Dear leaders, distinguished guests, ladies and gentlemen: Today, for Zhaoyang is a happy day, Zhaoyang group is 10 years old now.
You (who )attend celebration activities ①are our chief
executive XX、general manager XX and the other leaders、retired employees and in-service staffs.In this, I, on behalf of Zhaoyang group staff， expre our heartfelt thanks to you②.
Then in this special day ，I want to tell you the history of our company.
At beginning, Zhaoyang only was a small store, owning only a team about tens of staff, and a room rent, which was only 10 square meters.Up to the present, the Science Research Production and Management Base’s foundation, is located on Gaoxin Road 3③.with its developments， Every block is filled with our labor④.It suggests that our company entering into a new starting point.Today, Zhaoyang has been developing a Hi-tech enterprise, which is established in realizing diversified development requirement gradually, but based on the equipment production, sell, project installation and technology service, and enter into aerodynamic and LED potted application industry.By far, we has 这部分应该是定语，“who”好像可以省略
改动：删expre前的“to”成句子
③ 改动：改成现在时，“locate”好像要被动；应该是“road 3”吧？“3 road”太别扭了！ ④ “between”改为“with” ①②
owned five items Zhaoyang Brand patent, and has been elected Famous Private Management Enterprise by Industrial and Commercial Bureau of Suzhou government.Everything stands for our company’s strength and potential.
Our company’s present achievement owes to every leaders and aociates present①.On behalf of MIC staff, I thank you very much.And in the future, we still need everyone’s support to prompt each other‘s improvement.Thank you once again.
Today, we have prepared the company for the banquet, and performances.Hope you have fun.
At last, I believe our company will continue the profeional technology, warm service to prompt our company’s busine achievement in future②.
Thank you very much.①
② Depend on 改为了“owe to”加了个“achievement”
