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2015年8月22日大陆托福考试写作真题和范文解析
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第一部分
综合写作： 有关“计划烧除”的问题
阅读：
1.“计划烧除”对动物有害;
2.“计划烧除”会造成烟气和二氧化碳污染;
3.即使不进行“计划烧除”也会有自然火灾的发生，所以“计划烧除”会浪费财力。
听力反驳：
1.因为有几个月动物是不繁殖的，而且成年动物在遇火时可以成功逃脱，因此“计划烧除”不会对动物造成危害;
2.“计划烧除”可以让植物吸收二氧化碳;
3.“计划烧除”会消除可燃物，减少自然火灾的发生。
综合写作思路：
1、阅读支持“计划烧除”对动物有害;听力则赞成，动物是不繁殖的，而且成年动物在遇火时可以成功逃脱，因此“计划烧除”不会对动物造成危害。
2、阅读部分提出“计划烧除”会造成烟气和二氧化碳污染;但是，听力提出“计划烧除”可以让植物吸收二氧化碳。
3、阅读部分提出，即使不进行“计划烧除”也会有自然火灾的发生，所以“计划烧除”会浪费财力;但是，听力部分则反驳说“计划烧除”会消除可燃物，减少自然火灾的发生。
范文：
The lecturer contends that prescribed burns prevent larger forest fires.This directly contradicts the reading paage’s claim that there are more disadvantages than advantages.
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First, in spite of the concerns some people have, only a few animals die from the burns; there is enough time for animals to escape.Moreover, the profeor cites the example of Yellowstone National Park, where animals have no difficulties finding new habitats because of the park\'s huge size.This refutes the reading paage’s claim that forest animals die from prescribed burns and that even if they manage to survive, they have a hard time because of the competition for food in their new territory.
On top of that, the lecturer says there has been a misunderstanding about the environmental damage of prescribed burns.It is true that prescribed burns produce smoke; however, the amount of smoke is much le than the amount of smoke generated during major forest fires.This rebuts the reading paage’s claim that since many prescribed burns take several days, smoke coming from the burning causes air pollution.
Finally, prescribed burns are deliberately carried out.The forest officials put a lot of thought and efforts into the burns before they intentionally set a forest on fire; accordingly, it is le feasible that the forest officials would conduct the burns if conditions are not suitable.This contradicts the idea mentioned in the reading paage that prescribed burns can change into major forest fires by spreading unexpectedly.
第二部分
独立写作：
题目：Do you agree or disagree: the most effective way for governments to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity?
命中情况：命中8月22日前程百利独立写作大范围——社会类“第四题”。
是否新题：否
重复情况：2008年9月21日中国考试，2008年9月28日中国考试，2009年11月22日中国考试
题材：社会类
独立写作思路：
1.同意
(1)提高汽油费和电费会在一定程度上抑制消费者对能源的使用，从而节省能源;
(2)提高汽油费和电费会让消费者养成节省能源的习惯，从长远看来，有利于能源节约。
2.不同意
(1)随着经济的发展，人们的消费水平提高了，提高汽油费和电费对消费者来说影响不大;
(2)提高汽油费和电费不能从根本上节约能源，要真正做到能源节约，根本措施在于开发新技术，提高能源利用效率。
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范文：(不同意)
In such a scientific-technologically developed society, energy has played an indispensable and dominant role in aspects of life, whatever in personal living or corporate expansion.However, with the rapid decline in the amount of the energy or recourse resulting from increasing demand as well as overly exploitation, it is imperative that government take measures to conserve the energy available.For example, increasing the cost of gasoline and electricity will admittedly control the use of both for a majority will not purchase or waste them as before, but it is not the only way due to some potential drawbacks in the long run.
For one thing, it will create a path for some commercial producers to make profits from the price-raising illegally when they are keen on the sole material benefits instead of the initial motive of the government.Energy, whose consumption has accounted for a big proportion in the national revenue, is always a hot iue in many profit-oriented companies.For instance, some gasoline companies will expand their exploitation area for larger inventories, from which they can get greater profits once the price of the products are increased.They will also force their employees to work exceively with disregard to safety.Doing so can not only conserve the energy as planned, but also bring some negative influenced on the social life.
For another, the increase in the energy may cause a financial burden for those relying on the resource, individually or corporately.If the strategy is carried out, some companies will face great difficulty in affording the energy, and consequently they cannot continue their production without resource provision.Neither can some families in some poverty-stricken areas.One of my relatives, living in a le developed village, is striving to save the money on the electricity or gas.Suffering from the preure of tuition of his children, he has to try to live an economical life.Thus the increase in the price of electricity will inevitably become an obstacle in such occasions.
In conclusion, in spite of the poible effectivene in the energy conservation, the cost rising will lead to some illegal cases or financial burdens to some poor ones at the same time.If there are some more complementary alternatives, such as to enhance the public awarene to conserve the energy actively, the goal of the government will be fulfilled in a balanced way.
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