对手机的观点作文范文（精选多篇）

推荐第1篇：作文观点具有启发性

考场作文得分指要之观点具有启发性

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【基础知识】

《考试大纲》对高考作文\"发展等级\"有这样一个要求：透过现象深入本质，揭示事物内在的因果关系，观点具有启发性。所谓“观点”，即人们对事物和现象的看法；所谓“启发”，即阐明的道理能引起读者的思考并使其有所领悟；“观点具有启发性”，则指文章中观点富含哲理、思辩性，能引发读者联想，使人看后豁然开朗，加深或拓展对某个问题的认识。总之，文章要深刻，能引起读者灵魂的震颤，从而产生心灵的共鸣，获得思想境界的升华。

【技法点拨】

在写作过程中，考生要想实现这一发展等级，需在文章的叙述中渗透感悟、议论中点亮哲思、抒情中渗透理性。那么这就要求考生注意日常生活训练。培养自己正确的世界观、人生观和价值观，形成良好的思维品质，并用科学的唯物辩证法去看世界、辨事理。也就是说，要增强几方面的意识：

（1）从道德、精神层面思考生活的意识。人生包含物质与精神两个层面，人的存在更重要的是精神的培养和道德的完善。具体到写作时，要体现对社会责任的承担，对人格、信念的尊重等。

（2）敬畏生命、保护生命的意识。人生来是平等的，人是社会最宝贵的资源。因此，具体在写作时要体现对人的生存权利和发展权利的尊重，着眼于对生命价值和生命意义的认识理解和珍爱。

（3）关注社会、关注民生的意识。思考历史文化的发展传承、科技创新与社会民生的关系、社会发展与和谐的关系等。具体到写作时，可涉及如何继承春节、元宵节、端午节文化，瘦肉精事件与企业文化、社会责任，日本地震的抗震救灾与国际影响等。

（4）思考人与自我、人与社会、人与自然的关系的意识。从自我角度说，要有积极的价值观和处世态度，要有坚韧顽强、执着沉静的品格，要自立、自强、自尊、自爱。从人与社会的关系说，要有崇尚公平正义、博爱宽容、欣赏倾听、团结合作的生活原则。从人与自然角度说，要认识到社会环境与自然环境的协调、发展与自然的和谐，现在和将来的统一等。

【经典引路】

西风胡杨

潘岳

胡杨，是我平生所见最坚韧的树。……

胡杨，是我平生所见最无私的树。……

胡杨，是我平生所见最包容的树。……

胡杨，是我平生所见最悲壮的树。胡杨生下来一千年不死，死后一千年不倒，倒下去一千年不朽。它们生前为所挚爱的热土战斗到最后一刻，死后仍奇形怪状地挺立在战友与敌人之间，它们让战友落泪，它们让敌人尊敬。那亿万棵宁死不

屈、双拳紧握的枯杨，似一幅悲凉壮丽的冬天童话。一看到他们，就想起无数中国古人的气节，一种凛凛然、士为知己而死的气节。

胡杨并不孤独。……

胡杨孕育了整个西域文明。……

站在这孑然凄立的胡杨林中，我想哭，想为那些仍继续拼搏的战士而哭，我想为倒下去的伤者而哭，我想为那死而不朽的精神而哭。我想让更多的人在这片胡杨林中都好好地哭上一哭，也许这些苦涩的泪水能化成细雨再救活几株胡杨。然而我不会哭。因为这不是英雄末路的悲怆？更不是传教士的无奈，因为胡杨还在，胡杨的精神还在，生命还在，苍天还在，苍天的眼睛还在。那些伤者将被疗治，那些死者将被祭奠，那些来者将被鼓励。

文章中的胡杨，客观上来讲，不过是西北荒漠一种耐干旱，耐盐碱，抗风沙的物种，然而在作者潘岳笔下，胡杨“是我平生所见最坚韧的树。„„是我平生所见最无私的树。„„是我平生所见最包容的树。„„是我平生所见最悲壮的树”。显然，作者眼里，胡杨已不再单纯是一个物种，它已经被作者赋予精神层面的意义-------一种生命代表，一种“千年不死，千年不倒，千年不腐”的生命奇迹！这就让读者在震撼之余也进行生命的思考，从而为全文叙写注入了奔涌的情感和深刻的思想。

【佳作展示】

《说\"安\"--女性颂歌》

古人造字，寓形于意。何为\"安\"也?室中有女即为\"安\"。

女子，柔软如水的人儿，在古时，地位是如此卑微，终日闭户不出，夙兴夜寐，或织布纺纱，或煮饭浆衣。室有女子，阖家平安——女子，也应为一家之顶梁。

可这世上又有多少流言诽毁女子!什么\"红颜祸水\"，什么\"红颜误国\"，似乎所有的罪恶安在女子身上都是那么合情合理。

纣王好色淫乱，暴戾昏庸，惹得民怨沸腾，群起攻之，但凭什么非说妲己是妖精转世、祸国元凶？唐玄宗迷醉沉沦，荒淫误国，似乎只要扯出杨玉环做挡箭牌便能得到几分宽恕，却又何须以“在天愿作比翼鸟”的盟誓来掩盖“宛转蛾眉马前死”的冤魂？吴三桂借口“冲冠一怒为红颜”，用“情圣”的披风遮掩“叛臣贼子”的心肝，但为什么将陈圆圆当作亡国的“祸水”咒骂唾弃？林觉民一纸《与妻书》的诀别成就了千古英名，可想到他那“意映卿卿”凄苦的下半生，谁又能说林觉民的壮烈不是和对妻子的薄幸紧密相连？

女子使国不安?女子使家不宁?

那么是谁舍弃了少女清白的名声和恋人深深的眷爱，远赴吴国，为祖国的胜利奉献出自己的一切？是那个“沉鱼落雁，闭月羞花”的浣纱女啊！她用自己的牺牲，换来了国家的安定繁荣，换来了百姓的安居乐业！

那么是谁别离了绿柳夹河而列，长风挟云朵翩跹而来的繁华长安，甘愿远赴大漠黄沙，经受塞外荒原的朔风沙石吹打，换取中原免遭战火涂炭？是那个“意态由来画不成”的弱女子啊！她用纤弱的肩膀，为大汉王朝撑起一片安定、安宁、安全的天空！

那么又是谁兴科举、用贤能，广开言路，严谨治国，发展生产，兴修水利，开创了中国封建时代的又一片辉煌？是那个“无字碑头字皆满，功过留与后人评”

的中国历史上唯一的女皇帝啊!她用智慧和坚强，打造了一派平安盛世的繁荣景象！

由西施到明妃，由明妃到武后，她们告诉世人：女子也能撑起一片天空，女子真是平安的福祉啊！

室中有女便为“安”，有女子的家方成真的家，重女子的国才是“安”之国——安详的国家，安逸的国家，安然的国家啊！

[技法点评]

本文为了将\"安\"说得富有启发性，作者将视角投向社会历史文化中的特殊人群---女性，通过对她们\"不安与安\"的独特理解爆发出自己思想的深度。我们这个有着几千年文明的民族，在相当长的一段时期内对女性带有歧视性甚至侮辱性的认识。而这篇文章，由\"安\"的造字说起，联想到\"室中有女即为\'安\"\'--\"女子与\'安\'\"的概念浮出水面，这对于传统认识来说，是个不小的突破，接下来在替女子鸣不平的文字中，众多史事如数\"家珍\"。借几个排比段以不容置疑的语气高唱了一曲女性颂歌。由此观之：本文的\"亮点\"，凭的是作者的才识与胆识，凭的是作者对女性生命意义和生命价值的的再思考、再认识，这样的文章表达才能引人深思、引起共鸣！

《泥水里的笑容》

在小宾馆旁边的巷子里，每到夜晚，总会有几个外地来的打工者横七竖八地躺在那里。我每天早晨从宾馆里走出来，总能看见他们运货用的平板车和他们夜里盖在身上的脏衣服——人是看不见了，他们5点多就去什么地方上工了。

对我这样住在宾馆里的人，他们似乎是不敢看，常常回避我的好奇眼神。爸爸说，他们是农民，是冲破阻力从家里走出来离开土地的农民！

农民，是的，我看得出来——从他们脸上的沟壑里，分明流淌着浑浊的泥水，笑起来的时候，那泥水里像长出了稻子。那当然不是稻子，是尘土？亦或是沧桑？我说不清楚。

我所好奇的，是这些窘迫的农民，为什么总能让自己的喜悦，透过层层茧和疲惫，从筋骨里流露出来。我猜想，他们的喜悦，是从破了“守土地”“守老家”“守祖坟”的观念那一天萌生出来的！他们终于离开了“种地生娃”的传统规则统治下的那片黑湿的土地，离开了没有富裕希望的生活。他们终于可以在日落之后依旧劳动—一有偿劳动而不是回家睡觉了！所以，在他门饱尝辛酸苦楚、五味杂陈的城市生活之后，漾在脸上的表情仍是朴实的笑容。

对他们而言，冲破束缚了他们一千多年前的所谓精神规则，仅这一点，就足以使他们满面春风了。

我简直不能抑制自己为他们的喜悦而感到的兴奋！因为我在历史书中学到的，那一千多年来日复一日索然无味的农民生活终于在我眼前土崩瓦解了！这个社会最顽固的封建文化精神规则终于在被斩断枝叶的几十后即将被连根拔起了！我怎能不快慰！

我了解“农民问题”是让朱总理失眠的第一原因，困为农民穷。而现在，我敢断言，农民不会这样一直穷下去，一如一千多年那样顽固地守在社会底层。因为第一，让农民穷的政治规则变了。第二，让农民穷的规则也变了。

农民的命运，从他们进城来的第一个微笑开始转变。当然，我所看到的，只是农民笑容的一个缩影，还有在农村，城乡结合部甚至是国外的各种各样的打破精神规则而从此笑对人生的笑容！

每当巷子里的农民叔叔发现我在在看他的时候，他总是羞涩地笑着走开，好像怕我看穿他想给自己的爱人买一件新衣裳似的。

[技法点评]

作者有较强的关注社会、民生的意识，笔落凡俗人生的喜怒哀乐、社会万象的真善丑美，写出的文字自然有令人感动的温度和震撼的力量。作者对“规则”的理解大气，不局限于校规、赛规的简单类推，而涉及人类发展的根本规则。他将城市化进程中的农民问题作为探讨的话题，这样“规则”便超越了庸常意义，显得开阔、冷峻、高远。同时，作者对农民问题的认识具有进步意义。农民问题中存在的旧有观念既是国家政府应面对的，也是农民自身应认识到的。这种自上而下的自觉意识使得“那一千多年来日复一日索然无味的农民生活终于在我眼前土崩瓦解了!这个社会最顽固的封建文化精神规则终于在被斩断枝叶的几十年后即将被连根拔起了!”对此，作者的观点很深刻且不同凡俗的。

【新题演练】

[文题展示] 阅读下面的材料，写一篇不少于800字的文章

两只陌生的蜗牛在某个路口相遇，它们彼此用触角碰了碰，互致问候，然后各自继续朝相反的方向爬去。 分别后的它们有了相同的想法：对方这么急着朝我来过的路爬去，肯定有什么事，一定是那路上有什么好东西我没发现。这样想着，两只蜗牛同时掉转头，朝来路爬去。忙碌的蜗牛在不知不觉中又爬回了各自的起点。

[思路点拨]

作文的审题立意首先要学会探究材料，多问“为什么”。如；为什么两只蜗牛不停地忙碌，结果却是回到起点；为什么分别后它们有了相同的想法等。当有了答案，好的立意随即产生： 命运掌握在自己手中，不要在盲目的忙碌中迷失了前进的方向。

相信自己的选择，不要轻易怀疑自己、否定自己。

有了明确的目标，人生的航船才会找到前进的方向。

推荐第2篇：对立观点英语作文

总：对立观点型框架构造

（一）不可否认的是，____成为一个____的话题。人们在这个问题上的观点不一。有的人持赞成的观点。他们认为____。他们还认为______。

（二）然而，其他人持相反的观点。他们认为____。他们认为________。

（三）我个人认为，我们不应走极端。一方面，我们应该______________。另一方面，我们应该____________。

一、第一段框架构造

1.首句：引出话题

（1）不容否认：There is no denying the fact that

There’s no doubt in saying that

There’s no exaggeration in saying that

It is undeniable that

（2）众所周知：It’s known to us all that

It’s universally acknowledged that

It’s commonly agreed that

It’s widely believed that

（3）明显的：It’s conceivable that

可想而知的

It’s obvious that It’s apparent that It’s unquestionable that

（4）成为热烈讨论的话题：sth（has been） a hotly debated topic

sth（has been） a heated discuion

has been brought into public focus.has been much controversy over the iue of

There

（5）成为流行趋势：a popular \prevailing trend

变得越来越流行：gain increasing popularity

（6）引起广泛关注：which draws\arouses wide public focus\attention 2.次句：人们对此看法不一

People’s opinions differ sharply on this iue. People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial iue.Attitudes towards the iue differ from person to person.3.第三句：

(1)Some hold the positive view.To begin with, they argue that (2) Furthermore, they (also) claim\say that

(3) Last but not least, they deem that\They are in favor of *对立观点中的三点论：

(1)首先：To begin with\ In the first place\ Initially\ First and foremost 其次：Furthermore\In the second place\What’s more\Moreover 最后：Last but not least\In addition\Finally (2) On the one hand, … On the other hand, …

For one thing…,For another… *我认为

argue\claim\maintain\say\deem\think\believe+that hold the view\opinion+that 初高中海量作文大全

小升初 中考满分 高考满分 高考零分

harbor the idea+that take the attitude+that point out +that *例: 1.Topic: On TV Programs of Dating

There is no denying the fact that TV Programs of Dating has been a hotly debated topic in China, which draws wide public attention.

Recently, it is undeniable that there has been much controversy over the iue of TV programs of dating, which arouses wide public concern.

Recently, it is universally acknowledged that the iue of TV programs of dating has been brought into public focus.

2.Topic: Should Firecrackers Be Banned Some hold the positive view .To begin with, they argue that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved.（是一项中国古***俗，应该被保留下来）

Furthermore, they also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.（为节日增添乐趣，使大人和孩子都可以享受乐趣）

Without firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerle. Topic: Should Firecrackers Be Banned

Those who are in favor of setting off firecrackers claim

that it is an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.

They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.

Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerle. 3.Topic: On TV Programs of Dating(positive) Some hold the positive view.First and foremost, they believe that it has provided an open platform for the young people to get acce to know different kinds of girls. Furthermore, they also claim

that TV program of Dating gives them a chance to show up and pursue their beloved ones.

二、第二段框架构造

(1) Others, however, hold the opposite view \have different opinions.First and foremost, they maintain that (2) What’s more, they also argue that (3) Finally, they claim that *例: 1.Topic: Should Firecrackers Be Banned

Others, however, hold the opposite view.First and foremost, they maintain that firecrackers should be banned.Furthermore, they point

out that firecrackers are responsible for fires, which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.In addition, they also

argue that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.2.Topic: On TV Programs of Dating(negative)

Others, however, have different opinions.To begin with, they consider dating or pursuing love is a private thing, which shouldn’t be carried out in public.What’ s more, it has bad influence on the young people, because sometimes the guests on TV dating programs show many bad morals, like attaching much importance to appearance or wealth.

三、第三段框架构造：我的看法

(一)框架构造一：两手抓:从两个点总结归纳,提出看法

1.（1）Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes. （2）As far as I am concerned,

From my own perspective,

（3）all the above opinions make sense.

there are probably some truths in both arguments.\there is truth in the arguments of these two parts.（4）Here I would like to have a balanced view.

Here I would like to take a more balanced position. 2.一方面，肯定A

On the one hand, …

\For one thing… 3.一方面，也肯定B On the other hand, … \For another… *例: 1.Topic:Should Firecrackers Be Banned

Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes.On the one hand, we should preserve the old custom of

letting off firecrackers; on the other hand, we should make it harmle.This can be done by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.

（二）框架构造二：一边倒:从一个点总结归纳,提出看法

1.Taking into consideration of both sides /Taking both sides of the iue into consideration, I tend to favor/side with /support the latter/former view. 2.Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the latter. 3.Both sides have something right.But from my point of view, it is suggested that the advantages of _____outweigh the disadvantages. *例: Topic: On TV Programs of Dating Taking into consideration of both sides, I tend to favor/side with/support the former view.In my personal

opinion, TV dating should not be prohibited.As long as this kind of programs are guided and supervised properly, they will function well in providing chances for the single and entertainment for the audience.

推荐第3篇：英语作文 观点类

英语作文常用句式总结

开头：

Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…

人们一般认为…

Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为…

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…

A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为… 引出不同观点: People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that… .However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．

People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to… 关于….人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.结尾 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…

Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议: It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously，if we want to do something… , it is eential that…

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we…只有这样, 我们才能… It must be realized that…我们必须意识到… 预示后果:

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unle we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会… It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证：

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do …than to do….在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why… 给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …

Why did… ? For one thing… For another….Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会…?一个原因是…另一个原因是…或许其主要原因是….I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下: 列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是… People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,… It was obvious that…很显然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…

It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…

认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明… 如何连接： 强调

still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially.Obviously, clearly.比较

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, in contrast, yet, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, however, different from, neverthele, otherwise, whereas, unlike 列举

for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except (for), to illustrate

时间

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序

firstly, secondly, thirdly, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能

presumably, probably, perhaps...解释

in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进

What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, as well as, additionally, again.让步

although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折

however, rather than, instead of, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas

原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.

结果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他

Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose,

to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case, 图表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph…如图所示… The graph shows that… 图表显示…

As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出… From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知… All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…

The increase of ….in the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.

Different people have different views on ______.Some people hold the idea that ________while others argue that______________.

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the ______opinion.For one thing, I firmly believe ________.For another, _________.Just think of _________, who__________.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that____________.Only if _______ can we ___________, just as the saying goes,_____________.

常用句型： 1．表示原因

1)There are three reasons for this． 2)The reasons for this are as follows． 3)The reason for this is obvious．

4)The reason for this is not far to seek． 5)The reason for this is that．．． 6)We have good reason to believe that．．． 2．表示好处

1)It has the following advantages． 2)It does us a lot of good． 3)It benefits us quite a lot． 4)It is beneficial to us． 5)It is of great benefit to us． 3．表示坏处

1)It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2)It does us much harm． 3)It is harmful to us．

4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1)It is important(neceary, difficult, convenient, poible)for sb．to do sth． 2)We think it neceary to do sth． 3)It plays an important role in our life． 5．表示措施

1)We should take some effective measures．

2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer) the difficulties．

3)We should do our utmost in doing sth．

4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted (faced) with． 6．表示变化

1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．

3)The computer has brought about(导致) many changes in education． 7．表示事实、现状

1)We cannot ignore the fact that．．． 2)No one can deny the fact that．．． 3)There is no denying the fact that．．．

4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in． 5)However，that’s not the case． 8．表示比较

1)Compared with A，B．．．

2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV． 3)There is a striking contrast between them． 9．表示数量

1)It has increased(decreased)from．．．to．．．

2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800，000．

3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January． 10．表示看法

1)People have(take，adopt，aume)different attitudes towards sth．

2)People have different opinions on this problem． 3)People take different views of(on)the question． 4)Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．． 11．表示结论

1)In short，it can be said that ．．． 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows． 3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ．．． 12．套语

1)It is well known to us that ．．． 2)As is known to us，．．．

3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about． 4)From the graph(table, chart)listed above，it can be seen that ．．．

5)As a proverb(谚语) says,“Where there is a will, there is a way．

二、图表式作文

It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies).At the point of (接近)X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一个原因).More importantly, …(第二个原因).Most important of all, …(第三个原因).From the above discuions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time (if neceary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).

三、辩论式议论文 模版1 Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测. 模版2 People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测. 模版3 There is no consensus [kən\'sensəs] 一致of opinions among people about X(争论的焦).Some people are of the view that 观点1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion(观念) is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discuion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that ……

过度词语(transitional words)： 1.Indicating addition（递加）：

again/ also/ and/ as well as / besides/ finally/ first/ further/ furthermore/ in addition/ moreover/ not only… but also…

2.Indicating conceion（让步）：

after all/ although/ in spite of/ although/ at least/ anyhow/ clearly/ even if/ even though/ neverthele/ of course/ though / yet/ It is true that… 3.Iindicating stre（强调）：

above all/ certainly/ first and foremost/ indeed/ in fact / in particular/ most importantly/ surely 4.Indicating time（时间）：

after a while/ afterward/ as long as/ at last/ at length/ at the moment/ at that time/ before/ early or late/ sooner or later/ formerly/ immediately/ in the meantime/ in the past / lately/ later/ meanwhile/ now/ once/ once upon a time/ presently/ shortly/ simultaneously/ since/so far/ soon / soon after/ subsequently/ then/ thereafter/ until / when 5.Indicating place（地点）：

above/ adjacent to/ below/ elsewhere/ farther on/ here/ near/ nearby/ on the other side/ opposite to/ there/ to the east / to the left/ wherever 6.Indicating example（举例）：

for example/ for instance/ Specifically,/ That is to say,/ A case in point is sb.(sth.)/ Take sb.(sth.) for example 7.Indicating comparison(比较)：

akin to / as it were/ by comparison/ equally/ in the same way/ like/ likewise/ similarly/ too/ compared with 8.Indicating contrast（对照）：

but/ despite/ however/ in contrast to/ instead / neverthele/ on the contrary/ on the other hand/ unlike/ whereas/ compared to 9.Indicating purpose（目的）：

for the purpose of / in order that/ in order to/ so that 10.Indicating cause and effect（因果关系）：

accordingly/ thus/as a result/ because / consequently/ for this reason/ hence/ so/ so that / therefore/ 11.Indicating conclusion or summary（概括或小结）： all in all,/ As has been said(mentioned) above,/ In a word,/ In brief,/ In conclusion,/ In short,/ In summary,/ On the whole,/ To sum up,/ To be brief

推荐第4篇：观点类英语作文

观点类作文模板(一)

① People’s opinions are always different once they talk about _____________.Those who ______________________________ maintain that __________________________.They also firmly believe that ___________________________（第一种观点）

② Many people think otherwise.On the one hand, __________________________.On the other hand, __________________________________.（第二种观点）

③My own opinion is that __________________________.If we want to _______________________, we have to___________________________.（明确自己的观点） 范文My View on Job-Hopping

1.有些人喜欢始终从是一种工作，因为„„

2.有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为„„

3.我的看法

People’s opinions are always different once they talk about job-hopping.Those who never change their jobs throughout their lives maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so what’s the point in changing to another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge.

Many people think otherwise.On the one hand, if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditions nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave.On the other hand, they hold that life is but once and job-hopping can provide rich and exciting experiences.

My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-developing information era, has become more than common and acceptable.If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger.So life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it.

观点类作文模板(二)

① Different people have different views on ________________.Some people think that _______________________________, while others argue that _____________________.(提出两种观点)

② As far as I am concerned, I agree with the _______ opinion.For one thing, I firmly believe _____________.For another, ________________.Just think of _________________, who __________.（明确表明自己同意某种观点）

③ Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that _______________________.Only if ___________ can we ____________, just as the saying goes ______________________.（结论）

范文

My View on Opportunity

1.有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。

2.我的看法„„

3.结论

Different people have different views on opportunity.Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world, while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route.

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.For one thing, I firmly believe that opportunities are everywhere around us.No person will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time, because “every dog has its day”.For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves.Just think of Newton, who discovered the Law of Gravity when many people had watched an apple falling ahead of them.

Taking all factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society.Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the old saying goes, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.”

My View on Students’ Taking Part-Time Jobs

1.有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有益的

2.有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有害的

3.我的看法

Nowadays, ____________________.However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.(提出某一事物)

Those who are in favor of claim that ____________ has a lot of advantages.Firstly, _______.Secondly, ________.Last but not the least, _________.（支持者的观点：利）

Those who are opposed to ______ hold thatthere are still many disadvantages of ______.In the first place, _______.In the second place, ________.Finally, _________.（反对者的观点：弊）

All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.____________.（作者的观点： 利大于弊）

Advantages and Disadvantages of Overseas Study

1.海外留学的好处

2.海外留学的副作用

3.结论

Like anything else, overseas study has both advantages and disadvantages.（提出某一现象） The main benefits of studying overseas are as follows.First, _______________.In the second place, ___________________________.Last but not the least, __________________.（谈“利”）

However, the negative effects a re obvious.To begin with, ___________.Second, ________ _______________.Finally, ___________.（谈“弊”）

In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh its disadvantages.Once they return home, the overseas students will ______________________.（结论或自己的看法）

批驳类作文模板

Nowadays，there is a growing tendency ________________.(第一句提出现象) Personally

speaking, I do not agree with this practice at all.（第二句表明自己的观点)

First of all, ___.Second, ________.Third, _________.（分三方面进行批驳）

My conclusion is that _____________.（结论）

Recently, it seems that ___________.Many people, especially _______, think that it will certainly do good to __________ because _________.Moreover, ________________.(说明某种做法及支持这种做法的观点)

After careful consideration, I have to say ________________.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, __________________________.（从几方面进行批驳）

We can see clearly that although ______ may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about.It seems neceary ___________________.（结论）

My View on Teenagers Studying Abroad

1.现在很多青少年出国留学

2.有些人认为这种做法是有益的

3.我认为这种做法是不对的

Recently, it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools.Many people, especially their parents, think that it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance, Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

After careful consideration, I have to say that the above view is more than biased.On the one hand, early independent life is not necearily good, if the child can not receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents.On the other hand, the educational quality is also a problem — too many foreign schools aim at earning money.When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers’ study abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about.It seems neceary for the parents and the young students as well to make a thorough investigation before making a decision to study overseas.办法类作文模板

How to Succeed in a Job Interview

1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是 „„

A job interview is vital to the job-hunting proce in that it you are succeful in it, you stand a good chance of finally obtaining the ideal job.Then how can we succeed in a job interview?

In the first place, you should dre and behave properly in order to make a good first impreion on the interviewer.In the second place, when it comes to talking, you should speak of your expertise and special abilities clearly and honestly.What’s more, self-confidence is also an important factor, telling the interviewer that you will face the challenge whenever you encounter difficulties.

You will succeed in a job interview as long as you put the above principles into practice.As a result, you will most probably obtain the job you have been demanding of.

When we ____, we always _____, I hope the following methods , based on my personal experience, can be helpful to all of you.(引出重要问题)

On the one hand, ______.On the other hand, __________.（阐述几种方法）

From the above analysis, the best way to _______ is to ___________.（一句话为全文作总结）

How to Improve Our Listening Ability

1.要提高英语听力， 一方面要„„

2.另一方面要„„

3.结论

推荐第5篇：观点表达型作文

观点表达型作文

分类：正反观点

选择类观点

写作步骤：

1、有人认为X是好事，赞成X， 为什么？

2、有人认为X是坏事，反对X， 为什么？

3、我的看法

有用的作文句子结构：

1． 段首句

1） There are different opinions among people as to….Some people suggest that….

关于……人们有不同的观点.一些人认为……

2） People’s opinions about … vary from person to person.Some people say that….To

them,….关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为/说……,在他们看来,……

2.中间段落句

1）On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ….At the same time, they say….相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……

2) However, other people hold a different point of view….

但是另外一些人却持不同的观点.

3) Those who criticize/oppose to/ object to…argue/ maintain/ aert/ believe / hold the idea that ….那些批评/反对…..的人认为……..

3.末尾段

1）Nonethele, I believe that…is more advantageous.

尽管如此,我相信……更有利.

2) I fully agree with the statement that …because….

我完全同意……这种观点/陈述,主要理由如下:……

3) For my part/ As to me/As far as I am concerned, I’d like to agree with the former/ my favor goes to the first view.

就我而言,我赞成前一种观点.

4) I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.

我比较赞同后一种观点.

5) In my opinion, both sides are partly right.When we… we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision.

我认为双方都有一定的道理.当我们……, 我们应该全面地考虑问题,然后作出正确的选择.

Exercises:

Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Luck?

1． 有些人认为某些数字会带来运气

2． 也有些人认为数字与运气无关

3． 试说明你的看法

Reading Selectively or Extensively?

1． 有人认为读书要有选择

2． 有人认为应当博览群书

3． 我的看法

推荐第6篇：四级作文对比观点

Tips on Writing by Comparison and Contrast

一、写作要诀

正反对比观点的议论文是四级考试中出现最多的一种作文题型，希望能引起大家足够的重视！

1、对比观点型文章的谋篇布局及写作要点：

第一段，提出主题。并阐明在此问题上人们的观点很难达成一致。

第二段，就其中一种观点，进行论据阐述，同学们在套用该模板时应注意，第一个观点阐述的多是从反面进行论证的观点。阐述另一方的观点，论述时要强调这种观点对人的影响和作用，这往往是好的方面的影响和作用。

第三段，阐述自己的立场，我们的模板给出的观点是两者皆有利弊，这种立场阐述技巧顺应现在的命题趋势。

2、取得高分的秘诀：

1）多背诵。多研究和记忆近十年四级真题中该类型的经典范文，掌握其中的经典句型2）用词考究，句式多变。避免重复使用被用烂的词和句子，如：think, first, second, third；和文章脉络；抑或多掌握几个比较经典的作文模板，练习准确套用。 Every coin has two sides等。在句式的使用方面，建议多考虑尝试使用倒装句、强调句等特殊句式。避免出现满篇都是简单句。

3）勤默写。在掌握经典句型和范文的基础上，反复默写核对，查找错误，逐步改进。4）勤仿写。在前面的基础上，参照其它一些模拟题目，利用已熟练掌握的句型或范文5）要有时间和速度概念。考试时要求在30分钟内完成写作部分，所以自己在平时练习最后要做到熟练掌握，不出错。 结构不断练习，达到运用自如的程度。 的过程中务必要注意把握时间和准确度的关系，尽量做到两者呈正比。即：速度快，准确度也高。

二、最新经典模板

模板 1：

When it comes to , people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values.

Those who advocate 观点一 believe that it is le likely to 具体内容if 条件, since 原因说明.For one thing, 支持论据一.For another, 影响或方面can appear and even cause 结果.Neverthele, those who insist on 观点二say that people can 支持论据.First of all, one may always go after in order to.Furthermore, onlycan keep one abreast of time.Most important of all,is the source of power.

All in all, I think we should look at both sides of the coin.That is because the significance of观点一can be overvalued as well as that of观点二.Based on the above statements, I do think we should realize that.In conclusion,.6）临场莫紧张，相信自己。 总之一句话，就是“勤能补拙，熟能生巧”。

模板 2：

Recently, there is a prevalent phenomenon that .However, there is no consensus of opinions among all the individuals as to the view of the case.Some would maintian the belief that观点一, while others can’t find their agreement to it.The following lines will convey the arguments of the two sides with discrepancies.

For those who lend their support to the positive trend, their reasons are in varied forms.To begin with,is of extreme significance in the whole view.A prominent example is that实例.Additionally, 论据二 is so indispensable that most individuals would consider it as the major cause of the iue.We can easily notice the fact that .

For those who tend to terminate the iue, they come up with some novel ideas to counter the discuion above.First of all,is always on the top of their list.Take myself as an example, .Furthurmore,provides adequate justifications for the continuence of the iue.For instance, .

As can be concluded from the arguments above.Personally, facing with this controversial matter, what we must insure is that the eence must be absorbed.I sincerely wish that some combinations should be suggested.If it could be realized, our life would be flooded with harmony.

模板3：

There has been an undesirable/growing trend in recent years towards .A recent survey showed thatpercent of respondents rankedas their top priority, compared to the standpoint that.Why is it hard for people to arrive at an agreement on this hot iue ? The views of each side will be illustrated in the following lines.

Those who are on the side of the former view maintain that .First and foremost, .In addition, .However, those who agree with the latter one are of the opinion that.To begin with, .What’s more, .It is self-evident that 事实.

As far as I am concerned, it is sensible that we can see clearly the iue critically.The positive side of it we may make better use of; the negative side of it we may spare no effort to avoid.Only in this way can we guarantee that everything will move forward healthily and smoothly.Thus, the world will be likely to be the one we all are dreaming of.三、常用分段句式

第一段：

1、展现主题、现象或问题类

1) Along with the advance of the society more and more problems/iues are brought to our attention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

2) As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....

随着社会的发展，人们开始关注____________。

3) As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

4) Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges.Recently, the iue of ......has been brought into public focus/concern.

现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

5) Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people\'s attitude towards some traditional practice.

现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

6) Recently the iue of whether or not ...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.

近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

2、引出不同观点

1) People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial iue.

对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

2) People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

3) When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....

提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.

4) When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think that...

提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。

第二段：论证观点一

Those who advocate ...believe that ....The following factors need to be taken into consideration.One very important argument for .....is that....Besides, another more eential factor is that....The third but not the least to be taken seriously is that....

那些支持观点一的人认为____________。具体原因如下。其中一个很重要的因素就是____________。此外，另外一个更必要的因素是____________。第三个值得认真对待且并非不重要的因素是____________。

第三段：转而论证观点二

1) However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而，还有许多人对此持相反观点。

2) Whereas, there are some others who consider it from another or a totally different angle.然而，还有一些人从另外一个角度看待这个问题。

第四段：引出个人观点或结论

1) When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to ...

对两种观点进行综合考虑之后，我较认同_________________。

2) Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...

就我个人而言，我支持后者（前者）___________。

3) Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.

就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。

4) As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.

在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。

5) Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论...。

四、课后练习

任选模板，完成下列作文题目。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled 1.Some people are strongly against campus love.

2.Some people accept it.

3.My view.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有些人认为分数体现能力；

2、有些人则认为分数不一定体现能力；

3、你对此问题的看法

【参考范文】 When it comes to , people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experience and different values.

Those who advocatebelieve that it is le likely to if , since .For one thing, .For another, can appear and even cause .

Neverthele, those who insist on say that people can .First of all, one may always go after in order to.Furthermore, only can keep one abreast of time.Most important of all, is the source of power.

All in all, I think we should look at both sides of the coin.That is because the significance of can be overvalued as well as that of .Based on the above statements, I do think we should realize that .In conclusion,

.【附件】

实战备选题目-模板课后反复练习用

【题目01】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有人认为出国留学是个人发展的最佳选择；

2、也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想；

3、我的看法

【题目02】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、现在大学生宿舍几乎人手一台电脑；

2、有些人认为会促进学生的学习，有些人认为会影响学生的学习；

3、你的看法

【题目03】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled below:

1、对大学生的时间安排有两种看法：有人认为大学生就应该整天读书；有人认为参加体育

锻炼是大学生生活的一部分；

2、你的看法；

3、总结全文

【题目04】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有些人认为挫折是坏事；

2、更多的人并不认为挫折是坏事；

3、你的看法

【题目05】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1、有些人决定毕业后读研；

2、有些人决定毕业后工作；

3、我的看法

推荐第7篇：观点论证型作文

观点论证型作文

观点论证型作文通常是提出一种观点或现象，要求考生对这一观点或现象进行解释或论证，体裁多为议论文。这种题型常见的结构模式是： 第一段：提出某种观点或现象。

第二段：论证该观点或现象的正确性或危害性。

第三段：结论，再次强调主题，或表明自己的态度、做法。

常用模板(一)

It is true that___________.(普遍的观点) However,__________.（不同的观点/现象） I think_______________.（“我”的观点）The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, __________.(论据一) Secondly, ____________.(论据二) For example,_______________.(支持论据二的事例) Thirdly, ______________.(论据三) A case in point is _______________.(支持论据三的事例) It goes without saying/There is no doubt that _______________.(重申观点) Therefore, ___________.(与该观点相符合的做法)In a word,___________.(总结全文)

举例：

Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Wealth and Happine.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.每个人都想获得财富，财富似乎就是幸福 2.其实世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的。

Wealth and Happine

It is true that wealth has always been what people long for.However, wealth doesn’t necearily mean happine in today’s world.I think this is reasonable.The reasons can be listed as follows.

Firstly, good health, which can not be bought with money, also plays an important role in a happy life.Secondly, wealth may encourage those weak—willed people to be addicted to some harmful habits and bring about their own ruin.For example, some people spend money on drugs and gambling which in turn make them having nothing.Thirdly, there are something that are indispensable but pricele.A case in point is love.

There is no doubt that wealth is not equal to happine.Therefore, we should not attach to much importance to wealth.In a word, we should earn money with honest work, but not be crazy about money.

常用模板(二)

Many people believe that _____________.(社会现象/事实现象) The true is deep and profound.As we know,______________.(具体阐述观点的正确性的表现一) In addition, _______________.(具体阐述观点的正确性的表现二)

There are numerous examples supporting this argument.A case in point is

1 ___________.(阐述第一个例子) This is close to suggest _______________.(总结例一，通过举例得出观点正确) For another example, _______.(引出并说明第二个例子) Moreover, _______________.(列举支持论点的具体事例三)

All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(总结上文，重申论点) But (one thing we have to notice is that______________.(提出个人建议) In short,_________.(总结全文，再次强调观点的重要性或正确性)

举例：

Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.怎样理解“有志者事竟成” 2.试举例说明

Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way

Many people believe the proverb “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”.The true is deep and profound.As we know, as long as a person poees a strong will he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is.In addition, if he persists, he will eventually succeed.

There are numerous examples supporting this argument.A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect from the people all over the world.This is close to suggest that strong will is vital factor to one’s final succe.For another example, Cao Xueqin met lots of hardship in his pursuit for literature, but finally completed the world famous book Dreams of Red Chamber.Moreover, among us college students, those who persist studying hard and make it eventually are also good examples.

All mentioned above tell us that if we wish to succeed, we first have a resolution and remember the saying “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”.But one thing we have to notice is that a strong will must be accompanied by a right direction, which shouldn’t be blind.In short, whatever you do, please remember: Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way.

常用模板(三) It is well known that ___________.(开门见山，直接提出论点)The truth is self—evident.No one can deny that ______________.(进一步以我们所知道的道理阐述观点) Therefore, _____________________.(总结第一段，强调要论证的观点) Many remarkable factors / reasons contribute to this argument.First of all, ___________.(列举论证理由一) For example, _____________.(举例说明理由一) What’s more, ________________.(列举论证理由二)Besides, ______________________.(列举论证理由三) All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(承接上文，重申观点) Therefore, there is no denying that ________________.(得出结论或应该采取的做法) In short, _________________.(总结全文，再次强调观点的正确性或重要性)

2 举例：

Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Improving the Chinese People’s English Level.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.提高全民族英语素质的必要性 2.分析其原因 3.你的看法

Improving the Chinese People’s English Level It is well known that the importance of grasping English is overemphasized in China.The truth of it is self—evident.No one can deny that English is quite important to us college students.Therefore, improving Chinese people’s overall English level is quite neceary and urgent.Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.First of all, with the good command of English, we can better communicate with people from different countries and learn from them to improve ourselves.For example, since more foreigners come to China, and more Chinese go abroad, it is becoming urgent for us to study English well, or we will have difficulties in understanding each other.What’s more, with good knowledge of English, we can take in more advanced technology and management experience, which is very important for our modernization construction.Besides, our nation needs a large number of experts who have a good command of foreign languages.All mentioned above tell us that English is of much importance in every respect of china’s development.Therefore, there is no doubt that every one of us should do our best to improve our English quality and get prepared for the coming challenges and opportunities.In short, improving the Chinese people’s English level is a neceity for China’s development in the future.

常用句型：

● 引出格言的常用举例

1) One of the early writers/famous scientists/ancient philosophers said that …

2) Here is an old saying,….It is the experience of our forefathers.However, it is correct in many cases even today.3) Many years ago, a writer/scientist/philosopher remarked(/pointed out/commented) : “…” His words reveals / reflects a truth that….● 举例说明的常用句型： 1) Take … for example,… 2) A good case in point is …

3) Perhaps the most important/telling/dramatic/striking example of … is…

4) I can think of no better illustration of the idea/view than the fact/example/case of ...●事实证明的常用句型：

1) No one can deny/doubt/ignore the fact that …

2) We must face/accept/admit/point out the fact that…

3) It brings out/sets fort/reveals/demonstrates a(n) important(unquestionable) fact

3 that …

4) There is strong/sufficient/considerable evidence that/to show that/as to/against/in favor of …

5) Personal experience / case in history suggest that….●深入阐述的过渡常用句型：

1）But that’s only part of the story/explanation.Perhaps the most significant / remarkable / surprising about … is ….2) Another equally important / eential role (aspect/function/consideration) is….3)… is but one of many effects/aspects.Another is …

4) Besides, / In addition to this, / Apart from this, another way/aspect is … ●结论性结尾的常用句型：

1) From what has been discued above, / Taking into account all these factors, / Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely/reasonably arrive at( come to / reach / draw) the conclusion that …

2) The evidence upon all sides / analysis we have made / reasons we have advanced confirms( points to / leads to) an unshakable conclusion that ….3) In summary/conclusion/a word/short, it is more important/valuable …

Aignments:

一．观点论证型作文训练：

Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Making a Public Speech.You should write at least 120 words(CET-4) or 150 words(CET-6) and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.演讲能力对大学生来说很重要 2.试论证该观点

二．应用文作文训练：

1.四级同学完成Test 6 的写作 2.六级同学完成Test 7的写作

推荐第8篇：观点对比类作文

观点对比类作文

模版一：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。

2．另一些人认为。。。

3．我的看法。。。

The topic of-（主题）is becoming m0re and m0re popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their fav0rite.They hold their view f0r the reason of-（支持A的理由一）What is m0re,-理由二.M0reover,-(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.F0r me, the f0rmer is surely a wise choice.

模板二：

There is a widespread concern over the iue the -作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that -观点一.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,原因一.Furthermore,in the second place，原因二.So it goes without saying that +观点一。

People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that -观点二.In their point of view,on the one hand,原因一.On the other hand,原因二。Therefore,there is no doubt that 观点二。

Aa far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that 观点一或观点二。It is not only because _______,but also because_______.The more_______,the more_______.

Chapter One 文章开头句型

1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.例如：

[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that .......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to ...., some people bielive that .......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true .There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...) [3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that ....They claim/ believe/argue that ...But I wonder/doubt whether.....

高三英语作文专题复习

一、常见的插入语有形容词(词组)、副词、不定式、现在分词短语、介词短语、从句以及固定短语。

1.常见的形容词(词组)、副词作插入语的有:sure enough(果然); strange; worse still(更糟糕的是);most important(最重要的是); honestly; obviously; however; otherwise; luckily; unfortunately; besides; first; second; especially; surprisingly等。 例如: Worse still, the lion could even carry off the baby in its mouth.We must do the experiment carefully; otherwise you\'ll get another result. Honestly, I don\'t need it at the moment. He likes the country, especially in spring

2.常见的不定式有:to tell the truth; to be short(简单地);to begin with(首先); to be sure(自然、当然、果然);to be honest/frank; to make things worse; to make a long story short; to speak of(值得一提的是),to be fair ,to sum up(概括地说) 等。这些插入语表示说话人的态度,在句子中作独立成份。例如:

1,________ the truth, this is all Greek to me.

• A.Tell

B.To tell

C.Telling

D.Told

[Key: B] That\'s a good idea, to be sure! To make things worse, many of the men have gone off to cities in search of higher pay.3.常见的现在分词短语有:generally speaking; frankly speaking; judging from/by; talking of(谈到); considering(考虑到,因为是);putting it mildly(说得客气一点)等。这些分词用来修饰全句。例如: Judging from appearance, he seems to be a strong man.4.常见的介词短语有:in fact; in addition; in a word; on the other hand; in other words; in one\'s opinion; in that case; by the way; of course; as a rule(通常);to one\'s surprise; for example; on the contrary(相反);in a way(在某点上、在某种程度上); for one thing; for another (thing)等。例如:In a way, I think we both won in the game

5.常见的从句有:if you don‘t mind; if you like; if you please; if neceary; if any; if I may say so; if convenient; as it happens等。例如:

You can, ________, come to join us in the game.

A.if you please

B.if you poible C.if you happy

D.if you neceary

[Key: A]

6.常见的固定短语:as a result; that is (to say); what\'s more; as above; all in all(总之),等。例如:

All in all, they have had a wonderful time today.

高考英语作文提分句型短语

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8.不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…

9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discuion/ debate

10.有争议性的问题 a controversial iue

11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12.一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…

13.就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

14.就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16.双方的论点 argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…

18.对…必不可少 be indispensable to …

19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

20.…也不例外 …be no exception

21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…

22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。

23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27.开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

31.从另一个角度 from another perspective

32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33.对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…

34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…

36.综合素质 comprehensive quality

37.无可非议 blamele / beyond reproach

39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

40.应当承认 Admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42.满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progre

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this iue

52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion

53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55.理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56.…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…

57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59.长远利益.interest in the long run

60.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the eence and discard the dregs。

63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth

67.…的健康发展 the healthy development of …

68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。

No garden without weeds。

推荐第9篇：小学生对班干部的观点

小学生对班干部的观点

小学生要当好班干部，首先要了解班里每个人的性格，关心每个同学。然后多为同学服务，只要同学有困难你就会去帮助他们。班干部在工作要经常请教老师，经常与老师交流，把班级里的工作及时向老师反映，多替老师分担一些班级事务。这样才算一个合格的班干部。

1、对学生干部有正确的认识。

学生干部就是指担任了一定领导工作的学生。学生干部作为学生中的领导者不但和广大同学的利益一致，而且又与普通学生有着明显的区别。因此，学生干部的地位和作用主要表现为：集中体现广大同学的意志，代表广大同学行使一定的权力，对广大同学的实践负责。从上述三点来看，学生干部是以为同学服务为根本宗旨的，主要行使引导、组织和协调等职能。

2、学生干部应有的素质

作为一名学生干部，是不是将工作放在第一位，是不是对你的工作热爱、负责。我认为热爱自己的工作是学生干部的首要条件。那么，学生班干部怎样才能热爱自己的工作呢?我认为应该有一颗极度负责的工作心，因为只有从你内心发出的，才是真正的。而作为一名优秀的学生干部，还应该具备以下特点：腿勤、嘴勤、手勤、脑勤。腿勤，同时经常对工作中遇到的一些工作问题加以分析，总结经验，对于提高自身的思维能力，工作能力等有极大的帮助。我们认为，作为班干部应具备的素质：

（1）要有较高的思想觉悟水平：“思想是行动的先导”，因此，具备良好的思想道德素质是一名学生干部应具备的首要素质。我们认为良好的思想道德素质包括以下几个方面：1，尊敬师长，关心同学；2，诚信待人接物。对待老师、同学应真诚、热情，而非一脸勉强的“笑容”，对待各项职责范围内的事务应当诚实，不得弄虚作假。

（2）要自尊、自爱、自信、自强： 学生干部想要在同学中具有影响力，树立自己的威信，就必须在平时的学习生活中注重培养个人能力，提高个人修养。学生干部既要成为学生的“工作领袖”，又要成为学生的“精神领袖”。学生心目中的学生干部应该是出类拔萃的，他们不仅学习成绩要好，而且还应是各方面表现出色的学生。他们在实际工作中应具有团结同学、助人为乐、谦虚谨慎、不骄

不躁、真诚老实、不计较个人得失等优秀思想品质，特别是在遇到困难与挫折时，能努力做到头脑冷静、豁达开朗，严于律己，宽以待人，勇于开展批评与自我批评，增强战胜困难的勇气。自尊、自爱、自信、自强，在同学中有威信。 构。

（3）要有良好的心理素质。良好的心理素质是学生干部对同学实现有效领导的又一重要因素。

3、学习。学生干部首先是学生，学习是学生的职责，作为一名学生干部不但工作要做好还要学习好，要把学习与工作区分开来。虚心向他人学习。“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后。”在实际工作中，作为一名学生干部一定要学会谦虚谨慎，虚心向他人学习来弥补自己的不足。

班干部在于更好的为学生好老师提供交流，但值得一提的是，当班干部切忌不能打小报告，也许你一次两次会受到老师的表扬，但是长久下去老师会怎么想，这个班干部怎么老是打小报告。那么你的班干部职位也就到头了。而且小报告也是恶化班干部和同学之间关系的重要导火线。

但也有学生对班干部认识不足：

认为班干部可以管别人，而别人不能管他。当干部有权力，能管住好多人。认为当班干部就可以不做事，专门指挥别人，特神气！

我们应该使学生树立正确的观念，认清班干部的职责和义务。

推荐第10篇：我对大学排名的观点

我对大学排名的观点

My View on University Ranking

In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites, or newspapers.The ranking standards also vary.These lists have great influence on students.They are even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities。

People hold different views toward this phenomenon.Some believe that these lists help the students a lot, especially for those who will choose their university.While some other protest vigorously.In their points, the list is really ridiculous and harmful.In my view, the university ranking may have its own reference values, but its disadvantages overweigh its values。

For those university-students-to-be, they are supposed to choose the school according to his or her own situation, but not the so-called Ranking List.What’s more, how about the university students? How do they feel about themselves when they see the ranking? The list may become some intangible shackles for them if their own school ranks poorly。

In a nutshell, there is no easy method to rank these universities, but the Ranking, only helps students ignore the eentials, namely, their ninety-nine percent perspiration。

第11篇：手机(600字)作文

篇1：作文 放下手机

别再问“时间去哪儿了？”握着手机，却不知时光飞逝，亲情难再续。

“天上人间，如果真值得歌颂，也是因为有你才变得闹哄哄”。不要让家人生活在你的冷漠之中，热热闹闹的家里，即便吵闹，也是温馨。

进入了微时代，手机和亲情似乎互换了位置，手机成了生活伴侣，亲情却沦为了附属品。不久之前，国际摄影荷赛大奖被一张充满时代感的照片摘走——在一片蓝汪汪画面中，几个人拿出智能手机，对着月亮找信号。如果图片库的编辑手贱，为它加上“手机”、“科技”、“社交”这样的标签，它一定会为作者带来几万美金的收入。但是这张照片之所以能够获得一张国际奖状，却是因为另外一些标签，“贫穷”、“移民”、“人性”——布吉提海峡是非洲移民前往欧洲寻找更好生活的中转站，在布吉提的海滩上，迁徙者们企望找到微弱手机信号，联系亲人。一部浓缩版的奥德赛史诗，有没有？

你我之所以会误读这张照片，也许只是因为深植在我们每个人脑子里的主流观念——科技改变生活，手机可是个好东西，一切艺术形式都应该赞颂美好的事物。但是总是有人站在多数人的对立面，譬如英国迷你剧《黑镜》的制片人，他用6个精心构思的小故事，告诉人们科技有违伦常，手机也可以是暴力工具，也许潘多拉再打开一次魔盒，里面只有一部智能手机也说不定。

看到有意思的事物时，最初可能会感到“哎呀错过了，该拍下来啊”。然后，慢慢地，这个景象却真的留住了。你必须用最原始的方式和它亲近，和世界真正联结起来。所谓亲近，是从眼睛直对事物开始，而不是从举机拍照开始。

不知从哪年开始，我已不再在旅途上拍照了，我把风景留给眼睛。

到底有什么是非拍下来转发不可的呢？假如是把你的行程、刚买的东西、准备要吃的食物、偷拍的东西，都一一发给根本不在你身边的人分享的话，你到底是为谁而活的呢？自己早已不存在，因为你早已放弃了隐私，你宁愿公开自己的一切换来被关注的假象——瞧，你只剩下渴求被全世界看到和知道的心理虚空，除此之外一无所有。

放下手机。别忘了，你原来拥有一双眼睛。

快捷的同时，也会将我们与生俱来的许许多多的能力不知不觉地带走——譬如今天几乎人手一部的智能手机就是如此。君不见多少拥有手机的人们，“键谈”取代了口语交流，摄像头取代了肉眼的端详，短信微博取代了彩笺尺素，搜索引擎取代了记忆与背诵??当我们在享有诸如此类的“便捷”的时候，是否会想一想：究竟是我们在驾驭手机，还是手机已经完完全全地掌控了我们？当手机成了我们的另一双眼睛、另一副嘴巴、另一双手，甚至取代我们的大脑成了我们的思维工具，我们究竟是现代科技的主人还是奴仆？人类发展科技的初衷绝不是要让我们原有的能力逐步退化乃至丧失，就像汽车的出现，并不是要让我们废弃行走；电脑的诞生，并不是要让我们放弃思考；网络的出现，并不是要我们逃离现实??否则，科技的最终结果便是导致人类的毁灭。人之所以强大，就在于他能够掌控自己而不是被外物所操控。人应当有能力使科技成为自己“加长的手臂”，而不是使自己被科技的巨臂所钳制。 篇2：手机作文 cell phone数字式蜂窝移动电话: mobile phone 移动式电话 smart 蜂窝系统是指由许多基站构成的无线通信网络。每个基站只负责很小的一块区域内的用户。宏观上看，每个基站的服务覆盖区就像蜂窝中的一个穴。tdma,gsm,cdma,phs(小灵通),3g(tdscdma,wcdma)都是蜂窝系统。

mobile系统则更广泛，凡是无线通信系统习惯上都可以称为mobile。除了蜂窝系统，还有：点对点公众对讲机,传统的短波无线电通信(如业务无线电运动电台),美国的铱星系统(美国军方在去年的对伊战争中救了它一把)，其它各类卫星电话

cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient.with cell phones in their hands, they can keep in touch with anybody they want.if they want to get some information from the internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants. however, cell phones can also bring people problems.the most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to

users brains.another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a cla or at a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others.so i think people should use cellphones as little as poible and turn them off when they are attending important meetings or attending claes. 2 from the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people croing the street.instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see.it is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security.

have attracted all of our attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around the corner of every second.then, do not expect us to talk with the people around us, we dont have time! this, has resulted in a phenomenon of alienation between acquaintances and familiarity between strangers. 3 the overusing of cell phones judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken.firstly, certain institutions in china should launch relevant campaigns to limit the exceive use of cell phones.moreover, we, as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start. 4

1、手机给我们的生活带来了便利。

2、但是手机铃声也会影响其他人。

3、在某些场合请关掉你的手机。

turn off your cell phone

to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere.we will never mi any important meetings, great deals or admirable opportunities. however, have you noticed sometimes the cell phone also brings embarrament to us? it’s not rare to see someone preing the cell phone to his ear and shouting loudly in public as if there were no one else present.and i’m sure each one has had such an experience that the cell phone ring continuously on a formal occasion.perhaps these people have many life-and-death reasons to keep the phone working at all times, but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what they don’t care when they want to concentrate on what they’re doing. so if you are one of them, please shut off your cell phone in public, especially on a quiet and serious occasion.it’s a respect for both others and yourself. 5

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手机**

2012级2班 尤炳然

诚信，在我们的生活中至关重要。诚信乃立身之本，文明之魂。只有在生活的一滴一滴中做到诚信，才能赢得别人的帮助和支持。男子汉大丈夫，说到做到；君子一言，驷马难追。

日益美好的社会，诚信之事已非鲜见。我就曾亲眼目睹一件平凡趣事。现在想想，却让我感动不已。

随着

进去。

一走进这家生意略显冷清的小店，母子二人便受到了店员的热情招待。“买手机？”“想要什么款式？”诸如此问，两人似乎有些摸不着头脑。这看看，那看看??转来转去问了好久，掂量掂量价钱，终于选定一款。然后母亲就和店员们砍价：“六百六！”“不行！六百八，少一点都不行。”“哪有的事！我一个朋友买的才六百六。要不，六百七也行。”??双方争执许久，过了好一会才终于达成共识。母亲掏出一张信用卡，店员也开始忙活着装上内存卡，配好电池，贴上屏保再安上手机壳??可就在这时，刷卡的店员却越来越着急，反复几次，卡却出了故障，不能用了。

一切只好作罢。店员一脸失望，母亲也阴着脸，急急地说了一句以后再来拿手机，便拉着儿子匆匆离开。出门时，儿子看到了店员们黯淡的目光。

出门只带了一张卡，出了故障，两人无处可去，只好空着双手回家。回家之后，母亲就后悔了，觉得自己在那里丢尽了面子，说什么也不去了。儿子却为难起来：母亲这样想当然应该理解，可人不能不讲诚信啊，我们不去，那手机肯定卖不出去??想想店员们失望的目光，心中更是过意不去。便去劝说母亲：“妈，咱就这么不去了，是不是有点??手机给咱装好了，咱不买，人家不好卖了吧。”可母亲哪里听劝，反而教训儿子：“你懂什么！他们是做生意的，肯定

只为自己着想。你想想，咱们卡没刷好他们为什么那么着急安卡贴屏保？一定是他们的手机有问题，卖不出去了才想坑咱们一把。还亏了没买??”

儿子一时无言以对。可机灵的他了解母亲。一个下午，他就在家不停的游说母亲，上到民族大义，下到野生动物的安危，统统联系进去。母亲一开始还反驳几句，到后来也只好默认。叹口气说：“你呀，和你爸一个样，都是个倔脾气！ ”儿子不说话，心里却偷着乐。

篇4：手机的利与弊作文

第12篇：作文 放下手机

别再问“时间去哪儿了？”握着手机，却不知时光飞逝，亲情难再续。

“天上人间，如果真值得歌颂，也是因为有你才变得闹哄哄”。不要让家人生活在你的冷漠之中，热热闹闹的家里，即便吵闹，也是温馨。

进入了微时代，手机和亲情似乎互换了位置，手机成了生活伴侣，亲情却沦为了附属品。 不久之前，国际摄影荷赛大奖被一张充满时代感的照片摘走——在一片蓝汪汪画面中，几个人拿出智能手机，对着月亮找信号。如果图片库的编辑手贱，为它加上“手机”、“科技”、“社交”这样的标签，它一定会为作者带来几万美金的收入。但是这张照片之所以能够获得一张国际奖状，却是因为另外一些标签，“贫穷”、“移民”、“人性”——布吉提海峡是非洲移民前往欧洲寻找更好生活的中转站，在布吉提的海滩上，迁徙者们企望找到微弱手机信号，联系亲人。一部浓缩版的奥德赛史诗，有没有？ 你我之所以会误读这张照片，也许只是因为深植在我们每个人脑子里的主流观念——科技改变生活，手机可是个好东西，一切艺术形式都应该赞颂美好的事物。但是总是有人站在多数人的对立面，譬如英国迷你剧《黑镜》的制片人，他用6个精心构思的小故事，告诉人们科技有违伦常，手机也可以是暴力工具，也许潘多拉再打开一次魔盒，里面只有一部智能手机也说不定。

看到有意思的事物时，最初可能会感到“哎呀错过了，该拍下来啊”。然后，慢慢地，这个景象却真的留住了。你必须用最原始的方式和它亲近，和世界真正联结起来。所谓亲近，是从眼睛直对事物开始，而不是从举机拍照开始。

不知从哪年开始，我已不再在旅途上拍照了，我把风景留给眼睛。

到底有什么是非拍下来转发不可的呢？假如是把你的行程、刚买的东西、准备要吃的食物、偷拍的东西，都一一发给根本不在你身边的人分享的话，你到底是为谁而活的呢？自己早已不存在，因为你早已放弃了隐私，你宁愿公开自己的一切换来被关注的假象——瞧，你只剩下渴求被全世界看到和知道的心理虚空，除此之外一无所有。

放下手机。别忘了，你原来拥有一双眼睛。

快捷的同时，也会将我们与生俱来的许许多多的能力不知不觉地带走——譬如今天几乎人手一部的智能手机就是如此。君不见多少拥有手机的人们，“键谈”取代了口语交流，摄像头取代了肉眼的端详，短信微博取代了彩笺尺素，搜索引擎取代了记忆与背诵„„当我们在享有诸如此类的“便捷”的时候，是否会想一想：究竟是我们在驾驭手机，还是手机已经完完全全地掌控了我们？当手机成了我们的另一双眼睛、另一副嘴巴、另一双手，甚至取代我们的大脑成了我们的思维工具，我们究竟是现代科技的主人还是奴仆？人类发展科技的初衷绝不是要让我们原有的能力逐步退化乃至丧失，就像汽车的出现，并不是要让我们废弃行走；电脑的诞生，并不是要让我们放弃思考；网络的出现，并不是要我们逃离现实„„否则，科技的最终结果便是导致人类的毁灭。人之所以强大，就在于他能够掌控自己而不是被外物所操控。人应当有能力使科技成为自己“加长的手臂”，而不是使自己被科技的巨臂所钳制。

第13篇：手机控作文

手机控作文

手机控作文

上海杨浦区同济小学 四（4）班 谢 凡

妈妈是个“手机控”。那天，我回到了家，站在门口一次又一次地撳了门铃，总是没有任何回应。一位老奶奶经过，给妈妈打了电话，她才出来给我开了门。我大声吼道：“妈妈，怎么回事呀，你分明在家，却不开门！”妈妈抱歉地说：“我在卧室里玩手机，没有听到门铃声。”

我写作文，妈妈去厨房做饭。突然，我闻到了一股焦味，连忙冲进厨房，却连妈妈的影儿都没见着。煤气灶上正烧着饭，揭开一看，锅中的饭黑漆漆的，散发出难闻的味道。我急匆匆地来到妈妈卧室，不出所料，她正躺在床上托着手机在玩微信呢！“妈妈，你有完没完呀，饭都烧糊了，你还在这里玩手机！”妈妈一下子坐了起来：“啊！饭糊了？”她竟然还不知道。

晚上，我做完作业，收拾好书包，正准备睡觉。妈妈又玩起了手机，还放着音乐，让我怎么睡呀！我上前抢下她的手机，关了音乐，对她说：“你让不让人睡觉啦！如果你再这样，我就把你手机没收了。”妈妈讨好地说：“好，好，不看了，不看了。”„„

>这就是我的妈妈，一个名副其实的“手机控”。 《手机控作文》

第14篇：放下手机作文

放下手机作文

放下手机作文

“开饭啦！开饭啦！”一个周末的晚上，妈妈准备了美味佳肴喊我和爸爸吃饭。她系着围裙，端着菜笑眯眯地从厨房走出来，把菜放到餐桌上。红色的红烧排骨、白色的清蒸鱼、黄色的鸡蛋煎饼和青色的小白菜„„五颜六色、香气扑鼻，令我垂涎三尺！

咦，爸爸呢？我一看，原来爸爸还躺在卧室床上看手机呢！妈妈提高嗓门又喊了一声：“吃饭啦！”爸爸依然没动静，肯定是看手机太入迷了。妈妈忍无可忍，火冒三丈，她一只手叉腰，另一只手使劲在桌子上一拍，瞪大了两只眼睛，仿佛想冲进卧室把爸爸吃掉。

我连忙跑到爸爸身边拉他，他才依依不舍地放下手机来到餐桌旁，委屈地说：“看一会儿手机怎么了？上了一天的班，好累。回家想休息一下也不行？”看着妈妈生气的样子，我连忙帮腔：“现在是吃饭时间，不能看手机。再说躺在床上看手机对眼睛也不好啊！”妈妈几乎是吼着说：“每次回来一有空就抱着手机不丢，我哪天非要把你的手机扔到厕所里不可！”爸爸自知理亏，低头不说话了。

我想起前几天在妈妈手机微信上看到的一句话，便摇头晃脑地对爸爸说：“世界上最遥远的距离莫过于我坐在你的身旁，你却在看手机！爸爸，你以前说有个老爷爷因为在家庭聚餐时想和儿孙们聊天，可是没人理他，都在玩手机。那个老爷爷一怒之下把餐桌掀翻了，你还记得不？”爸爸认真地点点头，认识到了自己的注意力在手机上而忽略了妈妈的感受。他惭愧地对我和妈妈说：“对不起，我错了，我从现在就开始改正错误，请你们看我的表现！”他把妈妈扶坐下，拉着我的手让我以后监督他。妈妈的脸色这才由阴转晴，一家人开心地吃起饭来。

从那以后，爸爸每次下班到家后，不是在厨房里给妈妈当下手，就是在我的书桌旁看书，除了接打电话，他真的再也没有拿着手机不松手。

我向爸爸竖起了大拇指，真喜欢一家人在餐桌旁有说有笑的感觉。因为有了爸爸妈妈的陪伴，我吃饭就更香了。

第15篇：玩手机对学生的影响 英语作文

Now, let\'s begin the second part, please look at the picture ,from the picture, we can see a student play his mobile phone in cla, and the ring of his cell phone interrupted the teacher’s lecture.What a bad phenomenon!

In today’s college, it’s no doubt the mobile smartphone influences student’s lives so much .on the one hand ,use the mobile phone helps college student to communicate with each other ,For example, send meage, surf the internet and so on.meanwhile, student can use mobile phone reading e-book, and a can use electronic dictionary to learn.

However, on the other hand, mobile phone will also have negative influences on students learning and life.

Firstly, student use the mobile phone in cla will affect the attention and the normal teacher order.For example, some student use their phone to call or text chat, some student use mobile phone to browse th inter webpage, QQ chat, which makes some student in the course of lecture couldn’t learn well.

Secondly, the use of mobile phone can provide convenient conditions for college students skip cla、cheating on exam.

Thirdly, over-reliance on mobile phone will bring interpersonal communication barriers.

Fourthly, the use of phone will adversely affect the health of college students, especially for the eyes.

In my opinion, as a college student ,we should take advantage of the positives of the mobile phone, we are suppose to study by mobile phone, which can make our lives more better, instead of being bound by the phone, and affect the quality of our study.

第16篇：观点

透支善意的网络策划没有赢家

2011-03-25 11:53:13 来源: 南方网

网络推手罔顾人伦天理、毁损尊严、播弄母爱，轻侮公众良心和善意的炒作手段，则标示了我们身处的环境中，诚信和道德的价值和底线。

作者：令狐补充（微博）

3月22日，眼癌患儿的母亲为救治女儿，在广州闹市跪爬，引起关注，反响巨大，事态发展两天后，呈现的结果犹如一半是冰水，一半是火焰。火焰方面，不少好心人伸出了援手，患儿救治有望；冰水这面，则是以侮辱个人尊严、拨弄母爱为噱头进行炒作的网络推手，让人们有失足落入冰窖的寒心感，故而不但成为了舆论和公众谴责对象，也被网站撤销版主职务。炒作中，在网上承诺给患儿母亲资助而食言的网民“广州富家公子”，更是遭千夫指斥，已然被视为披着马甲的人渣。

现在，事情发生了变化，情况正朝更蹊跷更复杂的方向演进。3月24日晚，有网友通过微博称，在网络推手的个人网站上，有一份《执行策划方案：母亲爬行千里救女儿》，显示上传日期为3月21日，执行日期为22日。

方案写明，幕后策划人和执行人即上述已经曝光的网络推手，而客户是眼癌患儿侯珊珊和她的母亲谢三秀。方案列出了客户需求为“通过策划事件感动人，让有爱心的人为其捐款救她的女儿”。阐述创意认为，“女儿患病无钱医治的贫困家庭，要通过感动的事件才会得到社会的同情与帮助”。方案计划“通过广州的媒体报道，引发全城爱心人士为其捐款”。甚至为媒体报道拟好了标题，并且真吻合媒体报道标题的大意。

若此方案不是伪造，那么可以说，在网络推手操纵下，公众的同情和善意，就不免被涂上一层被玩弄的色彩。还显得操纵者颇为心思密实，手段高明，至少，他体察到了世道的冷漠，把握了社会的脉搏，而且一击奏效。也就是说，事态发展到现在这一步，且不论此方案真伪，一个不可不察的问题已经浮现：好心人伸出援手，眼癌患儿救治有望———面对这个结果，不论争取救助的手段如何不堪，也不论其过程如何让人感到刺痛和纠结，就能感到一丝欣慰？

但事情显然没有这么简单，病儿的惨况，母亲的境遇，折射了世态的炎凉冷暖，弥漫着挥之不去的悲情，直让良知尚存的人感同身受而寒彻透骨。几近走投无路的谢三秀，不论是真情还是作秀，不能否认的是，这一跪，已经让全社会蒙羞。正常人应该承认，让一位母亲绝望到要将网络炒作当救命稻草，所谓尊严和体面无非都浮云——— 这决不是一个文明社会应该发生的事情。而网络推手罔顾人伦天理、毁损尊严、播弄母爱，轻侮公众良心和善意的炒作手段，则标示了我们身处的环境中，诚信和道德的价值和底线。显示了在人性恶中，黑暗的深重，暴露了时代精神最为苍白的一面。更有甚者，这种以“狼来了”式的悲情透支大众善意的“策划”，必将令麻木与冷漠的社会氛围日益弥漫。多年前鲁迅曾经激愤地称：“不惮以最大的恶意揣测中国人”，用在此处也很合适。

张东阳：是否生“二胎”应多听公众意见 2011-03-08 18:59:23 来源: 广州日报(广州) 终于看到放开二胎政策的信号了，可何时实施依然未知，王玉庆的“个人意见”是“十二五末期”，但对计生政策调整，相关部门总捂着掖着，在放开二胎的讨论和决策中未能充分倾听公众意见，似乎总在躲着民意，这并非真正的科学态度。

作者：张东阳

全国政协委员、人口资源环境委员会副主任王玉庆透露，目前计生部门正在考虑放开二胎政策。他认为，二胎政策到“十二五”末期可能会放开。(《京华时报》3月7日)

终于看到放开二胎政策的信号了，可何时实施依然未知，王玉庆的“个人意见”是“十二五末期”，但对计生政策调整，相关部门总捂着掖着，在放开二胎的讨论和决策中未能充分倾听公众意见，似乎总在躲着民意，这并非真正的科学态度。

在全国人大代表、人民大学校长纪宝成看来，放开二胎政策确实到了“刻不容缓”的地步——其一，目前我国人口自然增长率只有千分之五，且人口低增长已维持了20年，如不及时调整，就会导致人口结构严重不平衡；其二，目前我国60岁以上老人占总人口的12%以上，用不了多少年就会达到30%。28岁至40岁的青年劳动力 10年后将骤降一半，这无疑会严重影响劳动力的“可持续发展”；最后，我国已有1.4亿户独生子女家庭，一旦子女伤残或夭折，将带来严重的社会问题，而且一对夫妇赡养4个老人压力也很大。显然，依然一成不变的计生政策并非理性选择。

计划生育政策已经执行了三十年，不少弊端已经显露，且越来越严重。它不仅忽略了人口结构矛盾，更没有考虑现代社会日益重视的人文方面的需要，如家庭的需要、更多血缘关系带来的精神需要等。再如教育问题，独生子女的教育比两个孩子的教育更难，有兄弟姐妹的子女通常有更好的协作观念、奋斗精神、竞争意识，人的性格也会更完善，更有利于人才的教育培养。另外，还有养老问题(尤其是独生子女养老问题)、独生子女婚姻家庭的不稳定性等一系列社会问题。

与此相对的情况却是，“放开二胎”并非“一放就乱”(王玉庆就认为“放开二胎政策不会导致人口暴涨”)，像试点地方甘肃酒泉、山西翼城、河北承德、湖北恩施等地都多年实施二孩政策，但仍保持了低生育率。而且，北京、上海等一些大城市人口出生率都在下降，这不仅是养孩子成本增加的问题，更是符合国际规律的问题：生活水平达到一定程度后，人口自然会下降。

人口问题的特点是周期性很长，如果没有准确的、科学的超前意识，真正意识到问题时已经迟了。所以，笔者期待相关部门能够认真研究纪宝成等专家的“调整计生政策刻不容缓”问题，认真倾听公众对于这一问题的意见，如此，才是慎重的、人文化、人性化的、科学的做法。

张魁兴：“民富优先”应成为制度首选 2011-03-04 19:07:39 来源: 南方网 无论是社会发展还是改革攻坚，其最终目的都应落在改善并提高人民生活水平上，而衡量发展和改革的标准，就是人民生活水平是否得到切实的提高和改善。

作者：张魁兴

全国政协委员、中国（海南）改革发展研究院院长迟福林所倡导的“民富优先”改革导向，影响甚广。他认为，一定要明确“民富优先”的改革导向，凝聚改革共识，增强改革动力，扩大改革参与，转变政府职能，解决老百姓公共需求旺盛与公共产品短缺这一主要矛盾。“十二五”时期，中国的改革将会步入一个关键时段，如何凝聚改革共识，突破利益集团阻挠，将对中国改革形成巨大考验。他建议，“十二五”应确立“民富优先”大战略。（3月4日《中国经济时报》）

是的，唯有确立“民富优先”大战略思想，共同富裕才能从理论走向现实。无论是社会发展还是改革攻坚，其最终目的都应落在改善并提高人民生活水平上，而衡量发展和改革的标准，就是人民生活水平是否得到切实的提高和改善。纵观建国六十多年特别是改革开放三十多年的社会实践，我国的经济发展是世界有目共睹的，比如我国国内生产总值总量超越日本跃居世界第二，中国已成世界经济大国了，这是谁也无法否认的。然而，国富了民并没有也跟着富起来，一是人均 GDP世界排名很落后，二是只有一部分民众富了，而居民贫富差距呈扩大趋势。换言之，改革的目标只是“一部分人富”实现了，共同富裕还是梦想与期待。

这一现象缘于“国富优先”的战略决策，过去我们一直强调的是国家利益高于一切，孰不知国富并不自然民强。一个不争的事实是，我国税费高社会福利低，结果是国富民不强，而且是国越富民越穷。另外，我们有让一部分人先富的政策，却没有共同富裕的制度保障。富且富穷且穷，“马太效应”已现。我国内需不足的关键问题，就是老百姓并没有真正富起来，只有少数人富，而让老百姓“被富裕”了，比如年薪六千多万的马明哲近八百万的任志强这样的富翁，让很多老百姓都“被富裕”了。

老百姓需要的是真富裕，而非“被富裕”，现实是高税费和分配不公无法让老百姓真富裕。要让老百姓真富裕，必须加大税务改革力度切实降低税负降低税收成本，再是千方百计增加和提高老百姓的收入，比如提高个人所得税扣除额和提高最低工资。而这一切须有“民富优先”的改革导向。因为如果没有“富民优先”改革导向，仍以“国富优先”并积极维护某些利益集团，改革只是修修补补，或是老百姓得小利而某些利益集团得大实惠，不仅不会有民富，还会拉大贫富差距。虽然国富、民富都十分重要，但民富是终极目标，在国富无法推进民富的情况下，“民富优先”应该成为党和政府的明智选择。

在笔者看来，“民富优先”就是要一切以“藏富于民”为目标，一是大幅度增加老百姓的收入分配比例（包括一次分配和二次分配），即让普通老百姓分享社会财富增长的盛宴，而不是现在的国家和部分人“拿大头”，让老百姓不拿或象征性地拿一点，一次分配不公，二次分配再不公；二是财政支出除了支持政府正常运转外，应投向公用事业和增加人民收入与福利的项目，而不是现在的很大部分被用于了政绩工程面子工程和腐败浪费；三是严防某些利益集团的破坏和捣乱，不能让某些利益集团阻挠“同工同酬”等公平正义的实现。总之，“民富优先”应该成为制度设计。只有当“民富优先”得到像之前“国富优先”那样的重点保护时，

“民富优先”才能真正成为现实。国人期待着！ 石飞：对非法劳务派遣须动大手术 2011-02-28 16:06:28 来源: 南方网 众多国企尤其是央企、机关事业单位之所以对非法劳务派遣趋之若鹜，或是把正式职工转换为派遣工，或是将对新招聘人员一律实行劳务派遣工形式，其目的无非是要逃避用工的社会责任，降低用工成本，攫取缺德的利益。

作者：石飞

近日，全国总工会将“国内劳务派遣调研报告”上报全国人大法工委，建议修改《劳动合同法》相关“劳务派遣”内容。报告显示，全国劳务派遣人员总数已经达到6000多万，这比此前人社部公布的2700万超过一倍，主要集中在公有制企业和机关事业单位，部分央企甚至有超过2/3的员工都属于劳务派遣。（2月26日《经济观察报》）

读了上述报道，我毫无惊意，唯一愤懑。我曾在劳动部门工作20年，并且长期侧重劳动用工研究。对于我国非法劳务派遣泛滥成灾的现实，我深恶痛绝，并忧心忡忡，曾在媒体上发表一系列文章，详析其根源，痛批其危害，疾呼对其开展专项治理，但终因人微言轻和既得利益集团的强力反对，未见效果。看来，现在到了非对非法劳务派遣动大手术不可的时候了！

有关非法劳务派遣对于我国用工制度的破坏、劳动者合法权益的损害以及社会不公的加剧等等，都是“秃头虱子——明摆着”的，无须赘述。众多国企尤其是央企、机关事业单位之所以对非法劳务派遣趋之若鹜，或是把正式职工转换为派遣工，或是将对新招聘人员一律实行劳务派遣工形式，其目的无非是要逃避用工的社会责任，降低用工成本，攫取缺德的利益。这样的公有制单位，无论从什么层面上讲，都应该受到严肃地谴责和追究。

当下，全总建议修改《劳动合同法》相关“劳务派遣”内容，非常必要，非常亟需。我以为，最急紧需要修改的是，增加对劳动部门的约束机制。我国非法劳务派遣之所以泛滥成灾，表象在用工单位和派遣机构，根子却在劳动部门。其作为不力，自是当然。如果他们能严格把好“临时性、辅助性、替代性”的关口，非法劳务派遣用工根本就泛滥不起来！

问题是，许多地方劳动部门不仅没有依法行政，严格把关，反而违规经办劳务派遣公司，与无良的用工单位狼狈为奸，沆瀣一气，大量“制造”非法劳务派遣工，侵犯劳动者合法权益，通过这种非法的肮脏交易赚取黑心的“劳务费”。这既违反中央严禁党政机关办企业的规定，又不符合行政制约原则，怎么可以“既运动员又当裁判员”？就此问题，2008年6月在《劳动合同法实施条例（草案）》征求意见时，我曾上书人社部，建议增加“禁止劳动部门经办劳务派遣机构”的条款，结果如泥牛入海。此乃意料之中的事，劳动部门乃非法劳务派遣利益链条上的重要获利者，我的建议无异于与虎谋皮，如何会被采纳？这此如能修改《劳动合同法》，强烈呼吁增加这一条款。对于劳动部门已经开办的劳务派遣工机构，限期撤销，逾期不撤的，劳动部门主要负责人就地免职。

其次，鉴于非法劳务派遣泛滥成灾的现实，对劳务派遣工应实行特殊管理方式，采取特别制约手段，专项审批准入。凡不符合“三性”要求的用工，一律不予核准使用派遣工。用工单位擅自使用的，由劳动部门给予经济处罚，同时责令限期清退。劳动部门作为不力或失职渎职，造成用工单位非法使用派遣工的，要追究劳动部门的责任，对有关责任人给予行政处罚，涉及权力寻租、权钱交易等经济犯罪的，追求刑事责任。

再者，要对劳务派遣开展一次全国性的专项整治活动，凡不符合“三性”要求的，一律依法纠正，强制用工单位与之签订劳动合同，变劳务派遣工为劳动合同工。

(本文来源：南方网 )

严辉文：用我们的肠胃消化20年的政策摇摆 2011-03-04 19:05:34 来源: 红网(长沙) 在长期的政策摇摆之中，如此放任有毒的添加剂填充我们的肠胃，哪里还看得到急民之所急执政为民的理念，而决策什么的科学性又安在哉？

作者：严辉文

卫生部等部门日前发布公告称，撤销食品添加剂过氧化苯甲酰、过氧化钙，自今年5月1日起，禁止生产、在面粉中添加这两种物质。此举也意味着20多年来关于增白剂是否有毒的争议已被我们的肠胃消化掉，自动变成历史的肥料。

1986年，当时的商业部在新颁布的小麦粉标准里首次允许添加过氧化苯甲酰，并沿用至今。同时，卫生部将过氧化苯甲酰列入了《食品添加剂使用卫生标准》，允许每公斤小麦粉里添加6毫克过氧化苯甲酰。自此，关于增白剂是否有毒的争议未有止歇。主禁派认为，过氧化苯甲酰会破坏面粉的营养结构，过量使用会对人体造成危害。而反对禁止的一派则表示，根据实验，过氧化苯甲酰在食品添加剂使用的范围内，不会引起面粉食用安全问题，因而不应该从国家添加剂名录中注销。

与坊间争议相颉颃的是，有关部门在增白剂的问题上堪称跌宕起伏的政策摇摆。这样的摇摆从1986年就开始了，到2000年以后频率开始加剧。不仅当年主张使用增白剂的决策人物在各种场合大声疾呼“禁白”，而且相关决策部门还将其纳入了议事日程并进行政策角力。国家粮食局从 2003年后开始组织下属研究机构修订小麦粉国家标准草案，明确要求禁用过氧化苯甲酰。卫生部却认为，小麦粉国标修订草案中禁用过氧化苯甲酰等化学增白剂与《食品添加剂使用卫生标准》的有关规定存在矛盾，显然对粮食局投了政策否决票。至2006年11月，卫生部主持召开协调会，还在两个月后发函征求国家质量监督检验检疫总局等五部门意见。2007年8月，卫生部又在其网站上向社会征求意见，为期两个月，但结果并没有公布，只是以存在禁与不禁两种意见搪塞了舆论。2008年10月15日，中国粮食行业协会就《再次呼吁禁止在小麦粉使用增白剂》内部征求意见，当时有90多家面粉厂的法人签字表示赞同。2008 年12月，卫生部新闻发言人又在在例行新闻发布会上表示，卫生部收到国家粮食局提交的有关“停用面粉处理剂——过氧化苯甲酰”的申请材料，将提请全国食品添加剂标准委员会讨论，再最后作出是否禁用的决定，但再次未见分晓。（2010年9月20日《中国青年报》）

尽管坊间不乏争议，相关生产企业也不乏态度，但是关于增白剂的存废之争，数个相关部门却只是枉自花费唇舌之功，徒然浪费开会发言之力，结果终归是不了了之。现在看来，在面粉中添加增白剂，不论是从饮食习惯和口感上看，还是从对于生命的负作用看；不论是从所谓国际惯例看，还是从民众呼声看，取缔都是迫在眉睫的。但相关部门竟能淡定置之，是好是歹且束之高阁，使一切问题都从决策层的大脑转移到了消费者的肠胃来消化。在长期的政策摇摆之中，如此放任有毒的添加剂填充我们的肠胃，哪里还看得到急民之所急执政为民的理念，而决策什么的科学性又安在哉？

第17篇：IT 观点

1,Q:用 DOS 还是 Windows?

A:如今这已经是一个不成问题的问题了。但在微机操作系统的发展史上，用 DOS 还是 Windows，曾经困惑了人们几年的时间。 直到 1995 年 8 月，中文 Windows95 的发布，Windows 才成为中国人的必然选择。如今，虽然是 Windows 的一统天下，但 DOS 的精 巧和稳定仍然常常让一些老鸟怀想 DOS 时代的美好时光。但电脑归根结底是为人民服务的，用 DOS 还是 Windows 是电脑用户个人的事，只要电脑能为你打出精美的文稿、处理繁杂的业务，用 DOS 还是 Windows， 您随便。

2,Q:什么是“摩尔定律”?

A:“摩尔定律”是以 Intel 公司的奠基人戈登.摩尔的名字命名的。戈登.摩尔认为， 处理器的能力每 18 个月的时间就会翻一倍。在过去的几十年里，计算机特别是微型计算机，它的微处理器以及许多新技术的发展速度均遵循摩尔定律的法则。 摩尔定律现在已经被“移植”到许多新领域，如煤体传播领域。Internet 的发展也被人们认为遵循摩尔定律的规律。

3,Q:企业上网为什么“雷声大，雨点小”?

A:有观点认为：

(1)对信息技术的恐惧心理；

(2)对传统商业模式的过分依赖；

(3)短期内不能迅速带来经济效益(更谈不上“电子商务”)，使经营者对“触网”心存疑虑；

(4)电信等部门把企业引上网后， 没有解决企业信息的组织、发布等后续的问题，使企业上网效果不佳，没有尝到互连网的“甜头”。

4,Q:网上购物的最大障碍是什么?

A:一部分人认为：(1)售后没保障；(2)网上支付等信用制度不完善； (3)商品配送慢；(4)商品数量少。

5,Q:IP 地址够用吗?

A:随着 Internet 爆炸性的增长，IP 地址的分配越来越困难，如果不加以控制， IP 地址资源会很快用完。现在，网络工程师们已经在想办法从技术上解决这一难题。目前应用的办法有：采用 DHCP 协议， 应用代理服务器，以及地址翻译等，并且考虑向 IPv6 转移。

6,Q:如何看待大学生创业?

A:2000 年 1 月，教育部颁布了一项有关“大学生、研究生(包括硕士、博士研究生) 可以休学保留学籍创办高新技术企业”的政策。就在这个政策颁布前后，国内许多高校骤然成立了一大批大学生成立的公司。 但在泡沫消失之后，许多公司纷纷倒闭。综观大学生创业，得到的启示是：大学生缺少必要的管理经验、市场运作策划能力、正确面对失败的心态，学生公司普遍缺少资金，只有知识和技术是远远不够的。在创业热潮中，学生更需要的是冷静的头脑， 扎实的技能。成熟的思想加上必要的素质和技能，才是学生创业的前提。有的专家甚至说：“大学生应该从实验室开始自己的创业。” 看来也不是没有道理的。

7,Q:网络萧条即将来临吗?

A:虽然在全球众多网络公司中，赢利的寥寥无几，但现在就要下结论说网络经济大萧条即将来临似乎还为时过早。

网络经济的出现和发展，有赖于风险投资资本的积极介入，使其迅速发展成一种全新经济，渗透到世界各个角落，并影响世界经济格局。现在，人们越来越依赖于网络带来的便利，足不出户，便得知天下大事，甚至可以做自己想做的每一件事情。所谓新经 济，主要是指网络，以及与网络有关的企业。旧式经济的代言人称网络为"洪水猛兽"，可见其对旧式经济的冲击是多么猛烈。事实上，旧式经济经过上百年取得的支配和主导地位，眼看要被刚出现几年，却日益完善的网络经济所取代。

风险投资公司在旧式经济时代几乎无发展可言，因为没有它们可供投资、获得高利润的风险企业，如成立于1946年的美国研究与发展风险投资公司，多年来风险资本一直很小，发展缓慢。但是自网络出现后，包括这家公司在内的所有风险投资公司迅速发展壮大起来，资金越积累越雄厚，这说明网络本身就是一种风险。对风险投资公司而言，只有投资高风险企业，才能获得它们渴望追求的最高利润。反过来，它们的投资额度越大，网络发展就越迅速，换句话说，风险资本的注入推动了网络经济以惊人的速度发展。业内人士指出，如果不是风险资本的积极介入，网络时代肯定会到来，大大小小的网络企业肯定会建立，电子商务也会随之而至，但时间或许要缓慢得多。专家们说，美国的亚马逊、雅虎、电子港湾等之所以能够迅猛发展，一个主要原因取决于风险投资公司的资金介入。据统计，美国经济从1995年以来增长率平均达到4.4%，就是因为新经济推动的结果。

虽然在全球众多网络公司中，赢利的寥寥无几，但现在就要下结论说网络经济大萧条即将来临似乎还为时过早。这是因为：

一、风险投资公司通过多年投资，获利已颇为丰厚；

二、网络经济的长期繁荣造就了投资者坚定的投资信念，人们认为网络企业是朝阳产业，即便基因工程铺天盖地到来的时候也

不例外；

三、伴随著网络企业的纵深发展，新技术浪潮层出不穷，有利于网络经济的进一步发展。

在 21 世纪，网络的走向同样让人捉摸不定，但有一点却有人大胆预言，据报道，SUN 公司董事长麦克里尼日前说，免费软件时代即将来临，未来不论个人电脑、移动电话或信息家电所使用的软件统统不用钱。因此他认为，微软已经是过去产物，未来属于 SUN 这样的企业。c

8,Q:网络七大“错觉”:

A:你可能不会相信你的圣诞礼物会从烟道里出来，也可能不会相信丑小鸭有一天会变成美丽的小天鹅，因为那只是美好的祝愿或者传说，那么我相信你也不会相信下面所列举的网络错觉了。

首先是电子商务方面的三大错觉：

1、世界上有数百万个.com 公司。据 IDC 证实，目前全世界受风险资金投资的网络新兴公司仅有 2500 家。

2、所有的电子商务网站都在亏损。据 IDC 对 600 家电子商务网站的调查显示，到今年年底大约有半数.com 有望盈利，目前已有 35% 的.com 处于赢利状态。比如 FTD 的子公司 FTD.com 等。

3、.com 的 CEO 都是初出茅庐的年轻人。据 IDC 统计，他们中的 60% 处于 30 至 50 岁之间。

有关 P2P 的错觉：

4、P2P 将是未来网络的主流。但业界人士从来不这么认为。Forrester Research 的分析家 Eric Scheirer指出：P2P 只是一种通信手段，不是商业模式。其他的众多专家也认为目前还不能证实P2P在商业领域的有效性，再者从计算机平台和软件等诸多因素来看，人们也无法看到这一新生事物的现实有效性。

家庭办公的错觉：

5、未来的工作形式肯定是家庭办公。据 IBM 的调查，所有工作都可以在家做的就业者在全美不足 50%。而且这一比例还有进一步下降的趋势。

除此之外还有如两条不可信：

6、互联网的出现使全家一起度过的时间减少。据最近的调查显示，家庭上网后，全家人一起度过的时间并未减少。相反还有 92% 的人回答说增加了。

7、互联网上的消息不如其他媒体的消息可靠。其实作为一种新兴媒体，互联网在新闻的时效上自不待言，在准确性上也丝毫不亚于其他媒体，这是美国乔治大学的网络分析家 Steve Klein 的观点。(2001.3)

9,Q:中国电子商务的四大瓶颈：

A:在经历了长长的摸索之后，电子商务先驱们终于得出了结论，在中国发展这一行业有四大瓶颈，即：

(1)、配送物流;

(2)、支付方式;

(3)、传统消费偏好;

(4)、网上交易安全性。

10,Q:内容网站的生存根本?

A:有作者撰文认为，内容网站的生存根本应包括：

网站内容必须有原创性；

网站内容必须加上差异性；

网站的内容必须收费；

网站内容必须根据不同的客户进行定制；

网站内容必须进行联盟经营。

11,Q:我该用哪种语言写程序?

A:目前，流行的计算机语言非常多，如 VB、VC++、Vfp、Delphi、C++Builder、J++Builder、PB、Perl、ASP、PHP、JSP、Java、JavaScript、VbScript、C#、ASP+、HTML、XML、CSS 等等，已经不像 5 年前只有 Basic、Pascle、Turbo C、Fortran、Coble、Foxpro 等容易让人选择，而且新的语言还在不断出现。那么，如果你打算投身计算机这个行业，你准备学习哪门语言呢？

要选择什么语言，应根据你的从业方向，还有你以往的语言基础来决定。如果你打算从事数据库方面的编程，那么 PB、VB、Delphi、Vfp 可以选择，当然 PB 是首选；如果你打算从事网络(非网站)编程，那么可以选择 VC++、C++Builder、Delphi 等语言，

笔者推荐 C++Builder 语言，它具有 Delphi 容易上手、使用简单的优点，又能为你参加考试做好准备，因为现在计算机考试的标准语言是 C 语言。当然现在许多程序员以能够操控 VC++ 为荣耀，甚至认为只有使用 VC++ 的程序员才是程序员，你怎么看是你自己的事了。如果你打算从事网站编程，那么 HTML、ASP、PHP、JSP、XML、Javascript 等不能不学，笔者的经验是先学 HTML、ASP、Javascript 等，再过度到 XML、JSP 等。

以上是考虑从业的需要。如果你原来已经对 VB 有相当的了解(许多人开始学习计算机是从 VB 起步的)，那么，不要轻言放弃，VB 在数据库、多媒体等方面功能并不逊色，况且有大量的优秀软件是用 VB 开发的，微软的许多开发应用中都有 VB 的影子。而且今天的 VB 已经是今非昔比了，它已经具备了开发网络应用、系统程序的能力，而且微软还在加强它的功能。当然，如果你对 C/C++ 非常熟悉，那么你学习JavaScript、Java、JSP、C# 将会顺手得多。

笔者再谈一下语言的“尊卑贵贱”问题。现在在一些人的意识里，确有这种心理：越难学的语言其“含金量”越高。笔者曾在 Internet 上听人传闻“现在 Java 的年薪是 5 万元。”这样以来，像 VB 这种曾经为计算机的发展作出过巨大贡献的语言，就遭到一些企业的轻视，有人把 VB 称为“业余”语言，言下之意，VB 只配老百姓在茶余饭后“玩玩”。相应的是，一些想成为“程序员”的人，拼命嚼着 VC++ 的 MFC 和类、封装、继承等一些古怪的字眼，并以此为莫大的荣耀，认为已经接近了计算机的“真谛”。

而事实的真相是怎样的呢？微软的享誉世界的字处理软件 Word 是用 VB 开发的；微软的 ASP、宏语言等都是 VB 的子集。由此可以看出 VB 的功能是何等的强大！最终用户实际使用的是成型的软件，是软件给他们的工作、生活带来的效率和乐趣，他们在购买和使用软件的时候不会看它是不是用 C 语言制作的。某些企业只所以在招聘员工的时候强调要熟悉 VC++、Delphi、PB，只是为了向外界表明它的某种“档次”，实际上含有商业攀比和广告、公关的成分。

最后总结一下：笔者推荐的 PB、Delphi、VB、C++Builder、HTML、XML、ASP、JSP、C# 是考虑到一个计算机从业者从吃饭、应试到发展的需要，你可以用 VB、ASP、Delphi、PB 之一去糊口，用 C++Builder 去应付考试，用 C#、XML、ASP+、Java 等新技术去发展。

(Declear：以上只是张庆的一家之言，仅供参考。 2001.2.19)

12,Q:作为一个计算机行业的初入道者，我准备向网络方面发展，应该准备什么知识?

A:(1)、首先选择一种主攻的网络操作系统，如 Linux/Unix、WindowsNT/2000 Server、Netware 等； (2)、学习网络、通讯的基本理论知识(包括基本协议等)，最好参加一种相关的考试；

(3)、具有综合布线、简单系统集成的经历；

(4)、熟悉一种网络数据库，如 MS-SQL Server、Oracle、Sybase 等；

(5)、精通网站的建设和维护，熟悉常用网络软件如 Notes、BackOffice、DreamWeaver、Email 客户软件等；

(6)、一定的计算机语言基础，如 Html、XML、JavaScript、ASP、VB、C/C++ 等；

(7)、熟悉常见网络互连设备的连接、配置、维护，如路由器、交换机、网卡、集线器等；

(8)、和高手参加大型项目的设计、实施。关键是实践。

13,Q:给一些洋文凭亮出红灯：四种洋文凭不被中国承认

A:国际教育展又将鸣锣开张，然而好不容易出国学习一场却得来一纸不被用人单位承认的证书，这样的事应避免发生。2001 年年初，中国留学中心传出消息，以下四类证书目前不在学历认证受理范围之内：

1、外语补习和攻读其他非正规课程（如短期进修）所获得的结业证书；

2、进修人员和访问学者的研究经历证明；

3、未经国务院学位委员会办公室批准的任何形式的联合办学所颁发的证书；

4、函授取得的国外学历、学位证书。

另：从 2000 年 2 月开始，我国对国外教育机构颁发的学历文凭进行认证。认证范围包括：

1、在国外攻读正规课程所获大学专科以上（含大专）学历、学位证书；

2、经国务院学位委员会批准的联合办学项目取得的外国学历、学位证书。

认证内容有：

1、确认申请人是否曾在国外颁发证书的高等院校或教育机构、科研机构学习或研究；

2、确认申请人就读学校或机构是否为所在国政府或权威评估机构所认可；

3、确认申请人就读学校或机构是否开设有证书涉及的专业并授予相应的学位；

4、确认申请人是否确实获得该学历或学位；

5、确认申请人就读的学历年限；

6、确认申请人所获国外学位证书、文凭类别和学历层次。目前认证服务受理范围的国家有：美、加拿大、澳大利亚、新西兰、英、法、德、荷兰、比利时、意大利、丹麦、瑞士、瑞典、芬兰、挪威、日本、新加坡、印度、蒙古、朝鲜、韩国、泰国以及俄罗斯、乌克兰等独联体国家。

此外，教育部留学服务中心还为中国招生和用人单位鉴别外国学位证书及高等教育文凭、证书提供咨询意见，并开展专门的对留学人员所获国外学历、学位证书的认证服务。

14,Q:2001 年 2 月 9 日中美海底光缆阻断的原因

A:据了解，于 2001 年 2 月 9 日发生的中美海缆阻断事故，其直接维修费用估计在 500 万至 600 万元人民币，间接经济损失更是无法估算。事故发生后，许多国外网站无法浏览，一些公司的业务被迫中断，甚至传说有的公司因此影响而倒闭。

经有关部门调查，中美海缆阻断事故系帆布涨网捕鱼所致。据介绍，帆布涨网捕鱼是在 90 年代中期从韩国流传到中国的，这一作业方式对海底光缆威胁很大。该网锚长 2.2 米，重 1.2 吨，扎入海底可达 2 米左右，且随潮流的涨落而回转，在海底形成一个长约 500 米的回转椭圆形，如遇大浪，锚的移动距离最大可达 4 海里。因此，锚的移动对埋入海底只有 1 至 2 米深的海底光缆具有很大的威胁。另据介绍，1999 年中国海域海底光缆被阻断达 18 次之多。2000 年，有关部门决定在 5 年内彻底淘汰这一作业方式，但是帆布涨网渔船有增无减，仅浙江舟山地区就有 1500 艘。

为确保不再发生类似的事故，中国海底电缆公司准备增加 4 条巡逻船，加强 24 小时雷达监控。同时，上海有关部门加强了打击破坏光缆的力度，严禁渔船在海缆路由及两侧各两海里范围内抛锚及进行捕捞作业。

第18篇：A or B观点选择型作文

作文套路一： A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, form my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that ____________________.就理由进行解释 _______________________.For instance, ________________________.Another reason can be seen by every one is that ____________________.就理由进行解释 _______________________.For example, ________________________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _____________________________________________________.Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious.Such as _____________________.In a word, _______________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

作文套路二： A or B

将原题复述______________________________________________________When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would deem that ______________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countle factors which influence -A/B-, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ________ is that ________.The second reason can be seen by every person that ________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that ________.There are some disadvantages in ________另一种观点的缺点______.In a wore, ________重复观点句并缩写理由________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.

作文套路三： 单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style.In my point of view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books.So it sagacious to ________.Among countle factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for _______ is that _______.Another reason can be seen by every person is that _______.Furthermore, ________.In short, ________复述前文中的理由_______.

作文套路四： agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _______.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would

explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that _______解释本段中心_______。

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that _______.What is more, some students are interested in _______.In a word, _______.

作文文套五： A or B

Some people prefer to A.others believe B.when faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why _______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that _______.Take _______ as example, _______.There is another factor that deserves some words here.Such as _______.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _______.(examples: _______).From the above you might got idea that I agree _______.(repeat the above three reasons_______).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______.

作文文套六： Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that _______, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that _______.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that _______.Examples _______.But there is a further more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more _______.Examples _______.General speaking, _______.Recognizing the fact that _______ should drive us to conclude that _______.

作文文套七： A or B

From my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than, B.So it is sagacious to choose A.Among countle factors which influence A.there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered.For example, _______ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B.For instance, _______.It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important.B ____也好___.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of A.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

作文文套八： A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point.This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.

We may look into every poible reason, however, foremost reason for B is _____.For example, _____.Also, _____.

This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _____.

Admittedly, _____A也有好的地方_____.By he same token, however, _____B更好____.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.

作文文套九：

When it comes to _____, Neverthele, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation since _____.Naturally _____ .It can be given a concrete example _____ .

A more eential factor why I advocate the argument of _____ is that.Obviously _____ .Take the case of a thing that _____.

Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that _____.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that _____.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, _____ 此处论述B的1-2优点_____.

But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discued above, we may finally draw the conclusion that _____.

作文文套十：

_____改写并复述题目_____.There may be one or two disadvantages to _____; however, I believe that there are far more advantages.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to _____ is that _____.For instance, _____.Another drawback to _____ involves the poibility that _____.For example, _____.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to _____, the advantages far outweigh them.The main reason for my propensity for _____ is that _____.For example, _____.Another reason for my inclination for _____ is that _____.For example, _____.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____, I feel that the advantages are more obvious _____重复优点_____.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.

作文文套十二： A or B _____改写并复述题目_____.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A.There are numerous reasons why _____, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones

here.One of the primary cause is that _____ _____.

What is also worth noticing fact is that _____ _____.Furthermore, _____ _____.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to _____ I fell that the advantages are more obvious _________._________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that ________.

作文文套十三： A or B _____（改写和复述原题）_____.When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countle factors which influence _____, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ______is that _______.Another reason can be seen by every person is that _________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because __________.In a word, __________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _______________.

作文文套十四： A or B From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ______ is that ______.There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, _______________.While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think _____________.

作文文十五： agree or disagree Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that _____________.But others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that __________.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that __________ without reservation since ________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that _________.In a word, ____________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.

第19篇：五年级作文：聚焦社会观点

五年级作文：聚焦社会观点

2009年11月20日《太原晚报》第11版，有一篇《这样的口罩谁敢戴？》一文，看后我将我的蓝色口罩看了又看，将它扔进了垃圾筒。

冬天到了，口罩也走进我们的生活，最近的甲流这么厉害，更是离不开，每天上学是我们必带的东西。我也一向很喜欢漂亮的口罩，尤其是上面许多的动物图案，或者一些漂亮花朵，让我爱不释手，可是真没有想到，在这漂亮的口罩后面竟然有这么多的病菌，这让我不敢带这漂亮而又美观的口罩。妈妈看后，把她买的漂亮口罩全拿出来，仔细看了又看，最后还是决定将它们扔掉，妈妈说还是到药店买合格的口罩才是最重要，不能因漂亮而带来不必要的麻烦。小朋友们，你们看后是不是和我想的一样呢？

第20篇：考研英语作文观点必看

在这个资料中，我将从题目分类，谋篇布局，句式应用，词汇应用这样从宏观到微观的顺序解剖考研作文。给出一个清晰丰满的印象，再以此为基础做出模板。我觉得这样有讲解有发散的模板在普适性和灵活性上都会有很好的表现。

题目归类

考研作文的出题方式是广大人民群众喜闻乐见的万年不变超稳定模式。就是漫画漫画还有漫画。

在范文中，我发现一个问题。就是以往写作文经常用到的first second third 这样三理由论证的模式上场率骤然减少。这让我大惑不解。为什么？

仔细看了看，思考一下，得出答案。题目决定结构。

原来写作文都是让我们关于一个话题谈谈看法，论证一下，就是议论文，当然要第一第二第三的论证了，但是现在情况变了，不出话题出漫画，行文结构自然改变。

同时，这也引出以下要讨论的问题：漫画作文是不是就一个套路了？不是。有几个套路？两个。

我把它们成为社会现象型和普世价值型。

社会现象型普世价值型

漫画特征：具体 针砭时事实质特征：抽象 启迪人生

题目特征：comment题目特征：support

是这样，大家可以看看题目要求，有的让评论一下，有的让证明一下。

很好理解，社会现象是复杂的，涉及的东西多，大家各抒己见嘛。至于普世价值，这就是对的，不许反对，看谁证明的漂亮。

谋篇布局

漫画内容的介绍没什么区别。区别主要在问题分析上。

为了使行文有条理，结构好记忆，不出现写成一团乱麻的囧境。对两类题目各给出一个经典思路。

社会现象型： 小树

分析一个现象，可以按照现象形成的时间顺序予以剖析。开端，发展，形成。就是小树的生根，成长成熟。

一个现象，必然有其出现的大背景，这就是小树生长的土壤。

一个现象，必然有其揭示或警示的价值取向，这就是小树生长指向的天空。

至于写作顺序，当然是先给出大背景，在具体分析现象本身，再写价值取向。

记忆起来就是 土壤、小树、天空

生根、成长、成熟

普世价值型：概括分析例证

关于它没什么可说的

句式应用

关于句式应用，我认为有以下几个要点

1 突出亮点

做题就是为了拿分，老师给分基本上就是看亮点。有好东西，就要展示出来。而且要展示到位，别留什么遗憾。

最好的句子放到开头结尾，这是必须的。最容易让人注意到的地方嘛。好钢用到刀刃上。 次好的句子用在铺垫总结。铺垫和总结一个体现看问题的广度，一个体现看问题的深度，

都有较大的发挥空间，写出好句子也是应该的

2 形式多样

判卷标准中明确写着要求句式应用要多种多样，我知道根据个人喜好不同，可能都会对某种句子有特别的偏爱，于是就是各种使用，这样不好。整的好像只会用一种结构似的，形式上要搭配，要是更精益求精的话，不同的句型应该出现在不同的位置上。

3 长短结合

都知道，所谓亮点基本上就是长难句。但是我认为不能因此而疯狂使用复杂结构，人为的造成文章的晦涩难懂。个人认为，写作文还是要注意通畅程度的。如果通篇都是让判卷人不能短时间看明白的东西，可能会有些许的负面影响吧。

4 结构完整

我所说的结构完整。首先当然是用复杂句式得写得对，别缺个成分什么的。还有，不要用太晦涩的句子，弄得貌似缺成分多东西什么的还是可能出冤假错案的。

词汇应用

两个要求

第一，像什么good nice之类的初等词汇能不用就不用吧。

第二，玩高端的话必须确保你清楚的知道你用的词汇究竟应该怎么用，照搬照抄且不求甚解是可能出错的。

从宏观到微观学究式的论述搞完了，接下来再从微观到宏观构建模板吧

词汇应用

基本上就是尽量适用看着虎一些的词汇，不用基本词汇。

经过广泛收集，层层筛选，留下的都是作文中起顶梁柱作用的词汇（也许和个人喜好有一定关系）。有些大家都喜欢用的尽量换成别的，以免用词太落入俗套。

这个词库既要能满足基本的使用需求，又不能太多不好记，还不能有偏词。 这里的词大可放心用，既看着挺不错，有没有太苛刻的适用要求。Just use it。

黑体字重要斜体字注意

重要crucialsignificantsubstantialeential

损害damagejeopardize

给予offerprovide

缺陷disadvantageweakne

解决deal with

导致bring aboutderive from

因此thereforeas a consequence

增长ascend

确保guarantee

降低decreasedescend

急剧dramaticalsurprisingly

宣称declare

影响influenceimpacteffect

明显apparent

相比in comparison with

对比on the contrary

展示illustratedemonstrate

大约approximate

同类homogeneous

事实as a matter of fact

换言to put it from another angle

To expre/describe it in another way

要求request requisition

消除eliminate

推理inference

相应correspondingly accordingly

足够sufficient

杰出outstanding prominent extraordinary

过多exceiveoverabundant

高兴delightful

说明explain illuminateinterpretillustrate

暗示imply

非常extremely surprisingly

最终eventuallyaltimately

期望expectanticipate

代表delegate representative

说服persusive convincingly

越多an increasing number of

许多a multiple of

建立build upestablish

提升enhance develop

美好admirablebreathtaking

大的immensetremendous

普及popularization

揭示revealshowindicate

下面是一定要出亮点的拿分部分

漫画说明文章第一段

Irony（surprise harmony inspiration power ） is everywhere.************** in the picture above.What I see from the picture is ****.The tremendous contrast between **** remind us of a seemingly neglected phenomenon which usually accurs in our dally life.

背景铺垫

1 Rooted in a societyfull ofchallenges

A timeDesires

Competitions,

Rooted in the tremendous tendency of timeCharacterized

with high efficiency and incredible speed of changing, ****seems inevitable and many people get used to its existence

And Eventually become a indispensable part of

2 In the unstoppable tendency of (international cooperation) throughout every reign and every aspect of the society, **** is contributing greatly to **** in its own way.Changing the whole world little by little in a visible speed.

3 Taking **** into account, we may find it reasonable that **** and draw a picture of its background characterized with ****

最后段开头当然也可以作为第二段的总结

It is tears of the society ( sadne of the timeshadow under the sun)

Never should we forget **** and only in this way can we keep a positive attitude to **** Traveling through thousands of year and thousands of miles, **** has always been held by us human beings as a common beliefwhich provide every generation with infinite(tremendousinestimable) spirit power.

Foundation of the societytendency of the timeharbour of the heart心灵的港湾

结尾口号 着眼面要大 着力点要小

It is now and right now that we should start to take it as the guidance of our action.Little progre may it seems at the beginning, we can make it bigger and bigger just liking a rolling snow ball with insistence and belief until one day we harvest a surprising succe.

A harmony world always comes to my dream where everyone (treat each other with ) .It is the firm expectation for a brighter future and the nonstop chase for a better world that give us power to defeat all the difficulties and make the dream reality.

我觉得在这几个容易出亮点的地方注意一下，基本可以保证拿到一个比较高的分数。漫画具体描述部分和第二段分析部分，由于他们都有了漂亮句子的铺垫和总结，加上本身有比较大的特殊性，不好在模板中体现，就不在上面用笔墨了。完全可以考虑用基本句子简单句子描述。这也是上文提到的 长短结合原则。长的部分我已经把架子搭起来了，说起来已经占据相当大的篇幅了。其他的随便写一写就可以了。这个体系是开放的，完全可以自己造句往各部分里加。

接下来，总结一下可以出彩的二号阵营：关节点（比如过渡总结的小词组小句子）

尽量躲开非常经典的词组应用，稍稍提高表达含金量,其实词汇总结中也有体现

It is widely shared that

From my own perspective

As far as I\'m concerned

Reveals a typical social phenomenon

A general trend ofcan be seen in the cartoon above

A conclusion can be safely drawn from thediscued above

It is no easy job to,yet **** never lose its influence in ****

No easy method can be at hand to solve ****, but **** might be the first step on the right way

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