议论文写作要点及范文例析
议论文写作要点：
1） 议论文关键是文章的结构和脉络要清楚；每一段的主题都清楚可见。
2） 采用适当的表示衔接与连贯的句子和词汇（关联词）
3） 段落内部：主题句+展开句+结尾句
4） 首段尾段自然呼应，中心突出。
traffic #+-
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Heavy Traffic in the Developed Area in China.You should write no le than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.#+-
1.中国发达地区交通拥挤情况；
2.导致这种情况的原因；
3.我的观点。#+-
Heavy Traffic in Developed Areas in China
The situation of traffic in developed areas in China is quite grave.Traffic congestion exists not only in big cities but also on the superhighway.It’s reported that in the rush hour there are frequent traffic jams on the superhighway between Shanghai and SuZhou.
The reasons for this are obvious.First of all, with the development of the economy and the improvement of people’s living standard, more and more companies and individuals buy cars.As a result, the number of cars nowadays is almost double what it was several years ago.Moreover, the speed of building new roads cannot match the speed of increasing numbers of cars.Finally, the inefficient traffic control and bicycles running along with cars on streets is another reason, which leads to the rise of traffic accidents.
In my opinion, there are some solutions to the problem of heavy traffic.One is to lay down more roads, which not only increases the number of buses and cars, but also speeds up the flow of traffic.Another is that the local government should open up more routes of buses or even develops.In this way, most people can take subway and buses.Thus, bicycle-riders or taxi-takers can be reduced and accidents can be avoided in great numbers.All in all, if both Government and people try our best to solve the problems, the situation of traffic in this area will surely be improved
