高考英语满分作文点评02
浙江卷：范文一
I prefer my English claes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.The teacher first teaches the cla in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the paage.That will be good for us.
However, teaching the cla in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in claes.It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名师点评：
审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。
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好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with，对某人熟悉3.atmosphere n.气氛
好句1.I prefer my English claes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.
我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。
好处：定语从句很好地组织了复杂句，同时prefer等词组的使用很地道。
2.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
那些希望英语授课的学生们可能会失望了。
好处：定语从句和wish to do的使用。
