getting a job, they should not merely aim at material gains.
【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。文章第一段指出现象---大学生是应该先就业再择业还是先择业后就业呢？文章第二段作者结合自己的观点分析两种不同抉择的有利之处：先就业可以使学生在现实社会中自我调整，为将来找到更合适的作准备。而先择业可以避免盲目就业，为实现理想节约时间。最后一段指出作者自己的观点--大学生应该制定职业规划。
文章第一段中 from the very beginning表示“从最开始”。第二段中On the contrary表示“相反地”，短语striving for their ideals表示“为理想而奋斗”。第三段中down-to–earth表示“脚踏实地的”，material gains表示“物质利益”。
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（五）
How to Prevent Psychological Problems in Schools?
1． 心理问题成校园暴力主因，为避免极端行为的发生，对有“隐性”心理问题的学生进行前期干预尤为重要；
2． 应如何对学生进行心理干预，有什么有效的措施？
【范文】
In modern society, students are destined to cope with a lot of preures, from either outer world or inner will.Reports are often heard that some students made violence, committed suicide or murdered their roommates.Students\' psychological problems have become the primary cause of \"extreme behaviours\".It is vital to take effective actions against psychological problems, especially to those ones without any apparent symptoms.
In the first place, the authorities concerned should let students be aware of the utmost significance of mental fitne.Lectures on psychological health should be frequently given and psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students with timely help.In the second place, students should keep optimistic in their daily life and let their channel of communication open to their teachers and parents.Even in case of mental illne, they should not hesitate to go to psychological counselors for help.Only with these measures taken can we expect sound growth of students.
【点评】
文章首段指出如今大学生受到各种压力，从而产生了各样的心理问题，同时提出有必要采取措施解决大学生的心理问题；第二段结合作者自己的观点提出如何对大学生进行心理干预：首先相关部门应对大学生心理问题引起重视，采取讲座和心理咨询的方式给学生及时提供帮助；其次，大学生应该保持乐观的态度，如遇心理问题，应毫不犹豫寻求心理咨询师的帮助。
第一段第一句中be destined to 表示“注定”；第二句made violence, committed suicide， murdered their roommates均是由心理问题产生的。第二段中In the first place,In the second place 表示列举，意思分别是“第一”，“第二”。not hesitate to do sth.意为“毫不犹豫做某事”。
