Overseas Study at an Early Age
1．目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就送他们出国学习
2．导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3．我对此的看法
错误分析：
send the children to abroad
send the children abroad (adv.)
Why does it lead to the tendency?(代词指代不明)
Why there is such a tendency?
What causes the tendency?
What are the reasons for this tendency?
Send children to overseas study.(词性错误)
Send children to study overseas.
Send children for overseas study.
No matter how expensive or how much trouble.(破碎句)
No matter how expensive the study is or how much trouble they take.
Study abroad can really get a good education.(主谓不匹配)
Children can get a good education by studying abroad.
If they don’t have conditions or don’t suit for foreign life, (语义含混)
If they can’t afford the expense or can’t adjust to foreign life,
There is a great gap between our country and foreign countries.(语义含混)
There is a great gap between our country and developed countries.
范文 【参考范文】
Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children.They are encouraged by the succe stories of those who have completed their overseas study.With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too.Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future.Moreover the rapid economic progre in the past few years in China has enabled more and more
parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and neceary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither neceary nor beneficial.I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.
