作文 “参考”范文
2002年1月四级作文题
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus假设你是
李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、
价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
Dear Mr.President,
I am sophomore from the Department of Law.I am writing the letter in purpose
of complaining about the food and service in the canteen on campus.
To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the
canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.
Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even
afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of
the canteen always seem untidy.
To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of
competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens
should be subject to the students’ supervision.Dining is an everyday iue for
students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore, I sincerely hope this
letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above
be solved as soon as poible.Li Ming
注: 书信写作格式：
缩进式：
Dear Sir or Madam:
As I am planning to take College English Test Band 4 (CET-4 ), I have decided to place an order of some CET-4 books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books.Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service.Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2005.I have arranged to pay for the service.
I would like to expre my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
齐头式：
Dear Sir or Madam:
As I am planning to take College English Test Band 4 (CET-4 ), I have decided to place an order of some CET-4 books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books.Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service.Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to
deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2005.I have arranged to pay for the service.
I would like to expre my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
1）称呼：
（1）写给机构：
A.认识负责人：Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Sir/Madam, To whom it may
concern,
B.不认识负责人：Dear Mr./Ms.President/Profeor/Manager/Editor
(Michael) Wang,
（2）写给个人：
A.关系不亲密：Dear Mr./Ms.President/Profeor/Manager/Editor
(Michael) Wang,
B.关系亲密：Dear Michael,
2）正文：
3）落款：
（1）祝福语：Best wishes!/The best regards!
（2）签名：Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3、印象原则：书写工整、卷面整洁、字迹清晰
4、首段写法：
1）自我介绍：
（1）I am a staff member from Microsoft China Corporation.
（2）I am a/an freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate
from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature in Beijing
University.
2）写作目的：
I am writing the letter in purpose of expreing/airing diatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding/concerning the service of our canteen.
5、尾段写法：
1）表示感谢：
（1）My thanks to you for your generous help are beyond words.
（2）Words fail me when I want to expre my sincere gratitude to you.
（3） I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind
aistance you rendered me.
2）期待回信：
（1）I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon.
（2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
（3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
