短文改错（5）
In recent years may flowers shops have been appeared in our small town.It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding.I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to expre his gratitude to her.He owes his entire life to his mother’s kind and care.With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight her disability.As a result the great effort he had made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
详解附后
1.flowers改为flower考查名词修饰名词，前面用单数，后面用复数。如：apple trees.（例外：woman/man teacher-women/men teachers)
2.去掉have后面的been考查动词的语态。花店出现应该为主动语态。
3.visiting改为visit考查动词。三个动词：go，visit，attend应该保持一致。
4.clear改为clearly考查形容词与副词。 remember为动词 所以应用副词clearly修饰。
5.disabled前加a考查冠词。单数名词student前应加冠词a.表示一个学生。
6.owes改为owed考查动词的时态。该句属于作者回忆以前的故事，应用一般过去时。
7.kind改为kindne考查名词与形容词的转换。kind adj.好心的，善良的; kindne n.善良，仁慈。
8.With改为Without考查介词的选用，根据句子的意思选择恰当的介词。without 没有
9.her改为his考查人称代词。人称代词的混淆是常考的知识点。该句应该是儿子的残疾。
10.result后面加of考查固定词组。as a result 结果（单独用，一般放在句首或句中，其后有逗号隔开） as a result of 后面加名词。
Honesty is where friendship starts.Friends must trust each other.If you lied, your friends will find out that you are honest.Then you may lose your friends and your friendship ends.Generosity means sharing, and sharing makes a friendship to grow.You needn’t give your money and clothes to our friends, of course.Instead, share your hobbies, ideas and feelings with your friends can be very valuably.By sharing something with your friends, you will make the friendship stronger.Everyone need understanding and understanding helps solve problems.Put yourself in your friends’ place, you will understand your friends and their problems.Understanding and working out the problems together will make your friendships last long.
Keys:
1.lied改为lie考查时态。if引导的条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现时。也就是“主将从现“。
2.honest改为dishonest考查名词的词义辨析。前面说lie（说谎），你的朋友就会发现你是不诚实的（dishonest).
3.去掉grow前面的to考查动词的用法。make sb/sth do sth.
4.and改为or考查连词。该句为否定句，所以应该用or.
5.our改为your考查代词。 人称代词混淆。应该是你的朋友，而不是我们的朋友。
6.share改为sharing考查非谓语动词。这里sharing your hobbies, ideas and feelings with your friends 是动名词短语作主语，真正的谓语是can be
7.valuably改为valuable考查形容词与副词。be valuable(be动词后常跟形容词）
8.need改为needs考查动词。everyone为第三人称单数，所以谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
9.you前面加and考查固定结构。祈使句+and/or+陈述句（一般将来时）。比如：Work hard, and you will get good grades.Get up early, or you\'ll be late for school.
10.friendships改为friendship考查名词的单复数。friendship”友谊“,为不可数名词，所以用单数。
