第一段：Over the past few years, XX has become the most popular ~~in china.
It is estimated that …
There is no doubt that XX have play an increasing important role in modern society.However, its ~~is no small matter at all.
或:Amid fierce competition on ~~/(job markets), ~~/ (a desirable job) is the utmost concern of many graduates.If I have to make a choice between XX and XX, I would rather choose the former.
第二段：To start with, ~~~
Despite the lack of compelling evidence, (…) is believed to ~~.So XX should avoid/X doing …whenever poible.
或：the first reason for my choice is that …
Over the past two years, getting employed ~~ has become increasingly difficult for someone.
第三段：Moreover (/Secondly), ~~ has become an overwhelming … for someone, who are likely to do …, and … ; Exceive use of … is not only ~~, but … 或者~~ have difficulty providing for /doing …, which is why I’m reluctant to add to their trouble by doing ~~.
第四段：Last but not least, … With ~~, I can pursue … when I … ~~ is closely related to … In this way, I can enhance ~~
第五段：There are other negative effects to ~~
However, we have to admit that its benefits outweigh its harm.What counts is to use it properly in order to ensure your mental and physical health.
或:This is why I prefer to … However, what’s said above doesn’t mean that ~~are of little importance.
或：So, we can come to conclusion that the new policy contributes to relieving the preure of population age, improving the ability of children to communicate with others and enhancing the stability of society.So, why not to endorse the new policy?
