高一英语 冯蕊 2013.11.30
高一英语写作讲义
(一) 第一次月考作文分析
题目：假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信要邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况，并依照调查写一篇报道。请根据下表提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。 主要的用途：1.阅读国内外新闻，学习英语。2.发email、欣赏音乐、看电影、玩游戏等。3.网上购物。
出现的问题：1.过多地在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业。2.浏览不健康信息，对身心有害。
范文：
As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.We can do many things by the Internet.For example, we can read the news around the world, learn English, write e-mails, listen to music, see a film and play computer games on the Internet.Oh, we can go shopping by the Internet, too.So it is very useful for us.
But at present, the Internet also has many disadvantages.Because many teenagers spend too much time on playing computer games, they have so le time to study that their study grades get worse.It’s a very serious problem.Some people look through unhealthy news by the Internet.It can influent their minds and themselves.
In my opinion, we should make good use of the Internet and form a good habit to use the Internet.I think you can do it.(二) 三步作文法
1.List the key points罗列出关键点
have acce to learn news at home and abroad as well as learning English send e-mails, enjoymusic, see films, play computer games
do online shopping
spend too much time in playing computer games online（be buried in） waste time/ affect their studies（do harm to）
2.Make sentences造句
They can not only read news at home and abroad but also learn English by the
Internet.
With the help of the Internet, they can have acce to learning the latest news
at home and abroad as well as learning English.
3.Form a paage and polish形成作文并修改完善
(三) 写作小技巧
满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。高考大纲中常用的连接词有以下几类：
并列补充关系：what’s more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in
addition等等。
转折对比关系：but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary,
although, different from, in contrast to, in spite of, unlike, neverthele, not only…but also, years ago…today, the former…the latter, then…now, theonce…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others等等。
因果关系：since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that 条件关系：if, on the condition (that), as long as, unle, or else等等。
时间关系： when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately,
recently, since, from then on, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, now, after, presently, later, finally, at last, all of a sudden等等。
特定的顺序关系：above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in
the end, at last
换言之：in other words, that is to say, to put it another way
举例说明：for instance, for example, like, such as
陈述事实：in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth
总结：on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing,
in summary等等。
特别要注意谓语用什么基本时态以及前后的时态呼应，注意句子与句子之间的有机
联系，段落与段落之间的自然过渡。这样既能显示出你的高中水平，又能使文章层次清楚，文理通顺、结构严密紧凑，衔接自然。这样只要要点全，准确无误，语句通顺流畅那就是高水平、高档次的作文。
(四) 写作训练
题目：假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式与初中有很大的不
同。你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。请你根据下面的提示补全此信。
1.开始学习高中英语时，觉得学习英语有很多困难，难得让他几乎丧失信心；
2.后来逐渐意识到英语的重要性；
3.每天努力学习英语，例如多读书，多背诵英语课文等；
4.向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法；
5.他们的帮助和您的鼓励使我取得了很大的进步，现在对英语越来越感兴趣。
作文：
Dear Mr.Li,
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progre in my English study since I became a senior high student.
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Thank you so much for your great help in your cla.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
