1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2.也会带来一些问题； 3.你的看法？ 点评：
2009年的四级考试作文沿袭了近几年四级作文的特点，即问题解决型+观点对比型的结合。属社会类话题，纵观各个辅导机构的预测作文，没有人预测博物馆的话题。但是就今年的考题形式而言，三个段落的写法在课堂上都讲到了。下面是分析：
按照课堂所讲审题阶段应该关注英文标题和汉语提纲，即：1）Free Admiion to Museums 2）汉语提纲3条。从中可知，核心话题是free admiion, 从三个方面来探讨这一话题即可。
根据\"先结构后表达\"的原则安排段落结构即可做到结构清晰：
先结构：
1、段写该现象的目的（其实就是好处）；
2、段写问题（即负面影响）；
3、段写看法（或解决措施）
后表达：
确定好各段结构之后，利用3分钟时间联想各部分可以选用的句式和词汇表达，并以关键词的形式列出以帮助自己理顺写作的思维。
写作完成之后，检查。
下面为用课堂所讲套路写的简易版本，供大家参考。
Free Admiion to Museums
首段
版本1：In recent years, an increasing number of museums become free to the public.（或：It can be noticed that ...）There are several aims for this phenomenon, but the following may be the most critical.Free admiion enables people, especially students, to have more opportunities to visit museums, where they can acquire knowledge of history, arts, customs and so forth.
版本2: According to a recent survey by China Daily, about 84.3% of museums become free to the public.By doing so, museums attract millions of people to visit every day.In addition, the visitors, especially students, broaden their horizons and enlarge their scope of knowledge.
中间段:
There are, however, several negative effects which we can not turn a blind eye to.Firstly, owing to free admiion, a large number of visitors will visit museums.Consequently, the museum may become too crowded.Even worse, free admiion may result in some financial problems.For instance, museum workers can hardly get enough salary.Last but not least, the preservation of cultural heritage may be impaired.
尾段：
版本1：(课堂讲过的) Personally, I am convinced that free admiion to museum is a two-edged sword, which presents us both advantages ?and troubles.The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize the benefits and minimize the negative influences.
版本2：From my point of view, it is high time that we took measures to eliminate the negative impacts.Firstly, regulations should be worked out to limit the number of visitors to museum every day.Secondly, it is advisable for government to offer financial aistance to museums.Only in this way can museums provide service to public in a better way.
Free Admiion to museums 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 也会带来一些问题； 你的看法？
Free Admiion to Museums?
Nowadays, a lot of museums open to the public for free, and a lot of people are attracted to go there.However, it also brought some unexpected problems.
At present, people can get knowledge from many ways like libraries, internet, and other sources.However, there is also much information that people cannot get from the above ways.Free admiion museums supply more chances for the public to get knowledge that cannot be easily acceed.People can learn more things about history, art, science and so on.Although, this kind of policy brought much convenience to the public, it also caused some problems.For example, beggars and shabby-dreed people may enter the museums and cause bad reputation among the public; along with the increasing number of people getting into museums, there will be no enough service establishments to meet the requirements; besides, under the policy of free admiion, the cultural relics displayed there may be inevitably broken or damaged by the crowds.Moreover, the crowds in the museums may also cause security problems. In my opinion, free admiion is a good policy for the public, and it brings the public much convenience.But, we should also take poible measures to protect the cultural relics and maintain the order of spot.Besides, we can also take the policy of giving free admiion first to children, then to the retired person, and last to the public.I think, this may help to solve the problems.
明星代言问题
On the Celebrity Spokesperson
Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media.This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.
There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items.This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized.Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awarene, giving rise to changes in public behavior.In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public.To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.
关于选秀节目
Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels acro the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life。
There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to expre and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows。
This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies。
食品安全问题
On the Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button acro society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily。
There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend。
As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a maive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead。
社会不文明现象
On Uncivilized Behaviors
We cannot fail to notice that countle uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witneing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website。
As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknees but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a maive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role。
感恩
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude
On college campuses acro the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countle traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expreing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth。
Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks acro society are the final remedy for this social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awarene of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on。
大学生使用信用卡现象
On Credit Card
At present, a wide vareity of credit cards iued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities acro the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in poeion of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests。
Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides.On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments.On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and exceive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off。
On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents。
开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that… .However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．． People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于….人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits . 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议: It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is eential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果: Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger .很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unle we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边. I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do…. 在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
Why did… ? For one thing… For another….Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法: Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法: As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
如何连接
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially.Obviously, clearly. 比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally. 对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, neverthele, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast. 列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except (for), to illustrate. 时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while. 顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important. 可能 presumably, probably, perhaps. 解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms. 递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again. 让步
although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen. 转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately.whereas 原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to. 结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence. 总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short. 其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case, 图表作文常用句型
As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示…
As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…
All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…
The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%. In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变
There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.
