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推荐第1篇：留学文书(推荐信)个人陈述范本1

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我是XXXXXXXXXXX学院工商管理专业98541A班的学生，我来自首都北京，今年22岁，将于2007年7月本科毕业，真诚希望能在贵校攻读经济学（或其它所选专业）硕士，继续求学深造。

1997年小学毕业后，我被保送直升XXXX大学附属中学初中部。在那里，我感受到了浓烈的学习气氛以及更加激烈的竞争氛围，很快我也溶入其中，努力充实自己。三年后，我以高出录取分数线几十分的成绩考入本校高中。这所全国著名的重点中学是以活跃自主的教学方式而闻名。在那里度过的六年中学生活，带给我的不仅是高度自觉的学习积极性和正确有效的学习方法，更重要的是培养了我坚持不懈的毅力和不怕困难，勇于挑战的奋斗精神。

2003年我顺利地高中毕业，考入XXXXXXXXX学院攻读大学本科。在校期间，我更加明确了自己的奋斗方向，刻苦努力，认真对待每一门课程。因为我相信，每一方面的知识都会带给我不同的收获，学无止境，只有具备全面综合能力的人，才能获得真正的成功！课堂上，我专心听讲，积极回答问题，充分吸收老师所传授的知识；课余时间，我通过翻阅各种课外书籍，与老师进行相关课题的探讨，拓宽自己的知识面，加深对所学理论的深层次理解。经过我的不懈努力和老师的孜孜教诲，我在大二学年就一次通过大学英语

四、六级考试，全国计算机二级考试，考试成绩始终在全班乃至全系名列前茅，并连续三次获得校优秀学生奖学金。我的大学生活除了学习之外，还有许多丰富多彩的内容。我曾担任班级文娱委员，组织全班同学在系合唱比赛中取得第一名的好成绩；我还积极参加卡通社、健美操俱乐部等社团活动并均在院系比赛中取得优异的成绩。这些社团活动不仅培养了我高度的集体荣誉感和责任心，还锻炼了较强的组织、应变能力以及与人沟通、协调的能力。我相信，凭借这些，我会充满自信地面对今后所遇到的种种困难，独立自主地处理好各种问题，使自己在生活中处于不败之地！

曾经有位名人说过：“一个圆，当它与外界接触的面积越大，它就会发现未知的空间也越大。”我深深地意识到，我所取得的成绩还是远远不够的。因此，我希望能够出国深造，吸取更多的知识精华，用更加丰富的知识来完善自己，使自己具备更高的素质和修养。因此我选择了位于澳大利亚悉尼的XXXXXXX大学（或其它所选学校）作为我的梦想之地。因为，澳大利亚是一个美丽的国家，有多姿多彩的现代化都市，也有充满大自然气息的天然海滨，气候舒适，社会安定。更重要的是，澳大利亚拥有世界一流水平的教育质量，学校不仅十分欢迎海外留学生，而且很关注学生不同的需要，确是留学的首选之地。我有许多朋友同学都在澳大利亚学习发展，通过向她们询问以及上网查询得来的信息，我从众多的优秀大学中选择了XXXXXXX大学。据我所知，该大学是澳大利亚一流的学府，在国际上也拥有显著的声誉。它拥有雄厚的师资力量，先进的教学设备，优美的校园环境以及积极活跃，校务与潮流同步的学习气氛，这一切都深深地吸引着我——一个远在中国的大学生，

并激励我更加努力地为自己的梦想奋斗！

如今，中国已进入WTO，更多的商机涌入中国市场。中国的各行各业面临更大的竞争。我认为，现阶段，中国企业最为缺乏的是真正的经济型人才，因此，我想，如若我有在贵校学习的机会，我将尽我所能，努力学习，用先进的理论知识和一定的实践经验使自己尽快成为适应国际经济发展潮流的21世纪的优秀人才。中国拥有世界上最大的市场，自从改革开放以来，中国经济迅速发展，已逐步迈入经济强国的行列，未来它将面临的无限机遇与挑战深深吸引着我。因此，学成之后，我将回到中国，以我所学，报效祖国，用自己的头脑与双手，创造出更加辉煌的业绩！

最后，我想对自己进行一个简单的概括：

开朗乐观是我的性格，诚恳正直是我的待人原则，沉着冷静是我的处世原则，自信拼搏是我的优点。我具有强烈的求知欲和进取心，也不乏开拓创新的精神和独特的思维视角。

我充满自信地向贵校呈递我的自荐材料，将自己推荐给贵校。我衷心地希望贵校能给我一个学习深造的机会，我将忠实地期待您的回音。最后感谢您的阅读！

Best wishes!

自荐人：XXX

2007年3月1日

推荐第2篇：留学文书(推荐信)个人陈述范本2

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我叫XXX，来自中国的首都北京，今年29岁。我在1996年从吉林工业大学工程技术装备学院机械设计及制造专业本科毕业，同时被授予工学学士学位。我真诚希望能在贵校攻读信息技术学硕士，继续求学深造。

1992年高中毕业后，我以优异的成绩考入了吉林工业大学攻读大学本科。在校就读期间（1992年9月——1996年7月），我首先学会了独自处理个人事物的能力；其次，我明确了自己的奋斗方向，刻苦努力，认真对待每一门课程。因为我相信，学无止境，每一方面的知识都会带给我不同的收获。在课堂上，我专心听讲，认真做笔记，积极回答问题，充分吸收老师所传授的知识；在课余时间，我翻阅各种课外书籍，与老师进行相关课题的探讨，加深对所学理论的深层次理解。经过我的不懈努力和老师的孜孜教诲，在大一学年就一次通过了英语四级考试，考试成绩始终在全班乃至全系名列前三名，并连续六次获得校优秀学生奖学金一等奖和一次由学校重点学科建设基金委员会颁发的毕俊、黎惠民奖学金二等奖。我的大学生活除了学习之外，还有许多丰富多彩的内容。我曾担任班级的学习委员；还积极参加篮球社、音乐社等社团活动，并均在学校比赛中取得了优异的成绩。这些社团活动不仅培养了我的集体荣誉感和责任心，还增强了我的组织能力、应变能力。在大学第四学年中，我在长春市的中国第一汽车制造厂进行了实习。虽然只有短短的三个月的时间，却加深了我对书本上的理论知识的理解，锻炼了实际工作能力，提高了与人沟通、协调的能力。

1996年大学毕业后，我回到了北京。从1996年8月—2001年2月在北京樱花通商公司担任一名职员。由于这是一家从事商品流通与广告代理的贸易公司，与我所学的专业相差较远，所以我必须从头学起。虽然有压力，但同时这也给我带来了极大的挑战性。在工作时间里，我虚心地向公司里有经验的职员学习怎样做业务，积极主动地完成各项工作；下班后，翻阅了大量与工作相关的书籍，认真学习。经过努力，我从一名办公室助理逐渐地升职为一名做业务的职员。就是在这期间，我大量地接触了计算机，学会了使用各种办公软件，对计算机科学产生了浓厚的兴趣，并看了一些有关软件设计与开发方面的书。为了寻求个人事业的发展，在2001年3月我跳槽到了北京阳光视野企业管理顾问有限公司。这又是一个全新的领域，它充满了挑战与刺激性，我又开始了忙碌而快乐的学习过程。经过一年多的努力，我已成为培训部的优秀员工。随着对计算机科学的深入了解，我发觉程序设计语言对我有很大的吸引力，于是我决定要系统地学习计算机程序设计语言。在2001年12月我利用工作以外的时间参加了由北大青鸟集团与印度APTECH公司合作开办的Aptech Certified Computer Profeional——ACCP软件工程师认证培训课程。课程分为初级程序员、程序设计员和软件工程师三个阶段的学习。在2002年6月这个职业资格认证得到了国家劳动和社会保障部认可，对通过培训考试合格的人员，北大青鸟APTECH向学员颁发其国际化标准的ACCP证书，与此同时，国家劳动和社会保障部职业技能鉴定中心根据ACCP证

书的等级，核发相应的软件工程师职业资格认证证书。现在，我已获得初级程序员和程序设计员的职业资格认证证书，正在向最高的阶段即软件工程师努力。

虽然已经取得了一定的成绩，但我深深地意识到这是远远不够的。所以，我希望能够出国深造，汲取更多的和更系统的知识，用更加丰富的知识来完善自己，同时，也是为了拓展自己的视野，了解不同的文化和环境。因此我选择了位于澳大利亚的XXXXXXX大学作为我的梦想之地。因为，澳大利亚是一个美丽的国家，有多姿多彩的现代化都市，也有充满大自然气息的天然地带，气候舒适，社会安定。更重要的是，澳大利亚拥有世界一流水平的教育质量，学校不仅十分欢迎海外留学生，而且很关注学生不同的需要，的确是留学的首选之地。我从众多的优秀大学中选择了XXXXXXX大学。据我所知，该大学是澳大利亚一流的学府，在国际上也拥有显著的声誉，它拥有雄厚的师资力量，先进的教学设备，优美的校园环境以及与潮流同步的学习气氛，这一切都深深地吸引着我。如今，中国已进入现代化社会，但中国的计算机科学的发展与世界先进国家相比还有很大的差距，尤其与软件产业强国印度相比，我国的软件产业还没有形成产业化和规模化。因此，我想，如果我有在贵校学习的机会，我将尽我所能，努力学习，使自己成为21世纪的国际化的优秀人才。中国拥有世界上最大的市场，进入WTO以后，中国的经济发展更迅速，逐渐迈入世界强国的行列，未来的无限商机与挑战深深吸引着我，而我又是一个喜欢接受挑战的人，因此，学成之后，我将回到中国，努力提高我国软件业的产业化和规模化，用自己的智慧报答祖**亲。

我充满自信地向贵校呈递我的自荐材料，将自己推荐给贵校。我衷心地希望贵校能给我一个学习深造的机会，我将期待您的回音。最后感谢您的阅读！

自荐人：XXX

2002年5月17日

推荐第3篇：留学个人陈述

个人陈述

我叫李彬，来自中国陕西西安。我在22年的生命历程中，练就了坚韧、顽强的性格，2004年我以优异的成绩考入西安财经学院，现正攻读金融专业的金融学学士学位。我的大学是一所学科非常齐全的综合性大学，大学生活使我不仅在学习方法、专业知识上得到了全方位立体化的发展，更重要的是提高了我对各学科知识的融合能力，同时也极大的提高了我的求知欲望。因此，我决定在毕业后去美国留学，通过了解，目前我希望申请底特律大学金融专业硕士学位。

家庭对每个人来说都非常重要，因为它是我们接受教育的第一课堂。我的外公曾是一个电力科学家，奶奶则是个朴实的农民， 父亲是人民警察，母亲是一位会计从业人员，他们对我的言传身教，对我的人生观、价值观的建立和发展起到了极其重要的作用，同时也帮我建立起了诚实、勤劳、永不言败的性格。所以受他们的影响，我对金融类学科有着十分的兴趣。我的家庭是我一生中最重要的财富，是它赋予了我学习这方面学科的兴趣，以及勇往直前的的性格。

通过对专业知识的学习，使我对经济金融类学科产生了浓厚的兴趣，我拜读了胡碧教授的《货币银行学》，书中他用通俗易懂的案例，将迷雾般的金融原理与人们普通的生活有机的结合到一起，使我掌握了将大多数人觉得枯燥的金融学原理，在实际生活中的学习方法，同时也使我对胡碧教授产生了崇拜之情。同年，我又拜读了James C.Baker的代表作《国际金融》，通过这本书的学习，使我迷恋上了金融方面的知识。由于对知识的强烈渴求，使我更加专著的学习金融反面的理论知识，并且我遇到了一位良师，中国金融行业非常著名的胡碧教授。胡教授将货币银行的理论与实践相结合，向我们传授货币银行，以及经济投资方面的知识。这种教学方法很符合我的学习习惯，所以我很快就进入了状态，我们经常在一起探讨中国期货行业的发展和世界期货市场的价格波动。

除了专业知识的学习外，业余时间，我还和我的同学，朋友一起在学校组建摇滚乐队，并且经常参加学校组织的各类文艺活动，2005年在学校举办的乐器大赛上以萨克斯独奏《春风》获得第一名，同年代表学校参加省首届大学生才艺大赛并在乐器组获得第三名的成绩。我还和队友一起代表学校去孤儿院和敬老院慰问演出，受到校领导的肯定。我在丰富的业余活动中，不仅实现了人生价值，同时也锻炼了自己的组织能力，使我的个人素质得到了极大的提高。除此以外，我还非常喜欢体育运动，擅短跑，篮球等。年轻，就应该充满活力。

2007年暑假，我作为西安财经学院学生代表，共参加了多场在西安举办的金融知识巡展的交流活动，通过参观，学习了金融发展史，尤其是美国的历史。我深深地被先进的运作模式和强大的科研能力所打动，对比自己的学校，尽管我们已经发展很快，但距离世界顶尖教育还有一段差距。这种感觉，激发了我的学习热情，我下决心要在回国后用自己的力量，为我的祖国发展做出自己的贡献，这也是我申请贵校的一个重要原因，因为作为一个中国人的责任，我要用我在海外学习的先进知识来建设我的祖国。

“踏实，坚定，勤劳”是我继承的优良传统，也是我的人生信条。面对大学即将毕业，强烈的求知欲及对专业知识的热爱，我决定选择美国继续自己的专业学习，去接受美国大学严谨的教学，尖端的研究和新的思维方式，从而充实自己，实现自身的价值，也希望自己能成为中美两国文化的传递使者。谢谢您的关注，期盼您的答复！

推荐第4篇：英国留学申请文书：法律专业个人陈述

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2016英国留学申请文书：法律专业个人陈述范文

下面是法律专业PS范文，希望留学英国申请法律专业的学生可以参考。

Law Personal Statement 法律专业个人陈述(PS)范文

English, being the most diverse language in the world in terms of vocabulary range and one of the most heavily influenced by other cultures, makes for fascinating study and usage.Drawing influences from Celtic, West Germanic dialects, Latin, Greek and French to name but a few make the English language riveting both in terms of use and etymology.The almost ambiguous way writers can create texts that can evoke completely opposite emotions with the same language.Shakespeare created an initially pitiable character of Macbeth and transformed him into a detestable shell of humanity.Whereas, Bront created Jane Eyre who you genuinely empathised with.The ability to construct these characters and real emotions from words is truly amazing.

The ability to expre yourself clearly and concisely is important in any course and work of life and my part time work in the garden centre Dobbies has helped develop my communication skills.This involved

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working with customers often in problematic situations,listening, explaining and solving problems or queries they may have.This also involved working with and around other employees which has developed my team working skills.I have also been given the opportunity to help train a new employee by having them shadow with me,this involved a large amount of communication between myself and the new member of staff as the learning curve is at times rather steep.This too shows the trust my employers have in my competence of work.

For years I have played rugby at various levels, from school and club to district.In S2 playing with West of Scotland and winning the Scottish Championship with myself being awarded Man of the Match.The responsibility of playing at a high level has taught me the importance and ability of effective teamwork and when need be the aptitude to exercise confident leadership.

I have in recent months, in my spare time began to teach myself British Sign Language through resources from the internet and material from local libraries.This challenges my time keeping as, although, I have a strong willingne to learn but have to balance my learning around other work for school and activities.

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Slightly over a year ago,18 other pupils and I were involved in an expedition to Peru.This was funded by a year of fundraising, the extra work required greatly developed my determination and resolve to achieve my goals.The charity work completed on our expedition included the construction of a new room for a school in a small village called Cachicatta.This work contributed to my progre of attaining my Millennium Volunteer Silver Award which the voluntary work in Peru has contributed to.

Sports, other than rugby, play a large part in my life.I enjoy running recreationally but have previously I have competed at a high level in athletics competing for a Scottish Pentathlon team against England, Ireland, Northern Ireland and Wales.I too enjoy Judo;although relatively new to the sport I find the challenge of learning greatly enjoyable.

Music is important to my life, both listening and playing.I play both electric and acoustic guitar both at a fairly moderate level.I too enjoy listening to a wide variety of music and support many artists both local and well established.

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推荐第5篇：英国留学申请文书：地理学专业个人陈述

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2016英国留学申请文书：地理学专业个人陈述范文

赴英国留学的学生在准备申请材料的时候，PS的写作至关重要。如何写出吸引眼球，近乎完美的个人陈述直接影响着申请学校成功与否。以下是小编针对英国大学专业之地理学专业所推荐的PS范文，希望对此专业有意向的学生可以借鉴。

Geography Personal Statement

I am choosing geography for one main reason and this reason has many subdividing links.I want to continue to study geography at higher education because I find it interesting.I enjoy this subject because of its content and the way in which it overlaps with so many other subjects.This therefore makes geography a very useful subject and one I am very keen to continue to understand and develop.Because geography overlaps with many other subjects and that the course encompaes many techniques and skills I find it as being a very useful tool in the future workplace.I enjoy finding out how and most importantly why.If this includes why is such busine parks situated on suburban fringes to why does the global distribution of earthquakes effect human activates in that particular area.I believe geography will develop my analytical skills which is important because I want to become an intelligence officer

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in the armed forces.I also like travelling and my knowledge and techniques have helped me explain many things like reasons for terraced farming in areas of Maltaand infrastructure in Florida.My teacher once said to me in secondary school.

travel, your start to notice things around you and your be able to understand whatand why are certain things there.

I am currently studying A2 geography and biology.This is also accompanied by AS physical education and an AS physics which I completed in my first year.I am enjoying my courses this year because I find the content relatively easy to digest as opposed to physics last year.I found this subject fairly challenging last year because the content comprised itself mainly of numbers, figures, theories and set equations which where some what difficult to interpret.As opposed to the courses iamdoing this year where I find the content easier to consume because I can relate it to visual situations.I enjoyed parts of the course last year because there where noticeable links between the subjects.For instants geography and biology cro over more than once during the year.I have developed new skills such as my oral and working with others on coursework As I noted above my aspirations for the future lay within the

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armed forces.I need to have well developed analytical skills as well as good oral skills.

Studying geography will help me develop these skills to a standard well recognised in my chosen field of profeion.I\'m also looking to travel in the future and my knowledge of geography will help me understand the places I visit in much more detail.

I have had one experience in paid employment and one work experience placement.During my work experience I worked at H+S aviation.This is a company that repairs helicopters and light aircraft.During my time here I experienced the importance of meeting deadlines as these engines where urgently needed for the customer.I also established working with a team and co operating with many departments.One important skill I learned is attention to detail/ this was very important because the slightest of inaccuracy could cause the aircraft engine to malfunction causing death to the customer.During my paid employment I worked at a café in ASDA.I learned many important leons here like health and safety along with food hygiene.I also exercised working in a busy environment and good communication and team skills were neceary to achieve the goals.I feel that many of the skills I have learnt are relevant not just to geography but life in its self.

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Team skills may be put to good use in a fieldwork situation as well as meeting deadlines and attention to detail.These all figure in some aspect of the course and university life in general.

I enjoy sporting activities a lot and they are important in social well being.I enjoy playing golf and especially football.I have reached semi profeional for Fareham town where I scored the winning goal on my debut at this level, being only the third player to ever to do this.I have also had trials with the major south coast profeional sides such as Portsmouth, Southampton and Bournemouth.I enjoy leisure activities such as fishing and camping and I go away regularly in the summer to carry out these activities.

I also enjoy socialising with friends at the weekends but football usually takes precedence over socialising.There are specific areas around the city where these can be exercised together.I enjoy spending time with my family, either going out for the evening,spending the weekend camping and fishing or just play football or golf.

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A Master’s student of accounting at Xiamen University, the best higher-learning institution in China’s strategically important Province of Fujian, acro the Straits from Taiwan, I would like to pursue Ph.D.studies in your distinguished program so that I can be aured a teaching career in my motherland.

My education so far is characterized by indisputable excellence.During the four years of my undergraduate studies, my GPA was consistently the highest in my cla of 135 students.As you can see from the transcripts of my academic record, I received straight A’s for all the courses except for first-year Physical Education.My graduation was rated “Outstanding”, the highest rating poible.An in-depth analysis of the ethical standards of Chinese auditors, the paper was later published in a quality profeional journal as a seminal study of a rarely studied topic in China.As the unquestionably best student in my year, I was accepted into graduate studies by the university without the normally mandatory entrance examinations.

In recognition of my academic performance and other strengths, I was decorated with many honors and accolades during my undergraduate studies.I was elected the monitor of the cla and the Vice President of the university’s Student Union, making me the most important female student leader on campus.Among the financial awards I won was the Jiageng Scholarship, the university’s most prestigious award named after its founder Chen Jiageng, one of the best known patriotic Chinese in the first half of this century.The Jiageng /scholarship is offered to only ten students each year, and the offer is usually presented to the recipients by the university’s president in person in a grand ceremony, as it was in 1996, when I got it.

In my undergraduate studies, I had broad academic interests, although I majored in accounting.I regularly read academic journals, both Chinese and international, to keep me abreast of the latest developments in accounting and other related fields.I devoted considerable time to learning such subjects as law and economics.My extensive knowledge provided me solid grounding as I narrowed down my research interest to profeional ethics of accountants.In a country that has only an inchoate legal regime governing profeional practice.Enforcing high ethical standards is both difficult and critical.But studies have been scant and haphazard so far.I am glad that I have made quite some contribution to the country’s discourse in this area.

My undergraduate studies were greatly enriched with a most rewarding internship program.As a CPA aistant working for the Accounting Firm affiliated to the university, I took part in the auditing of several major corporations.In the proce, I learned not only to put my book knowledge in practice but also acquired first-hand knowledge of how Chinese accountants, operating under inadequate laws and regulations, handled difficult iues.Such knowledge has constituted an important part of the basis for my research on the ethical questions of Chinese accountants and auditors.本文来自作文地带团队写作QQ: 578691213 In my graduate studies, I have broadened my intellectual horizon and refined my accounting expertise.The courses I took related to both theories and methodologies of accounting and auditing.But the more significant part of my learning is to be found perhaps not in the courses 作文地带-有翻译、写作团队的英语作文网站

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In my Ph.D.studies, I wish to focus my studies and research on auditing, particularly in relation to audit risk, auditor’s decision-making, ethics of auditing.I am also interested in accounting theories.I heard of Penn State University while I was still an undergraduate student, and I know that its accounting program is marked by selectivity and excellence.I hope that, by studying in your program, I will be able to build on my academic record so far for a promising career as a teacher in China a few years down the road.

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推荐第7篇：如何写好留学文书个人陈述的秘诀

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如何写好留学文书个人陈述的秘诀

个人陈述，(PERSONAL STATEMENT，以下简称PS)是申请英国等西方国家的大学/研究生录取时由申请人写的关于自我的一篇漫谈体文章。当然有的学校要求的文章题目不一定叫PERSONAL STATEMENT，如有的学校让你写出动机(Motivation)兴趣，经历等。由于在中国的升学体制中，基本上是唯分数论的，因此中国的申请人对这类文件的写作和思维方式不熟悉。而欧美大学录取学生，发放奖学金，是通过全面综合考察申请者的条件来决定的。

尽管大学和研究生院的工作人员只是简单地浏览你的个人陈述，但他们却可以从你的个人陈述中了解许多信息。因此个人陈述必须能够清晰、有效地表达你的观念，证明你的学术和交流能力。如果你的个人陈述中有过多的语法和拼写错误，就可能影响入学部工作人员对你能力和兴趣的注意。

为什么你要申请这个课程项目?

描述影响你申请该项目的一个最重要的情感因素(你的兴趣?)。

如果你要写你自己多年来的学术或工作经历，你最想写的是什么?

(如果强调工作经历)描述你在职业方面的能力，特别是在某个群体中的状况。

(如果强调学习经历)描述你在学术方面的能力，特别是在某个群体中的状况。

你最令人难忘的工作经历/学术经历。

描述你曾经历过的失败，你是如何应对它的。

简单描述你对未来的预期。

当然以上这些方面在你的个人陈述中并不是完全均衡的。比如，打算申请研究性的硕士课程或者博士课程的申请者，就应该突出自己对该研究的兴趣，并表明适合做这个研究。而对于申请MBA课程的申请者来说，职业经验就是衡量能够进入该课程项目的重要标准，再加上一个适合管理的人格特征。再比如申请艺术类的申请者，则必须在个人陈述中突出自己的创造性和个人创作风格。

留学文书修改方向一：压缩素材，突出最独特最有价值的素材

自身比较优秀，素材多样化的学生容易犯这方面的错误，表现在各种素材堆砌，不加筛选的放在简历与文书中，在看似很丰富的经历中忽视了与申请有关的有价值的素材。

例如有一个学生申请应用数学的研究生，经历比较丰富，大学时是学校活动的积极参与者和组织者，比如十佳社团组织者、校园歌手之类，专业课成绩也很优秀。但是作为一个理工科的申请者，仅有这些是远远不够的。鑫泉留学顾问了解到学生在大二时，参加过一次针对西南地区媒体生存状况的调查，而调查中，学生作为唯一数学专业的学生，负责数据的统计与模型分析。学生认为当时的工作比较简单，所以没有放在文书中，这显然是在舍本逐末。

作为理工科研究生申请者，建议学生重点需要在文书中突出专业能力和专业实习经验，这些比社团或歌手等活动重要的多。

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留学文书修改改方向二：不要太过感性

逻辑思维能力不是很强、擅长感性化思维的学生文书中容易出现类似的失误。形，这里指文章内容，神，这里指文章的思路及逻辑结构。

美国留学本科申请者文书内容中太多散文化的心理描写、太少过往实际经历，导致文章太空洞。本科申请者要明确的是申请文书本质上是要体现自身能力和素质，因此扎实的内容是基础，在此基础上，来寻求文章表达方式和内容的统一。

因为出国留学是人生路上一个重要的选择，在出国留学之前，想清楚自己为什么出国，去做什么，之前具备什么，还需要完善什么，留学的项目能够帮到我什么，在我的职业生涯和人生道路上起到什么作用，这些都是每一个出国留学的人应该慎重思考的。建议申请者站在客观的角度来审视自己，进行留学文书的修改工作。

推荐第8篇：美国大学申请文书的留学个人陈述

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立思辰留学360介绍，美国名校以优质的教育资源，吸引着众多的留学生。在美国留学申请中，留学申请文书的写作水平，堪称是决定美国留学申请结果的关键因素之一。

在专业成绩、语言成绩等硬件条件已经确定的情况下，优秀的留学申请文书能为你的美国大学申请提供巨大的帮助。专家提醒：进入美国名校，不但需要语言成绩、资金等“硬件条件”，还需要留学申请文书这样的“软件条件”。

关于美国留学申请文书，你了解多少？下面专家为你带来详细介绍：

美国留学申请文书的内容一般包括个人陈述、简历、推荐信和Eay。

美国留学申请文书中的留学个人陈述

留学个人陈述就是大家常说的留学PS，个人陈述是极其重要的美国留学申请材料之一。如何让个人陈述受到美国名校的青睐呢？专家建议你要做到以下几点：

1.美国留学申请文书写作要有切入点、主题以及中心；

2.留学文书开头有特色，结束有收尾性；

3.留学申请文书中，切莫画蛇添足，人云亦云，要写有个人特色的留学文书；

4.留学申请文书中不要有原则性的错误：例如美国大学名字错误、个人信息错误、或者明显有抄袭痕迹等；

5.留学申请文书写作中，切莫文章冗长却又言之无物。

美国留学申请文书中的个人简历

除了留学个人陈述之外，个人简历也是文书准备中不可缺少的一部分，个人简历要求美国留学申请者，在一页到两页的篇幅内，简单明了地展示个人情况、教育背景、实习经历、工作经历、获奖情况等信息，使录取委员会对申请者有一个直观了解。

个人简历作为一种自我宣传与自我推销的媒介，其作用也日益受到申请者的重视。如果申请者的个人简历，只是简单的罗列个人资料，或者随便堆砌一些内容，这样的个人简历是很难打动招生委员会的。如果申请者倾注精力创作出内容全面、重点突出的个人简历，那样给招生委员会的印象一定要好得多。成功申请美国常春藤名校耶鲁大学（Yale University）生物医学工程博士的任同学，其经历就值得借鉴，在申请过程中，美国留学网专业服务团队全程为他准备申请材料。在个人简历中着重介绍了他在学校参与科研项目，以及一些发表论文的实践经历。这份重点突出的高质量个人简历，为他成功申请耶鲁大学（Yale University）提供了有力的保障。

美国留学申请文书中的留学推荐信

WWW.SLL.CN 专业课老师或者班主任，商科学生还可以找自己的老板做推荐人。

美国留学申请文书中的Eay

准备留学推荐信时要注意推荐人的选择标准，最好选择那些与你有较多接触机会的推荐人，例如你的

对于美国本科和MBA申请者来说，Eay是非常重要的申请材料。很多学校都会要求学生提交3-5篇不等的Eay，其中1-2篇是主Eay。在写作过程中切记不要照搬照抄别人的文章，要具备鲜明的个人特色。

一份出色的留学申请文书，是你成功申请美国名校不可缺少的材料。例如：成功申请哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University）EE专业硕士的吴同学。在吴同学的申请过程中，在Eay中，独具特色的展示了吴同学的学习经历，让吴同学从众多的申请者中脱颖而出，成功申请哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University）EE专业硕士。

互联网留学360介绍：结构清晰的留学个人陈述、重点突出的个人简历、准备得当的留学推荐信、个性鲜明的Eay这些共同构成了高质量的美国留学申请文书。这样一份高质量的留学申请文书，将会对你的美国留学申请产生巨大的帮助。

推荐第9篇：英国留学申请文书：工程学专业个人陈述

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2016英国留学申请文书：工程学专业个人陈述范文

本文作者同时获得帝国理工学院、曼彻斯特大学、巴斯大学、布里斯托尔大学、南安普顿大学等五所英国名校的录取通知书。以下是其专业PS范文：

Engineering Personal Statement 工程学个人陈述(PS)

In the 21st century engineering plays a more vital role in our lives than ever before.As I look around myself I observe numerous devices that were designed and constructed by engineers.This fills me with a desire to be a part of this great prolific system of creativity and ingenuity.

There are many factors that have promoted my choice of pursuing a career in engineering.Since my childhood I have been fascinated by the mechanism by which devices function.I recall often opening numerous devices to observe the contraptions that lay within.My fascination has not waned over the years; instead it has been nurtured by the environment that I inhabit.My father is a computer engineer and many of my uncles have occupations in the field of engineering.Living in the residential camp of a multinational oil company has provided me with ample opportunities to converse with renowned engineers.Through my

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observations I have noticed that engineers are dedicated individuals that work towards making the world a better place for the rest of us.

At my high school I joined the Physicists’ Society and the Applied Mathematics Society.It was through this experience that I discovered my profound interest in Physics and the application of Mathematics to real world scenarios.To complement this I had a wonderful Physics teacher that enriched my learning experience.Both my physics teacher and my guidance counsellor encouraged me to pursue a degree in engineering as they believed that I had the neceary skills.It was then that I decided that I would certainly enter the field of engineering.

With this decision in mind I began reading numerous scientific journals such as New Scientist, Scientific American and National Geographic to keep abreast of any advancement in the field of engineering.I also took a more profound interest in Physics experiments and found that I particularly enjoyed experiments involving circuits.I attended two Engineering Education Programs offered by Saudi Aramco that helped me understand more about my prospective career.I worked aiduously and achieved numerous awards such as the Physicist of the Year Award, Advanced Mathematics Achievement Award and the

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Busine Studies Merit Award.I was also the Valedictorian for Grades 9 and 10.

To complement my academic life I have participated actively in extracurricular activities both outside the school and inside it.I founded the Students’ Aociation and currently operate it as the Secretary-General.As the Secretary-General I organised two science fairs, held numerous debates and initiated a Model United Nations.I addreed numerous speeches to the school and actively participated in debates at the Model UN.I feel that these activities have refined my communication skills.I also learnt how to organise and coordinate events succefully.

I participated in a variety of sports and played on both the school’s soccer and cricket team.These sports have shown me the importance of teamwork and allow me to participate prolifically in a team.I hope that my captaincy of the school cricket team and my role in the Students’ Aociation have developed the leadership skills that I will require at university and later in my career.

Along with my interest in reading scientific journals I find reading fiction to be a gratifying experience.I read fiction from various genres, ranging from the works of Charles Dickens to the science fiction of

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Michael Crichton.I find that reading allows me to utilise my imagination.I also enjoy writing creatively, bicycling and designing machinery.

Although I am applying as an international student I often visit the United Kingdom and believe that I will be able to adapt to life there.As I am taking the most rigorous course that my school offers I feel confident that I will be able to cope with the aiduous work required at university.

As an engineer I would like to be at the forefront of engineering research, advancing the integration of the concepts of physics, chemistry and biology resulting in an amelioration of our daily lives.

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推荐第10篇：留学申请个人陈述

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个人陈述样本一：

个人陈述

申请人：*********

申请学校及专业：*************

尊敬的学校领导，您好，我很高兴能写这样一篇文章向您描述我的个人背景，以及对贵校和想学专业的一些见解。

我叫*******，是一个活泼开朗、热情大方的女孩，我做事积极上进，有责任心，适应能力很强。我是一个即将毕业的大四学生，大学四年让我学到了许多专业的知识，马上要毕业了，我不打算工作，也没有选择考研，而是非常希望去贵校继续学习，因为我对时尚买手与产品管理这个专业有着浓厚的兴趣。我出生在中国北方的一个沿海城市，父母一起经营着一家广告公司，在他们的努力下，我从小到大一直过着衣食无忧的生活。因为工作的关系，我的父母很注重穿衣打扮，这对我也有着潜移默化的影响，平时我很喜欢看各种时尚杂志，逛商场，买服装、饰品，对时尚产业有着非比寻常的热爱。所以，我想在大学毕业以后去贵校求学，学习时尚和管理的知识，成为一个真正懂时尚，并且可是在时尚领域工作的人。

上中学的时候我就知道，意大利是欧洲文艺复兴的发源地，在艺术、时尚、宗教、料理、电影、建筑、经济及音乐等方面具有重要的影响力，现在的意大利走在时尚最前沿的国家，拥有无数顶尖的时尚品牌，在悠久的历史文化的衬托下，散发着无穷的魅力，去意大利求学是我一直以来的梦想。意大利优秀的学校很多，最吸引我的就是贵校--polimoda。我了解到，polimoda时尚学院是全世界最为著名的时尚专业院校之一，有着优厚的师资力量，是国际时尚奢侈品业备受推崇的专业院校，坐落在国际时尚创意设计与奢侈品管理教育之都、世界历史文化名城意大利佛罗伦萨 ，在实习和就业方面都有着巨大的优势，如果能在这样一所优秀的学校学习，会是我一生都为之自豪的事情。

时尚买手与产品管理是我一直以来都非常想上的一个专业。我认为，一个好的时尚买手，需要非常高的时尚敏感度，眼光要非常好，具有优秀的判断力和服装品位，必须是既理性又具有创造力，熟知服装的面料、流行，服装的设计要点、加工工艺及流程、周期 ，了解消费者以及市场，同时对报表、财务也非常熟知，懂得如何平衡成本和预算。我相信通过学习时尚买手与产品管理这个专业我能够拥有这些能力，我热爱这个专业。

我想在我完成课程，有了专业知识和实习经验以后，回到我的祖国，因为中国消费人口多，专业人才稀少，时尚业相对来说落后，我希望自己能为祖国的时尚业发展尽自己的一份力量。我不是因为向往国外的生活而留学，而是因为去文化底蕴丰厚的意大利求学是我一直以来的梦想，希望polimoda能够给我这次机会，让我去贵校学习专业的知识，接受文化的熏陶，我一定会努力学习！

个人陈述样本二：

个人陈述调查表

姓名：****

毕业（在读）院校：郑州轻工业学院轻工职业学院

专业：电脑艺术设计

【为什么选择马兰欧尼学院？】

意大利是一个拥有美丽的自然风光和为数众多人类文化遗产的地中海美丽的国家。他浪漫的人文与美丽的风光吸引了我，同时意大利的文化也空前的繁荣，是欧洲“文艺复兴”的发源地。意大利也是旅游胜地，可以让人在里面寻找无限的灵感，意大利的大学更为人性化和特色化，这样能接收到更多的新鲜理论还可以发现具体在艺术方面中西文化的异同，完善自我。这就成为了我下决心选择意大利留学的重要原因。因为马兰欧尼学院教学经验丰富，服装设计专业更是屈指可数，机会多舞台大。是自己一直也来很向往的一所学校。

【学校为什么选择我？】

从小我就很喜欢画画，在小学时参加学校的各种画画比赛，小时候也有受到妈妈的影响，经常见到妈妈踩着缝纫机制作衣服的情景，那一件一件精美的衣服穿在自己的身上是无比的欢喜，想着在我们这里也就只有我妈妈有这样的手艺。从小受妈妈的影响，有着一双巧手，做着自己喜欢的diy物品--布娃娃、手机链等。我希望通过在马兰欧尼学院的 学习是自己的能力有所提高，并把自己所学到的知识传播给更多的人，是他们对马兰欧尼学院有更多的认识，也使他们对意大利文化有更深入的了解。

【我具备什么？】---此部分偏重于专业技术方面

我从小学习美术，有扎实的美术功底。也有很强的手工制作能力，有自己独到的见解和创意。经常关注各大时装秀表演，虽然不是一线观看，但通过这些都为我的专业知识储备了大量的信息资源。并且自己有着很丰富的想象力和创造力，有着对服装设计发展的独特灵感和创意。

【我的人生规划是什么？】--在马兰欧尼学院就读，你对哪方面的学术内容有特别的兴趣？学习目标是什么？毕业后要如何发展自己的事业？

通过这些都为我的专业知识储备了大量的信息以及资源。 本人很喜欢服装设计，先王通过在马兰欧尼学院的虚席是自己达到更高的设计水平，并了解到未来人们对服装的需求和定位，时代的发展离不开服装的发展，我们要在不同的时代做出不同的服装设计来满足人们的需求。毕业后回国，并把自己在马兰欧尼学院学习到的专业知识充分的运用到自己的工作当中，传播到更广阔的领域，实现自己的人生目标

第11篇：留学美国 个人陈述

个人陈述：重点（每一个段落都要有一个主题，第一句话是主题，下面以此来展开，支持第一句。）

个人PS分以下几点：

一：个人基本信息及情况（包括家庭状况，学习情况，性格，个人特长）。

二：个人特长（对一的拓展）--主要介绍三个与专业相关的特征

每一个特长自成一段，第一句是对特征的总括，下面是例子的举证。如领导力，就要举出相应的例子进行证明。

三：专业计划（由二过渡过来，因为个人情况，兴趣，能力而选择了这个专业）

第一句是选择的专业，下面是对此专业认识及自己的远景计划。

四：选择美国的原因及录取后，毕业后的计划

总括下此专业在美国的排名境况，然后规划下自己在此专业的长远计划以及学成后的打算。

总之：PS要简洁，明了，每一个段落多有其特色，相应的见模板，从模板中理解上面说的要点。按照上面的要求先写出中文的PS。类似议论文或叙述文。

下面是更细致的PS介绍（可参考）

1、保持真实性。

2、写出特点。每个人的生活都大同小异，但是每个人又有独具特色的一面，如果你写出自己的特色，你就是一个独特的，没有人能够模仿的人，同时你的个人陈述也会激发读者的阅读兴趣。

3、细节支持。再次强调，个人陈述中不要有那么多的虚词和空洞的内容，一定要有细节去支撑你想突出的主题。把一个事物具体化，这样不仅内容充实，有细节，也容易让别人相信，觉得这个事情是真的。

4、抓住他们的眼球。每个申请委员会的老师会阅读每一篇个人陈述，因为这是他们的职责，如何在众多文书中吸引他们的眼球，让他们留下深刻印象？抓住老师眼球你就成功了一半，独特的开头和结尾，吸引人的细节描述比起虚词更能抓住他们的眼球。

5、对自己有信心。信心是成功的源泉，不管怎么样，都要相信自己是最好的。

搜集想法的方式有很多种，比如形象灵感，列单子，头脑风暴等等。现在让我们先来一个头脑风暴吧!或许会有一些东西是你未曾想到的!

1.你是谁?你是一个怎么样的人?

2.你有什么样的优点和缺点?哪些优点你认为对申请有利?为什么有利?哪些缺点你认为是毙命的?

3.你印象最深刻的一件事情?

4.你最有成就感的一件事?

5.你经历最大的挫折是什么?如何度过的?有什么感想或收获?

6.你现在最想做的事情是什么?

7.回忆你最喜欢的一件物品，它对你有什么样的影响和意义?

8.你的老师是怎么样评价你的?朋友怎么样评价你的?家长怎么样评价你的?

9.你最重要的课外活动和社区活动是什么?

10.这个学校为什么要录取你?

11.你的职业目标是什么?

12.为什么申请这个专业?

13.你将能为这个学校带来什么?

14.你对现在所学专业或者将要学习的专业有什么样的认识和看法?

个人陈述写作程序第二步：精简想法

通过以上方法，相信很多内容会在你脑海中出现，比如目标，重要经历，个人优势等等，我们要把大量想法精简，找出最能表现你自己的。你必须找出一个主题，这个主题不仅得将你的个性特征与经历完美融合形成一个连贯整体，还要表达你对进入这所学校的强烈愿望。 审理材料的也是一个正常人，也会疲惫，如何给一个每天阅读50-100份类似文稿的人留下一个持久的印象并非易事，这就要求你的文章必须精简，有想法，有主题，不能把所有你认为优秀的东西都列在上面，必须有所删减。在删减过程中要注意：你选的主题是否有利于突出你个人的价值?有没有具体的事例以能更生动描述你的经历?你的主题有噱头吗?你的主题是不是申请表上一些内容的简单重复?文章中有支持主题的段落吗?你能完整回答提出的问题吗?能在限定的次数内充分表达你的观点吗?你的主题会牵扯到许多其他人吗?例如信奉上帝，民主党或共和党……争议性的东西最好不要出现在这些主题中。

精简想法，把主题确定下来以后，你要仔细搜索关于这些主题的细节，越详细越好!这些细节要有力支撑你的主题。人们都不喜欢空头话，都不喜欢虚的东西。只有细节撑腰，事实做主，写出来的东西才有真实性，才能打动人。在搜索细节的过程中，你就可以计划这个细节适合放在什么地方。

个人陈述写作程序第四步：创建结构和提炼大纲

主题确定了，细节想好了，结构和大纲自然就出来了。这主要想说一下开头和结尾。开头千万不要写我是谁谁，来自哪，想申请贵校什么专业。这样的开头方式太过于开门见山，无任何特色可言。有特色的开头是成功的一半，能让读者有继续看下去的念头。制造一个悬念，创造一个情境等等，都是不错的开头方式。结尾部分也很重要，材料审核者今天心情不好，可能不看你中间部分的内容，但肯定也会看你开头和结尾部分，所以一个好文章，不仅要有吸引人的开头，也要一个给人留下印象深刻的结尾。

个人陈述写作程序第五步：初稿及修改

提纲是初稿的根据，往提纲里头加入细节和内容，初稿就出来了。初稿完成以后，先休息两天，过两天再回头看看你写的文章，再回归到最原始的问题。

1.文章能不能很好表现你自己?

2.文章的开头和结尾是否真的吸引人?是否能给人留下深刻印象?

3.文章是否有明确的主题?所有内容是否围绕这个主题?

4.文章有详细细节支撑吗?

5.文章有语法错误吗?

6.我能写的再好一点吗?

第12篇：出国留学个人陈述

Personal Statement

ByXXX

When occasionally reading the master piece Letter to a Young Lawyer by Alan Dershowitz, I was deeply attracted by words such as Lawyer, Justice, Practice Mentality, and Creed of Life.These words led to my further meditation on the qualities of a lawyer---critical thinking, efficient methods to defend one’s opinions, logical mentality.Living in a society in desperate need of justice and rightne, I had determined to devote myself to the cause of law resolutely.And the first thing is to be equipped with profeional knowledge and practice skills.Thus, after graduation next year from Chongqing University, which is listed in 211/985 project, I intend to further my study at your university due to your prestigious reputation in this area

With great determination and sense of miion, I devoured the pages to learn and think in and out of cla, resulting in the top-ranking score at various courses, for instance, 87% for Lawyers, Notarization and Arbitration Practice; 85% for Corporate and Busine Law; 85% for Financial Law; and 90% for Jurisprudence.Neverthele, I know that a consistent praise is far away to make my dream realized.Hence I submerged myself in the sea of reference books in the law field, such as The Concept of Law by H.L.A.Hart，An Introduction To The Principles of Morals and Legislation by Jeremy Bentham，Justice in Robes by Ronald Dworkin, Taking Rights Seriously by Ronald Dworkin, Constitution Law of United States, The laws by Plato, etc.Since many cases concerns economic disputes and my second major is economics, I also read some books in this field such as The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets by Frederic .S.Mishkin, Economics by Paul .A.Samuelson，The Problem of Social Cost by Ronald Harry Coase, etc.Apart from that, after a half year’s training, now I am very confident to pa the Judicial Vocational Qualification Test in the near future.

I had been the programme manager of SIFE (Student In Free Enterprise) programmes at my university, which is an international non-profit organization that works with leaders in busine and higher education to mobilize university students to make a difference in their communities while developing the skills to become socially responsible busine leaders.There I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable ones.

Our first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant workers.Suffering from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social ladder.There are some companies to manage their busine.Through on-site inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those companies.Deficiencies and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial management.With the help of the supervisor

as well as lawyers and busine consultant we tried to find universal busine modes to benefit as more porters as we can.After 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the company with advanced busine modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations; strengthening employees’ protection and helping the company in refunding.There, my tasks were to lead my team to supervise the operation of the procedures, provide legal guidance in equity and interest allocation, social insurance and the proce of refunding.Additionally, I also did researches on the life status of migrant workers and guided them to protect their legal rights.In the end I wrote the annual report for the programme.

Much as I applied of my profeional skills and felt about the hardships of the migrant works, I congratulated myself that I had chosen such a noble cause.

Moreover, I had participated in another programme named FedEx Migrant Workers’ Children Succe Skills Program.The aim of the programme was to achieve better communications between migrant worker parents and their children, promote more educational opportunities for these children, and help them to establish a scientific life and social value.In order to lead my team to fulfill the task, I invited profeionals to come to offer psychological consultation; gave inspiring speeches, recruited volunteers to teach them social etiquette and hygiene knowledge; and organized books and stationery donation activities.

With these management experiences I had a more comprehensive understanding on how to lead a team to fulfill a task, making it so easier in the third programme called Global Entrepreneurship Week in Chongqing University.By patrols speeches and entrepreneur interviewing did we provide a communication and resource-sharing platform for university students.In this way did students could learn from the entrepreneurs’ experience and knowledge in a more vivid way.This time I followed up the whole proce from scheme, arrangement, implementing, leading the team to solve problems encountered, especially in the status limitation, content prescription, and school official approval convincing.

Besides, I took other programmes as well such as GSVC(Global Social Venture Competition), in which I was responsible for checking agreement and compliance; and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary school.

Apart from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s No.1 Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting procees with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending skills.One other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~2011.In that company I helped the staff with my profeional advice in checking agreement and compliance;

formulating the regulations, explicating the division and aign of stock rights, etc.

When I was exhausted from my work and studies, I would do some exercise to get myself refreshed and revitalized.As the reward of unceasing efforts of being the national second-level athlete, I did a good job in 2008 Swimming Competition of the University Games in Chongqing, and won the third place of 50-meter freestyle, the third place of 100-meter butterfly, and the first place of 4 × 100-meter freestyle respectively.Additionally, I also performed well in 2009 Swimming Competition of Healthy Campus Games in Chongqing, and won the first place of 50-meter backstroke, the second place of 4 × 100-meter mix-style and freestyle respectively.

As for career planning, I intend to pursue my further study of international busine law or trade law after paing the Judicial Profeional Qualification Test; In order to be a partner of law office, I would accumulating my experience mainly in non-lawsuit legal matters and foreign matters; afterwards there would be some further academic demands such as applying for Phd degree.

The legal system in P.R.China now is changing with a higher pace compared with that of the economics globalization, resulting in a greater demand for qualified lawyers who can deal with international cases such as political disputes among countries, busine disputes among enterprises, and cultural transmiion.I want to be one of them who can handle international affair easily due to their domestic education and experience abroad.Wherefore hoping that by contrasting, coordinating and coalescing could I view law and justice from a new and unique angle, I intend to apply to study at your honored university.Sincerely hope that you would spare a careful thought on my considerate decision and I am looking forward to your favorable reply.Thank you!

第13篇：留学申请个人陈述

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

Personal Statement

For nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring work.When I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and profeors attractive to me until one o’clock in the morning.My sense of responsibility for the company made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for America.And my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater preure.

Although over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit come true.

I know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulne while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative ideas.However, the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already existed.That’s why I gave up the achievement without hesitation.I know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx program.In such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally become a top talent to make contributions to the development in the field.

Moreover, my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my pursuit.I became interested in computer science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal interests.But my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua University.Being clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in computer science besides the basic courses required by the university.Although I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of Software.Afterwards, my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was consolidated.

I have a good habit in learning and working.No matter how great the preure was, I would stick to my studies after work.And I finished reading books like Interconnection Networks - An Engineering Approach and reviewed (Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts) twice.In addition, I am very creative.I could solve the instability in file transmiion by using FTP/HTTP

method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent thinking; I could solve the problem of difficulties in managing the patch files by putting the client patch files on the server for Auto update, improving the clients’ satisfaction greatly.What’s more, I am very strict with myself and always keep a heart for excellence.I succefully became a formal employee in advance during the probation period.And I gained the Intermediate Engineer position in only one year which normally took three years by others.At the same time, my strong sense of responsibility helped me never disappoint my supervisors and colleagues even when it was neceary to work overtime continuously or all night.

Besides, I can even get enlightened when facing failures.My experience in taking charge of the GCM—Grandsoft Cost Management project can be cited here as an example.In this project, we adopted C/S structure using COM+/Web Service as the communication method, and SQL Server 2000 as the database.Although the SQL was optimized and different DB engines and components were tried, the querying efficiency was not improved obviously when dealing with ma data and complex busine logics.However, I learned in the course how to improve the efficiency of database query for huge amount of data, how to conduct efficiency test and experiment and how to use the simplest query to realize the huge busine logics.In trial use of the Qlikview software of a profeional data query company, although I was not able to solve the problem, I learned the BI thoughts to cache data into the memory to improve the application efficiency.

However, though I have laid a solid foundation in my years of studies in Tsinghua University and my self-studies during the work, though I have improved my ability in practice and problem-solving, I still lack in theories which can be seen from the above examples.Only practice is not enough to solve problems completely.The importance of theories can be also seen in my adjusting the tree traversing algorithm.I improved the GCM product’s tree building efficiency by dozens of times after I analyzed the general law of data distribution.Therefore, I am more determined to continue my further education abroad.

Having gone through the thinking during the learning-working-learning proce, I believe that I’ve already found what I need.The xxx program will be the most meaningful place for me in my life.The next ten years of concentrative research coupled with my determination to accept new challenges will enable me to become a paving stone on the road of CS development.

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Master of Accounting

Personal Statement

In 2009, when everyone in China was saving money for real estate investments, I was putting money away so that I could come to the United States and study.This was not a popular decision among my family and friends.Why would I give up a great job and life to travel half way acro the earth and become a poor college student again? I don’t know how many times I tried to explain to them that I thought it would be a good investment and that in the end it would benefit my life and my career tremendously.The second reason (and maybe the most important) is that I truly enjoy learning and obtaining knowledge; it makes me feel I am growing as a person and gives me a great sense of self-satisfaction.

My grandfather was a respected profeor at a prestigious university prior to the Cultural Revolution and both my parents are senior engineers who graduated from the best university in China.Though we were never rich by any means, my parents always made it a priority to take me to museums, bookstores, and famous colleges in their spare time.I loved reading stories about famous scientists, especially those who persisted in their theories no matter how difficult the situation.The atmosphere in my house was one that allowed me to cultivate my mind and find my paion.

My decision to major in accounting came from my three-year term as the treasurer of my high school cla.There I was responsible for recording, archiving receipts, making the annual budget, and collecting and refunding money for programs.This job transformed me into a patient and organized person who wanted to learn more about financial management.In 2001, I enrolled as an accounting student at the (college name).(college name) is one of the most competitive universities in China and my time there taught me a lot about the spirit of hard work.Each of my last three years at the university I was awarded a level 3 scholarship as an outstanding student.Upon graduation my major GPA was a 3.6 which ranked me among the top 15 percent of my cla.

To prove my accounting sense and financial management capability I postponed my graduate education and accepted a position as an auditor at (accounting firm name) Beijing Branch.During my 4-year employment there I had the opportunity to experience the full range of planning, auditing, and reporting.Among my duties there were: (1) the designing of suitable audit methods for clients, (2) using procedures to exam and analyze accounts, (3) evaluating the fairne of financial statements and reports, (4) and providing recommendations regarding improving operations and financial positions of clients.

My largest client when I was with (accounting firm name) was (company name).I worked as an auditor of their IPO program and on the first annual audit after that.One of the things I am most proud of is the Revenue and Cost recognition model I created while I was there.It was based on the percentage-of-completion method and could check for inconsistencies within the data, calculate the revenue of projects, and exam clients’ combination results when there are inter-subcontracts.This model was adopted as the major tool for the entire team of auditors (approximately 100) and to my knowledge is still used in (company name’s) audit team today.

My work there not only confirmed my competence in the accounting field, but also trained me into a diligent and persevering profeional.More than 50% of my clients were new clients, meaning we had no records in our database to refer to.The challenge of starting from the very beginning is streful and exciting at the same time.I found myself extremely motivated when I had the authority to design procedures and make decisions.The feeling of succe and confidence I gained from serving new clients is the main reason why I stayed with the (company name) team for 20 months.My work there gave me a great sense of self-satisfaction and was recognized by my peers and supervisors.I was rewarded for my hard work by being one of the top paid employees at my level during my last three years of employment.

When working as an auditor, the thing that interested me most is the conversion between different GAAPs.My experience of serving publicly listed companies in China, Hong Kong, and the US made me realize there are many theoretical differences between PRC GAAP, IFRS, and US GAAP.The accounting principles adopted by different countries not only show their stages of development, but also expre their culture and social preferences.So is it really poible that we eliminate the GAAP difference by implementing IFRS? I am not sure what the right answer is but it is my opinion that the current IFRS employed in Hong Kong is vague and can be the source of many discuable iues.US GAAP, on the other hand, provides a much more advanced and structured approach to accounting.Maybe the US will adopt the IFRS eventually, but I believe that the US GAAP will still provide helpful guidance in the future.Learning more about the US GAAP is one of the main reasons I want to pursue an Education in the United States and I hope to obtain the AICPA license prior to my graduation.

I chose the accounting program at the (college name) not only because of its great reputation, but also because of the financial services option that I am especially interested in.Though my auditing experience proved my accounting skills, I also want to learn more about financial tools, such as bonds, forward contracts, and arbitrage.New businees are relying more and more on the capital markets and having a solid knowledge of financing is a neceary commodity in the accounting field.With (college name’s) financial services option I would be able to take more than 20 credit hours of finance claes, which will help me become much more proficient in the area of financial analysis.

After graduate school, I plan to go back to China and consider a career in a new developing industry.The ability to see my accounting and financial management knowledge evolve into a hopeful, healthy, developing busine is my motivation for this choice.

Although many of my family and friends may not think that coming to the US to study is the best decision, I believe it will broaden my knowledge of accounting to an extent that I could never find in my home country.Also it will allow me to follow my own paion and learn from another culture which will be an invaluable aet for the rest of my life

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Finance is the lifeline of modern economy and if there is no finance globalization, there is no economy globalization.Finance globalization promoted to enlarge international finance market; multinational trade species and the scale, to make finance innovative appeared, strengthen international capital function and to play an important role on the resource distribution in the world.With the communication among nations increase and the technology information development, the development of finance tends to globalization.Finance globalization is the motor of economy globalization, finance and economy was one of the important factors for holding for the whole world, information, technology and other industry were developed on the base of finance and economy.

The economy strength of a nation decided its place in the world.In the future, the world finance market would present themselves with different styles; non-eential economy began to play an important role in the world, the development of information industry made finance market develop more quickly.Moreover, finance influenced largely on the daily life of common people and made common people more concern the development tendency of finance then before and made out the relevant reaction according to getting information from all aspects, for example, the change of inflation, stock and exchange rate etc.All that influenced common peoples (people’s) lives and economical programs.

I began to realize that finance in fact was the different (difference) between microcosmic and microeconomic and macroeconomic knowledge through my

learning in the university, and it owned strong practice and was not abstract knowledge.For instance, currency banking, investment and international finance etc.all offered many cases and made me realize the meaning of finance.Then I knew that finance covered a wider scope and researcher needed strong academic background and ability on macro-control by practices and analysis of cases.For example, I acted as a leader of group, each group represents an enterprise and discued whether open new produces instead of old produces, I told every member to answer for a part and consult materials, then we talked about them together and found some materials had superposition and didn’t have close logic, even each member had different emphasis and expreions which made me know cooperation was very important in a enterprise.So I held the second meeting to talk about these questions.I asked all members to look for materials relevant to this case respectively and then analyzed them together.During the proce, we thought about them deeply and fully, finally we got a best scheme.

Through this experiment, I became lover finance major than before, because it not only brought me model and data but also interest on (in) connecting knowledge with practices to make data and model vivid.Even each new idea produced different result.Finance is not a material concept but is social science, which contains a wider scope.I am very glad to involving discovering unknown things in this field.Just like discuion, many members’ thoughts inspired me and we got satisfied results.Finance is a social science which embodied human being is the eential.We could cultivate our academic taste during the learning symposia and academic discuion proce.In the practices we could cultivate intuition added combination with academic background and mathematic theory; we could understand finance better.

So I pay attention to connect theory and practices more than before, in my spare time I took part in social practices, for example I visited “international finance” of newspaper office and “Shanghai stock exchange”, besides I took part in planning for the “second finance year meeting” in Shanghai University of Finance and Economics.During the proce, I met many finance people and got a chance for visiting Holland bank.Moreover I often consulted lots of finance journals and website materials etc.In order to connect theory with practices better, I carried on special researches on these problems.

For example, I began to research “RMB Globalization problem” and its aim was to review substantial economy and non-substantial economy how to influence currency international globalization from demonstration and theory angle to help us understand the experiences and leons happened on the proce of each national currency globalization and offered some feasible references for RMB international globalization.I connected the fact of our national economy development, especially, the base fact of RMB used by some nations around China, through researching the general rule of currency internationalization globalization, to discu the problem on RMB international globalization proce.

First, I reviewed the main countries’ currency globalization proce in the world, and found that currency globalization must have two basic conditions.The first was rich economy strength; the second was to keep valuta long stabilization.Second, I pointed out RMB globalization was the neceity choice of our national economy persisting development and the benefit of currency globalization according to the impersonality requirement of economical globalization development, and RMB globalization would more enlarge the degree for opening to foreign.

At the same time I thought that stable, quickly developmental national economy and larger economical scope made RMB of our country globalization strengthens and higher ability against risk, the last part emphasized the proce of RMB globalization and the research on keeping away from risk.The proce of RMB internationalization was: first implement RMB regional strategy on the basis of East Asia currency cooperation and East Asian free trade, then implement RMB globalization stratagem under many perfect factors influence.

But during this proce, it was very difficult for me to research non-substantiality economy in China.At present familiar to us, it was the stock market, while in China the stock market system did not very perfect and exist some problems on efficiency, security and fair.For example, I consulted many materials and knew several stages of Chinese stock iue, international paper department how to iue stock and the relative policy and system of stock market, then I asked my advisor how to comment on it and collected some comments of experts on the website.Besides I logged in MARKET WATCH and bought several stocks to do experiment to find out the conclusion that China it was more perfect, so Chinese stock market needed to be improved.

Finance is very important in all fields and no other field can exist with breaking away from finance, so the requirements for financer should be improved in the future.Above all, in the future society, the requirement for financer was higher than before, the talent only mastered profeion will unfit the future society.Because in China there are limit resources for me and I am impreed by your esteemed university, so I decided to go abroad for my future education

第14篇：留学申请个人陈述

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

Personal Statement

My interest in finance can be initially traced back to the bestseller entitled Rich Dad, Poor Dad written by Kiyosaki Robert T.and Lechter Sharon L..Though a ten-year-old boy at that time, I was much fascinated with the economic knowledge conveyed in simple expreions of the book which I read for several times and shared the cases in it with my friends.My motivation to explore the financial world also benefits from my parents both of whom have achieved higher education in finance and engaged in the relevant fields.Having received a rigorous academic training for my past undergraduate study in Renmin University of China, I’m eager to educate myself on an international scale.

Finance appeals to me by its extensive and profound nature.As far as I’m concerned, the relationship between finance and economy is akin to that between blood and body.Just as the physical conditions can be reflected from the circulation of blood according to the Chinese medicine, the economic operation of a country can be judged from its financial status, funds flow, etc.My exposures to the profeional courses of Money and Banking, Corporate Financing, Macro/Micro Economics, Econometrics, International Finance, and Insurance as well as the mathematical courses such as Mathematical Analysis, Advanced Algebra, Probability Theory and Mathematical Statistics have enabled me to lay a solid academic foundation of finance.Meanwhile, bearing in mind sound interpersonal skills and hands-on ability are the basic personal qualities required of a succeful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake practices.I began to invest in the stock market in 2007.In face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some profeors and my parents.I was uplifted during such a proce, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock market.I value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be applied.More importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the comparison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of insurances.In these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and comprehensive command of complicated knowledge.Besides, I derived self-confidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely lay.

My other unique aets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important role.When I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of commercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function setting.Meanwhile, I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakne gauged with the profeionals.I had my profeional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my internship in People’s Bank of China where I learned about the functions of the central bank and my prominent performance won recognition from the persons in charge there.Furthermore, my on-the-spot investigations in a goal

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

mine enterprise and a copper mine enterprise allowed me to see other fields where finance matters tremendously through my exposure to the financial conditions, profit resources and development trends of the enterprises.These experiences, combined with my bountiful extracurricular activities such as the volunteer position of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, involvement in organizing exhibitions and shows have prompted me to set my own career goals—compared to the research work, I prefer a more practical career.And I have learned to focus on the way to achieving my goals—to pursue more advanced education in America, the ideal place full of practical opportunities regarding finance and economy as a whole.

I have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of finance.Your program of finance, with its well-structured curriculum, highly-productive faculty as well as a multitude of real-world projects matches my academic background and interest perfectly.I hope to work in a world-cla financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the completion of my master program and your diverse student body and strong alumni work will no doubt become a stepping stone leading me to my career goal.Fully prepared and determined, I’m convinced that your university is precisely my starting point.

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第15篇：留学申请个人陈述

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

Personal Statement

For nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring work.When I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and profeors attractive to me until one o’clock in the morning.My sense of responsibility for the company made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for America.And my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater preure.

Although over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit come true.

I know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulne while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative ideas.However, the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already existed.That’s why I gave up the achievement without hesitation.I know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx program.In such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally become a top talent to make contributions to the development in the field.

Moreover, my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my pursuit.I became interested in computer science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal interests.But my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua University.Being clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in computer science besides the basic courses required by the university.Although I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of Software.Afterwards, my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was consolidated.

I have a good habit in learning and working.No matter how great the preure was, I would stick to my studies after work.And I finished reading books like Interconnection Networks - An Engineering Approach and reviewed (Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts) twice.In addition, I am very creative.I could solve the instability in file transmiion by using FTP/HTTP method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

thinking; I could solve the problem of difficulties in managing the patch files by putting the client patch files on the server for Auto update, improving the clients’ satisfaction greatly.What’s more, I am very strict with myself and always keep a heart for excellence.I succefully became a formal employee in advance during the probation period.And I gained the Intermediate Engineer position in only one year which normally took three years by others.At the same time, my strong sense of responsibility helped me never disappoint my supervisors and colleagues even when it was neceary to work overtime continuously or all night.

Besides, I can even get enlightened when facing failures.My experience in taking charge of the GCM—Grandsoft Cost Management project can be cited here as an example.In this project, we adopted C/S structure using COM+/Web Service as the communication method, and SQL Server 2000 as the database.Although the SQL was optimized and different DB engines and components were tried, the querying efficiency was not improved obviously when dealing with ma data and complex busine logics.However, I learned in the course how to improve the efficiency of database query for huge amount of data, how to conduct efficiency test and experiment and how to use the simplest query to realize the huge busine logics.In trial use of the Qlikview software of a profeional data query company, although I was not able to solve the problem, I learned the BI thoughts to cache data into the memory to improve the application efficiency.

However, though I have laid a solid foundation in my years of studies in Tsinghua University and my self-studies during the work, though I have improved my ability in practice and problem-solving, I still lack in theories which can be seen from the above examples.Only practice is not enough to solve problems completely.The importance of theories can be also seen in my adjusting the tree traversing algorithm.I improved the GCM product’s tree building efficiency by dozens of times after I analyzed the general law of data distribution.Therefore, I am more determined to continue my further education abroad.

Having gone through the thinking during the learning-working-learning proce, I believe that I’ve already found what I need.The xxx program will be the most meaningful place for me in my life.The next ten years of concentrative research coupled with my determination to accept new challenges will enable me to become a paving stone on the road of CS development.

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第16篇：出国留学文书写作：个人陈述(PS)的写作方法

出国留学文书写作：个人陈述(PS)的写作方法

自述，即Personal Statement，是所有出国文件中最重要的部分，它是申请者最主要的自我包装。申请的过程就是要把自己倾销给评审者的过程。你的任务是让这一文件反映你的个性和才智。写自述即使对以英语为母语的北美、英联邦国家学生也是颇费心力的事情。对中国申请者来说，用英语写作本来就是困难的事，更何况自述是为了表现和包装自己，有违我们的文化习俗，所以写起来往往倍感吃力。中国申请者往往没有面谈的机会，因而这份文件愈发显得重要。需要忠告所有的申请者：必须捉住机会，充分且恰如其分地表现你的人格魅力、聪明和已取得的成就。制作自述要花大量的精力，决不能草率从事。你已经花费了多年的心血，完成了大学甚至是研究生的学习，你也可能又在随后的工作岗位上积累了宝贵的经验，现在又通过艰苦卓尽的努力成功地考过了IELTS、TOEFL和GRE。然而，你的任务并没有结束。你必须静下心来，有条不紊地处理多种文件，这其中自述是重中之重。

怎样真正地把此项工作当作重中之重呢?并不是让你赶紧往买一本所谓范例然后照着抄，而是要借此机会严厉、认真和全面地审阅自己的才能、潜能以及出国留学的目的。这种对自己的能力、向往和追求的透彻了解是写作自述的基础。根据笔者在国外求学、工作的经验，可以这么说，在写好自述这件事上，中国留学生可以说是遇上了一个深层次而且是重大的文化差异。其中所谓“深层次”就是说这个差异不是西方人喝咖啡中国人喝茶、西方人称“Darling”而中国人称“孩子他妈”那样简单。

国外很多“雇主”和大学的录取评审者非常重视求职者、求学者对自身

是否了解以及对自己的前途和目标是否明确。在他们的文化中，这样的自我了解被视为是人的素质中很重要的一部分。同时，他们也十分重视对此作出个性化表达的能力。我并不是要讨论文化题目，而是力求以最短的篇幅给申请人以最大的实用指导。切记不要把写作自述一事当作官样文章而草率应付。国外教育机构的官僚主义经常愈甚于我国，但要求写自述，的确不是官样文章，而是给申请者一次表现自己的机会。请各位申请人切记，这样的表现一定要富有个性。

怎样判定自述是否反映了个性呢?最简单的办法就是看第二个人是否能写出一样的或是差未几的内容。真正富有个性的自我先容是不可能与其他人的自我先容雷同的。尽管有很多人有着看上往类似的求学、求职经历，但是每个人对学习、工作、事业和他人的感受应该是独特的。即使两个人所有的学习和工作经历都相同，也都计划往同一个领域深造，但是引发他们对该学科感爱好的外部事物和内心感受也必定是有区别的。所以，在我们谈到写作自述其他留意事项之前，首先要求申请者要独具创意。在写作时认真而全面地审阅自己的方法就是默默地自问如下题目：

1.对所要申请的学校和专业是否有了深进、细致的了解;能否做到在写自述时紧扣学校和专业的要求及特点，突出自己的申请上风?

2.我的人生经历中有什么独特的、非同平常的地方?在我的家庭生活和社会生活中有哪些人或事件影响了我的人生观和事业追求?这些影响有什么与众不同的地方?

3.我最初是如何对目前所选专业感爱好的?我在其后的岁月中又是如何加深了对这一学科领域的熟悉的?我在这一领域已经取得了什么样的成绩?是什么因素使我相信自己能够在这一领域有所建树?

4.在上学期我从事了哪些助教、助研、社会实践或暑期工作?通过这些活动在什么方面得到了进步(比如科研能力、组织能力和领导能力等)?在步进社会后的工作中完成过什么项目?取得了哪些成就?表现出何等才干?

5.我终极的事业目标是什么?6.我多年来的考试成绩有没有需要解释的地方?比方：大学成绩一直很优异，但GRE成绩却不怎么理想;高年级的成绩是否比低年级的成绩有明显进步?

7.在自我奋斗的过程中是否需要克服超常的困难，如家庭生活贫困、身体残疾等?

8.我是否具备杰出的品格，比如老实、可靠、善良、刻苦等等?对此我能否提供真凭实据来加以证实?我是否具备值得一提的优秀的工作习惯和态度，以及品质上的上风。

9.我具备什么样的特殊才能，如分析能力、领导才能和交流才能?我为什么比别的申请者更具有在事业上成功的把握?

要回答这些题目的确不轻易，但你必须在正式写作自述之前全面预备，认真思考这些题目，由于你的自述需要回答所有这些题目或其中的大部分。对内容有了把握后，就要留意写作技巧了。这里说的写作技巧不是英语水平的题目，而是写作思路、取材和段落的安排。写自述的最大忌讳就是写得毫无特色、枯燥乏味。要知道每一个录取评审委员需要阅读成百上千份自述，其中大多数自述的内容都是雷同的。他们不可能有时间和精力在平淡中寻找不平常，努力发掘你的优秀之处。要写得醒目，捉住读者的留意力，这个责任完全在你自己。

所以，自述的第一段或者是前两段尤为重要——必须能够引起读者对你

的爱好，且能体现出关于你个人的最重要的信息。假如你的这两段内容中有闪光之处，能够给人留下深刻的印象，那么就达到了最佳效果。

鉴于尽大多数申请者的确有着类似的学历和工作背景，而且现在又在追求一个共同的目标，因此，写作中的雷同很难避免。在这里，笔者要夸大获得独特性的两个重要方法：一是寻找独特的思想方法或审阅自己的独特角度;二是在陈述过程中采用故事手法。

采取第一种方法时，我们要从多种角度确定文章的基调。在此，我们对三种较常见的类型进行扼要论述：

1.克服生活中的逆境型：笔者曾看过一位外国申请者写的自述。作者的家庭背景是贫苦的、不识英文的第一代亚裔移民。作者没有回避自己多花了几年时间才完成大学的教育并且成绩较差这一惨痛的事实，而是就此题目展开了对自己的先容。作为宗子的他肩负帮助父母抚养年幼妹妹的重任。因此，完成大学教育对他来说需要艰苦卓尽的努力。通过他的叙述，一位意志坚强、吃苦刻苦并具有高度责任感的年轻人的形象跃然纸上。

温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求可以 联系QQ：970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。

这位作者申请的是法学院，难度较大，但作者有力地陈述了他的理由：他的父母像很多亚裔移民一样，不懂英文，更不懂在美国用法律的手段来保护自己的权益。他现在申请读法学院，目的就是为了将来能够使用法律的武器维护美国少数族裔的权益。

这样的信读起来感人至深，作者当然也被录取了。成功之处就在于作者能以独特的角度来看待自己的经历和追求的目标，并使两者达到了高度同一。

在写这种在逆境中奋起的自述时，应通过事实来描述过往的经历及这段经历对自己的求学、事业和人生目标的正面影响。切忌耽于自我怜悯，或以一种谴责评判的方式使文章显得布满怨气。本章列举的第7例Bi Niniu (真名隐)的自述改后稿可说是这种自述的经典之作。

2.自我成长型：这种申请人在生活、学业和工作上虽不可避免地碰到了某些挫折，但相对来说，他们的生活比较一帆风顺。写这种自述一定要用正面、肯定的语气，清楚、精炼，同时又要充分、多方面地展示自己独特的才智、事业和求学的追求方向。本章列举的第31例Cai Tian先生的自述即属于这一类型。

3.家庭影响型：这可以是好的家庭背景对申请者产生了正面的影响，也可以是艰难或不好的家庭环境作用于申请者，使之反思并发奋图强。写正面的影响时留意不要过分渲染家庭的帮助和督促向导作用，由于这往往会使评审人以为你缺乏主见和能动力;同样，写不好的家庭背景时，也不要太多着墨于种种困难，重要的是突出自己不屈从命运安排的精神和志向。

至此我们谈到了全面和深刻地审阅自己、寻找独特的角度以及注重运用细节等题目。下面提出一些关于材料取舍题目的建议供读者参考：

首先，千万不要遗遗漏那些有用的和中肯的成就、经验等事实。此外，最好不提的还有政治观点、宗教信仰和其他一切轻易引起争议的话题。有个别申请者在文件中提到了“上帝”这样的字眼，犯了西方社会宗教和

学术分离的大忌。

第17篇：留学文书写作高手总结的个人陈述技巧

留学文书写作高手总结的个人陈述技巧

我在去年帮助我老公做了20几所学校的申请，所以在申请方面也积累了一些经验。我相信Personal Statement (PS)和Recommendation Letter (RL)的写作可能是大家在申请过程中遇到的最大问题了。思马得工作室出的一些GRE的书，在这些书的后面有做书信服务的广告，说是一个G2300，T660，GPA3.7的人被美国大学拒之门外，而一个G不足2000，T607，GPA2.9的申请者却获得众多大学的录取和奖学金，原因就是申请书信决定着他们的命运。我相信确有其事，因为在我的身边就有这样的例子。我在上研究生的时候，高我一届的一位师姐，曾经对我说过，他们那一届申请的同学里面，确实存在着GT分数最高的一个男生去了一所极差的学校，而GT勉强上2000和600的一个女生却去了他们那一届所有申请者中最好的大学。

我没有拜读过他们的PS和RL。但是我相信他们的申请书信确实存在着差异，不然不可能相差那么大。只不过，个人意见，我从不相信那些写作工作室会写出什么真正意义上的优质书信。因为隔行如隔山，外行人是肯定不可能讲内行话的。所以我连任何一本关于写申请书信方面的指导书也没有看过，并且也从来没有在网上看任何范文。因为我相信，既然你可以找到这样的范文，别人也一样可以找到，如果大家写的东西都一样的话，你还怎么突出你自己的个性呢？所以我下面写的内容如有雷同，纯属巧合。

我写PS和RL的写作原则来源于我在北京青年报上看到的一篇文章-----是对一个美国教授的采访，徐小平的签证哲学，以及我对美国人价值观人生观的观察和思考。具体总结PS和RL的写作原则就是：

1.专业原则

你在你的PS和RL里首先要写大量的专业性的东西，并且在写RL的时候尤其要以指导老师的口吻写很多你做实验的细节性的东西，并且说你如何解决了一些决定性的问题。因为谁都可以说自己做了什么什么很难的东西，可是如何让对方信服，就看这些细节性的东西了。就象去骗签证官，如果你无法说出一两个专业名词的话，即使有大学毕业证书证明你是哪所学校什么专业毕业的，也不能让签证官相信你确实是去美国上学，而不是去打工或移民什么的。因为任何文件都可以造假，而你的思想是造不了假的。你要尽量把你的思想给反映出来。道理是一样的。

你一定要记住，美国的大学之所以给你奖学金，求着你去学他们的理工科专业，并不是因为你的英语学的比美国人好，GRE考的比美国人高，或是想给中国免费培养人才，而是你能为他们做实验，能给他们出文章，你在美国攻读学位期间所做的工作将会或大或小的为美国的经济发展做出贡献，尽管也许一时还看不出来。所以，专业原则是最重要的一个原则。你可以在写作的时候出一点小错误(当然最好是没有)，也许你的辞藻不是很华丽，但是，这些小纰漏都可以原谅，我相信美国大学的录取老师不会就这些表面的东西抓住不放，因为你的母语毕竟不是英语，但如果你对自己的专业一无所知的话，这就不可原谅了！

正因为这个原则，所以我不认为求助于一些专业的写作机构可以给你带来什么好处。

2.个性原则

我相信申请出国的大多数人都不是牛人。当你不是牛人，无法向对方吹嘘自己是多么的聪明的时候，你就必须向对方展现自己的个人魅力。当你坐在计算机前开始写作的时候，你一定要想清楚自己是什么样的人，自己有什么优点。如果你不能让对方相信你的聪明和爱因斯坦是同数量级的(这种人指的是毕业于名校，GPA在3.8以上)，那么你就应该让他相信你的勤奋或是坚韧的毅力与阿甘相比有过之而无不及，--------当然你也可以想出你的其他优点。不过，你也不要把我的意思弄拧了，我并不是说，你不能说自己是聪明的，而是说，你或许可以着更多的笔墨在你的勤奋上。毕竟，聪明仅仅是成功的一个因素，而你的毅力，合作力等等可能是成功更重要的因素。你应该善于揣摩对方的心理，要知道，不管是中国的导师还是外国的导师都希望自己的学生把大部分时间花在实验上，而且做事要有责任心，要有百折不挠的勇气，而有时聪明的学生可能这方面做的并不很好。

3.优势突出原则和实话原则

这两个原则本来都不想写，因为觉得谁都应该知道的，可是考虑到可能还是有人没能明白这个原则，所以还是得写。我丈夫就是这样的。他的第一篇PS给我看了，他谈到了他父亲的死对他的影响，谈到了要为中国的富强做出贡献(看的我好感动)，可是他对自己人生的闪光点却只字未提。我对他说要重写，而且第一篇1个字也不能保留。他的PS应该是这样的：他于某某年以全年级第一名的成绩被保送到北京大学化学系(并且此时要注明全年级有多少人)，并且北京大学是全中国排名第一的大学。又因为在北京大学学习优秀，在多少多少人中脱颖而出，在某某年获得年级或系里的奖学金。并且又于某某年因为在多少人中排名多少名，被著名的北京大学保送到著名的中国科学院读研究生，等等。下面的就不用我说了吧，反正你曾经获得过什么奖励，获得过什么特殊的机会是一定要写明白的。对了，还有你的最有说服力的优势，就是你发表的论文。你的文章是在什么杂志上发表的，这个杂志有没有被SCI收录，SCI影响因子是多少，也一定要写清楚。这可是重头戏，对你的录取有极大帮助。所以大家千万不要小看你的文章，而且如果有可能的话，尽量往国外杂志上发。

然后是实话原则。从小在中国的政治课中教育出来的中国学生们喜欢喊口号，回忆一下我们上的作文课，语文老师谆谆教导我们写作文立意要新，眼光要高，最后都要归结为要为四化做贡献这样的大而宽的主题中去。可是，有谁能真正相信自己学习的最内在的动力是为祖国做贡献呢？写PS的时候不是展现你的爱国心的地方。一个一直在社会主义下成长和受教育的人尚且不会相信你拿学位的最大动力是因为爱国，更何况是一个西方思想的老外？所以你宁可把自己讲的普通一些，也不要给别人留下不诚实的印象。不过，你一定要谈你学习某某专业的动机，最好也最普通

的动机是你的兴趣，或是你对未来事业的设想，但是，不管你写什么，你一定要让对方相信这确实是你最内在也是最直接的动机。-----既然写了，就一定要写的象些。

4.自信原则

美国人喜欢自我表现，他们喜欢自信的人。不管你是写PS，还是去见签证官，或是以后在课堂上做presentation，你都要牢记这个原则。所以自信原则是贯穿于你的PS始终的。你要象展示你的传家宝一样自信的向他们展示你闪光点，也要以expert的语气大谈你做过的课题。所有你的这些语气，都会为你赢得不少分数的。

5.清楚原则

所谓的清楚原则，就是你的PS中没有任何有疑问的地方。就象写专业论文一样，如果有缩写，在出现的第一次，你一定要写出它的全称，打个括号写上缩写(当然是除了众所周知的，譬如GRE，TOEFL之类的)。如果你拿过奖学金，一定要象我在优势突出原则中写的那样，要注明是在多少人的竞争中拿到的。并且，你上的大学排名多少也一定要注明。因为外国人是不可能非常清楚地了解中国大学的情况的，所以你一定要给别人留下清楚的感觉。这样，你的才华才不会被埋没。

6.简洁原则

这个原则来源于我看到的OF156表上，申请学生签证时必须填的学习计划。以后大家会看到，这一项中给的空格特别小，估计也只够写下30-40字的，而学习计划则是多么庞大的一个课题啊！老公不禁抱怨美国人小气，那么节省纸张。其实，美国人倒不是为了节省纸张，而是为了节省时间。不会有人会有时间去看你的冗长的叙述的，所以你一定要写的简洁。我认为一篇PS以一张半A4纸为宜，最多也不能超过两页。一封RL也就一页纸。但是，你在这么少的篇幅里一定要写出你的个性。如果能用一句话写的，千万不要用两句话。有效的用一些同位语插入，缩短你的篇幅，当然这是以句子流畅为前提的，不要把文章写的象GRE的阅读那么晦涩难懂。每段开头最好有一个topic sentence，这样让看的人可以最快的抓住主题，不要让人家看半天也不知道你想说什么。反正要用最短的篇幅反映最多的内容。譬如说我给老公在OF156表上写的学习计划是这样的：某某领域，在中国正方兴未艾，而美国某某大学的某某教授是这个领域的领头羊，我相信我在某某大学学习这个专业一定会对我回到中国后，在这个领域的发展起到巨大的促进作用的。基本上两句话就够了，既说明了你学这个专业的目的，也说明了你为什么回国。

反正我想原则性的东西就这些了，具体的写作还要靠大家去自己把握。文章写好后，最好给英文好的人看一下，再请自己专业的人看一下。多找几个人最好。

其他的想法：

很多人在讨论套瓷有没有什么作用，我曾在GTER的网站上看到一个台湾人写的文章，说是他得到了5个学校的OFFER，其中只有一个学校是套瓷得来的。

确实如此，我认为套瓷的成功率只有20%，甚至更低。我老公在联系学校的时候，也套过瓷。并且他的研究方向是一种中国特有的中草药，而且他还就这种中药发表了一篇SCI2.0以上的文章。当时最为难得的就是美国有一所大学的一个教授也在研究这种中药，于是就写信去套瓷，人家教授倒是很热情，信件往来了好几封，照道理来说，这所学校是最有希望的一个，可是他还是把我老公给拒了。后来是一个没有套瓷的学校给他发来的OFFER。所以我认为套瓷的作用不大，因为即使教授要你，可还是要通过研究生院或系里，这会儿，就看这个教授有没有实权了。如果他讲不上话，那跟没套瓷也差不多。所以大家还是要把精力放在申请上，套瓷是你把所有材料都寄出去以后才做的事。

第18篇：英国留学个人陈述(英文)

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英国留学个人陈述范文(英文）

个人陈述(PS)是国内学生申请英国大学研究生必须要提交的申请材料之一。个人陈述也是申请者对自己的评述，如个人能力、性格、爱好等。个人陈述的好坏有时和申请成功紧密相关。

那么如何出一篇好的个人陈述呢?首先大家要反思自己的学习经历;确立文章的主题，写作也要有自己的特色。同学们可以多参看写优秀的个人陈述范文，结合自己的实际情况才能写出好的PS.

由于商科类申请的同学偏多，小编特地为大家分享一篇商科类的个人陈述，希望大家可以从中找到灵感。

As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work.When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books.This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own busine someday, yet I understand that the busine world today is more complex.This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Busine Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

通过一个故事开头，讲述自己为何对busine感兴趣。

In addition to my helping out in my father’s busine, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program.My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively.Further, as an aistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules.Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

讲述自己的相关经历。但是感觉在谈及经历时候不够具体，应该说明具体做了什么事情，从中得到什么经验或者教训。

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Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee.Part of my volunteering experience at Middle way House, the local battered women’s shelter, involved extensive work on computers, including word proceing, organizing databases and creating spreadsheets.Also, I recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the personnel division.As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB, with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

志愿者活动同样值得在ps中讲述。

My succeful internship is one element of my overall academic succe as an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball.My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important busine contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest.以上是百利天下留学为您介绍的英国留学个人陈述范文的相关介绍，希望对您有所帮助。如果想了解更多英国留学相关知识，可拨打百利天下留学免费咨询电话：400-890-6000，或者登陆百利天下留学英国站官网：http://uk.bailitop.com/ 进行了解咨询。

第19篇：英国留学个人陈述1

Personal Statement

To whom it may concern:

First, please allow me to introduce myself.I am XXX; I graduated from XX University majoring in XX in July2012.Hereby, I apply for your master program in International Busine Management.

In the first year of university, I joined organization of busine management.During that period, my communicative and organizational abilities were improved greatly.Besides, I paid much attention to profeional courses and read textbooks and profeional books in the library to enrich my knowledge.In the second semester of junior and senior years, I served internships in an international enterprise.In practice, I realized the importance of solid foundation profeional management knowledge.This experience also developed my strong interests in international organizational management and operations, which made me to choose international busine management in your university when I decided to study abroad.Because I am planning to be in charge of integrative management in an international enterprise after graduate in the future, and I think my bachelor program background will help me on the busine fields, however, the theoretical knowledge and practical skills on international events management will be more neceary and important, which could give me strong supports on my work.

I studied diligently; I am good at thinking and actively remitted to lecturers about difficult questions.Besides, I established a study group with my clamate in my middle school, we often discued problems.So I could have positive influences on my clamates, making the cla actively and aiduously.I like to communicate with my clamate and lecturers about what we learned, what we are interested in, what happened between us and in the worldwide, which makes me have lots of friends and boarded our horizon.Furthermore, I believe my intense interest in the course will affect the cla, and my experiences on management through internships could be considered as some cases of study.For international busine management, an international surrounding is also good for our study and I am pleased to provide the related documents and materials from my country.

Thank you for taking your precious time to read my application! Your favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated.

Applicant: XXX

Date: XX

第20篇：美国高中留学个人陈述

个 人 陈 述 根据个人具体情况去写，主要把自己的个性特点、特长、爱好描述出来

一、自我介绍，如：

我叫某某某，出生某年某月某日，目前是****中学高中毕业生。我的爱好有哪些，我的特长有哪些，在校内校外取得了哪些成绩包括在校外参加了哪些活动？

这一段主要写出你自己特有的东西，另外不能直白的流水账一样列出爱好及特长，要稍加描述。

二、为什么选择出国留学，为什么要去这个国家。

三、为什么去这所学校（根据这所学校的特点，表明出这所学校是最适合你发展的学校）， 要写出你对这所学校的认识及你后期的目标，如申请哪个大学、想学哪个专业等 以上每部分写出你特有的真实的东西就好，给别人展示不一样的你！

注： 以一篇记叙文要求去写：真实、可信、具有说服力。

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