Born in Zhejiang Province in 1984, Luo Xuejuan, nicknamed Luoluo, is a Chinese female Olympic champion.She went into swimming at an early age and with her great efforts, she began to show her great talent in 2000.Three years later, she drew the world’s attention by getting three gold medals in Barcelona World Championships.At the 2004 Athens Olympics, she broke the world record and got the women’s 100-meter breaststroke champion.Due to health problems, Luo Xuejuan announced retirement in 2007 and then began her study in Peking University.第一句：用分词短语作状语、后置定语，句子简洁明了。 第二句：用了介词短语at an early age作时间状语，并适当添加了 with her great efforts作原因状语，表达生动具体。 第三句：three years later，承上启下，过渡自然，添加了draw he world’s attention作谓语，既丰富了表达内容，又真是反映了人物的影响力。
第四和五句：准确完整地表达了内容要点。
suitable/satisfying
adequate
smooth
annoys
witnees sympathy fled
opposite
talent
declared
was scared to death met with
do me a favour were/are aware of turned around
