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Agree or disagree: In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.(14.01.12)
题型：绝对题（今昔对比、家庭话题）
角度：具象拆分
观点：让步段
开头：不同意祖父母的意见对于孙子是无用的。（ 话题引入+双方/某方观 点+明确立场及过渡）
Grandchild has been the apple of grandparents’ eyes.No matter how poor or rich a family is, the grandchild always enjoys extra love and care from grandparents, taking their advice to polish behaviors and minds.However, with the changes of the society, some people claim that the advice from grandparents to grandchildren is not useful anymore.As far as I’m concerned, this aertion is arbitrary and unilateral because there are at least two aspects in which grandparents’ advice still remain valuable.My reasons and examples are given below.（88 字）
中间段1：遇到挫折方面。（主题句+说理论证+细节例子）
Firstly, the advice from grandparents works well when children run into frustrations in life.It is because grandparents have sufficient experiences in coping with failures based on a great deal of ups and downs that they have gone through.For example, in my high school, I was the so-‐called straight-‐A student because I excelled at any kinds of exams.But in a mid-‐term exam, I just achieved a score making me fall out of top 3, which disappointed me so much that I even suffered insomnia.My grandfather tried to cheer me up by a story that he used to be a soldier who managed to smash enemies’ fort with his teammates after a series of setbacks.That inspirational story indeed put me together.(124 字)
中间段2：在判断人方面。（主题句+说理论证+细节例子）
Secondly, grandparents’ suggestions are really worth considering in terms of judging people.Due to lack of social experiences, a youngster usually judges people by appearance without the ability to see them through, which could cause deception.In this case, the advice and
suggestions from grandparents are likely to be helpful.Just imagine that a young girl is dating with a guy who has a decent looks.But at a family diner, the girl’s grandma recognized that he might have an inclination
