How to improve student\'s mental health
1、大学生的心理健康十分重要
2、因此，学校可以....。
3、我们自己应当....。
题目分析：
学生的心理健康是近年来被热议的话题之一，属于经典的问题解决型，故不外乎采用举例子，作比较，分类别，列数字，打比方等方式讨论。
参考范文：
Students\' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life.There is a general discuion today about the iue of disorder in brains。
Obviously, it is neceary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems.Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation.To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention.What\'s more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats.Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance.Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time.Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a profeional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.(学校)
From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illne by taking certain precautions.For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to expre these is a good way to release preure.Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the iue。(我们)
总结：
potential threats 潜在威胁
ease 减轻，舒缓
psychological problems 心理问题
precaution 预防措施
release preure 释放压力
play an important/critical role in sth
it is widely accepted that ……
To begin with, What\'s more, Besides,
From the factors mentioned above draw the conclusion that 等等均为经典模板句式!
2010年12月英语六级考试作文预测及范文(1)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票
2)分析产生这种现象的原因
3)提出你的建议
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩票的现象;分析导致人们购买彩票的原因;针对购买彩票提出一至两点“我”的建议。
【参考范文】
Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries?
Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth.Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets.But why do so many people like buying them?
The following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries.First of all, most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets.They have a long-cherished dream of making big money overnight.In addition, there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets.Besides, some people buy them just for fun.
As far as I am concerned, there are some risks in buying lotteries.People never should count on making big money by buying lotteries.Furthermore, lotteries to some extent are similar to gambling, so people should not spend too much money and energy on them.In a word, people should keep a clear head when buying lotteries.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Drunken Driving.You should write no le than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.醉酒驾车增多的原因
2.醉酒驾车的危害
3.如何减少醉酒驾车
Drunken Driving
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted.Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon.Firstly, recent decades have witneed the rapid development of people’s living standards.As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life.Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine.Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.
Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it.Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, paengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths.Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources.Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious loes of faith in governments and the society.
In view of the seriousne of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse.First, it is eential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving.Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awarene of public safety.With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for National Civil Servants.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮
2)分析产生这一现象的原因
3)你对此的看法是……
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出近几年社会上出现的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近几年来报考国家公务员的热潮;分析产生这一热潮的主要原因;谈谈“我”对报考公务员的看法。
【参考范文】
Test for National Civil Servants
In recent years, there are more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants.Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation.And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage.The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.
The following reasons can account for this kind of craze.Above all, nowadays college students face great employment preure.Civil servant, as one of the most stable profeions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice.Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people.Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.
In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years.However, from the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation.If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources.Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze. 2010年12月英语六级作文出题方向预测
王江涛老师指出，根据往年出题规律，预计12月份考试作文考论说文的概率在70%左右，考应用文的概率在30%左右。论说文的话题，一般也不会考太热门的话题，建议考生多准备一些次热门话题或中热门话题。
六级作文范文：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Universities lower Admiion Requirements for Celebrities? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来很多名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生，一些人强烈反对这样做
2)但也有不少人认为这很正常
3)你对此的看法是……，为什么?
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一些人对于某种现象的看法，提纲第2点指出对该现象的另外一种看法，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近年来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生这一现象;对比阐述关于该现象的两种不同的看法和各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种看法并说明理由。
【参考范文】
Should Universities lower Admiion Requirements for Celebrities?
In recent years, many famous universities lower admiion requirements for celebrities.More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination.This phenomenon has become a subject of widespread controversy.
Some people object strongly that universities lower admiion requirements for celebrities.They hold that this admiion pattern will damage the basic fairne rule of education.In addition, they say that if a person who has not enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it would be an insult on college education.However, still other people think it acceptable.They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field.Besides, in their opinions, these celebrities to some extent set a good model for other young people.
Weighing these two arguments, I prefer the latter one.For one thing, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning.For another, if they accept advanced education, they could serve the society better.Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities’ efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy.
2010年12月英语六级作文预测及范文(1)
Part Ⅰ Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic To Curb Spending.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.现在许多大学生普遍花钱大手大脚，消费水平高
2.有人认为社会整体生活水平提高了，大学生花钱多一些无可厚非
3.你的看法
To Curb Spending
【话题分析】
大学生消费是目前家长及教育界比较关注的问题，它所反应的不仅仅是花钱这一表面现象，而是隐藏在这一现象之后的大学生的价值观、金钱观等思想层面的问题。
【范文解析】
Nowadays the campus students seem to have no idea of how money comes from, and not to care about their expenditure.They buy whatever they like for themselves, also for their friends, paying no attention to how much these things cost.
Some people say that it is not a problem for college students to spend much.After all, the society is progreing and the life is being enriched.With the living standard being raised, it is reasonable to improve the expenditure of students.There is nothing to blame.
For me, it is not just a habit of spending more money; it is a reflection of students\' outlook on money and value.The students get money from their parents so easily that they have no idea of earning money with their hard work and effort, thus developing an awarene that they want to get things but are unwilling to work hard for their goal.Definitely, that is harmful.The campus students can improve their lives, but with the money earned by themselves.
第一段讲述了这一现象，大学生喜欢什么买什么，从不关注钱从何处来，也不关心自己的花销。
第二段提出了一些人的看法，他们认为社会进步了，生活水平提高了，大学生多花一点也无可厚非。
第三段讲述了作者自己的观点看法。在作者看来，这并不仅仅是花钱习惯，更多地反映了学生的金钱观、价值观。学生从父母那里很容易就能要来钱，所以他们就不会想通过自己的努力来赚钱，渐渐就会培养这样一种想法：希望不劳而获。最后作者强调，学生提高自己的生活水平并没有什么不对，但要用自己赚来的钱。
【高分妙招】
议论文经常出现在六级作文中，考生要注意合理表达自己的观点，表明自己对问题的看法。在论述中，不要仅仅停留在表面层次，而要深究其内在原因，才能给考官留下深刻的印象。
2010年12月英语六级作文预测及范文(2)
Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled A Harmonious Society in My Mind.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1.建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势
2.我心中的和谐社会是….
3.为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做?
【话题分析】
和谐社会是目前中国建设的目标之一，是比较热门的社会话题。报纸、杂志、电视新闻等，经常讨论此话题。考生应多关注社会新闻，为写作收集素材。
【范文解析】
Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of China\'s modern construction is to build a harmonious society.All of a sudden, \"a harmonious society\" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc.It is the trend of China\'s development.
But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society.First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people.Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen.Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing busine.Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity.Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment.Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy.
To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal.For me, I am a student in college.What I can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as poible, spread this awarene to as many people as poible, laying a foundation for this tall building.
文章一开始就提到目前中国现代化建设的目标之一，就是构建和谐社会。一时之间，构建社会成为中国发展的趋势。
第二段从六个方面讲述了和谐社会的内涵：1)民主政治，保证人们的最大利益;2)公平正义，保证每个公民的权利;3)诚信友好，为生活和生产提供良好环境;4)充满活力，确保社会的创造力;5)稳定有序，保证生活平稳安定;6)人与自然和谐相处，实现经济可持续性发展。
第三段从自身出发，讨论在构建和谐社会时自己该如何做。作为一名学生，作者认为：和周围人发展友好关系，乐于助人，传播“和谐社会”的意识，为这个宏伟目标奠定基础。
【高分妙招】
六级作文很贴近国家大事，因为对时事政治的了解是对当代大学生的要求之一。出现一个新的命题，考生应多关注其内涵及相关评论，这样写作过程中才能做到“胸有成竹”，写出来的作文才“言之有物”。
模版1
some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1.but other people take an opposite side.they firmly believe that 观点2.as for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.first of all, 论据1. more importantly, 论据2. most important of all, 论据3. in summary, 总结观点.as a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
people hold different views about x.some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.as far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. for one thing, 论据1. for another, 论据2.
last but not the least, 论据3.
to conclude, 总结观点.as a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（争论的焦点）。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.the reasons are obvious. first of all, 论据1。
furthermore, 论据2。
among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.that is, 论据3。
a natural conclusion from the above discuion is that总结观点。
as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.
1)We should take some effective measures.2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
11.表示结论
1)In short，it can be said that...
2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ...12.套语
1)It’s well known to us that ...
2)As is known to us，...
3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that ...
5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.
)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the iue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ...been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
八)结尾
1) From what has been discued above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is neceary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned iue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
二、用于描写图表和数据
1.It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.2.There is an increase of 20% in total this year.
3.It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.
4.It would be expected to increase 5 times.
5.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.
6.It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.
7.The total number was lowered by 10%.
8.It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.
9.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.
10.The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.
11.It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…
三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文
1.Everybody knows that…
2.It can be easily proved that…
3.It is true that…
4.No one can deny that
5.One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…
6.The chief reason is that…
7.We must recognize that…
8.There is on doubt that…
9.I am of the opinion that…
10.This can be expreed as follows;
11.To take …for an example…
12.We have reason to believe that
13.Now that we know that…
14.Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…
15.The change in …largely results from the fact that
16.There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…
17.A number of factors could account for the development in…
18.Perhaps the primary reason is…
19.It is chiefly responsible of…
20.The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…
21.Here are several poible reasons, excerpt that…
22.Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…
23.It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…
24.Different people observes it in different ways.四、用于文章的开头
1.As the proverb says…
2.It goes without saying tan…
3.Generally speaking…
4.It is quite clear than because…
5.It is often said that …
6.Many people often ask such question:“…？”
7.More and more people have come to realize…
8.There is no doubt that…
9.Some people believe that…
10.These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?
11.One great man said that…
12.Recently the iue of… has been brought to public attention.
13.In the past several years there has been…
14.Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…
15.Currently there is a widespread concern that…
16.Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…
17.There is a general discuion today about the iue of …
18.Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.
五、用于文章的结尾
1.from this point of view…
2.in a word… 3.in conclusion…
4.on account of this we can find that…
5.the result is dependent on…
6.therefore, these findings reveal the following information:
7.thus, this is the reason why we must…
8.to sum up …
9.as far as…be concerned, I believe that…
10.It is obvious that…
11.There is little doubt that…
12.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful
13.None of the solutions is quite satisfactory.The problem should be examined in a new way.
14.It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…
15.Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that… ●过渡性句型：
1) this is true that...
2) This is true, no doubt, but...3) ...also...
4) It is one thing to...; it is another to...
●描写图表和数据的句型
1) ...rank first (both) in...
2) ...in proportion to...
3) A is by far the largest...
4) As many as....
5) The number is ...times as much as that of ...
6) The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.
7) It accounts for 35% of...
8) By comparison with ..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...
9) ...rise rapidly(slowly)
10) ...remain level...
11) ...reach ...
12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in
13) be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline (……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)
●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：
1) As can be indicated in the table, ...
2) As we could find out later， ...
3) As is revealed in the table，...
4) As the survey results show，...
5) This table provides several important points of comparison
between，...
6) The two graphs depict the same thing in ...
7) The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:
8) According to the figures given in the table, ...
9) This chart shows that ...
10) As is shown by the graph, ...
