广东高考英语基础写作训练技巧指导
一、写作的基本要求
1、信息完整(所写的文章中一定要包含所有的写作内容)
2、不超过5句话(句子的复杂性,多使用从句,非谓语动词和连词及一些复杂的句型)
3、内容清楚连贯,逻辑性强(使用恰当的连词,使文章连贯)
4、尽量减免语法错误
二、写作技巧以及顺序
A.通篇浏览,把握整体。浏览文章信息,并对其进行处理,将其分割成五句话,做到哪句话包含哪些信息心中有数。
B.集中兵力,逐个击破。在第一步的基础上,把五个句子逐一写清楚,包含所需信息。在组织句子时注意以下几点:
1.一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾,然后想办法拓展这句话,把其它的信息加进去。
2.一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并列谓语)。
3.将多个句子并到一起,并且要做到只有一个谓语的话,有3种方法:
1)使用各种连词。
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world.句中用到and连接2个并列简单句,前后都可保留谓语,顺利将2句变成一句。
连词包括具有递进关系的并列句, 如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。
2)使用从句。包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.
3)使用非谓语动词,及一些特殊句型。如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.非谓语动词ranking作结果状语,表“主动”。
C.想办法为作文加分
1.多多使用各种连词,使文章更为连贯。
顺接/递进:Firstly/ secondly/thirdly, besides, in addition, what’s more, what’s worse, what’s more important, moreover, also, finally, last but not least,.
转折:but, however, neverthele(然而), yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, while 原因:because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to
结果:so, therefore, as a result, so that, then, so „that, such „that
总结:to sum up, to conclude, in conclusion, in summary, finally, in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,2.多使用高级词汇,句式和短语进行变换,不要重复使用一个句式和短语。同时要注意避免常见错误:
1)不要为了减少句数而不断使用逗号,一定要通过从句,连词,非谓语等来减少句数。
如:It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields.改为: It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields.
They could not work in the fields, because it was raining hard.
2)时态错误:一定要根据文章的语境判断该使用的时态