2011年6月六级预测作文--低碳生活
>>低碳生活
1.近年来低碳生活逐渐成为热议话题 2.推行低碳生活的措施 3.我认为…… >>范文背诵
Low-Carbon Life Every one of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases emitted in our daily activities.Therefore, the notion of low-carbon life has come into existence and become popular all over the world.Leading a low-carbon life needs everyone\'s consciousne and daily efforts.Firstly, we should get started by calculating our own carbon footprint, which means that attention should be paid to details, such as what sort of apartment we live in, our personal use of energy and travel habits.Secondly, we should carry out low-carbon concept in every aspect of daily life.For example, we should use muscle power rather than gasoline when we can, skip the bottled water, and choose foods thoughtfully.Last but not least, new low-carbon technology should be adopted to help establish the low-carbon life style.As far as I am concerned, it is meaningful to call on people to start a low-carbon life as soon as poible.This new life style will not only contribute to the environment protection but also bring us a much healthier body.
>>亮点词汇 ①emit v.发散，释放 ②come into existence出现 ③calculate v.计算，测量 ④carbon footprint 碳足迹（指一个人、企业或团体的“碳耗用量”） ⑤carry out践行，实施 ⑥thoughtfully ad.仔细考虑地 ⑦skip v.跳过，弃用 ⑧bottled water 瓶装水 ⑨establish v.建立 >>文章点评
第一段指出随着环保意识的提高，应对气候变化和推行低碳生活已经成为近年来世界范围内热议的话题。
第二段从三个方面阐述了推行低碳生活的一些相关措施。首先，测量自己的碳足迹，以清楚地知道自己的碳排放量；其次，从生活中的小事做起，减少碳排放，降低能源消耗；最后，积极推广低碳技术在日常生活中的应用。第二句使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，对前面的主句内容做进一步的解释说明；从句中又套用了that引导的宾语从句，并用such as导出一系列的例子。
第三段提出自己的观点。推广低碳生活方式意义深远，它不仅带给我们健康的环境，还能让我们拥有更加健康的身体。末句使用not only...but also...句型，连接两个谓语动词短语，是一个有用的高分结构。
2011年6月四级预测作文--学生攀比现象
>>大学生攀比现象
1.大学校园生活存在高消费、攀比现象 2.这种现象存在的原因 3.我该怎么做 >>范文背诵
Life Comparison among College Students On today\'s consuming market, college students have attracted increasing attention as a particular group of consumers.They purchase famous brand clothes, superior cosmetics, mobile phones, laptop computers and other digital products to be fashionable.The urge to keep up with the Joneses is a phenomenon that can be found
- 1②take...for granted认为„„是理所当然的 ③for the sake of 为了 ④violate v.违反，破坏
⑤disappointed a.失望的,沮丧的 ⑥be used to习惯于做某事
⑦insensitive a.置之不理的，麻木不仁的 ⑧concern about 关心
⑨reconsider v.重新考虑，三思 ⑩get rid of去除 >>文章点评
第一段提出当前大学校园中普遍存在的“占座”现象，而且大部分学生已经对此习以为常。首句使用动词的现在分词短语作伴随状语，使文章开篇就能展现作者的语言运用能力。
第二段从两个方面分析“占座”现象带来的影响。一方面，虽然“占座”是为了学习，但这却违背了公平原则，挫伤了许多学生的学习积极性；另一方面，“占座”行为也助长了部分学生的自私和麻木心理，不顾及他人的感受。末句中使用了who 引导的定语从句，并用现在分词短语作伴随状语，也是一个亮点句子结构。
第三段提出自己的看法：大学生应该重新审视“占座”的习惯，提高意识，摒弃这种不合理的行为。首句使用considering引导的现在分词短语作伴随状语，并且使用了it is high time that...这一高分句型。
2011年6月四级预测作文-- 校园安全事件
>>校园安全事件
1.近来多发校园安全事件
2.学校及社会采取多种措施，防止此类事件发生 3.我的看法 >>范文背诵
School Security Recently, it has been reported that a series of attacks on children happened acro China.In these bloody attacks，many children were stabbed to death or seriously injured, which caused public concern of the society.
It is urgent to take efficient measures to ensure security around the primary schools and kindergartens.Firstly, many schools have tightened their safety.They set up their own school security teams, which are equipped with neceary weapons.Secondly, security guards and political officers station at school gate and patrol around before and after school hours.Last but not least, each visitor will be checked and registered at the school gate.
In my opinion, these measures are not enough to settle down the problem.The deep-rooted cause can be traced back to social problems.We need to handle social problems and settle disputes.Only in this way can the hidden dangers be removed.
>>亮点词汇
①a series of一连串的 ②stab v.刺,中伤,刺穿 ③station v.驻扎, 部署 ④patrol v.出巡, 巡逻
⑤deep rooted a.根深蒂固的 ⑥trace back to追溯到 ⑦hidden dangers隐患 >>文章点评
文章第一段说明近来多发校园安全事件，许多孩子在事件中伤亡，引起了全社会对此问题的关注。
第二段阐述为加强校园安全所采取的措施：设立学校安保队，配备必要的武器；保安和行政官员在上学、放学高峰期执行执勤和巡逻任务；对学校的每一位访客都要进行检查和登记。
第三段表达自己对此问题的看法。要从根本上解决此问题应当处理好社会问题、解决争端，从而解除引起校园安全的隐患。
- 3The discuion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few years.Let\'s have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and advanced research facilities.What\'s more, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view towards the world.Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.However, the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment.In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways.Finally, money is always a big problem.Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.
In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages.Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to our motherland.
>>亮点词汇
①research facilities研究设施
②reasonable and balanced合理平衡的 ③enterprising a.进取精神的
④have difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难 ⑤hinder v.阻碍，妨碍
⑥make contributions to our motherland为祖国作出贡献 >>文章点评
文章首段指出留学有利有弊。
第二段中阐述的好处包括国外的学术水平更高，研究设施更先进，能培养更加合理的世界观，还能塑造良好的性格。末句使用which 引导的非限制性定语从句，增加句式多样性。
第三段则指出，如果没做好准备就出国会遇到很多困难，而且文化差异和费用都是问题。 末段下结论，即利大于弊。
2011年6月六级预测作文--参考书与学习
>>参考书与学习
1.各种参考书给学生的学习提供了一定的帮助 2.过分依赖参考书的弊端
3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
How to Take Advantage of Reference Books Nowadays, various kinds of reference books for college students have come into existence.And many students gain so much that they soon find themselves totally relying on these books.It should be admitted that reference books have brought great convenience to students.And conversely, over-reliance on these books has also caused negative effects.Firstly, students who have got reference books are more likely to believe all the contents in the books and neglect teachers instructions.Secondly, with reference books, many students tend to be absent from cla and become lazy to think about how to solve problems on their own.Last but not least, there are so many different kinds of reference books that a great number of low quality ones are also among them, which will lead to students confusion.As a college student, I agree that reference books are of great use in our pursuit of knowledge.However, it
- 5>>文章点评
第一段点明文章论述的问题，即学术上的弄虚作假，同时指出这个问题日趋严重，引起越来越多的关注。
第二段列举了这一现象的危害。第一，它阻碍了国家的科学发展；第二，一些颇有声望的教授剽窃他人著作，降低了公众学术的可信任度；第三，这种学者对年轻学生有很坏的影响。第二点中that引导同位语从句解释说明confeion的内容，第三点中who引导定语从句修饰young students，多种从句的使用使句子更为紧凑严谨。
最后一段提出措施，建议相关部门采取行动遏制这种风气，鼓励学术界的创造性，而且政府也应加强对研究工作的监管。末句使用Only引导的倒装句增强表达效果。
2011年6月六级预测作文--大学生职业选择
>>大学生的职业选择
1.一些大学生认为职业选择应该以符合兴趣为出发点 2.也有大学生认为应该看是否有好的发展前景 3.我的观点
>>范文背诵
On the Choice of Career In recent years, there is no consensus of opinions among college students about choice of career.Some students are in favor of the view that when choosing a job, interest plays the key part and should be thought about firstly; while others take a completely different side, firmly believing that prosperity is more worthwhile.People holding the first view think that interest will result in more happine and satisfaction at work, with which they could work in a more relaxing way and make progre more easily.Otherwise, they will suffer from depreion due to lack of interest.However, holders of the second view argue that one should pay more attention to the career prosperity while making a choice, which will surely lead to prosperity of a person himself sooner or later.Therefore, they believe that it is career prosperity that counts most.Personally, I deem that prosperity is the right element to think about because career prosperity can bring about one\'s succe both in career and in life.In this sense, only career prosperity can bring a person happine and satisfaction in the long run.
>>亮点词汇
①consensus n.一致意见 ②be in favor of支持，赞同 ③prosperity n.发展前途
④worthwhile a.有价值的，值得的 ⑤satisfaction n.满足感
⑥suffer from遭受„„之苦 ⑦depreion n.抑郁，沮丧情绪 ⑧count v.很重要，有价值 ⑨in the long run从长远来看 >>文章点评
第一段提出职业选择问题，指出大学生对此问题有不同的观点和态度。第二句中连词that引导同位语从句，解释说明view的内容；分号后由连词while 引起对比，并使用believing引导的分词结构作伴随状语。
第二段对两种不同的观点进行分析。第一种认为大学生择业应该以兴趣为出发点，因为这样可以在工作中获得更多的愉悦和满足感；第二种认为职业选择应该更注重发展前景，理由是有前景的工作可以使个人有更好的发展。末句使用了六级写作加分句型——强调句，句子结构为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余部分”。例如：It is my parents who have put so much preure on me.（给我施加如此多压力的人是我的父母。）
第三段阐述自己的观点，提出职业前景应该是职业选择中更被注重的内容，因为从长远来看，只有具有职业前景的工作才能给人带来幸福感和满足感。末句使用only位于句首的部分倒装结构，为六级写作亮点句型。
2011年6月四级预测作文--公务员热
>>公务员热
- 7it is volunteering work that enables students to learn the importance of devoting spirit, which contributes to their all-round development.As a college student, I think volunteering activities should be greatly advocated.In the proce of participating, we can develop our humanism spirit and cooperative ability, which are eential in our growth.
>>亮点词汇
①rescue n.救援，营救
②remarkable a.值得注意的，不寻常的 ③call on号召
④engage in参与，参加
⑤devote v.为„„付出时间/努力等，专心致力于 ⑥all-round development 全面发展 ⑦advocate v.主张，拥护 ⑧participate v.参与，参加
⑨humanism n.人道主义，人本主义 ⑩cooperative a.(乐意)合作的
11.eential a.绝对重要的，必不可少的 >>文章点评
第一段提到，随着志愿活动的宣传和发展，越来越多的人，特别是大学生，积极投身到志愿活动当中。末句使用现在完成进行时态，表示一直以来都在进行的动作，并暗示这一动作还将继续进行下去。
第二段从两个方面分析志愿活动的重要意义。一方面，大学生参与志愿活动不但能帮助有需要的人，而且能够号召更多的人参与其中；另一方面，通过参与志愿活动，大学生自身也能得到锻炼和提高，还能更好地理解助人为乐和奉献精神。第一句使用there is no doubt that句型，表达的意义是“毫无疑问„„”。此外，末句不但使用了强调句型，同时还使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，是本文的一个亮点。
第三段阐述自己的观点：大学生应该积极投身志愿活动，奉献社会，完善自我。
2011年6月四级预测作文--拒绝醉酒驾驶
>>拒绝醉酒驾驶
1.社会上存在着酒后驾驶现象 2.酒后驾驶的危害
3.解决酒后驾驶问题的措施 >>范文背诵
On Drunken Driving It is commonly known that drunken driving is a taboo to drivers, for alcohol can penetrate into people\'s blood, affect their brain and lead to traffic accidents.However, many drivers today drive even when they are intoxicated, either for their personal habits or for busine reasons.Drunken driving can be very disastrous.For one thing, it can bring about disasters to the victims, who are either killed or severely injured in the accidents.For another, it is harmful to the driver himself, and the driver should at least be partly responsible for it.Furthermore, drunken driving jeopardizes the security and stability of the society.There are many ways to reduce drunken driving.Firstly, there should be a provision in the law to prevent people from driving when they are drunk.Secondly, the ma media should also play a role in publicizing the hazards of drunken driving as well as in educating people to obey the traffic rules.Last but not least, the drivers should establish a strong sense of responsibility for others as well as for themselves.After all, life is the most important.>>亮点词汇
- 9末句为only引导的倒装句式。
2011年6月四级预测作文--社会信任危机
>>社会信任危机
1.人们之间的信任度下降，出现社会信任危机 2.社会信任危机造成的不良影响 3.我认为合适的解决方法有哪些 >>范文背诵
Lo of Social Trust With the development of national economy, a worrying social problem also arises--people gradually trust each other le and le, especially among strangers.
This phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences.First and foremost, people will lose a lot of fun since they become cautious all the time.What makes matters worse, the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don\'t want to help strangers.Finally, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to the national education.It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly.For one thing, the government should make all efforts to create a harmonious social atmosphere.For another, teachers should seize every chance to stimulate affection in the hearts of the students.Finally, the ma media should also play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this transitional period.>>亮点词汇
①abruptly ad.突然地；意外地 ②pose a threat to对„„构成威胁 ③seize every chance to抓住每个机会 ④stimulate v.鼓励，激励 ⑤mutual trust相互信任 ⑥transitional a.过渡期的 >>文章点评
第一段指出随着经济增长，出现了一个令人担忧的社会问题，即人与人之间的信任度降低。
第二段点明这一现象带来的不良后果，并分三方面进行阐述。首先，人们的生活将会失去很多乐趣；其次，办事的基本开支将会增加；另外，这一问题将会威胁到国民教育。
第三段从政府、教师与媒体三个角度提出解决问题的办法。政府应该努力创造和谐的社会氛围；教师应该激发学生的关爱精神；媒体应该起到积极的影响。第四段使用No matter引导的方式状语从句做总结。
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