2013年6月大学英语6级考试真题写作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”.You may cite some examples to support your view.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【写作提示】
本文是一篇议论文，要求对“微笑是两个人之间最短的距离”做出论述。文章可分为三部分：第一部分引出话题，提出观点——微笑可以拉近人们之间的距离；第二部分论述微笑拉近人们之间距离的具体表现，并举例支持论述；第三部分总结微笑的作用，升华自己的观点。
【写作范文】
Smiles Shorten the Distance between People
As the proverb puts it, a smile is the shortest distance between two people.In my opinion, a smile could bring people closer and we should smile as much as we can.
Firstly, a smile may help ease the tension in personal relationship.For example, when we make a mistake, a smile of our parents may remove our fears, what’s more, give us the courage to amend and make progre.During the proce, we become closer to our parents.
Secondly, a smile may help break the ice between two strangers.For instance, when we fall down on the ground, we will be grateful if a stranger with a smile on his or her face gives a hand to us.We’ll suddenly feel warm in the heart and feel the distance between the stranger and us is much shorter, and if we are lucky enough, we make a new friend.
To conclude, a smile could be an effective way to shorten the distance between people.Hence, it is advisable for people to smile more, not only to our beloved ones but also strangers.By doing so, we can build a more harmonious world and live a happier life.
