2014中考英语作文必背万能句
回信类作文句型汇总
1.It is my great pleasure to hear from you (万能回信开头句)
2.表建议句型
It is highly suggested that you should(not)„
In addition, you are supposed to do sth
Meanwhile,„is also a good way for you.
3.高级词汇的顺序词
to begin with,可替换 at first,
then\\next, 可替换 second,
finally, 可替换 third,
4.可被替换的连词
however, 可替换 but
therefore 可替换 so
otherwise 可替换 or
中考作文必备的10个\"万金油\"句型
1.不用说„„ It goes without saying that „
= (It is) needle to say (that) „.
= It is obvious that „.
例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
2.在各种„„之中，„„ Among various kinds of „, „ /= Of all the „, „
例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
3.就我的看法„„;我认为„„
In my opinion, „
= To my mind, „.
= As far as I am concerned, „
= I am of the opinion that „.
例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4.随着人口的增加„„ With the increase/growth of the population, „
随着科技的进步„„ With the advance of science and technology, „
例：With the rapid development of Taiwan\'s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pa.
随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5.„„是必要的 It is neceary (for sb.) to do / that „
„„ 是重要的 It is important/eential (for sb.) to do / that „
„„ 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that „
„„是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that „
例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.
It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.
我们应当保持公共场所清洁。 6.花费 spend „ on sth./ doing sth.„
例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
We shouldn\'t spend too much time on something we aren\'t interested in.
7.how 引导的感叹句
例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。
At least it will prove how honest you are.
8.状语从句
A) 如果你不„„，你就会„„ If you don\'t ..., you\'ll ...
例︰If you don\'t keep working hard, you\'ll lose the chance.
如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。
B) 如此 „„，以至于„„ so „ that „
例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.
当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。
C) 每当我听到„„我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear „, I cannot but feel excited.
每当我做„„我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do „, I cannot but feel sad.
每当我想到„„我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of „, I cannot but feel nervous.
每当我遭遇„„我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with „, I cannot but feel frightened.
每当我看到„„我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see „, I cannot but feel 正文部分：
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discuion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：
Please come and join in it.surprised.
例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.
每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。
9.宾语从句
我认为，„„ / 我认为„„不 I think / I don\'t think that „
我想知道是否„„ I wonder whether „
例：He doesn\'t think I should stop him joining the club.
他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10.Since + S + 过去式, S + 现在完成式.
例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。
一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：
With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen， May I have your attention， please？ I have an announcement to make.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.
（二）如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童，构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议：提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大、自卑。2.缺乏安全保障（家庭照管不力，容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室，老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。 3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。
Dear Mayor:
I\'m a middle school student.（我是一名中学生）I\'m writing to tell you something around us.（我现在要写信告诉你我身边的一些事情）Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns.（现在这有许多父母因工作而离开家乡的留守孩）Most of them are from the countryside, you know,（你知道，他们大多自农村）they have many problems.（他们有很多问题） They are always lonely and streed out because they are short of their parents\' love（因为他们缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大） At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they\'re short of their families\' care.（同是，由于缺乏家庭的关爱，他们容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。 How to solve their problems?（怎样解决他们的问题呢） In my eyes, the government can set up a parents \'school for these children on holidays,（我们可以看到，政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校）you can organize\" hand-in-hand\" activity to call on more people to help them.（你能够组织＂手拉手＂活动来帮助他们）You can also raise money to donate to these children.（你也可以为这些孩子募集钱）As the song says: \"If everyone gives their love, the world will
be better.\"（就你一首歌里唱到的：只要人人都献上一片爱，世界将变成更美好的人间＂） It\'s very environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps society.（如果我们想要建立一个和谐的社会，关注这些孩子是很重要的） to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as
Best wishes to you! poible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the
’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a
clarooms in order to save energy.What
Sincerely, 二．保护环境，倡导低碳生活 Li Hua
（一）低碳生活：现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。提示词语：be good for，everyone，ride a bike，think，make a difference，environment，suggest，reuse Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment， I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides， I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the claroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as poible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment， I believe the earth will be a better place.
（二）保护环境：从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等
注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。 3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook参考作文:
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the
bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the
simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we
can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
（三）.环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重
2.砍伐森林严重
3.大气污染严重
4.白色垃圾等。 要
求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面， 80字左右。 How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are being cut down, some animals are getting le and le.Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources are getting le and le„etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn\'t throw away rubbish everywhere.We should recycle ,reduce and reuse things .Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as poible. We don’t use plastic bags .We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful .
（四）.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it；2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines；3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down；4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources
参考作文：Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them, something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity.It is crucial.We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other learning.The more I wanted to remember, the harder I found it was.I was in a low spirit.I almost gave it up.Luckily, my English teacher encouraged me and helped me find a good way.Litter by litter I realized English was not such a terrible thing.I became brave enough to open my mouth to speak English.How excited I was! My confidence came back to me.Believe it or not , I won the first prize in Spoken English Competition in our school.It was the first time I experienced the highs in my life! electric machines when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.三．介绍风景名胜: 我们的家乡有着悠久的历史和秀丽的风光。假设你是一名导游，你正在接待一个来自英国的旅游团，请写一篇短文简要介绍我市的风景名胜，不少于80词。 参考词汇：long history, beautiful views, tour guide, relaxing , educational, friendly 中考英语作文范文欣赏:
Good morning, everyone! Nice to meet you ! I\'m your tour guide today, Welcome to my hometown ---Duyun
Duyun lies in the south of Guizhou Province, It has a very long history and many beautiful views.For example, Wenfeng Park and Baizi Bridge are the most beautiful and relaxing among them.And the air is very clean and fresh.Duyun is famous for its bridges and it is also a good place for shopping and having delicious food .So far, a lot of new shopping malls have been built.You can buy what you like there ,If you want to try traditional Duyun food, you can go to Night Snack Street, The food there is both delicious and cheap.There are still many other interesting and exciting things waiting for you to enjoy yourselves! Let\'s go for them! 四．高兴或伤心之事的经历: 在学习和生活中，你遇到过高兴和难过伤心的事，请用英语描述这样的经历。要求： 1：词数不少于80个，开头已给出，可选用下列词汇：experience 经历经验
unhappine 不快乐
confidence 自信心
Hights And Lows In My Life
We all have experienced highs and lows in our lives.I will never forget the experience when I began to learn English.I like English but I couldn\'t get the right way in
四、校园生活介绍：
（一）
My School life
My name is Beth.I\'m 14 years old, and I study in No.1 Middle School of Hangzhou.My school is very big and beautiful.I\'m very happy in the school.I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning.Then I do morning exercises in the playground.At 6:40, I have my breakfast.You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room.After breakfast, I often read English with my clamates.We have six claes every day.The first cla begins at 7:50 am.I like all the claes for my teachers can make the claes lively and interesting.My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week.I can speak English with many other students there.It\'s very interesting and exciting.I think it\'s helpful for me to learn English well.After cla, I always play games with my friends.We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on.They are very relaxing.I like my leons, my friends and my teachers.In a word, I love my school.I find my school life more and more meaningful and colorful.My school life is wonderful, isn\'t it?
（二）假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you， at the end of ， kind， forget， help„ with， stay in touch
Dear Ling Feng，
I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I
will never forget.Last term， I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the leons， you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help， I didn\'t fall behind others.Since then， we have become very close friends.I think I’ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools， I’ll always stay in touch find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.
六、关于中学生使用手机
Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school with you.I wish you succe in the future.ours，
iu Yan
（三）你觉得你的校园生活安全吗？请你写一篇题为“How to Keep Safe in school”的短文。谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件（经过与结果）。2.提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议（至少两条）。 3.呼吁每个学生要注意安全
How to Keep Safe in school”
Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough.For example，Last month，my friend Tom fight with a clamate.And Tom chase the clamate.By the time he run into the clamate , the clamate had already closed the door, so Tom hit the door, and then he send to the hospital soon, and he stay in hospital about two weeks.So, we should know the important of the safe in school.Here are my suggestions.We can\'t fight with others.And we should get on well with our clamates.What\'s more, we should be carefully in our school life.Let\'s keep safe in school, and have a better life!
五、网上购物
Shopping Online With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn\'t step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.But there\'s always a trap（陷阱） online.If you are carele, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you\'d better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will
students.Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and clamates.Also, they can be used to listen to music or take photos.But others think that Y
we don’t need to talk with parents and clamates with mobile phones, because we meet them every day.LAnd mobile phones may influence our study.In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way. Yours truly, Wang Lin
七、与父母相处的话题：这类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。 假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。 提示词语：listen to, mother\'s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile 写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在80左右
Dear Han Mei,
I\'m afraid I\'ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, \"Be careful while croing the street.\" \"Put on more clothes.\" \"Did you do a good job at school?\" and so on.I\'m annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?
Alice
例文：Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it\'s not a good way, but it shows your mother\'s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are
different from your mother\'s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are I\'m going to study in Canada, so I\'ll have to find a room to live in.I know housing is very thinking about. expensive there.Please help me find a room at a lower price (about 150 dollars).Please If your mother doesn\'t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile. I hope e-mail me if you have any good news.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.what I say here can help you a lot. Yours
八、应用文：
Li Ming Yours （一
）
.e-mail Han Mei
例1：根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
Dear David,
I\'m glad you\'ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now.It\'s difficult for you because it\'s quite different from English.You have to remember as many Chinese words as poible.It\'s also important to do some reading and writing.You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening.Do your best to talk with people in Chinese.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions, please ask me.I\'m sure you\'ll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours
Wang Ming 例2：李明要到加拿大上大学，必须找一间住房。请帮他发一封电子邮件给Jenny, 叫她帮忙找一间较便宜的房间(大约150美元)，因为那里的房租较贵。李明的邮箱是Liming @163.com, Jenny的邮箱是[url=mail to:Jenny@compmail.ca]Jenny@compmail.ca[/url]
From: Liming @163.com To: [url=mailto:Jenny@compmail.ca]Jenny@compmail.ca[/url]
Subject: Help Rent a Room Date 30/06 9:04AM Dear Jenny,
To: Kayla @hot mail.com
Cc: None
Subject: Pen-pal wanted Hello, Kayla,
I’m Mike.I am 15 years old.I’m glad to know that you would like to have a pen-pal.I also want to find a pen-pal from the Internet.When I’m free, I like to listen to the music, go hiking and play basketball.I’m good at English and art .We can learn from each other
and be good friends .I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes.Mike
（二）.明信片：Jenny正在北京玩，她昨天去参观长城，很快乐。她要把长城介绍给她的父母，长城大约6500公里长，用大石头在大山上建成的，她很高兴自己成为一个真正的好汉。请帮她写一份明信片，上面有一张长城的图片。时间是2月4日，
星期四。地址是加拿大阿尔伯特省艾得蒙顿市公园路
522号。
Thursday, February 4th
Dear Mom and Dad, We are having fun in Beijing.Yesterday I visited the Great Wall.It is about more than 6500 kilometers long.It is so long and so great.Do you know? It is mostly made of big stones.It is made at the top of the big mountains.Here is a picture of it for you.I\'m proud of myself because I have become a true man.I mi you.Love Jenny
（三）.发言稿：在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80～100词之间。文中不
得出现真实的人名、地名。提示：①What does your school look like？②What fun do you have at school？③Why do you like your school？
Proud of My School My school is very big with several tall buildings.There are over 1，000 students in my school.We have a big playground, a big soccer court and two basketball courts.There 这个错误也正是急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的。
那么针对这些易犯错误，该如何改进，提高写作分数呢？
1端正心态，保持认真的态度，强化英语基本功。
作为一个考生，首先应该有端正的考试心态，答题一定要非常认真仔细，那么对于写作来说，就应该尽量避免我们常说的“低级错误”，比如：拼写错误，单词使用错误。这只有在平时注意积累，注意改正自己的错误，才会避免低级错误，才会are lots of trees around our school.We have lots of fun at school.After cla we play games and do lots of sports, like a big family.The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.假定你班今天下午要开一次以Keep Our School Clean为主题的英语班会，请以班长的身份准备一篇70词左右的发言稿。 提示：不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾，不在墙壁上乱涂乱画，每天保持教室内外清洁等(不要逐句翻译) Good afternoon, everyone!
We\'re studying in this school.It\'s our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It\'s not polite to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the claroom.We should neither draw pictures on the walls nor throw any litter onto the ground.I think we must make it a rule to do some cleaning every day.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school will be more beautiful.That\'s all.Thank you! 附 易犯错误一：模板中的句型套用不正确，不完整。
比如：我们在书信结尾的时候会说I am looking forward to hearing from you.而学生却把这句话写成了I am looked forward to hear from you。这种现象非常普遍，可见，学生的写作态度并不是很端正，很认真。
易犯错误二：模板中的句型和实际写作内容不匹配。
比如：有的图画作文第二段要求根据图画所表达的含义进行深层次的论证，而学生套用的句型却是第二段写对比的句型，显然是没有正确理解句型使用的语言背景。再比如：小作文的摘要，是要根据汉语文章归纳出中心内容进行英语写作，这个一般都是客观的描述，而学生却用了一个写图画作文的模板，通篇都是“我”认为，这如何又能得高分呢？
易犯错误三：模板套用千篇1律，没有新意。
再好的模板，如果所有的学生都是用也就变成了一张白纸，没有任何亮点。而
运用正确的语法结构。
2重视动笔之前的审题和构思。
动笔之前，一定要认真审题和构思，要尽量明确写作的形式，内容，比如，是写书信，还是通过图画表达含义等等，这些要弄明白。然后要注意看写作要求，这一点至关重要。比如，图画作文的第二段，有的要求用实例证明主题思想，有的要求深化主题，这两个不同的要求所体现出来的具体内容是不一样的，如果没有认真审题的话，见题就写，没有严谨的写作思路，很容易造成跑题，偏题，不符题意的错误，也就不能使模板中的句型和内容相匹配。
3学会活用模板，注重素材的积累，同时要适当加入自己的内容。
我们在初练写作的时候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一个必经的过程，只有先试用别人的东西，才能学习和积累写作素材。。模板要活学活用，不要一字不差的照抄无误，而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词，长句，而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达，这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生在平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组，以备写作之用。
另外，关于写作素材，不仅仅指写作常用的词汇，句型或者语法结构，还要包括所用的事例。比如：2001年的写作真题，要求写“爱心”，第二段要求用实例证明主题。有的考生见题就写“我考试面临很大的压力，我的朋友是如何帮助我排解压力的”，这显然就是素材贫乏造成的后果。题目中的“爱心”是指“大爱”，陌生人互帮互助的心态。如果写“汶川地震，希望工程”这类事例，显然非常符合题目要求，而且事例又广为人知，比写“朋友如何帮助我”更生动，更有说服力。因此，在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材，积累词句，而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。
4重视日常练习中的作文批改。
考生在备考写作时，大多忽视了写作训练，因而不能发现自己经常犯的语法错误，更不能克服提笔不知写什么的情况。虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用，但是面对自已“难产出来”的文章，怎么看怎么满意，却不知里面充满了基本的语法错误，以及和英语写作格格不入的内容。所以建议大家一定要重视写作练习后的批改。
