Dear Susan: When I learn that this seion’s aement of my performance is very positiveI am very delighted.I enjoy working forA.D Corporation and I am eager for continue to serve the firm to the best of my ability.In the light of this positive aement, I would like to request a review of my current position as the H&R Director.I aume, there would also be an appropriate salary adjustment involved in this promotion.As you know, every aignment you give to me was completed very well.In this seion I was major in charge of the staff mobility and the aement of the stuffs of A.D Corporation, and from the beginning to now thanks to my management our company’s stuffs performed very well, we did every aignment in high quality and efficiency.And the relationship of the stuffs was very harmony we treat each other as our close friends, when we have an aement to do never have a people tried to avoid the responsibility of his own, all of us tried our best to do the aignment in the best quality.Of cause, I have done my best to make my company runs smoothly.Needle to say, I enjoy my current jobvery much.However, the above projects do exceeded the original job description.They require me to invest extra hours and take additional responsibilities in order to ensure their proper implementation.Given my positive performance and additional effort I have made, I would very much appreciate your consideration in reviewing my officialposition with the company, along with the appropriate Salary adjustment.I am sure that I will work harder if you agree with my application.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your favorable reply.Yours sincerely
