英语作文 生命因你而美丽
You use short life to the earth bring new energy, breath, will all life is depicted to a splendid bright beautiful. 你用短暂的生命给大地带来新生，活力的气息，将万物的生命刻画得精彩亮丽。
\"Dew, is because you are softhearted care, the gra just straight waist pole, meet chenfeng permeated with from the green joy; dewdrop, is because you are carefully care, sapling until puffed out his chest, toward the warmth of the sun satisfiedly waved to tomorrow; dewdrop, is because you are happy to holding company, stream of hands, happy to running forward.\" This article has many such segment of language, picture stronger, more vivid and read books with strong sense of joy and hope the author can create a more beautiful articles.
“露珠，正是因为你温情地呵护，小草才挺直腰杆，迎着晨风洋溢起绿色的喜悦；露珠，正是因为你细心地的照料，小树才挺起胸膛，朝着温暖的阳光得意地向明天招手；露珠，正是因为你快乐地陪伴，小溪才牵着快乐的双手，努力向前奔跑。”，此文有很多这样的语段，画面感较强，读起来生动引人，给读者带来较强的愉悦感，希望作者能创作出多优美的文章。 Comment on: beautiful lyric prose, on the one hand, rely on chronologically observation and accumulation, On the other hand to grasp some writing skills, specifically, describes the prose to readers show plenties vivid appearance, lost imagination, not using proper personification and metaphors so rhetorical tactics, description is like a piece of dry waxy vapid, Pure in parables, and make good use of personification, the article vivid words and lively, full of appeal, yi yi is a glorious.Everything is a lyric chronologically, no \"feeling\" it has no presentation of prose.To write a good eay describes everywhere can hand directly or indirectly lyric sentences.点评：优美的写景抒情散文，一方面靠观察和积累；另一方面要掌握一定的写作技巧，具体来说，写景散文向读者展现一幅幅生动的画面，失去了想象，不会运用恰当的拟人和比喻等修辞手法，描写就如同一块干蜡一样索然无味；精用比喻、善用拟人，文章语言生动而活泼，充满着情趣，熠熠着光彩。一切写景皆为抒情，无“情”也就无写景之散文。一篇好的写景散文，随处都可以拈来直接或间接抒情的句子。
关于校园浪费问题
Dear fellow students, 亲爱的同学们, May i have you attention,please? Now I\'d like to a speech here.As we know, waste have become common scenes on campus.Some pour the remauns of a meal when there is still much leave;others simply walk away after washing hands,leaving the water running;students leave and go to claroom everyday, regardle of whther fans are switched off.Has proxidence, the natonal tradition that descendes from long history gone?if so,then find it back! 请大家注意一下吗?现在我想在这里为大家演讲。正如我们所知,废物成为普通镜头在校园。一些倒remauns的吃饭时,还是有很多离开了;其他的只是离开,离开了水洗手经营;学生离开,去教室每天,无论whther球迷关闭。有proxidence,natonal从历史悠久的传统,descendes去了?如果是这样,那么就去找了! We don\'t have to attain a great cause of controlling waste, but actions and a grateful heart are more enough:be grateful for the water that runs through fingers ,and save it for poor Arabian or African coutries struggling in water shortage; be grateful for the lightne we have acce to because in slums children share a faint lamp to read;be grateful for all the paper and sheets we are able to use, for trees were cut down to satisfy ouyr needs;be gratyeful for everything naturehas to offer and everything we can own.我们不需要达到伟大事业的浪费,但控制行为和一颗感恩的心更不够:水充满感激之情,流经的手指,并且节省它可怜的阿拉伯和非洲国家缺水挣扎的明度;充满感激之情,因为我们可以访问一个微弱的孩子们共同居住在贫民窟灯阅读,感激那些文件和表我们能够使用,树木被砍掉了ouyr需要;是gratyeful满足为我所做的一切naturehas提供以及所有我们可以自己。
Live and act, the tradition of providence will never fade.生活和行动,普罗维登斯的传统、永不褪色。
Comment on: the paper note speech etiquette, for a lot of example, convincing.Beauty of language, rigorous style.点评：文章注意演讲礼仪，举了大量例子，具有说服力。语言优美，行文严谨。
