ARGUMENT 修改与提高
一、逻辑安排
二、段内句子分布、衔接
三、更合理的反驳例子★
四、更换重复的短语、句型★
For lack of detailed information about ...we can hardly evaluate ...some other substantial information are needed for us to ae the soundne of the argument,
the survey\'s reliability,
we can find no concrete evidence to substantiate the inevitable relationship between ...and ...many other factors could also lead to the result/the author should conduct controlled study to demonstrate the causal relationship
In short, the author could not hastily conclude that ...is the only poible reason for ...before taking above factors into account.
因而
表明indicate
引人注目的
Conspicuousdramaticallynoticeableremarkablespectacular
超牛逼词汇之终极版_gtdream
A因果
naturally, as a result, consequently, not surprisingly, quite understandably, predictably, presumably,
B递进
- in addition to that, besides, apart from, let alone, not to mention, quite
conscious of, moreover,
C 并列
Coupled with, combined with, going hand in hand with£¬integrated with¡-,
entwined with..,
D.转折
It is, however, neverthele, in spite of , regardle of, unaware of£¬for all
that ¡-, heedle of .., nonethele, E 常见得分词汇替换表 We, everyone: any reasonable/sensitive soul/mind, talented minds, elite minds, versatile minds, personality, figures, celebrity, idiots, philosophic minds, genius More and more: increasingly, Big: enormous, tremendous, gigantic, titanic, astronomical, vast, boundle, Very: extremely, overwhelmingly, undeniably, remarkably, voluminously, exceively, exceedingly, tangibly, impreively, shockingly,
Famous: renowned, celebrated, accomplished, distinguished, prominent,
eminent, outstanding, preeminent, Good: spectacular, amazing, unbelievable, incredible, magnificent, adorable, fantastic, fascinating, admirable, respectable, cherishable, adorable, awesome, terrific, majestic,
Bad: nightmarish, disgusting, despicable, monstrous, appalling, abhorring, repelling, repulsive,
Important: significant, eential, basic, fundamental, indispensable, crucial, critical, decisive, determinant, dominant, predominant, infallible,
Say, Believe, think: suppose, hold, claim, maintain, presume, aume, contend, argue, declare, I am convinced, conclude,
Improve, better: further, promote, enhance, reinforce, strengthen, consolidate, cement, nurture, relieve, recover,
Everyone knows: it’s a truth universally acknowledged that,
It can never be denied, it is undeniable that
It goes without saying that
It is self evident that
It is highly advisably, imperative, remarkable that
It comforts one to know that¡-
F 顶尖副词
Exceively, unbelievably, shockingly, reasonably, logically, tremendously,
remarkably, noticeably, tangibly, perceptibly, hopefully, incredibly, amazingly, fundamentally, exceively, extremely, overwhelmingly, sharply, dramatically, drastically, justifiably, convincingly, ignorantly, fantastically, hardly, barely,
sparsely, surprisingly, unexpectedly,
G.列举事例段落常见的开头语：
1.重要的： important--- consequential， momentous， eminent， prominent， pivotal， substantial， significant， crucial， eential， fundamental， vital， paramount， overriding， predominant， prevailing，preeminent， prevalent， supreme，
2.重要性： importance--eence， gist， magnitude，
3.不重要的： unimportant--marginal， peripheral，negligible， trifling， trivial，
4.许多 a lot of--manifold， abundant， ample， copious， be fraught with， be replete with， numerous， innumerable， myriad，a multitude of， multitudes of， a myriad of， a deluge of， a plethora of，
5.困境 difficult situations-- deadlock， impae， dilemma， predicament，
mire， mora， labyrinth，
6.陷入-- reduce to， get bogged down， plunge into，
7.有益的 helpful--remedy， panacea， bleing，
8.有害的 harmful-- deleterious， detrimental， noxious， virulent， monstrous， murderous， epidemic， pandemic， plague，
9.表示进步， 提高的动词 improve， ameliorate， enhance， upgrade， facilitate， promote，
写作中第一反应词汇的替代词汇表
through——in term of/via
operate——manipulate
offspring——descendant
inevitable——dispensable
detail——specific
explain——interpret
obvious——conspicuous
hurt——vulnerable
use——employ/utilize
value——merit
provide——lend——offer
true——accurate
leading to——contribute to/ conduce to/result in
more and more——increasing/growing
hardly——merely——barely
well-known——outstanding
large——miraculous/marvelous
although——albeit/notwithstanding
in fact——actually/virtually
want——intend to/tend to/be inclined to
because——in that
may be——probably
to sum——to summarize/in conclusion
explain——interpret/illustrate
change——alert
chance——alternative
custom——convention/tradition
think——contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect
arouse——ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate
limit——stre/hinder/hamper
key——crucial/vital/consequential
old——ancient
emphasis——accentuate
devote to——dedicate to
character——trait/individuality/idiosyncrasy/personality
expect——anticipate
join——participate
delegate——representative
bias——prejudice/discriminate/tendency
thrive——palmy/floushing/prosperity
clash——conflict/collision/rencounter
publicize——propagandize
agree partly——agree with reserve
proper——apposite
want to——desire
big city——metropolis
lawmaking——legislation
first——primarily
but——nonethele/neverthele
child——juvenile
absorb——aimilate
hand in——render
undermine——sap/enervate/debilitate
get into chaos——with chaos ensuing
key——pivot/crux
sway——vacillate
fanatic patriotism——jingoism/chauvinism
persuasive——thorough/sound/specific/convincing
consider——take into account
vague——gratuitous/unwarranted/oversimplified
good--- positive, favorable, rosy (美好的), promising(有希望的), pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior /splendid
bad--- dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill
many--- an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, a host of， some--- a slice of, quiet a few , several
think--- take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that
thing--- affair, busine, matter
get many benefits --- reap huge fruits
in my opinion--- from my own perspective，as far as i am concern
more and more---increasing/growing/increasingly/ an increasing number of hardly--- little if anything 或little or nothing
helpful--- beneficial, rewarding
1.情态动词：could, should, would, might, may,will, can，
3.分析性词：
in the case
In this sense,...
So is ...
However, ...
True, ...
Following this trend, ...
Ironically, ...
No wonder that ...
Given that, ...
Granted that 姑且承认
almost
actually
literally=almost+actually
as a matter of fact
admittedly
Even if/though
No matter ...
to some extent
In the last analysis, ...
on balance
In light of this, ...
二、句式变化
a.使用不同的句子结构；
b.变换相邻句子的开头、结尾结构；
三、复杂句式/长句
1.倒装；
2.设问；
3.反问；
4.一般疑问句；
5.插入语；
6.同位语（及同位语从句）；
7.定语从句；
8.现在分词的各种用法；
9.连接相邻的短句。
