考研英语待批改作文： 8-10分
dear mr.yu, yours sincerely, li ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： dear mr.yu, i will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discu how my education and experience match.thank you for your consideration. yours sincerely, li ming 8分
同学你好，要注意控制字数，考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文没有大问题，但是你对介词的使用不太清楚，这说明你的语感还不太好，因此，建议你多读一些英文书籍。篇2：2015考研英语 小作文求职信(8-10分)范文赏析一 8-10分
dear sir or madam, i just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingi would like to apply for a position as a sales manager. i will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discu how my education and experience match.thank you for your consideration. yours sincerely， li ming 2016考研英语求职信范文及写作思路 2016考研英语复习已经进入倒计时，在不到两个月的复习时间里，作文复习无疑是近阶段的重点。书信作为应用文的常考类型更是我们复习的重点，在考研英语书信各种备考类型中，迄今为止求职信还没有考过。鉴于此，文都考研高端辅导中心的老师特别为2016考研学员编写此文，希望大家通过本文可以掌握求职信(letter of application for a job)的写作方法及常用表达。 1.求职信模拟题及范文
题目：directions: you have seen a job of aistant manager advertised in a newspaper.write a letter to the personnel manager to: 1) apply for the post, and 2) outline your experiences and qualifications. do not sign your own name at the end of your letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the addre. 范文：
dear sir or madam, i graduated with a bachelor’s degree in human resource with honors in july, 2013.i am convinced that the relevant knowledge acquired in university will lay a solid foundation for my future career.another point i want to draw your attention to is that i have taken an active part in a wide range of campus activates.in the due proce, my team spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.enclosed with the letter is my resume which further details my qualification and experience. if you could grant me an interview, i will be highly grateful.i can be reached at the 54545454.thank you for your consideration and looking forward to your favorable reply. yours sincerely, li ming 2.求职信写作思路
①求职意图+信息来源
②教育背景+工作经验+性格特点+求职动机
③联系方式+期望(面试机会、尽快回信)+感谢 3.常用词汇句型点拨
①引言
(1) i am writing in response to your advertisement in „
(2) i would like to apply for the position of „ you advertised in„
(3) further to your advertisement in„ for„, i would very much like to be considered for this vacancy. (5) i am interested in the post„x suggested that i should write to you.enclosed you will find (a copy of my resume). ② 发展
(1) i graduated from„ with a „degree in„
(2) i have been working in„ since my graduation and have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field. (3) i am a rational and diligent young man with good interpersonal skills. (4) i am used to working under preure and also (5) i am experienced in„, which i believe qualifies me for the position of „
③ 结尾
(1) i hope you would consider my application favorably and grant me an interview. (2) i do hope that after reviewing my enclosed resume you will kindly give me an interview. (3) i have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experiences. (4) i should be glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired. (5) you favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. 4.求职信变体
①求学信求学信申请奖学金 (考研中尚未考过) 求职信与求学信大同小异，不似求职信看中工作能力，求学信在主体段落写作时更强调教育背景和学习能力。
②招聘通知 (英语一10年考过;英语二15年考过) 招聘信中对于招聘者提出的要求其实就是求职信中求职者的资质。所谓学而不思则罔，在学习过程中要学会举一反三，从各类型书信中找到共性与规律，提高学习效率，事半功倍。
