作文
掌握小升初英语写作基本技巧
英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。
通常英语写作有以下几个特点：紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求；以有指导的写作为主(guided writing)，便于考生在短时间内构思成文；突出试题的交际性，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力；增强试题的实用性，所选话题贴近学生学习生活，为学生所熟悉；看图作文主要考查考生运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。
英语写作注意两点
一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：
1．认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。还要看要求写几句话。
2．理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。注意时态。
二、英文写作“四步走”
由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：
1）作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。
2）确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时。（时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因。）考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。
3）边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。
4）写完后一定要再细看一遍，注意使句子流畅，时态运用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词运用正确，名词的大小写正确。
※ 备战小升初：怎样才能写出英语好句子
在写作中，往往听到一些关于句子好或坏的评论，那么好句子到底有什么标准呢？下面就把一个好句子的几个基本原则介绍一下，希望能够帮你在写作中写出优美的句子来。
1．完整
完整是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句子表达单一的完整的意思。它不包含并不紧密相关的意思，也不表达本身不完整的意思。
2．连贯
连贯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。句子中的词语和部分应恰当地衔接，它们之间的关系应十分清楚。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病：平行结构有缺点，代词指代不清楚，修饰语和被修饰语的关系不明确，在人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。
3．简洁
句中不应有任何不必要的词。只要意思充分 地表达了，用词越少越好。用词过多只会使意思模糊不清，而不是更加明晰。人们常常用不必要的词，所以最好在写完一篇文章之后，仔细检查一两遍，看看有没有一些词可以删去而又不影响意思的表达。
4．强调
凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以强调。为此说话时人们可用各种方法，如提高声音、放慢语速、使用短句或加上手势。写文章时，也可以使用倒装、感叹、重复、反问等方法对应该强调的词语和句子加重语气。
5．多样
句型的多样化，对好的文章来说是必不可少的。好几句长短相同、结构相似的句子连在一起，如又用同一个名词或代词作主语，必然会显得很单调。为多样化起见，短句和长句，简单句、并列句和复合句，圆周句和松
散句都应错杂使用。也可偶尔用一个问句、祈使句或感叹句。但是不要只是为了多样化而频频变换句型。句子的结构和长度首先要由所要表达的思想来决定。只有恰当地表达思想时多样化才可取。
四川地震英语作文：抗震救灾，众志成城
1、考题示例
假设你是李华，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，你决定给灾区的学生写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
1、得知四川发生突如其来的特大地震灾害，心情非常难过；
2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强；
3、患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时并捐款；
4、美好家园可以重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。
参考词汇：捐款 make a donation to
参考范文
Dear friends,
I’m sorry to hear that a horrible earthquake hit your hometown.Faced with such disaster, you remain so calm and strong.A friend in need is a friend indeed.I want to expre my pity and care for you.Besides, I make a donation to you,I hope it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,Li Hua
My Day
Today is Monday.I get up at 6:00.I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth.I have noodles for breakfast.I go to school at 7:00.I do morning exercises at 7:50.We have four claes in morning.At 11:30, I’m very hungry.I have lunch at school.I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon.We have three claes in the afternoon.I have computer cla and art claes.I like them very much.I go home at 5:30.I do homework after school.My sister、brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening.Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.I go to bed at 10:00.
I’m happy today!
My teather
Our art teather is not too young and not too old .He has black hair two big and black eyes ,a small nose and a big mouth .Look, he is wearing a blue and white jacket ,a blue hat ,brown pants and a pair of old shoes.He is very funny.He is a good art teather .We all like him .
My hometown
I am from ShenZhen.In spring ,the weather is warm and wet.I can play kite.In summer, the weather is hot and wet.I can swim in the swimming pool.In
the autumn, the weather is cool and dry.I can play kite, too.In the winter, the weather is cold and dry.It never snow.How about you?
My Room
I have my own room.It is big and nice.There is a bed, a desk and a shelf.The doll is on the bad.The lamp is on the desk.The books are on the shelf.The trash bin is behind the door.The clothes are in the closet.There is a air-conditioner over the closet.Look! There are many pictures on the wall.I love my room very much.关于北京奥运的作文
一、关于北京申奥成功的看图作文
2001 年 7 月 13 日，你的美国朋友给你写了一封信，祝贺北京申奥成功。收到信后你给他写了一封信，介绍了你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的。回信应包括下列图画所示内容，并邀请他在 2008 年来中国。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.信的开头和结尾已写好。
生词： 1.竞标成功 win the bid for„„
2.出墙报 put up a wall newspaper
Dear Bill，
Very glad to receive your letter of July 13._________________________________________
Sincerely yours，
Zhang Hua
内容要点：
1.向美国朋友道谢。
2.听到北京申奥成功的消息非常激动。
3.召二人来家商量庆祝方式。
4.三人到教室出墙报。
5.周一同学们看到墙报的反应。
6.邀请美国朋友 2008 年来北京观看奥运会。
参考范文
Bear Bill,
Very glad to receive your letter of July 13.Thank you for your congratulations.I was very excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games.Immediately I called Wei Guo and Li Hong to my house.After a brief discuion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our cla.We hurried to our claroom and began to work.Wei Guo wrote a poem.Li Hong copied some news from the newspapers.I drew an Olympic flag.The next Monday, our clamates were both surprised and overjoyed when they saw the wall newspaper.I hope you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008.Then I＇ll be very happyto be your guide.
二、北京奥运一名志愿者让外国朋友更多地了解北京
（ 2002 年黄冈市）小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者：他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友„„在交谈中，小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明，并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴，他甜蜜地笑了„„
请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象，写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出（不计入总词数）。
内容要求：
（ 1 ）帮助外国朋友；（ 2 ）与外国朋友交谈；（ 3 ）感谢小明；（ 4 ）小明很高兴。
词汇参考： try （ do ） one＇s best ， find （ that ）， heavy （ lost ）， carry （ show ， take ）， taxi （ car ， bike ）， on the way ， talk with （ about ）
Xiao Ming had a dream （梦） last night .In the dream ， he volunteered to serve （志愿列队） the Beijing Olympics .
Xiao Ming had a dream last night.In the dream, he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olympics.He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries.When he found a foreign friend worried in the street, he went up to him and asked him what was the matter.The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack, and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel.Then Xiao Ming stopped
a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel.Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing.Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming＇s English was very good.Xiao Ming was very happy.He smiled and smiled, then he woke up.
2008年奥运会我要做一名志愿者
I want to be a volunteer of beijing olympic games.I realized the time flies.I must study english very hard.Because English is very useful and it is very important.And to be a volunteer of the olympic games is good for myself too.I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport,about olympic.But the first thing to perpare this is study hard, I am confident i will to be a good volunteer and I will show the world:our country and our cities are so perfect in the world
