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Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them started to climb it very excited.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.The time paes quickly.Evening came down.We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
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Dear Editor,
I am a student from a key middle school.Therefore, I find myself tired of studying all these days, of which worries me quite a lot.Though I often get high marks in exams, I don’t like it at all.I often think none of the subject will be useful while I grow up except English.So I’m eager to learn and practicing English in my spare time.But I have to spend most of my time solve problems in the maths and chemistry in order to prepare the college entrance examination.I also can’t afford to live up to my parents’ high expectations.How do you think I should do to deal with this situation?
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My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice drew others’ attention.Last year, she left to study at a music school.Yesterday she called to say that she wants to see me but not at my house.But we fixed a time and a place and then hung up.Today I met her at given time and place.To my great surprise, I found her so much changing.She looked very sad and worrying.She said she had made such little progre that she was almost hopele.She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time doing nothing.I knew she just needed some encourage.So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.
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Dear Sue,
Well, I am here in the Beijing! I’m staying at a very comfortable hotel the same like ours in Britain and enjoy Chinese food, though I mi my English breakfast.It has been very kind and helpfully of everyone to help me in so many way.Yesterday I visited the Summer Palace where the Emperors were used to go in the summers.Today I’m off to see the Great Wall, that is one of the wonders in the world.In a word, all are very interesting, so I do wish you could go to visit China.
Hope everyone home is well.
During the summer vacation, I think I should do something else instead touring.So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there as cleaner.I worked seven hours a day for three weeks.The job was hard and bored and seemed endle.It made me very tired that I nearly stopped it halfway.After all, I stuck to it with determinations.
Every day I started off for work early in the morning and went back to home late in the evening.Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began.Now, I understand that labor means.I think it is really a succeeded experience, where is worth remembering for ever.
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I am an university student.I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind.I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory.Last term, we got over peacefully and happily.But we find they are not willingly to be with me now.They don’t talk with me, and that they have become colder toward me.Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening.When leaving alone, I always recall this sadne.But I am an honest student.Why don’t I win true friendship?
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Sue and Ann often meet at a cheaper restaurant to eat and talking about life and school after their morning claes.Sometime, instead of talking, they play a game that they call it “People watching”.They start the game in observing and listening to people around them carefully, and then they make guees about lives such as ages, jobs, likes, dislikes and so on.Of course, they never really knew whether they are right or wrong.But they’re usually have good reasons for thinking that what they are.“The game is funny,” they often say.
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Dear Li Xiaojun,
I’m glad to receive your letter.I’d like to discu about the problem with you.It is true which some video games is good for your thinking ability and they can sometimes make you feel relaxed.Therefore, you are spending too much time on that.You aren’t little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself.Why not to try to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time play some video games.I think, like a student, the most important thing is to study hard at school.You should try your best to do good in your subjects and try to become a useful person for the future.Editor.
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Before I went to senior middle school, some peoples told me, “A life of senior middle school is unforgettable.” While I first entered my senior middle school, everything seemed unpleasant.Face all the strange things around me, I often mied my old friends and clamates.I didn’t want to talk others or make friends with others.Little by little, my school record went bad to bad, especially my maths.I couldn’t even pa the exam.I lost the heart and miing the happy times all day long.I told me, “I don’t belong here; I don’t like the life here.”
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Climbing is my favorite sport.I am very fond it, especially in later autumn.One day early morning, my friends and I put on our sports shoes and start off.After
climbing for half a hour, we got at the top of the mountain.There we had a good view miles around.To the north, a big river croed the city.Along the river was lots of beautiful trees.It was not long since we had to go back home.On the road back, we were laughing and talking all the times.We had a very good time that day.
