魔方格作文
一．书面表达（满分15分）
为迎接青奥会，我市提出“大干一百天，环境大扫除”的口号。南京阳光中学积极响应，在学生中广泛征集参与该活动的创意。请根据以下征集到的创意写一篇倡议书，并提出你自己的一个“金点子”。 创意：
1.设计保护环境海报； 2.到公共场所分发宣传单； 3.去公园参加公益劳动； 4.„„ 要求：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 3.词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Working hard for the YOG The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up.The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.
Answer: Working hard for the YOG The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up.The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.As middle school students, we should do something we can to support this activity.First, let’s design some nice posters to let every student know the importance of improving our environment.Then, it’s a good idea to give out leaflets in public places to make sure more and more people can join in this activity.Also, it’s very meaningful to do some voluntary work in a park.Above all, the most important thing is to keep our school and clarooms clean all the time.I’m sure our city will have a new look to welcome players and guests from all over the world.
二．请以“Sharks in Danger”为题，设计一张海报来呼吁大家从自身做起，保护鲨鱼。 要点提示：
人类吃鱼翅导致大量鲨鱼被捕杀 我们应以身作则，拒绝吃鱼翅 告诫人们；“没有买卖，就没有杀戮”
提示词汇：shark fin 鱼翅 become extinct濒临灭绝 No trading,no killing “没有买卖，就没有杀戮”
要求：语意通顺，逻辑清晰。70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数） Sharks in Danger Today,more and more sharks are being killed.________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something together to save the sharks.
Answer: Sharks in Danger Today ,more and more sharks are being killed .Sharks are facing the problem of becoming extinct.Why do people kill them? One of the biggest problems is their fins.In many countries ,shark fin soup is an expensive dish.Fishermen keep hunting sharks for their fins and sell them for money .It’s not a story ,it’s true !So,what should we do? Don’t eat shark fins and tell the truth to our friends and families .Remember :No trading ,no killing.Let’s do something together to save the sharks!
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，本文所给材料要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近生活实际。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了多种句式，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些的固定句式和短语，如：keep doing、tell the truth、No trading ,no killing等，这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
三．书面表达（共1题，满分10分） 俗话说得好：“美不美故乡水，亲不亲故乡人”。假如你是小明，家住古城黄州。黄州位于湖北省东部，大别山南麓，长江中游北岸，是黄冈市政治、经济、文化中心、与鄂州市隔江相望，距武汉市仅1个小时车程。总人口38万人，版图面积353平方公里。城区内有东坡赤壁、遗爱湖、禹王城、安国寺、青云塔等名胜古迹。请根据以上信息，以My Hometown为题写一篇不少于80词的英语文章。
Hello.I’m Xiao Ming.My hometown is an old town called Huangzhou.It lies in the Southeast of Hubei Province.It is the capital town of Huanggang City.It has the population of 380,000.And it is about 353 square kilometers in size.It takes you under one hour to get to Wuhan by bus.It’s cro from Ezhou City.There are many places of interest which attract lots of people from all over the country.Chibi Park is one of the most famous places in Huangzhou.Have you ever heard of the Warof Chibi ? Chibi Park has become famous not only because of the war but also some beautiful poems that were written by Su Dongpo.Another beautiful place is Yi’ai Lake Park.Thousands of people walk around the lake in summer evenings after supper.The wind blows over the lake and it makes people comfortable.You have fun there.These places are well worth visiting.If you have a chance to come here, don’t mi them
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，It is the capital town of Huanggang City.Thousands of people walk around the lake in summer evenings after supper .It takes you under one hour to get to Wuhan by bus.Chibi Park is one of the most famous places in Huangzhou.可见该生英语功底扎实。And, Another beautiful place使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
四．书面表达（1题，满分10分）
某英语报社以“China Dream, My Dream”为题，开展征文活动，请根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1.谈谈你的梦想及其理由；(to be, because) 2.如何才能实现你的梦想；(achieve, work hard) 3.只要每个人为梦想去努力，中国梦就能实现。(if, realize) 注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右。文章的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 China Dream, My Dream Everyone has his own dream.My dream is _____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
Everyone has his own dream.My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.Writing has been part of my life.Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as poible.At the same time, it’s important to find out the way succeful people take so that I can learn from them.I believe that where there is a will, there is a way.And I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.One’s personal dream is a part of China dream.As we know, the more people, the more strength.If everyone makes great effort, it will be easier to realize our China dream.
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as poible, I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it come true.可见该生英语功底扎实。At the same time如等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
