高分范文展示：
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helple-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in poeing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.
Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句写法：把句子拉长→加修饰：
(1) n.+ who/which/that… 加从句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.
那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当作评判其社会地位的唯一标准的人们，会很重视追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2) n./句子结尾 + v.-ed(en) (被动) / v.-ing (主动) 加分词（定语后置）
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究发现，和十年前的5%相比，现在有近24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3) n.+ with + n.(修饰语) 加限定词
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their succe and existence.当今，很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿：
07 阅读text3最后一段：
From the middle-cla family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far le like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.
* Looks far le like… a good deal more like… 看起来不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文：养老足球赛
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far le like like a 依据我们的良知，毫无疑问，大多数这种行为并不能提供合理分配赡养老人义务的机会，相反，它更像是一种加剧中华传统美德“尊老爱幼”走向大规模衰败的危险行为
大作文——开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how
What——虚开头（首段首句）
(1) 坊间流传多年的所谓经典套话
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲观乐观 man, paion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.
(2) 直接描述
e.g.12002年作文：美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.
a Chinese traditional costume.
e.g.2 2010年作文：文化“火锅”，既美味又营养
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文：悲观乐观 What——[描述+宽泛、宏观的点评]（首段第二句）
It is aa significant information that 主题has been in the spotlight in current society主题 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.
e.g.家庭成员关系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句应该有一定层次感，首段第二句提出一个观点/现象，第二段首句再将其具体化/细节化，直击中心。
Why/Effect——实开头：（主题句）+ 原因/影响（内部：自身 / 外部：社会、媒体）+ 例子
(1) 主题句：
Among the topic concerning主题（抽象）, as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the iue of主旨中心思想（具体）.
e.g.家庭关系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出国留学人数/考研人数/公务员人数 (2) 引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.
e.g.中国传统文化/美德的缺失 (3) 引出影响
It is hardly neceary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences (that) the 现象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,
* 表示导致的短语：Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因：inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公务员 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法：Apart from (mentioned above), …(new information) = Besides, … , Google could owe its succe to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.
* 表示归因于：owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4) 举例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能单独提出，例子前面要有一个论点，或者在例子后面要有一个点评和结论，这样才是一个完整的举例（名人名言也同理）。
How——提出建议（Suggestion）：规则、思想、行为
(1) 制定规则：
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼应主题.（敬老） （保护环境） （留学）
(2) 改变思想：
Deliver the moderate 主题词 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.
e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功观/生活观/物质观/世界观/知识观/能源观
(3) 规范行为：
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主题词 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.
(4)补充说明方法：名人名言（适用于最后一段提完建议之后）
万能套话：
As a claic saying goes,千里之行，始于足下
应用：提完建议之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主题词, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it poible to make a change? Actually, as a claic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.
e.g.养老 Actually, as a claic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.
e.g.奢侈浪费
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a claic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.
特别讲解：主体段落的展开（第二段）
(1) 单向话题：要么褒，要么贬
原因展开：
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.为什么很多年轻人最终会抽烟
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to (2) 双向话题
e.g.中国传统风俗习惯的改变是好还是坏
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 举例子的时候，要实现从手段到效果的跨越（我们要怎么做来达到什么效果）
小作文——Simplified（简明扼要）字数：100-120
* 大作文的套话和模板不能用在小作文中！
* 小作文写作时必须覆盖每个题目要求的要点
(1) Letter——邮件、信件：生活化/接地气
a) 邀请信
学术邀请（充满敬意）：
开头：正式邀请（含参会时间和主题）
主体：介绍会议安排
结尾：希望得到正式回复，并确认
Dear Profeor ___,
It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具体时间 in/at 地点,which focuses on the topic of主题
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主题involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 时间, 另一个安排.
I really hope you can make it.If it is poible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文：
Dear Profeor Liu,
It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.
I really hope you can make it.If it is poible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.
Li Ming,
The Supervisor of XXX
b) 申请信
学校组织社团评优，要写申请。你是学校创新社（Innovation Agency）的负责人，请你代表你们社参与评优，写一封申请信。
范文：
Dear Sir or Madame,
Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living .building to make it acceible/easy to wheelchairs..
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
c) 回复投诉信（对别人投诉的回复和安抚）：承担责任，尝试挽回
有人投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生表现糟糕，部分原文：
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.
范文：
Dear Sir,temporary administration aistant you received from my organization, .We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Mingd) 销售信（空格处填入产品名）
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.
First, we managed to avoid paing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.
We look forward for you to favor us an order.
e) 现场笔录证明
You’ve come acro a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a paerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witne involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The proce of this emergency
Witne on a Crash
It was 时间 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.
Signature:Li Ming
(2) Notice——通知、告示
a) 失物招领（Lost and Found）：信息要有所保留，不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED（电子辞典）
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary （留一个最大特征来核实对方身份）
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
