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一、指出现象或争议话题
Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…自从……起，就有对于……的持续争论。With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…随着对……的日益关注，人们呼吁……… draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discued yet constantly unsolved social iue.……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……，这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。
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二、引出各方观点
There exists a philosophy that…有一种观点认为……While many advocate…, I believe it\'s a better idea to…尽管很多人支持……，我认为……更好。Quite many are disgusted by this kind of…, because it goes against the traditional Chinese virtue of…很多人都反感……，因为它有悖于中国的传统美德。
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三、表示赞同
It is apparent that it is a more sensible choice to…很明显，……是更为明智的选择。…should be encouraged, because it is a rewarding journey, promised with...…应鼓励……，因为它所带来的回报奇迹丰厚，并且允许……It is fair to say that…, is a plausible and advisable option for…客观来讲，……对于……是合理且明智的选择。
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四、提出建议
In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…我认为，要改进的方面有三点，以便……It would be better if…如果……会更好。
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五、引用名人名言
As … rightly/ aptly put it, “…”正如……恰如其分地提出……As is maintained by …，“…”正如……提出，……… is the golden rule to stick.……是一条金科玉律。
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六、举例说明
A case in point is…一个恰当的例子是……The recent incident happened in … proves …最近发生在……身上的一件事情证明了……A simple example can be drawn from…一个简单的例子就是……According to figures/statistics /the findings/data released by an institute, …根据某机构发布的数据/研究结果，……
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七、阐述原因
The epidemic of … is brought / caused both by … and by………的出现是由于……和……造成的。One of the chief causes of… is the fact that ………的主要原因之一是……The upsurge of … is resulted from two-fold factors ——………的出现源于双重因素——……
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八、做出总结
In conclusion, it takes the endeavor of both … and … to …总之，……需
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九、发出号召或警示
The situation, if unchecked, will lead to …如果不加以制止，情况将走向……If not dealt with properly, …如果处理不当，……What may be a point of concern is …可能需要关注的是……
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十、表示过渡(承上启下，使新观点不至于显得突兀、武断)
There are no le than three advantages in… as rendered below.在……方面，至少有三项优点如下显示。Another reason why I advocate the attitude of…is that…我支持这种观点的另一个原因是……What’s more...而且......Last but not least, …最后但同样重要的是……
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1.总共写十七个句子.
第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that imprees me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witneed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.(4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal.(5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势
第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.(2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our
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最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。
(1)From what have been discued above, it is therefore, neceary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题.(2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.(3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction.(4)However, it is easier said than done.(5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
2.积极有利型的文章 文章以团队精神为例子
第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替for example的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单
8 独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.(2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming succe.(3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depreing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel lo of hope about the future.(4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below.To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.(5)Secondly, no iue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.(7)A person who is aigned various jobs along the production lines will make a me just because no one can be proficient in all the things.(8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
第三个段子首句谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.
(1) From what have been discued above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or le difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.(2)It is therefore, neceary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient.(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits.(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done.Practice is the most important factor.(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
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